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Always remember this...Good decision....
You know there is another system based story, which is actually really really good. Narration, character, plot everything is great. But I left that in between cause it was highly inspired by system animes. Aura, Mana, Inventory all these system anime concepts in that story.
So I lose interest in that. Maybe I'll read in future.
But here your story is different. Although these system, powers, cards are all fantasy, but still it gives realistic feel.
Thousands of system based novels out there. None thought of a concept like SHB.
Regarding your point...
) Kyunki, maanvi dimaag har baat me logic dhundhta hai. And, I give it to you. Isliye, zyada connect hoti hai story.
based on the genre you're writing.) It's just my principle. 
Exactly....Kyunki, ek baar woh sab skills di... Story loses its touch in the real world. The normal characters in the real world then feels like they don't exist at all.
Isliye, meri ek story jo hai. Woh purely fantasy based hai. It will take place in another world. Not on Earth. Aur, jab pehle se pata rahega ki world hi fantasy based hai, toh Earth waali conflictions paida nahi hongi.Exactly....
Then it became kind of Isekai Story though set in the real world.

Prabhu update 196 ki date bata do Prabhu ap ke Charano me mera sish hai Prabhu ab update 196 ki date bata doIsliye, meri ek story jo hai. Woh purely fantasy based hai. It will take place in another world. Not on Earth. Aur, jab pehle se pata rahega ki world hi fantasy based hai, toh Earth waali conflictions paida nahi hongi.![]()
Iss month me aa jayega.Prabhu update 196 ki date bata do Prabhu ap ke Charano me mera sish hai Prabhu ab update 196 ki date bata do

Which story are u talking about? I might hv read it...Good decision....
You know there is another system based story, which is actually really really good. Narration, character, plot everything is great. But I left that in between cause it was highly inspired by system animes. Aura, Mana, Inventory all these system anime concepts in that story.
So I lose interest in that. Maybe I'll read in future.
But here your story is different. Although these system, powers, cards are all fantasy, but still it gives realistic feel.
Hume tarikh chaiye Sarkari yojna nahiIss month me aa jayega.![]()
Vengeance Revenge is Sweet by Salty OtakuWhich story are u talking about? I might hv read it...But if it had godly narration, characters nd everything else... I wouldn't hv left it...
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Always remember this...
1) I brought the concept of cards in this genre.Pick any system novels out there. You won't find anything which have creative cards. And, now other people are doing the same.
2) There's no concept of SHB in any system novels. I brought it here.Thousands of system based novels out there. None thought of a concept like SHB.
3) Something upcoming which I'll introduce. Again... It would be first time anything done by a writer in this genre. You'll come to see soon.
I take pride in these things because I created them first.Regarding your point...
That's the whole reason why I didn't go overboard with the powers. I had so many options. But I never gave an ability to fly, ability to shoot lasers, anti gravity skills, etc.
Itna sab kuchh tha jo asaani se daala jaa sakta tha. Then, why did I brainstorm for other skills when I could pick any of these?
Kyunki, ek baar woh sab skills di... Story loses its touch in the real world. The normal characters in the real world then feels like they don't exist at all. Their importance goes in vain... Isliye mein system holders ko aam insaano ke beech ek taal mel baitha ke leke chalta hu. One of the reasons why the story is a hit.
I go into the physics, chemistry, biology to explain the logic of the skills and system. (Jitna mujhse ho paata hai.) Kyunki, maanvi dimaag har baat me logic dhundhta hai. And, I give it to you. Isliye, zyada connect hoti hai story.
Ye pehli baar nahi hai jab aise suggestions aaye hai. Mujhe na jaane kitni baar ye skill, wo skill, ye card wo card daalne ke liye suggestions aa chuke hai. PMs aa chuke hai. Bahut se log animes aur mangas padh ke aate hai woh share kar ke bataate hai ki ye waala aisa kuchh daal do. But I never did it.
When writing your own story... (Don't read any other workbased on the genre you're writing.) It's just my principle.
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Jittta mil raha hai utne me khush rehne ka.....Hume tarikh chaiye Sarkari yojna nahi