Fantasy ABHI - THE WARRIOR 2 (Completed)

[Nevil singh]

Yeh Kirti naam har prem kahani me jaadu karta hai dost sambhal kar rahna.

 

[Nevil singh]

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Me tujhe khuda kah gaya apne khuda ke saamne.

 

[Nevil singh]

Update - 67

Kalasur k maare jaane Abhi ne 14 loko ki vyavastha dekhne k liye ...apne 14 roop sthapit kar diye ...aur sadharan roop mein Prithvi par apne pariwar k saath Sang harak ka kartvya nibhate hue rahne laga ....

Abhi k dada dai k marne k baad ab RVS aur Naina Gaon rah rahe the ..Shahar ki saari jimmedari ab Abhi ne sambhal li thi ....

Rimpy ko chodkar uski sabhi patniya ...uske mukhya ..teen patniyo mein sama gayi thi .....Shivali ...Ritu ..aur .Vibhakta ..ko bhi santan sukh ki kaamna thi ....aur Rimpy bhi garbh wati thi ...issiliye Abhi Apni charo patniyo k saath ....aur Pariwar k saath rahne ka nirnay liya ...

waha rahkar ek taraf toh apne putra hone k kartvya ko nibhate hue apne pita RVS ka saara karya bhar sambhal raha tha ....wahi dusri or sangharak bankar apradh jagat mein panapne wale apradiyo ko uchit dand dekar apne kartvya ka nirvah kar raha tha ....

bhale hi Abhi ne KS k saare asuro ko maar diya tha ...parantu abhi bhi kuch asur jo uss mahayudh se bhag gaye the ..woh chupkar pritvi par rah rahe the ....aur apradh jagat ka niyantran kar rahe the ....

Burai rakt beej ki tarah hoti hai ..jaise jaise iska ant hota jaata hai ..waise waise aur naye burai k numainde paida hote rahete hai ....aise hi 8 asur jo KS k sainik the aur uss yudh se bachkar bhage the ..unke paas saririk bal k alwa aur koi power bahi thi .....woh yaha prithvi par gupt roop se rah rahe the ....unhone ..under world par kabja banaya hua tha ....Sangharak k bhay se woh pragat roop mein toh kuch nahi kar paa rahe the ...lekin ..abhi bhi kai apradh gupt rup se chal rahe the ....

yeh 8 asur humare system mein aise ghus gaye the ...k ..koi bhi ...unke vastavik roop se unhe nahi jaanta tha .....yaha tak k unke liye kaam karne walo ne ...bhi unhe Kabhi nahi dekha tha ... ....unki pahunch system mein bahut gahri thi ....unhone apne syndicate ka naam Black Eagle rakha tha ...Under World yeh naam hi kaafi tha ... Sangharak k kaaran ab Under world hawala ...neto k jariye corruption ...aur chote mote apradh ...par survive ka rahe the .....

Samay par Rimpy ne ek sundar balak ko janam diya ..Abhi ne uska naam ..Thakur ..Deepak Singh (Deepu) rakha , Deepu k janm k ek kuch mahino baad Shivali ..Ritu ..aur Vibhakta k bhi ek ek santan hui ....Shivali ka beta Shivom ....Ritu ka beta ...Krishna ....Aur Vibhakta ...ka Virat ....

unn teeno mein apni matao ki kuch shaktiya bachpan se hi thi ...Golu un teeno k thoda bade hone k baad ....unke prashikshan k liye ....Maha guru k aashram le gaya tha ...

Deepu mein janam se koi vishwsh powers nahi thi .. uske bhiter apne nata pita k gun the .... buddi mein apni mata Rimpy ki tarah tez ...aur bal ..aur shaurya mein apne pita saman tha ....uski Bhi training 5 varsh ki umar se hi shuru ho gayi thi ....

best fighters ..aur trainers usse trained kar rahe the ....jab unki training poori hui toh Abhi khud usse yog ..dwara apne chakra ..jagrit karne ka prashikshan dene laga ....Kabhi Kabhi Rakesh aur Rinku bhi usse ..weapon training aur fighting skills sikhate the ...

Shivam..... Krishna aur Virat k jaane k baad Abhi ne apne Sangharak roop ko wahi choda ...aur ....Apni teeno patniyo k saath Janalok chala gaya ...kyu ki paruwarik moh se jyada unke liye ...apna kartavya ..jyada jaruri tha ....

Aaj Deepu 18 saal ka ho raha tha ...unke vash ki paramprao k anusar ...aaj Gaon k mahal mein sthit gupt Shivalaya mein ...aaj ..usse Sangharak ki shaktiya ...prapt hone wale thi . ek bahut badi jimmedari uske kandhe par aane wali thi ....

Deepu gahri neend mein soya ...apne sunahre sapno mein khoya tha ...k tabhi uske mobile ka alaram baj utha ....jisase uski need khul gayi ....abhi subah 5 baje ka samay ho gaya tha ..woh jaldi se utha ....aur apne nityakarm niptakar ...dhyan mein baith gaya ....Abhi k prayatno ....aur uski kadi mehnat k kaaran ..woh aagya chakra tak k chakra jagrit kar chuka tha ....Janam se bhale hi usmein koi powers nahi thi ...paratnu apne athak prayas ..aur kadi training karaan ....aaj woh har tarah ki fighting skills aur mein poori tarah trained ho gaya tha ....aur saath hi apne chakro ki urja ka prayog karna bhi sikh gaya tha ....

Aise hi dhyan karte hue usse kaafi samay bit gaya tha ....jab usne aankhien kholi toh saamne dekhkar uske chehre par muskurahat aagayi ....uski pyari gudiya ...uske saamne ....uske hi saman aasan jamakar baithi hui thi ....aur ek aankh kholkar usse dekh rahi thi ...

Deepu - kya kar rahi hai ..meri pyari choti shaitan ...

Neetu - bhai mein koi saitan thode hi hu ...mein toh Neetu hu na ....

Deepu ne usse apni goad mein khich leta hai aur uske gaal par kiss kar deta hai ....accha toh kya jar rahi thi meri gudiya ..

Neetu - woh toh mein aapko wish karne aayi thi na toh aap ause dhyan mein baithe the toh mein bhi baith gayi ....

Deepu - lekin tumne toh wish kiya hi nahi ....

Neetu - apne sar par haath maarte hue ...ooffo mein toh bhul hi gayi ...GM bhai ...& Haapy birthday ....aur Deepu k gallo par kiss kar deti hai

Deepu - thanku mera baccha ...ab ..jaao aur jaldi se tayar ho jaao ...hume aaj gaon k liye bhi nikalna hai ....

Neetu chali jaati hai ...abhi subah k 9 baj gaye the ....Deepu ko aaj apne aur teen maa Shivali ..Ritu aur Vibhakta ki kami bahut khal rahi thi ...aur uske teeno bhai ..Shivom ...Krishna ..aur ...Virat ...ko bhi woh bahut muss kar raha tha ...usne kai vaar Abhi se pucha tha ....lekin Abhi uske iss baat ko taal deta tha ....
.Deepu ab utha ...aur apne bed k paas gaya toh ..waha ek naya ...ek suit tha jo Rimpy ne rahka tha ..jab Deepu dhyan mein tha .....tayar hokar woh neeche aaya ....

Neeche Abhi drawing haal mein baitha subah ki news dekh raha tha ...Addu aur Rimpy kitchen mein Breakfast bana rahi thi ...ghar mein naukaro k hote hue bhi ...BF ..woh khud tayar karti thi ...

Deepu ne Abhi k pair chuye ....aur Aashirwad liya ...

Abhi - usse gale lagate hue ...jeete rho mere bacche ...mera Aashirwad hai k jeevan k har oadav par tumhe safalta mile ....

Deepu bhi Abhi k saath baitkar News dekhne laga ....

News reader - roopnagar k ...mahshur tourist spot mein hue aaj ek aur haadsa ....yaha k sarowar mein tairne gaye 4 navyuvako ka kuch pata nahi chala ...dekhne walo ka kahna hai ...sarowar k kinare ...nahate hue ...achanak pair fisalne se ..woh sarower k gahre oaani mein kahi kho gaya ...uss samay waha maujood kuch tairako ne unhe dhundne ki koshish ki lekin unka kuch pata nahi .....aapko taad dila de ...k abhi kuch din pahele bhi aisa hi gaadsa hua tha tha ....

hum puchna chahte hai aakhir prashasan kya kar raha hai kab tak aise hi ..baccho ki jaane jaati rahegi .....

Deepu - aapko kya lagta hai papa ....kahi inn mein toh kissi aur ka koyi haath nahi .....

Abhi - inn news walo ko bas koi mauka chahiye hota hai sarkar ko gaali nikalne ka ...ab ..inn sab .mein sarkar kya karegi .....yeh zheel bahut badi ..aur gahri hai ..puchle hafte ..bhi aisa hi juch haadsa hua tha ...toh pahele muzhe bhi kuch shak hua ....uss samay bhi 6 bacche iss zheel mein lapata ho gaye the ....maine bhi unhe dhundne ka prayatna kiya ....lekin woh kahi nahi mile ...iss samay baarish k kaaran ...zheel mein paani bahut hai ..aur .....yeh zheel ghane jungle tak jaati hai ....waha bahut bade bade magarmach hai hosakta hai ...woh bacche unhi ki bhent chad gaye ho

tabhi ek aawaj ne unka dhyan aakashit kiya .....Arre bhai baap bete mein kya baat ho rahi hai jara hume bhi toh pata chale ....yeh tha Sunil Singh ..Adira k pati ....aur yske saath the uske do bacche ...ladka shubham jo Neetu ki hi umar ka tha ...aur 6th mein padhta tha ...Aur ladki thi ...Priyanka jo 8th mein thi .....

Abhi - aao aao Sunil ...woh khuch khas nahi bas asise hi news k baare mein baatein chal rahi thi ...Aao baitho ...aur batao kaise chal raha hai business ..

Sunil - woh sab baad mein saale sahab pahele jara Birthday boy se toh mil le ....

Deepu ne aage badhkar Sunil k pair chue ...aur Sunil ne bhi usse Aashirwad diya ...

Tabhi Shubham aur Priyanka daudte hue aaye jaise unmein race si lagi ho ....Shubham daukar sidha Deepu se lapak gaya ....

Shubham - mein jeet gaya ..mein jeet gaya ....

Sunil - Shubham ..aur priyu yeh sab kya hai ....

Priyanka - maine kuch nahi kiya dad yeh toh shubham ne hi bolo tha ..k kaun sabse pahele bhai ko wish karta hai ....

Deepu - arre ismein race lagane ki kya baat hai tum dono aao ....aur Deepu ne dono ko apni baahon mein bhar liya dono ne Deepu k gaal par kiss karte hue usse ek saath wish kiya ....tabhi Neetu bhi tayar hokar aagayi ....

thodi der baccho mein aisi hi thodi masti chalti rahi ..phir naukar ne aakar ...bataya k Breakfast tayar hai ....sabhi Dinning hall mein pahunch gaye ....Addu aur Rimpy aaj khud serve kar rahi thi ...Breakfast ki khushbu bahut acchi aarahi thi issiliye sabhi ka dhyan bf ki taraf tha ...lekin Deepu ko toh jaise kissi ka besabri se intajar tha ....

Tabhi dinnig room k darwaje par uski nazre jaise tahar gayi ....waha Kirti ..black top ..aur ..blue jeans mein kamal lag rahi thi ....uski kajrari aankhien gulabi patle honth aur doodhiya rangat ...
Deepu jaise usmein kho saa gaya tha ...Kriti bhi apne Rajkumar ko dekhkar jaise kho hi gayi thi ...woh kaskar apne meboobk seene se lagna chahti thi ...lekin itne sab k hote hue ..aisa karna sambhav nahi tha ....

Rimpy aur Abhi ka dhyan Deepu par gaya ...k woh kaha khogaya hai ..jab unhone Kirti ko dekha toh sab samaz gaye ....unhe apna samay yaad aagaya ....k....ek din Rimpy aise hi khadi thi aur Abhi bhi usse aise hi ghur raha tha ....apne bite hue palo ko yaad karke unke chehre par muskan aagayi ......

Tabhi darwaje se do jaane pahchane shaksh aaye .....yeh tha Rinku ..aur Uski Patni Lima .....Kirti unhi ki beti thi .....

Rinku - Arre bhai ....jara humare liye bhi ruk jaate ...naaste k liye ...wah bhabhi kya khusbu aarahi hai .....

Lima - kya aap bhi itne bade ho gaye ho lekin bachpana nahi gaya ....

Abhi - bhabhi ..iss dumchale ko kuch mat kaho yeh jaisa bhi hai aise hi accha hai ....

Abhi aage badhkar Rinku ko gale laga leta hai ....Lima bhi Rimpy k gale lag jaati hai ...

Lima - kriti se ....arre beta waha kyu khadi ho ...ghar mein toh yaha aane k liye badi utawli ho rahi thi ...ab yaha kya ho gaya

Rimpy - vas karo Lima tum neri bacchi ko kuch nahi kahogi ...itna jahkar Rimpy ..Jirti k paas jaakar uske sar par haath pherti hai aur usse gale laga leti hai ....

yaha Rinku bhi Deepu ko wish karta hai ....Deepu bhi Rinku aur Lima ka Aashirwad leta hai ...Kirti bhi usse wish karti hai ....phir sabhi dinning table par baith jaate hai ...Kirti ..thik Deepu k saamne baithi hui thi ...issiliye Uske dhyan baar baar uski taraf jaa raha tha ...

Abhi deere se Deepu ko - ab ghurna bas karo barkurdar aur bf karo hume jaldi nikalna bhi hai ...

uske baad kirti aur Deepu ki aankh micholi k saath saath ..Breakfast ..hua ...uske vaad sabhi ..apni apni gaadiyo mein gaon ki or nikal pade ...Deepu k kuch khas college k frnds bhi aaye the ..jinke baare mein aage pata chalega ..unke liye ...badi ...gadi arrange ki thi ....

Gaddiyo ka kaarwa Old Roopnagar ki taraf badh chala ......

Yaha gaon mein Rana mahal aur poora gaon sajaya hua tha ..ab yeh goan bhi ek nagar mein badal chuka tha ....lekin abhi bhi yaha k logo ka mkya kaam tha kheti ....

Rana Mahal poori tarah phoolo se sajaya hua tha ...RVS aur Naina ...jhud apne pote k swagat ki tayari ...dekh rahe the ....Abhi k nana nani toh ab nahi rahe the .....Abhi k chacha bua aur unke parwar sabhi waha aaye hue the ...yaha inke baare mein itna detail nahi bataunga ..kyu ki iss part mein unka koi khas role nahi hai ...

RVS Aur Naina ko Abhi k kaafile ki Gaon mein pravesh karne ki khabar milti hai ...toh woh pooja ki thali liye mahal k mukhya dwar par kgade ho jaate hai ....tabhi unke intejar ki ghadiya samapt ho jaati hai ....aur gadiyo k kaafila waha aakar ruk jaata hai ...

RVS aur Naina apne jigar k tukde Deepu ka tilak karte hai aur uski aarti utarte hai ....Depu apne dada dadi k pair chuta hai ...RVS usse uthakar gale laga leta hai ...

RVS - mere sher teri jagah waha nahi taha mere dil mein hai ...aur uski pith thaptapate hue ....wah ab toh tu bilkul gabru jawan ho gaya hai ....

Deepu ne Naina ka bhi Aashirwad liya ...Naina ne uske maathe ko chuma ....aur usse gale laga liya ......yaha Deepu se milne walo ki line bahut lambi thi ..uski sona aur pari bua ....Abhi ki bua chacha mama & family ...Sabse milte milte bahut der ho gayi .....Abhi k sabhi dosto ki vyastha mahal mein ho gayi thi ....Abhi ...Maha guru k shisya aacharya Divyansh jo ab unka gurukul sambhal rahe the ....unke saath Magal k guot shivalaye mein Abhishek ki tayari kar rahe the ...

suryastha ho gaya tha ...Shuvalaya k saari tayariya ho ..gayi thi ....Abhi Deepu ko lekar ...Mahal k apne kaksha ....k deewar k paas pahuncha ...tabhi uss deewar mein ek gupt dwar pragat ho gaya ..Deepu aascharya se uss dwar ko dekh raha tha ...kyu ki woh kai baar yaha aa chuka tha aur iss kaskh mein kai kai dino tak rah bhi chuka tha ..parantu usne kabhi yeh dwar yaha nahi dekha ....

Abhi Deepu ko lekar uss dwar mein pravesh karta hai aur shivalaya pahunch jaata hai ...yaha pahunchkar toh Deepu aur aaschrya chakit rah jaata hai hai ....kyu ki yaha ek aur Abhi uski aur teeno maaye Shivali ..Ritu ..Aur Vibhakta jinhe woh bahut miss karta ..woh wahi khadi thi .....apni teeno maa ko dekhkar Deepu bahut khush hua ...lekin abhi bhi woh confusion mein tha ..k ek Abhi uske saath tha aur ek uski teeno maao k saath ....

Deepu k saath jo Abhi tha woh tha A1 jo Abhi k janalok jaane k baad sangharak ki bhumika aur pariwar ka kartavya sambhal raha tha ....

Abhi - aise kya dekh rahe ho beta ...miloge nahi apne pita se ...

Deepu ne ek bazar A1 par daali ..toh usne haa mein ishara kiya ...Deepu ne aage badhkar Abhi k charan chuye ...Toh Abhi ne bhi usse gale lagakar Aashirwad diya ....
uske baad Deepu apni teeno maao se bhi mila aaj itne varsho baad usse apni inn teen matavo se milkar bahut accha laga ...woh teeno bhi uska maata chumkar usse gale lagakar uspar apni mamta luta rahi thi ...

lekin Deepu abhi bhi Abhi k do roopo se confuse tha ....tab Abhi ne usse saari baat sanskep nein bata di ....apne pita ki shaktiyo ka gyan hote hi uski shraddha aur badh gayi ...usne phir apne Pita k charno mein naman kiya ..

Deepu - maa Mere teeno bhai kaha hai ...unhe dekhe bhi vahut varsh ho gaye hai ...

Shivali - beta woh bhi golu chachu k saath aate hi honge ...

uske baad Deepu k haatho aacharya Divyansh k dwara Rudra abhishek karaya gaya ...aur uske baad ..Abhi ne sankalp karke ...Sangharak ...ki saari shaktiya ....Deepu ko pradan ki ..woh shaktiya ek prakash k roop mein Deepu k bhiter pravesh kar rahe ..thi ..aur uske prabhav se usse halke halje zhatke bhi lag rahe the .....

Sangharak ki shakti prapt hote hi Deepu ...k haath mein ek divya talwar pragat ho gayi ...ab Deepu ban gaya .. apradhiyo ka kaal sangharak ...

Abhi k liye itna hi ...
Agla update jald hi ....

doston yaha mein aapko batana chahta hu k har kaha ni ka ek hi main hero hota hai . aur ek main villan ....Iss bhag mein Deepu ka part jyada hai lekin main villan ko maarega apna hero Abhi hi ....
kuch readers yeh bhi soch rahe honge k Arsalan ...Darmen ..kcera ka iss modern era se jya connection hai aur kahani uss saamay se iss era mein kaise pahunch gayi ....toh unke liye vas itna hi kahunga k Darmen k era se uss modern era ka bahut gahra connection hai ....saath bane rahite aapko dhere dgere sab pata chal jaayega .....aur gaa ..apne valuable comments aur review dena mat bhuliyega ...
Stay safe & Stay Happy ....

Aafreen alfajo se mahkti hui ek aur benajeer update se naqab uthaya hai mitr ne, Khubsurat hai dost.

 

[Nevil singh]

Tapkti hai nigaho se barsti hai adao se,
Mohabbat koun kahta hai ke pahchani nahi jaati.

 

[Nevil singh]

Suraj ki laalima sang liye hue ek aur sunehri nayi update ki partiksha rahegi mitr.

 

[jitutripathi00]

वाह भाई वाकई शानदार अपडेट है

 

[Rudrathakur]

Nice update brother.... To aakhir kaar deepu ko sangharak ki shaktiyaan prapt ho gyi aur woh ab apni lyf ka ek nya adhyaay shuru krega jiske liye wo itne varsho se taiyariyaan kr rha tha.. Sath me uske teeno bhai bhi uska samay samay pr sath denge in sabhi me.. apne krtavya ka nirvahan krte hue...dekhte h aaage kya hoga ar besabri se intzaar rhega darmen era aur modern era ke beech link ke rahasay ke reveal hone ka...
Waiting brother

 

[abhi1008]

Update - 68

Sangharak ki shakti prapt hote hi Deepu ...k haath mein ek divya talwar pragat ho gayi ...ab Deepu ban gaya .. apradhiyo ka kaal sangharak ...

ab aagee.....

Sangharak ki shaktiya aur jimmedari pratp hone k baad Deepu ne Abhi aur apne teeno matao ka Aashirwad liye ....Abhi ko bhi garv hua Deepu ko dekhkar woh usmein apne aapko dekh raha tha .

Abhi - beta shatiyo k saath hamari jimmedari bhi badh jaati hai ..aur muzhe poori aasha hai k tum apni jimmedari ko acche se nibhaoge .....ab tumahare jeevan mein sangharsh aur badh jaayega ......humara Aashirwad sada tumahare saath rahega ....

Deepu - ji .mein apna poora prayas karunga ...aapki aashao par khara utarne ki ...

Abhi - humme garv hai tumpar ....

A1 ab wapas Abhi mein sama gaya .....vidhi samapt hone par woh sab kaksh se bahar aagaye ...yaha ..khaksh mein RVS.. Naina ...baithe hue the ....unhone ...kaksh ke gupt dwar se ....un sabko dekha .....aaj varsho baad apni teeno bahuo ko dekhkar woh bahut khush hue ....
RVS aur Naina ne apne pote ko nayi shkti prapt karne k liye badhai dete hai ...uske baad waha Abhi aur uski teeno shaktiya RVS aur Niana k pair chute hai thodi der parivarik mel milap aur kuch baatein chalti hai ....

Raat mein tarah tarah ki lighting se poora Rana mahal jagmaga raha tha ....Mahal k bade se lawn mein patry ki arrangement ki gayi thi aur mehmano ka aana ..shuru ho gaya tha ....jismein ...MP ..MLA ..se lekar HM ...tak ...Aur ..ACP ...DSP ...kuch RAW k adhikari ..aur bade bade businessmen ...Media ..sab aaye the ....

Deepu apni family k saath stage par tha .....uski aankhien Kirti ko talaash rahi thi .....tabhi uski nazar Stage k saamne Front row mein Kirti par nazar padi jo apne mom dad Rinku aur Lima k saath baithi thi ....Indian style dress Lahenga Choli mein woh bilkul kissi rajkumari jaise hi lag rahi thi .....Deepu ko toh uske alawa kuch bhi dikhayi nahi de raha tha ....yeh baat Abhi se chupi nahi rahi ...usne Rinku & family ko bhi stage par bula liya ...

Abhi - Deepu k kaan mein ....Barkurdar jara party par dhyan do ...Kirti se baad mein mil lena ....

Apni chori pakdi jaane se Deepu zhenp sa gaya ....Ab Cake kaatne ka samay aaya ...tabhi ..Stage par sugandhit puspo ki varsha hui ...aur entry hui Golark k saath ..Shivam ...Krishna ..aur Virat ki .

Deepu apne bhaiyo ko dekhkar bahut khush hua ...teeno bhaiyo ne gale milkar Deepu ko wish kiya ...

Shivom - kya baat hai bhai iss kgas mauke par hume hi bhul gaye ....

Deepu - ytumaad toh usse kiya jaata hai jisse hum bhule ho ..Chote ...tum teeno ko maine kitna miss kiya mein hi jaanta hu ....

Shivom gale lag jaata hai ....Bhai muss toh humne bhi bahut kiya ...humara toh mann karta tha ...waha sab chodkar yaha aajaaye ...lekin yeh Golu chacha aane de tab na .....

Golu - kya baat hai ...bhatije apne bhaiyo se hi milte rahega ...bhaibhum bhi yaha khade hai .. ...

Deepu ne Golu k pair chue - aapko kaise bhul sakta hu chachu ..aap toh mere chachu hone k saath saath mere pratham guru bhi ho ....muzhe Shivali maa ne pahele hi bata diya k aap aarahe ho ....

Golu ne Deepu ko gale lagakar Aashirwad diya ....

Neetu - bhai jaldi se cake kaato na muzhe bahut bhuk lagi hai ....mere pet mein chuhe kabbadi khel rahe hai ....

Neetu ne kaha hi kuch aise andaj se waha sab k chehre par hassi aagayi ...
Deepu ne uska haath pakadkar cake kaata aur usse khilaya ...phir shuru hua ....gifts aur wish ka silsila ...aaye hue guest stage par aakar Deepu ko gift de rahe the ...aur Abhi unka parichay kara raha tha ....unmein se kuch khas the jinka kahani mein role hai unka jikar karunga ..

Abhi - inse milo yeh hamare shahar k naye DSP hai Dushyant Rathore ...inka naam sunte hi apradhiyo ki ruh kaanp jaati hai ....inke aane se logo ko phir se police system par vishwas hone laga hai ...

DSP - Arre sar hum toh bas apni duty sahi se nibhane ki koshish karte hai ....hum toh bane hi hai janta ki sewa k liye ......

Dsp sahab Deepu ko wish karte hai ...

Deepu - thanku uncle.aapse milkar bahut accha laga ...aap jaise officers k kaaran hi janta sukoon se so sakti hai ..salute to you sir ...

Dsp - arre bhai itni bhi tareef nakaro ...accha jab bhi tumhe meri koi jarurat pade ..muzhe jarur contact karna ..i am always there for you my boy ...

uske baad MP Rupesh Grehwal ...

Abhi - inse milye yeh gai Humare MP sahab ...

Deepu - papa inhe kaun nahi jaanta ...inhone yaha ki janta k liye bahut kuch kiya hai ....inhone ne toh apna saara jiwan hi ...anatho aur diwayngo k naam kar diya hai ...aur issliye inhine viwah bhi nahi kiya aur bada hi sadharan jeewan jeete hai ...

MP - arre beta bas karo ..mien toh tumahare pita k saamne kuch bhi nahi hu ...inhe k karyo se muzhe prerna mili ...mein toh bas ..inke pad chinho par chalne ka prayas kar raha hu ....

Deepu - yeh toh aapki mahanta hai uncle ...mein bhi aapke aashram aur unn baccho k liye kuch karna chahta hu .....

MP - beta yeh toh bahut acchi baat hai k tum aisi soch rakhte ho ...nahi toh aaj kaal ki young generation ...khair chodo ...janamdin ki bahut bahut Shubhkamnaye ....

Abhi - beta yeh hai naye ubharte hue business tycoon Jugal kishor jitna famous yeh apne business k liye hai utne hi apne charity k liye hai ...

Jugal - bas sir yeh toh aapka badapan hai ...nahi toh koi apne business rival ko itna samman deta hai ....

Abhi - Business apni jagah hai jugal ...tum ek acche insan ho aur aaj k youth k liye prerna ho ....

Jugal - sir yeh sab aap se hi sikha hai ...by the way Happy birthday young man ...

uske baad log aate rahe aur jaate rahe ...der raat 1 bje tak party chalti rahi ...sab din bhar ki baga daudi mein thak gaye the ....Abhi ne Rinku & family ko wahi rok liya tha ...sabhi apne apne room mein ..so gaye ....

Shivom ..Krish ...aur ..Virat ...Deepu k hi room mein uske saath rahna chahte the ....toh Usne bhi haa kar di ..aakhir itne varsho baad ..jo mile the ...woh teeno fresh hokar bed par aagye....tabhi Deepu k mobile mein msg tone baji ...Usne ph dekha toh Kriti ka msg tha ....woh soch hi raha tha k kaise Kirti se baat karu inn teeno k hote hue ....tabhi ..phir tone baji ...

Virat - bhai yeh kaun hai itni raat ko jo baar baar msg kar raha hai ...kahi aapne humare liye koi bhabhi toh nahi dhund li ....

Krish - tu bhi kya baat kar raha hai Viru ..usmein dhundne ki kya jarurat hai ..bhul gaya Kirti ko ..ussi ka msg hoga ....kar lo baat bhai ab humse kya sharmana ...aur haa bhabhi ko humara ram ram kah dena ....

Shivom - Chup ho jaao tum dono ...bhai ko pareshan karna band karo bahut raat ho gayi hai chup chap so jaao ....

Krish aur Viru dono ek saath ....ji bhai ..aur dono ..aankh michkar let jaate hai ....

Deepu sochta hai k Yaha toh Kirti se baat karna sambhav nahi ...usne ph silent mode par kar diya tha ..usne dekha phir ek msg aaya ....wohchahta toh teleport hokar issi samay Kirti k paas jaa sakta tha ...yaa ...ph lekar kahi aur jaa sakta tha ...lekin uske liye usse Shivom k saamne koi bahana ..banana padta ....ab ek hi raasta tha washroom ...woh mobile lekar Washroom ki taraf badha....Deepu ko mobile lekar ..Wash room jaate hue dekhkar Shivom k chehre par ek muskan si aagayi .....

Deepu ne jaise hi Washroom ka doir khola ..ek shwet prakash ka ghera pragat hua ...isase pahele woh kuch sochta ya samazta ....woh ..Mahal k chat par tha ....jaha ...ek kona tarah ki roshniyo se jagmaga raha tha ....sugandhit phushpo se saja hua ..chat ka woh kona ...bada hi khubsurat lag raha tha .....jaise koi swarg ka tudka ho ...aur uss swarg k tukde ...mein khadi thi uski apsara ..Kirti ...Deepu ye sab dekhkar hairan hua ..k wo toh washroom jaa raha tha phir yaha kaise....

tabhi uske mann mein Shivom k aawaj gunjti hai

Shivom - Bhai humari taraf se janamdin ka yeh khubsurat tohfa ...
itna sunkar Deepu k chehre par ek muskurahat aagayi ....

Kirti - aise kya dekh rahe ho ..muzhe yaha bulakar khud janab ka hi pata nahi ..mein toh kabse msg kar rahi thi lekin uska bhi koi jawab nahi ...pata hai mein kaise Mom Dad se chupkar yaha tak aayi hu .....mein toh abhi jaa hi rahi thi ...abhi kuch bologe bhi yaa aise hi dekhte rahoge ...

Deepu ..uske paas jaakar .....'ska haath pakadkar apni baaho mein khinch leta hai ....aur usse bahoon mein bharkar uski aankhon mein dekhte hue ....Naraz ho jaan ....
Deepu k iss tarah bolne se Kirti sa saara gussa gayab ho jaata ..hai ....woh uske aankhon mein jaise kho jaati hai .....

Deepu - bolo na jaan naraz ho ...toh haazir hai tumahara yeh gulam har saja bhugatne k liye ...

Kirti - naraj bhi tum jyada der kaha rahne dete ho ...tumahari inn aankhon mein na jaane aisa kya hai ..k ..mein san kuch bhul jaati hu .....

Deepu - waise gusse mein tum aur bhi jyada haseen lagti ho ....yeh tumahare gaal bikul kashmiri seb ki tarah laal ho jaate hai ....

itna kahkar Deepu ..kirti k ..gaal ko apne muh mein bharkar ..halke se daant gada deta hai ...Kriti .uska muh gatakar ..apna gaal sahlate hue ....

Kirti - uff yeh kya kar rahe ho ....dard hota hai na ...

Deepu usse aur bahoon mein kaste hue ....Kirti ...

Kirti - hmmm

Deepu - mera i bday gift toh tumne diya hi nahi ....

Kirti - diya toh tha na ..Stage par ...tumne toh dekha bhi nahi hoga ....

Deepu apni kalayi dikhata hua ...usmein ek khubsurat sa bracelet tha ....tahi hai na

Kirti - hmm ..toh tumne pehan liya ...phir aur kiss gift ki baat kar rahe ho ...

Wahi jo tumne kal bolo tha gili wish kal karungi ..

Kirti - maine aisa kuch nahi kaha tha ....

Deepu usse apne se aur chipkate hue ...uske hontho k paas apne honth le jaata hai ....sach mein kuch nahi kaha tha .....bolte hue uski saanse ...Kirti ko mehsus ho rahi thi ....Dono ki saansen takra rahi thi ...dil ki dhadkane tez ho gayi thi ....ek dusre ki saanso ki mehak se dono madhosh ho rahe the ...

madhoshi k aalam mein jaane kab dono k honth mil gaye ...Deepu galke halke se uske hontho ki chum raha tha ....dono iss chumban mein jaise duniya bhul gaye the ...dono ab ek dusre k hontho ko chus rahe the ..dono ek dusre k adhar ras ka paan kar rahe the ...

Deepu k haath Kirti ki kamar par kase hue the wahi Kirti ka ek haath ..Deepu k sar k piche ..aur ..ek pith ko sahla raha tha ...ek dusre ko betahasha chumte hue ..dono ki saamnse bhari hone lagi toh saans lene k liye dono k honth juda huye phir mil gaye ...

Dono ab chumte hue ...ek dusre ki juban ko bhi chus rahe the ...jusase dono k badan ko zhatke lag rahe the ..dono k badan ek dusre se ragad rahe the ....dono kuch der aise hi orem ras nein dube rahe .. phir apne aapko niyantrit karke wahi ...phoolo k bichaone par ...ek dusre ki vaahon mein sogaye ....thodi der ek dusre ki baahon mein samay bitane k baad Deepu ne Kirti ko uske rrom tak chod diya aur apne room mein aagaya ....

Shivom - kyu bhai kaisa raha Janamdin ka upahar .....

Deepu - tu bada shaitan ho gaya hai apni yaksha maya ka prayog muzhpar hi ...pahele bata dete na ...

Shivom - bhai pehele bata deta toh surprise kaise deta ...

Deepu - tu aur tera surprise ....waise tera gift sabse .accha tha ...thanx bhai mera din banane k liye ....

Shivom - din ..yaa...raat ....ha..ha...ha...

Dusre din subah ...Deepu ..apne college k doston se milne ..guest rooom ki taraf gaya ...subah k 9 ..baj gaye the ....lekin waha koi nahi tha ....Deepu sochne laga ...k aakhir yeh sab subah subah kaha chale gaye ....abhi woh ..soch hi raha tha ....tabhi usse saamne se uske dost ..Preetam ...Salim ...Sameer ....aur Jackie ..aate hue dikhayi diye ....

Deepu - Kaha cgale gaye yaar tum log subah subah .. aur baaki k kaha hai ...

Salim - yaar tumahare Mahal ka park bada mast hai ....hum bas wahi tahal rahe ..the ...wakai ...dil karta hai yaar ..yahi bas jaau ....kya hariyali hai ....

Preetam - chup kar khub jaanta hu ...kaunsi hariyali dekh raha tha ...agar maali kaka dekh lete toh teri kutayi pakki thi ....

Deepu - woh sab chod yaar baaki k frnds kaha hai ... ( Deepu ka antar man kah raha tha k kuch toh gadbad hai )

Sameer - bhai perfect toh nahi malum lekin woh sab ..yaha k kissi zharne k baare mein baat kar rahe the ....shayad wahi gaye ho ....

Deepu k 8 dost gayab the ...aur uske mann mein kuch bura hone ki aashanka bal pakad rahi thi .....

Abhi k liye itna hi ...
Agla Update jald hi ....

 

[abhi1008]

Superb update bhai maza aa gaya age dekhte hai dono era m kya connection hai .

Thanku soo much bhai for superb support

aise hi saath banaye rakhe ??

Update 68 posted.....

 

[Vk248517]

Nice update bro