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Sabse pehle to update no 51 ka review na dene ke liye sorry. Jaise ki pichale update me aapne sirf us kitab se judi hui bate he batayi thi jisame komal ko us shrap ke bare me pata chala jisase use sakti milti thi. Aur ye to sahi he ki jab bhi bhuwan par humla hua tabhi komal ki sakti jaagi jaise college ke pehle din hua tha aur fir us raat jab usane MLA ke ladke ko kata tha. To us kitab ke mutabik sakti dharan karne wali aurat ko sachha pyaar milega to usake pyaar ki wajah se usaki sakti kam hoti rahegi. To mera sawalnye he ki komal to bhuwan ke sath itane saal se reh rahi he to kya usaki sakti kam nahi hui. Aur aarti ko sonu ke rup me apna sachha pyaar nahi dikha abhi tak. Ab jab sonu ko apne is sawal ka jawab mil gya he to kya wo bhabhi ke sath apne pyaar ko aage bhadayega. Lekin ek baat aur bhi he ki agar bhabhi aur sonu apne 2 pyaar ko pehchanane ke baad bhi sirf pehle jaisa dewar bhabhi wale pyaar tak hi simit rahe aur unke koi bhi ladki na ho to ye shrap apne aap khatam ho jayega. Sonu aur neha sadi kar le aur bhabhi ke sath pyaar se rahe. Bas sonu bhabhi ke sath jismani sambandh na banaye. Aur mujhe lagta he ki yahi hoga.Update 52flashback over
“to kya uske baad aapne un logo ko chhod diya “
Is bar maine prashn kiya tha , komal ne mere ankho me dhyan se dekha aur fir apni beti yani bhabhi ko bade hi pyar se dekha ..
“ha bachcho , uske bad hi maine aur Bhuwan ne ye faisala kar liya tha ki ham dono in sabse dur chale jayenge , main aur katale aam nahi karna chahti thi , isliye ham dono ne ganw me aakar basane ka faisala kiya ..
Aur rato rat hi wanha se bhaag gaye ,aur Bhuwan ke sath rahte rahte main shant hote gayi , ye sakti badi hi ajib chij hai .. prem se hi jagati hai aur premi ke sath shanti se rahne par dheere dheere ye kam hote jati hai aur ant me khatm ho jati hai …. Shayd meri maa isiliye maari gayi kyoki unki sakti khatm ho chuki thi “
Ham sabhi raat se baithe the abhi subah ke 6 baj chuke the , chaay aa chuki thi aur chuskiyo ke sath sabhi apne apne khayalo me kho gaye the …abhi hame bahut kuchh janna baki tha lekin sabse bada sawaal jo mere dil me aa raha tha wo ye tha ki kya bhabhi me bhi wo takat hogi aur akhir kon hoga unka ashiq ..??
Bhaiya to nahi the ye bat to saaf thi , ager wo hote to abhi tak unme ye power jaag gayi hoti , kahe anusar bhabhi us premi ko nahi pahchan payegi lekin wo usse milan ko bekraar rahega , akhir koun hai jo unse milan ko bekraar rahta hai …??
Main soch me pada tha ki meri najar bhabhi par gayi , wo mujhe ajib nigaho se dekh rahi thi aur mere dil me ek bijali si koundh gayi ………
Main …………
Ha main ……
Main hi to wo ashiq hu … main hi to bhabhi se milan ke liye bekrar rahta hu , main bhabhi ke liye waisa hi hu jaisa komal ke liye Bhuwan tha , jisse bhabhi bhi bahut pyar karti hai lekin us pyar ka naam kuch alag tha , yahi Bhuwan ke sath bhi tha , Bhuwan komal ko pyar karta tha ,use apna banana chahta tha , maje ki bat ye hai ki komal bhi use pyar karti thi lekin uske pyar ko kabhi pahchan nahi paayi , jab tak ki use Tiwari ki bewafai ke bare me nahi pata chal gaya , aur Bhuwan par hi hamla hone par komal ki sakti bahar aayi thi ………?
Yahi same case to mere aur bhabhi ke sath bhi tha , bhabhi ko hamesha hi laga ki wo bhaiya se pyar karti hai , lekin asal me wo mujhse bhai se bhi jyada pyar karti thi, lekin us pyar ka Swaroop kuch aalag hi tha …
Shayd hamare bich jo akarshan hai , wo isi ki or sanket de raha hai ki ham ek dusare ke liye hi hai .. lekin main bhabhi ke liye hu to fir Neha ?? Neha ka kya hoga ..
Meri najar Neha par padi , wo bhi bade hi gahare soch me doobi hui mujhe dekh rahi thi , naa jane uske dil me kya chal raha ho ..
Tabhi mere phone ka ring baja , ye Akki tha …
“Akki itane subah subah kaise phone kar raha hai “
Maine apne man me hi kaha
“hello bro “
“bhai ek ajib chij ho gayi “
“kya ..?”
“yaar mujhe kisi ne dhamki di hai, wo khud ko Shiva batata hai , wahi jisne itane sare katl kiye hai ,wo bol raha tha ki jis ladki se main jyda mil jul raha hu usse na milu warna mujhe bhi waise hi maar dalega jaise ** ganw me logo ko maara tha, wo ye bhi bol raha ha ki jis aourat ganw me wo log pakde hai wo asali Shiva nahi hai asali Shiva to wo hai …….”
Akki ki bat sunkar mere chahre ka rang hi ud gaya tha ,
“tune ye bat aur kisi ko batai kya ??”
“ha sus ko batai thi , usi ne kaha ki tumhe call karu ..”
“okk main tujhe ek no. de raha hu usse bat kar le mera naam batana aur puri bat bata dena… aur ek chij bata aaj kal kya tu sus ke sath jyda ghum raha hai “
“ha tu aur Neha jab se ynha se gaye ho tab se sus ke sath hi ghumta hu , uske sath hi tuition jata hu aur aajkal wo mujhe college ke liye lene bhi aa rahi hai “
Maine ek gahri sans li aur use na darne ka bolkar Kajal ka no. de diya ……
“kya hua “
Bhabhi ke pochhne par maine sari bat bata di
“kya ..?? lekin Shiva bankar to katal komal hi kar rahi thi na ..??”
Neha chilla uthi thi ..
Wahi komal ne Neha ko ajib nigaho se dekha
“tum pagal ho gayi ho kya , maine kab kaha ki main katl kar rahi thi .. maine to bas ye bataya ki main hi sakti thi , aur ha abhi ganw me jo Chanchal ko fasaay tha usme mera hath jarur tha , ye kaam maine aur sonu ne milkar kiya tha .. lekin baki ke katal se mera koi lena dena nahi hai “
Unki bat sunkar sabhi ke chahre ka rang ud gaya tha , abhi tak to sabhi unhe hi wo katil samjh rahe the jisne shahar me bhi Shiva ke naam se katal kiye the ..
“abhi bhi phone karne wala mard hi tha aur sabhi katal to ek aourat ne kiye hai , aisa phone mujhe bhi aaya tha jab main sus ke sath jyada ghum raha tha mere khayal se iske pichhe sus ke bhai sager bhi ho sakta hai kyoki wo sus ke pichhe pagal hai “
“un sabka pata Kajal laga legi , tum log abhi thoda aaram kar lo raat bhar se jaag rahe ho “
Is bat bolne wala Dr. tha …
Ham sabhi ne haa me sar hilaa diya .. aur apne apne kamre me chale gaye , abhi bhi bahut sari bate khulani baki thi , shayd aaj ki mahfil me baki ki bate pata chale ……
Dophar ka waqt tha ham sabhi fir se ek jagah ikaththe hue the abhi bahut sari bate Janani bachi thi …
“to aap logo ne bataya nahi ki komal ji aapke sath kab se thi “
Maine sabse puchha , bhabhi aur mahima (Neha ki maa) ne ek dusare ko dekha ..
Fir mahima bol padi
“shuruwat to tumhe hi karni chahiye Ankit “
Maine muskurate hue komal ki or dekha unhone bhi ankho ke ishare se mujhe aage badne ki hami de di ..
“humm bat tab ki hai jab bhabhi aur bhaiya ki shadi hui , uske bad se hi main kabhi kabhi college ki tarh ghumane jata to inki chay ki dukaan me jarur jata tha , wanha ye(komal ) mujhe pyar se biscuit, ya samoshe khilaya karti thi ,isliye main aur mere dost free ki biscuit ya samoshe khane pahuch jate the …aur ye kyoki meri bhabhi maa ki tarh dikhati thi mujhe inke pas jana aur bhi achcha lagta tha…
Ganw chhodne ke bad mujhe kabhi kabhi inki chinta hote rahti thi ki kahi bhaiya inpar bhi apna gussa na dikha de ..
Jab us din main apne dosto ke paas ganw gaya tha aur wanha se lout raha tha to ynha aane ke bad main fir se wapas ganw chala gaya , main un logo ko jaan se maar dena chahta tha jinhone meri bhabhi aur bhai ki ye halt kar di thi , main wapas ja hi raha tha ki mujhe ye mil gayi .. ye Dr. ke bulawe par wapas aa rahi thi , main behad nashe me tha aur maine inhe bataya ki main Chanchal ka katal karna chahta hu , to inhone meri madad ki bat ki , mujhe laga ki yahi Shiva bhi hai aur isliye logo ko maarna inke liye koi badi bat nahi hogi, to ham dono milkar mere purane gahar pahuch gaye… main apne ghar ke bare me achche se janta tha isliye mujhe jyda dikkat nahi hui aur jo hua wo aap sabke samne hai …….”
Sabhi ne ek bar komal ki taraf dekha jo ki halke halke muskura rahi thi ..
“dekho maine us din sonu ki madad isliye ki kyoki un logo ki wajah se meri beti ko ye din dekhna pada tha, wo to main is ganw me nahi thi warna in logo ko pahle hi sabak sikha deti … lekin main Shiva nahi hu , bas is katal ke liye Shiva ka naam liya tha “
Komal ne bade hi masoom se andaaj me kaha , itane logo ko gajar muli ki tarh katane wali masoom si komal
“aur aap dono .. aapko ye kab mil gayi thi “
Maine bhabhi aur Mahima ( meri sas) ko dekhte hue kaha ..
Dono ke chahre khail gaye the ..
“to pahle koun batayega “
Bhabhi ne Mahima ki or dekha …
Aur Mahima ke kahna shuru kiya …………
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amazing update hai dr sahab,