shiv - sachai ka rakhwala...
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Nice story...
Shiv ki life kafi simple tarike s depict kia h.. uski family phr dost wagrah..
Abhi shiv sahil aur Aman cllg life m entry Kar chuke h aur shiv ko b apni shaktiyo k bare m janki maa s pata chal gaya h to ab cheeze jarue badalne wali h..
In shaktiyo k alawa b shiv n party ek secret agency k agents h D group k to ye b ek secret life h teeno ki jinke bare m koi ni janta , family members b ni but abtk D group k bare m kuch khas samne ni aaya ki kaise ye teeno iska Hissa bane h..
Story m ek part shiv k dada ji s b related h Jo ki Durr ek gaon m rehte h .. shiv k papa k Ghar bhaag Jane k baad s nafrat karne Lage wo even contact b ni h dono m. Jahir h shiv ko b ni pata hoga is bare m.. dekhte h ye kaise milenge shiv s aur kab ??
Villain k taur p to ek sheetan h Jo ki saal bhar baad jaag jaege aur use jagane k liye sheetan Lok m hi uska senaoatu hawaan wagrah Kar Raha h Taki shaktiya badhe sheetan ki..
Dusra villain Earth p hi h .. aur shyaad wahi boss h jiske aadmi ko Shiv n Mara tha shimla trip p. Maybe Roshan k Bhai b ek aur villain ho.. let's see..
Abtk heroine ki entry ni Hui h to ye dekhna Kon hogiwo.aur sirf shiv ki ni. ,sahil aur Aman ki b heroine Baki h..
Let's see Kya hota h aage.
Shiv ki life kafi simple tarike s depict kia h.. uski family phr dost wagrah..
Abhi shiv sahil aur Aman cllg life m entry Kar chuke h aur shiv ko b apni shaktiyo k bare m janki maa s pata chal gaya h to ab cheeze jarue badalne wali h..
In shaktiyo k alawa b shiv n party ek secret agency k agents h D group k to ye b ek secret life h teeno ki jinke bare m koi ni janta , family members b ni but abtk D group k bare m kuch khas samne ni aaya ki kaise ye teeno iska Hissa bane h..
Story m ek part shiv k dada ji s b related h Jo ki Durr ek gaon m rehte h .. shiv k papa k Ghar bhaag Jane k baad s nafrat karne Lage wo even contact b ni h dono m. Jahir h shiv ko b ni pata hoga is bare m.. dekhte h ye kaise milenge shiv s aur kab ??
Villain k taur p to ek sheetan h Jo ki saal bhar baad jaag jaege aur use jagane k liye sheetan Lok m hi uska senaoatu hawaan wagrah Kar Raha h Taki shaktiya badhe sheetan ki..
Dusra villain Earth p hi h .. aur shyaad wahi boss h jiske aadmi ko Shiv n Mara tha shimla trip p. Maybe Roshan k Bhai b ek aur villain ho.. let's see..
Abtk heroine ki entry ni Hui h to ye dekhna Kon hogiwo.aur sirf shiv ki ni. ,sahil aur Aman ki b heroine Baki h..
Let's see Kya hota h aage.
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Thanks bhai for your comment....abhi shiv ke sath college life me bahut kuch hona hai....rahi bat D group ki to uske bare me bhi jald hi pata chal jayega....heroin ki bhi entry jald hi hone wali hai....story me ek hi heroin bas nahi rahegi....han lakin ye bhi nahi hoga ki jo ladki aye wo apne hero ko hi set karne lag jaye....
Aur rahi bat roshan ke bhai ki...to bas ek chij clear kar dena chahta hun...ki ye koi real brother wala nahi hai...ye chamcha giri wala bhai hai....jinke dam pe ye log itna udte hai...usku bhi entry hone wali hai....
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Sorrg dosto thora busy tha to update nabi de paya cousin ki marrige me gaya tha...abhj update type karne baitha hun...rat 10 aje se pehle pehle update aajayega....
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UPDATE 17
Ab age…Fir mai aur didi college pahuch gaye…fir waha se didi apne dosto ke sath aur mai un dono ke sath nikal gaye apne apne class….din bhar aise hi bit gaya…aaj kuch khas nahi hua…kal ka humara roshan ke sath fight dekh ke kisi senior ne bhi humare sath koi panga nahi liya…aur roshan and gang to fir suspend the hi ek hafte ke liye…to aur koi panga lene wala tha nahi…….aise hi din bit te gaye…29 din bit chuke the…kal mera birthday tha….is bich humara aur roshan ka bahut bar bhidat hui lakin mamla jyada nahi badha….rat ke thik 12:01 min. me achanak mere kamre me ek tej roshni failni chalu hoti hai….jaise hi roshni kam hoti hai mai wapas usi jagah pahuch jata hun jaha janki maa se mila tha aur apni kundlini shakti jagrit kiya tha…mai jake janki maa ko pranam karta hun….
J maa – kalyan ho putra……janamdin Mubarak ho putra….
Mai – dhanywad maa….maa ab age kya karna hai…
J maa – beta tumhari kundlini shakti jagrit ho chuki hai ….ab tumhe dhyan me baithna hai…jaise jaise tum dhyan me magn hote jaoge waise waise tumhe apne andar ek roshni ka abhas hoga…tumhe us roshni tak pahuchna hai…aur use niyantrit karna hai…kyunki tumhari kundlini shakti jagrit ho chuki hai..isliye tumhe jyada pareshani nahi hogi….
Mai – jo agya maa…waise maa us roshni ka kya tatparya hai….
Mere sawal pe janki maa pehle muskrat hai fir kehti hai
J maa – putra ye mai tumhe tumhare dhyan ke sampan hone ke bad bataungi…
Fir mai waha par hi dhyan me baith gaya…kundlini shakti jagrit karne ke bad mai roj dhyan karta tha…isliye dhyan me baithne me mujhe jyada pareshani nahi hui…mai kai praha tak dhyan me baitha raha…wo bat alag thi ki earth time ke hisab se abhi mujhe dhyan me bathe hue kuch adha ghanta hi bita hoga….jaisa janki maa ne kaha tha…mere dhyan me baithne ke kuch prahar bad mujhe roshni dikhi…lakin fir maine jo dekha use dekh ke mai shoked ho gaya…waha par ek roshni nahi kayi roshni thi….kisi bhi roshni ka mujhe koi ant nahi dikh raha tha….apne dhyan me aur ekagrata lane ke bad mujhe ek roshni dikhi…jo baki sab roshni se jyada chamak wali thi…maine apna dhyan uski taraf kendrit kiya….jaise jaise mera dhyan us roshni ke taraf badhte jaa raha tha…waise waise wo roshni aur tej hoti jaa rahi thi….achanak hi wo roshni om me badal gayi….
Aur fir wo om se ek trishul jud ke aisa ho gaya…
aur fir achanak se kahi lupt(gum hogay)….uske lupt hote hi meri ankh khul gayi…aur mai apne dhyan se bahar aagaya….mai dhyan se uthke janki maa ke pas chal deta hun…jo mujhe dekh ke muskrat rahi thi…mai unse abhi kuch kehne hi wala tha ki wo samne se mujhe kehti hai….
J maa – mai janti hun putra tum kya janna chahte ho….to suno…jo tumne pehle baht sari roshni dekhi wo is bat ko darshati hai ki is insane sharer me bahut si aisi roshni mojud hai jise humara ye sharer apna karya karta hai…ye roshni hume apna karm karne ke liye nirdeshit karti hai…aur jo tumne ek antim roshni dekhi jisse sabhi roshni ko urja mil rahi thi wo roshni swayam jagat pita mahadev hai….us roshni se hi humara sharir ke baki roshni apna karya karti hai….mahadev sabhi manusyo ke bhitar yahi roshni ban ke was karte hai….unme se kuch hi hote hai us roshni ko samajh pate hai…aur use apne mastisk se jod pate hai….bad me tumne dekha ki roshni om me badly wo ye darshatahai ki is duniya me sirf ek hi swar hai ek hi swar satya hai….aur wo hai om….aur fir jo trishul us om se juda wo us om ki shakti ko darshata hai..joki har manusyo me rehti hai…bas use niyantrit har koi nahi kar pata….
Mai – samajh gaya maa…par maa wo trishul aur om gaye kaha….
J maa – wo ab tum me sama gaye hai…aur tumhari pith me jo trishul ka chinh bana tha…jo tumhari shakti banana ke bad hi dikhne wala tha…wo ab jagrit ho gaya hai….
Mai – hmm…..maa ab age kya karna hai….
J maa – putra abhi tumhare pas shaktiya to agayi hai…lakin use chalana uar aise puranae aur naye sastro ka gyan bhi arjit karna baki hai…
Mai – to wo kabse shuru karna hai maa…
J maa – tumhe ye sab siksha mai nahi koi aur dega…
Mai – koi aur..?lakin koun maa…? Aur aap kyun nahi de sakti….
J maa – putra jitna mera karya tha utna maine kar diya…ab age ki siksha tumhe tumhare naye guru denge…aur wo koun hai ye tumhe bahut jald hi pata chal jaega…
Mai – ji maa…fir mai unhe pranam kiya…aur wapas mai apne kamre me agaya…ghadi me dekha to 2 ghante bit chuke the…fir mai so jata hun….
Agli subah mujhe uthne me thori der ho jati hai….mail jogging karne chale jata hun aur aaj ka gym skip kar deta hun…ghar me wapas ake mai tayar hota hun..aur niche chal deta hun…abhi tak mera kisi se samna nahi hua tha…mai niche aa jata hun to dekhta hun ki jo hall abhi kuch der khali tha wo ab baht se logo se bhar gaya tha…kai majdur log ghar ki sajawat kar rahe the….mai jake mom dad ko wish karta hun aur unke pair chuta hun…
Mom – happy birthday my son….bhagwan tumhe sada khush rakhe…
Mai – thanks mom…
Dad – happy birthday beta….
Mai – thanks dad…tabhi didi kitchen se nikalti hai…unke hat me mera favourite gajar ka halwa tha…wo apne hato se mujhe khilati hai…aur mujhe birthday wish karti hai…thori der bad dad kehte hai…
Dad – chalo beta hme mandir jane ke liye der ho rahi hai…fir hum sab mandir ki taraf nikal padte hai…..
