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Update 3 : ( The Golden Toy )
Pichle update me aapne padha ki sandhya aur shivani dono uss bacche ko dekh rahe hote hai aur hawa ke jhoke se wajah se unhe pahle baar unke khilone ka chehra dikhta hai.
Ab aage-
Sandhya aur Shivani dono kho jaati hai thik waise hi jaise Ravi aur Devki kho gaye the. Dono ki aankhein jaisi uski aankho se bandh gayi for. 2 min tak wo aise hi khade rahe. Dono ko kya feel hua ye to waqt hi batayega. Sandhya ko jaise hi hosh aata hai wo daud ke apni mumma ke paas gayi
Sandhya - ( Apni dono baahein failate hue ) - Mumma Idhal do mera khilona
Devki - (Thoda hichakte hue ) - Beta tum gira dogi ise
Sandhya - ( Zidd karte hue ) - Mai nahi gulaungi na
Tab tak shivani v aa jati hai waha…Devki unhe ander chalne ko kehti hai…Fir sandhya ko bitha ke uski god me bacche ko rakh deti hai.
Shivani bagal me baith ke uske pairo ki ungliyo ko chu rahi thi. Wo thodi shy this isliye hichkicha rahi thi.
Sandhya - ( Uske gaalo ko sehlate hue ) - GUDDA ! Mera pyala Gudda.
Ravi Devki ke paas aate hue tum sabka bas chale to bacche ka sara naam hi bigad do. Koi gudda koi lalla are bhai uske liye koi accha sa naam rakhte hai.
Tab tak unhe shivani ki dhimi awwaz aati hai jo uske maa-papa ki baato se bekhabar bacche ke saath khel rahi thi.
Shivani POV - Kitna pyara aur chhotu sa gudda hai . Kya ye gudda bada bhi hoga ? Iski aankehin aisi kyu hai ? bilkul sone ki tarah chamak rahi. Ise mai sona bulaungi. Pyara SONA ( Kal jab wo school gayi thi to usne apne dosto ko baat karte suna ki unki mam ne sone ki anguthi pehni hai. Jab usne dekha to wo uski chamak dekh kar use bhot pyara laga. Isliye jab usne bacche ki aankhein dekhi use compare karne ke liye pehla khayal sone ka aaya )
Ravi- ( Devki ki or dekhte hue) - Lo ek aur naam mil gaya tumhare lalla ko SONA.
Devki - ( Halka muskurate hue ) - Aap bhi ek rakh do.
Ravi - Tum sabne itne rakh diye kaafi hai. ( Firr thoda serious hote hue ) Kyu na kal pandit ko bula le kal namkaran karne ke liye aur kundali v banwa lenge.
Devki - ( Ravi ki or dekhte hue ) - parr paise.
Ravi - Tum uski chinta matt karo wo mai dekh lunga.
Ravi fir apni biwi aur betiyo ko bol kar bahar nikal jata hai lekin darwaze se bahar jaane se pahle wo ek baar piche dekhta hai aur tabhi wo baccha apna sar thoda sa ghumata hai aur uski nazre sidhe Ravi se milti hai. Ravi v ek pal ke liye chauk jata hai firr muskurate hue nikal jata hai aur apne aap se muskurate hue kehta hai. ( Kuch to baat hai iski aankho me sabko deewana kar rakha hai )
Ravi paidal hi nikal padta hai apni dukaan ki or aaj uski cycle nahi thi. Apni dukaan kholta hai. Mandir kaafi purana aur famous tha to bhot saare videshi log v aate the darshan karne ke liye. Tabhi ek videshi jo kaafi der se Idhar udhar dekh raha tha. Ravi bhi ye notice karta hai lekin aaj Ravi ke dukaan pe kaafi customers aa rahe the. Jo ki thoda ajeeb tha ( iska reason ye tha Ravi ka dukaan gali me sabse piche tha ) lekin bhot saare log waha aa rahe the.
Tabhi Rajesh uski dukaan me aata hai.
Rajesh - ( Character Information ) - Age 34 - Ravi ke puja dukaan ke thik bagal me ek dhaba hai. Jo ki akasar aise mandiro ke saamne hota hai. Rajesh uss dhabe ka malik hai aur Ravi ka bhot accha Dost. Ek bhot hi saral aur saccha dost.
Ragini - Rajesh ki wife -Age 32- Ek gharelu maheela lekin bhot mehnge sapne.Dekhne me bhot jyada khubsurat aur apne aap ko kaafi maintain kar ke rakhti hai. Dil se saaf hai bss mehngi mehngi chizo ka shauk hai. Kuch din pahle hi Rajesh se sone ki chain zidd karke kharidwayi. Unn paiso se jo ki Rajesh ne apni dhaabe ko maintain karne ke liye bachaya tha.
Rani - Age 4 - Rajesh aur Ragini ki ekaluti beti - Ye apne nana ke paas rehti hai Rishikesh me lekin harr mahine kuch dino ke liye ghar aa jaati hai.
Rajesh - Aur bhai koi madad chahiye ? aaj to kaafi grahak hai.
Ravi - ( Piche dekhte hue ) - Haa bhai aaja ...Piche wo batasho ( mithai ) ka box pada hai wo le aa bss.
Rajesh - ( Box le ke aate hue ) - Tujhe to ab daily madad ki zarurat padegi.
Ravi - ( clueless aur question bhare lehze me Rajesh ko dekhta hai )
Rajesh - Tujhe nahi pata kya? Jo piche ki deewar thi wo todd di gayi hai. Waha ghaat aur uske bagal me park banega. Udhar se hi aayenge ab sab log . Purana rast band kar diya jayega.
Ravi - ( Jise achanak khayal aata hai ki itne saare logo ko dekhkar usne dhyan hi nahi diya ki wo dusre taraf se aa rahe hai. Ye bhot badi khabar thi kyunki jo kal tak last dukaan thi wo ab first dukaan ban gayi thi. ) - Kya khabar sunai hai bhai. Dil khush kar diya.
Rajesh - Mai v khush hu bhai mera hotel v ab pehla ho gaya.
Ravi - Chal tune aaj ek khabar sunai hai to mai v ek khabar sunata hu. Lekin ye khabar bahar na jaaye
Rajesh - ( Thoda hairaan aur question waale lehje me Ravi ko dekhta hai )
Ravi - Mere ghar beta aaya hai
Rajesh - Kyaaa?!! Saale tune mujhe bataya bhi nahi bhabhi pregnant hai ! Kab hua ye?!
Ravi - Are bhai shaant-shaant,Wo baat aisi hai ki…Fir use puri baat batata hai.
Rajesh - To namakaran kab karna hai ?
Ravi - Kal hi karne ka socha hai shaam ko. Tu bhi bhabhi aur Rani ko le ke aa jana.
Rajesh - Haa Rani abhi yahi hai, Thik he, aa jaaunga. Lekin dekh naa kya sanjog hai ki kal tujhe tera beta mila aur aaj hi itni badi khushkhabri.
Ravi - Haa bhai humari zindagi me khusiya bharne aaya hai aisa lagta hai.
Tabhi wo videshi jo kaafi pareshan tha aur idhar udhar dhundh raha tha. Wo Ravi ke dukaan ke paas aata hai.
Videsh - Hello, I’m Tim, Can you help me ?
Ravi - Hello Tim, I’m Ravi , How can I help you?
Tim kaafi pareshan tha lekin Ravi ki English sun ke thoda hairaan hota hai. Ravi jo ki tour guide ka bhi kaam karta tha isliye usne English acche se seekhi thi.
Tim - I’ve got my shoes stolen and now I want to go for a hike in a nearby forest. I’m looking for some transport, maybe a bicycle.
( Mera juta chori ho gaya hai aur abhi mujhe bagal ke jungle me ghumne jana hai. Aap kisi cycle ka intezam kar skte hai kya )
Ravi - Rajesh se , Bhai mera cycle to kal tut gaya. Tu apni cycle de de na.
Rajesh - Bhai , Cycle to mai de du lekin agar ye bhaag gaya to. Aise kisi ajnabee pe bharosa nahi kar skte.
Tim ne in dono ki baat suni aur shayd wo thoda bhot samajh gaya tha ki kis baare me baat ho rahi thi.
Tim - Don’t worry about the security, If you want i’m willing to give you my SSN card and pay you some advance.
( Security ki chinta matt karo mai apna SSN card dene ko taiyaar hu aur kuch advance me payment v kar dunga ).
Ravi - Okay Tim, You can submit any Identity proof here with some security money. When you're back you pay the charge and take away your belongings.
( Thik hai Tim, Tum apna Identity proof aur kuch security ke liye paise jama kar do. Wapas aa ke apni chize le jana aur paise pay kar dena )
Tim - Thank you, Man. You’re a savior. I’m a wildlife Photographer this hike was really important for my competition.
Ravi - You’re Welcome, Tim. All the best for your trip.
Uske baad Tim Rajesh ki Cycle le ke chala jata hai. Rajesh v apne hotel chala jata hai. Ravi soch me pad jata hai. Yaha kitni saari chizo ki zarurat hai agar wo in sab ke liye kuch kar paye to kaafi acche paise kama sakta hai. Ravi ne mann hi mann nischay kiya inn sab chizo ko le kar kuch shurwaat karne ki.
Author - Chalte hai ghar ki or dekhte hai waha kya ho raha hai
Devki Kitchen me halka-halka muskurate hue khana bana rahi thi. Shandhya aur Shivani dono bacche apne Gudde or Sona ke saath khel rahi thi , Dono school nahi gayi thi aur Devki ne jidd v nahi kiya kyunki kal raat dono ke liye bahut mushkil tha. Sandhya to ab tak kitni baar uske gaalo ko chum chuki thi. Shivani bss pairo ko chukar hi khush thi firr use kuch khayal aaya aur usne bacche ke pairo ko chum liya. Bacche ke Jakhm ab thode bhar gaye the.
Devki ko khana banate hue achanak khayal aaya ki uska lalla v to bhukha hoga. Lekin ek baar bhi roya nahi ab tak. Devki daudte hue gayi aur turant lalla ko sandhya ke god se utha liya.
Sandhya - Mumma ! Mai khel rahi abhi gudde se
Shivani v yahi kehna chahti thi lekin apne shaant swabhav ke wajah se keh nahi paayi.
Devki - Beta abhi lalla ko bhukh lagi hai. Shivani ko dekhte hue beta tum kitchen dekh lena thoda.
Shivani ne bina kuch kahe kitchen ki or chal diya lekin palat ke ek baar apne SONA ko dekhna naa bhuli.
Sandhya - Mai khilaungi mumma apne gudde ko.
Wo kitchen me duad ke gayi Devki use aawaz deti rah gayi aur ek bowl ( katori ) me chawal nikal ke le aayi. Ek mutthi me jitne chawal aa sakte usne laaye. Chawal abhi abhi bane the to garm hone ke wajah se nikalte hue Sandhya ke haath thode jal gaye lekin bina dard ki parwah kiye wo le aayi.
Sandhya - Mumma ! Idhal do mai khilaungi.
Devki - ( Pahle hairaan hui fir muskurate hue ) - Beta ye abhi chhota hai na ye abhi ye sab nahi khayega abhi sirf dudh piyega.
Sandhya - Thodi udaas ho gayi kyon ki unke ghar doodh to tha hi nahi.
Devki - ( Sandhya ki halat samjhte hue firr muskurate hue ) - Chinta matt karo beta. Mai ise puja room le jaaungi na waha bhagwan lalla ke liye doodh le aayenge.Tab tak tum didi ki madam karo.
Sandhya - ( Khush hote hue ) - Thik hai mumma ! Bhagwan ko bolna. Dhel sara doodh pilaye GUDDE ko.
Firr Devki apne Lalla ko lekar puja wale kamre me chali jaati hai. Doodh pilane ke liye. Jaise hi Devki apne lalla ko dudh pilati hai wo wapas usi state me pahuch jaati hai. Jo apne lalla ko pehli baar dekhne pe thi.
Idhar Ravi ki aaj acchi khaasi aamdani hui thi usne turant hi mandir ke hi ek pandit ko kal ke namkaran ke liye bula liya. Raat ko der se jab ghar aaya , Khana khaane ke baad jab sone ki baari aayi.
Sandhya - Mumma Gudda humale saath soyega.
Shivani ne kuch kaha nahi lekin uski aankhein dekh ke hi chal raha tha. Pure samarthan me thi wo iss baat ke.
Devki ek baar Ravi ki or dekhti hai.
Aaj ke liye itna hi…Aage kya hoga? Kya Sandhya apne gudde ek saath so paayegi? Namkaran ke din kya hoga? Kya Ragini koi hungama karegi? Kya hoga lalla ke kundali me ?!
Apne apne jawab comment kare? Aage ki story ke liye like aur comment bhar bhar ke.
Pichle update me aapne padha ki sandhya aur shivani dono uss bacche ko dekh rahe hote hai aur hawa ke jhoke se wajah se unhe pahle baar unke khilone ka chehra dikhta hai.
Ab aage-
Sandhya aur Shivani dono kho jaati hai thik waise hi jaise Ravi aur Devki kho gaye the. Dono ki aankhein jaisi uski aankho se bandh gayi for. 2 min tak wo aise hi khade rahe. Dono ko kya feel hua ye to waqt hi batayega. Sandhya ko jaise hi hosh aata hai wo daud ke apni mumma ke paas gayi
Sandhya - ( Apni dono baahein failate hue ) - Mumma Idhal do mera khilona
Devki - (Thoda hichakte hue ) - Beta tum gira dogi ise
Sandhya - ( Zidd karte hue ) - Mai nahi gulaungi na
Tab tak shivani v aa jati hai waha…Devki unhe ander chalne ko kehti hai…Fir sandhya ko bitha ke uski god me bacche ko rakh deti hai.
Shivani bagal me baith ke uske pairo ki ungliyo ko chu rahi thi. Wo thodi shy this isliye hichkicha rahi thi.
Sandhya - ( Uske gaalo ko sehlate hue ) - GUDDA ! Mera pyala Gudda.
Ravi Devki ke paas aate hue tum sabka bas chale to bacche ka sara naam hi bigad do. Koi gudda koi lalla are bhai uske liye koi accha sa naam rakhte hai.
Tab tak unhe shivani ki dhimi awwaz aati hai jo uske maa-papa ki baato se bekhabar bacche ke saath khel rahi thi.
Shivani POV - Kitna pyara aur chhotu sa gudda hai . Kya ye gudda bada bhi hoga ? Iski aankehin aisi kyu hai ? bilkul sone ki tarah chamak rahi. Ise mai sona bulaungi. Pyara SONA ( Kal jab wo school gayi thi to usne apne dosto ko baat karte suna ki unki mam ne sone ki anguthi pehni hai. Jab usne dekha to wo uski chamak dekh kar use bhot pyara laga. Isliye jab usne bacche ki aankhein dekhi use compare karne ke liye pehla khayal sone ka aaya )
Ravi- ( Devki ki or dekhte hue) - Lo ek aur naam mil gaya tumhare lalla ko SONA.
Devki - ( Halka muskurate hue ) - Aap bhi ek rakh do.
Ravi - Tum sabne itne rakh diye kaafi hai. ( Firr thoda serious hote hue ) Kyu na kal pandit ko bula le kal namkaran karne ke liye aur kundali v banwa lenge.
Devki - ( Ravi ki or dekhte hue ) - parr paise.
Ravi - Tum uski chinta matt karo wo mai dekh lunga.
Ravi fir apni biwi aur betiyo ko bol kar bahar nikal jata hai lekin darwaze se bahar jaane se pahle wo ek baar piche dekhta hai aur tabhi wo baccha apna sar thoda sa ghumata hai aur uski nazre sidhe Ravi se milti hai. Ravi v ek pal ke liye chauk jata hai firr muskurate hue nikal jata hai aur apne aap se muskurate hue kehta hai. ( Kuch to baat hai iski aankho me sabko deewana kar rakha hai )
Ravi paidal hi nikal padta hai apni dukaan ki or aaj uski cycle nahi thi. Apni dukaan kholta hai. Mandir kaafi purana aur famous tha to bhot saare videshi log v aate the darshan karne ke liye. Tabhi ek videshi jo kaafi der se Idhar udhar dekh raha tha. Ravi bhi ye notice karta hai lekin aaj Ravi ke dukaan pe kaafi customers aa rahe the. Jo ki thoda ajeeb tha ( iska reason ye tha Ravi ka dukaan gali me sabse piche tha ) lekin bhot saare log waha aa rahe the.
Tabhi Rajesh uski dukaan me aata hai.
Rajesh - ( Character Information ) - Age 34 - Ravi ke puja dukaan ke thik bagal me ek dhaba hai. Jo ki akasar aise mandiro ke saamne hota hai. Rajesh uss dhabe ka malik hai aur Ravi ka bhot accha Dost. Ek bhot hi saral aur saccha dost.
Ragini - Rajesh ki wife -Age 32- Ek gharelu maheela lekin bhot mehnge sapne.Dekhne me bhot jyada khubsurat aur apne aap ko kaafi maintain kar ke rakhti hai. Dil se saaf hai bss mehngi mehngi chizo ka shauk hai. Kuch din pahle hi Rajesh se sone ki chain zidd karke kharidwayi. Unn paiso se jo ki Rajesh ne apni dhaabe ko maintain karne ke liye bachaya tha.
Rani - Age 4 - Rajesh aur Ragini ki ekaluti beti - Ye apne nana ke paas rehti hai Rishikesh me lekin harr mahine kuch dino ke liye ghar aa jaati hai.
Rajesh - Aur bhai koi madad chahiye ? aaj to kaafi grahak hai.
Ravi - ( Piche dekhte hue ) - Haa bhai aaja ...Piche wo batasho ( mithai ) ka box pada hai wo le aa bss.
Rajesh - ( Box le ke aate hue ) - Tujhe to ab daily madad ki zarurat padegi.
Ravi - ( clueless aur question bhare lehze me Rajesh ko dekhta hai )
Rajesh - Tujhe nahi pata kya? Jo piche ki deewar thi wo todd di gayi hai. Waha ghaat aur uske bagal me park banega. Udhar se hi aayenge ab sab log . Purana rast band kar diya jayega.
Ravi - ( Jise achanak khayal aata hai ki itne saare logo ko dekhkar usne dhyan hi nahi diya ki wo dusre taraf se aa rahe hai. Ye bhot badi khabar thi kyunki jo kal tak last dukaan thi wo ab first dukaan ban gayi thi. ) - Kya khabar sunai hai bhai. Dil khush kar diya.
Rajesh - Mai v khush hu bhai mera hotel v ab pehla ho gaya.
Ravi - Chal tune aaj ek khabar sunai hai to mai v ek khabar sunata hu. Lekin ye khabar bahar na jaaye
Rajesh - ( Thoda hairaan aur question waale lehje me Ravi ko dekhta hai )
Ravi - Mere ghar beta aaya hai
Rajesh - Kyaaa?!! Saale tune mujhe bataya bhi nahi bhabhi pregnant hai ! Kab hua ye?!
Ravi - Are bhai shaant-shaant,Wo baat aisi hai ki…Fir use puri baat batata hai.
Rajesh - To namakaran kab karna hai ?
Ravi - Kal hi karne ka socha hai shaam ko. Tu bhi bhabhi aur Rani ko le ke aa jana.
Rajesh - Haa Rani abhi yahi hai, Thik he, aa jaaunga. Lekin dekh naa kya sanjog hai ki kal tujhe tera beta mila aur aaj hi itni badi khushkhabri.
Ravi - Haa bhai humari zindagi me khusiya bharne aaya hai aisa lagta hai.
Tabhi wo videshi jo kaafi pareshan tha aur idhar udhar dhundh raha tha. Wo Ravi ke dukaan ke paas aata hai.
Videsh - Hello, I’m Tim, Can you help me ?
Ravi - Hello Tim, I’m Ravi , How can I help you?
Tim kaafi pareshan tha lekin Ravi ki English sun ke thoda hairaan hota hai. Ravi jo ki tour guide ka bhi kaam karta tha isliye usne English acche se seekhi thi.
Tim - I’ve got my shoes stolen and now I want to go for a hike in a nearby forest. I’m looking for some transport, maybe a bicycle.
( Mera juta chori ho gaya hai aur abhi mujhe bagal ke jungle me ghumne jana hai. Aap kisi cycle ka intezam kar skte hai kya )
Ravi - Rajesh se , Bhai mera cycle to kal tut gaya. Tu apni cycle de de na.
Rajesh - Bhai , Cycle to mai de du lekin agar ye bhaag gaya to. Aise kisi ajnabee pe bharosa nahi kar skte.
Tim ne in dono ki baat suni aur shayd wo thoda bhot samajh gaya tha ki kis baare me baat ho rahi thi.
Tim - Don’t worry about the security, If you want i’m willing to give you my SSN card and pay you some advance.
( Security ki chinta matt karo mai apna SSN card dene ko taiyaar hu aur kuch advance me payment v kar dunga ).
Ravi - Okay Tim, You can submit any Identity proof here with some security money. When you're back you pay the charge and take away your belongings.
( Thik hai Tim, Tum apna Identity proof aur kuch security ke liye paise jama kar do. Wapas aa ke apni chize le jana aur paise pay kar dena )
Tim - Thank you, Man. You’re a savior. I’m a wildlife Photographer this hike was really important for my competition.
Ravi - You’re Welcome, Tim. All the best for your trip.
Uske baad Tim Rajesh ki Cycle le ke chala jata hai. Rajesh v apne hotel chala jata hai. Ravi soch me pad jata hai. Yaha kitni saari chizo ki zarurat hai agar wo in sab ke liye kuch kar paye to kaafi acche paise kama sakta hai. Ravi ne mann hi mann nischay kiya inn sab chizo ko le kar kuch shurwaat karne ki.
Author - Chalte hai ghar ki or dekhte hai waha kya ho raha hai
Devki Kitchen me halka-halka muskurate hue khana bana rahi thi. Shandhya aur Shivani dono bacche apne Gudde or Sona ke saath khel rahi thi , Dono school nahi gayi thi aur Devki ne jidd v nahi kiya kyunki kal raat dono ke liye bahut mushkil tha. Sandhya to ab tak kitni baar uske gaalo ko chum chuki thi. Shivani bss pairo ko chukar hi khush thi firr use kuch khayal aaya aur usne bacche ke pairo ko chum liya. Bacche ke Jakhm ab thode bhar gaye the.
Devki ko khana banate hue achanak khayal aaya ki uska lalla v to bhukha hoga. Lekin ek baar bhi roya nahi ab tak. Devki daudte hue gayi aur turant lalla ko sandhya ke god se utha liya.
Sandhya - Mumma ! Mai khel rahi abhi gudde se
Shivani v yahi kehna chahti thi lekin apne shaant swabhav ke wajah se keh nahi paayi.
Devki - Beta abhi lalla ko bhukh lagi hai. Shivani ko dekhte hue beta tum kitchen dekh lena thoda.
Shivani ne bina kuch kahe kitchen ki or chal diya lekin palat ke ek baar apne SONA ko dekhna naa bhuli.
Sandhya - Mai khilaungi mumma apne gudde ko.
Wo kitchen me duad ke gayi Devki use aawaz deti rah gayi aur ek bowl ( katori ) me chawal nikal ke le aayi. Ek mutthi me jitne chawal aa sakte usne laaye. Chawal abhi abhi bane the to garm hone ke wajah se nikalte hue Sandhya ke haath thode jal gaye lekin bina dard ki parwah kiye wo le aayi.
Sandhya - Mumma ! Idhal do mai khilaungi.
Devki - ( Pahle hairaan hui fir muskurate hue ) - Beta ye abhi chhota hai na ye abhi ye sab nahi khayega abhi sirf dudh piyega.
Sandhya - Thodi udaas ho gayi kyon ki unke ghar doodh to tha hi nahi.
Devki - ( Sandhya ki halat samjhte hue firr muskurate hue ) - Chinta matt karo beta. Mai ise puja room le jaaungi na waha bhagwan lalla ke liye doodh le aayenge.Tab tak tum didi ki madam karo.
Sandhya - ( Khush hote hue ) - Thik hai mumma ! Bhagwan ko bolna. Dhel sara doodh pilaye GUDDE ko.
Firr Devki apne Lalla ko lekar puja wale kamre me chali jaati hai. Doodh pilane ke liye. Jaise hi Devki apne lalla ko dudh pilati hai wo wapas usi state me pahuch jaati hai. Jo apne lalla ko pehli baar dekhne pe thi.
Idhar Ravi ki aaj acchi khaasi aamdani hui thi usne turant hi mandir ke hi ek pandit ko kal ke namkaran ke liye bula liya. Raat ko der se jab ghar aaya , Khana khaane ke baad jab sone ki baari aayi.
Sandhya - Mumma Gudda humale saath soyega.
Shivani ne kuch kaha nahi lekin uski aankhein dekh ke hi chal raha tha. Pure samarthan me thi wo iss baat ke.
Devki ek baar Ravi ki or dekhti hai.
Aaj ke liye itna hi…Aage kya hoga? Kya Sandhya apne gudde ek saath so paayegi? Namkaran ke din kya hoga? Kya Ragini koi hungama karegi? Kya hoga lalla ke kundali me ?!
Apne apne jawab comment kare? Aage ki story ke liye like aur comment bhar bhar ke.
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Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Ayanshsingh707 bhai....Update 3 : ( The Golden Toy )
Pichle update me aapne padha ki sandhya aur shivani dono uss bacche ko dekh rahe hote hai aur hawa ke jhoke se wajah se unhe pahle baar unke khilone ka chehra dikhta hai.
Ab aage-
Sandhya aur Shivani dono kho jaati hai thik waise hi jaise Ravi aur Devki kho gaye the. Dono ki aankhein jaisi uski aankho se bandh gayi for. 2 min tak wo aise hi khade rahe. Dono ko kya feel hua ye to waqt hi batayega. Sandhya ko jaise hi hosh aata hai wo daud ke apni mumma ke paas gayi
Sandhya - ( Apni dono baahein failate hue ) - Mumma Idhal do mera khilona
Devki - (Thoda hichakte hue ) - Beta tum gira dogi ise
Sandhya - ( Zidd karte hue ) - Mai nahi gulaungi na
Tab tak shivani v aa jati hai waha…Devki unhe ander chalne ko kehti hai…Fir sandhya ko bitha ke uski god me bacche ko rakh deti hai.
Shivani bagal me baith ke uske pairo ki ungliyo ko chu rahi thi. Wo thodi shy this isliye hichkicha rahi thi.
Sandhya - ( Uske gaalo ko sehlate hue ) - GUDDA ! Mera pyala Gudda.
Ravi Devki ke paas aate hue tum sabka bas chale to bacche ka sara naam hi bigad do. Koi gudda koi lalla are bhai uske liye koi accha sa naam rakhte hai.
Tab tak unhe shivani ki dhimi awwaz aati hai jo uske maa-papa ki baato se bekhabar bacche ke saath khel rahi thi.
Shivani POV - Kitna pyara aur chhotu sa gudda hai . Kya ye gudda bada bhi hoga ? Iski aankehin aisi kyu hai ? bilkul sone ki tarah chamak rahi. Ise mai sona bulaungi. Pyara SONA ( Kal jab wo school gayi thi to usne apne dosto ko baat karte suna ki unki mam ne sone ki anguthi pehni hai. Jab usne dekha to wo uski chamak dekh kar use bhot pyara laga. Isliye jab usne bacche ki aankhein dekhi use compare karne ke liye pehla khayal sone ka aaya )
Ravi- ( Devki ki or dekhte hue) - Lo ek aur naam mil gaya tumhare lalla ko SONA.
Devki - ( Halka muskurate hue ) - Aap bhi ek rakh do.
Ravi - Tum sabne itne rakh diye kaafi hai. ( Firr thoda serious hote hue ) Kyu na kal pandit ko bula le kal namkaran karne ke liye aur kundali v banwa lenge.
Devki - ( Ravi ki or dekhte hue ) - parr paise.
Ravi - Tum uski chinta matt karo wo mai dekh lunga.
Ravi fir apni biwi aur betiyo ko bol kar bahar nikal jata hai lekin darwaze se bahar jaane se pahle wo ek baar piche dekhta hai aur tabhi wo baccha apna sar thoda sa ghumata hai aur uski nazre sidhe Ravi se milti hai. Ravi v ek pal ke liye chauk jata hai firr muskurate hue nikal jata hai aur apne aap se muskurate hue kehta hai. ( Kuch to baat hai iski aankho me sabko deewana kar rakha hai )
Ravi paidal hi nikal padta hai apni dukaan ki or aaj uski cycle nahi thi. Apni dukaan kholta hai. Mandir kaafi purana aur famous tha to bhot saare videshi log v aate the darshan karne ke liye. Tabhi ek videshi jo kaafi der se Idhar udhar dekh raha tha. Ravi bhi ye notice karta hai lekin aaj Ravi ke dukaan pe kaafi customers aa rahe the. Jo ki thoda ajeeb tha ( iska reason ye tha Ravi ka dukaan gali me sabse piche tha ) lekin bhot saare log waha aa rahe the.
Tabhi Rajesh uski dukaan me aata hai.
Rajesh - ( Character Information ) - Age 34 - Ravi ke puja dukaan ke thik bagal me ek dhaba hai. Jo ki akasar aise mandiro ke saamne hota hai. Rajesh uss dhabe ka malik hai aur Ravi ka bhot accha Dost. Ek bhot hi saral aur saccha dost.
Ragini - Rajesh ki wife -Age 32- Ek gharelu maheela lekin bhot mehnge sapne.Dekhne me bhot jyada khubsurat aur apne aap ko kaafi maintain kar ke rakhti hai. Dil se saaf hai bss mehngi mehngi chizo ka shauk hai. Kuch din pahle hi Rajesh se sone ki chain zidd karke kharidwayi. Unn paiso se jo ki Rajesh ne apni dhaabe ko maintain karne ke liye bachaya tha.
Rani - Age 4 - Rajesh aur Ragini ki ekaluti beti - Ye apne nana ke paas rehti hai Rishikesh me lekin harr mahine kuch dino ke liye ghar aa jaati hai.
Rajesh - Aur bhai koi madad chahiye ? aaj to kaafi grahak hai.
Ravi - ( Piche dekhte hue ) - Haa bhai aaja ...Piche wo batasho ( mithai ) ka box pada hai wo le aa bss.
Rajesh - ( Box le ke aate hue ) - Tujhe to ab daily madad ki zarurat padegi.
Ravi - ( clueless aur question bhare lehze me Rajesh ko dekhta hai )
Rajesh - Tujhe nahi pata kya? Jo piche ki deewar thi wo todd di gayi hai. Waha ghaat aur uske bagal me park banega. Udhar se hi aayenge ab sab log . Purana rast band kar diya jayega.
Ravi - ( Jise achanak khayal aata hai ki itne saare logo ko dekhkar usne dhyan hi nahi diya ki wo dusre taraf se aa rahe hai. Ye bhot badi khabar thi kyunki jo kal tak last dukaan thi wo ab first dukaan ban gayi thi. ) - Kya khabar sunai hai bhai. Dil khush kar diya.
Rajesh - Mai v khush hu bhai mera hotel v ab pehla ho gaya.
Ravi - Chal tune aaj ek khabar sunai hai to mai v ek khabar sunata hu. Lekin ye khabar bahar na jaaye
Rajesh - ( Thoda hairaan aur question waale lehje me Ravi ko dekhta hai )
Ravi - Mere ghar beta aaya hai
Rajesh - Kyaaa?!! Saale tune mujhe bataya bhi nahi bhabhi pregnant hai ! Kab hua ye?!
Ravi - Are bhai shaant-shaant,Wo baat aisi hai ki…Fir use puri baat batata hai.
Rajesh - To namakaran kab karna hai ?
Ravi - Kal hi karne ka socha hai shaam ko. Tu bhi bhabhi aur Rani ko le ke aa jana.
Rajesh - Haa Rani abhi yahi hai, Thik he, aa jaaunga. Lekin dekh naa kya sanjog hai ki kal tujhe tera beta mila aur aaj hi itni badi khushkhabri.
Ravi - Haa bhai humari zindagi me khusiya bharne aaya hai aisa lagta hai.
Tabhi wo videshi jo kaafi pareshan tha aur idhar udhar dhundh raha tha. Wo Ravi ke dukaan ke paas aata hai.
Videsh - Hello, I’m Tim, Can you help me ?
Ravi - Hello Tim, I’m Ravi , How can I help you?
Tim kaafi pareshan tha lekin Ravi ki English sun ke thoda hairaan hota hai. Ravi jo ki tour guide ka bhi kaam karta tha isliye usne English acche se seekhi thi.
Tim - I’ve got my shoes stolen and now I want to go for a hike in a nearby forest. I’m looking for some transport, maybe a bicycle.
( Mera juta chori ho gaya hai aur abhi mujhe bagal ke jungle me ghumne jana hai. Aap kisi cycle ka intezam kar skte hai kya )
Ravi - Rajesh se , Bhai mera cycle to kal tut gaya. Tu apni cycle de de na.
Rajesh - Bhai , Cycle to mai de du lekin agar ye bhaag gaya to. Aise kisi ajnabee pe bharosa nahi kar skte.
Tim ne in dono ki baat suni aur shayd wo thoda bhot samajh gaya tha ki kis baare me baat ho rahi thi.
Tim - Don’t worry about the security, If you want i’m willing to give you my SSN card and pay you some advance.
( Security ki chinta matt karo mai apna SSN card dene ko taiyaar hu aur kuch advance me payment v kar dunga ).
Ravi - Okay Tim, You can submit any Identity proof here with some security money. When you're back you pay the charge and take away your belongings.
( Thik hai Tim, Tum apna Identity proof aur kuch security ke liye paise jama kar do. Wapas aa ke apni chize le jana aur paise pay kar dena )
Tim - Thank you, Man. You’re a savior. I’m a wildlife Photographer this hike was really important for my competition.
Ravi - You’re Welcome, Tim. All the best for your trip.
Uske baad Tim Rajesh ki Cycle le ke chala jata hai. Rajesh v apne hotel chala jata hai. Ravi soch me pad jata hai. Yaha kitni saari chizo ki zarurat hai agar wo in sab ke liye kuch kar paye to kaafi acche paise kama sakta hai. Ravi ne mann hi mann nischay kiya inn sab chizo ko le kar kuch shurwaat karne ki.
Author - Chalte hai ghar ki or dekhte hai waha kya ho raha hai
Devki Kitchen me halka-halka muskurate hue khana bana rahi thi. Shandhya aur Shivani dono bacche apne Gudde or Sona ke saath khel rahi thi , Dono school nahi gayi thi aur Devki ne jidd v nahi kiya kyunki kal raat dono ke liye bahut mushkil tha. Sandhya to ab tak kitni baar uske gaalo ko chum chuki thi. Shivani bss pairo ko chukar hi khush thi firr use kuch khayal aaya aur usne bacche ke pairo ko chum liya. Bacche ke Jakhm ab thode bhar gaye the.
Devki ko khana banate hue achanak khayal aaya ki uska lalla v to bhukha hoga. Lekin ek baar bhi roya nahi ab tak. Devki daudte hue gayi aur turant lalla ko sandhya ke god se utha liya.
Sandhya - Mumma ! Mai khel rahi abhi gudde se
Shivani v yahi kehna chahti thi lekin apne shaant swabhav ke wajah se keh nahi paayi.
Devki - Beta abhi lalla ko bhukh lagi hai. Shivani ko dekhte hue beta tum kitchen dekh lena thoda.
Shivani ne bina kuch kahe kitchen ki or chal diya lekin palat ke ek baar apne SONA ko dekhna naa bhuli.
Sandhya - Mai khilaungi mumma apne gudde ko.
Wo kitchen me duad ke gayi Devki use aawaz deti rah gayi aur ek bowl ( katori ) me chawal nikal ke le aayi. Ek mutthi me jitne chawal aa sakte usne laaye. Chawal abhi abhi bane the to garm hone ke wajah se nikalte hue Sandhya ke haath thode jal gaye lekin bina dard ki parwah kiye wo le aayi.
Sandhya - Mumma ! Idhal do mai khilaungi.
Devki - ( Pahle hairaan hui fir muskurate hue ) - Beta ye abhi chhota hai na ye abhi ye sab nahi khayega abhi sirf dudh piyega.
Sandhya - Thodi udaas ho gayi kyon ki unke ghar doodh to tha hi nahi.
Devki - ( Sandhya ki halat samjhte hue firr muskurate hue ) - Chinta matt karo beta. Mai ise puja room le jaaungi na waha bhagwan lalla ke liye doodh le aayenge.Tab tak tum didi ki madam karo.
Sandhya - ( Khush hote hue ) - Thik hai mumma ! Bhagwan ko bolna. Dhel sara doodh pilaye GUDDE ko.
Firr Devki apne Lalla ko lekar puja wale kamre me chali jaati hai. Doodh pilane ke liye. Jaise hi Devki apne lalla ko dudh pilati hai wo wapas usi state me pahuch jaati hai. Jo apne lalla ko pehli baar dekhne pe thi.
Idhar Ravi ki aaj acchi khaasi aamdani hui thi usne turant hi mandir ke hi ek pandit ko kal ke namkaran ke liye bula liya. Raat ko der se jab ghar aaya , Khana khaane ke baad jab sone ki baari aayi.
Sandhya - Mumma Gudda humale saath soyega.
Shivani ne kuch kaha nahi lekin uski aankhein dekh ke hi chal raha tha. Pure samarthan me thi wo iss baat ke.
Devki ek baar Ravi ki or dekhti hai.
Aaj ke liye itna hi…Aage kya hoga? Kya Sandhya apne gudde ek saath so paayegi? Namkaran ke din kya hoga? Kya Ragini koi hungama karegi? Kya hoga lalla ke kundali me ?!
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Nice. Continue karte raise. We are with you. Waiting for next updateUpdate 3 : ( The Golden Toy )
Pichle update me aapne padha ki sandhya aur shivani dono uss bacche ko dekh rahe hote hai aur hawa ke jhoke se wajah se unhe pahle baar unke khilone ka chehra dikhta hai.
Ab aage-
Sandhya aur Shivani dono kho jaati hai thik waise hi jaise Ravi aur Devki kho gaye the. Dono ki aankhein jaisi uski aankho se bandh gayi for. 2 min tak wo aise hi khade rahe. Dono ko kya feel hua ye to waqt hi batayega. Sandhya ko jaise hi hosh aata hai wo daud ke apni mumma ke paas gayi
Sandhya - ( Apni dono baahein failate hue ) - Mumma Idhal do mera khilona
Devki - (Thoda hichakte hue ) - Beta tum gira dogi ise
Sandhya - ( Zidd karte hue ) - Mai nahi gulaungi na
Tab tak shivani v aa jati hai waha…Devki unhe ander chalne ko kehti hai…Fir sandhya ko bitha ke uski god me bacche ko rakh deti hai.
Shivani bagal me baith ke uske pairo ki ungliyo ko chu rahi thi. Wo thodi shy this isliye hichkicha rahi thi.
Sandhya - ( Uske gaalo ko sehlate hue ) - GUDDA ! Mera pyala Gudda.
Ravi Devki ke paas aate hue tum sabka bas chale to bacche ka sara naam hi bigad do. Koi gudda koi lalla are bhai uske liye koi accha sa naam rakhte hai.
Tab tak unhe shivani ki dhimi awwaz aati hai jo uske maa-papa ki baato se bekhabar bacche ke saath khel rahi thi.
Shivani POV - Kitna pyara aur chhotu sa gudda hai . Kya ye gudda bada bhi hoga ? Iski aankehin aisi kyu hai ? bilkul sone ki tarah chamak rahi. Ise mai sona bulaungi. Pyara SONA ( Kal jab wo school gayi thi to usne apne dosto ko baat karte suna ki unki mam ne sone ki anguthi pehni hai. Jab usne dekha to wo uski chamak dekh kar use bhot pyara laga. Isliye jab usne bacche ki aankhein dekhi use compare karne ke liye pehla khayal sone ka aaya )
Ravi- ( Devki ki or dekhte hue) - Lo ek aur naam mil gaya tumhare lalla ko SONA.
Devki - ( Halka muskurate hue ) - Aap bhi ek rakh do.
Ravi - Tum sabne itne rakh diye kaafi hai. ( Firr thoda serious hote hue ) Kyu na kal pandit ko bula le kal namkaran karne ke liye aur kundali v banwa lenge.
Devki - ( Ravi ki or dekhte hue ) - parr paise.
Ravi - Tum uski chinta matt karo wo mai dekh lunga.
Ravi fir apni biwi aur betiyo ko bol kar bahar nikal jata hai lekin darwaze se bahar jaane se pahle wo ek baar piche dekhta hai aur tabhi wo baccha apna sar thoda sa ghumata hai aur uski nazre sidhe Ravi se milti hai. Ravi v ek pal ke liye chauk jata hai firr muskurate hue nikal jata hai aur apne aap se muskurate hue kehta hai. ( Kuch to baat hai iski aankho me sabko deewana kar rakha hai )
Ravi paidal hi nikal padta hai apni dukaan ki or aaj uski cycle nahi thi. Apni dukaan kholta hai. Mandir kaafi purana aur famous tha to bhot saare videshi log v aate the darshan karne ke liye. Tabhi ek videshi jo kaafi der se Idhar udhar dekh raha tha. Ravi bhi ye notice karta hai lekin aaj Ravi ke dukaan pe kaafi customers aa rahe the. Jo ki thoda ajeeb tha ( iska reason ye tha Ravi ka dukaan gali me sabse piche tha ) lekin bhot saare log waha aa rahe the.
Tabhi Rajesh uski dukaan me aata hai.
Rajesh - ( Character Information ) - Age 34 - Ravi ke puja dukaan ke thik bagal me ek dhaba hai. Jo ki akasar aise mandiro ke saamne hota hai. Rajesh uss dhabe ka malik hai aur Ravi ka bhot accha Dost. Ek bhot hi saral aur saccha dost.
Ragini - Rajesh ki wife -Age 32- Ek gharelu maheela lekin bhot mehnge sapne.Dekhne me bhot jyada khubsurat aur apne aap ko kaafi maintain kar ke rakhti hai. Dil se saaf hai bss mehngi mehngi chizo ka shauk hai. Kuch din pahle hi Rajesh se sone ki chain zidd karke kharidwayi. Unn paiso se jo ki Rajesh ne apni dhaabe ko maintain karne ke liye bachaya tha.
Rani - Age 4 - Rajesh aur Ragini ki ekaluti beti - Ye apne nana ke paas rehti hai Rishikesh me lekin harr mahine kuch dino ke liye ghar aa jaati hai.
Rajesh - Aur bhai koi madad chahiye ? aaj to kaafi grahak hai.
Ravi - ( Piche dekhte hue ) - Haa bhai aaja ...Piche wo batasho ( mithai ) ka box pada hai wo le aa bss.
Rajesh - ( Box le ke aate hue ) - Tujhe to ab daily madad ki zarurat padegi.
Ravi - ( clueless aur question bhare lehze me Rajesh ko dekhta hai )
Rajesh - Tujhe nahi pata kya? Jo piche ki deewar thi wo todd di gayi hai. Waha ghaat aur uske bagal me park banega. Udhar se hi aayenge ab sab log . Purana rast band kar diya jayega.
Ravi - ( Jise achanak khayal aata hai ki itne saare logo ko dekhkar usne dhyan hi nahi diya ki wo dusre taraf se aa rahe hai. Ye bhot badi khabar thi kyunki jo kal tak last dukaan thi wo ab first dukaan ban gayi thi. ) - Kya khabar sunai hai bhai. Dil khush kar diya.
Rajesh - Mai v khush hu bhai mera hotel v ab pehla ho gaya.
Ravi - Chal tune aaj ek khabar sunai hai to mai v ek khabar sunata hu. Lekin ye khabar bahar na jaaye
Rajesh - ( Thoda hairaan aur question waale lehje me Ravi ko dekhta hai )
Ravi - Mere ghar beta aaya hai
Rajesh - Kyaaa?!! Saale tune mujhe bataya bhi nahi bhabhi pregnant hai ! Kab hua ye?!
Ravi - Are bhai shaant-shaant,Wo baat aisi hai ki…Fir use puri baat batata hai.
Rajesh - To namakaran kab karna hai ?
Ravi - Kal hi karne ka socha hai shaam ko. Tu bhi bhabhi aur Rani ko le ke aa jana.
Rajesh - Haa Rani abhi yahi hai, Thik he, aa jaaunga. Lekin dekh naa kya sanjog hai ki kal tujhe tera beta mila aur aaj hi itni badi khushkhabri.
Ravi - Haa bhai humari zindagi me khusiya bharne aaya hai aisa lagta hai.
Tabhi wo videshi jo kaafi pareshan tha aur idhar udhar dhundh raha tha. Wo Ravi ke dukaan ke paas aata hai.
Videsh - Hello, I’m Tim, Can you help me ?
Ravi - Hello Tim, I’m Ravi , How can I help you?
Tim kaafi pareshan tha lekin Ravi ki English sun ke thoda hairaan hota hai. Ravi jo ki tour guide ka bhi kaam karta tha isliye usne English acche se seekhi thi.
Tim - I’ve got my shoes stolen and now I want to go for a hike in a nearby forest. I’m looking for some transport, maybe a bicycle.
( Mera juta chori ho gaya hai aur abhi mujhe bagal ke jungle me ghumne jana hai. Aap kisi cycle ka intezam kar skte hai kya )
Ravi - Rajesh se , Bhai mera cycle to kal tut gaya. Tu apni cycle de de na.
Rajesh - Bhai , Cycle to mai de du lekin agar ye bhaag gaya to. Aise kisi ajnabee pe bharosa nahi kar skte.
Tim ne in dono ki baat suni aur shayd wo thoda bhot samajh gaya tha ki kis baare me baat ho rahi thi.
Tim - Don’t worry about the security, If you want i’m willing to give you my SSN card and pay you some advance.
( Security ki chinta matt karo mai apna SSN card dene ko taiyaar hu aur kuch advance me payment v kar dunga ).
Ravi - Okay Tim, You can submit any Identity proof here with some security money. When you're back you pay the charge and take away your belongings.
( Thik hai Tim, Tum apna Identity proof aur kuch security ke liye paise jama kar do. Wapas aa ke apni chize le jana aur paise pay kar dena )
Tim - Thank you, Man. You’re a savior. I’m a wildlife Photographer this hike was really important for my competition.
Ravi - You’re Welcome, Tim. All the best for your trip.
Uske baad Tim Rajesh ki Cycle le ke chala jata hai. Rajesh v apne hotel chala jata hai. Ravi soch me pad jata hai. Yaha kitni saari chizo ki zarurat hai agar wo in sab ke liye kuch kar paye to kaafi acche paise kama sakta hai. Ravi ne mann hi mann nischay kiya inn sab chizo ko le kar kuch shurwaat karne ki.
Author - Chalte hai ghar ki or dekhte hai waha kya ho raha hai
Devki Kitchen me halka-halka muskurate hue khana bana rahi thi. Shandhya aur Shivani dono bacche apne Gudde or Sona ke saath khel rahi thi , Dono school nahi gayi thi aur Devki ne jidd v nahi kiya kyunki kal raat dono ke liye bahut mushkil tha. Sandhya to ab tak kitni baar uske gaalo ko chum chuki thi. Shivani bss pairo ko chukar hi khush thi firr use kuch khayal aaya aur usne bacche ke pairo ko chum liya. Bacche ke Jakhm ab thode bhar gaye the.
Devki ko khana banate hue achanak khayal aaya ki uska lalla v to bhukha hoga. Lekin ek baar bhi roya nahi ab tak. Devki daudte hue gayi aur turant lalla ko sandhya ke god se utha liya.
Sandhya - Mumma ! Mai khel rahi abhi gudde se
Shivani v yahi kehna chahti thi lekin apne shaant swabhav ke wajah se keh nahi paayi.
Devki - Beta abhi lalla ko bhukh lagi hai. Shivani ko dekhte hue beta tum kitchen dekh lena thoda.
Shivani ne bina kuch kahe kitchen ki or chal diya lekin palat ke ek baar apne SONA ko dekhna naa bhuli.
Sandhya - Mai khilaungi mumma apne gudde ko.
Wo kitchen me duad ke gayi Devki use aawaz deti rah gayi aur ek bowl ( katori ) me chawal nikal ke le aayi. Ek mutthi me jitne chawal aa sakte usne laaye. Chawal abhi abhi bane the to garm hone ke wajah se nikalte hue Sandhya ke haath thode jal gaye lekin bina dard ki parwah kiye wo le aayi.
Sandhya - Mumma ! Idhal do mai khilaungi.
Devki - ( Pahle hairaan hui fir muskurate hue ) - Beta ye abhi chhota hai na ye abhi ye sab nahi khayega abhi sirf dudh piyega.
Sandhya - Thodi udaas ho gayi kyon ki unke ghar doodh to tha hi nahi.
Devki - ( Sandhya ki halat samjhte hue firr muskurate hue ) - Chinta matt karo beta. Mai ise puja room le jaaungi na waha bhagwan lalla ke liye doodh le aayenge.Tab tak tum didi ki madam karo.
Sandhya - ( Khush hote hue ) - Thik hai mumma ! Bhagwan ko bolna. Dhel sara doodh pilaye GUDDE ko.
Firr Devki apne Lalla ko lekar puja wale kamre me chali jaati hai. Doodh pilane ke liye. Jaise hi Devki apne lalla ko dudh pilati hai wo wapas usi state me pahuch jaati hai. Jo apne lalla ko pehli baar dekhne pe thi.
Idhar Ravi ki aaj acchi khaasi aamdani hui thi usne turant hi mandir ke hi ek pandit ko kal ke namkaran ke liye bula liya. Raat ko der se jab ghar aaya , Khana khaane ke baad jab sone ki baari aayi.
Sandhya - Mumma Gudda humale saath soyega.
Shivani ne kuch kaha nahi lekin uski aankhein dekh ke hi chal raha tha. Pure samarthan me thi wo iss baat ke.
Devki ek baar Ravi ki or dekhti hai.
Aaj ke liye itna hi…Aage kya hoga? Kya Sandhya apne gudde ek saath so paayegi? Namkaran ke din kya hoga? Kya Ragini koi hungama karegi? Kya hoga lalla ke kundali me ?!
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Update 4 : ( Ayansh - The Empty Vessel )
Pichle update me aapne padha ki Sandhya Devki se kehti hai ki wo apne Gudde ko apne paas sulana chahti hai.
Ab aage -
Sandhya - ( Apne dono hatho ko failate hue ) - Lao mumma mela gudda
Devki - ( Ek baar Ravi ki or dekhti hai fir sandhya se) - Beta lalla ko bhukh lagegi na raat me to ise bhagwan ji ke paas le jana padega na aur apka to school bhi hai subah.
Sandhya - ( Thodi udaas hote hue ) - Mumma Gudda kab humare jaise khana khayega?
Devki - Jab wo apke jitna bada ho jayega tab.
Sandhya aur Shivani dono samjh jaate hai ki unke gudde ko bada ke baad hi wo use apne paas sula payenge. Sandhya aur Shivani apne room ki taraf jaane lagte hai. Tabhi achanak sandhya wapas daudte hue aati hai aur apne gudde ke gaalo ko chum leti hai. Karna to ye shivani v chahti thi lekin apne nature ke wajah se kuch kar nahi paayi aur bss apne SONA ko dekhkar dono apne kamre me chale gayi.Ravi aur Devki ye dekhkar muskuraye bina rah nahi paaye. Sandhya aur Shivani hall me soti thi aur Ravi aur Devki bedroom me. Unke bedroom ke kone me hi puja ke liye bhagwan ki murtiya aur tasveere rakhi thi.
Devki - ( Ravi se ) - Suniye, Apne pandit se baat ki kya kal ke liye ?
Ravi - ( Muskurate hue ) - Begum, aap kuch kaho, aur hum na kare aisa kabhi ho sakta hai?
Devki - ( Blush karte hue ) - Hato ji, apko to sirf maske lagane hai.
Ravi - Waise tumhara ye lalla bhot kismat lekar aaya hai hamare liye.
Devki - ( Thodi hairaan hote hue Ravi ki or dekhti hai )
Ravi - Use aaj jo v dukaan pe ghatna hui aur aage jo karne ka usne socha hai bata deta hai.
Devki - ( Khush hote hue ) - Ye to bhot acchi khabar hai ji. ( Firr apne lalla ki or dekhte hue ) Ye sab mere lalla ke wajah se hua hai.
Ravi - ( Flirt karte hue ) - Thodi taarif meri v kar do.
Devki - ( Sudhar jaao thode waali look dete hue )
Ravi - Are zara hume bhi to khilano do mere sher ko.
Devki - Oohhoo , Sher ! Kal tak to humare naam rakhne pe bada suna rahe the.
Ravi - ( Halka muskurate hue ) - Aree jaan mai suna kaha raha tha.
Devki - Rahne do, Rahne do…
Fir Ravi bhi thodi der apne sher ki maalish karta hai aur sula deta hai aur ye dono bhi so jaate hai.
Idhar Sandhya aur Shivani dono ko hi neend nahi aa rahi thi. Dono ko rah-rah kar apne Gudde aur SONA ki yaad aa rahi thi. Lekin kaafi der jaagne ke baad dono so jaati hai.
Ab chalte hai Rajesh ke ghar Rajesh bedroom me Ragini ke saath tha.
Rajesh - Suno, Kal hume Ravi ke ghar jana hai.
Ragini - Kyu?
Rajesh - Unke yaha unke bacche ka namkaran hai.
Ragini - ( Shock hote hue ) - Baccha ! Konsa baccha ?
Rajesh - Use puri baat batata hai.
Ragini - Aise kaise kisi bhi bacche ko le aaye aur apna bana liya ? Pata nahi kiska khoon hai. ( Ragini ka dil saaf hai bss usne ye baat thode jalan me kahi thi kyunki uska koi beta nahi tha. )
Rajesh - Are bhagyawan zara uss bacche ke baare me to socho.
Ragini - Aap to kuch samjhte hi nahi hai. Samaj kya kya kehta hai aapko nahi pata.
Rajesh - Accha accha choro na wo sab, Tum bss Rani ko lekar chali jana thodi jaldi bhabhi ki madad ho jaayegi.
Ragini - Aur aap kab aayenge?
Rajesh - Mai Ravi ke saath hi dukaan se hi aa jaaunga pandit ji ko lekar.
Ragini - Thik hai ji ( Ragini thodi khush bhi thodi kyunki kuch din pahle jo usne gold chain kharidi thi wo sabko dikhane ka mauka milega. Yahi sab to chahiye tha use )
Agle din subah dono thoda late uthti hai aur sabse pahle uthkar apne Gudde ko dhudhti hai.
Devki - Are kya kar rahi ho tum dono? School nahi jana ?
Sandhya - Mumma Gudde ko bhi hum apne saath school le jaaye ?
Devki - ( Hairaani se mann me ) - Iss ladki ka bss chale to ek second bhi mere lalla ko naa chore. Abhi ye haal hai pata nhi bade hoke kya hoga.
Devki - Wo abhi chhota hai beta jab bada ho jaayega tab tumhare saath hi school jaayega.
Sandhya - ( Gudde ke kaan me ) - Suna tumne mumma keh rahi hum saath me jaayenge. Tum jaldi jaldi bade ho jao.
Devki - kya keh rahi ho ?
Sandhya - Kuch nahi
Devki - Chalo-Chalo taiyaar ho jao dono.
Dono taiyaar ho ke school chali jaati hai. Ravi bhi mandir ke liye nikal jata hai.Devki aaj namkaran ke liye taiyaariya karne lagti hai. Ravi ke dukaan pe aaj bhi kaafi customers the. Ravi Rajesh ke saath milkar aage ke business ka plan banata hai. Rajesh ko v plan kaafi sahi lagta hai. Firr dono dopaher ko hi nikal jaate hai pandit ji ke saath.
Dono jab pandit ji ke saath chaurahe pe utarte hai tabhi unhe Ragini aur Rani dikh jaati hai.
Rajesh - ( Ragini se ) - Tum abhi aa rahi ho. Maine kaha tha thodi jaldi chali jana.
Ragini - ( Itrate hue aur apne haar ko chute hue ) - Wo bss thoda taiyaar hone me jyada waqt lag gaya.
Rajesh - ( Thoda sharminda hote hue Ravi ke saamne )
Ravi - Are koi baat nahi bhabhi ji chaliye. Aur Rani beta kaisi ho tum?
Rani - Mai acchi hu uncle.
Ravi sabko lekar ander aata hai. Devki ne pura ghar saja rakha tha.Padosh ki ek mahila Shushila chachi bhi aayi hui thi. Ragini pure attitude aur itrate hue ghar ke ander aati hai. Apne haar ko baar baar chute hue aur Idhar udhar dekh rahi thi taaki devki ko apna haar dikha sake.
Shushila Chachi - Are Devki dekho to sab mehmaan aaye hai.
Devki - Aayi kaki
Devki lalla ko apni god me liye bahar aati hai. Jaise hi Ragini ki nazar uss bacche ke nazar se takrati hai. Ragini sabkuch bhul jaati hai aur khadi ki khadi reh jaati hai. Rajesh v thode waqt ke liye thehar jaata hai. Rani v kho si gayi thi.
Devki aur Ravi jinko inn sab chizo ki aadat ho gayi thi. Wo jyada hairaan nahi hue. Lekin unhe shock tab laga jab pandit ji ko bhi khoye hue dekha. Thodi der baad sab hosh me aate hai Ragini ko chor kar.
Ragini’s POV - Uske mann ke saare vichar sunya ho gaye the. Uske dil ke paas ek ajeeb si sensation hone lagi. Heartbeat bhot tezz ho gayi thi lekin ek ek dhadkan ko wo araam se sun skti thi.Jaise hi bacche ki aankehin Ragini ki tarag mudi aur Ragini se bardaast karna mushkil ho gaya. Use jab apna dil bhot kamjor hote hue mehsus hua to wo uss state bahar aayi.
Wo dhire dhire kadmo se chalte hue bacche ke taraf gayi. Firr jo usne kiya use dekhkar sab hairaan reh gaye
. Usne apna haath piche karke apna haar utara aur uss bacche ki god me rakh diya.
Author’s POV - “Ye bhi gayi.”
( Ragini ka dil humesha se saaf tha. Lekin uske itrane aur mehngi chizo ke piche jo wajah thi wo ye ki wo saamne walo ki aankho me apne liye wo maan dekhna chahti thi aur jaise hi aaj usne un do aankho ko dekha usme wo sab kuch tha jo use humesha se chahiye tha. Iss feeling ke ek chhote version ko samjhne ke liye agar aapne kabhi kisi se sacche dil se pyar kiya aur uske liye taiyaar hue ho aapki bss ek hi dua hoti hai ki ek baar wo shaqs dekh le. Ragini ke feeling ka bhaav bhi kuch aisa tha. Unn aankho me aaj usne wo sab kuch dekh liya tha Jo use chahiye tha. Isliye sabse pahle apna haar utaar kar de diya. Kyunki jis wajah se wo ye karti thi. Wo pura chuka tha )
Devki - Ragini kya kar rahi ho?
Ragini - Didi, ( Ye ek aur jhatka ! Ragini ne aaj tak Devki ko naam se hi bulaya hai.)
Ragini - Didi, Maine bhot dil se diya hai mana mat kijiye.
Devki - Lekin Ragini ye itna mehnga hum kaise le skte hai.
Ragini - Didi, Ye maine apne lalla ko diya hai.
Devki ko thodi jalan si jab Ragini ne use apna lalla kaha. Lekin tab tak Rajesh aa gaya jo ki apni biwi ke aisa karne pe kaafi hairaan tha. Lekin khush bhi. Usne Devki aur Ravi ko bhot samjhane ke baad. Haar rakhne ke liye mana liya.
Ragini bhi uss bacche ko god me lena chahti thi. Usne Devki ki taraf dekha.
Devki ne apne lalla ko Ragini ke god me de diya. Ragini ko aisa laga maano use sab mil gaya. Rani v aa gayi aur wo bhi apne mumma ke saath lalla ko khilane lagi. Tabhi school se Shivani aur Sandhya bhi aa gaye apne ghar pe itne saare logo ko dekhkar dono thode hairaan the. Fir Ragini ke god me apne Gudde ko dekh ke uski taraf chal pade.
Devki - ( Dono ko bich me rokte hue ) - Are are kaha chal diye jao pahle taiyaar ho jaavo aaj tumhare Gudde ka naam rakhna hai
Dono ko jyada samjh nahi aaya kyunki Gudde ka naam kya rakhna Gudde ka naam to Gudda hai na. Same soch SONA ko lekar Shivani ke mann me aaya.
Lekin Dono apni maa ki baat maante hue taiyaar hone chali gayi. Thodi der baad dono taiyaar hokar aa gayi.Tab tak pandit ji v baith chuke the.
Thodi der puja hua fir pandit ne Devki ko bacche ko lekar baithne ko kaha. Ragini dena to nahi chahti thi lekin beman se use dena pada. Pandit ji bacche ko dekhte hue kundali banane lagte hai Lekin unke chehre pe chinta dikhne lagti hai. Kaafi der ke baad bhi wo kuch bana nahi paa rahe the.
Ravi - Kya hua pandit ji? Aap chinit kyu dikh rahe hai?
Pandit ji - Iss bacche ki kundali khaali hai.
Sab shock hote hue.
Rajesh - Aisa kaise ho sakta hai pandit ji ? Jiska v janm hua hai uski kundali me kuch to hoga hi.
Pandit ji - Aap thik keh rahe hai lekin iski kundali me iski zindagi par kisi grah ka koi prabhav nahi janm ko chhod kar. Mujhe thoda waqt dijiye.
Pandit ji apni aankhein band karr ke kisi ka dhyan karte hai aur aankhein kholne ke baad muskuraate hue ye baccha apna bhavisya khud likhega. Fir unke chehre pe chinta ki laakerien aa jaati hai aur kehte hai ye baccha bilkul khaali hai lekin iski urja bhot jyada hai. Agar isme acchayi bhari gayi to ye to bhot accha banega aur sabka bhala karega. Lekin agar isme burayi bhari gayi to itna bura banega jitna koi soch na sake. Ye ab iss duniya pe hai wo ise kaisa banati hai.
Baccho ko to jyada samjh nahi aa raha tha lekin saare bade bhot tension me aa gaye.
Pandit ji - Chinta to mujhe bhi hai lekin jaisa maine kaha agar hum isme acchai bhare, ise acchi acchi chize sikhaye to ye bhot saare logo ka kalyan karega. Isliye aap sab chinta ko chhod kar iss bacche ko acche sanskaar dene ke baare me soche.
Ravi - Hum apni puri koshish karenge pandit ji. Lekin bacche ka naam kya rakhe.
Tabhi bahar aavaz hui…
ALAKH NIRANJAN !! ALAKH NIRANJAN !!
Sab bahar ki or dekhte hai to ek yogi, Bhasm me lipta hua. Sirf ek langot thi uske shareer par lekin uske pure shareer se aisa aura aa raha ki kisi ki himmat nahi hui aage badhne ki.
Wo dhire dhire devki ke paas aate hai sab darr gaye the sandhya aur shivani devki ke piche chipp gayi aur bacche ko dekhte hue kehte hai.

Aghori - “AYANSH” , ayansh naam hoga iska. Apne saath saath bahut se logo ka bhavishya likhega ye bilkul unki tarah . Fir Sandhya ko dekhte hue iska humesha saath dena beti.
Fir unhone jo kiya usse sab shocked rah gaye. Unhone niche jhuk kar Shivani ke pair chu liye. Shivani jhat se piche hatt gayi aur apni maa ke piche dubak gayi. Fir unhone Rani ko dekhkar uske sar pe hath fera aur Ragini ko dekh karr muskuraye aur use ek chhota sa box diya aur kaha ye tumhare lalla ke liye. Jab wo 18 ka ho jaaye use de dena. Sab hairan the. Aghori ant me Devki ke paas jaate hai. Devki unke paon chu leti hai. Wo Devki ko ek locket dete hai. Ye tumhare liye hai beti ise khud se kabhi dur matt karna. Itna kehkar wo bahar chal dete hai. ALAKH NIRANJAN !! ALAKH NIRANJAN !!
Devki - ( Piche se awaaz dete hue ) - Baba baba rukiye.. Kuch dakshina to lete jaaiye. Ravi tab tak kuch paise lekar aata hai.
Aghori - ( Gusse se ) - Murkh tumhe lagta hai in kagaz ke tukdo ke liye mai yaha hu!! Tumhare Kagaz ke tukdo ki itni haisiyat nahi ki mera aashirwad kharid sake!!
Ravi aur Devki dono seham jaate hai
Aghori - ( Gusse se ) - Dena chahte ho mujhe taza khoon do mujhe !!
Sab darr jaate hai !
Aghori - ( Thoda shaant hote hue ) - Tum nahi de sakte mujhe sirf wo de skta hai ( Ayansh ki taraf ishara karte hue )
Devki darr jaati hai kahi wo unke bacche ko kuch kar de. Lekin tabhi baccha jo haar uski god me tha uske pin se apne forearms ko ragad deta hai aur uske forearms se khoon nikalne lagta hai. Chhota sa cut lekin gehra tha lekin khun ki kuch bunde nikalne lagi. Aghori uske paas aakar. Uske haatho me lage lage cut se thoda sa khun ungliyo pe lekar apne maathe aur gale me vibhuti ki tarah laga leta hai. Firr Devki ko ek jadi-booti deta hai aur pyaar se kehta hai ye iske zakhm par laga dena beti. Unka gussa puri tarah se khatam ho chuka tha.
Fir bacche ko dekhte hue - Intezaar karunga tera.
ALAKH NIRANJAN !! ALAKH NIRANJAN !!
Aghori waha se chala jata hai. Sabko shock me chhod kar.
Aage kya hoga? Kya AYANSH ek accha insaan banega ya bura ? Kon tha ye Aghori kya AYANSH isse milne jaayega? Aghori ne Shivani ke pair kyu chuwe ?
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Pichle update me aapne padha ki Sandhya Devki se kehti hai ki wo apne Gudde ko apne paas sulana chahti hai.
Ab aage -
Sandhya - ( Apne dono hatho ko failate hue ) - Lao mumma mela gudda
Devki - ( Ek baar Ravi ki or dekhti hai fir sandhya se) - Beta lalla ko bhukh lagegi na raat me to ise bhagwan ji ke paas le jana padega na aur apka to school bhi hai subah.
Sandhya - ( Thodi udaas hote hue ) - Mumma Gudda kab humare jaise khana khayega?
Devki - Jab wo apke jitna bada ho jayega tab.
Sandhya aur Shivani dono samjh jaate hai ki unke gudde ko bada ke baad hi wo use apne paas sula payenge. Sandhya aur Shivani apne room ki taraf jaane lagte hai. Tabhi achanak sandhya wapas daudte hue aati hai aur apne gudde ke gaalo ko chum leti hai. Karna to ye shivani v chahti thi lekin apne nature ke wajah se kuch kar nahi paayi aur bss apne SONA ko dekhkar dono apne kamre me chale gayi.Ravi aur Devki ye dekhkar muskuraye bina rah nahi paaye. Sandhya aur Shivani hall me soti thi aur Ravi aur Devki bedroom me. Unke bedroom ke kone me hi puja ke liye bhagwan ki murtiya aur tasveere rakhi thi.
Devki - ( Ravi se ) - Suniye, Apne pandit se baat ki kya kal ke liye ?
Ravi - ( Muskurate hue ) - Begum, aap kuch kaho, aur hum na kare aisa kabhi ho sakta hai?
Devki - ( Blush karte hue ) - Hato ji, apko to sirf maske lagane hai.
Ravi - Waise tumhara ye lalla bhot kismat lekar aaya hai hamare liye.
Devki - ( Thodi hairaan hote hue Ravi ki or dekhti hai )
Ravi - Use aaj jo v dukaan pe ghatna hui aur aage jo karne ka usne socha hai bata deta hai.
Devki - ( Khush hote hue ) - Ye to bhot acchi khabar hai ji. ( Firr apne lalla ki or dekhte hue ) Ye sab mere lalla ke wajah se hua hai.
Ravi - ( Flirt karte hue ) - Thodi taarif meri v kar do.
Devki - ( Sudhar jaao thode waali look dete hue )
Ravi - Are zara hume bhi to khilano do mere sher ko.
Devki - Oohhoo , Sher ! Kal tak to humare naam rakhne pe bada suna rahe the.
Ravi - ( Halka muskurate hue ) - Aree jaan mai suna kaha raha tha.
Devki - Rahne do, Rahne do…
Fir Ravi bhi thodi der apne sher ki maalish karta hai aur sula deta hai aur ye dono bhi so jaate hai.
Idhar Sandhya aur Shivani dono ko hi neend nahi aa rahi thi. Dono ko rah-rah kar apne Gudde aur SONA ki yaad aa rahi thi. Lekin kaafi der jaagne ke baad dono so jaati hai.
Ab chalte hai Rajesh ke ghar Rajesh bedroom me Ragini ke saath tha.
Rajesh - Suno, Kal hume Ravi ke ghar jana hai.
Ragini - Kyu?
Rajesh - Unke yaha unke bacche ka namkaran hai.
Ragini - ( Shock hote hue ) - Baccha ! Konsa baccha ?
Rajesh - Use puri baat batata hai.
Ragini - Aise kaise kisi bhi bacche ko le aaye aur apna bana liya ? Pata nahi kiska khoon hai. ( Ragini ka dil saaf hai bss usne ye baat thode jalan me kahi thi kyunki uska koi beta nahi tha. )
Rajesh - Are bhagyawan zara uss bacche ke baare me to socho.
Ragini - Aap to kuch samjhte hi nahi hai. Samaj kya kya kehta hai aapko nahi pata.
Rajesh - Accha accha choro na wo sab, Tum bss Rani ko lekar chali jana thodi jaldi bhabhi ki madad ho jaayegi.
Ragini - Aur aap kab aayenge?
Rajesh - Mai Ravi ke saath hi dukaan se hi aa jaaunga pandit ji ko lekar.
Ragini - Thik hai ji ( Ragini thodi khush bhi thodi kyunki kuch din pahle jo usne gold chain kharidi thi wo sabko dikhane ka mauka milega. Yahi sab to chahiye tha use )
Agle din subah dono thoda late uthti hai aur sabse pahle uthkar apne Gudde ko dhudhti hai.
Devki - Are kya kar rahi ho tum dono? School nahi jana ?
Sandhya - Mumma Gudde ko bhi hum apne saath school le jaaye ?
Devki - ( Hairaani se mann me ) - Iss ladki ka bss chale to ek second bhi mere lalla ko naa chore. Abhi ye haal hai pata nhi bade hoke kya hoga.
Devki - Wo abhi chhota hai beta jab bada ho jaayega tab tumhare saath hi school jaayega.
Sandhya - ( Gudde ke kaan me ) - Suna tumne mumma keh rahi hum saath me jaayenge. Tum jaldi jaldi bade ho jao.
Devki - kya keh rahi ho ?
Sandhya - Kuch nahi
Devki - Chalo-Chalo taiyaar ho jao dono.
Dono taiyaar ho ke school chali jaati hai. Ravi bhi mandir ke liye nikal jata hai.Devki aaj namkaran ke liye taiyaariya karne lagti hai. Ravi ke dukaan pe aaj bhi kaafi customers the. Ravi Rajesh ke saath milkar aage ke business ka plan banata hai. Rajesh ko v plan kaafi sahi lagta hai. Firr dono dopaher ko hi nikal jaate hai pandit ji ke saath.
Dono jab pandit ji ke saath chaurahe pe utarte hai tabhi unhe Ragini aur Rani dikh jaati hai.
Rajesh - ( Ragini se ) - Tum abhi aa rahi ho. Maine kaha tha thodi jaldi chali jana.
Ragini - ( Itrate hue aur apne haar ko chute hue ) - Wo bss thoda taiyaar hone me jyada waqt lag gaya.
Rajesh - ( Thoda sharminda hote hue Ravi ke saamne )
Ravi - Are koi baat nahi bhabhi ji chaliye. Aur Rani beta kaisi ho tum?
Rani - Mai acchi hu uncle.
Ravi sabko lekar ander aata hai. Devki ne pura ghar saja rakha tha.Padosh ki ek mahila Shushila chachi bhi aayi hui thi. Ragini pure attitude aur itrate hue ghar ke ander aati hai. Apne haar ko baar baar chute hue aur Idhar udhar dekh rahi thi taaki devki ko apna haar dikha sake.
Shushila Chachi - Are Devki dekho to sab mehmaan aaye hai.
Devki - Aayi kaki
Devki lalla ko apni god me liye bahar aati hai. Jaise hi Ragini ki nazar uss bacche ke nazar se takrati hai. Ragini sabkuch bhul jaati hai aur khadi ki khadi reh jaati hai. Rajesh v thode waqt ke liye thehar jaata hai. Rani v kho si gayi thi.
Devki aur Ravi jinko inn sab chizo ki aadat ho gayi thi. Wo jyada hairaan nahi hue. Lekin unhe shock tab laga jab pandit ji ko bhi khoye hue dekha. Thodi der baad sab hosh me aate hai Ragini ko chor kar.
Ragini’s POV - Uske mann ke saare vichar sunya ho gaye the. Uske dil ke paas ek ajeeb si sensation hone lagi. Heartbeat bhot tezz ho gayi thi lekin ek ek dhadkan ko wo araam se sun skti thi.Jaise hi bacche ki aankehin Ragini ki tarag mudi aur Ragini se bardaast karna mushkil ho gaya. Use jab apna dil bhot kamjor hote hue mehsus hua to wo uss state bahar aayi.
Wo dhire dhire kadmo se chalte hue bacche ke taraf gayi. Firr jo usne kiya use dekhkar sab hairaan reh gaye
. Usne apna haath piche karke apna haar utara aur uss bacche ki god me rakh diya.Author’s POV - “Ye bhi gayi.”
( Ragini ka dil humesha se saaf tha. Lekin uske itrane aur mehngi chizo ke piche jo wajah thi wo ye ki wo saamne walo ki aankho me apne liye wo maan dekhna chahti thi aur jaise hi aaj usne un do aankho ko dekha usme wo sab kuch tha jo use humesha se chahiye tha. Iss feeling ke ek chhote version ko samjhne ke liye agar aapne kabhi kisi se sacche dil se pyar kiya aur uske liye taiyaar hue ho aapki bss ek hi dua hoti hai ki ek baar wo shaqs dekh le. Ragini ke feeling ka bhaav bhi kuch aisa tha. Unn aankho me aaj usne wo sab kuch dekh liya tha Jo use chahiye tha. Isliye sabse pahle apna haar utaar kar de diya. Kyunki jis wajah se wo ye karti thi. Wo pura chuka tha )
Devki - Ragini kya kar rahi ho?
Ragini - Didi, ( Ye ek aur jhatka ! Ragini ne aaj tak Devki ko naam se hi bulaya hai.)
Ragini - Didi, Maine bhot dil se diya hai mana mat kijiye.
Devki - Lekin Ragini ye itna mehnga hum kaise le skte hai.
Ragini - Didi, Ye maine apne lalla ko diya hai.
Devki ko thodi jalan si jab Ragini ne use apna lalla kaha. Lekin tab tak Rajesh aa gaya jo ki apni biwi ke aisa karne pe kaafi hairaan tha. Lekin khush bhi. Usne Devki aur Ravi ko bhot samjhane ke baad. Haar rakhne ke liye mana liya.
Ragini bhi uss bacche ko god me lena chahti thi. Usne Devki ki taraf dekha.
Devki ne apne lalla ko Ragini ke god me de diya. Ragini ko aisa laga maano use sab mil gaya. Rani v aa gayi aur wo bhi apne mumma ke saath lalla ko khilane lagi. Tabhi school se Shivani aur Sandhya bhi aa gaye apne ghar pe itne saare logo ko dekhkar dono thode hairaan the. Fir Ragini ke god me apne Gudde ko dekh ke uski taraf chal pade.
Devki - ( Dono ko bich me rokte hue ) - Are are kaha chal diye jao pahle taiyaar ho jaavo aaj tumhare Gudde ka naam rakhna hai
Dono ko jyada samjh nahi aaya kyunki Gudde ka naam kya rakhna Gudde ka naam to Gudda hai na. Same soch SONA ko lekar Shivani ke mann me aaya.
Lekin Dono apni maa ki baat maante hue taiyaar hone chali gayi. Thodi der baad dono taiyaar hokar aa gayi.Tab tak pandit ji v baith chuke the.
Thodi der puja hua fir pandit ne Devki ko bacche ko lekar baithne ko kaha. Ragini dena to nahi chahti thi lekin beman se use dena pada. Pandit ji bacche ko dekhte hue kundali banane lagte hai Lekin unke chehre pe chinta dikhne lagti hai. Kaafi der ke baad bhi wo kuch bana nahi paa rahe the.
Ravi - Kya hua pandit ji? Aap chinit kyu dikh rahe hai?
Pandit ji - Iss bacche ki kundali khaali hai.
Sab shock hote hue.
Rajesh - Aisa kaise ho sakta hai pandit ji ? Jiska v janm hua hai uski kundali me kuch to hoga hi.
Pandit ji - Aap thik keh rahe hai lekin iski kundali me iski zindagi par kisi grah ka koi prabhav nahi janm ko chhod kar. Mujhe thoda waqt dijiye.
Pandit ji apni aankhein band karr ke kisi ka dhyan karte hai aur aankhein kholne ke baad muskuraate hue ye baccha apna bhavisya khud likhega. Fir unke chehre pe chinta ki laakerien aa jaati hai aur kehte hai ye baccha bilkul khaali hai lekin iski urja bhot jyada hai. Agar isme acchayi bhari gayi to ye to bhot accha banega aur sabka bhala karega. Lekin agar isme burayi bhari gayi to itna bura banega jitna koi soch na sake. Ye ab iss duniya pe hai wo ise kaisa banati hai.
Baccho ko to jyada samjh nahi aa raha tha lekin saare bade bhot tension me aa gaye.
Pandit ji - Chinta to mujhe bhi hai lekin jaisa maine kaha agar hum isme acchai bhare, ise acchi acchi chize sikhaye to ye bhot saare logo ka kalyan karega. Isliye aap sab chinta ko chhod kar iss bacche ko acche sanskaar dene ke baare me soche.
Ravi - Hum apni puri koshish karenge pandit ji. Lekin bacche ka naam kya rakhe.
Tabhi bahar aavaz hui…
ALAKH NIRANJAN !! ALAKH NIRANJAN !!
Sab bahar ki or dekhte hai to ek yogi, Bhasm me lipta hua. Sirf ek langot thi uske shareer par lekin uske pure shareer se aisa aura aa raha ki kisi ki himmat nahi hui aage badhne ki.
Wo dhire dhire devki ke paas aate hai sab darr gaye the sandhya aur shivani devki ke piche chipp gayi aur bacche ko dekhte hue kehte hai.
Aghori - “AYANSH” , ayansh naam hoga iska. Apne saath saath bahut se logo ka bhavishya likhega ye bilkul unki tarah . Fir Sandhya ko dekhte hue iska humesha saath dena beti.
Fir unhone jo kiya usse sab shocked rah gaye. Unhone niche jhuk kar Shivani ke pair chu liye. Shivani jhat se piche hatt gayi aur apni maa ke piche dubak gayi. Fir unhone Rani ko dekhkar uske sar pe hath fera aur Ragini ko dekh karr muskuraye aur use ek chhota sa box diya aur kaha ye tumhare lalla ke liye. Jab wo 18 ka ho jaaye use de dena. Sab hairan the. Aghori ant me Devki ke paas jaate hai. Devki unke paon chu leti hai. Wo Devki ko ek locket dete hai. Ye tumhare liye hai beti ise khud se kabhi dur matt karna. Itna kehkar wo bahar chal dete hai. ALAKH NIRANJAN !! ALAKH NIRANJAN !!
Devki - ( Piche se awaaz dete hue ) - Baba baba rukiye.. Kuch dakshina to lete jaaiye. Ravi tab tak kuch paise lekar aata hai.
Aghori - ( Gusse se ) - Murkh tumhe lagta hai in kagaz ke tukdo ke liye mai yaha hu!! Tumhare Kagaz ke tukdo ki itni haisiyat nahi ki mera aashirwad kharid sake!!
Ravi aur Devki dono seham jaate hai
Aghori - ( Gusse se ) - Dena chahte ho mujhe taza khoon do mujhe !!
Sab darr jaate hai !
Aghori - ( Thoda shaant hote hue ) - Tum nahi de sakte mujhe sirf wo de skta hai ( Ayansh ki taraf ishara karte hue )
Devki darr jaati hai kahi wo unke bacche ko kuch kar de. Lekin tabhi baccha jo haar uski god me tha uske pin se apne forearms ko ragad deta hai aur uske forearms se khoon nikalne lagta hai. Chhota sa cut lekin gehra tha lekin khun ki kuch bunde nikalne lagi. Aghori uske paas aakar. Uske haatho me lage lage cut se thoda sa khun ungliyo pe lekar apne maathe aur gale me vibhuti ki tarah laga leta hai. Firr Devki ko ek jadi-booti deta hai aur pyaar se kehta hai ye iske zakhm par laga dena beti. Unka gussa puri tarah se khatam ho chuka tha.
Fir bacche ko dekhte hue - Intezaar karunga tera.
ALAKH NIRANJAN !! ALAKH NIRANJAN !!
Aghori waha se chala jata hai. Sabko shock me chhod kar.
Aage kya hoga? Kya AYANSH ek accha insaan banega ya bura ? Kon tha ye Aghori kya AYANSH isse milne jaayega? Aghori ne Shivani ke pair kyu chuwe ?
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