Mr.X796
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Birthday Special-II
Jaha main abhi apni towel me lage khoon ko dekh raha tha vahi hospital se aane ke baad se ritu ke mann me uthal puthal machi huyi thi...vo ghanto soch vichar me doobi rahi..aur phir akhir me mann hi mann kuch faisla kar ke usne drawer khol kar kuch nikala aur mere room ki taraf badh gayi.
Vahi dusri taraf Jitu abhi apne khyalo me khoya hua hi tha ki tabhi uske room ka darwaja khula aur.....
Ab aage…..
Jitu apne khyalo me dooba hua tha ki tabhi uske room ka darwwaja khulne aur jani pahchani madhur awaz sun kar vo ateet ki duniya se vapis lout aaya…ye awaz aur kisi ki nahi balki uski apni badi bahan aur ab to uske pratyek saanso ki malkin richa ki thi…jo use awaz laga rahi thi.
Richa—jitu..kaha khoya hua hai…? Aur kab aaya tu…? Kam se kam phone kar ke bata to diya hota…?
Jitu—oo..sorry didi…bas aap ki yaad aa rahi thi to bina bataye hi aa gaya..
Richa—aur kab se khada tha tu darwaje par aur kya dekh raha tha tukur tukur…?
Jitu—maine kaha na ki galti ho gayi...agar mera aana aap ko itna hi bura lagta hai to abhi vapis chala jaunga..
Richa—dekh jitu..baat ko ghumane ki koshish mat kar....tu mera eklouta bhai hai..bhala tere aane se mujhe bura kyo lagega... ?
Jitu—nahi, aapke chehre se to yahi lag raha hai ki mere aane se aap khush nahi ho... ?
Richa—ab na tu maar khayega mere hath se....apne dimag me bhara hua kachra nikal de aur ek achcha bhai ban ja..
Jitu—(dhire se)..to aap bhi ek achchi biwi ban jao..
Richa—kyaa kaha... ?
Jitu—kuch nahi...
Richa—dekh jitu, main tujhe kayi bar samjha chuki hu ki tu jo chahta hai vo kabhi nahi ho sakta…isliye apne dimag se ye khyal nikal de..isme hi hum sab ki bhalayi hai…vaise bhi maa ne tere liye ek ladki dekh li hai…teri shadi ke liye..
Jitu—aap ye achchi tarah janti ho didi, ki main aapko kitna chahta hu...agar aapko mera pyar kabool nahi hai to na sahi, phir main aapka marte dum tak intazar karunga...aur ek baat, main kisi aur ladki se shadi hargij nahi karunga...meri agar biwi banogi to sirf aap warna koi nahi..
Richa (gusse me)—jise tu pyar bol raha hai vo dar asal pyar nahi hawash hai...jo tu mujhse mitana chahta hai...ek paap ko pyar ka naam de kar bhai bahan ke rishte ko kalankit karna chahta hai..
Jitu—mere pyar ko hawash ka naam mat do didi...hawash mitane ke liye mujhe ladkiyo ki koi kami nahi hai...aaj nahi to kal aap ko mere pyar par vishwash jarur aayega..par shayad tab tak main na rahunga..
Richa—tum to pagal ho gaye ho...aisa kya hai mujh vidhwa me jo tum mere liye apni poori jindagi barbad karna chahte ho.. ? upar se main tumhari sagi bahan hu, kam se kam ye to socho...
Jitu—aap me jo hai vo mujhe kisi aur ladki me nahi mil sakta didi…kyon ki main aapse pyar karta hu..
Richa—tujhe to samjhana hi bekar hai…
Uske baad richa vaha se tunakte huye chali gayi…aise hi din nikal gaya…nirmala ne shadi ki baat ki to jitu ne richa ki taraf dekhte huye shadi karne se mana kar diya..richa chupchap sir jhukaye baithi rahi, maa ke samne kya jawab deti ki uska chota bhai apni hi bahan ke liye pagal hai…? phir sone chali gayi…
Jitu—maa, kal hamare sp raj ka birthday hai to unhone bulaya hai party me sabko…
Nirmala—beta, bahut achcha admi hai raj…tere jail jane ke baad to hum toot hi gaye the…usne tujhe jail se chhuda kar naukri me bhi laga diya..hamara karz bhi poora khatam ho gaya warna ko darinde to jeena haraam kar chuke the..jarur jana beta..
Jitu—maine kaha ki unhone hum sab ko bulaya hai..
Nirmala—main chali gayi to yaha ghar me koun rahega.. ? ek kaam karna tu apne sath richa ko le jana..uska bhi mann badal jayega..
Jitu (khush)—theek hai maa..tum didi ko razi kar lena jane ke liye..mere kahne se vo nahi jayengi..
Nirmala—theek hai, ja beta, tu bhi so ja..thak gaya hoga..
Jitu—theek hai maa...
Uske baad jitu apne room me chala gaya..jabki idhar main apne room me towel par lage khoon ke dhabbo ko dekh hi raha tha ki ussi samay ritu didi vaha aa gayi aur mera dhyan bhang ho gaya...aate hi unhone andar se darwaja lock kar diya aur mere paas aa gayi.
Raj—didi, aap...ab kaisi tabiyat hai aap ki... ?
Ritu—theek hai....tumhari vajah se jinda hu warna...
Raj (muh me hath rakh ke)—aage kuch bhi bolne ki jarurat nahi hai didi...mere hote aap ko kuch ho jaye laanat hai mujh par...aap sahi salamat hain, yahi mere liye bahut hai..lekin mere ek baat samajh me nahi aayi ki aap vaha khandahar me kya karne gayi thi... ?
Ritu (lipat kar)—mujhe maaf kar do rajj...tumne mujhe galti karne se bacha liya...
Raj (confuse)—galti karne se bacha liya.. kaisi galti ..? kya matlab...main kuch samjha nahi... ?
Ritu—vahi galti sudharne to aayi hu…
Raj—meri to kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai ki aap kya kahna chah rahi ho…?
Ritu—tumne ek kaam adhura kiya tha raj..pahle uss adhure kaam ko poora kar do..phir sab batati hu..
Raj—maine koun sa kaam adhura kiya hai…?
Ritu—iske bina jo tumne kiya vo adhura hai rajj...
Ye kahte huye ritu didi ne apna ek hath aage kar ke uski mutthi khol di...unke hath me sindoor ki dibiya dekh kar main chounk gaya...ritu didi aisa kuch karengi, ye to maine socha hi nahi tha..poori tarah se hairan kar diya tha unhone mujhe.
Raj (shocked)—ye kya hai didi.. ?
Ritu—yahi to adhura kaam kiya hai tumne rajj…apni bahan ke gale me tumne mangal sutra to pahna diya lekin uski maang me sindoor bharna bhul gaye…aaj iss adhure kaam ko bhi poora kar do rajj..
Raj (shocked)—didi..! vo jo bhi hua, vo sab anjane me galti se hua…aapne abhi tak mangal utara nahi apne gale se…?
Ritu—yahi galti karne to uss khandahar me gayi thi…lekin shayad bhagwan ko bhi ye manzur nahi tha..tabhi to unhone apne upar baithi nagin se mujhe daswa diya….mangal sutra to tumhi ne mere gale me baandha hai raj, chahe vo galti se ho ya phir jaan bujh kar…lekin main tumhari biwi to ban hi gayi na…ab ye sindoor meri maang me bhar kar mujhe poori tarah se apni biwi hone ka haq de do raj..
Raj (shocked)—ye aap kya kah rahi ho didi…? Kahi aap pagal to nahi ho gayi…? Nahi, main ye nahi kar sakta..aapne socha bhi hai ki iska anzam kya hoga…? Didi, aap ki jindagi barbad ho sakti hai…
Ritu—meri jindagi ki dor to ab tumse jud chuki hai rajj….abaad ho ya barbad ab isse koi fark nahi padta…
Raj—didi, aap sach me pagal ho gayi ho…laiye, main khud hi utar deta hu ye mangal sutra…
Ritu (dono hath gale ke paas rakh kar)—khabardar rajj..jo kabhi aisi harkat karne ki sochi bhi to…ab vo galti main dubara karne ki soch bhi nahi sakti…aaj hi to main jindagi me pahli bar hosh me aayi hu..kahte hain ki pyar kiya nahi jata, bas ho jata hai…aaj hi to maine pyar ko samjha hai…aaj hi to pahli bar mera dil kisi ke liye dhadka hai…agar tumhe meri maang nahi bharna hai to mat bharo, lekin ek baat sun lo..maine tann aur mann se tumhe apna sab kuch maan liya hai…aur jab tak jiyungi sirf tumhari biwi ban kar hi jiyungi..kisi aur ke baare me ab sochna bhi mere liye paap hai… agar tumne ya kisi ne bhi mere gale se mangal sutra utarne ki koshish ki to tumhari kasam, sab ko meri laash milegi..
Raj (tension)—didi..aap samajhti kyo nahi…?
Ritu (sisakte huye)—chinta mat karo rajjj…main tumhare aur sadhana ke beech kabhi nahi aaungi…main kabhi tum dono ke beech deewar nahi banungi….agar kabhi meri vajah se tum dono me koi takraar huyi to uss din main khud ko hi khatam kar dungi…lekin tumhari jindagi me aanch nahi aane dungi..
Ritu didi ki baate sun kar mere to hosh hi gayab ho gaye…samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya karu..? dimag kaam hi nahi kar raha tha…ritu didi ne jab meri taraf se koi prati kriya hote nahi dekhi to vah sisakte huye vaha se jane ke liye darwaje ki taraf badh gayi.
Raj—didi, ruko…
Ritu didi jaha thi vahi ruk gayi aur apni nam ankho se palat kar meri taraf dekhne lagi…unki ankho me pani dekh kar mujhe achcha nahi laga aur maine apni baanhe phaila di…
Raj—meri biwi rote huye bilkul achchi nahi lagi..
Ye sunte hi vo sisakte huye bhag kar meri agosh me sama gayi….maine kuch der ritu didi ko sisakne diya aur phir unke hath se sindoor ki dibiya le kar unki maang me sindoor bhar diya....unhone jhuk kar mere pair chhune chahe to maine unhe pakad kar apne seene se laga liya.
Ritu didi ko seene se lagate hi unki badi badi chuchiya meri chhati me dab gayi aur unki chuchiyo ke nukile chuchuk mere seene me gadne lage...vaise bhi kal se mujhe dhang se koi bur chodne ko nahi mili thi...ek nahi kuwari bur ki khushbu milte hi mera lund turant akad kar khada ho gaya aur ritu didi ki jaangho ke beech me unke kapdo ke upar se hi vaha par chhed karne ki koshish karne laga...
Raj—didi, aap meri biwi to ban gayi…ab apne bhai ko biwi hone ka inam bhi de do jaldi se...
Ritu (na samajhte huye)—inaam.. ! kaisa inam.. ? main to kuch bhi nahi layi apne sath me..
Raj—to phir upar wale ne jo diya hai vahi de do aaj apne bhai ko...
Ritu—kya diya hai upar wale ne... ? main kuch samjhi nahi..
Maine apne dono hath unki pith se khiskate huye niche le gaya aur ritu didi ki ubhri huyi gaand ke dono golo ko kas ke pakad kar dabate huye apne se jor se chipka liya..aisa karte hi mera lund sidha unki bur me ja laga..jiski chubhan ritu didi ne bhi saaf mahsoos kar li...apni bur me chubhan mahsoos hote hi vo samajh gayi ki ye kya hai...aur unke muh se siskari nikal padi....
Raj (jor se chipa kar)—ab samajh me aaya didi ki upar wale ne kya diya hai aap ko..aur mujhe kya chahiye... ?
Ritu—aaaaaahhhhh....
Raj—samajh me aaya ki phir se samjhau... ?
Ritu (sharmate huye)—(inkar me gardan hilate huye)..uuuuhhhuuunnn...aaahhh..kuch chubh raha hai...
Raj—lagta hai ki hath se pakad kar aur muh se bol kar hi sab samjhana padega ab to...apni biwi ko... ? vaise kya aur kaha chubh raha hai meri didi ko... ? mere seene me bhi kuch chubh raha hai...
Ritu (sharma kar)—dhatt..besharam..aur ab to mujhe didi mat bol..main to ab teri didi se teri biwi ban chuki hu…mujhe mere naam se bulaya karo..
Raj—to phir jaldi se mera inam de do didi..main to didi hi bolunga…
Ritu—ab to sab kuch tera hi hai…raat me aaungi room me…tab le lena apna inam bhi..abhi mujhe jane do..koi aa jayega..
Raj—koi aa bhi gaya to kya hua…? Hum bhai bahan hain, isme darne ki kya jarurat hai…koi galat nahi sochega…?
Ritu—sab ka darr nahi hai..lekin agar sheetal ya sadhana aa gayi to gadbad ho jayegi…sheetal ko to tum jante hi ho.. kisi se bhi bina baat par ladne ko hardam taiyar hi ragti hai vo..bas use kisi se ladne ka koi bahana bhar milna chahiye...
Raj—ab meri ritu darling ko sadhana ya sheetal didi se darne ki koi jarurat nahi hai...vo dono kuch nahi kahengi..
Ritu—kyo nahi kahengi... ? sadhana ho sakta hai ki chup bhi rah jaye lekin sheetal, na baba, vo to kachcha hi chaba jayegi.. agar use thoda bhi shaq hua to..
Raj—maine kaha na, darne ki jarurat nahi hai..kyon ki unn dono ko ye pata hai ki ritu didi ab meri biwi ban chuki hain..
Ritu (shocked)—kyaaaaa...llll..lekin..kaise...malum hua unko... ?
Raj—unhe maine hi sab sach bata diya tha..
Ritu (pareshan)—ab to mujhe bahut tension ho rahi hai...pata nahi vo sheetal kya karegi mere sath... ?
Raj—vo dono kuch nahi karengi..aap tension mat lo…aur mera muh mitha kara do iss khushi me…
Ritu—ruko main mithayi le kar aati hu..
Raj (chipka kar)—arrey meri bholi didi...doodh aur amrit ki itni badi badi tunky sath me liye ghumti ho aur mithayi lene kahi aur jaogi.. ? ye to sarasar na-insafi hai..
Ritu (confuse)—doodh ki tunky...amrit ki tunky.. ‼ ye kaha hain mere paas.... ?
Jab ritu didi ki samajh me nahi aaya to unhone meri taraf dekha aur phir meri nazro ka picha kiya to samajh me aate hi sharma kar jor se chipak gayi.
Ritu (sharmate huye)—besharam..tum ye bol rahe the aur main kuch hi samajh rahi thi..kal se tum meri inke piche pade huye ho..badmash..
Raj—ab jabki samajh me aa hi gaya hai to phir deri kaisi…? Jaldi se muh mitha kara do..(kaan me).. Badi Badi Hain Choochi Teri, Didi Badi Hai Teri Ye Gaand…..Phat Jayegi Bahna Aaj Bur Bhi Teri, Raat Me Jab Chadh Ke Chodega Ye Saand.
Ritu—abhi nahi…raat hone tak intazar karo…raat me sab kuch mil jayega..lekin abhi kuch bhi nahi milega..
Maine unhe chumne ki koshish ki to vah meri baaho se chhitak kar nikal gayi aur phir darwaja khol kar angutha dikhate huye vaha se bhag gayi…unke jate hi main ritu didi ke baare me hi sochte huye bistar par baith gaya ki achanak tabhi meri nigah ek bar phir se towel par lage khoon ke dhabbo par chali gayi.
Raj (mann me)—meri towel me ye khoon kaha se aaya…? Ye towel to kal sheetal didi…..
Raat wala vo scene dimag me aate hi mere pairo tale jamin khisak gayi…sheetal didi ka muh me towel daba kar achanak bina kuch bole tezi se bhagna…phir mera unke room me pahuchne par hadbada jana….apni khwahish ko poora karne ke baare me kahna, vo bhi aaj hi….ye sab yaad aate hi mera dil bahut tezi se dhak dhak karne laga aur andar ghabrahat hone lagi.
Raj (ghabra kar)—nahii..ye nahi ho sakta….main apni sheetal didi ko …kuch..nahii hone dungaa….didiiiiiiiii…
Main turant didi ko chillate huye towel le kar tezi se sheetal didi ke room ki taraf bhaga….mari ankho se iss samay anshuo ki ladi hi lag gayi thi….seene me athaah dard ho raha tha.
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