- 81,526
- 119,432
- 354
Faaltu baat/kaam bhool jata hai apan, Zaruri kaam nahi bhooltaKitne bhulakkad ho gaye ho ju
Kaisa kaam chalta hoga ju ka, bhopa swami![]()

Faaltu baat/kaam bhool jata hai apan, Zaruri kaam nahi bhooltaKitne bhulakkad ho gaye ho ju
Kaisa kaam chalta hoga ju ka, bhopa swami![]()

Ee liye hum ju ko pratham baar dekha idharBhaiya ji ham to kahi padhe the to man ko bhai gaya, isliye likh liye, baki me naya nhi parantu longue me kabhi aaya nhi

Ham reader haiEe liye hum ju ko pratham baar dekha idhar![]()
Mere story likhne ki koshish rehte hainAgree
Story ko bahut achhe se read kar ke usko analyse karte ho, aisa har koi nahi kar sakta
Ju agar koi story likhne ka sochoge to I'm sure achhe concept ke sath kafi behtar likhoge![]()
Haan! Ek do dekhe the apan ne, but ju to apan ko achhe jaante ho ki jaise ko taisa wala kaam karta hai apan, bole to jitna achha logo ka response utna achha apan ka update denaDiya bhi hai man, but ju pahchan hi nahi raha to apun ka kare bc![]()
Tohar ek estory hai raaj rani, humko wo vohot pasand hai , ab ju itna kharcha karke baaki ko ss me moov karwaye rahe, to lage hath uu ko bhi nipta deteFaaltu baat/kaam bhool jata hai apan, Zaruri kaam nahi bhoolta![]()

Where is adventure storyFaaltu baat/kaam bhool jata hai apan, Zaruri kaam nahi bhoolta![]()
Ghanghoor aalsi writer ho gaye ho ju, jo bechare review dete hai unke sath to anyaay kar dete ho na, paap lagegaHaan! Ek do dekhe the apan ne, but ju to apan ko achhe jaante ho ki jaise ko taisa wala kaam karta hai apan, bole to jitna achha logo ka response utna achha apan ka update dena![]()

Raj_sharma ko abuse karo wo Time par review nahi deta hain Issilye update late aaraha hainGhanghoor aalsi writer ho gaye ho ju, jo bechare review dete hai unke sath to anyaay kar dete ho na, paap lagega![]()
Hamne ss me bhi nahi dekha ju ko? Sayad mulakaat na hui hogi?Ham reader hai
