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Behad umda update riya singh .....

Ab lagta hai shayad bhawar singh ki taraf se dev yudh mein utrega aur pratap singh ka anth karega....

 

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UPDATE- 17



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Charo taraf ek andhkar sa chaya hua tha, aisa lag rha tha jaise koi shakti surya ko hi nigal rhi h, din me hi andhera sa ho gaya tha, aasman me bijliya kadak rhi thi, pakshi idhar udhar ud rhe the, jungli janwar shor macha rhe the, sabhi jyotish aise halat dekh kr ghabraye hue the, jagah jagah aasman se bijali gir rhi thi, aur jaha bhi bijali girti pure ilake ko tahas nahas kr deti, ye sirf kuch rajayo me nhi balki puri duniya me ho rha tha, bhawar singh apne mahal ki chat per khada hua tha aur riva ko apne samne karke khada tha, riva hi nhi balki baki tino rajkumariyo, amita somiya aur akshara ko bhi apne caro taraf khada karke unke bich me khada tha, aur ye sab najara dekh rha tha, wahi pratap singh dar kr apne mahal me ghus chukka tha, renuka pagalo ki tarha pure mahal me dev ko dhudhti fir rhi thi, usne apni beti ko khojne ki ek bar bhi koshish nhi ki,

(Kisi ne sahi kaha h jab aurat vasna me andhi hoti h to uske liye koi rishta mayne nhi rakhta, wo apni aulad tak ko bhul jati h, jiska parina hum aaj kal news me roj dekh rhe hain)

Dev revati ko lekar ek jungle me ruk gaya, tej barish aur tufaan jaise halat ho rhe the, dev ke samne ek paid per bijli giri jisse dar kr revati dev se lipat gai, lekin dev ke chere per koi dar nhi tha, wo ek dum shant tha, dev ghode se utra aur ghode ko wapas bhaga diya, jisse uske piche aane wale senik use dhund na paye, dev ke dimag me bas ek hi jagah aa rhi thi, wo revati ko lekar sidhe aacharya ji ke pas pahucha, jaha sugandha bhi wapas aa chuki thi,

Dev jaise hi acharay ji ki jhopdi me ghusa to sugandha ke hath me pani se bhara ghada tha jo turant niche gir gaya, aur wo paglo ki trha dev se llipat gai, dev bas aise hi khada reh gaya, wahi revati phele to chonk gai lekin fir uske ander jalan ke bhaw ubharne lage,

Sugandha – dev tum thik ho na, tum kaha chale gaye the maine tumhe kaha kaha nhi dhundha,

Acharya ji- beti use aaram se baithne to de,

Sugandha ko ahsas hua wo kaha h aur kya kar rhi h, wo Sharma kr piche hat gai,fir uski najar revati per gai,

Dev- acharya ji aapki sahayta chahiye, aur sansar me aapke siwa main kisi per visvas nhi kr sakta,

Sugandha- bina jhijak bolo, jaan ja sakti h lekin tumhare visvas ko tutne nhi dungi,

Dev ne revati ko dekha,

Dev- revati tum jara baitho main sugandha se baat karke aata hu,

Dev aur sugandha bahar aa gaye,

Sugandha- kya baat h dev

Dev- ye revati h pratap singh ki beti,

Pratap singh ka naam sunkr sugandha ke dant bheech gaye,

Sugandha – ise yaha kyo laye ho tum,

Dev- kyoki iske baap ko uski kiye ka fal bhugatna h,

Sugandha ke chere per ek muskan aai,

Sugandha- to batao mujhe kya karna h,

Dev- ise is baat ka ahsas na ho ki main kon hu aur ye yaha kyo lai gai h, ise bas ye pata ho ki main dusre rajay ka rhene wala hu,

Sugandha – aisa hi hoga, main har kadam per tumhare sath hu,

Dev- mujhe abhi jana hoga, aur kisi ko pata na chale main jinda hu ya nhi, ya yaha kabhi aaya tha,

Sugandha- pita ji ne mujhe bata diya tha, tum chinta mat karo kisi ko kuch pata nhi chalega,

Dev- mera ek kaam aur karogi, main tumhe kuch jyada hi jimmedari de rha hu, kyoki sirf tum ho jis per main visvas karne ki himmat kar rha hu, kyoki us pratiyogita ke maidan me sirf tum thi jo meri madad ke liye aage aai thi,

Sugandha- ek dost hone ke nate mera yahi farj tha,

Dev- tumhe kasturi ko dhundh kr lana hoga aur usse pata karna hoga usne ye sab kyo kiya, kyoki kafi kadiya jud rhi hain lekin ek kasturi ki kadi nhi jud pa rhi, usne kis wajah se ye sab kiya,

Sugandha ki aankho me nami thi,

Sugandha- main use patal me se bhi dhundh laungi,

Dev- tumhara ahsaan rhega mujh per,

Sugandha ne dev ko gale se laga liya,

Dono ander aaye,

Dev- revati tumhe kuch din yaha rhena hoga, main phele apne rajay me jakar tumahre liye sab intejam karta hu, tab tak tum yaha chup kr raho, ye sugandha h meri dost h ye tumahra khayal rakhegi,

Revati- main yaha kaise rahungi, main ek rajkumari hu, is jhopdi me kaise reh sakti hu,

Dev- jaha tum thi wo mahal tha ya tumahri kaid thi, waha sone ki kaid thi aur yaha khula aasman h, waha tum sans bhi apne pita ke ahsaan se leti thi aur yaha tum jo chahe kar sakti ho, aur ye tab tak hi h jab tak main tumhari suraksha ka intejam na kar du, is jindagii ko jee kr dekho, aur main jaldi hi wapas aaunga,

Revati dev se lipat gai,

Revati- main yaha to reh lungi lekin tumahre bina nhi reh paungi, tumne mujh per aisa jadu kiya h ki main tumhare bina jeene ki soch bhi nhi sakti,

Dev- isiliye main phele jakar sab thik karta hu,

Revati ko waha chod kr dev apni maa ke pas nikal liya,

Udhar bhomik rajay me pahuch chukke the, pure rajay me hahakar macha hua tha, ye asman se girti hui aapda sab kuch tabah kr rhi thi, bhomik ji ne rajay me ghuste hi kuch mantra padhe aur asman se girti hui bijali ko rok diya, sab kuch shant hone laga, aur jaise hi logo ne ye dekha ki bhomik ji ne sab kuch rok diya h to unki jai jai kar hone lagi aur bhomik ji ke mahal pahuchne se phele hi ye khabar mahal tak pahuch gai ki bhomik ji ne bawander ko rok diya h,

Rajguru aur bhawar singh ko jaise hi pata chala to wo dono bhomik ji ko lene ke liye mahal ke bahar hi aa gaye,

Bhomik ji sabse mile, fir wo sabhi mahal ke ander ek kamre me baithe hue the, kamya bhi wahi aa gai thi,

Bhawar singh- ye kaise aapda aa gai h humare rajay me rajguru,

Bhomik- ye aapda sirf humare rajay me nhi h, main jis raste se aa rha hu waha sab jagah aise hi halat hain, kuch bahut bura hone wala h, jo is sansar ke liye thik nhi h,

Bhawar singh- tum dono bhai waha gaye the tumhe kuch safalta mili kya,

Bhomik ji ne us jungle me hui sari ghatna keh sunai bas us roshni ander samane wali baat kochod kr, aur bata diya ki satavik aage gaya h,

Bhawar singh- matlab tum kuch nhi kar sake,

Bhomik ji ne thode gusse me bhawar singh per najar dali tabhi achanak se bhomik ji ke samne ek najara aa gaya jisme bhawar singh ke bahut badi sena ke sath khada tha aur uske dusri taraf ek akela insan khada tha,

Bhomik ji ne apne sir ko jhatka aur charo taraf dekha, unhe samjh hi nhi aaya ye kya hua,

Bhomik ji- mujhe jana hoga,

Bhawar singh- jana hoga, tumhara raja yaha baitha h tumse baat kar rha h aur tum jane ki baat kar rhe ho,

Bhomik ji- mere pas in sab baato ke alawa bhi bahut chije hain sochne ke liye, aur jo aap chahte hain uske liye satavik apna kaam kar rha h,

Kamya- apne raja ko aise ulta jawab de rhe ho, jante ho iska dand mil skata h

Bhomik ji- jaise un maa bete ko jhuta dand dekr marwa diya aise hi mujhe dand denge, lekin ye mat bhulna main dev nhi hu, aur is waqt aapka pura rajay milkr bhi mera kuch nhi bigad sakta,

Bhomik ji ka ye roop dekh rajguru achambhit the, wo isse phele bhi gussa hua karte the lekin aaj unke chere per alag hi ugra roop tha, rajguru ne bhomik ji ke ander ke badlaw ko mhesus kiya,

Rajguru ne baat ko samhala- aisa kuch nhi h bhomik, tum aao mere sath,

Rajguru ne bhawar singh ko shant rhene ka ishara kiya aur bhomik ko lekar bahar nikal gaye,

Rajguru- bhomik tum mujhe kuch badle badle lag rhe ho,

Bhomik- bhaiya waha kuch hua tha jisse main apne badlav mhesus kar rha hu,

Bhomik ji ne apne aur satavik ke sapne aur us roshni ke samane aur apna raftar ke bare me sab bataya,

Bhomik ki baat sunkr rajguru soch me pad gaye,

Rajguru- bhomik main tumhare ander ek alag hi urja ko mhesus kr rha hu, aur ye bhi mhesus kar rha hu ki wo urja tumhare ander nakartmak urja ko badha rhi h, bhai agar hume koi takat milti h to use kaise istemal karna h ye humari soch per nirbhar karta h, aur tum bahut hi shant insan ho to apni is urja is takat ko sansar ke bhale ke liye istemal karo,

Bhomik- lekin main nhi janta ye kaisi urja h, ye kaisi takat h,

Rajguru- to pata karo, apna dhayan lagao, is urja ko apne kabu me karo aur dekho ye urja kis trha ki h aur tum iska istemal kaise sansar ke bhale ke liye kar skate ho, aur ha jab tak is urja ko kabu me na karo lo kisi ko iske bare me mat batana, kyoki yaha sabhi takat ke bhuke hain, khud bhawar singh aisi hi takat pane ke liye pagal hua ja rha h, kahi wo tumhe koi nuksan na pahucha de,

Bhomik- main is bhawar singh ko nhi chodunga,

Rajguru- ye tumhara kaam nhi h, tum bas apna dhayan lagao aur is takat ko kabu karo,

Bhomik- thik h bhaiya

Rajguru- mujhe satavik ki chinta ho rhi h, agar uske ander bhi ye hi takat h to kahi wo is takat me khud ko na kho de, agar ye takat us per havi ho gai to kya hoga,

Bhomik- wo bahut samjhdar h wo khud ko samhal lega,

Wahi satavik ne jaise hi tabut ko khola to uske samne tha ek bahut hi lamba choda insan jise dekh kr aisa lag rha tha ki wo so rha h, bahut hi gheri neend me soya hua h, aur uske sone ki aawaj itni jyada thi ki wo pahad ke bahar tak aa rhi thi, tabut ke khulte hi waha hath jode hue baithe log sir jhuka kr let gaye,

Satavik sab kuch dekh kr bahut achambhit tha, use kuch samjh nhi aa rha tha, tabhi budha aadmi utha

Budha aadmi- aapne humare raja ko aajad kr diya h, is sansar me koi aapka kuch nhi bigad sakta ab,

Satavik- ye h kon aur is tabut me band hone ke baad bhi ye jinda kaise hain, jaha hawa tak nhi aa ja sakti, aur inhe kisne band kiya, aur kyo band kiya,

Budha aadmi- ye hain is puri dharti ke raja RAJA BHAIRAV, aaj se kai hajar versh phele inhone puri dharti ko jeet liya, maha shaktishali, mahan yodha, aur sbase khas baat bhagwaan ke mahan bhagat, jinhone bhagwaan ki tapshya karke unhe khush karke unse amarta ka vardaan paaya tha, aur uske baad puri dharti jeet li, lekin fir na jane kya hua ki inhe yaha kaid kar diya gaya, aur humare purvaj jo inki sena me inke sabse khas yodha the, wo inki surkasha me yaha lage rhe, aur humari pidhi kai hajar versho se is parvat ki raksha karti aa rhi h, humare ek guru ne bhavishwani ki thi ki ek aisa insan aayega jiske pas tantra aur mantra dono ki takat hogi aur bhagwaan ke divyansh ki shakti bhi hogi, humare purvaj tab se aapke aane ka intejar karte karte tabah ho gaye, humara sobhagya h ki aap humare samne aaye,

Satavik- ye kaise ho skata h, koi amar nhi ho sakta,

Budha aadmi- udharan aapke samne h, ek band pahad me ek band kamre me ek band tabut me jo insan band tha jaha hawa tak nhi ja sakti wo bhooka pyasa aaram se so rha h, wo bhi kai hajar versho se,

Satavik bas us soye hue insan ko dekhe ja rha tha, uska shareer tha bhi itna vishal ki wo chahe to pura pahad utha le,

Satavik- ye uthenge kaise,

Budha aadmi- ye hum nhi jante,

Satavik ne kuch palo ke liye apni aankhe band fir

Satavik- mujhe thoda dhayan lagana hoga, inki neend kisi mantra se bandhi hui h uske liye mujhe apni tantra vidya ko aur jagrit karna hoga, mujhe ek shant jagah chahiye jisse main dhayan laga saku, tab tak tum sab inki raksha karo taki koi yaha tak na aa sake,

Budha aadmi- hum apni jaan dekar bhi inki rakhsa karenge,

Satavik waha se nikal kr ek shant jagah pahuch gaya aur apni tantra vidya ko aur majbut karne ke liye dhayan lagane laga, udhar bhomik apni mantro ki shakti ko majbut karne ke liye dhayan laga rhe the, dono bhaiyo ke ander shakti samai thi, jisme ek apne ander bhagwaan ki shakti ko aur majbut kar rha tha to dusra nakartamak shakti ko majbut kr rha tha, jiska parinaam aage chalkr dikhne wala tha,

Dev revati ko sugandha ke pas chod kr niharika ke pas chal diya, aur waha pahuch kr gufa me ghusne se phele usne pure kapde utar diye aur nanga hi gufa me gaya, niharika ek pathar per baithi dev ka hi intejar kar rhi thi, dev ke ander aate hi wo dodti hui dev se lipat gai, niharika ki hilti hui chuchiya dev ki chati se chipak gai, aur dev ka mota lamba lakta hua lund niharika ki jangho se ragad rha tha lekin dono ke man me hi koi galat bhavna nhi thi, ye wo sacha prem tha, dono nange aur sansar ke sabse khubsurat mard aur aurat aur jinke pas sansar ke sabse khubsurat guptang the, fir bhi dono ke bich vasna jaisa kuch nhi tha, bas prem tha, aur sirf maa bete ka prem nhi tha, kyoki dono hi us prem se kahi aage nikal chuke the,

Niharika- kaha reh gaya tha,

Dev- bas maa dushmano ke kheme me ghus gaya tha,

Niharika- kasturi mili

Dev- kasturi to nhi mili, ha acharya ji aur sugandha mile, badi buri halat me jee rhe hain kasturi ke karmo ki wajah se,

Niahrika- aur kya kiya,

Dev- main pratap singh ke mahal me gusa aur uski patni renuka indu aur sena pati ki patni yogita aur mahamantri ki beti paridhi ko chod diya, renuka to mere liye pagal si ho gait hi,

Niharika- bahut badhiya, matlab tune pheli safalta pa li, aur pratap singh ki beti,

Dev- use main apne sath le aaya, wo mere pyar me pagal ho rhi h, dusri mulakat me hi mere sath bhag aai h,

Niharika- ye tune kya kiya use apne sath le aaya,

Dev- yaha nhi laya hu sugandha ke pas chod diya h, uske sath kuch karne ka samay nhi tha, lekin uske jariye pratap singh ko jhukane ka tarika mil gaya h,

Niahrika- kaisa tarika

Dev- pratap singh ko lagta h revati uski jaan bacha sakti h, ab wo revati ko wapas pane ke liye kuch bhi karne ko teyar h, aur wo kamina insan apni beti ko hi apni hawas ka shikar banana chahta tha,

Niharika- wo to h hi gira hua, lekin ab koi rihsta mere liye mayne nhi rakhta h, tujhe bahut kuch karna h abhi,

Dev- janta hu main aur main piche nhi hatunga,

Idhar pratap singh ki sena nikal chuki thi revati ko dhudhne aur dev ne akhir me jo daw khela tha wo kaam aa gaya tha, dev ne jo ghoda wapas bheja tha wo bhawar singh ke rajay ki seema ke ander aakr bheja tha, aur pratap singh ke senik ghode tak pahuch gaye the, aur jaise hi ye khabar pratap singh ko mili ki revati ko le jane wala ghoda bhawar singh ke rajay me mila h, fir to pratap singh gusse me aag babula ho gaya, use ye hi laga ki bhawar singh ne badla lene ke liye hi uski beti ko agwa karwaya h,

Pratap singh aur uska beta virendra singh dono ne sena teyar kr li thi, pratap singh ke aur bhi bahut sare bachhe the, jinme se 10 ko jayaj hone ki upadhi mili hui thi, jinme se ek thi revati aur 9 ladke jisme sabse bada tha virendra singh baki 8 bhi usi ki trha khunkhar aur takatwar the, jo virendra ki hi baat mante the,

Khair pratap singh ki sena teyar ho chuki thi bhawan pura per humla karne ke liye, pratap singh ke sath aas pas ke kai rajay mil gaye the, kuch hi dino me ek badi sena bhawar singh ke rajay ki taraf pahuch chuki thi, idhar pratap singh ko kuch pata hi nhi tha, wo to bas pagal hua ja rha tha amar hone ke liye,

Aur jab tak bhawar singh ko pata chalta tab tak pratap singh ki sena rajay ke bahut kareeb aa chuki thi, bhawar singh ko jaise hi pata chala usne yudh ke liye sena ko teyar karwaya, rajguru ne fir se pratap singh se baat karne ki salah di lekin bhawar singh ne nhi mani aur sena teyar kr di, yudh ki teyari shuru ho gai, aur jab tak bhawar singh ki sena mahal ke bahar pahcuhti tab tak pratap singh uske kai gaon ko tabah karta hua apni sena lekar rajdhani me mahal ke samne aa khada hua tha,

Itni vishal sena dekh kr bhawar singh aur uski sena ke pair ukhadne lage, bhawar singh ne apne bete suraj aur jwala ko yudh ke liye aage bhejna chaha lekin dono hi apne pair piche khichne lage, jabki pratap singh ke bete sena me sabse aage khade the,

Bhawar singh ko dikhai de gaya ki wo ye yudh nhi jeet sakta, aur jitni badi sena samne khadi thi wo pure rajay ko tabah kar sakti thi,

Bhawar singh- rajguru ye sena pure rajay ko tabah kar degi, koi rasta sujhaiye,

Rajguru- maine usse baat karne ki salah di thi lekin aap mane nhi ab wo itna kareeb aa gaya h ki aur use pata h ki wo jeet sakta h,

Bhawar singh- to kya kiya jaye,

Rajguru- ab ek hi rasta h,

Bhawar singh- konsa rasta,

Abhijeet- yaha se bahg chalte hain

Bhagne ki baat se sabhi ne abhijeet ko gusse me dekha,

Kamya ne abhijeet ko chup rhene ka ishara kiya,

Rajguru- hum pratap singh ko dwand yudh ke liye kahenge, kyoki ye baat to wo bhi janta h yudh karne me uske bhi bahut se senik mare jayenge, agar dwandh yudh se faisla ho jayega to shayad hum is rajay ko tabah hone se bacha le, aur umeed karte hain humara yodha jeet gaya to pura rajay hi bach jaye,

Suraj- agar hum haar gaye to,

Rajguru- to hum ye pura rajay haar jayenge lekin rajpariwar ko bacha lenge, aur is rajay ke hajaro logo ko bhi,

Kamya- ye tareeka thik h, aap khabar bhijwaiye pratap singh,

Rajguru khud ye khabar lekar pratap singh ke kheme me pahcuh gaye,

Pratap singh- fir se koi samjhota lekar aaye hain lekin is bar aisa kuch nhi hoga,

Rajguru- main koi samjhota lekar nhi aaya hu maharaj, main bas sabki bhalai ke liye aaya hu,

Pratap singh- agar bhawar singh atamsamarpan kar de aur meri beti ko wapas de de to main kisi ko nhi marunga,

Rajguru- aapki beti lekin aapki beti yaha kyo aayegi,

Pratap singh- jyada kahaniya mat banao, meri beti ko agwa karwaya gaya h, aur ye tum logo ne karwaya h,

Rajguru- aapko galat fhemi hui h, hume aisa kuch nhi karwaya,

Pratap singh- mujhe tum logo per visvas nhi h, main is rajay ko jeet kr apni beti wapas le lunga,

Rajguru- aapko hum per yakeen nhi h, aap jaisa chahte hain waisa kijiye, lekin pure rajay ko tabah karke ya itne seniko ki bali dekar aapne rajay jeet bhi liya to aapko kya milega ye tabah hua rajay,

Pratap singh- khena kya chahte ho,

Rajguru- agar ye yudh dwandh yudh me badal jaye to, aapka sabse achhe yodha aur humara sabse achha yodha aapas me lad kr tey kr de ki kon jeetega, aur jo bhi jeete use samne wale raja ki baat manni hogi,

Rajguru ki baat se pratap singh soch me dub gaya,

Pratap singh- isme koi chal to nhi h,

Rajguru- hum seniko aur parja ki rakhsa karna chahte hain bas,

Pratap singh- thik h lekin isme meri 2 sharte hain,

Raj guru- kaisi sharte,

Pratap singh – pheli ye ki isme 4 – 4 yodha dono taraf se ladenge aur wo charo rajpariwar ke log hi honge, agar ye sharat major h to ye faisla hoga warna hum is pure rajay ko tabah kar denge,

Rajguru jab pratap singh ka sandesh lekar wapas aaya aur bhawar singh ko ye sharte batai to bhawar singh ki fat gai uske sath sath pure pariwar ki fat gai, kyoki uske pariwar mard hi nhi the, bhawar singh ko apni takat per bahut ghanad tha, lekin apne bachho ko kaise samne karega,

Bhawar singh- wo hum per yudh karne ke liye dusre rajao ko sath laya h, apni beti ke agawa hone ka jhuta natak karke hume barbaad karna chahta h,

Rajguru- ho sakta h Lekin hume kuch to karna hi hoga,

Bhawar singh – mere beto batao kya faisla h tumhara, kya tum us pratap singh ke pariwar ke logo ko hara kr is rajay ko bachaoge, aur hum uske rajay ko bhi jeet lenege,

Dwandh yudh ka naam sunkr sabhi ghabra gaye, lekin yahi moka tha suraj aur jwala ke liye yuvraaj pad hasil karne ka,

Suraj aur jwala ek sath- hum teyar hain,

Kamya- abhijeet nhi ladega, uski jagah kunal mere pati ladenge,

Ab bechare kunal ki aafat aa gai thi usne aaj tak koi yudh nhi lada tha,

Kamya ka samrthan bhawar singh ne bhi kiya, aur bhawar singh suraj jwala aur kunal yudh ke liye teyar ho gaye,

Pratap singh ko khabar bhijwa di ki hum dwandh yudh ke liye teyar h, jaldi hi ek mahal ke bahar hi maidan teyar kr diya gaya, jiske ek taraf mahal to dusri taraf pratap singh ki sena thi, aur sena ko mahal aur is yudh kafi dur roka diya gaya, bas pratap singh ke yodha aur pariwar ke log hi maidan ke dusri taaf najdeek aaye,

Sabhi maidan me aa gaye, rajguru aur pratap singh ke mahamantri ne kuch niyam banaye jisme agar pariwar ka ek hi sadashya maidan me khada h tab tak yudh chalta rhega, aur agar koi khud har maan leta h to use mara nhi jayega, aur agar koi yodha jyada ghayal ho jaye to pariwar ka koi ek yodha uski jagah le sakta h, ye sirf ek bar ho sakta h,

Ye akhir wala niyam pratap singh ne janbujh kr banwaya taki wo aakhir me yudh me aa sake aur apne hatho se bhawar singh ko maar sake,

Niyam ban gaye the, bhawar singh suraj jwala aur kunal maidan me aa chuke the, dusri taraf se pratap singh ke 4 bete virendra singh, indar singh, jitendra singh aur sambhu singh maidan me aa khade hue, charo hi lambe chode aur takatwar the,

Yudh ka bigul baj chukka tha, aur charo me yudh shuru ho gaya, idhar se bhawar singh hawi pad rha tha wahi dusri taraf se virendra singh hawi ho rha tha, aur sabse kamjor tha kunal, bechara bas kisi trha se apni jaan bacha rha tha, bhawar singh ke lg kunal ko galiya de rhe the, wahi pratap singh ke log uska majak bana rhe the, lekin wo bechara to apni jaan bacha rha tha, kunal bahut ghayal ho chukka tha, yudh kafi samay tak chal gaya tha, lekin pratap singh ke bete bhawar singh per hawi hone lage the, aur sambhu ki talwar kunal ki garden per aa chuki thi,

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Ye yudh wala scene complete kar dena tha riya singh ji
Ab yaha per dev ki entry toh banti hai lekin bina kisi ke nazar me aaye huye

 

[Naik]

UPDATE- 17



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Charo taraf ek andhkar sa chaya hua tha, aisa lag rha tha jaise koi shakti surya ko hi nigal rhi h, din me hi andhera sa ho gaya tha, aasman me bijliya kadak rhi thi, pakshi idhar udhar ud rhe the, jungli janwar shor macha rhe the, sabhi jyotish aise halat dekh kr ghabraye hue the, jagah jagah aasman se bijali gir rhi thi, aur jaha bhi bijali girti pure ilake ko tahas nahas kr deti, ye sirf kuch rajayo me nhi balki puri duniya me ho rha tha, bhawar singh apne mahal ki chat per khada hua tha aur riva ko apne samne karke khada tha, riva hi nhi balki baki tino rajkumariyo, amita somiya aur akshara ko bhi apne caro taraf khada karke unke bich me khada tha, aur ye sab najara dekh rha tha, wahi pratap singh dar kr apne mahal me ghus chukka tha, renuka pagalo ki tarha pure mahal me dev ko dhudhti fir rhi thi, usne apni beti ko khojne ki ek bar bhi koshish nhi ki,

(Kisi ne sahi kaha h jab aurat vasna me andhi hoti h to uske liye koi rishta mayne nhi rakhta, wo apni aulad tak ko bhul jati h, jiska parina hum aaj kal news me roj dekh rhe hain)

Dev revati ko lekar ek jungle me ruk gaya, tej barish aur tufaan jaise halat ho rhe the, dev ke samne ek paid per bijli giri jisse dar kr revati dev se lipat gai, lekin dev ke chere per koi dar nhi tha, wo ek dum shant tha, dev ghode se utra aur ghode ko wapas bhaga diya, jisse uske piche aane wale senik use dhund na paye, dev ke dimag me bas ek hi jagah aa rhi thi, wo revati ko lekar sidhe aacharya ji ke pas pahucha, jaha sugandha bhi wapas aa chuki thi,

Dev jaise hi acharay ji ki jhopdi me ghusa to sugandha ke hath me pani se bhara ghada tha jo turant niche gir gaya, aur wo paglo ki trha dev se llipat gai, dev bas aise hi khada reh gaya, wahi revati phele to chonk gai lekin fir uske ander jalan ke bhaw ubharne lage,

Sugandha – dev tum thik ho na, tum kaha chale gaye the maine tumhe kaha kaha nhi dhundha,

Acharya ji- beti use aaram se baithne to de,

Sugandha ko ahsas hua wo kaha h aur kya kar rhi h, wo Sharma kr piche hat gai,fir uski najar revati per gai,

Dev- acharya ji aapki sahayta chahiye, aur sansar me aapke siwa main kisi per visvas nhi kr sakta,

Sugandha- bina jhijak bolo, jaan ja sakti h lekin tumhare visvas ko tutne nhi dungi,

Dev ne revati ko dekha,

Dev- revati tum jara baitho main sugandha se baat karke aata hu,

Dev aur sugandha bahar aa gaye,

Sugandha- kya baat h dev

Dev- ye revati h pratap singh ki beti,

Pratap singh ka naam sunkr sugandha ke dant bheech gaye,

Sugandha – ise yaha kyo laye ho tum,

Dev- kyoki iske baap ko uski kiye ka fal bhugatna h,

Sugandha ke chere per ek muskan aai,

Sugandha- to batao mujhe kya karna h,

Dev- ise is baat ka ahsas na ho ki main kon hu aur ye yaha kyo lai gai h, ise bas ye pata ho ki main dusre rajay ka rhene wala hu,

Sugandha – aisa hi hoga, main har kadam per tumhare sath hu,

Dev- mujhe abhi jana hoga, aur kisi ko pata na chale main jinda hu ya nhi, ya yaha kabhi aaya tha,

Sugandha- pita ji ne mujhe bata diya tha, tum chinta mat karo kisi ko kuch pata nhi chalega,

Dev- mera ek kaam aur karogi, main tumhe kuch jyada hi jimmedari de rha hu, kyoki sirf tum ho jis per main visvas karne ki himmat kar rha hu, kyoki us pratiyogita ke maidan me sirf tum thi jo meri madad ke liye aage aai thi,

Sugandha- ek dost hone ke nate mera yahi farj tha,

Dev- tumhe kasturi ko dhundh kr lana hoga aur usse pata karna hoga usne ye sab kyo kiya, kyoki kafi kadiya jud rhi hain lekin ek kasturi ki kadi nhi jud pa rhi, usne kis wajah se ye sab kiya,

Sugandha ki aankho me nami thi,

Sugandha- main use patal me se bhi dhundh laungi,

Dev- tumhara ahsaan rhega mujh per,

Sugandha ne dev ko gale se laga liya,

Dono ander aaye,

Dev- revati tumhe kuch din yaha rhena hoga, main phele apne rajay me jakar tumahre liye sab intejam karta hu, tab tak tum yaha chup kr raho, ye sugandha h meri dost h ye tumahra khayal rakhegi,

Revati- main yaha kaise rahungi, main ek rajkumari hu, is jhopdi me kaise reh sakti hu,

Dev- jaha tum thi wo mahal tha ya tumahri kaid thi, waha sone ki kaid thi aur yaha khula aasman h, waha tum sans bhi apne pita ke ahsaan se leti thi aur yaha tum jo chahe kar sakti ho, aur ye tab tak hi h jab tak main tumhari suraksha ka intejam na kar du, is jindagii ko jee kr dekho, aur main jaldi hi wapas aaunga,

Revati dev se lipat gai,

Revati- main yaha to reh lungi lekin tumahre bina nhi reh paungi, tumne mujh per aisa jadu kiya h ki main tumhare bina jeene ki soch bhi nhi sakti,

Dev- isiliye main phele jakar sab thik karta hu,

Revati ko waha chod kr dev apni maa ke pas nikal liya,

Udhar bhomik rajay me pahuch chukke the, pure rajay me hahakar macha hua tha, ye asman se girti hui aapda sab kuch tabah kr rhi thi, bhomik ji ne rajay me ghuste hi kuch mantra padhe aur asman se girti hui bijali ko rok diya, sab kuch shant hone laga, aur jaise hi logo ne ye dekha ki bhomik ji ne sab kuch rok diya h to unki jai jai kar hone lagi aur bhomik ji ke mahal pahuchne se phele hi ye khabar mahal tak pahuch gai ki bhomik ji ne bawander ko rok diya h,

Rajguru aur bhawar singh ko jaise hi pata chala to wo dono bhomik ji ko lene ke liye mahal ke bahar hi aa gaye,

Bhomik ji sabse mile, fir wo sabhi mahal ke ander ek kamre me baithe hue the, kamya bhi wahi aa gai thi,

Bhawar singh- ye kaise aapda aa gai h humare rajay me rajguru,

Bhomik- ye aapda sirf humare rajay me nhi h, main jis raste se aa rha hu waha sab jagah aise hi halat hain, kuch bahut bura hone wala h, jo is sansar ke liye thik nhi h,

Bhawar singh- tum dono bhai waha gaye the tumhe kuch safalta mili kya,

Bhomik ji ne us jungle me hui sari ghatna keh sunai bas us roshni ander samane wali baat kochod kr, aur bata diya ki satavik aage gaya h,

Bhawar singh- matlab tum kuch nhi kar sake,

Bhomik ji ne thode gusse me bhawar singh per najar dali tabhi achanak se bhomik ji ke samne ek najara aa gaya jisme bhawar singh ke bahut badi sena ke sath khada tha aur uske dusri taraf ek akela insan khada tha,

Bhomik ji ne apne sir ko jhatka aur charo taraf dekha, unhe samjh hi nhi aaya ye kya hua,

Bhomik ji- mujhe jana hoga,

Bhawar singh- jana hoga, tumhara raja yaha baitha h tumse baat kar rha h aur tum jane ki baat kar rhe ho,

Bhomik ji- mere pas in sab baato ke alawa bhi bahut chije hain sochne ke liye, aur jo aap chahte hain uske liye satavik apna kaam kar rha h,

Kamya- apne raja ko aise ulta jawab de rhe ho, jante ho iska dand mil skata h

Bhomik ji- jaise un maa bete ko jhuta dand dekr marwa diya aise hi mujhe dand denge, lekin ye mat bhulna main dev nhi hu, aur is waqt aapka pura rajay milkr bhi mera kuch nhi bigad sakta,

Bhomik ji ka ye roop dekh rajguru achambhit the, wo isse phele bhi gussa hua karte the lekin aaj unke chere per alag hi ugra roop tha, rajguru ne bhomik ji ke ander ke badlaw ko mhesus kiya,

Rajguru ne baat ko samhala- aisa kuch nhi h bhomik, tum aao mere sath,

Rajguru ne bhawar singh ko shant rhene ka ishara kiya aur bhomik ko lekar bahar nikal gaye,

Rajguru- bhomik tum mujhe kuch badle badle lag rhe ho,

Bhomik- bhaiya waha kuch hua tha jisse main apne badlav mhesus kar rha hu,

Bhomik ji ne apne aur satavik ke sapne aur us roshni ke samane aur apna raftar ke bare me sab bataya,

Bhomik ki baat sunkr rajguru soch me pad gaye,

Rajguru- bhomik main tumhare ander ek alag hi urja ko mhesus kr rha hu, aur ye bhi mhesus kar rha hu ki wo urja tumhare ander nakartmak urja ko badha rhi h, bhai agar hume koi takat milti h to use kaise istemal karna h ye humari soch per nirbhar karta h, aur tum bahut hi shant insan ho to apni is urja is takat ko sansar ke bhale ke liye istemal karo,

Bhomik- lekin main nhi janta ye kaisi urja h, ye kaisi takat h,

Rajguru- to pata karo, apna dhayan lagao, is urja ko apne kabu me karo aur dekho ye urja kis trha ki h aur tum iska istemal kaise sansar ke bhale ke liye kar skate ho, aur ha jab tak is urja ko kabu me na karo lo kisi ko iske bare me mat batana, kyoki yaha sabhi takat ke bhuke hain, khud bhawar singh aisi hi takat pane ke liye pagal hua ja rha h, kahi wo tumhe koi nuksan na pahucha de,

Bhomik- main is bhawar singh ko nhi chodunga,

Rajguru- ye tumhara kaam nhi h, tum bas apna dhayan lagao aur is takat ko kabu karo,

Bhomik- thik h bhaiya

Rajguru- mujhe satavik ki chinta ho rhi h, agar uske ander bhi ye hi takat h to kahi wo is takat me khud ko na kho de, agar ye takat us per havi ho gai to kya hoga,

Bhomik- wo bahut samjhdar h wo khud ko samhal lega,

Wahi satavik ne jaise hi tabut ko khola to uske samne tha ek bahut hi lamba choda insan jise dekh kr aisa lag rha tha ki wo so rha h, bahut hi gheri neend me soya hua h, aur uske sone ki aawaj itni jyada thi ki wo pahad ke bahar tak aa rhi thi, tabut ke khulte hi waha hath jode hue baithe log sir jhuka kr let gaye,

Satavik sab kuch dekh kr bahut achambhit tha, use kuch samjh nhi aa rha tha, tabhi budha aadmi utha

Budha aadmi- aapne humare raja ko aajad kr diya h, is sansar me koi aapka kuch nhi bigad sakta ab,

Satavik- ye h kon aur is tabut me band hone ke baad bhi ye jinda kaise hain, jaha hawa tak nhi aa ja sakti, aur inhe kisne band kiya, aur kyo band kiya,

Budha aadmi- ye hain is puri dharti ke raja RAJA BHAIRAV, aaj se kai hajar versh phele inhone puri dharti ko jeet liya, maha shaktishali, mahan yodha, aur sbase khas baat bhagwaan ke mahan bhagat, jinhone bhagwaan ki tapshya karke unhe khush karke unse amarta ka vardaan paaya tha, aur uske baad puri dharti jeet li, lekin fir na jane kya hua ki inhe yaha kaid kar diya gaya, aur humare purvaj jo inki sena me inke sabse khas yodha the, wo inki surkasha me yaha lage rhe, aur humari pidhi kai hajar versho se is parvat ki raksha karti aa rhi h, humare ek guru ne bhavishwani ki thi ki ek aisa insan aayega jiske pas tantra aur mantra dono ki takat hogi aur bhagwaan ke divyansh ki shakti bhi hogi, humare purvaj tab se aapke aane ka intejar karte karte tabah ho gaye, humara sobhagya h ki aap humare samne aaye,

Satavik- ye kaise ho skata h, koi amar nhi ho sakta,

Budha aadmi- udharan aapke samne h, ek band pahad me ek band kamre me ek band tabut me jo insan band tha jaha hawa tak nhi ja sakti wo bhooka pyasa aaram se so rha h, wo bhi kai hajar versho se,

Satavik bas us soye hue insan ko dekhe ja rha tha, uska shareer tha bhi itna vishal ki wo chahe to pura pahad utha le,

Satavik- ye uthenge kaise,

Budha aadmi- ye hum nhi jante,

Satavik ne kuch palo ke liye apni aankhe band fir

Satavik- mujhe thoda dhayan lagana hoga, inki neend kisi mantra se bandhi hui h uske liye mujhe apni tantra vidya ko aur jagrit karna hoga, mujhe ek shant jagah chahiye jisse main dhayan laga saku, tab tak tum sab inki raksha karo taki koi yaha tak na aa sake,

Budha aadmi- hum apni jaan dekar bhi inki rakhsa karenge,

Satavik waha se nikal kr ek shant jagah pahuch gaya aur apni tantra vidya ko aur majbut karne ke liye dhayan lagane laga, udhar bhomik apni mantro ki shakti ko majbut karne ke liye dhayan laga rhe the, dono bhaiyo ke ander shakti samai thi, jisme ek apne ander bhagwaan ki shakti ko aur majbut kar rha tha to dusra nakartamak shakti ko majbut kr rha tha, jiska parinaam aage chalkr dikhne wala tha,

Dev revati ko sugandha ke pas chod kr niharika ke pas chal diya, aur waha pahuch kr gufa me ghusne se phele usne pure kapde utar diye aur nanga hi gufa me gaya, niharika ek pathar per baithi dev ka hi intejar kar rhi thi, dev ke ander aate hi wo dodti hui dev se lipat gai, niharika ki hilti hui chuchiya dev ki chati se chipak gai, aur dev ka mota lamba lakta hua lund niharika ki jangho se ragad rha tha lekin dono ke man me hi koi galat bhavna nhi thi, ye wo sacha prem tha, dono nange aur sansar ke sabse khubsurat mard aur aurat aur jinke pas sansar ke sabse khubsurat guptang the, fir bhi dono ke bich vasna jaisa kuch nhi tha, bas prem tha, aur sirf maa bete ka prem nhi tha, kyoki dono hi us prem se kahi aage nikal chuke the,

Niharika- kaha reh gaya tha,

Dev- bas maa dushmano ke kheme me ghus gaya tha,

Niharika- kasturi mili

Dev- kasturi to nhi mili, ha acharya ji aur sugandha mile, badi buri halat me jee rhe hain kasturi ke karmo ki wajah se,

Niahrika- aur kya kiya,

Dev- main pratap singh ke mahal me gusa aur uski patni renuka indu aur sena pati ki patni yogita aur mahamantri ki beti paridhi ko chod diya, renuka to mere liye pagal si ho gait hi,

Niharika- bahut badhiya, matlab tune pheli safalta pa li, aur pratap singh ki beti,

Dev- use main apne sath le aaya, wo mere pyar me pagal ho rhi h, dusri mulakat me hi mere sath bhag aai h,

Niharika- ye tune kya kiya use apne sath le aaya,

Dev- yaha nhi laya hu sugandha ke pas chod diya h, uske sath kuch karne ka samay nhi tha, lekin uske jariye pratap singh ko jhukane ka tarika mil gaya h,

Niahrika- kaisa tarika

Dev- pratap singh ko lagta h revati uski jaan bacha sakti h, ab wo revati ko wapas pane ke liye kuch bhi karne ko teyar h, aur wo kamina insan apni beti ko hi apni hawas ka shikar banana chahta tha,

Niharika- wo to h hi gira hua, lekin ab koi rihsta mere liye mayne nhi rakhta h, tujhe bahut kuch karna h abhi,

Dev- janta hu main aur main piche nhi hatunga,

Idhar pratap singh ki sena nikal chuki thi revati ko dhudhne aur dev ne akhir me jo daw khela tha wo kaam aa gaya tha, dev ne jo ghoda wapas bheja tha wo bhawar singh ke rajay ki seema ke ander aakr bheja tha, aur pratap singh ke senik ghode tak pahuch gaye the, aur jaise hi ye khabar pratap singh ko mili ki revati ko le jane wala ghoda bhawar singh ke rajay me mila h, fir to pratap singh gusse me aag babula ho gaya, use ye hi laga ki bhawar singh ne badla lene ke liye hi uski beti ko agwa karwaya h,

Pratap singh aur uska beta virendra singh dono ne sena teyar kr li thi, pratap singh ke aur bhi bahut sare bachhe the, jinme se 10 ko jayaj hone ki upadhi mili hui thi, jinme se ek thi revati aur 9 ladke jisme sabse bada tha virendra singh baki 8 bhi usi ki trha khunkhar aur takatwar the, jo virendra ki hi baat mante the,

Khair pratap singh ki sena teyar ho chuki thi bhawan pura per humla karne ke liye, pratap singh ke sath aas pas ke kai rajay mil gaye the, kuch hi dino me ek badi sena bhawar singh ke rajay ki taraf pahuch chuki thi, idhar pratap singh ko kuch pata hi nhi tha, wo to bas pagal hua ja rha tha amar hone ke liye,

Aur jab tak bhawar singh ko pata chalta tab tak pratap singh ki sena rajay ke bahut kareeb aa chuki thi, bhawar singh ko jaise hi pata chala usne yudh ke liye sena ko teyar karwaya, rajguru ne fir se pratap singh se baat karne ki salah di lekin bhawar singh ne nhi mani aur sena teyar kr di, yudh ki teyari shuru ho gai, aur jab tak bhawar singh ki sena mahal ke bahar pahcuhti tab tak pratap singh uske kai gaon ko tabah karta hua apni sena lekar rajdhani me mahal ke samne aa khada hua tha,

Itni vishal sena dekh kr bhawar singh aur uski sena ke pair ukhadne lage, bhawar singh ne apne bete suraj aur jwala ko yudh ke liye aage bhejna chaha lekin dono hi apne pair piche khichne lage, jabki pratap singh ke bete sena me sabse aage khade the,

Bhawar singh ko dikhai de gaya ki wo ye yudh nhi jeet sakta, aur jitni badi sena samne khadi thi wo pure rajay ko tabah kar sakti thi,

Bhawar singh- rajguru ye sena pure rajay ko tabah kar degi, koi rasta sujhaiye,

Rajguru- maine usse baat karne ki salah di thi lekin aap mane nhi ab wo itna kareeb aa gaya h ki aur use pata h ki wo jeet sakta h,

Bhawar singh- to kya kiya jaye,

Rajguru- ab ek hi rasta h,

Bhawar singh- konsa rasta,

Abhijeet- yaha se bahg chalte hain

Bhagne ki baat se sabhi ne abhijeet ko gusse me dekha,

Kamya ne abhijeet ko chup rhene ka ishara kiya,

Rajguru- hum pratap singh ko dwand yudh ke liye kahenge, kyoki ye baat to wo bhi janta h yudh karne me uske bhi bahut se senik mare jayenge, agar dwandh yudh se faisla ho jayega to shayad hum is rajay ko tabah hone se bacha le, aur umeed karte hain humara yodha jeet gaya to pura rajay hi bach jaye,

Suraj- agar hum haar gaye to,

Rajguru- to hum ye pura rajay haar jayenge lekin rajpariwar ko bacha lenge, aur is rajay ke hajaro logo ko bhi,

Kamya- ye tareeka thik h, aap khabar bhijwaiye pratap singh,

Rajguru khud ye khabar lekar pratap singh ke kheme me pahcuh gaye,

Pratap singh- fir se koi samjhota lekar aaye hain lekin is bar aisa kuch nhi hoga,

Rajguru- main koi samjhota lekar nhi aaya hu maharaj, main bas sabki bhalai ke liye aaya hu,

Pratap singh- agar bhawar singh atamsamarpan kar de aur meri beti ko wapas de de to main kisi ko nhi marunga,

Rajguru- aapki beti lekin aapki beti yaha kyo aayegi,

Pratap singh- jyada kahaniya mat banao, meri beti ko agwa karwaya gaya h, aur ye tum logo ne karwaya h,

Rajguru- aapko galat fhemi hui h, hume aisa kuch nhi karwaya,

Pratap singh- mujhe tum logo per visvas nhi h, main is rajay ko jeet kr apni beti wapas le lunga,

Rajguru- aapko hum per yakeen nhi h, aap jaisa chahte hain waisa kijiye, lekin pure rajay ko tabah karke ya itne seniko ki bali dekar aapne rajay jeet bhi liya to aapko kya milega ye tabah hua rajay,

Pratap singh- khena kya chahte ho,

Rajguru- agar ye yudh dwandh yudh me badal jaye to, aapka sabse achhe yodha aur humara sabse achha yodha aapas me lad kr tey kr de ki kon jeetega, aur jo bhi jeete use samne wale raja ki baat manni hogi,

Rajguru ki baat se pratap singh soch me dub gaya,

Pratap singh- isme koi chal to nhi h,

Rajguru- hum seniko aur parja ki rakhsa karna chahte hain bas,

Pratap singh- thik h lekin isme meri 2 sharte hain,

Raj guru- kaisi sharte,

Pratap singh – pheli ye ki isme 4 – 4 yodha dono taraf se ladenge aur wo charo rajpariwar ke log hi honge, agar ye sharat major h to ye faisla hoga warna hum is pure rajay ko tabah kar denge,

Rajguru jab pratap singh ka sandesh lekar wapas aaya aur bhawar singh ko ye sharte batai to bhawar singh ki fat gai uske sath sath pure pariwar ki fat gai, kyoki uske pariwar mard hi nhi the, bhawar singh ko apni takat per bahut ghanad tha, lekin apne bachho ko kaise samne karega,

Bhawar singh- wo hum per yudh karne ke liye dusre rajao ko sath laya h, apni beti ke agawa hone ka jhuta natak karke hume barbaad karna chahta h,

Rajguru- ho sakta h Lekin hume kuch to karna hi hoga,

Bhawar singh – mere beto batao kya faisla h tumhara, kya tum us pratap singh ke pariwar ke logo ko hara kr is rajay ko bachaoge, aur hum uske rajay ko bhi jeet lenege,

Dwandh yudh ka naam sunkr sabhi ghabra gaye, lekin yahi moka tha suraj aur jwala ke liye yuvraaj pad hasil karne ka,

Suraj aur jwala ek sath- hum teyar hain,

Kamya- abhijeet nhi ladega, uski jagah kunal mere pati ladenge,

Ab bechare kunal ki aafat aa gai thi usne aaj tak koi yudh nhi lada tha,

Kamya ka samrthan bhawar singh ne bhi kiya, aur bhawar singh suraj jwala aur kunal yudh ke liye teyar ho gaye,

Pratap singh ko khabar bhijwa di ki hum dwandh yudh ke liye teyar h, jaldi hi ek mahal ke bahar hi maidan teyar kr diya gaya, jiske ek taraf mahal to dusri taraf pratap singh ki sena thi, aur sena ko mahal aur is yudh kafi dur roka diya gaya, bas pratap singh ke yodha aur pariwar ke log hi maidan ke dusri taaf najdeek aaye,

Sabhi maidan me aa gaye, rajguru aur pratap singh ke mahamantri ne kuch niyam banaye jisme agar pariwar ka ek hi sadashya maidan me khada h tab tak yudh chalta rhega, aur agar koi khud har maan leta h to use mara nhi jayega, aur agar koi yodha jyada ghayal ho jaye to pariwar ka koi ek yodha uski jagah le sakta h, ye sirf ek bar ho sakta h,

Ye akhir wala niyam pratap singh ne janbujh kr banwaya taki wo aakhir me yudh me aa sake aur apne hatho se bhawar singh ko maar sake,

Niyam ban gaye the, bhawar singh suraj jwala aur kunal maidan me aa chuke the, dusri taraf se pratap singh ke 4 bete virendra singh, indar singh, jitendra singh aur sambhu singh maidan me aa khade hue, charo hi lambe chode aur takatwar the,

Yudh ka bigul baj chukka tha, aur charo me yudh shuru ho gaya, idhar se bhawar singh hawi pad rha tha wahi dusri taraf se virendra singh hawi ho rha tha, aur sabse kamjor tha kunal, bechara bas kisi trha se apni jaan bacha rha tha, bhawar singh ke lg kunal ko galiya de rhe the, wahi pratap singh ke log uska majak bana rhe the, lekin wo bechara to apni jaan bacha rha tha, kunal bahut ghayal ho chukka tha, yudh kafi samay tak chal gaya tha, lekin pratap singh ke bete bhawar singh per hawi hone lage the, aur sambhu ki talwar kunal ki garden per aa chuki thi,

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Nice update

 

[Mahesh007]

Mujhe esa kyu lagta he ki satwik aur bhomik ki bhumika alag alag lagti he satwik ek nakaratmik roll me he jo ajit aur chirn

 

[dhparikh]

UPDATE- 17



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Charo taraf ek andhkar sa chaya hua tha, aisa lag rha tha jaise koi shakti surya ko hi nigal rhi h, din me hi andhera sa ho gaya tha, aasman me bijliya kadak rhi thi, pakshi idhar udhar ud rhe the, jungli janwar shor macha rhe the, sabhi jyotish aise halat dekh kr ghabraye hue the, jagah jagah aasman se bijali gir rhi thi, aur jaha bhi bijali girti pure ilake ko tahas nahas kr deti, ye sirf kuch rajayo me nhi balki puri duniya me ho rha tha, bhawar singh apne mahal ki chat per khada hua tha aur riva ko apne samne karke khada tha, riva hi nhi balki baki tino rajkumariyo, amita somiya aur akshara ko bhi apne caro taraf khada karke unke bich me khada tha, aur ye sab najara dekh rha tha, wahi pratap singh dar kr apne mahal me ghus chukka tha, renuka pagalo ki tarha pure mahal me dev ko dhudhti fir rhi thi, usne apni beti ko khojne ki ek bar bhi koshish nhi ki,

(Kisi ne sahi kaha h jab aurat vasna me andhi hoti h to uske liye koi rishta mayne nhi rakhta, wo apni aulad tak ko bhul jati h, jiska parina hum aaj kal news me roj dekh rhe hain)

Dev revati ko lekar ek jungle me ruk gaya, tej barish aur tufaan jaise halat ho rhe the, dev ke samne ek paid per bijli giri jisse dar kr revati dev se lipat gai, lekin dev ke chere per koi dar nhi tha, wo ek dum shant tha, dev ghode se utra aur ghode ko wapas bhaga diya, jisse uske piche aane wale senik use dhund na paye, dev ke dimag me bas ek hi jagah aa rhi thi, wo revati ko lekar sidhe aacharya ji ke pas pahucha, jaha sugandha bhi wapas aa chuki thi,

Dev jaise hi acharay ji ki jhopdi me ghusa to sugandha ke hath me pani se bhara ghada tha jo turant niche gir gaya, aur wo paglo ki trha dev se llipat gai, dev bas aise hi khada reh gaya, wahi revati phele to chonk gai lekin fir uske ander jalan ke bhaw ubharne lage,

Sugandha – dev tum thik ho na, tum kaha chale gaye the maine tumhe kaha kaha nhi dhundha,

Acharya ji- beti use aaram se baithne to de,

Sugandha ko ahsas hua wo kaha h aur kya kar rhi h, wo Sharma kr piche hat gai,fir uski najar revati per gai,

Dev- acharya ji aapki sahayta chahiye, aur sansar me aapke siwa main kisi per visvas nhi kr sakta,

Sugandha- bina jhijak bolo, jaan ja sakti h lekin tumhare visvas ko tutne nhi dungi,

Dev ne revati ko dekha,

Dev- revati tum jara baitho main sugandha se baat karke aata hu,

Dev aur sugandha bahar aa gaye,

Sugandha- kya baat h dev

Dev- ye revati h pratap singh ki beti,

Pratap singh ka naam sunkr sugandha ke dant bheech gaye,

Sugandha – ise yaha kyo laye ho tum,

Dev- kyoki iske baap ko uski kiye ka fal bhugatna h,

Sugandha ke chere per ek muskan aai,

Sugandha- to batao mujhe kya karna h,

Dev- ise is baat ka ahsas na ho ki main kon hu aur ye yaha kyo lai gai h, ise bas ye pata ho ki main dusre rajay ka rhene wala hu,

Sugandha – aisa hi hoga, main har kadam per tumhare sath hu,

Dev- mujhe abhi jana hoga, aur kisi ko pata na chale main jinda hu ya nhi, ya yaha kabhi aaya tha,

Sugandha- pita ji ne mujhe bata diya tha, tum chinta mat karo kisi ko kuch pata nhi chalega,

Dev- mera ek kaam aur karogi, main tumhe kuch jyada hi jimmedari de rha hu, kyoki sirf tum ho jis per main visvas karne ki himmat kar rha hu, kyoki us pratiyogita ke maidan me sirf tum thi jo meri madad ke liye aage aai thi,

Sugandha- ek dost hone ke nate mera yahi farj tha,

Dev- tumhe kasturi ko dhundh kr lana hoga aur usse pata karna hoga usne ye sab kyo kiya, kyoki kafi kadiya jud rhi hain lekin ek kasturi ki kadi nhi jud pa rhi, usne kis wajah se ye sab kiya,

Sugandha ki aankho me nami thi,

Sugandha- main use patal me se bhi dhundh laungi,

Dev- tumhara ahsaan rhega mujh per,

Sugandha ne dev ko gale se laga liya,

Dono ander aaye,

Dev- revati tumhe kuch din yaha rhena hoga, main phele apne rajay me jakar tumahre liye sab intejam karta hu, tab tak tum yaha chup kr raho, ye sugandha h meri dost h ye tumahra khayal rakhegi,

Revati- main yaha kaise rahungi, main ek rajkumari hu, is jhopdi me kaise reh sakti hu,

Dev- jaha tum thi wo mahal tha ya tumahri kaid thi, waha sone ki kaid thi aur yaha khula aasman h, waha tum sans bhi apne pita ke ahsaan se leti thi aur yaha tum jo chahe kar sakti ho, aur ye tab tak hi h jab tak main tumhari suraksha ka intejam na kar du, is jindagii ko jee kr dekho, aur main jaldi hi wapas aaunga,

Revati dev se lipat gai,

Revati- main yaha to reh lungi lekin tumahre bina nhi reh paungi, tumne mujh per aisa jadu kiya h ki main tumhare bina jeene ki soch bhi nhi sakti,

Dev- isiliye main phele jakar sab thik karta hu,

Revati ko waha chod kr dev apni maa ke pas nikal liya,

Udhar bhomik rajay me pahuch chukke the, pure rajay me hahakar macha hua tha, ye asman se girti hui aapda sab kuch tabah kr rhi thi, bhomik ji ne rajay me ghuste hi kuch mantra padhe aur asman se girti hui bijali ko rok diya, sab kuch shant hone laga, aur jaise hi logo ne ye dekha ki bhomik ji ne sab kuch rok diya h to unki jai jai kar hone lagi aur bhomik ji ke mahal pahuchne se phele hi ye khabar mahal tak pahuch gai ki bhomik ji ne bawander ko rok diya h,

Rajguru aur bhawar singh ko jaise hi pata chala to wo dono bhomik ji ko lene ke liye mahal ke bahar hi aa gaye,

Bhomik ji sabse mile, fir wo sabhi mahal ke ander ek kamre me baithe hue the, kamya bhi wahi aa gai thi,

Bhawar singh- ye kaise aapda aa gai h humare rajay me rajguru,

Bhomik- ye aapda sirf humare rajay me nhi h, main jis raste se aa rha hu waha sab jagah aise hi halat hain, kuch bahut bura hone wala h, jo is sansar ke liye thik nhi h,

Bhawar singh- tum dono bhai waha gaye the tumhe kuch safalta mili kya,

Bhomik ji ne us jungle me hui sari ghatna keh sunai bas us roshni ander samane wali baat kochod kr, aur bata diya ki satavik aage gaya h,

Bhawar singh- matlab tum kuch nhi kar sake,

Bhomik ji ne thode gusse me bhawar singh per najar dali tabhi achanak se bhomik ji ke samne ek najara aa gaya jisme bhawar singh ke bahut badi sena ke sath khada tha aur uske dusri taraf ek akela insan khada tha,

Bhomik ji ne apne sir ko jhatka aur charo taraf dekha, unhe samjh hi nhi aaya ye kya hua,

Bhomik ji- mujhe jana hoga,

Bhawar singh- jana hoga, tumhara raja yaha baitha h tumse baat kar rha h aur tum jane ki baat kar rhe ho,

Bhomik ji- mere pas in sab baato ke alawa bhi bahut chije hain sochne ke liye, aur jo aap chahte hain uske liye satavik apna kaam kar rha h,

Kamya- apne raja ko aise ulta jawab de rhe ho, jante ho iska dand mil skata h

Bhomik ji- jaise un maa bete ko jhuta dand dekr marwa diya aise hi mujhe dand denge, lekin ye mat bhulna main dev nhi hu, aur is waqt aapka pura rajay milkr bhi mera kuch nhi bigad sakta,

Bhomik ji ka ye roop dekh rajguru achambhit the, wo isse phele bhi gussa hua karte the lekin aaj unke chere per alag hi ugra roop tha, rajguru ne bhomik ji ke ander ke badlaw ko mhesus kiya,

Rajguru ne baat ko samhala- aisa kuch nhi h bhomik, tum aao mere sath,

Rajguru ne bhawar singh ko shant rhene ka ishara kiya aur bhomik ko lekar bahar nikal gaye,

Rajguru- bhomik tum mujhe kuch badle badle lag rhe ho,

Bhomik- bhaiya waha kuch hua tha jisse main apne badlav mhesus kar rha hu,

Bhomik ji ne apne aur satavik ke sapne aur us roshni ke samane aur apna raftar ke bare me sab bataya,

Bhomik ki baat sunkr rajguru soch me pad gaye,

Rajguru- bhomik main tumhare ander ek alag hi urja ko mhesus kr rha hu, aur ye bhi mhesus kar rha hu ki wo urja tumhare ander nakartmak urja ko badha rhi h, bhai agar hume koi takat milti h to use kaise istemal karna h ye humari soch per nirbhar karta h, aur tum bahut hi shant insan ho to apni is urja is takat ko sansar ke bhale ke liye istemal karo,

Bhomik- lekin main nhi janta ye kaisi urja h, ye kaisi takat h,

Rajguru- to pata karo, apna dhayan lagao, is urja ko apne kabu me karo aur dekho ye urja kis trha ki h aur tum iska istemal kaise sansar ke bhale ke liye kar skate ho, aur ha jab tak is urja ko kabu me na karo lo kisi ko iske bare me mat batana, kyoki yaha sabhi takat ke bhuke hain, khud bhawar singh aisi hi takat pane ke liye pagal hua ja rha h, kahi wo tumhe koi nuksan na pahucha de,

Bhomik- main is bhawar singh ko nhi chodunga,

Rajguru- ye tumhara kaam nhi h, tum bas apna dhayan lagao aur is takat ko kabu karo,

Bhomik- thik h bhaiya

Rajguru- mujhe satavik ki chinta ho rhi h, agar uske ander bhi ye hi takat h to kahi wo is takat me khud ko na kho de, agar ye takat us per havi ho gai to kya hoga,

Bhomik- wo bahut samjhdar h wo khud ko samhal lega,

Wahi satavik ne jaise hi tabut ko khola to uske samne tha ek bahut hi lamba choda insan jise dekh kr aisa lag rha tha ki wo so rha h, bahut hi gheri neend me soya hua h, aur uske sone ki aawaj itni jyada thi ki wo pahad ke bahar tak aa rhi thi, tabut ke khulte hi waha hath jode hue baithe log sir jhuka kr let gaye,

Satavik sab kuch dekh kr bahut achambhit tha, use kuch samjh nhi aa rha tha, tabhi budha aadmi utha

Budha aadmi- aapne humare raja ko aajad kr diya h, is sansar me koi aapka kuch nhi bigad sakta ab,

Satavik- ye h kon aur is tabut me band hone ke baad bhi ye jinda kaise hain, jaha hawa tak nhi aa ja sakti, aur inhe kisne band kiya, aur kyo band kiya,

Budha aadmi- ye hain is puri dharti ke raja RAJA BHAIRAV, aaj se kai hajar versh phele inhone puri dharti ko jeet liya, maha shaktishali, mahan yodha, aur sbase khas baat bhagwaan ke mahan bhagat, jinhone bhagwaan ki tapshya karke unhe khush karke unse amarta ka vardaan paaya tha, aur uske baad puri dharti jeet li, lekin fir na jane kya hua ki inhe yaha kaid kar diya gaya, aur humare purvaj jo inki sena me inke sabse khas yodha the, wo inki surkasha me yaha lage rhe, aur humari pidhi kai hajar versho se is parvat ki raksha karti aa rhi h, humare ek guru ne bhavishwani ki thi ki ek aisa insan aayega jiske pas tantra aur mantra dono ki takat hogi aur bhagwaan ke divyansh ki shakti bhi hogi, humare purvaj tab se aapke aane ka intejar karte karte tabah ho gaye, humara sobhagya h ki aap humare samne aaye,

Satavik- ye kaise ho skata h, koi amar nhi ho sakta,

Budha aadmi- udharan aapke samne h, ek band pahad me ek band kamre me ek band tabut me jo insan band tha jaha hawa tak nhi ja sakti wo bhooka pyasa aaram se so rha h, wo bhi kai hajar versho se,

Satavik bas us soye hue insan ko dekhe ja rha tha, uska shareer tha bhi itna vishal ki wo chahe to pura pahad utha le,

Satavik- ye uthenge kaise,

Budha aadmi- ye hum nhi jante,

Satavik ne kuch palo ke liye apni aankhe band fir

Satavik- mujhe thoda dhayan lagana hoga, inki neend kisi mantra se bandhi hui h uske liye mujhe apni tantra vidya ko aur jagrit karna hoga, mujhe ek shant jagah chahiye jisse main dhayan laga saku, tab tak tum sab inki raksha karo taki koi yaha tak na aa sake,

Budha aadmi- hum apni jaan dekar bhi inki rakhsa karenge,

Satavik waha se nikal kr ek shant jagah pahuch gaya aur apni tantra vidya ko aur majbut karne ke liye dhayan lagane laga, udhar bhomik apni mantro ki shakti ko majbut karne ke liye dhayan laga rhe the, dono bhaiyo ke ander shakti samai thi, jisme ek apne ander bhagwaan ki shakti ko aur majbut kar rha tha to dusra nakartamak shakti ko majbut kr rha tha, jiska parinaam aage chalkr dikhne wala tha,

Dev revati ko sugandha ke pas chod kr niharika ke pas chal diya, aur waha pahuch kr gufa me ghusne se phele usne pure kapde utar diye aur nanga hi gufa me gaya, niharika ek pathar per baithi dev ka hi intejar kar rhi thi, dev ke ander aate hi wo dodti hui dev se lipat gai, niharika ki hilti hui chuchiya dev ki chati se chipak gai, aur dev ka mota lamba lakta hua lund niharika ki jangho se ragad rha tha lekin dono ke man me hi koi galat bhavna nhi thi, ye wo sacha prem tha, dono nange aur sansar ke sabse khubsurat mard aur aurat aur jinke pas sansar ke sabse khubsurat guptang the, fir bhi dono ke bich vasna jaisa kuch nhi tha, bas prem tha, aur sirf maa bete ka prem nhi tha, kyoki dono hi us prem se kahi aage nikal chuke the,

Niharika- kaha reh gaya tha,

Dev- bas maa dushmano ke kheme me ghus gaya tha,

Niharika- kasturi mili

Dev- kasturi to nhi mili, ha acharya ji aur sugandha mile, badi buri halat me jee rhe hain kasturi ke karmo ki wajah se,

Niahrika- aur kya kiya,

Dev- main pratap singh ke mahal me gusa aur uski patni renuka indu aur sena pati ki patni yogita aur mahamantri ki beti paridhi ko chod diya, renuka to mere liye pagal si ho gait hi,

Niharika- bahut badhiya, matlab tune pheli safalta pa li, aur pratap singh ki beti,

Dev- use main apne sath le aaya, wo mere pyar me pagal ho rhi h, dusri mulakat me hi mere sath bhag aai h,

Niharika- ye tune kya kiya use apne sath le aaya,

Dev- yaha nhi laya hu sugandha ke pas chod diya h, uske sath kuch karne ka samay nhi tha, lekin uske jariye pratap singh ko jhukane ka tarika mil gaya h,

Niahrika- kaisa tarika

Dev- pratap singh ko lagta h revati uski jaan bacha sakti h, ab wo revati ko wapas pane ke liye kuch bhi karne ko teyar h, aur wo kamina insan apni beti ko hi apni hawas ka shikar banana chahta tha,

Niharika- wo to h hi gira hua, lekin ab koi rihsta mere liye mayne nhi rakhta h, tujhe bahut kuch karna h abhi,

Dev- janta hu main aur main piche nhi hatunga,

Idhar pratap singh ki sena nikal chuki thi revati ko dhudhne aur dev ne akhir me jo daw khela tha wo kaam aa gaya tha, dev ne jo ghoda wapas bheja tha wo bhawar singh ke rajay ki seema ke ander aakr bheja tha, aur pratap singh ke senik ghode tak pahuch gaye the, aur jaise hi ye khabar pratap singh ko mili ki revati ko le jane wala ghoda bhawar singh ke rajay me mila h, fir to pratap singh gusse me aag babula ho gaya, use ye hi laga ki bhawar singh ne badla lene ke liye hi uski beti ko agwa karwaya h,

Pratap singh aur uska beta virendra singh dono ne sena teyar kr li thi, pratap singh ke aur bhi bahut sare bachhe the, jinme se 10 ko jayaj hone ki upadhi mili hui thi, jinme se ek thi revati aur 9 ladke jisme sabse bada tha virendra singh baki 8 bhi usi ki trha khunkhar aur takatwar the, jo virendra ki hi baat mante the,

Khair pratap singh ki sena teyar ho chuki thi bhawan pura per humla karne ke liye, pratap singh ke sath aas pas ke kai rajay mil gaye the, kuch hi dino me ek badi sena bhawar singh ke rajay ki taraf pahuch chuki thi, idhar pratap singh ko kuch pata hi nhi tha, wo to bas pagal hua ja rha tha amar hone ke liye,

Aur jab tak bhawar singh ko pata chalta tab tak pratap singh ki sena rajay ke bahut kareeb aa chuki thi, bhawar singh ko jaise hi pata chala usne yudh ke liye sena ko teyar karwaya, rajguru ne fir se pratap singh se baat karne ki salah di lekin bhawar singh ne nhi mani aur sena teyar kr di, yudh ki teyari shuru ho gai, aur jab tak bhawar singh ki sena mahal ke bahar pahcuhti tab tak pratap singh uske kai gaon ko tabah karta hua apni sena lekar rajdhani me mahal ke samne aa khada hua tha,

Itni vishal sena dekh kr bhawar singh aur uski sena ke pair ukhadne lage, bhawar singh ne apne bete suraj aur jwala ko yudh ke liye aage bhejna chaha lekin dono hi apne pair piche khichne lage, jabki pratap singh ke bete sena me sabse aage khade the,

Bhawar singh ko dikhai de gaya ki wo ye yudh nhi jeet sakta, aur jitni badi sena samne khadi thi wo pure rajay ko tabah kar sakti thi,

Bhawar singh- rajguru ye sena pure rajay ko tabah kar degi, koi rasta sujhaiye,

Rajguru- maine usse baat karne ki salah di thi lekin aap mane nhi ab wo itna kareeb aa gaya h ki aur use pata h ki wo jeet sakta h,

Bhawar singh- to kya kiya jaye,

Rajguru- ab ek hi rasta h,

Bhawar singh- konsa rasta,

Abhijeet- yaha se bahg chalte hain

Bhagne ki baat se sabhi ne abhijeet ko gusse me dekha,

Kamya ne abhijeet ko chup rhene ka ishara kiya,

Rajguru- hum pratap singh ko dwand yudh ke liye kahenge, kyoki ye baat to wo bhi janta h yudh karne me uske bhi bahut se senik mare jayenge, agar dwandh yudh se faisla ho jayega to shayad hum is rajay ko tabah hone se bacha le, aur umeed karte hain humara yodha jeet gaya to pura rajay hi bach jaye,

Suraj- agar hum haar gaye to,

Rajguru- to hum ye pura rajay haar jayenge lekin rajpariwar ko bacha lenge, aur is rajay ke hajaro logo ko bhi,

Kamya- ye tareeka thik h, aap khabar bhijwaiye pratap singh,

Rajguru khud ye khabar lekar pratap singh ke kheme me pahcuh gaye,

Pratap singh- fir se koi samjhota lekar aaye hain lekin is bar aisa kuch nhi hoga,

Rajguru- main koi samjhota lekar nhi aaya hu maharaj, main bas sabki bhalai ke liye aaya hu,

Pratap singh- agar bhawar singh atamsamarpan kar de aur meri beti ko wapas de de to main kisi ko nhi marunga,

Rajguru- aapki beti lekin aapki beti yaha kyo aayegi,

Pratap singh- jyada kahaniya mat banao, meri beti ko agwa karwaya gaya h, aur ye tum logo ne karwaya h,

Rajguru- aapko galat fhemi hui h, hume aisa kuch nhi karwaya,

Pratap singh- mujhe tum logo per visvas nhi h, main is rajay ko jeet kr apni beti wapas le lunga,

Rajguru- aapko hum per yakeen nhi h, aap jaisa chahte hain waisa kijiye, lekin pure rajay ko tabah karke ya itne seniko ki bali dekar aapne rajay jeet bhi liya to aapko kya milega ye tabah hua rajay,

Pratap singh- khena kya chahte ho,

Rajguru- agar ye yudh dwandh yudh me badal jaye to, aapka sabse achhe yodha aur humara sabse achha yodha aapas me lad kr tey kr de ki kon jeetega, aur jo bhi jeete use samne wale raja ki baat manni hogi,

Rajguru ki baat se pratap singh soch me dub gaya,

Pratap singh- isme koi chal to nhi h,

Rajguru- hum seniko aur parja ki rakhsa karna chahte hain bas,

Pratap singh- thik h lekin isme meri 2 sharte hain,

Raj guru- kaisi sharte,

Pratap singh – pheli ye ki isme 4 – 4 yodha dono taraf se ladenge aur wo charo rajpariwar ke log hi honge, agar ye sharat major h to ye faisla hoga warna hum is pure rajay ko tabah kar denge,

Rajguru jab pratap singh ka sandesh lekar wapas aaya aur bhawar singh ko ye sharte batai to bhawar singh ki fat gai uske sath sath pure pariwar ki fat gai, kyoki uske pariwar mard hi nhi the, bhawar singh ko apni takat per bahut ghanad tha, lekin apne bachho ko kaise samne karega,

Bhawar singh- wo hum per yudh karne ke liye dusre rajao ko sath laya h, apni beti ke agawa hone ka jhuta natak karke hume barbaad karna chahta h,

Rajguru- ho sakta h Lekin hume kuch to karna hi hoga,

Bhawar singh – mere beto batao kya faisla h tumhara, kya tum us pratap singh ke pariwar ke logo ko hara kr is rajay ko bachaoge, aur hum uske rajay ko bhi jeet lenege,

Dwandh yudh ka naam sunkr sabhi ghabra gaye, lekin yahi moka tha suraj aur jwala ke liye yuvraaj pad hasil karne ka,

Suraj aur jwala ek sath- hum teyar hain,

Kamya- abhijeet nhi ladega, uski jagah kunal mere pati ladenge,

Ab bechare kunal ki aafat aa gai thi usne aaj tak koi yudh nhi lada tha,

Kamya ka samrthan bhawar singh ne bhi kiya, aur bhawar singh suraj jwala aur kunal yudh ke liye teyar ho gaye,

Pratap singh ko khabar bhijwa di ki hum dwandh yudh ke liye teyar h, jaldi hi ek mahal ke bahar hi maidan teyar kr diya gaya, jiske ek taraf mahal to dusri taraf pratap singh ki sena thi, aur sena ko mahal aur is yudh kafi dur roka diya gaya, bas pratap singh ke yodha aur pariwar ke log hi maidan ke dusri taaf najdeek aaye,

Sabhi maidan me aa gaye, rajguru aur pratap singh ke mahamantri ne kuch niyam banaye jisme agar pariwar ka ek hi sadashya maidan me khada h tab tak yudh chalta rhega, aur agar koi khud har maan leta h to use mara nhi jayega, aur agar koi yodha jyada ghayal ho jaye to pariwar ka koi ek yodha uski jagah le sakta h, ye sirf ek bar ho sakta h,

Ye akhir wala niyam pratap singh ne janbujh kr banwaya taki wo aakhir me yudh me aa sake aur apne hatho se bhawar singh ko maar sake,

Niyam ban gaye the, bhawar singh suraj jwala aur kunal maidan me aa chuke the, dusri taraf se pratap singh ke 4 bete virendra singh, indar singh, jitendra singh aur sambhu singh maidan me aa khade hue, charo hi lambe chode aur takatwar the,

Yudh ka bigul baj chukka tha, aur charo me yudh shuru ho gaya, idhar se bhawar singh hawi pad rha tha wahi dusri taraf se virendra singh hawi ho rha tha, aur sabse kamjor tha kunal, bechara bas kisi trha se apni jaan bacha rha tha, bhawar singh ke lg kunal ko galiya de rhe the, wahi pratap singh ke log uska majak bana rhe the, lekin wo bechara to apni jaan bacha rha tha, kunal bahut ghayal ho chukka tha, yudh kafi samay tak chal gaya tha, lekin pratap singh ke bete bhawar singh per hawi hone lage the, aur sambhu ki talwar kunal ki garden per aa chuki thi,

Nice update....

 

[deep81]

Excellent dear again and again u superb

 

[Samar_Singh]

Excellent Update riya singh

Kahani ekdum jabardast jaa rahi hai. Pehle laga tha ki Dev ke sath jo hua, vahi kahani ka main plot hai lekin kahani me chize aur badi hoti jaa rahi hai. Raja Bhairav, Bijli ka kadakna, Rahasyamayi Roshni, ye sab kahani ko alag hi roop se rahi hai. Inn sab me Dev kaise shamil hoga, Rakshash to Dev hi hai, lekin kab aur kaise ye abhi aana baki hai.

Aur inn sab me Ansh, Harday aur Riya Singh kaise jude hai ye dekhna hoga.

Amazing story, waiting for next update.

 

[sonu paba]

Dhamkedar update

 

[kirantariq]

Good