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Maine laat Mari unki gaand pekr diye kya..
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Maine laat Mari unki gaand pekr diye kya..
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Abe kisse baat kar raha haikr diye kya..
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Mtlab samne wale ko pehchan hi nhi pati thi sahi se
Bhabiya hi to rishte lekar aati haiMain kaise krwau ghar balo se kho


Aim for best writer not for reader.....
Ek aur mast kahani likho
Ab to aata hai ju ko bhi pahchan liaSikho ye ladkiyo ko aana chahiye ye sab
Suman ka character kuch jagah irrelevant laga apan ko..Nidhi bas Veer ki pappi lene wali thi ki behosh ho gayi....
Werewolf

Idhar to hu hi tumhare sath