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sarkar ... aap bhi koi naya thread chalu karo sarkar ................ aap ki skill ke bahut diwane hai ..... yaha par
Kya kare dosto...ab pahle jaisa time nahi miltaAre Shubham bhai,
Kaha gayab ho yaar..........
Aap bhi to koi naya sutra aarambh karo

Ek muddat se apan bhi yahich soch raha haiWaise aaj kal rahte kaha ho? Bohot din baad dikhai diye ho ju?![]()
Thank you so much for your valuable review and supportBhut hi badhiya update Bhai
Ramesh ne pistol ki complain likha di
Dhekte hai aage kya hota hai

Main bhi yahi pata lagane ki kosis kar raha hu ki wo ladki kon haiBhut hi shandar update bhai
Ab ye ladki kon thi jisko goli lagi hai
Dhekte hai ramesh babu kese apne aap ko is sab se bahar nikalte hai

Abhi to aur bhi bohot kuch pata lagna baaki hai dostBhut hi badhiya update Bhai
Chalo ramesh aur Ragini ko us ladki ke bare me kuch jankari to mili
Dhekte hai aage kya hota hai
Sath bane rahiye, thanks for your valuable review and support bhai 
Kuch to haath lagega hi, dekhne wali baat ye hai ki kya hasil hota, thanks brother for your valuable review and supportRamesh babu ne to pahle se hi bhut jhande gade huye hai
Dhekte hai Soumya madam se milkar aage aur kya pata chalta hai

Tum na sudharne waleEk muddat se apan bhi yahich soch raha hai![]()
TheBlackBlood Shubham BhaiKya kare dosto...ab pahle jaisa time nahi milta
Time ki kami ke chalte apni koi story restart nahi kar sakta bro. Aap logo ko bhi pata hai ki story likhne ke time aur fresh mind bahut zaruri hota hai. Job aur personal life ki vajah se itni vyastata hai ki story likhne ka khayaal tak zahen me nahi aa pata. Well, pahle wali koi story restart karne ka time to nahi hai aur na hi time ki kami ki vajah se waisa mood ban sakta hai but ek new short story hai zahen me to time nikaal kar use hi thoda thoda likh kar yaha post karuga. I hope ek do din me post kar saku.... Raj_sharma ki is story jaisi hi hogi...I mean thriller prefix me...murder Mystery aur suspense me![]()