SAAND
UPDATE- 268 (B)
Tanu vaha se aditi ke sath uske room me chali gayi. Uske jate hi main bhi bahar nikal aaya. Bahar niklate hi mera phone bajne laga, jo ki maine aaj hi naya kharida tha kyon ki purana wala to khayi me hi gir gaya tha. Abhi mobile me kisi ke number save nahi kiye the isliye jaldi hi pick kar liya.
Raj—hello..koun..
Caller—STAR,,,,BLACK STAR
Ab aage…..
Raj—tujhe mera ye naya number kaise mila madarchod…?
Black star—ye kya chote bachcho jaisi baate karte ho sp..sari duniya me mera sikka chalta hai, phir apne khas logo ke baare me hi mujhe jankari nahi hogi kya…?
Raj—tere admiyo ko maine maar kar tanu ko aur mujhe kidnap karne ka tera plan maine fail kar diya isliye shayad apni bhadas nikalne ke liye call kiya hoga tune, kyo…?
Black star—tera dimag sach me tere lund me hi rahta hai lagta hai hamesha, tu samajhta hai ki mere admiyo ko maar kar tune mera plan fail kar diya..to ye teri galat fahmi hai…mera plan to success ho gaya hai..tujhe kya lagta hai ki maine apne admiyo ko kisi ko kidnap karne ke liye bheja tha…? Nahi re chutiye, balki main to sirf ye dekhna chahta tha ki teri yaad dast sach me chali gayi hai ya phir tu natak kar raha hai…? Kyon ki main janta tha ki agar tu memory loss hone ka bahana kar raha hai tab tanu ke sath koi galat harkat hote huye nahi dekh payega aur na hi khud ko control kar payega…Tanu ko mujhe kidnap karna hota to vah kaam mere liye baanye hath ka kaam hai.
Raj—haan, ab to apni izzat bachane ke liye tu yahi bolega na,
Black star—bachche, jin admiyo ko tune mara, vo sab to sadak chhap gunde the…abhi tak tera samna ek bar bhi black army se hua hi kaha hai,,,chuho ko maar maar kar tu apne aap ko sher samajh raha hai,,vo kya hai na ki “Sher Jab Chain Ki Neend Sota Hai To Kutto Ko Bhi Galat Fahmi Ho Jati Hai Ki Jungle Mein Unka Raaj Chal Raha Hai.” Theek yahi halat teri bhi hai.
Raj—vo to tera dil hi janta hoga ki koun sher hai aur koun chuha..? koun chhupte phir raha hai aur koun din dahade sab ke samne shikar kar raha hai..? apne aap ko sher kahta hai, bhosdike, tu chuha hai..himmat hai to samne aa kar iss sarkari chudakkad saand ka muqabla kar..kasam se madarchod,,”jis bur se nikal kar tu bahar aaya hai na, tujhe vapis ussi bur me na ghused du to kahna “
Black star—vo sab chhod aur matlab ki baat sun,,,jin jin ladkiyo ko tune bachaya tha, vo sab ab phir se mere kabze me hain,,sath me richa aur anamika ko bhi tere aur teri chodakkad team ke karan hua apna nuksan vasool karne ke liye uthwa liya hai..lekin afsos ki iss bar tu kuch nahi kar payega aur na hi teri chodu team unme se kisi ko bacha payegi.. bas ek kami rah gayi ki teri bahan radha ko thakurain bacha le gayi, lekin koi baat nahi, thakurain bhi kab tak bachayegi, iss bar to goli lagne ke baad bhi vo bach gayi,, magar afsos ki tere bachche ko nahi bacha payi.
Raj (gussa hote huye)—madarchodd..teri maa ko chodu..ek bar mil ja madarchod tu, phir dekh itne lund teri gaand me marunga, ki jiske baad madarchod, jindagi bhar tera hagna band nahi hoga.
Black star—tu sirf chilla sakta hai, vo kahawat hai na ki khisiyani billi khambha noche, to tu bhi vahi kar raha hai.. phir bhi chal main tumhe aur teri chodu team ko ek chance deta hu unhe bachane ka..kal ** baje se le kar 4 ghante ka time deta hu, main vada karta hu ki itne samay tak kisi ke sath koi galat harkat nahi hogi, agar inn 4 ghanto me tum nahi bacha paye to phir sab ke kapde jism se alag hone lagenge, pahle mere admi jee bhar kar unka bhog lagayenge uske baad unhe videsh ke alag alag city me kothe par bitha dunga…hihihihi..hai na mast idea..
Raj (gusse me)—tujhe time dene ka bahut shouq hai na sab ko…to aaj iss saand ki ek baat ko gaand me dhakkan laga kar sun le…Main tujhe 12 din ka time deta hu. Ja jee le apni jindagi. Kyon ki aaj se theek 13 ve din ke suryast ke sath hi teri jindagi ka bhi surya doob jayega, time note kar le theek 6 pm. Inn 12 dino me tu jo kar sakta hai kar le. Jo ukhad sakta hai ukhad le. Aur haan, ye dhamki nahi hai balki iss saand ki pratigya hai. Apni poori black army laga le apni hifazat ke liye, ya phir duniya ke kisi bhi kone me ja kar chhup ja, aaj se 12 din poore hote hi ye saand tujhe vaha se teri gaand me lund daal ke tujhe bahar ghasit layega.
Black star—hahahaha, jaan na pahchan, main tera mehman..hahaha...abe ghonchu pahle mujhe dhoond to le, ki bina dhoonde hi maar dega.. ?
Raj—vo mera kaam hai..tu uski tension mat le...bas intazar kar 12 din poore hone ka..tu bhi meri baat sun le, jis kisi ki bhi vajah se thakurain ke sath ye hadsa hua hai, vo kal ka suraj nahi dekhega..agar tu usko bacha sakta hai to bacha le..rahi baat unn ladkiyo ko bachane ki, to meri chodu team ko shayad tune sirf naam ki hi chodu team samjha hoga, kal shaam tak tujhe pata chal jayega ki vo kitni maha chodu team hai, baki apne admiyo ki halat dekh kar tu khud hi samajh jayega.
Black star—achcha, chal tujhe ek baat aur bata deta hu, teri mehbooba sadhana aur teri mehbooba sadhana, dono mere kabze me hain,,,tu hairan ho gaya hoga na ki maine do bar teri mehbooba sadhana kyo kaha…? Hihihihi..koi baat nahi, tu dono jagah sadhana ke sthan par sheetal samajh le…hihihihi
Raj (shocked)—kya bakta hai madarchod..?
Black star—main bak nahi raha hu balki yahi sach hai..dono mere kabze me hain…ab jaisa main kahta hu, vaisa hi tu karta ja,,warna ek to vaise hi raat din khoon ki ulti karte huye kuch din me mar jayegi aur bachi dusri to tu janta hi hai ki main ladkiyo ke mamle me kitna harami hu..vaise bhi dono doodh ki malayi ki tarah ekdam gori chikni hain, kasam se dono ko dekhte hi niyat kharab ho jati hai.
Raj (gusse me)—madarchodd…teri dushmani to mujhse hai..phir unhe kyo kidnap kiya…? Kya bigada hai unhone tera..? bhosdike, 12 din poore hone se pahle agar nahi marna chahta to dono ko chhod de…
Black star—alelele bahut gussa aa raha hai saand ko..hihihihi..hath aayi chidiya ko kaise chhod du, vo bhi sone ka anda dene wali hain dono…vaise jarurat to mujhe sirf sheetal ki hi hai,
Raj (gusse me)—madarchodd, phir tune meri sadhana ko kyo kidnap kiya…? Vo bechari to pahle se hi mout ke kagaar par khadi hai..
Black star—to phir meri baat maan ja..
Raj (gusse me)—tu akhir chahta kya hai…?
Black star—wasiyat..
Raj—vo mere paas nahi hai aur na hi main janta ki vo kaha hai ya usme kya likha hai... ?
Black star—ye to main bhi janta hu ki vo kaha hai, ye koi nahi janta...lekin tujhe vo wasiyat mere liye dhoondni hogi agar sheetal aur sadhana ki bachani hai to...baki tu samajh hi gaya hoga..vaise asli raj bhi mere kabze me hai..ab faisla tujhe karna hai, agar tune mera kaam kar diya to main vada karta hu ki teeno ko chhod dunga..
Raj—theek hai, wasiyat to main inn 12 dino me dhoond hi lunga aur aaj se 13 ve din tu jaha kahega, vaha le kar aa jaunga.. magar uske liye tujhe sab ko chhodna hoga jinhe tune kidnap kar rakha hai..
Black star—ye kisi ko chhodne wala kaam to nahi ho sakta..
Raj (tension)—dekh maine kaha na ki main khud wasiyat dhoond kar aaj se 13 ve din, tu jaha kahega, vaha aaunga, agar tune teeno ko chhod diya to..warna
Black star—warna kya…?
Raj—warna aaunga to main jarur 13 ve din ..jagah bhi teri hogi, goli bhi teri hogi, gaand bhi teri hi hogi aur mout bhi teri hi hogi..bas iss baat ka faisla tujhe karna hai ki “Tu Kanoon Ke Panje Ki Mout Marega Ya Phir Saand Ke Dande Ki Mout.”
Black star—bahut hoshiyar samajhta hai apne aap ko…? Maine kaha na ki mujhe sirf sheetal ki hi jarurat thi, sadhana ki nahi,,,lekin kya karu, dono hum shakal hain na, to samajh me hi nahi aata ki koun sheetal hai aur koun sadhana…? Sali kabhi sheetal, sadhana ban jati hai to kabhi sadhana, sheetal..dono ne mil kar dimag ka dahi kar diya hai..isliye majburi me dono ko pakadna pada.
Raj—akhir sheetal se tujhe kya lena dena hai..? tujhe to wasiyat se matlab hai na..? aur vo kaam main karne ko taiyar hu.. isliye unko chhod de..
Black star—nahi chhod sakta na, majburi hai..vo kya hai ki mujhe jo cheez chahiye..agar tu uska tala hai to sheetal uss taale ki chabi hai..aur bina chabi ke taala kaise khulega…? Matlab sidha sidha ye hai ki bina asli sheetal ke uss wasiyat tak nahi pahucha ja sakta,,main kya, koi bhi nahi pahuch sakta sheetal ki madad ke bina…
Raj—sheetal didi ka wasiyat se kya lena dena hai…? Tum to aise bol rahe ho jaise ki sheetal didi pahle se janti ho ki wasiyat kaha hai aur usme kya likha hai…?
Black star—maine ye kab kaha…? Lekin tumhe ek raaz ki baat batata hu, kisi ko batana mat warna tumhari family khatre me aa jayegi..
Raj—kaisa raaz madarchod…?
Black star—sheetal ko bachpan se hi kuch sapne aate hain…vahi sapna vo har roj dekhti hai…sheetal ko neend me dikhayi dene wale unn sapno ka sambandh uss wasiyat se hai aur wasiyat ka sambandh uske bhai raj se juda hai…samajh gaye, yahi vajah hai ki sheetal aur sadhana ki jaan hamesha khatre me rahti hai kyon ki dono hum shakal hain. Ab sapne me vo koun koun si jagah dekhti hai, ye to sheetal hi janti hai na..aur sapne me dikhne wali unhi kisi jagah me wasiyat ka raaz dafan hai….sheetal ki madad ke bina uss jagah tak nahi pahucha ja sakta, uss jagah ko sirf sheetal hi pahchan sakti hai kyon ki usne uss jagah ko apne sapno me anginat bar dekha hua hai.
Raj (shocked)—whatttt..‼
Black star—kyon yakin nahi aaya..?
Raj—madarchodd..jab tujhe lagta hai ki sheetal didi wasiyat kaha hai, ye janti hain to phir mujhe dhoondne ko kyo bol raha hai…? Mujhe bewaqoof samajh rakha hai teri maa ko chodu…? Aur agar jab asli raj tere paas hai to mujhse apni gaand kyo marwana chahta hai…? Raj bhi tere paas hai aur sheetal didi bhi, phir mujhse kya chahta hai…?
Black star—tum dono bhi to hum shakal ho na, to kya malum ki asli raj koun hai…? Dusri baat ki buddhe ne wasiyat kaha chhupayi hai, ye sheetal thodi hi na janti hai..vo sab chhodo, aur ab suno..abhay ki haweli me ek khandani heere ki anguthi hai jiske andar wasiyat ke baare me koi raaz hai, vo anguthi tumhe kisi tarah hasil kar ke mujh tak pahuchani hai..tab tak sheetal aur sadhana bilkul salamat rahengi mere paas….agar tumne mera kaam kar diya to main tumse vada karta hu ki main sab ko azad kar dunga…itna hi nahi, tumhari aur sadhana ki bimari bhi theek kar dunga..sath me poori property bhi vapis kar dunga.
Raj—aisa kya hai madarchod uss wasiyat me ki tujhe property nahi chahiye to kya chahiye…?
Black star—ye to main bhi nahi janta ki kya hai uss wasiyat me..bas tum vaisa karo jaisa maine kaha hai…aur itna dhyan rakhna ki tumhari jaan matlab ki sheetal aur sadhana mere kabze me hain.
Raj (thoda jor se)—agar unn dono ko jara si kharonch bhi aayi to itna dhyan rakhna ki phir tujhe wasiyat ka raaz kabhi pata nahi chalega kyon ki mujhse sach ugalwane ki teri gaand me dum nahi hai.
Black star—poori duniya mujhse darti hai aur tu mujhe hi dara raha hai..?
Raj—main dara nahi raha hu balki nasihat de raha hu..intazar kar aaj se 13 ve din ka...ussi din mulaqat hogi.
Uska call cut hote hi maine thakurain ko call lagaya..jo ki bistar me pade pade ro rahi thi..unknown number se call aane par usne turant cut kar diya..maine kayi bar call lagaya tab ja kar usne call pick kiya.
Thakurain (sisakte huye)—hello..
Raj (dard)—indu..
Thakurain (shocked)—hello..koun..! rajj
Raj—hmmm
Thakurain (rote huye)—raj tum kaha ho…?
Raj—abhay aur black star ki maiya chodne aaya hu..
Thakurain (rote huye)—rajj, vo sheetal mili kyaa…? Vo tumhe dhoondne gayi huyi hai rajasthan…uski tabiyat bahut serious hai.
Raj (dard)—janta hu indu..par tum chinta mat karo, apne jeete ji main use kuch nahi hone dunga…(nam ankhe)..jis ki vajah se unhe aur tumhe ye dard jhelna pad raha hai, main uss madarchod black star ko kutte se bhi badtar mout dunga.
Thakurain (sisakte huye)—tum kab aoge..? tumhari aaj bahut yaad aa rahi hai raj..
Raj (dard)—ye sab kaise hua indu…?
Thakurain (sisak kar)—sab theek hain raj..yaha ki chinta mat karo..radha bhi theek hai...main yaha sab sambhal lungi..tum sheetal ko jaldi se dhoondo raj...uske muh se bahut jyada khoon aane laga hai aaj kal..
Raj (nam ankhe)—indu, goli kis ne chalayi thi..
Thakurain (rote huye)—vo..vo..rajj
Raj (jor se)—maine pucha, goli kisne chalayi thi... ?
Thakurain (rote huye)—dhanraj ke admi the..
Raj (gusse me)—dhanraj…tu kal ka suryoday nahi dekhega..
Thakurain—hello rajjj..rajjj
Maine call cut kar ke kisi dusre number par call laga kar kisi se baat karne laga..usse baat kar ke free hua hi tha ki tanu aa gayi aur main apni ankhe band kar ke apne gusse ko control karne laga.
Tanu—raj, gusse se kisse itni jor se baat kar rahe the…? Ye phone tumne kab liya…?
Raj—vo, black star ka call tha..
Tanu (chounk kar)—kyaaa..black star..? lekin usne tumhe call kyo kiya tha…?
Raj (mann me)—ab isse kya bolu…sach to bata nahi sakta..jhuth hi bolna padega kuch..
Raj (jhuth)—vo madarchod mujhe dhamki de raha tha, maine bhi achche se suna diya madarchod ko….
Tanu (tension)—tum nahi jante raj ki vo bahut khatarnak admi hai..tumhe usse iss tarah gusse me baat nahi karni chahiye thi..
Raj (jhuth)—to kya karta…? Vo madarchod mujhe aap ko chodne ko bol raha tha..sala kamina mujhse meri hi tanu didi ko chudwana chahta hai..upar se bolta hai ki agar nahi chodoge to tumhe jaan se maar kar vo khud sab ko chodega..uski aisi ki taisi madarchod ki.. bolta hai ki tumne mere admiyo ko maar kar jin jin ladkiyo ki bur aur gaand bachayi hai, ab tumse hi unko chudwaunga nahi to mujhe maar dega.
Tanu (shocked)—kyaaa..aisa kaha usne…?
Raj—haan didi, itna hi nahi uss madarchod ne to yaha tak kaha ki agar maine 7 din ke andar tanu, ke sath sath kshama, bhavna aur aditi bhabhi ko nahi choda to vah tum sab ko kidnap karne ke baad apne sabhi admiyo se chudwayega.. aur ye bhi kaha ki apne admiyo ki mout ke badle me mujhe tum sab ko chodne ke baad kalyani chachi aur rekha didi ko bhi chodna padega…nahi to vo mujhe maar dega.
Tanu (shocked)—kyaaa..mummy aur rekha ko bhi…?
Raj—haan didi, lekin tum chinta mat karo..maine bhi usko khoob gali diya hai…bhala koi bhai apni bahan ko bhi chodta hai kabhi..? bahan ko chodna to bahut bada paap hota hai..ab tumhi batao didi, ki agar main tumhe chodu to ye paap hoga na…? maine bol diya ki mujhe maarna hai to bhale hi maar de lekin main apni tanu didi, kalyani chachi aur rekha didi ko kaise chod sakta hu…? Ye to paap hai.
Tanu (lipat kar)—nahi raj, tumhe usse aise nahi kahna chahiye tha..vo bahut harami hai..kuch bhi kar sakta hai..
Raj—arrey didi, jyada se jyada mujhe maar hi dega na..? maar dene do..
Tanu (muh me hath rakh kar)—nahi raj, aisa mat bolo..main tumhe kuch nahi hone dungi ab..
Raj—to kya kahta ki theek hai, main apni tanu didi ko chodunga…? Jaise ki main tumse chudwane ko kahta aur tum mujhse chudwane ko taiyar ho jati..? (mann me)..Marwaogi Tum Sab Apni Apni Marwaogi, Aaj Nahi To Kal Sab Iss Saand Se Chud Jaogi.
Vahi dusri taraf…
Chodu gang jungle me idhar se udhar alag alag group me apne sath 4-4 constables ki team bana kar bhatak rahe the, magar kidnap huyi ladkiyo ke baare me koi surag nahi mil raha tha aur samay tha ki pankh laga kar tezi se udta ja raha tha.
Intezar rahega......Agla update (chodu gang special) likh raha hu..Complete hote hi post karunga.
Enigma and Anand bhai ki he story mujhe best Lage...Saand se maine iss site pe sura Kiya tha Baad me aur bhi story try Kiya lakin koi faida nahi...phr mere Nazar pyaar 100 bar pe Gaye,aur jab maine padha toh samaj Saaya ki aap dono bhut he sulje hue writter hai... thank you both of you..Maine bhi vahi kaha hai jo mere dil ne kaha bhai.
Yaha maine kayi logo ko kahte dekha hai ki sirf good content likhne se hi writer achcha hota hai lekin mera manna hai ki writer achcha hai ya nahi, iska faisla content nahi balki uski writing skill karti hai.
Iska sidha example yahi hai ki ram ji ke baare me ramayan to bahut logo ne likha lekin logo ke dilo me jo chhap goswami tulsidas ji ne chhodi, vah dusra koi nahi kar paya, ye sirf writing skill ka hi natiza hai.
Filmo me koi actor kisi film me villain ka role bhi karta hai to iska ye matlab to nahi ki vah achcha admi nahi ho sakta..? jo gajab ki writing skill maine aapki rachna me dekhi hai, vah maine xp aur yaha ke kisi bhi writer me nahi dekhi..kahaniya maine xp me bhi lagbhag sabhi ki padhi hain, abhi se nahi balki 2004 se, jab xp ka naam XBoard.us hua karta tha. tab uski pahli kahani post huyi thi Meri Pooja didi..baad me ua content ki vajah se 2008 me vo band ho gayi kyon ki 2007 me ua par kanoon bana..warna uske pahle to villages me 80% marriages 18 yr ke pahle hi ho jati thi, iss age tak aate aate ladkiya 3-4 bachcho ki maa ban jati thi, kanoon tha lekin usme bahut kamiya thi, 2007 me ye strictly lagu ho gaya.
Ye aapki writing skill ka hi kamaal hai ki har pathak ka dil aur dimag aapki rachna padhne ke baad sammohan ke sutra me bandh kar rah jata hai, vo chahe na chahe, aapki rachna ko aage padhne ke liye vyakul ho hi jayega.