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[Aakash.]

Saaf safaai me lage they kya man?

Na kuch jo bata nahi sakta ​

 

[Samar_Singh]

Characters of the story
Aagasyta (Y. A.) as superman... The Immortal AS DEADPOOL .. Werewolf AS.. TYE WOLVERINE... Adirshi as batman Elon Musk_ as captain sambhog purush.. Damha as PO.. Siraj Patel AS IRON MAN.. Aakash. As the Hulk.. Ristrcted as Mr Fantastic.. Raj_sharma as Ghost rider.. Riky007 as THOR.. Samar_Singh as AQUAMAN.. cheekku AS THE FLASH.. manu@84 AS..HUMAN TORCH..

ek universel jail jismein saare superheroes and supervillains ko qaid kar diya gaya tha
kayi din ho chuke the unhein wahan ya pata nahi kitna time ho gaya tha

Aagasyta ki najar aakash. pe padi woh chaunk gaye aur bole

tum kab aaye


sabse pehle main hi aaya
in haluo ne mujhe hi pakda tha sabse pehle
inhone mere sath bahut galat kiya
main rita jee ke upar tha rita jee mere neeche thi

tabhi ristrected bol pade
objection my lord
yeh koi time hai upar neeche karne ka

adirshi tapak se bole
overruled

aakash..rita jee neeche se hil rhi thi
aur main upar se kud rha tha

raj_sharma
tu neeche se hil main upar se kudu
haaye haaye du du du du du


adirshi.. overruled

raju chup ho gaye

aakash.. haan toh main kya keh raha tha
ki rita jee mujhse baatein karke hil rhi thi
aur main unki baatein sunke udd rha tha


tabhi damha bol pade jo kuchh doori pe baithe mungfali kha rahe the
these petticoat logis

adirshi.. overruled


tabhi Aagasyta ki najar siraj patel pe padi

Aagasyta..what happened

adirshi...saare sawal tu Aaj hi puchh le

Aagasyta..ju ko kya hua hai..Aaj petticoat story sunne mein Kyu itna interest aaraha hai


Siraj patel..bas 7 din aur phir main apni sima ke sath sima laangunga


immortal..aaye haaye mere chikne kaisa hai tu..kiski najar lag gayi hai tujhe..tu toh ek dum murjhaaye hue phool jaisa lagra hai..kya hua batana re

werewolf ne immortal ko maarna shuru kar diya..badle mein immortal bhi shuru ho gaya
woh kya hai in dono ko ek task mila tha
ek dusre ki duniya bachane ka
dono ne ek dusre ki duniya bachayi toh nahi lekin use khatam jarur kar di


tabhi Aagasyta ki najar rocky pe padi
matlab aadmi wohi tha bas kisi aur universe mein woh nakli elon musk ban ke ghum rahe the

Aagasyta elon ke paas gaye

Aagasyta..kya hua Kyu udas. jald hi elder aajayega humein bachane

Elon musk..kitne din ho gaye line maare hue
chhauri baji karte hue..chhedte hue
ab nahi saha jaata ab mujhe koi petticoat chahiye
guruji toh control kar lete hain mujhse nahi hota

Aagasyta..kis tarah ka insaan hai tu

raj_sharma.. dil mein tum hi dil mein tum hi
baaho mein tum hi
saanso mein tum hi
uspe tum hoti toh kitna acha hota
tum grind karti mere tote ud jaate

manu@84..jajmaan dekhiyega kahin aapka toot na jaaye grinding kuch jada hi ho rhi hai


raj_sharma..apni taraf samjha hai kya be
joru kaa maar khane waale


cheekku samar Singh aur riky teeno ek sath baithe ludo khel rahe the

samar_singh.. cheekkua Maine suna siraj patel ne ju ko ban kar diya tha

cheekkua..are woh toh hum majak kar rahe the..sabko hasane ke liye..chaho toh blackwa se puchh lo

riky.. maar khane ke baad aadmi sach nahi bol paata


tabhi portal khula upar ki taraf usmein se koi Ake neeche farsh pe gida

Aashish...isse achcha toh main mar jaata

Elon Musk..aashu mere bhai

Aagasyta deewaro pe punch maarne lage
relentlessly

aakash..yeh meri harkatein tum kyun kar rahe ho gussa hmko aata

Aagasyta.. pichhli baar jaisen is baar yeh panoti
mujhe nahi khelna yahan


a suno koi hai mujhe yahan se bahar nikaalo ya phir is panoti ko yahan se nikaalo


Aashish...I love you so much


adirshi.. main aajau kya apni par

( Badka writer logis suggestions dene ka ki aur kya better ho sakta abhi starting draft hai )

Adirshi Aakash. Elon Musk_ Damha Werewolf

Kuch jamm nahi raha.....
Female character kidhar hai.... Pichli baar aashna thi. Is baar kisko rakhoge.
Abhi drafting phase hai jyada nahi bolunga.
Baki Nice AV. Tai Lung.

 

[Aakash.]

Characters of the story
Aagasyta (Y. A.) as superman... The Immortal AS DEADPOOL .. Werewolf AS.. TYE WOLVERINE... Adirshi as batman Elon Musk_ as captain sambhog purush.. Damha as PO.. Siraj Patel AS IRON MAN.. Aakash. As the Hulk.. Ristrcted as Mr Fantastic.. Raj_sharma as Ghost rider.. Riky007 as THOR.. Samar_Singh as AQUAMAN.. cheekku AS THE FLASH.. manu@84 AS..HUMAN TORCH..

ek universel jail jismein saare superheroes and supervillains ko qaid kar diya gaya tha
kayi din ho chuke the unhein wahan ya pata nahi kitna time ho gaya tha

Aagasyta ki najar aakash. pe padi woh chaunk gaye aur bole

tum kab aaye


sabse pehle main hi aaya
in haluo ne mujhe hi pakda tha sabse pehle
inhone mere sath bahut galat kiya
main rita jee ke upar tha rita jee mere neeche thi

tabhi ristrected bol pade
objection my lord
yeh koi time hai upar neeche karne ka

adirshi tapak se bole
overruled

aakash..rita jee neeche se hil rhi thi
aur main upar se kud rha tha

raj_sharma
tu neeche se hil main upar se kudu
haaye haaye du du du du du


adirshi.. overruled

raju chup ho gaye

aakash.. haan toh main kya keh raha tha
ki rita jee mujhse baatein karke hil rhi thi
aur main unki baatein sunke udd rha tha


tabhi damha bol pade jo kuchh doori pe baithe mungfali kha rahe the
these petticoat logis

adirshi.. overruled


tabhi Aagasyta ki najar siraj patel pe padi

Aagasyta..what happened

adirshi...saare sawal tu Aaj hi puchh le

Aagasyta..ju ko kya hua hai..Aaj petticoat story sunne mein Kyu itna interest aaraha hai


Siraj patel..bas 7 din aur phir main apni sima ke sath sima laangunga


immortal..aaye haaye mere chikne kaisa hai tu..kiski najar lag gayi hai tujhe..tu toh ek dum murjhaaye hue phool jaisa lagra hai..kya hua batana re

werewolf ne immortal ko maarna shuru kar diya..badle mein immortal bhi shuru ho gaya
woh kya hai in dono ko ek task mila tha
ek dusre ki duniya bachane ka
dono ne ek dusre ki duniya bachayi toh nahi lekin use khatam jarur kar di


tabhi Aagasyta ki najar rocky pe padi
matlab aadmi wohi tha bas kisi aur universe mein woh nakli elon musk ban ke ghum rahe the

Aagasyta elon ke paas gaye

Aagasyta..kya hua Kyu udas. jald hi elder aajayega humein bachane

Elon musk..kitne din ho gaye line maare hue
chhauri baji karte hue..chhedte hue
ab nahi saha jaata ab mujhe koi petticoat chahiye
guruji toh control kar lete hain mujhse nahi hota

Aagasyta..kis tarah ka insaan hai tu

raj_sharma.. dil mein tum hi dil mein tum hi
baaho mein tum hi
saanso mein tum hi
uspe tum hoti toh kitna acha hota
tum grind karti mere tote ud jaate

manu@84..jajmaan dekhiyega kahin aapka toot na jaaye grinding kuch jada hi ho rhi hai


raj_sharma..apni taraf samjha hai kya be
joru kaa maar khane waale


cheekku samar Singh aur riky teeno ek sath baithe ludo khel rahe the

samar_singh.. cheekkua Maine suna siraj patel ne ju ko ban kar diya tha

cheekkua..are woh toh hum majak kar rahe the..sabko hasane ke liye..chaho toh blackwa se puchh lo

riky.. maar khane ke baad aadmi sach nahi bol paata


tabhi portal khula upar ki taraf usmein se koi Ake neeche farsh pe gida

Aashish...isse achcha toh main mar jaata

Elon Musk..aashu mere bhai

Aagasyta deewaro pe punch maarne lage
relentlessly

aakash..yeh meri harkatein tum kyun kar rahe ho gussa hmko aata

Aagasyta.. pichhli baar jaisen is baar yeh panoti
mujhe nahi khelna yahan


a suno koi hai mujhe yahan se bahar nikaalo ya phir is panoti ko yahan se nikaalo


Aashish...I love you so much


adirshi.. main aajau kya apni par

( Badka writer logis suggestions dene ka ki aur kya better ho sakta abhi starting draft hai )

Adirshi Aakash. Elon Musk_ Damha Werewolf

Apna kaluwa full form hai jisko apni ijjat pyaari bhaag jaao ​

 

[Aakash.]

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[Mr_Pikachu]

Hellooo

 

[Mr_Pikachu]

Any one here

 

[Damha]

Usko apni AV jamm nahi rahi thi Toh phatak se suggestion pe qood pada.

Lekin achi lag rahi hai

 

[Damha]

Thai Lund

 

[BLACK]

BLACK AV achi lag rahi hai

 

[BLACK]

Ee kaa hai???

Iss baar maja nahi aaya. Riky007 waala part sahi tha.

But script needs a lot of moderation.

First draft hai