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Fantasy A YOUNG WEREWOLF (COMPLETED)

Just yes or no

  • Yes

    Votes: 34 91.9%
  • No

    Votes: 3 8.1%

  • Total voters
    37
  • Poll closed .

SHADOW KING

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nice update ....par king ne sirf family ko kidnap karne ko kaha ?...lagata hai ab sabki maut aa hi gayi ...kushal ke chehre ki devil smile dekhke yahi lagta hai ?...

par kya kushal naina ko chhod dega kyunki usne apne mom dad se kaha tha ki naina aunty ko bachana hai ya aisa hi kuch ...

ab ye dekhna hai ki taaniya hukum ka ekka kaise hai kushal ke liye ?...
 

Naina

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yeh king ki sui bas ek hi baat pe atak gayi hai.... khushal ke gharwalo ko kidnap karo.... :sigh:
are yeh kya fight start huyi nahi ki update hi khatam :sigh:
Khair let's see kaise khushal inlogo ko maja chakhata hai
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill :applause: :applause:
 
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King bahut gusse mein tha khushal ke yu achanak samne aa jane se, lekin wo santust tha usey pata tha ki khushal ko kaise harana hai ya marna hai, usko pata tha khushal ki kamjori uske human emotion hai, jisey wo jab chahe apna hathiyar bana sakta hai bas usey khushal ko andruni jhakam dene hai uske apno ko nuksaan pahucha ke aur aisa karte hi khushal ke emotions bahar aaye aur wo kamjor pada aur ye moka sabse best hoga usey maarne ka.

Ye sab sochte huye uske face pe smile aa gayi lekin agle pal chali bhi gayi kyuki usey black mountain jana hoga khushal se pehle agar nahi jaa paya usse pehle to wo mar sakta hai, lekin main dikkat wo black mountain hai jo ki bhut khatarnak hai uske ander jaana koi aam baat nahi hai aur ghus bhi gaye to jinda lotna bhut muskil hi nahi namumkin sa hai lekin ye pariksha to usey deni hogi aur waise bhi wo red gaurdian hai koi aam shaks nahi.

King:- john ready ho jao hum log black mountain chalenge aaj.

Black mountain ka naam sun ke john ki hawa tight ho gayi lekin wo mana bhi nahi kar sakta tha kyuki usey pata tha ki king ko naraz karna maut hai.

John:- haa haa chalenge na.

King ne usey ghur ke dekha aur waha se nikal gaya vampires se milne.


Vampires den:-

King ek chair type lakdi ki kisi cheez pe baitha tha aur uske samne vampires ka head Michael khada tha aur wo rick bhi.


King:- michael ek chota sa kaam karna hoga tumko

Michael:- aap hukum kare bas.

King:- khushal ki family pe hamla karo ek lekin dhyan rahe koi marna nahi chaiye bas kidnap kar lo sab ko aur ye kaam tum karoge ye rick nahi ye unke samne kamzor hai.

Rick ko ye baat sunke bura to laga lekin wo bichara kar bhi kya sakta hai.

Michael:- jaisa aap kahe, waise aap kaha jaa rahe hai?

King ne usey ghur ke dekha aur michael ki halat patli ho gayi aur usey realize hua ki king se question nahi puch sakta wo


Michael:- sorry king

King:- last mistake hai tumhari, ab bhi isliye chod raha hu kyuki kaam ki cheez ho tum.

Itna bol ke king nikal gaya aur uske piche piche sab apne apne kaamo mein viyast ho gaye.


********


Khushal:- taniya main tumko mssg karunga tab tumhe meri batayi huyi jagah pe aana hoga.

Taniya:- main aa jaungi lekin tum kaha ja rahe ho.

Khushal:- dhokebaazo ko maarne aur fir black mountain

Taniya:- main bhi chalu kya bhai.

Khushal:- no tum yahi raho, tum hukkum ka ikka ho mere liye.


Taniya:- apna dhyan rakhna.

Khushal ne bas haa mein sir hilaya aur waha se nikal gaya devastator ki den ki taraf usey pata tha sab wahi pe honge aur in pyado ko king ne bataya bhi nahi hoga ki inka leader maara jaa chuka hai.

Khushal apne apartment se bahar aaya aur apni red colour ki chamchamti audi mein baith ke nikal gaya den ki taraf aur waha den in sab se bekhabar ki unki maut aa rahi hai wo sab ek alag hi meeting kar rahe they aur bhut khus bhi they.


Allen:- hum logo ne bahut acha sabak sikhaya us kamjor alpha ko devastator bhut hi khush honge ye sunke...


Aliya :- haa khush to honge lekin wo hai kaha


Tabhi waha pe rick bhi aa jata hai


Rick:- mera bhi unse koi contact nahi ho paa raha aur king se puchne ki himmat nahi thi meri.


Naina:- arey kuch kaam mein busy honge wo king ke waise bhi unka koi kuch nahi bigad sakta wo bhut strong alpha hai.


Sofia:- isiliye to hum unhe pasand karte hai.


Naina:- haa meri bachi

Rick:- waise aaj king ne hum vampires ko kaam diya hai khushal ki family ko kidnap karne ka lekin unhone ye kaam khud michael ko diya hai sayad wo koi galti nahi chahte.


Naina:- ohhh Michael! He is cruel aur wo galti kar bhi nahi sakta.


"Haa haa har koi tumhari tarah nakara nahi hota meri so called mom"


Ye awaz sunke sab ruk gaye jaha they wahi aur jaha se awaz aayi us taraf dekha to waha khushal khada tha face pe ek devil smile ek dum shaant shayad ye shaanti aane wale toofan se pehle ki thi.


Rick:- lagta hai kal ki maar bhul gaye jo aaj bhi aa gaye aur aaj bhulo mat yaha aur bhi werwolf hai, us din se bhi jyada.

Khushal:- piche se waar karne wale mujhe bilkul pasand nahi hai isliye sab se pehle tuhhe maarunga..


Allen:- bhai bas kyu dialogue maar raha hai tu mana ki tu alpha hai lekin hum sab ko ek sath nahi rok payega tu.

Naina:- baate bhut huyi khatam kar do isey.


Naina ne ye baat apne samne khade werewolf se kahi thi jo ki ginti mein 15-20 ke aaspaas honge.

Aur ye baat sunke khushal ke face ki smile aur shaitani hogayi kyuki usey jo chahiye tha wo mil raha hai aur wo hai khoon.


Khushal:- lets the party begin bitch!


TO BE CONTINUED ??
Mast update hai bhai maja aa gaya
 

Black water

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Fabulous update bhai
Ab hoga khooni khel
 

mashish

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King bahut gusse mein tha khushal ke yu achanak samne aa jane se, lekin wo santust tha usey pata tha ki khushal ko kaise harana hai ya marna hai, usko pata tha khushal ki kamjori uske human emotion hai, jisey wo jab chahe apna hathiyar bana sakta hai bas usey khushal ko andruni jhakam dene hai uske apno ko nuksaan pahucha ke aur aisa karte hi khushal ke emotions bahar aaye aur wo kamjor pada aur ye moka sabse best hoga usey maarne ka.

Ye sab sochte huye uske face pe smile aa gayi lekin agle pal chali bhi gayi kyuki usey black mountain jana hoga khushal se pehle agar nahi jaa paya usse pehle to wo mar sakta hai, lekin main dikkat wo black mountain hai jo ki bhut khatarnak hai uske ander jaana koi aam baat nahi hai aur ghus bhi gaye to jinda lotna bhut muskil hi nahi namumkin sa hai lekin ye pariksha to usey deni hogi aur waise bhi wo red gaurdian hai koi aam shaks nahi.

King:- john ready ho jao hum log black mountain chalenge aaj.

Black mountain ka naam sun ke john ki hawa tight ho gayi lekin wo mana bhi nahi kar sakta tha kyuki usey pata tha ki king ko naraz karna maut hai.

John:- haa haa chalenge na.

King ne usey ghur ke dekha aur waha se nikal gaya vampires se milne.


Vampires den:-

King ek chair type lakdi ki kisi cheez pe baitha tha aur uske samne vampires ka head Michael khada tha aur wo rick bhi.


King:- michael ek chota sa kaam karna hoga tumko

Michael:- aap hukum kare bas.

King:- khushal ki family pe hamla karo ek lekin dhyan rahe koi marna nahi chaiye bas kidnap kar lo sab ko aur ye kaam tum karoge ye rick nahi ye unke samne kamzor hai.

Rick ko ye baat sunke bura to laga lekin wo bichara kar bhi kya sakta hai.

Michael:- jaisa aap kahe, waise aap kaha jaa rahe hai?

King ne usey ghur ke dekha aur michael ki halat patli ho gayi aur usey realize hua ki king se question nahi puch sakta wo


Michael:- sorry king

King:- last mistake hai tumhari, ab bhi isliye chod raha hu kyuki kaam ki cheez ho tum.

Itna bol ke king nikal gaya aur uske piche piche sab apne apne kaamo mein viyast ho gaye.


********


Khushal:- taniya main tumko mssg karunga tab tumhe meri batayi huyi jagah pe aana hoga.

Taniya:- main aa jaungi lekin tum kaha ja rahe ho.

Khushal:- dhokebaazo ko maarne aur fir black mountain

Taniya:- main bhi chalu kya bhai.

Khushal:- no tum yahi raho, tum hukkum ka ikka ho mere liye.


Taniya:- apna dhyan rakhna.

Khushal ne bas haa mein sir hilaya aur waha se nikal gaya devastator ki den ki taraf usey pata tha sab wahi pe honge aur in pyado ko king ne bataya bhi nahi hoga ki inka leader maara jaa chuka hai.

Khushal apne apartment se bahar aaya aur apni red colour ki chamchamti audi mein baith ke nikal gaya den ki taraf aur waha den in sab se bekhabar ki unki maut aa rahi hai wo sab ek alag hi meeting kar rahe they aur bhut khus bhi they.


Allen:- hum logo ne bahut acha sabak sikhaya us kamjor alpha ko devastator bhut hi khush honge ye sunke...


Aliya :- haa khush to honge lekin wo hai kaha


Tabhi waha pe rick bhi aa jata hai


Rick:- mera bhi unse koi contact nahi ho paa raha aur king se puchne ki himmat nahi thi meri.


Naina:- arey kuch kaam mein busy honge wo king ke waise bhi unka koi kuch nahi bigad sakta wo bhut strong alpha hai.


Sofia:- isiliye to hum unhe pasand karte hai.


Naina:- haa meri bachi

Rick:- waise aaj king ne hum vampires ko kaam diya hai khushal ki family ko kidnap karne ka lekin unhone ye kaam khud michael ko diya hai sayad wo koi galti nahi chahte.


Naina:- ohhh Michael! He is cruel aur wo galti kar bhi nahi sakta.


"Haa haa har koi tumhari tarah nakara nahi hota meri so called mom"


Ye awaz sunke sab ruk gaye jaha they wahi aur jaha se awaz aayi us taraf dekha to waha khushal khada tha face pe ek devil smile ek dum shaant shayad ye shaanti aane wale toofan se pehle ki thi.


Rick:- lagta hai kal ki maar bhul gaye jo aaj bhi aa gaye aur aaj bhulo mat yaha aur bhi werwolf hai, us din se bhi jyada.

Khushal:- piche se waar karne wale mujhe bilkul pasand nahi hai isliye sab se pehle tuhhe maarunga..


Allen:- bhai bas kyu dialogue maar raha hai tu mana ki tu alpha hai lekin hum sab ko ek sath nahi rok payega tu.

Naina:- baate bhut huyi khatam kar do isey.


Naina ne ye baat apne samne khade werewolf se kahi thi jo ki ginti mein 15-20 ke aaspaas honge.

Aur ye baat sunke khushal ke face ki smile aur shaitani hogayi kyuki usey jo chahiye tha wo mil raha hai aur wo hai khoon.


Khushal:- lets the party begin bitch!


TO BE CONTINUED ??
superb update but aap aage fight bhi dikha sakte the.to update bada ho jata writer ji
 
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