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Sci-FI Treasure ~~ "The Invisible Hunt" {Completed}

Does Anyone read Sci-fi Treasure Story ? (Is Yes, discuss on this thread)


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harshit1890

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3.5 Saal se kahani ki tayari kar raha tha, Pichla platform chhuta to kabhi likhne ke barre mein socha nahi par jab kahani ka plot bana aur corona ka asar dunia mein badha to zindagi ki bhag daudh se kuch rahat mili aur mene is kahani ko sabke bich lane ka faisla kiya. Ek aisa chetra tha jisme mene abhi tak koi kahani nahi likhi thi aur ye meri lekhan ki ek akhri script aur genre hai jise mein kosish karunga ki ache se likh sakun. Umeed karunga kuch purane sathi yahan milenge aur kuch naye judhenge.

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" niche aa sakte ho, jahan pahunchna tha vahan aa gaye shayad " vikrant torch jala kar dekhne laga jahan vo gira tha us zameen se hote hue sidiyan niche ki taraf jaa rahi thi kitni niche ye nahi dikha. Kuch hi pal mein akshad aur pratiksha bhi aa gaye, rassi se hath chilne ki wajah se akshad ke hathon se nikalte khoon par pratiksha bandage kar rahi thi. " hume ab chalna hoga " dono ki taraf dekhte hue vo bola aur teeno apna apna saman lekar torch ki roshni se charaon taraf dekhte hue sidiyan utarne lage. Sidiyan gol akar mein bani hui thi aur itni gehri thi ki uska ant nahi dikh raha tha. Akshad andaza lagane ki kosish kar raha tha lekin vo zameen ke itne niche aa pahunche the ki ek waqt akar usne andaza lagana hi band kar diya. Bich-bich mein vo dono rukte lekin vikrant nahi ruka. Uske zehan mein bas ek hi chiz thi vo treasure jo use khojna tha har haal mein. Akhir sidiyan khatam hui lekin samne dekh rukna pada.

Jahan vo khade the vo zameen kafi badi thi aur aisa nahi tha ki vo samne dekh nahi sakte the, roshni ki madad se vo dekh sakte the ki samne bhi us paar zameen hai lekin jane ke liye bich mein pathar ke pillar the jo thodi-thodi dur par bane the par itne bade nahi ki aram se kud-kud kar jaya jaye.

" ab ? " pratiksha fulti sanson se boli " rasta samne hai lekin jaye kaise "

" jab rasta samne hai to jayenge bhi " vikrant baith kar bag kholne laga. Usne usme se crossbow jaisi ek cheez nikali aur rassi par huk laga kar uska sira use bandh dia. Vo khada hua aur uske uppar torch rakh kar samne ki taraf dekhne laga. Ek pal vo dekhta raha phir clip khinch di. Rassi usme se tezi se nikalti hui samne ki taraf gayi aur zameen par pade rassi ke bundle se rassi tezi se khatam hone lagi par tabhi ek awaz ayi aur rassi khinchni band ho gayi. Vikrant ne rassi ko khinch kar dekha to vo fans chuki thi phir usne rassa ka dusra chhor pakda aur piche sidiyun par ek hukkar gaad kar usme rassi fansa di. Usne kuch hi pal mein ek rasta bana diya jo kaam namumkin jaisa lag raha tha ab mumkin lag raha tha.

" pehle kaun jayega ? " vikrant ne sawal kiya to ek pal koi kuch nahi bola.

" mei jatti hun " vikrant samne se hata aur jane ka rasta de dia. Pratiksha ghabrai hui si bhi thi lekin utsukta man mein bhari hui thi. Usne ek pal akshad ki taraf dekha aur phir aage badhi. Usne pehle rassi pakdi aur torch muh mein daba li. Ek pal niche ki taraf dekha to dil zoron se dhadakne laga phir use yaad aya ki niche nahi dekhna samne dekha hai. Usne apna per uthaya aur pehle pathar par rakh diya. Ab vo nikal chuki thi aur piche jane ka sawal hi nahi tha. Usne uppar rassi ko majbuti se pakad rakha tha, vo dubara kudi aur is baar ladkhda gayi aur niche girne lagi par rasi ke pakad ki wajah se aur vo uspar jhul si gayi.

" aram aram se pratiksha jaldi nahi hai " akshad ne use yaad dilaya tab use apni galti ka ehsas hua. Iske baad vo dhire-dhire kudti hui aage badhti gayi aur akhirkar apni manzil tak pahunch gayi jiske baad vo lambi-lambi sansein lene lagi. Pratiksha ke us taraf pahunchte hi vikrant ne akshad ko jane ke liye kaha to vo bhi aram-aram se usi tarah dusri taraf pahunch gaya. Ab vikrant ki bari thi usne apne kandhe par bag ko theek kiya aur dhire-dhire aage badhne laga, jaise jaise vo aage badh raha tha vaise-vaise uske dil ki dhadkan badhti jaa rahi thi. Kuch hi der mein vo bhi vahan sahi salamat aa kahda hua aur samne dekh uski ankhein hairani mein khul gayi.

" ye darwaja " vo darwaja kuch usi tarah ka tha jaisa usne pehle dekha tha " vo treasure isi ke piche hai " vikrant ki baat sunte hi akshad ki ankhein badi ho gayi.

" are you sure ? "

" han us waqt bhi kuch aisa hi darwaja tha " vikrant ne uspar bani akriti dekhte hue kaha. " ye wahi akshar hai jaise dad ki kitab mein the aur is kagaz par bhi " usne vo kagaz ka tukda nikala jo us din uske dad hath mein dene ke baad gayab ho gaye the. " kya kar rahe ho ? " akshad ko darwaje par dhakka lagate dekh vikrant bol pada.

" kholne ki kosish " vo abhi bhi dum laga raha tha.

" ye aise nahi khulega ispar jarur kuch " vikrant bolte hue ruk gaya, darwaje ke bichon-bich ek khali jagah chutti hui thi jaise jaan kar chhodi gayi ho. Vikrant ne fauran bag se key bahar nikali jise akshad bahar hi chhod dena chahta tha. Usne key ko us jagah par rakha lekin kuch nahi hua, vo janta tha yahan bhi ghumana padega usne wesa hi kiya aur use ghuma diya jiske ghumte hi vo key andar ki taraf ghus gayi aur darwaje par itni zor se awaz ayi mano aaj tak khola hi nahi gaya ho. Miti jhad kar niche girne lagi aur akhir darwaja khul gaya. Uske khulte hi vikrant ne us key ko vapis nikalne ki kosish ki par vo andar dhas chuki thi.

Shayad iski asli jagah yahi thi. Vikrant ne use wahin chhod apna kadam andar rakhe, andar akshad aur pratiksha jaa chuke the aur ek kone par akshad ne jaise hi aag lagai vo us boundary par failti hui kamre ke charon taraf felh gayi aur aag se kamre mein jo roshni hui use kamra jagma utha.

" wahi kamra " vikrant dekhte hi bol pada aur uske samne us pal ki sarri yaad vapis aa gayi. Uske dad ka gayab hona jaise sab uski ankhon ke aage dubara ghat gaya. Kamra wahi tha lekin dad ab uske sath nahi the. Vo abhi apne dad ke bare mein soch raha tha ki pratiksha ki awaz se uska dhayan tuta.

" udhar dekho wahan kuch hai " pratiksha ek taraf dekh rahi thi to akshad bhi wahin dekhne laga " kisi ki tasveer guddi hui hai deewar mein " vikrant ne jab ye vakya suna to use apna vo din yaad aa gaya jab usne bhi aisa hi kuch dekha tha. Vikrant unke piche tha yani wahan jahan us din uske dad khade the, usne dono se nazar hatai aur zameen ki taraf dekhne laga. Us din bhi wahan kuch nahi tha lekin jab vo ghuma tha to box chabutre par rakha hua tha. Vo niche baitha aur farsh se mitti hata kar tatlone laga lekin kuch nahi mila to aage badhta hua deewar par hath marne laga aur achanak uska hath kisi chiz se takraya. Vo ek leever tha jo deewar se bahar ki taraf nikla hua tha usne use khinch diya to achanak se zameen par se ek pathar sidha khada ho gaya jo ek dum uske chehre ke pas akar ruka. Usne apna chehra piche se aage kiya to ankhon ke samne pathar ka chabutra bahar aa nikla jispar wesa hi box rakha hua tha jaisa uske pas tha par is bar iska deisgn kuch alag tha.

Vikrant apni jagah se khada hua aur ek pal vo use dekhta raha, phir usne box ko apne hath se chuha, uspar bhi ek key lagi thi lekin uska design pehle wale ke mukable alag tha. Box halka halka aag ki roshni mein chamak raha tha, usne use ek pal dekhne ke baad khol dia. Dil zoron se dhadak raha tha, pichli baar vo khali tha lekin jaise hi usne ye wala khola uski ankhon ki putli mein us chiz ki chamak tairne lagi.

Vo ek lal rang ka stone jaisa tha jiska koi satik akar nai tha par vo behad chamak raha tha. Vikrant kuch pal bas yun hi use dekhna chahta tha phir utha kar dekhne laga, dekhte hue jab usne use palta to ankhein us par jam gayi. Stone ke pichla hissa aage walle hisse se bilkul alag tha, uspar kuch laga hua tha jaise koi cheez chipki ho, samjhne ke liye usne stone ko ankhon ke najdeek kiya aur jaise hi use apne pas kiya us stone par vo lagi chiz hilne lagi aur vikrant ki ankhein usi tarah khuli reh gayi aur phir uske baad uski ankhon mein waqt ka pura paiyan ulta daud gaya, insan, janwar, vatavaran, jharne nadiya, samundar, dharti ka nirman aur phir antriksh bhraman, tarre, greh aur unke up greh, galaxy aur phir kahani piche jate-jate aage ayi, bharman mein bhisfot, grehon ka janam, dharti ka janam, uska nirman aur dharti ki taraf badhte hue meteor. Achanak hi vo us pal se bahar aa nikla, uske kaan sunn ho chuke the, samne khada akshad uski taraf dekh raha tha aur use awaz laga raha tha lekin vikrant ko kuch sunai nahi de raha tha. Uska dimag jaise sochne ki shakti kho baitha tha, abhi ek hi minute mein usne jaise is anantkal bharhman ko jaan liya tha. Nazar akshad par thi jiske hath mein box tha " dad " uske muh se yahi nikla aur jab agle pal use hosh aya to uski nazar akshad par jami reh gayi.

Akshad ne box ko utha rakha tha, uski nazar us key par thi jo box par lagi hui thi, akshad ne use ghumaya aur use bahar nikal dia.

" nooooooooooooooooooo " vikrant bas chilla paya aur ek safed roshni ne uski ankhon ko gher liya aur phir vo behosh ho gaya.

" annhh-hhhh " achanak se meri ankh khuli lekin ankhon ke aage dhundla pan tha isliye mene unhe dubara band karke phir khola. Ankhon ke Samne ek chehra mujhe dekhte hue kuch keh raha tha lekin mujhe samajh nahi aya aur mei dubara behosh ho gaya. Agli baar jab ankh khuli to is baar nazara saaf tha, chat par ek pankha dhire-dhire chal raha tha aur ek ajeeb si gandh mere naak mein ghus rahi thi. Mei fauran uth baitha par agle hi pal tez dard dimag mein tehar sa gaya. Mene apna sar pakad kar ek baar jhatka aur phir dusri taraf dekha, ek aurat apne bache ko dant rahi thi shayad vo dawai nahi le raha tha.

Dawai? mei badabdaya aur apne aas pass dekha, ek bada sa hall tha jahan par bahut sare log bed par laite hue the. Mei hospital mein tha lekin kab aya? Mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahi aa raha mene sochne ki kosish ki par phir dimag mein gehra dard utha. Mei apni jagah se khada hua dard abhi bhi bahut tez tha lekin ruka nahi aur chalta hua vahan se bahar nikla aur phir hospital se bahar nikal gaya. Bahar nikalte hi suraj ki roshni mein ankhein chaundiya gayi. Mene ankhon se dhire-dhire apna hath hataya aur apne aas pass ki chizon ko dekhne laga. Sadak par rikshaw chal rahi thi, nazar unke kapdon par gayi jo behad ajeeb lag rahe the phir sath mein baithe ek ladke par jise ek admi juta polish karwa raha tha. Kahan hun mein ? sochte hue sar chakrane laga to mei hospital ki taraf dubara muda aur andar aa gaya. Kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha na hi kuch yaad aur bich-bich mein badhta hua ye sar ka dard.

' Ah-hh ' ek baar phir dimag jhalaya mano kuch chal raha ho andar. Mei apne ward ki taraf badh raha tha ki meri nazar reception par gayi jahan dekhte hi mei ruk gaya aur us taraf badh chala " kya kaam hai ? " mujhe ek tuk deewar par ghurte hue dekh nurse boli.

" ye kaun sa saal hai "

" samne dikhta nahi hai kya, 1985 " nurse boli aur mei use ghurne laga uske baad usne kayi sawal kiye mujhse ki mei kaun se ward mein hun? kaun hai mere sath aur na jane kya kya jinhe sunne se pehle mei behosh ho chuka tha.
 

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:yikes::yikes::yikes::yikes::yikes::yikes::yikes::yikes:
Kya ho gaya ye...ye toh kisi ne bhi nahi socha hoga:wtf:
Unpredictible:bow::bow::bow:
Starting mein laga ki Treasure ke pass pahaunch hee gaye...Pratiksha bhi kaafi strong nikli :approve:
Aur fir se vahi darwaza jahan vo apne dad ke saath aaya tha:approve:
" wahi kamra " vikrant dekhte hi bol pada aur uske samne us pal ki sarri yaad vapis aa gayi.
Kamra bhi vahi hai...matlab isi jagah se gayab hue the uske dad:approve:
Bcc...sara chakkar uss box ka aur key ka hai:what1:....abb samhaj aa gaya hai:approve:
Iske baad jo jhatka laga hai...hila diya:yikes:

Akshad ne box ko utha rakha tha, uski nazar us key par thi jo box par lagi hui thi, akshad ne use ghumaya aur use bahar nikal dia.
Lag gaye L:what1::what1:
" ye kaun sa saal hai "
" samne dikhta nahi hai kya, 1985 "

Bcc...Ankit ki galiyan dene ka mann kar raha hai :shout:
Time Travel......ye toh kisi ne nahi socha hoga...ki Treasure ka koi relation time travel se bhi hoga:sigh::sigh:
Kahan aa gaya Ankit....kya uske dad bhi yahin hai...aur Akshad kya karega abb...kaafi saare sawal hain:?::?:
Sabse main sawal ki Treasure aur Time Travel ka Kya lena dena hai:banghead:
Waiting for next..dimag hil gaya:daru:
 

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Vikrant jungle ki taraf dekhte hue muda to akshad boat walle ko kuch keh raha tha. Use ek-ek pal ab intezar karna thoda mushkil ho raha tha, dimag mein bas do sawal the pehla ki agar dad yahan mile to vo yahan kaise aye aur tabse yahan kya kar rahe hain aur dusra ki agar vo yahan nahi mile to phir vo aage kya karega?

" kya kuch aisa hi tha us waqt bhi ? " akshad ki awaz sun kar vikrant hosh mein aya.

" jungle ka koi roop nahi hota, ab chalein? " vikrant ki baat par akshad ne hami bhari aur teeno jungle ki gehrai mein ghuste gaye. Andhera bhale hi abhi nahi hua tha lekin jungle ke andar roshni na ke barabar thi. Vikrant compass ki madad se aage badta hua paidon par nishan laga raha tha.

" akshad tumhe ye treasure kyun chahie ? "

" tum janti ho is jagah ki khoj kab hui ? "

" nahi "

" che saal pehle "

" kya ? to phir yahan par itna purana treasure kaise ho sakta hai "

" wahi to sawal hai itni purani sabhyata ka khajana yahan kya kar raha hai jis jagah ki khoj hi che saal pehle hui aur itna hi nahi iski khabar itne purane map mein pehle se kaise thi, jarur kuch bahut bada chupa hai yahan " akshad aur pratiksha baat karte hue vikrant ke piche chal rahe the. Vikrant ko rukta dekh dono ne apni batein band kar di.

" baarish ane wali hai, apne apne suit pehen lo " vikrant ne kaha aur rain suit pehen kar teeno aage badhe ki baarish eka-ek tez ho gayi. Badlon mein kad-kadati bizli itni tez thi ki kuch duri par ped ke uppar bizli aa giri jiske girte hi dharti kanp uthi. " jaldi chalo " vikrant ne kadam tez kar diye, chalte hue use wahi raat yaad aa rahi thi. Achanak uska compass bigad gaya aur vo charon taraf ghumne laga. " ise kya hua ? " vo ruk gaya aur use theek karne ki kosish karne laga.

" kya hua ? " akshad uske sath khade hote hi bola.

" compass ki magnetic field mein koi interferance hai " usne akshad ko compass dikhaya. " yani jarur aas pass hi hai vo, hum karib hai jaldi chalo " vikrant ne compass pocket mein dala aur usi direction mein dauda. Akshad aur pratiksha uske piche daud pade, vikrant daudta hua jhadiyun mein ghusa aur hath se ped hatate hue daudta gaya, uski sans ful rahi thi, ek pal piche atte akshad aur pratiksha ki bhi usne koi chinta nahi ki vo bhagta raha aur phir jhadiyun ke us paar nikalte hi uske kadam ruk gaye. Muh se tez chalti sanson ki awaz baarish ke shor mein gum ho rahi thi. Eka-ek bizli kadki aur uski ankhon ke aage roshni se usne vo dekha jise dekhne ke liye vo kab se bechain tha.

" hum pahunche gaye " akshad aur pratiksha ki ukhdi sanson ko sunte hi vo bola jo abhi-abhi uske sath aa kahde hue the.

Pass pahunch kar dekha to do pillar ke bich ek rasta andar ki taraf jaa raha tha, vikrant ne roshni se uske pathar ko dekha aur uski mitti ko jise dekh use samajh aya ki ye jagah utni purani nahi hai jitni usne dad ke sath dekhi thi. Vikrant dekhne ke baad us raste se andar chal diya. Dono taraf ki jagah khali thi aur baarish ke pani se bhar rahi thi, kuch hi dur chalne par vo ek jagah akar ruk gaya. Samne kuch sidiyan bani hui thi aur uske dono taraf badi badi akriti bani hui thi jiske piche deewar thi aur andar jane ke liye rasta bhi par rasta anjan tha yani kahan se tha vo dikhai nai de raha tha.

" akshad ek baar dekh kar aao ki koi aur rasta bana hai " vikrant ne sidiyan chad kar jab samne deewar dekhi to usne akshad ko dusra rasta khojne ke liye kaha aur tab tak vo vahin khada deewar ko dhayan se dekhne laga. Baarish ki vajah se deewar par bani akriti ke uppar mitti utar ayi thi isliye kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha. Vikrant ne phir dhayan se dekhna shuru kiya lekin kuch nahi mila. Vo vapis niche utar aya aur torch se bani hui akrityun ko dekhne laga jo shayad koi insan ki hi thi par chehra samajh nahi aa raha tha. Usne kaha to akshad ko tha par pratiksha bhi dusri taraf se jakar rasta khojne nikal chuki thi.

" koi rasta nahi hai " roshni mein akshad use ata hua dikha aur atte hi usne kaha. Kuch hi pal baad pratiksha bhi vapis aa gayi jise bhi rasta nahi mila. " vikrant jagah jada badhi bhi nahi hai aisa lag raha hai jaise bas kisi ne deewar khadi kar di ho " akshad ki baat sun pratiksha ne bhi use yahi kaha. Ye baat vikrant bhi samajh raha tha ki jagah vaisi nahi thi jaisi usne sochi thi.

" is it good for nothing ? " pratiksha boli par vikrant ne use koi jawab nahi diya. Vo janta tha ki chiz samne hai par samajh nahi aa rahi, itna sab bekar nahi ho sakta. Vo thoda aage badha aur phir jo itni der se kuch dhundne ki kosish kar raha tha usme use kuch dikha. Vahi akriti jo sidiyun ke dono taraf bani hui thi. Vikrant jhuk kar wahan baitha aur dhayan se dekhne laga jise dekh vo fauran samajh gaya. Usne apna bag kandhe se utara aur aur usme se vahi key nikali jo treasure box se mili thi. Key ko usne deewar ke andar lagaya aur use ghuma diya jaise box mein ghumaya tha, ek baar, do baar aur jaise hi tisri baar ghumaya ek shor teeno ke kano mein pada. Nazar utha kar jab vikrant ne dekha to akriti ke piche ki deewar bich mein se khulne lagi aur ek bada hissa uppar ki taraf uth gaya.

" unbelievable " pratiksha ne aisa pehli baar dekha tha.

" yani ye jagah use judi hai " akshad bol pada. Vikrant ne bina kuch kahe key ko deewar par ghumaya aur bahar nikal kar khada ho gaya. Usne jaise hi aisa kiya akshad aur pratiksha ke badhte kadam ruk gaye. Jo darwaja deewar mein khula tha vo band hone laga.

" ye band ho raha hai, yani tumhe us key ko wahin laga chhodna hoga " akshad ne vikrant ki taraf dekha. Vikrant ne key ko vapis deewar par lagaya aur usi tarah ghuma diya. Darwaja phir khulne laga " tum dono andar jao "

" tum ? " akshad ne pucha.

" mei key nahi chhod sakta "

" par ? "

" tum chalo mei ata hun " vikrant ki baat maan kar akshad aur pratiksha phir aage badhe aur dono andar jaa khade hue aur ghum kar vikrant ki taraf dekhne lage. Vikrant ne khade-khade hi key ko ghuma kar bahar khincha aur bhaga. Deewar niche ani shuru ho gayi, vo sidiyan chada aur adhi deewar niche thi jiske baad vo tezzi se niche zamen par fisla aur deewar ke niche se uska sar piste hue bacha lekin vo andar pahunch gaya. Andar ghuste hi deewar band ho gayi, vo kuch der zameen par hi pada raha aur hanfne laga.

" is key ke liye itna bada risk ? " akshad ek pal baad bola.

" jo chiz bahar chhodne par majbur kar de uspar bharosa nahi kiya ja sakta " vikrant apni jagah se khada hua aur apna rain suit utarne laga. Use dekh akshad aur pratiksha ko bhi yaad aya to unhone bhi use utar kar wahin rakh diya. Teeno bahut pass khade the, pratiksha ki nazar vikrant par thi jo bag mein us key ko vapis dal raha tha, use dekhte hue vo andhere mein roshni dalte hue mudi aur aage badhne lagi, bahar se to ye jagah choti thi lekin andar se iski gehrai jada lag rahi hai. Sochte hue usne do kadam aage badhaye taki vo is andhere mein chupi jagah ka jayza le sake ki tabhi vikrant ne uska hath pakad liya.

" ee-hhhhh " uske muh se ek cheekh nikli aur hath se torch gir gayi jiske sath jab usne niche dekha to torch ki roshni niche jati hui andhere mein kahin kho gayi.

" har kadam par ankhein khuli rakho varna pata nahi chalega kahan gayi " vikrant ne use piche khinch liya. Pratiksha ki to ankhein hairani mein aise khuli thi mano maut ko chu kar ayi ho. Ek kadam use niche gheraiyun mein gira deta, vo vapis ghumi aur vikrant ki taraf dekhne lagi jisne abhi uski jaan bachai thi.

" aage jane ka to rasta nahi hai " akshad us kone tak aya jahan pratiksha girte hue bachi thi " are you ok ? " usne phir use pucha to usne han mein sar hila diya.

" rasta hoga bas ankhon ko dekhna hai " vikrant ne apne samne aur dono taraf glow stick fenkni shuru ki lekin sab niche andhere mein gir kar kho gayi yani teeno taraf koi bhi rasta nahi tha. Akshad ne bhi vikrant ki baat suni aur dhayan se dekhne laga ki tabhi uski nazar uppar ki taraf gayi.

" shayad uppar kuch hai " akshad ke bolte vikrant ne bhi usi taraf dekha jahan vo dekh raha tha. " shayad koi hook hai "

" kis chiz ka ? "

" abhi pata chalega " vikrant ne apne saman se ek choti ball jasi chiz nikali.

" ye kya hai ? " akshad ne pucha par vikrant ne use us hook ki taraf fenk diya. Ek chota blast sa hua aur kuch pathar ke tukde tut kar niche girne lagi, sabhi ne apna sar chupa liya. Akshad use hairani bhari nazron se dekhne laga par agle pal ek shor hua aur uppar se ek pathar ka bada sa tukda latak gaya jaise fisalne wala jhulla hota hai usi tarah jiske uppari hisse mein khinch kar aage badhane ka zariya bana hua tha lekin dikat ye thi ki unke aur pather ke bich mein kuch duri thi.

" ye to dur hai hum nahi pahunch payenge " pratiksha use dekhte hue boli.

" aur koi option nahi hai, bahar jane ke liye aage hi badna padega varna sari zindagi yahin khadi raho " vikrant ne use samjhaya.

" mei pehle jata hun " akshad ne rassi ko dekha jo uske bich mein latki dikh rahi thi.

" achi baat hai, par rassi ko mat pakdna, pata nahi kitni kamjor hai kitni nahi agar tumne kudte hi use pakda to vo tut bhi sakti hai, apni nazar kone par rakho taki uski madad se uppar chadh sako " akshad ko laga jaise vikrant ne uska man padh liya. Abhi vo bas itna hi bola ki jahan vo khade the vo hissa hilne laga aur aage se ek pathar ka tukda niche gir gaya.

" jaldi " vikrant use dekhte hi bola. Akshad bhi samajh chuka tha, vo thoda piche hua aur gehri sans chhodte hue bhagte hue kuda. Ek pal ke liye sabhi ki sansein ruk gayi, akshad ko hawa mein ek pal dekh kar laga ki vo nahi pahunch payega lekin vo pahunch gaya aur usne ek kona pakad liya aur usko pakad kar uppar chadne ki kosish karne laga.

" akshad jaldi " vikrant chillaya kyun ki unke pas samay kam tha kyun ki zameen tutne ki wajah se vo choti hoti jaa rahi thi. Akshad bhi janta tha ki jaldi karna hai, usne kosish ki par uska hath fisla jise dekh pratiksha chilla padi lekin usne phir kosish ki aur is baar vo uppar chad gaya lekin use aisa laga vo fisal jayega.

" rassi pakdo lekin dabav nahi dalna " akshad ne usi tarah kiya. Kone ko ek hath se pakad kar dusre hath se rassi jo theek bich mein se jaa rahi thi use pakadne laga, kuch hi pal mein vo hath mein aa gayi aur use usne apni taraf khinch liya. " pratiksha tumhari bari "

" mei nahi kar sakti " vo ghabrate hue boli.

" waqt nahi hai, nahi kar paogi to niche gir jaogi lekin kudna padega " vikrant ne use apni taraf khincha " niche mat dekhna varna pakdna bhool jaogi "

" tum kabhi kisi ko advice mat dena " pratiksha ne sans bhari aur phir vo bhagi, janti thi ki use akshad se jada duri tay karni padegi. Vo chillai aur chalang lagai, use laga ki vo nahi pahunch payegi bahut dur reh jayegi lekin vo pahunch gayi aur usne kone ko pakad liya par niche latak gayi " aaaaaaaa... i can't " vo chillai. Par agle pal akshad ne use piche akar hath de diya aur vo use uppar khinchte hue dhire-dhire piche hone laga, per fisal raha tha lekin kisi tarah usne khud ko sambhal rakha tha. Vikrant ne unse nazar hata kar niche dekha, adhi zameen deh chuki thi aur ab bilkul samay nahi tha.

Pratiksha uppar chadh chuki thi par aur intezar karna bhari padh sakta tha isliye vikrant piche hue aur bhagta hua kud pada. Uski nazar bas samne hi thi, vo janta tha pakad lega aur usne dusri chor ka kona pakad liya lekin agle hi pal uska ek hath chhut gaya aur vo hawa mein jhulne laga.

" vikrant " akshad ko laga vo gir gaya lekin agle hi pal usne jawba de diya " mei theek hun tum uppar chado " vikrant janta tha ki uska hath chhut jayega. Akshad ne uski baat suni aur dhire-dhire uppar chadne laga, bich-bich mein vo fisalta to rassi ko pakad leta lekin vo itni kachi thi ki khnchti hui tar-tar hone lagi. Usne ek pal piche dekha pratiksha ghabrayi hui use umeed bhari nazron se dekh rahi thi, akshad ne phir samne nazar ki aur akhir vo uppar pahunch gaya. Jaisa niche se laga tha uppar wesa hi tha, rasiyun ki madad se khinchne par deewar khisak sakti thi. Akshad ne dono hath se rasiyun ko majbuti se hath mein bandha aur ek taraf se khinch kar dusri taraf se chhoda. " aaaaaaaarrrhhhhhhh " pehli hi baar mein itni takat lagi ki uske hath chill gaye par aisa karne ki wajah se deewar khiski lekin bahut thodi. Vikrant ka hath fisalne laga vo kosish karke dusra hath uppar laya aur use pakad kar khoni ke bal lataka lekin sharir namb padne laga aur ise jada takat vo ikhati nahi kar paya.

Akshad ne phir takat lagai aur is baar vo pehle se jada khiska, iske baad vo ruka nahi aur takat lagata gaya, uske kandhe mano jawab de chuke the lekin vo ruka nahi dhire-dhire hi sahi vo manzil tak pahunch gaya. ' dhaaaammmmmm ' awaz ayi aur deewar se takrate hi vikrant ka hath chut gaya aur vo niche gir gaya.

" vikrant " pratiksha uske girte hi chillai lekin agle hi pal vikrant ki awaz sun usne chain ki sans chhodi.
Sab pohch gye jungle ab bano khtroa ke khiladi sab ka watt lgega ? ache se sab ka number ayga aisa na ho ki jungle jungle pta chla chadhi pehan ke ful khila he but svi mehnt kr rhe he fal to milega hi last me vikrant kaha gayab ho gya
 

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" niche aa sakte ho, jahan pahunchna tha vahan aa gaye shayad " vikrant torch jala kar dekhne laga jahan vo gira tha us zameen se hote hue sidiyan niche ki taraf jaa rahi thi kitni niche ye nahi dikha. Kuch hi pal mein akshad aur pratiksha bhi aa gaye, rassi se hath chilne ki wajah se akshad ke hathon se nikalte khoon par pratiksha bandage kar rahi thi. " hume ab chalna hoga " dono ki taraf dekhte hue vo bola aur teeno apna apna saman lekar torch ki roshni se charaon taraf dekhte hue sidiyan utarne lage. Sidiyan gol akar mein bani hui thi aur itni gehri thi ki uska ant nahi dikh raha tha. Akshad andaza lagane ki kosish kar raha tha lekin vo zameen ke itne niche aa pahunche the ki ek waqt akar usne andaza lagana hi band kar diya. Bich-bich mein vo dono rukte lekin vikrant nahi ruka. Uske zehan mein bas ek hi chiz thi vo treasure jo use khojna tha har haal mein. Akhir sidiyan khatam hui lekin samne dekh rukna pada.

Jahan vo khade the vo zameen kafi badi thi aur aisa nahi tha ki vo samne dekh nahi sakte the, roshni ki madad se vo dekh sakte the ki samne bhi us paar zameen hai lekin jane ke liye bich mein pathar ke pillar the jo thodi-thodi dur par bane the par itne bade nahi ki aram se kud-kud kar jaya jaye.

" ab ? " pratiksha fulti sanson se boli " rasta samne hai lekin jaye kaise "

" jab rasta samne hai to jayenge bhi " vikrant baith kar bag kholne laga. Usne usme se crossbow jaisi ek cheez nikali aur rassi par huk laga kar uska sira use bandh dia. Vo khada hua aur uske uppar torch rakh kar samne ki taraf dekhne laga. Ek pal vo dekhta raha phir clip khinch di. Rassi usme se tezi se nikalti hui samne ki taraf gayi aur zameen par pade rassi ke bundle se rassi tezi se khatam hone lagi par tabhi ek awaz ayi aur rassi khinchni band ho gayi. Vikrant ne rassi ko khinch kar dekha to vo fans chuki thi phir usne rassa ka dusra chhor pakda aur piche sidiyun par ek hukkar gaad kar usme rassi fansa di. Usne kuch hi pal mein ek rasta bana diya jo kaam namumkin jaisa lag raha tha ab mumkin lag raha tha.

" pehle kaun jayega ? " vikrant ne sawal kiya to ek pal koi kuch nahi bola.

" mei jatti hun " vikrant samne se hata aur jane ka rasta de dia. Pratiksha ghabrai hui si bhi thi lekin utsukta man mein bhari hui thi. Usne ek pal akshad ki taraf dekha aur phir aage badhi. Usne pehle rassi pakdi aur torch muh mein daba li. Ek pal niche ki taraf dekha to dil zoron se dhadakne laga phir use yaad aya ki niche nahi dekhna samne dekha hai. Usne apna per uthaya aur pehle pathar par rakh diya. Ab vo nikal chuki thi aur piche jane ka sawal hi nahi tha. Usne uppar rassi ko majbuti se pakad rakha tha, vo dubara kudi aur is baar ladkhda gayi aur niche girne lagi par rasi ke pakad ki wajah se aur vo uspar jhul si gayi.

" aram aram se pratiksha jaldi nahi hai " akshad ne use yaad dilaya tab use apni galti ka ehsas hua. Iske baad vo dhire-dhire kudti hui aage badhti gayi aur akhirkar apni manzil tak pahunch gayi jiske baad vo lambi-lambi sansein lene lagi. Pratiksha ke us taraf pahunchte hi vikrant ne akshad ko jane ke liye kaha to vo bhi aram-aram se usi tarah dusri taraf pahunch gaya. Ab vikrant ki bari thi usne apne kandhe par bag ko theek kiya aur dhire-dhire aage badhne laga, jaise jaise vo aage badh raha tha vaise-vaise uske dil ki dhadkan badhti jaa rahi thi. Kuch hi der mein vo bhi vahan sahi salamat aa kahda hua aur samne dekh uski ankhein hairani mein khul gayi.

" ye darwaja " vo darwaja kuch usi tarah ka tha jaisa usne pehle dekha tha " vo treasure isi ke piche hai " vikrant ki baat sunte hi akshad ki ankhein badi ho gayi.

" are you sure ? "

" han us waqt bhi kuch aisa hi darwaja tha " vikrant ne uspar bani akriti dekhte hue kaha. " ye wahi akshar hai jaise dad ki kitab mein the aur is kagaz par bhi " usne vo kagaz ka tukda nikala jo us din uske dad hath mein dene ke baad gayab ho gaye the. " kya kar rahe ho ? " akshad ko darwaje par dhakka lagate dekh vikrant bol pada.

" kholne ki kosish " vo abhi bhi dum laga raha tha.

" ye aise nahi khulega ispar jarur kuch " vikrant bolte hue ruk gaya, darwaje ke bichon-bich ek khali jagah chutti hui thi jaise jaan kar chhodi gayi ho. Vikrant ne fauran bag se key bahar nikali jise akshad bahar hi chhod dena chahta tha. Usne key ko us jagah par rakha lekin kuch nahi hua, vo janta tha yahan bhi ghumana padega usne wesa hi kiya aur use ghuma diya jiske ghumte hi vo key andar ki taraf ghus gayi aur darwaje par itni zor se awaz ayi mano aaj tak khola hi nahi gaya ho. Miti jhad kar niche girne lagi aur akhir darwaja khul gaya. Uske khulte hi vikrant ne us key ko vapis nikalne ki kosish ki par vo andar dhas chuki thi.

Shayad iski asli jagah yahi thi. Vikrant ne use wahin chhod apna kadam andar rakhe, andar akshad aur pratiksha jaa chuke the aur ek kone par akshad ne jaise hi aag lagai vo us boundary par failti hui kamre ke charon taraf felh gayi aur aag se kamre mein jo roshni hui use kamra jagma utha.

" wahi kamra " vikrant dekhte hi bol pada aur uske samne us pal ki sarri yaad vapis aa gayi. Uske dad ka gayab hona jaise sab uski ankhon ke aage dubara ghat gaya. Kamra wahi tha lekin dad ab uske sath nahi the. Vo abhi apne dad ke bare mein soch raha tha ki pratiksha ki awaz se uska dhayan tuta.

" udhar dekho wahan kuch hai " pratiksha ek taraf dekh rahi thi to akshad bhi wahin dekhne laga " kisi ki tasveer guddi hui hai deewar mein " vikrant ne jab ye vakya suna to use apna vo din yaad aa gaya jab usne bhi aisa hi kuch dekha tha. Vikrant unke piche tha yani wahan jahan us din uske dad khade the, usne dono se nazar hatai aur zameen ki taraf dekhne laga. Us din bhi wahan kuch nahi tha lekin jab vo ghuma tha to box chabutre par rakha hua tha. Vo niche baitha aur farsh se mitti hata kar tatlone laga lekin kuch nahi mila to aage badhta hua deewar par hath marne laga aur achanak uska hath kisi chiz se takraya. Vo ek leever tha jo deewar se bahar ki taraf nikla hua tha usne use khinch diya to achanak se zameen par se ek pathar sidha khada ho gaya jo ek dum uske chehre ke pas akar ruka. Usne apna chehra piche se aage kiya to ankhon ke samne pathar ka chabutra bahar aa nikla jispar wesa hi box rakha hua tha jaisa uske pas tha par is bar iska deisgn kuch alag tha.

Vikrant apni jagah se khada hua aur ek pal vo use dekhta raha, phir usne box ko apne hath se chuha, uspar bhi ek key lagi thi lekin uska design pehle wale ke mukable alag tha. Box halka halka aag ki roshni mein chamak raha tha, usne use ek pal dekhne ke baad khol dia. Dil zoron se dhadak raha tha, pichli baar vo khali tha lekin jaise hi usne ye wala khola uski ankhon ki putli mein us chiz ki chamak tairne lagi.

Vo ek lal rang ka stone jaisa tha jiska koi satik akar nai tha par vo behad chamak raha tha. Vikrant kuch pal bas yun hi use dekhna chahta tha phir utha kar dekhne laga, dekhte hue jab usne use palta to ankhein us par jam gayi. Stone ke pichla hissa aage walle hisse se bilkul alag tha, uspar kuch laga hua tha jaise koi cheez chipki ho, samjhne ke liye usne stone ko ankhon ke najdeek kiya aur jaise hi use apne pas kiya us stone par vo lagi chiz hilne lagi aur vikrant ki ankhein usi tarah khuli reh gayi aur phir uske baad uski ankhon mein waqt ka pura paiyan ulta daud gaya, insan, janwar, vatavaran, jharne nadiya, samundar, dharti ka nirman aur phir antriksh bhraman, tarre, greh aur unke up greh, galaxy aur phir kahani piche jate-jate aage ayi, bharman mein bhisfot, grehon ka janam, dharti ka janam, uska nirman aur dharti ki taraf badhte hue meteor. Achanak hi vo us pal se bahar aa nikla, uske kaan sunn ho chuke the, samne khada akshad uski taraf dekh raha tha aur use awaz laga raha tha lekin vikrant ko kuch sunai nahi de raha tha. Uska dimag jaise sochne ki shakti kho baitha tha, abhi ek hi minute mein usne jaise is anantkal bharhman ko jaan liya tha. Nazar akshad par thi jiske hath mein box tha " dad " uske muh se yahi nikla aur jab agle pal use hosh aya to uski nazar akshad par jami reh gayi.

Akshad ne box ko utha rakha tha, uski nazar us key par thi jo box par lagi hui thi, akshad ne use ghumaya aur use bahar nikal dia.

" nooooooooooooooooooo " vikrant bas chilla paya aur ek safed roshni ne uski ankhon ko gher liya aur phir vo behosh ho gaya.

" annhh-hhhh " achanak se meri ankh khuli lekin ankhon ke aage dhundla pan tha isliye mene unhe dubara band karke phir khola. Ankhon ke Samne ek chehra mujhe dekhte hue kuch keh raha tha lekin mujhe samajh nahi aya aur mei dubara behosh ho gaya. Agli baar jab ankh khuli to is baar nazara saaf tha, chat par ek pankha dhire-dhire chal raha tha aur ek ajeeb si gandh mere naak mein ghus rahi thi. Mei fauran uth baitha par agle hi pal tez dard dimag mein tehar sa gaya. Mene apna sar pakad kar ek baar jhatka aur phir dusri taraf dekha, ek aurat apne bache ko dant rahi thi shayad vo dawai nahi le raha tha.

Dawai? mei badabdaya aur apne aas pass dekha, ek bada sa hall tha jahan par bahut sare log bed par laite hue the. Mei hospital mein tha lekin kab aya? Mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahi aa raha mene sochne ki kosish ki par phir dimag mein gehra dard utha. Mei apni jagah se khada hua dard abhi bhi bahut tez tha lekin ruka nahi aur chalta hua vahan se bahar nikla aur phir hospital se bahar nikal gaya. Bahar nikalte hi suraj ki roshni mein ankhein chaundiya gayi. Mene ankhon se dhire-dhire apna hath hataya aur apne aas pass ki chizon ko dekhne laga. Sadak par rikshaw chal rahi thi, nazar unke kapdon par gayi jo behad ajeeb lag rahe the phir sath mein baithe ek ladke par jise ek admi juta polish karwa raha tha. Kahan hun mein ? sochte hue sar chakrane laga to mei hospital ki taraf dubara muda aur andar aa gaya. Kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha na hi kuch yaad aur bich-bich mein badhta hua ye sar ka dard.

' Ah-hh ' ek baar phir dimag jhalaya mano kuch chal raha ho andar. Mei apne ward ki taraf badh raha tha ki meri nazar reception par gayi jahan dekhte hi mei ruk gaya aur us taraf badh chala " kya kaam hai ? " mujhe ek tuk deewar par ghurte hue dekh nurse boli.

" ye kaun sa saal hai "

" samne dikhta nahi hai kya, 1985 " nurse boli aur mei use ghurne laga uske baad usne kayi sawal kiye mujhse ki mei kaun se ward mein hun? kaun hai mere sath aur na jane kya kya jinhe sunne se pehle mei behosh ho chuka tha.

Vikrant bach gya lo bhai haveli mil hi gai londe ko sab yaad aa gya but ab nya kand vi ho gya or akshad or pratiksha ke samne ye flash light hua he un 2no ko yaad rhega kya?? vese vi sab kuch box ka khel he dimag ka saki naka ho gya ye kya 1985 jab paida hua hoga vi ya nhi uss time me pohch gya time travel ab vikrant bhari jawani me pratiksha ko dekh ke kese lar tapkayga.

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