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Uske baad snehal apna mobile nikal Kar kisi ko message karti hai ... Thode der me hi waiter aakar unhe juice de jata hai ...
Dono juice pine ke baad abhi apas me baatein Kar hi rahe the ki unka gate khulta hai aur black suit pahna hua ek ladka room me enter karta hai usko dekh dono apni jagah se khade ho Jate hain .... Ladke ke peeche hi snehal ki tarah hi dress pahne huye ek ladki ki entry hoti .... Ladki ne blue colour ki dress pahni huyi thi aur wo bhi Bala ki khubsurat lag rahi thi .... snehal dono se bade pyar se Gale multi hai ....
Snehal : Ravi inse Milo ye hain mere boyfriend rishabh singhaniya aur sath me hain unki chhoti bahan Diya singhaniya aur rishabh iske bare me to Maine apko bataya hi hai ye mere Bhai se badh Kar mere dil ke kareeb hai ... Iski ijajat ke bina mujhse Shaadi ka bhul hi jao ...
Rishabh aur Diya dono Ravi se hath milate hain ....
Uske baad table ke dono taraf baith jate hain .... Ravi ko aise shocked dekh snehal bolna suru karti hai ...
Snehal : yehi mera surprise tha Bhai .... Maine ab Tak ye baat Ghar me bhi kisi ko nahi bataya hai ... Main rishabh se dilojaan se pyar karti hu .... Hamara pyar aj se nahi kareeb 5 - 6 saalo se hai .... Rishabh mere Ghar Rishte ke Liye apne parents ko bhejna chahte the par Maine kha ki bina tumhare approval ke main Shaadi nahi Kar sakti ... Ab tumhare upar hai ki tum hamare Rishte ko haan karte ho ya na ...
Ravi : par Didi main itni jaldi kaise ... I mean iske Liye mujhe inhe ache se Janna samajhna hoga ....
Rishabh : I am ready ... Snehal Meri jindagi hai ... Iske Liye main koi bhi acid test Dene ko taiyar hu ...
Ravi : interesting ... Thik hai to sabse pahle bataiye ki ap Meri Didi ke Liye Kya Kya Kar sakte hain ...
Rishabh : dekhiye main ye to nahi kah sakta ki main iske Liye Chand tare tod Kar le aaunga kyunki practically ye possible nahi hai ... Par haan itna jarur kah sakta hu Meri wajah se iski aankho me aanshoo nahi aayenge .... iske Liye main kisi ki jaan le bhi sakta hu ya khud ki jaan de bhi sakta hu ...
Ravi : wo to baad ki baat hai .... Apko Meri Didi me sabse acha Kya lagta hai ....
Rishabh kuch der sochta hai aur jawab deta hai ....
Rishabh : ye bahut pyari hai ... Ye kisi ki aankho me aanshoo nahi dekh sakti .... Ye jis kisi ki bhi life partner banegi uske hisse me duniya ki sari khusiya la dengi ... She is the girl with golden heart ....
Ravi : apne bilkul sahi kaha .... Meri snehal Didi ek anmol nagina hai .... Iska sabse bada example main khud hu ... Bachpan se hi mere parents ne mujhe khud se dur yaha hostel me rahne ko bhej Diya .... Yaha kismat se Meri dosti Jai se huyi aur fir snehal Didi Meri jindagi me aayi .... mere life ki ye pahli shaksh thi jinhone Meri jindagi ka sunapan feel kiya aur apne pyar ki mamtamayi thandak se mujhe Sahara Diya ... Ye inke pyar aur dular ka hi asar hai ki main ab Tak sahi salamat hu warna main to kab ka tut gaya hota .... Jo pyar aur good manners mujhe mere parents se milna chahiye tha wo mujhe Meri snehal Didi ne Diya hai ... Kahne ko to main Inka koi nahi lagta par ye mujh par aj bhi jaan lutati hai .... Aj ki hi baat le lo inhone apne pariwar se jyada mujh par trust Kiya .... I love you Didi and thanks to you ... Mujhe iss kabil samajhne ke Liye .... apka Meri jindagi par dhero sare upkar hain ... Main apka upkar kabhi Chuka nahi sakta ...
Ravi ki baato se snehal ki aankhein bhar aayi thi ... Wo jor se Ravi ko Gale laga Kar uske mathe ko chum leti hai ..
Snehal : pagle tu to mera Bhai hai re .... Bhala bahan ek Bhai par koi upkar Kar sakti hai Kya ... Tune bhi to hamesa se ek Bhai ka farz nibhaya hai .... tujhe yaad hai ek baar mujhe bahut tez bukhar aaya tha to sari raat jaag Kar tune Meri sewa ki thi .... Ek baar chhat se slip karke main seedhiyo se hoti huyi neeche giri thi jisse mera sar phat gaya tha aur dher Sara khoon bah gaya tha to tune apne jism ka khoon dekar Meri Jaan bachayi thi .... aise dhero sare kisse bhare pade hain Bhai ...
Dono Bhai bahan ki baat sun rishabh aur Diya bhi emotional ho Jate hain ...
Diya : ap dono Bhai bahan ka pyar kisi Rishte ka mohtaz nahi hai .... Sach hi kahti thi ap ap dono ka rishta Bhai bahan ke Rishte se kahi badh Kar hai ....
Rishabh : ham dono bhi Bhai bahan hain par hamne ek dusre ki aisi care kabhi nahi Kari ... Ravi sahab ab please Mera bhi kuch bhala Kar dijiye ... Apki permission ke bina ye meri life ka hissa nahi ban payegi ... Main apki bahan se sachcha aur ruhani pyar karta hu ...
Ravi : thik hai par mujhe thoda wakt chahiye ... Main jald hi apko apna jawab de Dunga ....
Tab Tak waiter aa Chuka tha ... Sabhi me apna apna order Diya .... Thodi der baad hi unka dinner aa gaya ...
Rishabh ek amir khandan se belong karta tha .... Uske ancestor jamindar hua karte the to jamin jayedad ki koi kami nahi thi ... Uske papa ka gurugram me ek dairy farm tha ... Rishabh apni bahan ke sath delhi me hi rahta tha .... Diya ek upsc aspirant thi wahi rishabh ko padhayi likhayi se khas Matlab nahi tha waise bhi usne apne baap ka business hi sambhalna tha ...
Thode der ki mulakat me hi sabhi kafi close ho gaye the .,.. snehal Diya se pahle bhi bahut baar mil chuki thi ....
Aise hi baatein karte huye Inka dinner finish ho jata hai .... Dinner ke baad snehal ne Diya ko kuch ishara Kiya ...
Diya : chaliye Ravi ji apko iss hotel me ache se ghuma du ..... Yaha bahut sari chijein hain dekhne ko ...
Ravi : jaisi apki marji ...
Diya Ravi ko apne sath le jati hai .... Unke Jane ke baad rishabh gate ko andar se lock Kar Deta hai ....
Snehal bhi bhag Kar uske Gale lag jati hai ... Rishabh uske gaalo ko chumne lagta hai aur jald hi dono ke honth apas me mil jate hain ... thode der ke gehre chumban ke baad dono alag hote hain ...
Rishabh : jaan Kya lagta hai hamare pyar ko Hari jhandi milegi ...
Snehal : mujhe to puri ummid hai ki Bhai ko ap pasand aaoge ....
Rishabh : ab tumse dur ek din bhi Gujara nahi hota Meri Jaan ...
Snehal : main bhi kaha apse dur rah Kar khus hu Meri Jaan ... Mujhe to apki dulhan banne ki aur bhi jyada betabi hai ...
Rishabh : tum mere Liye hi aj itna saj dhaj Kar aayi ho na ....
Snehal : off course aur kiske Liye sajungi .... Apke alawa yaha aur hai hi kaun jiske Liye main saj sakti hu ....
Rishabh : aj tumhe aise red dress me dekh mujhse control nahi ho raha .....
Snehal : control to karna hoga meri jaan ... Apke birthday par Maine to apko wo sab de hi Diya hai jiske upar sirf ek pati ka hak hota hai ....
Rishabh : ek baar ek chhota sa quick Wala ho Jaye Kya ...
Snehal : hi nahi itni bhi betabi sahi nahi hai ....
Rishabh : acha Kam se Kam ek baar apni Barbie doll ke darshan to kara do ....
Snehal : acha thik hai par sirf dur se hi dekhoge aur kuch nahi ....
Rishabh : pakka promise ...
Snehal badi adaa se gaand matkati huyi sofe se thodi dur khadi ho jati hai aur badi adaa ke sath apni dress ko upar utha Kar apni panty ki elastic pakad Kar usko neeche khiskane lagti hai ...
Jaldi hi snehal ki saaf suthri choot rishabh ki aankho ke samne apne honth khole huye dikh jati hai ..... Waise to snehal ab Tak bahuto baar rishabh ke samne nangi ho chuki thi par uska Lund bas 4 baar hi liya tha apni choot me ...
Rishabh se control nahi hota hai aur wo khinch Kar snehal ko apni God me bitha leta hai aur uski choot ko apne hatho se masalne lagta hai .....
Choot ko aise masle Jane se snehal jaldi hi garam ho jati hai .... Dono Laila majnu ka haal bura ho Chuka tha ... Dono ek dusre me samane ko aatur ho chuke the ki tabhi unka gate knock hota hai ....
Dono ko majburan alag hona pada .... Rishabh aur snehal ne khud ko thik Kiya aur gate ko khola to Bahar Ravi aur Diya the ....
Ravi : Didi ab shayad hame chalna chahiye ... Kafi raat ho chuki hai ... Jai ka bhi phone aaya tha ....
Snehal ki GCPD ho gaya tha ....
Snehal : haan Bhai ... Main abhi aayi ...
Snehal washroom chali jati hai .... Apne face ko wash karke dress ko change Karne ke baad jab Tak wo nikalti hai rishabh aur Diya waha se ja chuke the ...
Ravi : Didi are you alright ....
Snehal : ha .... Wo log chale gaye Kya ....
Ravi : haan Didi .... Ab hame bhi chalna chahiye ....
Snehal : kaise lage wo log ...
Ravi : achi hai ...
Snehal : itni achi lagi ... Baat chalaun Kya .... Waise mujhe bhi diya bahut pasand hai ....
Ravi : main apke wale ki baat Kar raha tha ki wo ache hain ... Apki aur unki Jodi achi lagegi ...
Snehal Khushi se Ravi ke Gale lag jati hai aur uske chehre par chumbano ki barsat Kar deti hai ...
Ravi : Didi bas bhi Kari kisi ne dekh liya to galat samjhenge ....
Snehal : samjhe to samajhne do ... Aj tune mujhe wo Khushi di hai jiske Liye itna pyar to banta hai ....
Ravi : apki Khushi se badh Kar mere Liye aur kuch nahi ....
Snehal : waise tum logo ne bahar me Kya Kya baatein ki ...
Ravi : kuch khas nahi Didi wo bas ap dono ko private space Dena chahti thi ... Chaliye bhi ya yehi sari raat gujarni hai ....
Thik tabhi Jai ka call aa gaya ...
Ravi : hello Jai ...
Jai : haan Bhai tum log waha se nikle ya nahi ...
Ravi : nahi Bhai bas ham log nikalne hi wale hain ...
Jai : jaldi se niklo Bhai ... TV par news aa rahi hai ki thode hi Der me cyclone aane wali hai delhi me .... jaldi hi tum log Ghar pahuncho ham sabhi log kafi chintit hain ...
Ravi : haan Bhai ham log nikalne hi wale hain ...
Phone rakh Kar Ravi aur snehal Bahar ko nikalte hain .... Bahar me Sach me Hawa chal rahi thi aur kabhi kabhi bijli bhi kadak rahi thi ....
Ravi : Didi ... I think hame aj ki raat yehi hotel me ruk Jana chahiye ... Cyclone aane ka andesha hai ... Waise bhi hame wapas Ghar Jane me dedh ghante to lag hi jayenge ...
Snehal : nahi Bhai ham dusre raste se jayenge Jo ki thoda short cut hai ... Wo Rasta jungle se hokar jata hai par ham usse ek ghante me hi Ghar par honge .... Aise mausam me apne Ghar par hona jyada acha hai ....
Ravi : hame baato me wakt nahi ganwana chahiye .... Hawa ki raftar thodi badh rahi hai ...
Uske baad snehal apna mobile nikal Kar kisi ko message karti hai ... Thode der me hi waiter aakar unhe juice de jata hai ...
Dono juice pine ke baad abhi apas me baatein Kar hi rahe the ki unka gate khulta hai aur black suit pahna hua ek ladka room me enter karta hai usko dekh dono apni jagah se khade ho Jate hain .... Ladke ke peeche hi snehal ki tarah hi dress pahne huye ek ladki ki entry hoti .... Ladki ne blue colour ki dress pahni huyi thi aur wo bhi Bala ki khubsurat lag rahi thi .... snehal dono se bade pyar se Gale multi hai ....
Snehal : Ravi inse Milo ye hain mere boyfriend rishabh singhaniya aur sath me hain unki chhoti bahan Diya singhaniya aur rishabh iske bare me to Maine apko bataya hi hai ye mere Bhai se badh Kar mere dil ke kareeb hai ... Iski ijajat ke bina mujhse Shaadi ka bhul hi jao ...
Rishabh aur Diya dono Ravi se hath milate hain ....
Uske baad table ke dono taraf baith jate hain .... Ravi ko aise shocked dekh snehal bolna suru karti hai ...
Snehal : yehi mera surprise tha Bhai .... Maine ab Tak ye baat Ghar me bhi kisi ko nahi bataya hai ... Main rishabh se dilojaan se pyar karti hu .... Hamara pyar aj se nahi kareeb 5 - 6 saalo se hai .... Rishabh mere Ghar Rishte ke Liye apne parents ko bhejna chahte the par Maine kha ki bina tumhare approval ke main Shaadi nahi Kar sakti ... Ab tumhare upar hai ki tum hamare Rishte ko haan karte ho ya na ...
Ravi : par Didi main itni jaldi kaise ... I mean iske Liye mujhe inhe ache se Janna samajhna hoga ....
Rishabh : I am ready ... Snehal Meri jindagi hai ... Iske Liye main koi bhi acid test Dene ko taiyar hu ...
Ravi : interesting ... Thik hai to sabse pahle bataiye ki ap Meri Didi ke Liye Kya Kya Kar sakte hain ...
Rishabh : dekhiye main ye to nahi kah sakta ki main iske Liye Chand tare tod Kar le aaunga kyunki practically ye possible nahi hai ... Par haan itna jarur kah sakta hu Meri wajah se iski aankho me aanshoo nahi aayenge .... iske Liye main kisi ki jaan le bhi sakta hu ya khud ki jaan de bhi sakta hu ...
Ravi : wo to baad ki baat hai .... Apko Meri Didi me sabse acha Kya lagta hai ....
Rishabh kuch der sochta hai aur jawab deta hai ....
Rishabh : ye bahut pyari hai ... Ye kisi ki aankho me aanshoo nahi dekh sakti .... Ye jis kisi ki bhi life partner banegi uske hisse me duniya ki sari khusiya la dengi ... She is the girl with golden heart ....
Ravi : apne bilkul sahi kaha .... Meri snehal Didi ek anmol nagina hai .... Iska sabse bada example main khud hu ... Bachpan se hi mere parents ne mujhe khud se dur yaha hostel me rahne ko bhej Diya .... Yaha kismat se Meri dosti Jai se huyi aur fir snehal Didi Meri jindagi me aayi .... mere life ki ye pahli shaksh thi jinhone Meri jindagi ka sunapan feel kiya aur apne pyar ki mamtamayi thandak se mujhe Sahara Diya ... Ye inke pyar aur dular ka hi asar hai ki main ab Tak sahi salamat hu warna main to kab ka tut gaya hota .... Jo pyar aur good manners mujhe mere parents se milna chahiye tha wo mujhe Meri snehal Didi ne Diya hai ... Kahne ko to main Inka koi nahi lagta par ye mujh par aj bhi jaan lutati hai .... Aj ki hi baat le lo inhone apne pariwar se jyada mujh par trust Kiya .... I love you Didi and thanks to you ... Mujhe iss kabil samajhne ke Liye .... apka Meri jindagi par dhero sare upkar hain ... Main apka upkar kabhi Chuka nahi sakta ...
Ravi ki baato se snehal ki aankhein bhar aayi thi ... Wo jor se Ravi ko Gale laga Kar uske mathe ko chum leti hai ..
Snehal : pagle tu to mera Bhai hai re .... Bhala bahan ek Bhai par koi upkar Kar sakti hai Kya ... Tune bhi to hamesa se ek Bhai ka farz nibhaya hai .... tujhe yaad hai ek baar mujhe bahut tez bukhar aaya tha to sari raat jaag Kar tune Meri sewa ki thi .... Ek baar chhat se slip karke main seedhiyo se hoti huyi neeche giri thi jisse mera sar phat gaya tha aur dher Sara khoon bah gaya tha to tune apne jism ka khoon dekar Meri Jaan bachayi thi .... aise dhero sare kisse bhare pade hain Bhai ...
Dono Bhai bahan ki baat sun rishabh aur Diya bhi emotional ho Jate hain ...
Diya : ap dono Bhai bahan ka pyar kisi Rishte ka mohtaz nahi hai .... Sach hi kahti thi ap ap dono ka rishta Bhai bahan ke Rishte se kahi badh Kar hai ....
Rishabh : ham dono bhi Bhai bahan hain par hamne ek dusre ki aisi care kabhi nahi Kari ... Ravi sahab ab please Mera bhi kuch bhala Kar dijiye ... Apki permission ke bina ye meri life ka hissa nahi ban payegi ... Main apki bahan se sachcha aur ruhani pyar karta hu ...
Ravi : thik hai par mujhe thoda wakt chahiye ... Main jald hi apko apna jawab de Dunga ....
Tab Tak waiter aa Chuka tha ... Sabhi me apna apna order Diya .... Thodi der baad hi unka dinner aa gaya ...
Rishabh ek amir khandan se belong karta tha .... Uske ancestor jamindar hua karte the to jamin jayedad ki koi kami nahi thi ... Uske papa ka gurugram me ek dairy farm tha ... Rishabh apni bahan ke sath delhi me hi rahta tha .... Diya ek upsc aspirant thi wahi rishabh ko padhayi likhayi se khas Matlab nahi tha waise bhi usne apne baap ka business hi sambhalna tha ...
Thode der ki mulakat me hi sabhi kafi close ho gaye the .,.. snehal Diya se pahle bhi bahut baar mil chuki thi ....
Aise hi baatein karte huye Inka dinner finish ho jata hai .... Dinner ke baad snehal ne Diya ko kuch ishara Kiya ...
Diya : chaliye Ravi ji apko iss hotel me ache se ghuma du ..... Yaha bahut sari chijein hain dekhne ko ...
Ravi : jaisi apki marji ...
Diya Ravi ko apne sath le jati hai .... Unke Jane ke baad rishabh gate ko andar se lock Kar Deta hai ....
Snehal bhi bhag Kar uske Gale lag jati hai ... Rishabh uske gaalo ko chumne lagta hai aur jald hi dono ke honth apas me mil jate hain ... thode der ke gehre chumban ke baad dono alag hote hain ...
Rishabh : jaan Kya lagta hai hamare pyar ko Hari jhandi milegi ...
Snehal : mujhe to puri ummid hai ki Bhai ko ap pasand aaoge ....
Rishabh : ab tumse dur ek din bhi Gujara nahi hota Meri Jaan ...
Snehal : main bhi kaha apse dur rah Kar khus hu Meri Jaan ... Mujhe to apki dulhan banne ki aur bhi jyada betabi hai ...
Rishabh : tum mere Liye hi aj itna saj dhaj Kar aayi ho na ....
Snehal : off course aur kiske Liye sajungi .... Apke alawa yaha aur hai hi kaun jiske Liye main saj sakti hu ....
Rishabh : aj tumhe aise red dress me dekh mujhse control nahi ho raha .....
Snehal : control to karna hoga meri jaan ... Apke birthday par Maine to apko wo sab de hi Diya hai jiske upar sirf ek pati ka hak hota hai ....
Rishabh : ek baar ek chhota sa quick Wala ho Jaye Kya ...
Snehal : hi nahi itni bhi betabi sahi nahi hai ....
Rishabh : acha Kam se Kam ek baar apni Barbie doll ke darshan to kara do ....
Snehal : acha thik hai par sirf dur se hi dekhoge aur kuch nahi ....
Rishabh : pakka promise ...
Snehal badi adaa se gaand matkati huyi sofe se thodi dur khadi ho jati hai aur badi adaa ke sath apni dress ko upar utha Kar apni panty ki elastic pakad Kar usko neeche khiskane lagti hai ...
Jaldi hi snehal ki saaf suthri choot rishabh ki aankho ke samne apne honth khole huye dikh jati hai ..... Waise to snehal ab Tak bahuto baar rishabh ke samne nangi ho chuki thi par uska Lund bas 4 baar hi liya tha apni choot me ...
Rishabh se control nahi hota hai aur wo khinch Kar snehal ko apni God me bitha leta hai aur uski choot ko apne hatho se masalne lagta hai .....
Choot ko aise masle Jane se snehal jaldi hi garam ho jati hai .... Dono Laila majnu ka haal bura ho Chuka tha ... Dono ek dusre me samane ko aatur ho chuke the ki tabhi unka gate knock hota hai ....
Dono ko majburan alag hona pada .... Rishabh aur snehal ne khud ko thik Kiya aur gate ko khola to Bahar Ravi aur Diya the ....
Ravi : Didi ab shayad hame chalna chahiye ... Kafi raat ho chuki hai ... Jai ka bhi phone aaya tha ....
Snehal ki GCPD ho gaya tha ....
Snehal : haan Bhai ... Main abhi aayi ...
Snehal washroom chali jati hai .... Apne face ko wash karke dress ko change Karne ke baad jab Tak wo nikalti hai rishabh aur Diya waha se ja chuke the ...
Ravi : Didi are you alright ....
Snehal : ha .... Wo log chale gaye Kya ....
Ravi : haan Didi .... Ab hame bhi chalna chahiye ....
Snehal : kaise lage wo log ...
Ravi : achi hai ...
Snehal : itni achi lagi ... Baat chalaun Kya .... Waise mujhe bhi diya bahut pasand hai ....
Ravi : main apke wale ki baat Kar raha tha ki wo ache hain ... Apki aur unki Jodi achi lagegi ...
Snehal Khushi se Ravi ke Gale lag jati hai aur uske chehre par chumbano ki barsat Kar deti hai ...
Ravi : Didi bas bhi Kari kisi ne dekh liya to galat samjhenge ....
Snehal : samjhe to samajhne do ... Aj tune mujhe wo Khushi di hai jiske Liye itna pyar to banta hai ....
Ravi : apki Khushi se badh Kar mere Liye aur kuch nahi ....
Snehal : waise tum logo ne bahar me Kya Kya baatein ki ...
Ravi : kuch khas nahi Didi wo bas ap dono ko private space Dena chahti thi ... Chaliye bhi ya yehi sari raat gujarni hai ....
Thik tabhi Jai ka call aa gaya ...
Ravi : hello Jai ...
Jai : haan Bhai tum log waha se nikle ya nahi ...
Ravi : nahi Bhai bas ham log nikalne hi wale hain ...
Jai : jaldi se niklo Bhai ... TV par news aa rahi hai ki thode hi Der me cyclone aane wali hai delhi me .... jaldi hi tum log Ghar pahuncho ham sabhi log kafi chintit hain ...
Ravi : haan Bhai ham log nikalne hi wale hain ...
Phone rakh Kar Ravi aur snehal Bahar ko nikalte hain .... Bahar me Sach me Hawa chal rahi thi aur kabhi kabhi bijli bhi kadak rahi thi ....
Ravi : Didi ... I think hame aj ki raat yehi hotel me ruk Jana chahiye ... Cyclone aane ka andesha hai ... Waise bhi hame wapas Ghar Jane me dedh ghante to lag hi jayenge ...
Snehal : nahi Bhai ham dusre raste se jayenge Jo ki thoda short cut hai ... Wo Rasta jungle se hokar jata hai par ham usse ek ghante me hi Ghar par honge .... Aise mausam me apne Ghar par hona jyada acha hai ....
Ravi : hame baato me wakt nahi ganwana chahiye .... Hawa ki raftar thodi badh rahi hai ...
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Mujhe lagta hai aj yaha snehal koi Kand karke hi manege ya Ravi majburi me apni Seema langega
Gaurav1969
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Update was good but practicality se koso dur....
