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[Naik]

Hlo dosto maine sabke comment pahde to jinko update pasand ayea unka sukriya
Par bichme kuch bhaiyo ko update pasand nahi ayea aur kuch ko to meri writing pasand nahi to unse main kuch puchna chahata hun jinko meri writing aachi nahi lagi yan update pasand nahi ayea
To ap sabke according Adi ko apni behno ke sath keya karna chahiyea
1. Keya behno ki har roj sabke samne insult karni chahiyea
2. Uney baat baat par humiliate karna chahiyea
3. Jab vo baat karne aye kya un par hath uthana chahiyea
4. Yan fir unki saza unke sath rape karke deyni chahiyea
5. Yan uney jaan se hi maar deyna chahiyea, na rahe gi behne na unka jikar aye ga
Ap sab batayea inme se konsa point agar main add karu to story padhne me maza aye ga?
Main batau ik bi nahi agar isme se ik bi point ayea to story itni ghatiya ho jaye gi ki main khud nahi likh payu ga.

Dusari baat
Ik bhai jisey bachpan se le ke badey honey tak uski behno ne usey itna pyaar diya to keya vo apni behno ke sath kuch bura kar sakta hai, mana gussa hai naraj hai chalo thodi bohat nafart bi karta hai par hai to ik bhai hi, vo to bs chahata hai sabko pata chale usne keya saha hai
Bhai choti behno ki baat main to nahi tal sakta real life me bi to story me character keyse tal sakta hai, uper se jab dono ko vo itna pyaar karta ho, agar dono ke liye itni logo ki jaan le sakta hai to unke liye ghar nahi ja sakta
Mana story main super powers vala area hai par story hai to human ke uper hi isme konsa koyi aliens hai jinki feelings kuch aur hongi

Tesari baat
Bhai ye revenge story nahi jisme hero apni insult ka badla apni family se leyne ayea hai,
Hero keh raha hai apni family se tum sabne meri bezati ki 2 saal mujey nafrat di main tumey jaan se mar dunga
Eysa kuch nahi hoga bhai, agar eysa kuch mujse expect kar rahe ho to main pehle hi bata dun eysa ik bi scene story me nahi aye ga
Bhai title incest hai agar hero family se nafrat hi karta rahe ga to fir ye title ka keya matlab

Chothi baat
Bhai mujey ye bi samja do nafrat keyse dikhayi jati hai, mere hisab se to jabtak 2 log apse me baat nahi karte ik dusare ke samne nahi atey tabtak unme se kisi ik ko pata keyse chale ga dusara us se nafrat karta hai
Apke according to ye hoga
adi apne ghar betha hai aur uski behne apne ghar, adi ghar par beth khud se keh raha hai main ap sabse nafrat karta hun, aur uski behne apne ghar bethi khud se batey karte huye adi ko mana rahi hai
Yan adi ik table par betha hai clg me aur uski behne 3 4 table chhod ke bethi hai dono ik dusare ik tarf dekh nahi rahe par vahi bethe bethe adi nafrat dikha raha hai aur uski behne mana rahi hai
agar ap eysa kuch padhna chahte ho to fir to sachi me mujey likhna nahi ata ap me se koyi mujey eysa kuch likh ke send kar do jisme 2 logo ik dusare se nafrat karte hai par vo ik dusare se milte nahi ik dusare me samne nahi jatey par ik dusare ko bina miley apni nafart dikhate hai tan jo mujey likhna aa sake fir main next update post karta hun
Agar meri koyi baat buri lagi ho to maffi chahunga

Bahi aap jaise likh rehe ho waise hii likhte rahiye 2 4 longo k bol se kuch nahi hota hame tow achchi lag rahi aapki likhayi kich change kerne ki zaroorat nahi h dost

 

[Ayush2017]

Awesome

 

[Vishald]

Fantastic update

Bahot badhiya likhe ho bhai. Keep going.
Bas nafrat kam na hone pae.

 

[pakibest]

Nice Update

 

[manoj98134]

bhai mujhe aapki story bohat pasand hai. adi ki sister uske pair pakdne ki koshis kare is update main us say maafi mangne kai leye. or adi ki unhai maaf kar daina chaiye.

 

[Anandlive]

Ha bhai En sab bato ko mat socho sabhi se nafrat karto ho lakin sona se nai karte na uske liye aap birthday me ja rahe ho eska matlab to ye nai ki nafrat khatm ho gaya aapne 4 sal famely se dur rahe hai lakin enka to abhi start he hua hai aap bas likho bhai bahut achi ja rahi hai story aur mujhe pata etni jaldi maf nai kroge aap unko aur karna v nai chahiye jo apne bacho aur bhaiyo pe viswas na ho esse aapko koi fark nai padna chahiye

 

[Anandlive]

Bas aap jaldi jaldi update do bhai aur kuch nai

 

[King519king]

Waitingbro

 

[bd sharkar]

Bhai aap ki kahani to bahut acchi hai per aap usko Hindi font Mein likhen To bahut Achcha lagega Hindi mein Kahani padhne ka Lagi maja Aata Hai koshish Karega please

Ap neey thik kaha..lekin jisko Hindi padana mehi ATA uska Kiya?? Xp ke maximum writer isley hinglish Mey likhtey hey isley Kiki Sab ko stroy padney ke andand mile...ap Ke liye dusra Ka hak toh nehi con skata..so jesey writers ney update dete hey usi Mey Khush rah hey...dhannybad..

 

[Akil]

Bro story jaisi chal rahi hai wesi hi rehne dein
Rahi nafrat dikhaane ya humiliate karne ki baat toh bro nafrat ya humilliation ka yeh matlab kabhi nahin hota ki har jagah hi kisi ki insult ki jaaye ya agar koi dusra bina kisi jayaz wajah ke un logon ko pareshaan kar raha ho jo ittefaq se aapke bhi doshi hon aise logon ko aage badh ghalat karne dena bhi sahi nahin hai aur naahi yeh sahi hai ki apni nafrat mein sahi ghalat ko bhi bhulaaya jaaye....
Nafrat aur humilliation kisiko sabaq sikhaane ke liye ist'amaal mein laayi jaati hai.... Aur yeh kaam hero bhali bhanti kar hi raha hai aur rahi baat hero ke apne ghar jane ki toh usmein thoda change kiya ja sakta hai ki har chhote bade mauq'e par woh wahaan na jaye... Par yahan bhi aapka tareeqa sahi hai ki hero apne ghar jakar bhi nahin jata i mean bahut kum der wahaan rukta hai.... And apni chhoti behanon aur dost ke 'a'lawa kisi se sarokaar nahin rakhta siwaye thoda bahut apne bhai ke