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Isi mahine aayega.Like target has completed
So Kripa kar mahraj agle update par dhyan de aur Hum Readers ko jldi update dene ki kosish kijiye
Ishi mahine mil jata toh maja ajata guru ji
Nidhi, Juhi and Shreya ka scene aane waale updates me milega.marvelous update....
ragini ka scene was heart melting
renshu ka x se link ka kuch kuch shak to pehle se hi tha
Nidhi , Juhi n Shreya kaha hai
disombler ka kya hua
It wasn't short man. 9.2k words ka update tha. That shit ain't small. USC me aa rahi stories se bhi bada hai wo update.Nice update bro specially in emotional way. Just a little short haha
Thanks a lot.Super fantabulous update Werewolf bhai....
Veer ki pritikriya, vehwar aur uski samajh ko naya aayamb milega iss ghatna se jo aage uske liye bahut zaroori tha aur wo dugni mazbooti se apne dushmano ka samna karega.....
Not always. But mostly yes. Vibe to raat ko hi aati hai.Not waiting till late night is always a wise decision.
Awesome update filled with emotions and dilemma.
Long review later...
Pata chalega aage.Bhai kya ho ager in sab ka mastermind mr x ho kyu ki use sab ki full of Jan kari hai par in sab ko nhi so dekhte hi age kya hota hi
Thanks a lot.Awesome update![]()
Dhanyavad bhai.hamesha ki tarha dil ko chu lena wala
Emotion se bra hua update bro
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Aane waale updates me dekhenge hum. Keep supporting.shandaar bhaidekhne hai abh Veer badla kaise lega Juhi sur nidhi ko dikhta to achha rehta hai pr sayad woh next update main ho pr lagta hai Brijesh aur Veer ka relation theek hoo jayega condition se to lag raha hai shayd ap Ragini ko bhi theek kar do ga
Security guards ke gharwaale aise hi to aayenge nahi waha par tamasha karne.nice update. manorath ki maut ka dukh sabko hai ,aaj uska beta bhi gum me hai ,dono ki baate yaad aa rahi hai brijesh ko ki kaise manorath usko samjha raha tha apni galti sudharne ke liye .
tej apne bhai ke liye dhal bankar khadi ho gayi aaj sab media walo ke saamne ,par ye thoda ajeeb laga ki security ke log maare gaye to usme veer ki galti kaise huyi ??? security ka kaam hi hota hai apne boss ko bachane ka aur usme unki jaan bhi jaa sakti hai .media to masala dhundti rehti hai par wo security ke ghar wale waha kyu aaye the tamasha karne jabki unko apne logo ka matam manana hai..
Dheere dheere sab baahar aata jayega ab. Peeth peechhe jo kuchh chal raha tha ab wo bits and parts me aata jayega. Thanks and keep supporting.pihu kaise pahuchi safe haatho me ye rahasya bhi khul gaya .
ava ne bachaya tha tej ko jab ye baat veer ko pata chali to usne ava ko thanks kehne ke liye gale laga liya jisse 2 lady ki jalan ho gayi..
garofano ne favour bhi kya manga ava se ki veer se dur ho jaaye jo ava ke liye mumkin nahi hai ..
ragini ka scene bhi mast tha jaha ab veer usko khona nahi chahta ,uska saath dene ka nirnay le chuka hai veer .
veer ne renshu se uski skill puchhi to kuch aur hi laga par veer ko ye jaanna tha ki renshu ko kaise pata ki kitne system holder the aur bache hai ,ab renshu bhi kya raaz kholega dekhte hai aur kya hai X ka matter,, kya X ne contact kiya ya mila tha renshu se jaha usne sab bataya ho
X koi card nahi hai bhai.Emotional update wolfy bhai
Kya renshu hi veer ke saath khel rha hai??
"X" kon sa card hai??
Mein koi doctor nahi man.Wolfy bhai aap doctor ho kya ?
Mera bhi tabiyat bahut jyada kharab hai mujhe bhi theek kar doge kya![]()
Aage aane waale updates me dekhne ko milega.Bhai thoda Nidhi OR mam ka or unke beti ka bhi reaction add kr do na
Exactly!Dekhe bhai mano ya nhi pr write sahab jo chahhae ga wahi hoga![]()
ThanksFantastic and mind blowing update bro Maza a gya Kamal kr Diya ap ny bro![]()
Veer ne sirf skills bataayi hai. Cards nahi. Aur, usne skills hi poochhi thi Renshu se. Cards nahi.Brilliantveer ne sari skills batai pr kuch main cards nhi bataye
We'll see in the upcoming update.Bhai Ragini wala part bhut emotional tha aur abhi Nidhi ko bhi pta nhi chala ki Veer ke dada ji nhi rahe
Thanks a lot mitr.Sbse phle toh bahut khubsurat update dukh drd peeda bhavnaye hr trh k deep emotions promises is update m dekhne ko mile accha update h brother is update ko padhne k baad dil m sukun sa agya h ki chalo veer ne ragni or ava pr dhyaan diaa ese hi updates ek writer Ko THE GREAT WRITER WEREWOLF banate hn nhi toh bheedh toh is forum pr bahut h or Werewolf brother wese m apke kaam ki ijjat hmesha se hi krta ayaa hu pr aj personally apki ijjat or badh gyi h koi insaan itna humble... Dil jeet lia bhaai apne...nhi kuch bhen k lode ese bhi ynha jo arrogance or attitude m mare jaa rhe hn.... khair tum ese hi rhna brother insaan ko fame milne k baad agr uska lahja vinamr h toh wo koi aam admi nhi h that's why you are a gentleman....
Mr. X sabse badi gutthi hai, system ke baad. So, uss se related cheezein itni jaldi nahi khulengi lekin dheere dheere kar abBhai mst update
Full emotional tha
Ab sayad Brijesh aur Veer ka samband acche ho
Abhi Veer ki santi kisi tufan ke phle ki santi hai abhi Veer ko Dhananjay ke baare me pta hi nhi chala
Disembowler abhi jinda hai ya nhi clear nhi hua kyuki Erica aur Renshu ke jaane ke baad kuch bataya nhi gaya
Renshu kis ke prati samrpit hai Mr X ya Veer ?
I'm dame sure that Mr.X is not a System holder because He is System His body Controlled by System
Thanks bhaiBhai kya hi update tha ekdum emotional kar diyaaur ye renshu ka kya matter hai x ke sath ye to age pata chal hi jayega
intejaar rahega agle update ka
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Hein? Best nahi tha kya?Bhai aisa lagta hai ki ye update abtaka sabse best update hai but you proved me wrong alway superb![]()
Bas dekhte jao mitr.Werewolf
emotions se bharpur shandar update
Veer ka shayad ab hum naya roop dekhe ge, family ko lekar wo ab jyada protective rahega
Detail me isliye kyunki, uss moment se mein bhi kabhi na kabhi guzra hu. I too lost someone in 2023. To bas wahi bhaav idhar reflect ho gaye.Iss update ka sabse emotional scene manorath ji ka antim sanskar
Uss moment ko bohot hi details mein likhna gaya hai
Ek samay wo moment aata hai jab aankho mein aansuon ki do bunden aati jaati hai
Things are not that easy bro.Sare pariwar jaan ke emotions dikhae gaye manorath ji kya thee unke liye
Ragini ko lekar ko ab veer clear hai usse ab ragini ka sahara banna hoga
Time will tell.Brijesh ka character lagta hai ki ab positive way dikhaya jayega, Veer ke father ki kami puri ho sakti hai veer ka support system bann sakte hai wo
Yes definitely.Renshu aur veer ki fight hui
Veer ko doubt hai rensue par system Dharan karne wale aur logo ke baare usse kaise pata chala ,next update mein mrx ka jikar hoga
Dekhenge hum aage.Tejal ne veer ke liye stand liya wo waise tej ka reaction kya hoga jab usse pata chalega ki ava ne uski jaan bachai
There might be more characters.Gorofona aur avaa ke bich ye tussle lamba chalega
is tussle mein toh ava hi win karegi
Ye shandar thaa.
She's his angel.Pari ne aaj fir apni presence dikhai gayi wo veer ki bohot important support system hai
Wo veer ko andar se tutne se rokh Sakti hai
We'll see.Veer aur Trisha ka bhi aamna samna hogaya ab dekhna ye hoga ki trisha apni investigation aage continue rakhti hai ya nahi
Not really. Dekho. Agar Ava aur Veer ka koi baccha hota bhi hai to uske andar system kaise aayega? Maine pehle bhi kaha hua hai ki system jitne already aa chuke hai iss duniya me, to ya to utne hi rahenge ya fir ghatenge (agar marenge to)Veer ke heart mein ab avaa ke liye feeling bhi aarahi hai
Waise Werewolf bhai ek illogical question mere mind mein hai
Agar veer aur avaa ke bich kuch ilu ilu hota hai aur unka product iss duniya mein aata hai toh Kya woh sabse powerful hoga kyuki veer aur ava dono powerful system Holder hai ya keara aur veer ka product wo shayad sabse jyada intelligence mein aage ho sakta hai
Thanks a lot. Keep supporting.Overall its an emotional rollercoaster update
Waiting for next one
That's a dumb idea dear.Superb update...kahi ranshu he mr. X nahi ...
Dekhenge hum aage kya hota hai. Thanks and keep supporting.Tej ka aage aake sabkuch handle karana dekh ke bahut accha laga....
Ragini ke liye bura laga but veer usaki jimmedari uthane wala hai ye jan ke accha laga...kya kuch nahi kiya ragini ne veer ke liye...Nidhi ke bad agar koi hoga jisane veer ke liye kitana kuch kiya to o Ragini bhi ek hai
Keep it up and thanks Werewolf
Thanks and keep supporting.That was not too gud
But still a gud update
Thodi chizen clear hoyi jaise Pihu kahan or kaise gayi
Veer ka Ragini k liye pyar or Dada ji k liye pyar or bahut se emotions
Dada or Pita k bich jo flash back tha woh shayad jaruri tha
Tej ka kya kehna kaise wo Veer k liye 1 sheild ban kar khadi ho gayi
Wahi Ava or Veer ka bond phir se ban raha hai
Renshu k liye Veer ka yeh roop or yeh soch kab or kaise aayi yeh janna interesting rahega
Thanks man.Nice Gazab Update Bro....
Sab Kuch Cler Ho Gaya Jo Prev UPdate me suspence Create hUaa Tha..
Lajawab Update bro
Thanks. Keep supporting.Thanks for super long update and this update unpacked lot of things and thank you so much for awesome update again![]()
Thanks and keep supporting!Amazing write-up.
It was so captivating that I didn't knew and the episode ended.
Now, I can't wait to see the next episodes.
I wish that at least 5-6 episodes are posted.
I thought maybe you miss things, but, every emotion every thought was so natural and storyline was in such detail and accounted for with nitty gritty that I felt myself part of it.
Congrats for the update keep it up and do complete it.
This story will be a master piece.
Dhanyavad.Zabardast update bro..full of emotions
Sawal to bilkul sahi kia veer ne renshu se..ab dekhty hai X ka iss me kia role hai...
Tej wala scene bohat aala tha.
Thanks man. Thode aur updates hai post Disembowler arc me. Uske baad Summit arc. Maza aayega. Saath bane rehne ka.Yaar dost kya gajab ka update tha, aisa kaha jaye ki acchambhit kar diya., Ab Nidhi ma'am ke saath kya situation hogi woh janna hein, kyoon ki i love that moment when veer and nidhi ma'am meet,
Or rahi baat “X” ki toh dekhte hein aage kya naya turn aane vala hein.
It's very exiting.
Keep It Up....!![]()
ThanksWow brilliantmind blowing fantastic too good
full of emotions
Possible nahi hai. But month me 3 dene ka keh diya hai maine ab. Koshish karunga jald se jald hum iss kahani ko iske muqaam tak pahuchaaye.ye story meri sabse jada फेवरेट story hai aisa lagta hai ki eska kamse kam week me 2 to bhi update aye etni mast story hai superb
sachin45 Hotel par attack Damian ne hi to karwaya hai.What was a brilliant update really sach me har naya update pichle update our jada bahtarin hota hai. Veer ko abhi pata nhi chala ki Hotel pe jo attack huva hai ye bhi system holder ne hi karvaya hai?
Sametna ka kaam hai iss arc me bas. Aur next arc ki neev rakhne ka.Must update bhai lagbhag sabkuch nipat gaya he ab ye kya naya khulasa hoga ye dekhne layak hoga or veer aage kya kadam uthayega ye bhot hi dilchasp bat hogi
Wo isliye kyunki yaha kuchh tha hi nahi images me aisa show karne waala. Jaha zaroori hoga waha pictures daal di jayengi. Readers ke hisaab se mein day 1 se nahi chal raha bhai.Bhai brilliant update but first time tumhari story me kisi update me images ya koi art use nhi kiya tumhne reader ke hisabse story mat likho reader's ch.... hote hai vo writers ko apne hisabse story likhvane ki sochte hai
Nahi aaye man.Vo bhi aa jayenge jald hi
We'll come to know. Read update 145 to get some more insight.Abh ava keliye veer ke ghar pe ek soft corner rhenga specially Tej our veer ki ma ke tarfse this is big plus point for ava when she meet Veer's family. Renshu ko hi Mr X Q contact karta hai ye bhi important point hai.
Abhi Renshu ka uska paksh to rakhne do.Full to emotional drama. Alliance ke pahle hi fut agai Alliance me
Uss par kisi ne dhyaan hi nahi diya tha.Nice update brother
Bhott acha rha update
But renshu ne kbhi veer Ko btya nhi tha ke uske pas ye details kese ayi ke ktne system holder's Abhi present hn
Abhi Renshu ko apni baat rakhne dete hai pehle.Or jstrh mujhe lagta h it's pre planned event the jsme veer ki help ke liy renshu ka ana or same time pr disembowler ka wahan present hona pr uska action nhi Lena ye ek sochne pr mjboor krta h ?jesa ke Mr X ne usko roka ho I think or uske bd se disembowler ne pura plan Kia veer ke liy for his experiment or
Yes. Thanks a lot. Keep supporting.End me veer ne figure out krkr renshu se puchliya uske bare me ke Information kese h uske pas
Jtni mrtba update dubra prho kuch na kuch sochne mil Jata h
Bki shyd next update me clear ho.
ashishpyarka bhai updates nahi padh rahe kya?Disembowler ko kill karne ka mission to mila nhi tha na ? Fir mission failed kayse
Later ke updates me..Captain bhi ek system holder kis ke alliance me shami hoti hai ye bhi dekhne vali bat hai possible hai ki Veer ke hi alliance me Shamil hongi vo
Har update alag vibe ka hota hai.Ye update me action family drama our emotions jada the to bhi vakahi superbupdate tha
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Yup. It's high time...Nice update
Ekdum emotional update
Pure pariwar ki halat manorath ji ke jane se kharab hai sabhi dhuki hai
Is ghatna se Veer ab apne pariwar ke liye or protective rahega
Veer acknowledged Tej. Jo Tej shuru se chaahti thi ki Veer uss par depend hoye, wo aaj ho gaya.Tejal ka Veer ke liye ek shield ki tarah rahne or stand lene se Veer ko bhi samaj aaya ki ek badi bahan ka hone ki kya value hoti hai
Thanks and keep supporting.Vahi ragini or Veer ka seen bhi emotional tha
Veer ne tejal ko bachane ke liye Ava ko hug kiya
In dono ka ye seen dekhkar garofano or erica ki jal gayi
Veer ke tevar ab badle huye najar aaa rahe hai or usne renshu par attack kar diya kyonki renshu ke paas aesi koyi skill hi nahi hai to use kese pata chala ki kitne system holder baki hai aur use pata chalta ki ye sab use mr X ne bataya
Dekhte hai ab aage Veer kya karta hai
Dhanyavad.What brilliant update really such a emotional presentation of story
Hein???How to cancel the system decide that manorath will die or not
बेशक। भावना जल्द से जल्द अब वीर से वार्तालाप करना चाहेगी इस विषय में। क्यूंकि, पिछली बार जब उसने वीर से पूछा था कि कही वो कोई गलत काम तो नहीं कर रहा? तो वीर ने इसके जवाब में ना कहा था। और, अब ये हादसा। ज़ाहिर हैं भावना के मन में कई सारे संदेह भरे सवाल उठेंगे।एक उम्दा अपडेट
यहां परिवार में एक मुख्य स्तंभ चला गया है। जो हीरो के दिल के पास थे।
वहीं दूसरी ओर बेटा और पिता पास आयेगे। एक छोटी सी शुरुवात से,
परिवार में ये बुरा वक्त एकजुटता लाएगा। वहीं बहन तेज के संग ओर रिश्ता मजबूत होगा
वहीं रागिनी की वैल्यू अब किस कदर मोड लेगी। वो भी देखना होगा। आखिर भावना के मन में उसके लिए सवाल जन्म ले चुके थे। तो हीरो कैसे सबको फेस करेगा। ये भी देखना है।
यही सब हम आने वाले अपडेट्स में देखेंगे।साथ ही इस घटना क्रम के वक्त, हीरो कहा था। ये परिवार के लोगों अभी सवाल होगा। निधि अब कैसे सामना करेगी। वीर का,
क्यों कि जब परिवार को जरूरत थी वो पीहू, जूही, को बचा रहा था।
रागिनी के मन से निधि के लिए जो विधवा वाली प्रेम की बात पनपी है। वो कैसे शांत होगी
बिल्कुल। धन्यवाद। साथ बने रहने का...होटल और कपड़ों के ब्रांड को फिर से कैसे सेटल करेगा।
रेशु से क्या राज जाने को मिलेगा X के बारे में,
यहां पांचों कोई मतभेद जन्म लेगा। या आने वाले तूफान और कठिनाई के लिए एक साथ होकर तैयारी करेंगे।
अब भाई की लेखनी जवाब देगी।
Dhanyavad bhai. Par, mere username me A nahi E aata hai.Are Warewolf bhaauuu...ese bakchod logo ki bakchodi pe dhyaan naa do..... Aapki stories one of the best stories me se ek h jinhe ek baar read Kiya to use read kiye bina koi reader reh hi nahi sakta ...bhale update kitne bhi time me aaye
Ye aaj ka nahi hai bhai. Na jaane kitno se Mera paala pad chuka hai.Wo hota h naa jab koi aapse jyada khyaati aur sohraat hasil kr le to ek human nature instinct activate ho jaati hai ..usko neeche giraane ki taaki
Mein chaah ke bhi updates jaldi jaldi nahi de sakta bhai. Sochne aur fir likhne me hi itna time lag jaata hai ki poochho mat. To time to lenge hi mere updates. Aur, isliye yes... Unki value badh jaati hai.Jo readers aapki stories ko pasnd karte h naa unkadekkho ...aapke update ka Bina kisi sikayat k wait karte hai ....
Haan kuch namune hai jinhe sab jaldi jaldi chahiye hota hai...unse puchho ek baar ki ....jo cheej unhe aasani se mil rhi us baat ki unhe kitni kadar hai ...and jo cheej muskil se long wait k baad milti hai uski kitni kadar hai
Critics agar unn readers se aaye jo har update par apna review dete aa rahe hai toh samajh me bhi aata hai. I'll happily accept them.Ye critics saale.. impatients hote hai ...sabar karna to jese naa enke maa baap ne sikhaaya aur naa hi apni jindgi me enhone khud seekhaa.....enki aukaat nahi naa itni acchi story ko likhne ki
Of course. Thanks a lot and keep supporting.Bhokne waalo ko bhokne de...take your time ...and then aap apna update daale.... Aapko aapke readers se always love and respact milegi
Aise logo ne sirf kuchh cheezein check karne ka.Vese to esse comments se or apke existence se kissi ko fark nahi padta or is comment ko neglect bhi kiya ja sakta tha...
Pr phir bhi socha jaye toh..
kitna aacha hai na??
Aap jese log kuch bhi post kar dete ho ban hone ka bhi dar nahi kyuki dubara se account bana loge ban hone baad...
Or yaha gali du apko ya phir gyan Cho*u or apko smaghane ka kosis karu itna faltu time nahi hai...... phir bhi dil kiya 2 baat bata du uske baad ap kuch bhi karo yaha .. i will tend to ignore such toxicity.
1. Itni hi daring hai toh real life mai jaha kuch sach mai galat hota dikhe vaha awaj utha kr dikha..
Idhar kuch fark nahi padta because it's a kind of imaginary world. Kissi ko fark nahi padta koi medal nahi milega.
2. Go get a life dude ....seriously.... kuch ukhadoo jindagi mai.
And if you have already accomplished something really good in life toh focus on that..... spread love and avoid being toxic unnecessarily.
Writer ko demotivate nahi kar paoge unke pass already enough supporters hai...