Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

[Shahzaib99]

awesome update... rakesh ki setting abhi ki behn k sath kra do... woh b akelapan mehsos kerti hai... ?

 

[Radhe]

Nice update

 

[abhi1008]

Update - 96

Ab tak aapne dekha K Abhi ka milan Shamli se ho gaya hai .....jisse usse Sangeet vidya aur adrishya hone ki shakti prapt hui.......

ab aage......

Subah jab Abhi ki aankh khuli toh dekha Shamli Abhi k seene par sir rakhkar soyi hui thi..........dono abhi nirvastra the ......Abhi ne Shamli k matthe par ek kiss kiya aur usse apne upper se hata kar dhire se uthne laga ....toh Shamli ne usse kas kar pakad liya .........abhi bhi woh nind mein thi ......jo kissi masum bacchi ki tarah lag rahi thi ......toh Abhi bhi thodi der usse bahoon mein lekar so gaya..........aur ek halka sa chumban uske hontho par kar diya .......jisse uske chehre par ek halki si smile aagayi ......aur woh uth gayi........

Abhi ko apni taraf itne pyar se dekhte hue dekha toh usne bhi abhi k maathe par ek kiss kar diya ...
Shamli - Aise kya dekh rahe ho jaan........

Abhi - Kuch nahi bas humare milan ki yaadien sanjo raha hu....

Shamli - ab toh humara vivah ho gaya hai ......hum toh ab saath hi rahenge ....toh yaado ka kya karna hai....

Abhi - Nahi jaan abhi muzhe bahut se karya poore karne hai......bahit jald hum sab saath honge...

Shamli - nahi ....ab ...mein aapse dur nahi rah sakti .......mein aapke saath hi chalungi........

Abhi - Saath toh mein bhi chahta hu parantu mein vivash hu ........aur waise bhi humare milan se tumme bhi woh shakti aagayi hai ...jisse tum jab chahe muzhse baat kar sakti ho aur jab chahe mil sakti ho .....toh phir tum muzhse dur kaise ho.....

Jaan him abhi ek yudh mein hai aur abhi samay bahut kam baccha hai ....iss kam samy mein muzhe apni sampurna shaktiyo ko prapt karna hai.........

kuch der pyar k pal bitane k baad ...Abhi aur Shamli dono uth gaye .......Subah tayar hone k baad .......Abhi aur Shamli ne GR aur uski patni Sandhya se Aashirwad liya .......

GR - yashashvi bhava putra.....humari bacchi ka acvhe se dhyan rakna putr yadi koi bhul isse ho jaaye toh naadan samaz kar isse kshama kar dena ........hum aaj aapka apna hi ek ansh de rahe hai........

Phir Abhi ne unhe bataya k Abhi woh Shamli ko apne saath nahi le jaasakta ......


Tabhi waha Shivali aur Shalu aagayi ....

Shalu Shamli k paas jaate hue .....Ab hamari bahen humare hi saath rahegi tallok mein ....hai na di ......

Shivali - haa bilkul Shamli k tumahare yaha aane se tumhara mann bhi laga rahega .......
kyu thik hai na Shamli ....

Shamli - di jaisa aap uchit samzhe....

Abhi ko bhi yeh thik laga ....kyu ki Abhi k Anupasthiti mein Tallok ki saari jimmedari akele Shalu ko dekni padti hai , Shamli k waha jaane se Shalu ko bhi usska saath mil jaayega.....

phir hui vidayi Abhi Shamli ...Shivali aur Shalu k saath pahele tallok gaya......
aur waha Shamli ko Shalu k saath chodkar Shivali k saath nikal gaya .......jaane se pahele Abhi ne Vital Aur Atal lok ka bhi haal jasna chaha toh Shivalu ko leka pahele toh Vital lok gaya.....aur Pretraj se mila .....

Bhadra itne din baad Abhi aur Shivali se milkar bahut khush hui .......usne unhe ek din k liye wahi rok liya ..........

Raat ko Abhi Bhadra k saath kuch pyar bhare pal bitakar so gaya.......subah pretraj se vida hone k liye mila toh pretraj ne bataya ...k Usski agli yaatra shighra hi shuru hone wali hai .....jisski Shuruwat ussike gaon se hogi.....

Phir waha se Atal lok jaata hai......Aur waha k raja Ahuk se milta hai.......Daksha bhi Abhi ko milkar bahut khush hui ......Ek din Abhi aur Shivali wahi ruke ........waha Abhi ko Aahuk se Sutal lok k baare mein pata chala.....

Sutal lok k Raja bali ka sandesha Aahuk tak aaya tha jo k Abhi k liye tha ..........

Abhi sochne laga k ek taraf toh Pretraj ki baat k muzhe apne gaon jaana hoga.....aur dusri taraf ...Maharaj Bali ka sandesh .....kya yeh dono ek hi lakshya ki or ishara kar rahe hai...

Shivali - Aap jo soch rahe ho woh woh nahi hai......

Abhi - tumhe kaise pata ........ohh main toh bhul hi gaya tum toh pahele se hi sab jaanti ho.......

Shivali - woh issilye kyu k main aapke mann se hi judi hui hu ........

Gaon se jo marg jaata hai woh alag lok hai Aur Raja Bali Sutal lok k raja hai......
ab yeh aappar hai k aap kis marg ko pahele chunte ho ........

Thodi der Charcha k baad Abhi Rasatal k Naaglok mein Shivali k Saath pahunchta hai.....Waha usse Sulekha se pata chalta hai .....K Rasatal se upper jo Taalatal Lok hai waha bhut si aisi gatividhiya chal tahi hai jo Bhayankar vinash ka kaaran ban sakti hai.......

Pahle toh do marg the ab yeh teesra ...Abhi ko ab nirnay lena tha k kis or pahele jaaye.......


Swarg ki haar k baad KS ne aisa kya kiya k sabhi loko ki gatividhiya tez ho gayi.......
dekhte hai ......

Jab Antak ka ant ho gaya........

KS apne singhasan par baitha hua ......

KS - yeh murkh Antak ....itna awasar milne k baad bhi Rakshak ko samapay nahi kar paaya......murkh ....parashakti k shool k amogh hote hue bhi maara gaya........

agar woh Rakshak ko dekhte hi uss shool se waar karta toh Toh Rakshak samapt ho jaata .....

yaha ek toh Maarkesh ka kuch pata nahi chal raha hai .......dusri aur Antak bhi maara gaya.......
Aur mera bada beta Durmukh jab se yaha se gaya hai uski bhi koi khabar nahi hai.......

Tabhi KS sabhi asuro aur danavo ki sabha bulata hai ....

KS - Asur veero ab samay aagaya hai hume apni poori shakti se himare shatruo ko sabak sikhane ka....hume dikhana hoga k hum asur hi iss shristi hi poore brahmand par raaj karne yogya hai.......

jis jis lok tak bhi hamari pahunch hai, waha ki gatividhiya tez kar do ......
Ab dekhta hu Rakshak kis kis lok ki raksha karta hai....

Ka k aadesh par Asuro ki gatividhiya tez hogayi.......

Prithvi par bhi bhari maatra mein asur phail chuke the aur KS k agle aadesh ki pratiksha kar rahe the.....

Abhi apni agli yatra se pahele apne pariwar se milne k liye ghar gaya .....tak tak raat ho chuki thi aur sabhi si gaye the.........
waha jab ussne apne pratirup ko apne bhiter samaya toh usse ghar mein ghat rahi saari ghatnao k baate mein pata chala........

Kuch dino se badal rahe Abhi k prati Ritu k vyavhar k baare mein jaankar , Abhi ko samaz nahi aaraha tha ki kya kare......

kyuki kuch dino se Ritu k mann mein Abhi k liye alag bhavnaye janam le rahi thi .....woh ab din raat ussi k baare mein sochne lagi..thi...

Abhi apne room mein issi baare mein soch raha tha k door par knock hui .....Toh Abhi ne door khola toh dekha k saamne Ritu khadi thi....

Abhi - Di aap itne raat ko .......kya baat hai...

Ritu - Bas nind nahi aarahi thi ......aur tere room ka light on dekha toh laga tu bhi abhi nahi soya hoga .......

Abhi - Ander aayiye....abithkar baatein karte hai.....


dono ander aakar bed par baith jaate hai.......

Abhi - haa di bolo ...kya baat hai........

Ritu - betu ..kya sach mein tuzhe nahi pata k baat kya hai........sab kuch jaante hue tu kyi nahi samaz ta ........

Abhi - kyuki aap jo chaha rahi hai woh sarasar galat hai di.......yeh nahi ho sakta .........

Ritu - Tu hi bata k ab main kya karu .....betu .....Maine bhut baar koshis ki k tere bare mein na sochu lekin ho nahi paata......ek ko badi mushkil se chuna tha lekin waha bhi dhoka hi mila .....ab aur himmat nahi hai......

Abhi - di aap samazti kyu nahi hai .......yeh thik nahi hai......Aapko koi aacha mil jaayega ....jo aapko samaz sake ....apne pyar se aapke saare dukh khusiyo mein badal de .....

Ritu - betu ..zhoot bolne band kar de ...yeh yu bhi jaanta hai...k yeh possible nahi hai .......kyi k mere ander ki powers tere saath judi hui hai ....isiliye main kisi aur ki nahi ho sakti.....
ab yeh tere upper hai k tu kya chahta hai ....Apne di ko aise hi tadapte hue marte dekhna chahta hai ...yaa....

Abhi - diiiiii.....aur Ritu k muh par apna haath rakh deta hai...

agar dubara marne ki baat ki toh apne betu ka mara hua muh dekhogi ......aur abhi k aankhon mein aansoo aajate hai.........

Ritu Abhi k aansoo dekhkar usse gale laga leti hai ......

Thodi der tak dono ek dusre k gale lage rahte hai .....phir Abhi Ritu k matthe par kiss karke alag hota hai......

Abhi - muzhe Abhi kuch jaruri kaam niptane hai ....aapke sawal k liye muzhe kuch samay chahiye......ab aap jaayiye....

Ritu - Muzhe tumahari haa ka intezar rahega .....lekin kahi itni der na kar dena ki ......apni baat adhuri chodte hue jaane lagti hai......

lekin phur kuch yaad aata hai.......

Ritu - Accha betu Woh Shivali kaun hai ....USA mein jab maine mom se pucha tha toh unhone kaha tha k betu se hi puch lena ....

Abhi - woh ....kuch ...nahi di ....bas aise hi .....Rimpy ki frnd hai

Ritu paas aakar Abhi ka ek haath apne sir par rakh deti hai...

tu jaanta hai beti tu muzhse zhoot nahi bol sakta.....
tuzhe meri kasam hai sab sach sach bata de .....

Abhi - Di aapne yeh kya kiya .....mein aapko abhi bahi batana chahta tha ...lekin aapne kasam dekar muzhe majbur kar diya.....

Phir Abhi ne Apni Ab tak ki 6 shadiyo k baare mein aur baaki 8 k baare mein bataya ........

Ritu pahele toh sunkar shock ho gayi ....usse Abhi apne se chinta hua nazar aane laga ..

Ritu - Itni badi baat tune muzhse chupayi ....ab samaz aaya k tu meri baat kyu nahi samaz raha hai.....kyu mere pyar ko thukra raha hai.......

Abhi - aisi baat nahi hai di .....aap apne aapko un sabse compair kyu kar rahi ho ....aur mera unse vivah vidhi ka vidhan hai .....woh sab meri hi sahktiyo k ansh hai.....

Ritu - meri Shakti bhi toh tuzhse hi judi hui hai .......phir main kyu nahi....

Abhi - Di maine kaha na k muzhe thoda samay chahiye ...uske baad aapke saari shijayat khatam ho jaayegi .......

Thodi det baat hone k baad Ritu abhi ko hug karke chali jaati hai.....

Subah Apni daily routine puri karke Abhi Addu Aur Deepu se milta hai .....Mom Dad se milkar .....Apni team k paas chala jaata hai.....

Waha Shalaka se usse pata chalta hai k Rajasthan mein kuch bahut se gatvidhiya aisi chal rahi hai jo woh samaz nahi paa rahi ...

Waha pahele toh log gayab ho jaate hai aur baad mein kuch dino baad wapas mil jaate hai .....

Aur yeh sab unhi k saath ho raha hai jinki ya toh govrnment mein pahunch bahut upar tak hai ...yaa kisi rajwade se talluk rahkte hai......

Abhi - kya tum logo ne koi illegal activity note ki ...

Shalaka - Abhi tak toh nahi hui .....

Abhi - Tum apni nazar banaye rakho ......Aur underworld ki kya report hai .....

Shalaka - Philhaal toh underworld bhi shaant hai....

Abhi - Dhyan rahe ...tumhe humesha satark rahana hoga....kahi yeh shanti aane wale toofan ka aagaz na ho ......

Abhi k liye itna hi .....
Agla update raat ko ....

 

[abhi1008]

Thank you so much frnds for your Support & Fantastic comments

asie hi saath banaye rakhe...

Latest update 96 posted....

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Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya

Nice update bro

Nice one

 

[abhi1008]

Thank you so much frnds for your Support & Fantastic comments

asie hi saath banaye rakhe...

Latest update 96 posted....

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

Nice update

Very nice, fantastic, awesome, fabulous amazing update ..............
keep it up bro ................
Waiting for next update .................

 

[abhi1008]

Fantastic fantastic fantastic

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

Nice update

Thank you so much frnds for your Support & Fantastic comments

asie hi saath banaye rakhe...

Latest update 96 posted....

 

[abhi1008]

awesome update... rakesh ki setting abhi ki behn k sath kra do... woh b akelapan mehsos kerti hai... ?

Thank you so much bhai aapke Support & shandar comments k liye


Bhai Ab Ritu ka kya hota hai aage dekhte hai.....

asie hi saath banaye rakhe...

Latest update 96 posted....

 

[Ritima]

Update - 92

ab tak aapne dekha markesh ko uske kiye ki sazaa Ritu k dwara hi mili

ab aage......

Makesh pada tadp raha tha kamjori k kaaran usse hila bhi nahi jaa raha tha........woh maut ki bheek mang raha ...........

Pahli baar shakti ka prayog karne k kaaran Ritu behosh ho gayi thi........

Abhi Ritu ka si godi mein liye baitha hua tha.........abhi yaha ka kuch kaam baki tha ........toh usne Shivali ki taraf dekha .......toh woh aage aayi aur Aur Ritu ko sambhala ......

Abhi waha se uthkar khander k ander gaya .....aur apne Shakti trishool ko pragat kiya ..........Phir koi asur iss jagah tak na pahunch paaye isiliye usne ......Waha k pooja sthal k paas jo jaha ek gahra gadda sa tha ...jaha.....Asuri mata Devi Nikumbala ki murti thi ussko poori tarah band kar diya ......aur bahar aakar uss jagah ko nast ka diya ..........

Markesh ki khabar kisi ko na pata lage aur koi asur waha na pahunch sake osiliye uane waha ek satvik urja se ek kawach banaya ........

Aur sabko lekar teleport ho gaya........Chacha ji k ghar k cottege mein .......

Lima aur Rimpy bahar hamara intejar kar rahi thi ..........Cottage se bahar nikalkar Rinku dono se mila aur Lima ko lekar apne cottage mein chal pada........Rimpy bhi ander aagayi thi.....Uske mann mein badi jigyasa thi k waha kya hua .......toh Abhi ne usse baad mein sab batane ka ishara kiya ......

Yaha Abhi ne Apne prati roop ko yaad kiya ....aur usse apne bhiter sama liya ........

Party khatam ho gayi thi ...aur sabhi gahr aagaye the .....Abhi ka pratiroop unke saath tha isiliye uhne kuch bhi pata na chala .......

Ritu ko ab hosh aagaya tha......Woh Abhi se bahut kuch kahna chahti thi......hosh mein aane k baad ......uske aansoo tham nahi rahe the .......
Shivali aur Rimpy ne usse sambhala .....Abhi k kahne par Dono Ritu ko uake kamte mein chodne gayi.........

Naina abhi room mein nahi aayi thi....woh Shuahila chachi k room mein baato mein magan thi .......isiliye koi problem nahi thi........

Shivali aur Rimpy Riti k saath room mein pahunchi .....

Rimpy - Di jo kuch hua usse ab bhul jaao......

Ritu - kahna bahut aasan hai Rimpy ....lekin bhulana bahut mushkil........

Shivali - koi mushkil nahi hai ....hamesha bas itna yaad rakho k aapke saath aapki family humesha khadi hai ......aap kya samzte ho ...yadi aap unhe apna dukh nahi bataoge toh kya woh mehsus nahi karenge ........

Itne din se aapke pareshani ki wajah se Maine Abhi ki tadap mehsus ki hai........Bahar se sabke saath hasta tha ....lekin andar hi andar usse aapki pateshani khaye jaa rahi thi.....

Aur aapke mom dad ...aapne socha k aapke badle hue vayhar k kaaran .....Unhe kaisa laga hoga.........

yadi aapko koi pareshani hai toh usse apne family k saath share kare .....aapki family k siwa aapka bhala chahne wala aur koi nahi .........

Ritu - Shayad tum thik kahti ho.........apne dhun mein mein itni andi ho gayi thi k apne family ka apne liye pyar na dekh saki ..........aur rone lagi........

Shivali - issmein aapse bas ek hi chuk ho gayi k aap apni baatein apno se chupane lagi bas isi ka fayada usne utahaya aur aappar mohini vidya ka prayog kiya.......aur aap apni family se aur dur ho gayi........hume apni galtiyo se sabak lena chahiye.....

isiliye kah rahi hu woh sab chodiye ......aur naye sire se jeewan shuru kariye......

Ritu ab normal ho gayi thi.......Tabhi Naina bhi room mein aagayi thi......

Naina - Beta ab kaisi tabiyat hai......

( Ritu jab waha se nikli tab Naina usse waha na paakar pareshan ho gayi thi ....tab Abhi k prati roop ne bataya k di k sir mein thoda dard ho raha tha toh woh Rinku & group k saath ghar chali gayi hai)

Shivali - Di ab thik hai maa......bas thoda sirdard tha.......

Naina - Maa k bacchi yeen do din se saath hai aur muzhse mili bhi nahi ........aur woh ..Sulekha...Shalu ...woh bhi .......tum teeno ki toh mein khabar leti hu ......

Shivali - woh maa.....yaha....itne log.....aur aage badke Naina k pair chune lagti hai...

Niana - usse uthakar gale laga leti hai.......

Ritu - maa aap Shivali ko kaise jaanti hai.....

Maa - Beta tu iss bare mein Abhi se hi puch lena woh hi batayega .....
.....Shivali ki taraf dekhkar .....kyu beta thik kaha na maine.......

Shivali garden zhukakar niche dekhne lagti hai.......

thodi der aise hi baatein chalti rahti hai air phir Shivali aur Rimpy ....wapas cottage aajati hai.......

Abhi waha se Sona k Room mein gaya Toh waha Sona Addu aur Deepu teeno baithe hue kuch soch rahe the........

Abhi - lagta hai baccha prty kuch gahri soch mein hai........

teeno Abhi ki aawaj sunkar chank gaye......

Deepu - bahi yeh sona itne saare gifts se confuse ho gayi hai........

Abhi - kyu bahla ....sona ...gifts se bhi koi confuse hota hai....

Sona - woh bhai itne saare gifts ka kya karungi.......

Addu - bhai maine isse kaha k orphanage mein de dete hai .....toh wahi soch rahe the

Abhi - arre wah yeh toh bahut acchi baat hai.......

Phir sona meri goad mein aakar baith gayi.......Addu aur Deepu mere bagal mein .......
kuch der masti aur baatein chali aur phir sona k zidd par hum wahi So gaye....

Subah apne time par utha teeno abhi gahri nind mein aoye the......Sona mera baaju kaskar pakad kar soyi thi......jaise woh muzhe apne se dur jaane hi nahi dena chahti thi.....

Main dheere se utha aur fresh hokar niche lawan mein chala gaya ........aur ghaas par baithkar dhyan karne laga........

aaj bhi dhyan mein muzhe kich drishya dikhayi dene lage the .........maine dekha k ek bahut hi sunder bilkul devlok ki apsara ki tarah .....ek ladki kisi sarover k kinare baithkar koi geet gaa rahi hai......Aur jal mein na jaane kiski chavi dekha rahi hai......Tabhi kisiki awaaj se mera dhyan tuta.....

toh dekha Payal aur shreya thi waha par...........jo muzhe brekfast k liye bulane aayi thi........
tab mera dhyan gaya k 9 baj rahe hai ...koi 4 hrs ho gaye the dhyan karte karte.....

Phir main waha se dono k saath dinning hall gaya.........breakfast k dauran ab wapas lautne ki baat hone lagi .......jo Sona ko bilkul acchi nahi lagi ....

Sona muh fulakar apne room mein chali gayi ........
aur main bhi chala usse manane .......maine usse bahut manaya.....lekin woh maane ko tayar hi nahi thi .........maine usse bich bich mein milne aane ka wada koya tab jaakar badi mushkil se maani ......

Lunch k baad hum sab nikal pade wapas apne desh........

Yaha pahunchkar Maine Rimpy ko drop kiya uske ghar aur wapas ghar aakar apne Room mein gaya.......

Waha Ritu di .....baithi hui thi......

Mein - Di aap.....soyi nahi abhi...itne lambe safar se thak gayi hogi .......

Ritu - kyu kay ab mein tuzhse baat nahi kar sakti........

Abhi - maine aisa toh nahi kaha .......

Ritu - maine kal se dekh rahi hu tu muzhse baat hi nahi kar raha hai..............betu ab tu bhi apni di ko nahi samzhe ga toh mein kaha jaau........maaf karde na galti ho gayi muzhse ........
aur rone lagi , di ka rona muzhse dekha nahi gaya.....aur main unke paas jaakar unke aansoo poche aur gale laga liya .......

Mein - bas karo di ....bas....karo ....main aapse kaise naraz ho sakta hu ......aap toh meri pyari di ho ......lekin di aapko yeh bhi samzna chahiye k itna bada decision le ne se pahele Mom Dad k baare mein toh sochna tha.....yadi aapko kuch ho jaata toh hum kya karte....

Di - toh mein kya karti betu ....Dad apne business mein busy ...aur mom social work mein aur tu bhi apne kaamo mein ........

tuzhe Aur Rimpy ko jab bhi saath dekhti thi ......toh muzhe lagta k kash mere bhi koi hota jo meri feelings ko samazta ......ab ..akelepan aur kaam k bojh se main ukta gayi thi .........aur yeh galti kar baithi.........

lekin jaati thi k mera betu muzhe kuch nahi hone dega......

Main samaz gaya di ki asli prob ......

Main - Accha toh di ko muzhe Jija ji se milwane ki jaldi hai..........koi nahi main abhi dad ko bata detu hu ........

Ritu - Betu jija ji se milna hai ruk tu abhi tuzhe batati hu ......Aur Abhi ko thapad marne aage badti hai toh abhi daud laga deta hai ......door ki taraf aur darwaje par jaakar ...Ritu ko angutha dikhakar bhag jaata hai ......aur Ritu k chehre par smile aajati hai.......

Dusre din Abhi ne Iss baare mein Dad se baat ki ......Toh dad ne Di aur mom se iss baare mein poori salah kar ki baat kahi .......

kuch din Abhi ki wahi daily routine chlane lagi ......Yog ..excersie....dhyan......
Rinku aur baaki frnds se milna ......aur Apni team k saath sangharak k roop mein under world pat rok lagaye rakhna.......

Kabhi kabhi teleport hokar apni patniyo se bhi milne chala jaata tha......

Yaha patal lok mein KS aur Bhayaksha ko Markesh ki koi jaankari nahi mil rahi thi........achanak se uske aise gayab hone Ks bada pareshan ho gaya tha .......

woh apne kaali shaktiyo ki takat ko Markesh k baare main pata karne laga hi raha tha k ...Ebils ne usse aisa karne se mana kar diya ........

KS ko andaja hone laga k kahi devtao ne toh usse bandi nahi bana liya .......iske liye apne khunkhar aur mayavi asur Aantak k saath asuri sena ko devlok bhejne k baare mein socha.....


yaha Abhi ko roz dhyan mein woh kanya dikhayi dene lagi ........Abhi ko itna toh andaja ho gaya tha......yeh hi uski agli shakti hai.......par yeh kaha hai uska Abhi ko pata nahi chal paataha tha.......

Abhi ka college bhi ab shuru ho gaya tha......Iski wajah se Abhi aur busy ho gaya tha....

Aise hi ek Raat Shivali mere saath thi tab maine usse apne dyan mein dikh rahi ladki k baare mein bataya ..........

Shivali - toh ab aapki agli shakti prapt karne ki yatra shuru hone wali hai......

Abhi - haa lag toh muzhe bhi aise hi raha hai......lekin kis lok mein ....

Shivali - Dhyan mein dikhi hui jis jagah ka jikar aapne kiya hai ...woh jagah swarg mein hai ........

Abhi - toh kya woh koi devkanya hai ...

Shivali - nahi Maa parvati ji k shrap k kaaran devtao ki santan nahi hoti.....jaha tak muzhe lagta hai yeh koi Gandharva kanya hai.........

Humare Bhuva lok se uper SWAHA LOK hai ....jiske teen bhag hai ek bhag mein Swarg lok .....dusre mein Gandharva lok Aur teesre mein Kinnar lok ........

inmein devtao aur kinnaro ki santane nahi hoti toh yeh kanya koi Ghandharva lok ki hi hai.......

Aur Jaan ab tumhe jalf hi apne lakshya ko prapt karna hai.....kyuki ab hamare paas kewal 8 mahine rah gaye hai.........inn 8 mahino mein tumhe apni saari shaktiya prapt karni ...jinmein se abhi 9 bakki hai........

Abhi - jaan sachmuch tumhe jaana bada hi kathin hai.........tumhe kaise pahle se hi pata hai jaise tum pahele hi sab dekh chuki ho .........

Aur Abhi usse apni baahon mein le leta hai....Aur usnke hontho ko chumne lagta hai ....aaj dono ki kiss mein koi vasana nahi thi.....bas tha toh ek dusre k liye pavitra prem .......badi der tak dono chumte rahe......phir alag ho gaye.......

Abhi - Toh jaan muzhe kal hi apni yatra k liye nikalna hoga.......

Shivali - nahi ...kyuki Swarg mein Bina devraj Indra k bulave k koi bhi manusya pravesh nahi paa sakta ........

Abhi - toh kya kiya jaaye......

Shivali - kuch nahi ..bas pratiksha .....bas ek do din mein devraj Indra ka bulawa aapko aajayega..........Thik hai ab main chalti hu....aur woh waha se gayab ho jaati hai.....

Main mann mein - uff yeh Shivali bhi ek bahut bada rashasya hai.....

Abhi k liye itna hi ......
Agla update raat ko.......

Excellent update.

 

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Update - 93

Ab tak aapne dekha KS ne swarg par akraman karne k liye apne mayavi Antak naam k asur ko chuna .......
Shivali ne Abhi ki agli yatra k baare mein bataya..........
Aur Agli shakti koi Gandhrva kaya k baare mein bhi

ab aage........

Bhuva lok k yaksha bhoomi se uper hai Sawha Lok ........Jiska vistar prithvi se koi teen guna hai......

Iss lok mein pravesh karne k liye 7 dwar hai ......jaha Dev sainik humesha pahra dete rahte hai.....

Swaha lok ka mukhya aakarshan Swarg hai jaha ka aakarshan , hat vyakti ko hai ........kai kavi aur lekin bhi kisi jagah ki sunderta ki upma Swarg k naam se hi dete hai...

Swarg lok main devtao ka vas hai jo Tridevo ko aagaya ansar iss shristi ka sanchaln karte hai .....

swarg charo tarf se Alaknanda jo ganga ki hi roop hai usse ghita hua hai.....yaha har prakar ki siddhiya sakshat vas karti hai......Swarg.... rog... vyadi ..Vridhawastha....Bhuk pyas aadi se rahit hai........Yaha k bagiche mein Kalpvriksha hai jo har prakar ki Samriddhi dene wala hai.....

Yaha devtao k Raja Indra ka shasan hai.........

Swarg k adhikar mein do nagar aur hai jo iss lok k dusre hisse mein hai ....Ek hai Gandhrva nagar......jaha Devtao ki sabha mein Gaane wale aur Shrishti mein Sangeet vidya failane wale Gandharvo ka vaas hai .......Inka Raja Ranjan Gandhrva hai.....inki patni Sandhya aur beti Shamli hai......

Wahi dusri or Kinnar nagar hai jo Nirtya kala mein nipun hai......

Devraj Apni sabha mein baithkar Devguru Brihaspati aur baki devtao k saath kisi vishay par mantrana kar rahe the.......

Tabhi Swarg mein joro se kampan hua ...yeh tha sanket k kisi ne Swarg par aakraman kar diya hai........

Devraj turant apni dev sena lekar Swarg k pratam dwar par pahunch gaye aur dekha toh woh dwar tuta hua pada hai .....aur sainik maare jaa chuke hai........

Aur saamne dekha toh ek vishalkaye Daitya dono haath kamar par rakh kar jor jot se hasraha tha........yeh tha Antak.....

Antak - ha....ha....ha....Aayiye Devraj .......muzhe tumhari hi pratiksha thi.......yeh bechare sainik toh aise hi maare gaye........

Devraj - Tumahara itna dusaahas k tumne yaha pravesh karne ka prayatna kiya .......

Antak - Dusahas toh aapne kiya hai ...jo Hamre Asur samrat k putra ko bandi bana liya hai.......

Devraj - Humne aisa kuch nahi kiya hai........

Antak - Devta hokar asatya vachan ....ha...ha...ha....
sidhe se Maarkesh ko lauta do ...nahi toh tumahare Swarg ki aisi dasha hogi ki phir koi swarg ki Sunderta ki upma nahi dega .......

Devraj - Apni vani ko viram do asur....tum shayad Indra ke kop ko nahi jaante tabhi yaha akele aagaye ho ...........

Antak - waise toh mein akela hi kaafi hu ....parantu Mera naam Antak hai .....Shatru ka ant karne se pahele uski aakhri iccha toh poori kar hi salta hu .......

Aur usne mantra padhkar dono haath uper utha diye.......
aur waha laakho Divya Asuro ki sena pragat ho gayi.....

Antak - lo Devaraj ab sena bhi aagayi.........

Devraj - Aakarman ....Har.har.mahadev....

Aur dono aur ki sena aapas mein bhid gayi.......

teen tatvo k devta apni tatvo ki urja se asur ko samapt kar rahe the ......

Toh Antak ne apne bhiter se panch asur pragat kiye .....jo unhi panch tatva ki urja se bane hue the......

Agni devta k saath Jwalasur ......Varun devta k saath .....jalasur........Aur Vayu dev k saath Pawanasur ........

Yeh teeno asur un teen devtao k hi pratirup dikhayi de rahe the .........

Teeno devta apni poori urja k saath yudh kar rahe the parantu un teen asuro ko kuch hone ki bajaye woh devtao ki urja ko apne bhiter sokh rahe the.......

Yaha yumraj ji bhi apne yum pash se Asuro ko yumlok bhej rahe the........lekin jitne asur maate jaate utne hi phir pragat ho jaate......Antak ne aur ek Asur pragat kiya kaalnidhi ...jo Yumraj se bhid gaya......

Yaha Devraj ne dekha k Antak bar bar divya asuro ko apne bhiter se pragat kar raha hai.....toh woh swayam yudh mein utar aaaye ......

Devraj ne Antak par aneko divyastro se waar kiya jisse Antak ek hi haath se rokta aur uska mukh swarg ki or mod deta......isse Swarg ko badi hanni ho rahi thi..........

Antak ne ab tak srf devtao ki urja ko unke hi viruddh karke lad raha tha.........

Devraj ne ab apne Vajra k prayog karna shuru kiya aur bhayankar Vidyut urja se Antak par waar kiya ........lekin woh bhi vyarth .........

Sabhi devta kamjor pad rahe the......Aur asuro ka kuch bhi ahit nahi ho raha tha.......

Devaraj vivash hokar Narayan astra ka prayog karne hi waale the ...k devguru ne unhe rok diya .....

Sawdhan Devraj .......yeh asur vardan ki shakti se balwan ho raha hai ...isse aur iske sharir se pragat hue asuro ko koi kisi bhi astra se nahi maar sakte hai........isliye jab tum tridevo k astra chaloge ko k toh varadan k kaaran iss asur ko toh kuch nahi hoga .....

jisse innastro ki vinashkari shati iss lok ko nasht kar degi.....

Ab Antak ne Sabhi devtao ko apne paash mein band diya jo ek divya paash tha.........phir kuch socker ...Devraj waha se nikalkar Abhi k room mein pragat hue .....

Abhi bed par baitha kuch soch raha tha......k achanak Devraj ko apne saamne dekhkar samz gaya k ab samay aagaya hai agli shakti hassil karne ka .......

Abhi - Pranam Devraj ......

Devraj - Vijayi bhava putra........

Abhi - aap yaha swayam aaye ho koi vishesh baat .......

Devraj - tumhe shigra hi humare saath chalna hoga vats....abhi aur baato ka samay nahi hai....

Tab maine apna ek pratiroop waha choda Aur Devraj k saath turant yudhsthal k liye nikal pada ......

Jab hum waha pahunche toh uss samay Dev sainiko ki sthiti badi vikat thi......Jine asur maare jaa rahe the utne hi aur pragat ho rahe the.......

Aur tatvo k devta Antak k pash mein bandhe the...........Jaise hi Antak ne muzhe aur Devraj ko dekha ......

Antak - aagaye Devraj .....aur yeh kisse saath laaye ho ........

Abhi - Mera parichaya toh tumhe mil hi jaayega .......Aur Agni shool se Antak par waar kiya ........lekin woh waar uska kuch nahi bigad saka ......Antak ne uss waar ko wapas Abhi par kiya lekin Abhi ko lagte hi woh thanda ho gaya....

Abhi ne Dekha k dev sainik kamjor padrahe hai ....toh ussne prithvi tatva aur vayu tatva milakar bhayankar dhul se bawander banaya Jismein saaare aasur tinke ki bhati udrahe the aur ek dusre se takarakar samapt hone lage .....

Dhool bharu Aandi chalne k wajah se waha kuch bhi dikhayi nahi de raha tha ..........

Tabhi Aakash mein megh garajne lage aur barish hone lagi aur Bawander aur aandhi shant ho gayi.......

Antak - Ohho toh tum mayavi bhi ho ......lekon Antak k paas tumahari har maaya ka jawab hai .....

Jo asur bawander mein maare gaye woh jamin par gir gaye....Abhi ne dhyan diya k Asuro k shav jamin par girne k baad gayab ho rahe hai aur phir jeevit hokar laut rahe hai.......

Abhi ne phir aisi maya ki rachna ki ki jitne asur the utne hi Abhi har asuro k saamne aagaye .....Asur apne hatiyaro se humla toh kar rahe the .....lekin koi bhi maya prakash k saat rango se nirmit hoti hai .....dikhne mein yoh sthool dikhti hai lekin woh chaya se jtada kuch nahi hoti....

Asuro ko maya mein ulzhakar Abhi ne Apne Shakti trishool ko pragat kar k Aakash mein Ek ghera sa banaya Aur Agni tatva ki bhayaka jwalao ko Aakash mein sthit kar diya.... Aur Apne Divya dhanush se Ek aisa astra chalya jismein se niranter teer nikalkar Asur sainiko ko lagne lage aur aur woh uper uss ghere mein pahunchkar jalkar raakh ho jaata tha ....

iss tarah Asuro ki sankhya kam hone lagi ....yeh sab karne mein Abhi ko kuch hi ..pal lage .......

Antak Abhi ki maaya ko samaz chuka tha .....Aur usne apni urja se uss maya ko samapt kar diya .....
lekin tab tak Asuro ki aade se adhik sena maari jaa chuki thi ........

Antak ne krodh mein bharkar ek Divya shool ka waar Abhi par kiya .....Yeh shool usse para shakti dwara prapt hua tha.......Abhi ne Uss prahaar ko apne Shakti trishool par roka ......Jab do shaktiya aapas mein takrayi toh bhayankar urja pragat hui ........

Prarashakti k maarak urja k kaaran Abhi ka kawach kamjor pada Aur isse Abhi jakhmi hua ........Kyu k Abhi ka kawach usse devik aur aasuri astro se bacha sakta tha .....lekin parashakti aur tridevo k astro ko koi kawach nahi rok sakta tha...

Antak Abhi aut waar karta ussi samay Surya asth ho gaya .....Aur Antak ne Aaj k liye yudh samapti ki ghoshna ki .....

Antak - Aaj toh tum bach gaye ....jaao aur kal poori tayari kar k aana ......mein bhi dekhu kitna bal hai tumme......

Aur woh waha se chala jaata hai ...........
Abhi Shakti k prahar se ghayal hone k kaaran murchit ho jaata hai .......Jisse Devraj Swarg mein apne mahal le jaate hai..........

Parashakti ki urja k kaaran Daksha se milan k baad mili hui healing power dhire dhiire kaam kar rahi thi ........

Devraj ne bhi Swarg k vaid Aswini kumar se aaushadi tayar ki aur Abhi k liye bhej di........

Yaha Abhi ki aankhien khuli toh apne saamne ek ladki haath mein Aushadi ka katora liye Abhi ki taraf aascharya se dekh rahi thi......

Yeh Ladki thi Shamli jo Gandharva raj ki kanya thi.....aur yahi thi Abhi ki agli shakti........

Abhi bas usse ektak dekhne laga .....Kisi Aspara jaisa saundrya ...Aur chehre par masumiyat....Aankhe jaise hirni ki tarah badi badi ......Abhi bas uss rup saundrya ko dekhkar jaise kho sa gaya tha......

Dhyan mein kai dino se jis kanya ko Abhi dekh raha tha aaj woh saamne thi

Tabhi Ashwini kumar ander aate hue .....Arre Shamli tumne abhi tak yeh aushadi inhe lagayi nahi.....


Shamli - Gurudev ....aushadi toh hai parantu kaha lagau inko toh koi ghav hi nahi hai ......tab tak healing power apna kaam kar chuki thi....

Ashwini aushadhi wapas lete hue ...koi baat nahi tum inka khayal rakho ....Dhyan rahe yeh Devraj ka aadesh hai.....aur woh chale jaate hai...

Abhi - Tumne aisa kyu kaha ki koi ghav nahi hai ,

Shamli - Satya hi toh kaha ....kaha hai muzhe toh dikhayi nahi de raha

Abhi - apna haath idhar laao .....

Shamli - kyu...

Abhi - tumhe apne ghav dikhana hai.....
Aur abhi usska ek haath pakadkar apne dil par rakh deta hai........

Abhi - tumahari in aankhon k baan ne mere hridaya par ghav kar diya hai .....dekho toh kaisa joro se dhadak raha hai.......

Pahele toh woh samaz nahi paayi par jab samaz aaya toh woh sharmakar haath chudakar bhagne lagi ......

Abhi - Dekho ...Devraj ne aadesh diya hai tum aise nahi jaa sakti ......

Abhi ki baat sunkar woh wapas mud jaati hai....

Aaj k liye itna hi.....
Agla update kal.......

Excellent update and nice romantic seen with gr8 action aakhir koi to mila jo jayda power full h or jiske pass white energy h nice keep it up.

 

[Ritima]

Update - 94

ab tak aapne dekha k Swarg par Antak ne aakraman kar diya hai ....
Devaraj Abhi ko apne saath yudh bhoomi le jaate hai.....
Pahle din k yudh viram k baad ...Abhi ghyal hokar behosh ho jaata hai ...aur jab aankhien khulti hai ....toh apne saamne Shamli ko paaya hai ...jisse itne din se dhyan mein dekh raha tha....

ab aage .........

Shamli chup chap sir niche kar k baithi jane kya soch rahi thi............k Abhi ki awaj se woh apni soch se bahar aayi.....

Abhi - Waise Shamli kya naam hai tumahara........

Shamli - mera naam Sh.....(lekin jab usse abhi ki baat samz aayi) .....toh .....aap bade woh ho ....mera naam lekar muzhse hi naam puch rahe ho

Abhi - Accha yeh Woh matllab kya hai........waise tum gaati bahut hi acchi , aur woh sarover k kinare baith kar jo geet gaa rahi thi woh toh apratim hai....

Shamli - Yeh sab aapko kaise pata.......

Abhi - muzhe toh yeh bhi thi hai.....k sarover k jal mein tum kiska chehra dekhti hui gaati hoo.....ab toh mein tumahare saamne hu......

Shamli - Lekin aapko kaise pata chala k mein aapka hi chehra dekh rahi thi.....

lekin ahsas hote hue k uske muh se sach nikal gaya......toh usne ek haath apne sir par maara aur apne daanto tale ungli daba di.........

Abhi - uff yeh maasum adda ......hum se hi pyar aur hum se hi parda..........aur Abhi ythkar uske paas jaata hai aur apne haath se uske chehre ko upar uthata hai......

jab tum muzhse itna prem karti ho toh jab mein tumahare saamne aaya toh kyu apne prem ko apne hriday mein chupa liya......

Abhi ki baaton se Shamli ka pyar jo woh ab tak dil mein dabae baithi thi aankho k raaste bahar aane laga...

Shamli - Aapne toh muzhe kabhi dekha nahi tha ...isiliye dar tha k kahi aap mera prem asweekar na karde........

Abhi uske aansoo ponchta hue usse apne gale lagata hai.......

Abhi - Jis prem mein itni shakti ho k bina mile hi apne premi ka chehra dikh jaaye uss prem ko kaise koi asweekar kar sakta hai......Jaise tum muzhe Sarover k jal mein dekhti thi ......main tumhe apne dhyan mein dekhta tha......

Muzhe bhi kai dino se tumahari hi pratiksha thi aur dekho aaj tum mil gayi.....

Shamli bhi kaskar Abhi ko pakad leti hai .....itne varsho ki prtiksha uski aaj jo khatam ho gayi hai......dono ek dusre ko bahon mein khoye hue the.......

ek dusre ki dhadkan aur usmein chipe ek dusre k prati prem ko mehsus kar rahe the......

Abhi ne Shamli ka chehra upar kiya .....Aur usko aankho mein dekhne laga jaha uske liye beshumar pyar k alawa aur kuch nahi tha......

Sharam k kaaran Shamli k kanpte honth Abhi ko jaise nimantran de rahe the ...Abhi honth Shamli k hontho k karib aagaye dono k saanse ek dusre se mein sama rahi thi ....Abhi ne apne honth Shamli k hontho par rakh diye .......

Shamli ka jism kaanp gaya prem k iss pahele chumban k ahsas se ....

Abhi uske hontho ko bas apne honto se shala raha tha ........Ab Abhi uske upper k honth ko muh mein bharke dhire2 chusne laga.....Shamli k haath Abhi k pith par kas gaye ....Woh bas apne premi k har kriya ko mahsus kar rahi thi......

Thodi der aise hi chumban k baad dono alag hue ......

k tabhi waha ek Sainik bhiter aakar Devraj ka sandesh Abhi ko deta hai k Devraj ne usse Sabha mein bulaya hai.........Toh Abhi bhi Shamli se phir milne ka ishara karke sainik k saath chala jaata hai .....

Yaha sabha mein kewal Devraj aur Devguru baithe hue the ...kyuki baaki devtao ko toh Antak ne apne paash mein bandh rakha tha.........

Abhi bhi jaakar dono ko pranam karta hai phir baith jaata hai.........

Devraj - Ab aapka swastha kaisa hai........

Abhi - main bilkul thik hu Devraj , Aap bataiye kya koi marg mila Antak k nash ka ...

Devguru - hum isi baat par vichar kar rahe the........kya aapko koi marg suzha

Abhi - Devguru ek baat muzhe samaz nahi aayi .......K ...Antak ne ek asur hokar bhi suryastha k samay yudh rok diya jab k Asuro ki shakti raatri k samay hi adhik hoti hai.......

Devguru - yahi baat toh usse baaki asuro se alag karti hai......Antak baaki asuro jaisa Kaali shaktiyo ka upasak nahi hai.....Antak Brahma ji ka upasak hai.......

Prakash andhere ko khatam kar sakta hai ....Prakash prakash ko sapt nahi kar sakta ..........
shayad isiliye devta bhi uska ya uske nirmit asuro ka kuch nahi bigad paa rahe hai......

Antak yudh poore niyam k saath ladta hai......

Abhi - toh kya iske ant ka koi upay nahi hai........

Narayan ...narayan ki dhun gaate hue tabhi waha devrishi narad aate hai jinhe dekhkar Devraj aur Abhi khade ho jaate hai aur pranam karte hai.....

Narad ji - Upay hai Devraj ........Antak ne badi bhayanka tapasya se brahma ji ko prassana kiya aur Amarta ka vardan maanga...

Tab Brahma ji ne Amarta ka vardan dene mein asamarthata darshayi aur usse apni mrityu ka ek kaaran chunne k liye kaha.......

Tab antak ne bade vichar k baad ek vishesh prakar ki dhvani ki urja ( sound energy) ko chuna....
isilye liye koi astra shastra usska kuch nahi bigad sakte......

Abhi - Aur woh vishesh dhwani kya hai Devmuni

Narad ji - mein itna hi kah sakta hu k woh dhwani sangeet k kisi raag se judi hui hai.......

Itna kahkar Narad ji waha se chale gaye...

Devguru - hume is vishaya mein Gandharwa raj Ranjan (GR) ki sahayta leni hogi ........

Devraj - thik hai gurudev him abhi sandesh bhejkar unhe yaha bulate hai........

Devguru - Devaraj niti kahti hai k sahyata maangne walo ko swayam uske paas jaana chahiye jisse sahyata leni ho ......chahe woh chakrvarti samrat hi kyu na ho.....

Devraj - aap uchit kah rahe hai gurudev ....chaliye ....

Phir him teeno Gandharva nagar mein GR k bhawan pahunche .......yaha pahunchte hi hume ardhraatri ka raag ....Raag Shivranjani ....mein madhur sangeet sunayi dene laga.......jo vina bajate hue Shamli gaa rahi thi ...Aur GR usska saath de rahe the .......

Uss raag ki divyata mein hum teeno aise kho gaye k hume koi sudh hi nahi rahi k huma yaha kyu aaye hai........

Jab woh sangeet band hua toh hume hosh aaya .........GR aur Shamli aankhe band karke gaa rahe the......jab geet samapt hua toh dono ne aankhe kholi....

GR Devraj aur Devguru ko sakshat apne saamne dekhkar ekdum se khade hue aur unhe pranam kiya ......

GR - Aaj toh mein dhnya ho gaya jo Swayam Devraj aur Devguru mere bhawan aaye hai .......aayie aasan grahan kijiye ...........

Aur Abhi k taraf dekhte hue - aur shayad aap wahi Rakshak hai jo Devtao ka yudh mein saath de rahe hai.......aayiye aap bhi virajman hoyiye.....

GR - Devraj kahiyhe Sewak k liye kya aagya hai.....

Devraj - Iss samay hum tumse Sangeet ki shaktiyo baare mein janne aaye hai ......

GR - kya baat hai Devraj yudh k samay Sangeet k baare mein jaana chahte ho ...ascharya hai ....

Devraj - kyu ki iss yudh mein Sangeet ki awashkta hai.....aap bataye

GR - Toh suniye Devraj .....Sangeet mein woh shakti hai jo saare shrishti toh kya swayam bhagwan ko bhi vash mein kar de ......

Bhagwan ka har roop issi sangeet se sampurana shristi ka sanchalan karta hai.........

Shiv ka damroo, Krishna ki murli....Vishnu ka shankh......Aur Brahama ji k paas niranter bajti hui Maa saraswati ki vina .....Aur samved se aati hui rago ki dhwani.......

yeh sab sangeet k hi mool hai......

Jaha Raag megh malhar barsat kara sakta hai .....wahi Raag basant samay se pahele hi Basant ritu ko laa sakta hai .......Raag Shiv ranjani sakshat Mahadev ko pragat karsakta hai.....

Raag bairavi Sampurna nakaratmak urja ko samapt kar sakta hai .......
raag bhairav jeevo k mann k andhkar ko mitakar prakash se bhar deta hai.....

aap batayie iss yudh mein Sangeet ki kya awashyakta aan padi hai..

Tab Devraj Narad ji ki batayi saari baatein GR ko bata deta hai......

GR - Accha toh yeh baat hai ........Devraj Bhale hi Antak kaali shaktiyo ka upasak nahi hai lekin hai toh woh asur hi aur KS k liye kaam karta hai .....isliye Uske man ki aasuri pravriti toh wahi hai ....jo andhkar ka roop hai .......

Aur uss andhakar mein hi uske pran chipe hue hai jo kewal godhuli vela k Raag Ahir Bhairav se hi samapt hona sambhav hai........Aur iss raag mein parangat hai meri putri Shamli hai .........

Abhi - Parantu is bhayankar yudh bhumi mein Jaha har taraf astra shastra chal rahe ho waha hum Shamli ko kaise le jaaye.......

Shamli - meri dhrishtata k liye muzhe kshama kare ......k mein aapke madhya mein bol rahi hu .....parantu yeh aawashyak hai.....

Maaribhoomi ki raksha se badkar prano ka mulya nahi hota .........isiliye yadi aaj muzhe yeh awsar prapt hua hai .....toh prano ki raksha k moh mein main na jaau yeh sambhav nahi hai .....

DR - Wah putri mein dhanya ho gaya tum jaisi santan paakar ........

Aise aur thodi der mantrana chalti rahi phir hum wapas Swarg k mahal mein aagaye.....

Subha Shankh naad k saath sawera hua .........aur phir phunche yudh bhoomi par....

Phir aamne sammne ayi dono taraf ki sena .......


Antak - Accha toh Devtao ka Rakshak thik hogaya .........
Abhi toh sirf ek hi waar kiya tha.......Ab jara aur dikhao kitna bal hai tumme ......

Shamli ko waha laane k liye Antak ko yudh mein uljhana jaruri tha ...........Toh Abhi ne bhi apni gada ka aawahan kiya ......

Abhi - Antak Vradan mein prapt shaktiyo dwara woh ladte hai jinhe apne Baahubal par vishwas nahi hota .......Yadi sach mein tum ek veer yodha ho muzhse apne bahubal se yudh karo .........

Antak - Rakshak chinta mat karo .....ab antak apne Baahubal se hi iss yudh ko jitega .....yeh Antak ka vachan hai......

Aur gada lekar Abhi ki taraf dauda aur ek jodar waar kiy ....jisse Abhi ne sir par gada lejaakar toka .......Aur ek Kick uske pet mein maari aur picche dhakel diya ......

Jisse Antaj air krodh mein bhar gaya ......Aur phir prahar kiya dono gadao k takrane se waha bhayakar aawaj hone lagi thi ......tabhi Antak ne Abhi k waar ko block karke uske face par ek jordar punch maara....jisse abhi ko koi chot toh nahi aayi lekin itne force ki wajah se woh dur jaakar gira ........

Antak - ha..ha...ha...Ab pata chala Antak ka bahubal .......

Abhi ne Devraj ki taraf dekha toh unhone gada ki taraf ishara kiya ......Abhi samaz gaya

....Gada k takrav k kaaran hone wali aawj k kaaran aur yudh k iss mahol k kaaran Shamli gaa nahi paa Rahi hai.....

Abhi - Antak gada yudh toh bahut dekh liya .....asli bahubal ki pariksha toh mallyudh se hoti hai ......aur Abhi apni gada chodhkar taal thokkar maidan mein aajata hai .....

Antak - wah Rakshak maan gaye ....Ab toh aur maza aayega ...aur dono kissi pahlwan k jaise ek dusre par apne daav pech chalane lage ........


Devraj ne dekha k Ab Antak Abhi se ladne mein poora magan hai ....toh sahi awasar jaankar.....woh Shamli ko waha le aaye ......

Yaha Abhi Chalang lagakar Antak k piche pahunch gaya....aur Apni baaju se uski garden aise kaskar pakad li ....k woh hil bhi nahi paa raha tha......

Ussi samay Shamli ne Raag Ahir Bhairav k sur chede ....Aur jaise hi woh sur Antak k kaano mein pade ....toh woh jor se chillya ......

Antak - Chal hai yeh .....roko is sangeet ko ahhhh .....yeh mere pran le raha hai........Tumne Chal kiya hai mere saath....ahhh

Jaise jaise Shalini gaane lagi Antak k sir mein bhayankar pida hone lagi ...aur uske nask kaan aur muh se khoon nikalne laga .......tab Abhi ne usse chod diya.....

Antak apne baal nochne laga chillane laga .......Aur phir aakhir mein ek bhayankar Chikh k saath dharti par gir pada .....Lekin girte girte usne apne aakhri urja se ek jalta hua shool Shamli ki taraf phenka ....aur girkar mar gaya .....

Woh shool Shamli ki taraf bade tezi se badne laga .....

abhi k liye itna hi ......
agla update raat ko ......

Nice and excellent update but disappointed from hero side ager ye white energy h to black kya hoti h wo to chal nhi kar raha tha bs usne apni tapsya se urjit shakti ka upyog kiya jiske adhin wo h but galat yo kuch nhi kiya. Shamli nice name.