Bro it's ok
Aapne story padhi
Review diya
Mujhe bura nahi laga dukh hua
Shayad woh aapka pehla comment tha
Isi liye aur jyada dukh hua
Koi baat nahi jo ho gaya so ho gaya...
Aapne story padhi
Review diya
Mujhe bura nahi laga dukh hua
Shayad woh aapka pehla comment tha
Isi liye aur jyada dukh hua
Koi baat nahi jo ho gaya so ho gaya...
bhai mera phela comment he is me apki sari stories padhi he bhai but didnot thought ki app intni jaldi pura kar do ge kya bahi kuch logo ke keh dene se app apna kam chod do ge kuki log to kahenge hi bahi its there right but you have have the duty to make him understand by your actions and thoughts of writing INSANE it is a beautiful story
i hope ap INSANE 2 ke sat vaps aoo
sorry if i hurt you
waiting for INSANE 2..................................................!!!!
john..........................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i hope ap INSANE 2 ke sat vaps aoo
sorry if i hurt you
waiting for INSANE 2..................................................!!!!
john..........................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Aapke sare update me eksath padha aur review diya woh bhi ek readar ko reply kiya tha sayad woh dono movie dekhe to uska philosophy samaj me aaye .. but ise to apne wrong li le liya
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Thank you john bhai
Bhai ab main Apne likhne ka style toh nahi badal sakta na
Shauk ke liye likhta hoon
Aur readers ko bhi shauk ke liye hi padhna chahiye
Maan lo koi writer apni book publish karta hai
Agar kisi ko pasand na aayegi
Toh nahi khareedega
Maan lo Aapne story padhi
Aapne kaha ki bhai story mein yeh yeh kami hai
Aap ise door karo
Main try karunga
Lekin aap seedha aake bologe
Ki bhai yeh toh copy hai
Dukh toh hoga
Aur rahi baat part 2
Ki toh saara suspence hi khatam ho gaya
Toh part kya banau
Dekhunga agar man kiya toh likh dunga
Aur ab saare Updates Pehle likh lunga
Uske baad post karunga
Taaki yun emotional fool ki Tarah beech mein hi final Update na de doon
Thank you for reading and SUPPORTING
Bhai ab jo ho gaya so ho gaya
Maine aapka naam bhi nahi liya tha
Toh is baat ko yahin khatam kar dete hain
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Bro aap writer ho aapke follower hai aur aap story end karna ka reason mera comment ko denga... Mana ki aapne mera naam nahi liya lekin aapke reader mujhe negative li lenge aur kuch indirectly gaali bhi denge... Aap kuch likhoge jaise kuch log tarif karenge to koyi criticism bhi kar sakta hai... Aur us review dekh ke story likhna chod de , yeh kaise baat huyi...
Mere jaise bando sayad xforum aapnaygi nahi, iss liye mera last comment hai..
Bye bye xforum
Are bhai
Yeh kya baat hui
Meri wajah se aap forum chhod rahe ho
Galat baat hai
Main keh chuka hoon
Ki main thoda jyada sentimental hoon
Sorry aapko bura laga ho toh
Ab story end ho chuki hai
Toh aap bhi yeh bhool jaao
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