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[Black]

Black shandar kahani bhai. Thoda hatt ke thi. Koi sci-fi, horror, suspense, mystery, thriller nahi. Bas purely ek sadharan jeevan par adhaarit jisme emotional aspect kaafi zyada tha.

Usi phase mein chal raha hun isi liye emotional likha

Pacing badhiya thi. Kuchh jagah par thoda zyada fast lagi, par baaki jagah ekdum sahi thi. Different POVs bhi the. Aman ka POV bhi mere khayal se hona chahiye tha kyunki, beginning me poori kahani uski wajah se hi chal rahi thi. But again, word limit ne ise limit kar diya hoga.

Aman ka pov jaan bujhke nahi likha
Uska pov yahi tha ki use uske baap ne har hafte koota nahi

Ek aadh jagah hi mujhe grammatical errors mile nahi to aise koi major errors nahi the. Ek jagah ju ne Paridhi ki jagah priya likha hai. Bas wahi tha. Baaki sab to sahi tha.

Ek aur ladki ka character likha tha phir edit kar diya

Kahani aaj ki generation ko bhi reflect karti hai ki kaise bacche apne hi maa baap ko chhor ke chale jaate hai. Paridhi jaisi ladkiyon ka shikaar ho jaate hai aur unke gulaam bann ke reh jaate hai.

90 percent londe aise hi hain burchatte

Arjun ka modest nature aur humility bakhoobi darshaaya hai. Mere liye wahi sabse badhiya character tha. Narration ne ise heavily carry kiya hai. Dialogues me thodi Kami nazar aayi mujhe. Shayad isliye, first person perspective chuna gaya hai.

Dialogues jada nahi likh paata
Tamhare jitna intelligent nahi hu na

Overall, ek behatreen kahani. Emotional ride zaroor karwa degi ye.

Tam jaise mahan writer se apni taareef sunke ham gad gad ho gaye

 

[Black]

Kaadi..

Aggu

 

[Ashish120]

 

[Werewolf]

Usi phase mein chal raha hun isi liye emotional likha

Aman ka pov jaan bujhke nahi likha
Uska pov yahi tha ki use uske baap ne har hafte koota nahi

Ek aur ladki ka character likha tha phir edit kar diya

90 percent londe aise hi hain burchatte

Dialogues jada nahi likh paata
Tamhare jitna intelligent nahi hu na

Tam jaise mahan writer se apni taareef sunke ham gad gad ho gaye

Ab apun apni likhne chala.

 

[Aakash.]

Ju ke exam kab khatam honge aakhir.
Aakash. , Adirshi , Mr. BERLIN , Ristrcted , Werewolf Raj_sharma , Black

Jab se mod bana hai ye tabse iske exam shuru hue the shayad ​

 

[Aakash.]

That one lenda which doesn't go no matter how hard you flush :

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Black mistyvixen Sasha! Aakash. Raj_sharma Riky007 The Immortal Story Collector

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[Aakash.]

Pov ~ Dopahar me dhai baje tanki ke paani se gaa*d dho li :



Black Raj_sharma Aakash. The Immortal Ristrcted Agasthya

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[Aakash.]

Ju mean Aakash. Jhoot bol raha tha kya?

Apan kya bol diya apan to online hi nahi tha aaz ​

 

[Aakash.]

Hum unki nazar me nazar laga denge

Ju mean ju aakh nikal longe uski ​

 

[Werewolf]

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Lende nahi nikaalte kya tam? Bol do ab ki ju croissant prashant khaate ho. Toilet paper istemal karte ho. Tuesday nahi chewsday hota hai.