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Thriller BEGUNAAH ( Completed )

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Apne favourite writer ki sab nakal karte hain starting me. Uske baad wo khud apni ek alag pahchaan banate hain. Ved prakash sharma ji ne Vikas ka character add kiya aur fir vijay vikas series ke ek se badh kar ek novel likhe. Thriller novels to lajawaab hain unke. Surendra Mohan Pathak ji ko bhi padha hai maine magar favourite sirf ved prakash sharma hi rahe. Unka beta Shagun Sharma bhi gazab ka likhte hain. Mere ek chacha ji meerut me rahte hain. Ek baar main bhi gaya tha waha. Waha pahuchte hi mere zahen me mere favourite writer ko dekhne ka khayaal aaya. Shahdara me main gaya bhi magar fir waapas laut aaya, kyo ki himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi ki unke kareeb jaau. Halaaki unse mil pana bhi itna shayad asaan na raha hoga magar fir bhi gaya tha. Khair milna nahi likha tha is liye wapas aa gaya. Aaj bhi is baat ka malaal hai ki main apne favourite writer ke itne kareeb pahuch kar bhi unse mil nahi paya aur ab to milna ho hi nahi sakta,,,,,:verysad:
जब बात उपन्यास की हो रही है तो थोड़ा समय मैं भी लेना चाहता हूं ।
अस्सी और नब्बे के दशक में - कच्ची उम्र का प्यार VPS थे और जब Mature हुए तो SMP के प्यार में पड़े ।
कच्ची उम्र में अक्सर भावुकता हावी रहती है ।
लाउडनेस और अति नाटकीयता भी पसंद आती है ।
वहीं जैसे जैसे समझ बढ़ती जाती है वैसे वैसे भावुकता की जगह तर्क , लाउडनेस और अति नाटकीयता की जगह सहजता और स्वाभाविकता अधिक प्रभावित करती है और फिर ये समझ उम्र भर चलती है ।
पाठक जी के उपन्यासों में भावुकता कभी तर्क पर हावी नहीं होती ।
पाठक जी के उपन्यासों में जो भावुक प्रसंग है वो भी एक समर्थ लेखनी से लिखे गए हैं इसलिए हमेशा जेहन में ताजा रहते हैं और वो भी अति नाटकीयता से कोसों दूर है..... वो प्रसंग सहजता और स्वाभाविकता के साथ पढ़ने वालों के सामने आते हैं ।
उनकी भाषा में एक स्वाभाविक रवानगी है जो पाठकों को अपने साथ बहा ले जाती है ।
मैं जानता हूं कि शुरुआत के दो चार उपन्यास अच्छे नहीं लगेंगे लेकिन बाद में आप खुद मेरी इस बात पर विश्वास करेंगे ।
 

TheBlackBlood

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Sayad kuch bhut / dayan/ pret uske undar ghus ke yeh sab kar raha hoga:DD: aur kaand ke baadAvinash ke body se chhu mantar hota hoag......

Kyun ki Xforum mein sab possible hey.......
Agar ye story super natural power wali hoti to yakeenan aisa mumkin tha magar isme magic jaisi koi baat nahi hai. Khair fikar mat kijiye sab pata chal jayega,,,,,:D
 

kingkhankar

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Agar ye story super natural power wali hoti to yakeenan aisa mumkin tha magar isme magic jaisi koi baat nahi hai. Khair fikar mat kijiye sab pata chal jayega,,,,,:D
Mein to eisi hi time pass kar rahan hun apke next update tak:peace:

Mujhe pata hey ki finally pata to chalega because I am 100% sure this story will see its end.
 

TheBlackBlood

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जब बात उपन्यास की हो रही है तो थोड़ा समय मैं भी लेना चाहता हूं ।
अस्सी और नब्बे के दशक में - कच्ची उम्र का प्यार VPS थे और जब Mature हुए तो SMP के प्यार में पड़े ।
कच्ची उम्र में अक्सर भावुकता हावी रहती है ।
लाउडनेस और अति नाटकीयता भी पसंद आती है ।
वहीं जैसे जैसे समझ बढ़ती जाती है वैसे वैसे भावुकता की जगह तर्क , लाउडनेस और अति नाटकीयता की जगह सहजता और स्वाभाविकता अधिक प्रभावित करती है और फिर ये समझ उम्र भर चलती है ।
पाठक जी के उपन्यासों में भावुकता कभी तर्क पर हावी नहीं होती ।
पाठक जी के उपन्यासों में जो भावुक प्रसंग है वो भी एक समर्थ लेखनी से लिखे गए हैं इसलिए हमेशा जेहन में ताजा रहते हैं और वो भी अति नाटकीयता से कोसों दूर है..... वो प्रसंग सहजता और स्वाभाविकता के साथ पढ़ने वालों के सामने आते हैं ।
उनकी भाषा में एक स्वाभाविक रवानगी है जो पाठकों को अपने साथ बहा ले जाती है ।
मैं जानता हूं कि शुरुआत के दो चार उपन्यास अच्छे नहीं लगेंगे लेकिन बाद में आप खुद मेरी इस बात पर विश्वास करेंगे ।
Sanju bhai main aapki in baato se puri tarah sahmat hu. Maturity jab aa jati hai to apne aap hi kaarya shaili aur soch me pariwartan aa jata hai. VPS mere favourite hain aur wo hamesha rahenge. SMP ji ke bhi kayi novels padhe hain maine aur isme koi shak nahi ki wo bhi apni jagah kisi se kam nahi hain. Social novel me ritu raj ko bhi padha hai maine. Behtareen love story likhte hain wo. Kahne ka matlab ye ki maine thoda thoda lagbhag sabhi writers ko padha hai magar test ki baat hai to wo VPS ke novels me hi milta hai mujhe,,,,,:dazed:
 

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bhai me na to sex padhta hu aur na hi likhta hu.... meri kahani ke 46 updates padhkar dekh lo......
meri id kamdev isliye nahi ki me sexescapades padhne, likhne, sexchat karne (bakchodi kahte hain hindi me :D) ya porn dekhne ka shaukeen ho.... actually mujhe inme se kuchh bhi pasand nahi
meri id kamdev isliye hai...kyonki mujhe sex karna pasand hai....duniya ki har cheej se jyada.....13 ki umr se shuru karke aj 45 ki umr me bhi daily 2-3 bar sex karta hi hu....

so don't worry.....agar apki kahani me thrill, suspense ya romance hai to mujhe jarur pasand ayegi
kya janha bhi jate ho apni story sunane lagte ho , is umra me khaada hua , is umra se sex shuru kiya ,is umra ki is is aourat ke sath kiya :doh:
bolo to gov. se bat karke history ke syllabus me hi ek chepter dalwa dete hai .. kamdevv ki kaamkatha :lol1:
firefox420 bhaiya dekh lo judge sahab ki kartut yanha bhi shuru ho gaye yye
 

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kya janha bhi jate ho apni story sunane lagte ho , is umra me khaada hua , is umra se sex shuru kiya ,is umra ki is is aourat ke sath kiya :doh:
bolo to gov. se bat karke history ke syllabus me hi ek chepter dalwa dete hai .. kamdevv ki kaamkatha :lol1:
firefox420 bhaiya dekh lo judge sahab ki kartut yanha bhi shuru ho gaye yye
me faaltu bakchodi (englesh me bole to "sexchat") nahi karta..............
sirf aur sirf "kaam" (englesh me bole to "sex") ki bat karta hu :lol1:
 

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BEGUNAAH
Update - 05


Ab tak,,,,,

"Baat to tumhari durust hai pyare." Dushyant ne kaha_____"Par aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki tumhe is sab ke bare me pata to sab kuch hai magar tum hame batana hi nahi chaahte."

"Nahi sahab." Avinash ne kaha_____"Aisi koi baat nahi hai. Bhala main aapse kyo nahi batana chaahuga.? Duniya me bhala aisa kaun sa aadmi hai jo itni maar sahne ke baad bhi apna sach na bataye.? Main sach me aapse kuch nahi chhupa raha. Har baar itni maar jhelne ka shauk kise ho sakta hai.? Har baar dusri jagah mujhe naya kamra rahne ke liye kiraye se lena padta hai aur har baar kahi dusri jagah kaam talaash karna padta hai. Har baar aisi pareshani uthana kaun pasand karega sahab.? Main to bas yahi chaahta hu apni zindagi se ki kahi to mujhe aisi jagah mile jaha main sukoon se rah saku aur is tarah ka haadsa mere sath na ho."
Avinash ki baato ka asar tha ya usme dushyant ko sachchaayi nazar aayi magar itna zarur hua ki usne usse dusra koi sawaal nahi kiya. Balki use kuch hidaayate de kar apne kamre me sone ke liye kah diya. Avinash sofe se utha aur chup chaap apne us chhote se kamre ki taraf badh gaya. Kamre me koi bed nahi tha. Halaaki avinash ki to aadat pad chuki thi farsh par sone ki is liye wo kamre me pahucha aur bag se ek chaddar nikaal kar use kamre ke farsh par bichhaya aur us par let gaya. Jabki dushyant wahi drying room me hi kisi gahre khayaalo me gum baitha raha.

Ab Aage,,,,,

Dusre din subah dushyant ki aankh khuli hi thi ki tabhi uske kamre ka darwaza baahar se khatkhataya gaya. Pahle to wo soch me pad gaya ki uske kamre ka darwaza kaun is tarah khatkhata sakta hai fir ekdam se uske dimaag ki batti jali aur use yaad aaya ki uske flat me uske alawa bhi ek shakhs hai jiska naam avinash hai.

Dushyant ne sirhaane rakhi apni hand watch ko utha kar time dekha to subah ke 06:15am ka wakt tha. Time dekh kar use hairaani huyi ki itni subah avinash uske kamre ka darwaza kyo khatkhata sakta hai.? Uska policiya dimaag palak jhapakte hi sakriya ho gaya. Ye to use pata hi tha ki avinash koi maamuli aadmi nahi tha balki jane kitni baar wo jurm karne par kaanoon se saza pa chuka tha. Ye alag baat hai ki jo jurm us par lage the wo sarasar jhoothe the uske anusaar.

Dushyant apne bed se is tarah utra ki uske utarne par bed ne zara si bhi chu cha ki awaaz na ki aur fir wo be-awaaz fauran hi darwaze ke paas pahucha. Tabhi darwaza fir se khatkhataya gaya aur sath hi avinash ki awaaz bhi aayi. Avinash ne use chaay pine ke liye 'sahab' kah kar awaaz diya tha. Idhar avinash ki ye baat sun kar dushyant ekdam se dheela pad gaya. Man hi man bola ki 'kya dushyant pyare subah subah itni khatarnaak jasusi karne ko kisne kaha tha tumhe?'

Dushyant ne normal ho kar darwaza khola to dekha baahar avinash ek chhoti si plate me chaay ka cup liye khada tha. Dushyant ye dekh kar man hi man chaunka ki itni subah avinash uske liye chaay kaha se le ke aa gaya.?

"Sahab." Avinash ne bahut hi narm aur shaant lahje me kaha_____"Maine aapke liye chaay banaya hai. Mujhe laga aapko subah uthte hi chaay pine ki aadat hogi is liye bana diya."

"Ham kahi koi khwaab to nahi dekh rahe pyare.?" Dushyant ne apni aankho ko sikodte huye kaha______"Na...hargiz nahi. Hame achhi tarah yaad hai ki hamne apni zindagi me aaj tak kabhi koi khwaab nahi dekha aur iska hame behad dukh bhi hai."

"Ye aap kya kah rahe hain sahab.?" Avinash ke maathe par pareshani ke bhaav ubhar aaye the.
"Bahut zaalim ho avinash pyare." Dushyant ne jaise shikayat karte huye kaha_____"Tumhe ek baar me hamari koi baat samajh me kyo nahi aati.?"

"Dhire dhire aane lagegi sahab." Avinash ne kaha_____"Lijiye chaay pi lijiye nahi to thandi ho jayegi."
"Chaay.???" Dushyant ne buri tarah chaunkte huye kaha____"Are haan dear. Ham to is chaay ke bare me bhool hi gaye the. Achha hua ki tumne hame yaad dila diya magar....!"

"Magar kya sahab.???" Avinash ka sir chakra sa gaya.
"Yahi ki itni subah subah tumhare hath me ye chaay kaha se aa gayi.?" Dushyant ne ajeeb si shakal banate huye kaha_____"Kyo ki jaha tak hame yaad hai hamne kabhi iske pahle apne kitchen me na to chaay ki patti rakhi thi aur na hi kisi ke amma ka doodh rakha tha. Fir kaise itni subah subah tum hamare liye ye chaay le kar hamare kamre ke baahar pragat ho gaye.?"

"Wo main subah jaldi uth gaya tha sahab." Avinash ne jhijhakte huye kaha______"To main baahar doodh ki talaash me nikal gaya tha aur fir doodh lene ke baad ek dukaan se chaay ki patti kharirdi maine. Uske baad yaha aaya aur aapke liye chaay banaya."

"Tumne to kamaal kar diya pyare." Dushyant usse prabhaavit nazar aaya, bola______"Aur achhi khaasi dhoti ko cheer faad kar rumaal bhi kar diya. Khair ham tumhari is bhakti se ati prasann huye meri jaan. Jaao ab ise garam kar ke laao...kya thandi chaay pilaaoge hame.?"
"Ji abhi laya sahab." Kahne ke sath hi avinash palat kar waapas kitchen ki taraf tezi se badh gaya.

Avinash ke jane ke baad dushyant kuch palo tak khada kuch sochta raha fir wo bhi palat kar kamre me bed par aa kar baith gaya. Wo avinash ke bare me gahraayi se sochne laga tha. Avinash ki activities use waisi hi lag rahi thi jaise ki wo koi masoom sa ladka ho aur uske andar kisi bhi tarah ka chhal kapat na ho. Magar kya aisa sach me tha wo....ye jaise sabse bada sawaal ban kar khada ho gaya tha uske zahen me. Dushyant koi faisla na kar saka ki wo avinash ke bare me kaun se khayaal ko sahi samjhe.

Thodi der baad avinash chaay garam kar ke laaya aur dushyant ko diya usne. Chaay ka cup avinash se lene ke baad dushyant ne use paas hi rakhe ek chhote se stool par baith jane ko kaha to wo chup chaap baith gaya. Udhar chaay ki do teen chuskiya lene ke baad dushyant ke chehre par chamak si ubhar aayi.

"Maanna padega pyare." Dushyant ne apne hi andaaz me khush hote huye kaha_____"Bahut hi behtareen chaay banaayi hai tumne. Lekin pyare....hamare liye itni subah subah aisa takalluf ka kaam kyo kiya tumne.?"

"Ab yaha bina koi kaam ke main kaise baith sakta hu sahab.?" Avinash ne kaha_____"Subah jaldi uth jane ki aadat hai to socha aapke liye chaay hi bana du. Kitchen me gaya to dekha na chaay patti thi aur na hi doodh. Is liye aapko bina bataye dono cheeze lene baahar chala gaya."

"Is baat ko chhodo dear." Dushyant ne kaha_____"Ye bataao tumhe car chalani aati hai.?"
"Ji sahab." Avinash ne kaha______"Har tarah ki gaadi chala leta hu. Main to mechanic hu sahab is liye car chalana mere liye koi mushkil kaam nahi hai."

"Bahut khoob." Dushyant ne kaha_____"To ab aaj se tum hamare hi sath rahoge aur hamari gipsy chalaaoge. Samajh lo tumhe gipsy chalane ka naya kaam mil gaya hai. Khair ab jabki tum hamare sath hi rahoge to ab ham bhi dekhenge ki kaun hai jo tumhe aise jurm me baar baar fasa kar gayab ho jata hai."

"Main isi baat se darta hu sahab." Avinash ne badi adheerta se kaha______"Mujhe dar hai ki kahi meri vajah se aap par koi baat na aa jaye. Main duniya ka sabse bad-kismat insaan hu sahab. Ab tak bas dukh hi dekhe hain maine aur aisi ruswaayi ki koi mujhe rahne ke liye apne yaha kiraye se kamra bhi nahi deta."

"Sab kuch bhool jaao my dear." Dushyant ne khaali cup ko side me rakhte huye kaha_____"Bas yu samjho ki jitna tumhe dukh takleef milni thi mil gayi. Ab to use dukh aur takleef milegi jisne tumhare sath aisa salook kiya hai. Lekin usse pahle ham tumse kuch zaruri baate jaanna chaahte hain."

"Ji puchhiye sahab." Avinash ne kaha_____"Mujhe agar wo baate pata hongi to zarur bataauga aapko."
"Very good." Kahne ke sath hi dushyant ne bed ke sirhaane se cigarette ka packet uthaya aur usme se ek cigarette nikaal kar use sulgaya, fir bola______"Sabse pahla sawaal ye ki tumhari family me kaun kaun hain aur tum kaha ke rahne wale ho.?"

"Is bare me to maine pahle hi aapko bata diya tha sahab." Avinash ne kaha______"Is duniya me mera apna koi nahi hai. Maine jab se hosh samhala hai tab se main akela hi raha hu."

"Chalo maan liya ki tumhara apna koi nahi hai aur tumne jabse hosh samhala tab se tum akele hi rahe ho." Dushyant ne ek hi saans me ye sab kaha______"Magar pyare, tumhe apni pichhli zindagi ke bare me to sab pata hoga na.? Jaise ki tum jab chhote the to kaha rahte the aur fir badhti umar ke sath sath tum kaha kaha bhatakte huye yaha tak pahuche.?"

"Mujhe apne bachpan ka kuch yaad nahi hai sahab." Avinash ne jaise apne dimaag par zor daalte huye kaha______"Mujhe to bas ye yaad hai ki aaj se do dhaayi saal pahle main ek aisi jagah par pada tha jaha chaaro taraf pahaad the aur khadane thi. Us wakt main bahut taklif me tha aur mere shareer par kayi jagah chot lagi huyi thi. Sabse zyada chot mere sir me lagi thi."

"Iska kya matlab hua pyare.?" Dushyant ke zahen me kayi tarah ke khayaal ubharne lage the, bola______"Tum us jagah par us haalat me pade the iska matlab kya hua.? Khair uske baad kya hua.?"

"Meri haalat us wakt bahut kharab thi sahab." Avinash ne kaha_____"Badan kisi fode ki tarah dard kar raha tha. Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki main waha par us haalat me kaise tha.? Apni asahneeya peeda ko bardaast karte huye main kisi tarah utha aur apne aas paas dekhne laga. Chaaro taraf pathreele pahaad aur khadaane thi. Pahaado ke paas hi kayi jagah machine khadi huyi thi magar waha par us wakt koi insaan nazar nahi aa raha tha. Maine un machino ki taraf jane ka socha aur jaise hi kadam badhaya to ladkhada kar wahi par gir gaya. Uske baad jab mujhe hosh aaya to main ek nayi jagah par tha aur main leta hua tha. Maine charo taraf nazar ghuma kar dekha to pata chala ki main kisi hospital me hu. Main hairaan rah gaya tha ki ekdam se main yaha kaise aa gaya.? Kyo ki iske pahle to main kisi khadaan jaisi jagah par tha. Maine apne aapko dekha to chaunk gaya kyo ki mere shareer par dusre kapde the. Matlab ki mere kapde badal diye gaye the. Main ekdam se ghabra gaya tha apni haalat se. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki mere sath wo sab kaise hua tha.? Maine apne dimaag par zor dala to mera sir fatne laga aur mere mukh se cheekhe nikalne lagi. Meri cheekhe sun kar do log kamre me aaye. Ek to safed rang ka kot pahne doctor tha aur dusra koi alag aadmi tha. Uske chehre par daadhi aur moochh thi. Us aadmi ne mujhe dekhte hi 'Avinash' kaha aur bhaag kar mere paas aaya aur kahne laga ki tum thik to ho na.? Wo jane kya kya bole ja raha tha aur main ye soch raha tha ki mujhe avinash kahne wala wo aadmi kaun hai.? Idhar tabhi kisi ne mere ek hath me sui si chubhaayi aur main kuch hi palo me behosh ho gaya. Uske baad mujhe nahi pata ki kya hua. Dubara jab mujhe hosh aaya to maine dekha ki main abhi bhi wahi hospital ke ek kamre me bed par pada hua tha aur kamre me koi nahi tha. Mujhe abhaas hua ki meri haalat pahle se ab thik hai."

"Kamre me charo taraf dekhne ke baad." Ek lambi saans lene ke baad avinash ne fir se kahna shuru kiya______"Maine apne dimaag par fir se zor dala to mujhe fir se dard aur takleef huyi to maine dimaag par zor daalna hi band kar diya. Main kisi tarah utha aur bed se niche utra. Apne pairo me jab khada hua to taklif to huyi magar pahle jaisi nahi. Mere jism me hospital wale kapde the. Main dhire dhire chalte huye darwaje ke paas aaya aur darwaje ke upar ki taraf lage sheeshe se baahar jhaanka. Baahar dusri taraf ki diwaar ke alawa kuch na dikha mujhe. Main us shakhs ko dekhna chaahta tha jisne mujhe avinash kaha tha magar waha koi nahi tha. Mere man me khayaal aaya ki hospital me to kisi na kisi ka aana jana laga hi rahta hai magar sheeshe ke baahar ab tak koi nazar nahi aaya. Kafi der tak main darwaze ke paas hi khada raha. Fir jab mere paav dukhne lage to main waha se hata aur kamre me idhar udhar dekhne laga. Tabhi ek jagah meri nazar jam si gayi. Kamre ke ek kone me chaddar ki aisi chhoti si aalmari diwaar se sati huyi rakhi thi jisme aam taur par kitaabe rakhi jaati hain magar is aalmaari me kitaabe nahi rakhi thi balki ek bag rakha tha. Mere man me khayaal aaya ki hospital ke is kamre me ye bag kiska ho sakta hai.? Maine utsuktawas us jagah par ja kar us bag ko khol kar dekhne laga. Bag ke andar jis cheez par meri nazar padi use dekh kar main buri tarah chaunka. Bag me wahi kapde the jo iske pahle mere badan par the. Waise hi jagah jagah par khoon laga aur fate huye. Khair maine bag me rakhe un kapdo wale khandhe ki chain band ki aur dusri chain kholi to dekha usme lamination kiya hua ek card jaisa pada tha. Maine use nikaal kar dekha. Wo card koi adhaar card tha jisme mera naam avinash likha nazar aaya. Card buri tarah se ghisa hua tha. Usme sirf mera naam avinash hi likha nazar aa raha tha aur ek taraf photo thi jo ki dhundhli si thi. Avinash ke aage kya likha tha wo samajh me nahi aa raha tha. Maine us card ko ulat palat kar dekha. Dono taraf buri tarah se ghisa hua tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi ne jaan bujh kar card me maujud likhawat ko ghis kar mitaya tha aur fir uske baad card par lamination karwaya gaya tha."

"Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha." Avinash ne kuch pal ruk kar saans liya fir bolna shuru kiya______"Ki main aisi haalat me kaise tha.? Maine apne bare me sochna shuru kiya to mera sir chakrane laga magar kuch bhi yaad na aaya ki mere sath wo sab kaise hua tha aur ab main kis jagah par hu.? Jitna main sochta utna hi mera sir dard karta. Mujhe apni pichhli zindagi ka kuch bhi yaad nahi aa raha tha. Sab kuch jaise shoonya ho gaya tha."

"Iska to ek hi matlab hua pyare." Inspector dushyant ne ek gahri saans kheechte huye kaha_____"Aur wo ye ki do ya dhaayi saal pahle jaha tum lahu luhaan jaisi haalat me pade the wo ya to kisi accident ka nateeja tha ya fir tumhari kisi se koi dushmani thi jiski vajah se tumhare dushman ne tumhe us haalat me waha pahucha diya tha. Tumne bataya ki wo koi pahaado se ghiri koi khadaan jaisi jagah thi...iska matlab wo jagah nichli satah par thi jabki charo taraf ka hissa uchaayi par tha. Hamare kahne ka matlab ye hua ki ya to tumhe uchaayi se niche fenk diya gaya ya fir niche hi tumhare sath kisi ne kuch aisa kiya ki tumhare sir par gahri chot lagi aur us chot ke chalte tumhari yaad daast chali gayi. Jab tumhe hosh aaya tab tum apni pichhli zindagi ke bare me bhool chuke the ya yu kahe ki tumhare dimaag se tumhari pichhli zindagi ki saari yaade gayab ho chuki thi."

"Aapne bilkul sahi kaha sahab." Avinash ne kaha_____"Baad me mujhe bhi yahi samajh aaya ki meri yaad daast us ghatna ki vajah se ja chuki hai."

"To jab tumhe samajh aaya pyare." Dushyant ne is baar avinash ko zara ghoorte huye kaha______"To kya tumne apne bare me pata karne ki koshish nahi ki.? Ye koi maamuli baat to nahi thi, balki had se bhi zyada darze wali badi baat thi. Tumhari yaad-daast ja chuki thi, tum apni pichhli zindagi ke bare me sab kuch bhool chuke the. Tumhe nahi pata ki tumhari is haalat ke chalte tumhari family par kya guzri hogi.? Ye sab kya nahi socha tha tumne.?"

"Ab aapse kya bataau sahab aur aapko kaise samjhaau ki main us haalat me maheeno kaise kaise aur kaha kaha bhatka fira tha.?" Avinash ki aankho me aanshu bhar aaye, bola_____"Aap meri us wakt ki haalat ka andaza nahi laga sakte sahab. Apne bare me pata karne ke liye main idhar udhar bhatakta raha. Har pal bas isi dukh takleef se marta raha ki kaun hu main aur mere apne kaha hain, ya fir wo kis haal me honge.? Raat din bas yahi soch soch ke tadapta raha. Kayi baar police thane me ja kar apne hi gum shuda hone ki report likhwaana chaha magar thane ke police wale mujhe paagal kah kar bhaga dete the. Jaise jaise wakt guzar raha tha waise waise mere andar nirasa aur hatasha bharti ja rahi thi. Mandir masjid ja kar bhagwan aur khuda se minnate ki ke wo mujhe mere apno se milwa de ya meri yaad daast waapas kar de magar kuch faayda nahi hua sahab. Tab mujhe duniya ki har cheez se nafrat si ho gayi. Bhagwan aur khuda mere liye jaise mar gaye. Is bhari duniya me keede makaude ki tarah dikhne wale log mere kisi kaam na aaye. Zindagi aise bojh lagne lagi thi ki har pal bas khud khushi karne ka khayaal aata tha magar khud-khushi is liye nahi karta tha kyo ki har baar zahen me ye khayaal aa jata tha ki main agar mar jaauga to mere baad meri us family ka kya hoga jinke bare me aaj mujhe kuch yaad bhi nahi hai. Main kisi se koi matlab nahi rakhta sahab kyo ki is duniya ke log sirf apne bare me sochte hain. Kisi ko kisi ki koi parwah nahi hai. Mujhe aapke bhagwan ya khuda se bhi koi matlab nahi hai. Aree kis baat ka ye bhagwan hai jise meri takleef aur meri haalat par taras bhi nahi aata.?"

Avinash bolte bolte rone laga tha. Uski aankho se jaise ekdam se aanshuo ka samandar bah chala tha. Bed par baitha dushyant usi ki taraf dekh raha tha. Uski haalat dekh kar aur uski daastaan sun kar uske dil me ek hook si uthne lagi thi. Use ahsaas ho raha tha ki uske samne chhote se stool par baitha ye shakhs sach me dukhi hai. Uske chehre par ubhri huyi peeda use bata rahi thi ki usne jo kuch apne bare me bataya tha wo jhooth nahi ho sakta tha.

"Tumne to hame emotional kar diya pyare." Dushyant ne ek gahri saans lete huye kaha______"Ye sach hai ki hame emotional scene hargiz bhi pasand nahi magar iske baavjud tumne hame emotional kiya aur maze ki baat ye ki ham emotional ho bhi gaye. Khair chhodo is baat ko aur haan fikar karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai my dear. Bhagwan ya khuda ko tum par taras nahi aaya to kya hua...ham hain na. Ham sab thik kar denge magar ek shart par aur wo shart ye hai ki ab se tum yu chup chaap nahi rahoge balki haste muskurate rahoge."

Inspector dushyant ki in baato par avinash ne sirf haan me apna sir hilaya. Usne apne hatho se apne aanshuo ko ponchha. Uske chehre par ubhri huyi peeda aur takleef ke bhaav rafta rafta gayab hote nazar aane lage.

"Chalo kafi time guzar gaya yaar." Dushyant ne hand watch me time dekhte huye kaha_____"Hame duty par bhi jana hai aur tumhe bhi to hamare sath hi chalna hai. Is liye fatafat fresh ho jate hain dono, uske baad chalte hain aur haan khana baahar hi kha lenge. Shaam ko raasan paani layenge to fir yahi par bana liya karna. Thik hai na.?"

Avinash ne haan me sir hilaya aur uth kar chala gaya. Bathroom kyo ki ek hi tha is liye pahle dushyant fresh hua uske baad avinash fresh hone chala gaya. Dono jab fresh ho gaye to dono hi ghar se nikle. Avinash ke paas zyada kapde nahi the balki do jodi hi kapde the jo ki purane hi the. Dushyant ke man me jane kya aaya ki usne avinash ko sabse pahle kisi mall me chalne ka hukum diya. Avinash gipsy ki driving sheet par tha. Ab se dushyant ki police gipsy ko drive karne ka kaam usi ke hawale tha. Khair dushyant ke kahne par avinash ne gipsy ko start kar ke aage badha diya.

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Mall me pahuch kar dushyant ne avinash ke liye chaar jodi kapde kharidwaye. Avinash ne iske liye na nukur kiya to dushyant ne policiya tone me ghudki di to wo shaant ho gaya. Avinash ke liye kapde lene ke baad dushyant ne unme se ek jodi kapda use abhi pahanne ke liye kaha to majburan avinash ko trial room me jana hi pada. Kuch der me jab wo trial room se baahar aaya to avinash kafi smart nazar aa raha tha. Uski hair style me thodi kharaabi thi aur uske haav bhaav me bhi. Aisa lagta tha jaise use duniya ko apni personality dikhane ka zara bhi shauk nahi tha balki lallu ram bane rahna hi pasand tha.

Mall se baahar aane ke baad avinash ne gipsy ki driving sheet samhaali. Naye kapdo me wo kuch asahaj sa mahsoos kar raha tha. Uski dasa ko dekh kar dushyant halke se muskura utha tha aur sath hi ye bhi sochne laga tha ki ye aadmi kisi maamuli ghar ka to nahi ho sakta.

"Achha ek aur baat bataao pyare." Raaste me dushyant ne apne hi andaz me avinash se kaha_____"Us time hospital me fir kya hua tumhare sath, ya ye kahe ki uske baad tumne kya kiya....sath hi ye bhi ki jis aadmi ne tumhe avinash kaha tha usse kya tum dubara mile ya wo tumse dubara milne aaya.?"

"Do din tak koi nahi aaya sahab." Avinash ne gahri saans lete huye jaise ye kah kar dhamaka sa kiya, bola______"Main do dino tak bhukha pyasa hospital ke us kamre me hi kaid raha. Maine kamre ka darwaza kholne ki bahut koshish ki magar darwaza nahi khula. Tab main samjha ki ye jagah thik nahi hai aur main yaha par kaid ho chuka hu. Sochne wali baat thi sahab ki main jaha par tha wo ek hospital ka kamra tha magar hairaani ki baat ye thi ki do dino tak us kamre me hi kya balki us jagah par hi mujhe kisi insaan ka saya tak nazar nahi aaya. Meri haalat thik nahi thi aur main bhukho pyasa waha kaid tha. Yaha tak ki toilet bhi mujhe usi kamre me karna pada. Jab do dino tak koi nahi aaya to mere sabra ka baandh maano toot gaya. Main aise to kaid ho kar aur bhukha pyasa to nahi mar sakta tha na.? Is liye maine us jagah se niklane ka socha. Kamre me ek taraf khidki thi jis par kaanch ke do palle lage huye the. Maine kisi tarah unhe khola. Shukar tha ki kaanch ke pallo ke us paar khidki me koi lohe ki khidki ya jaali nahi lagi thi. Maine usme se baahar ki taraf jhaank kar dekha to mere andar ajeeb si sihran daud gayi. Kyo ki baahar niche ki taraf kaafi gahraayi thi. Matlab ki zameen se khidki ki uchaayi bahut zyada thi. Ye dekh kar meri himmat jawaab de gayi. Main us haalat me bhala kaise waha se nikal sakta tha magar yaha kaid ho kar bhi to nahi rah sakta tha is liye maine achhe se baahar ki diwaaro ko dono side se dekha to mere andar ummid ki kiran jagi. Kyo ki baahar side diwaar par ek chaar inch ke lagbhag patti bani thi jisse ye pata chalta tha ki us patti se building ka floor khatam hota tha aur fir us patti se dusra floor shuru hota tha. Mere man me usi patti ke sahare nikalne ka vichaar aaya. Halaaki ye bahut hi khatarnaak tha aur zara si chook ho jane par main waha se seedha zameen par gir sakta tha jisse meri jaan jane aur haddiya tootne me zyada wakt nahi lagna tha magar fir bhi maine nikalne ka soch liya tha."

"Mujhe kisi majboot sahare ki zarurat thi." Ek gahri saans lene ke baad avinash ne fir se kahna shuru kiya_____"Jiske dwara mujhe us kamre se nikalne me asaani hoti. Maine kamre me charo taraf nazar ghumaayi magar kahi par bhi koi rassi ya dori nahi dikhi. Mujhe laga ki main ab yaha se nikal nahi paauga, tabhi meri nazar us bed par padi jisme main leta hua tha pahle. Bed me ek hare rang ki chaadar bichhi huyi thi aur ek waisi hi chaadar mere odhne ke liye thi. Un chaadaro ko dekh kar mere chehre par chamak aa gayi. Main thoda tezi se bed ke kareeb pahucha aur un dono chaadaro ko dono hatho se kheech keech kar dekhne laga. Dono hi majboot chaadar thi. Maine ek chaadar ko liya aur kamre me idhar udhar dekhne laga. Bed se thodi doori par ek lakdi ka bench rakha hua tha aur usi bench me chaddar ka ek katora tha jisme doctors dwara upyog ki jane wali ek kainchi thi. Maine us kainchi ko us katore se liya aur use dekhne laga. Kainchi me jang ke laal laal dhabbe nazar aa rahe the. Matlab wo kainchi filhaal kisi upyog me nahi li ja rahi thi. Maine us kainchi se chaadar ko kinaare ki taraf se kaatna shuru kiya. Kahne ka matlab ye ki us kainchi ke sahare maine un dono chaadaro ke lambe lambe tukde kiye. Uske baad un tukdo ki rassi banana shuru kar diya. Kafi wakt laga is kaam me magar ek lambi rassi bana kar taiyar kar li maine. Uske baad rassi le kar main khidki ke paas aaya. Khidki me lohe ka na koi rod laga tha aur na hi koi jaali thi. Balki lakdi ki frame jaisi chaukhat thi jiske bich me bhi ek lakdi ka bhaag tha. Us bhaag ke hone se khidki me do palle bane the jinme kaanch ke do palle lage the. Maine khidki se baahar sir nikaal kar har taraf dekha. Baahri diwaar me har floor par aisi hi khidki lagi huyi thi. Maine us rassi ke dono chhor ko barabar kiya jisse wo rassi double ho gayi. Uske baad maine use niche ki taraf jhulana shuru kiya. Main dekhna chaahta tha ki wo double rassi niche wale floor ki khidki tak pahuch paati hai ki nahi. Kuch hi der me wo rassi niche dusre floor ki khidki ke paas se niche tak latki huyi nazar aayi. Ye dekh kar mere chehre par pahli baar khushi ki chamak ubhri thi. Maine bijli ki speed se us rassi ko waapas kheencha aur fir use khidki ke bich wale lakdi ke bhaag par (Π) ki shakal me ghuma kar rassi ke dono chhor niche latka diye. (Π) ki shakal is liye di taaki niche wale floor ki khidki ya uske niche wali patti par jab main pahuch jaau aur achhe se us patti par balance bana kar khada ho jaau to mujhe upar wale floor ki khidki se rassi ko nikaalne me koi pareshani na ho. Balki rassi ke ek chhor ko pakad kar kheenchu to wo bade araam se khich kar mere paas aa jaye. Khair rassi ke jab dono chhor niche latak gaye to main badi saawadhani se khidki par chadha aur fir rassi aur khidki ki chaukhat ko pakde niche ki us chaar inch waali patti par dono pair rakh kar khada ho gaya. Meri saanse itne me hi bhaari ho gayi thi jabki manjil abhi door thi."

"Us chaar inch ki patti par khade ho kar maine rassi ke dono siro ko majbuti se pakad liya." Kuch pal rukne ke baad avinash ne fir kahan shuru kiya______"Apne pairo ke niche taraf yaani zameen ki taraf dekhne ki meri himmat nahi ho rahi thi kyo ki yaha se zameen bahut niche thi. Samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki main kaun se floor ki khidki ke paas tha.? Yaha se ab asli kaam shuru hona tha jo ki meri haalat ke hisaab se bahut mushkil kaam tha magar karna to tha hi. Khair maine apne andar himmat ko sanjoya aur ek baar puri taakat se apne dono hath me pakdi us rassi ko apni taraf kheecha. Main parakh lena chaahta tha ki rassi mera bhaar jhel legi ya nahi. Pata chale ki idhar jaise hi main rassi ko pakad kar jhoolu udhar rassi kahi se charmara kar toot jaye. Aakhir kapde ki hi to thi wo. Khair naya kapda tha aur moti si chaadar ki rassi thi wo is liye mere taakat se kheechne par zara si bhi awaaz nahi ki usne. Maine bhagwan ko yaad kiya aur dhire dhire rassi ko majbuti se pakde maine us chaar inch ki patti se apne pairo ko ek ke baad dusra hataya aur jhool gaya. Kuch der ke liye aisa laga mujhe jaise meri dhadkane hi band ho gayi ho. Kaano me saany saany hone laga tha. Kuch der tak main aise hi jhoola raha magar fir ahsaas hua ki apne hi bhaar ko sahan karna is wakt aisi haalat me bada mushkil tha. Is liye maine dhire dhire rassi se niche sarakna shuru kiya. Main koi fauji nahi tha jo aisi haalat me bhi badi saralta aur dakshata se niche pal bhar me pahuch jata. Us wakt meri haalat aisi ho gayi thi ki jaan halak me aa kar atak gayi thi. Lekin kahte hain na ki apni jaan ko bachane ke liye insaan apni aakhiri saans tak zor lagata hai aur us wakt wahi haal mera tha. Badi mushkil se main niche wale floor ki khidki ke niche bani us chaar inch ki patti ke paas pahuchne me kaamyaab hua. Dono hath dard karne lage the aur meri saanse dhaunkni ki tarah chalne lagi thi magar man me ek khushi thi ki maine itna mushkil kaam kar liya tha. Uske baad maine kuch der khud ko araam diya aur fir us rassi ko uske ek chhor ko pakad kar kheech liya aur niche wale floor ki khidki par baandhne ka socha magar kaanch ke palle band the. Maine un pallo ko hath se zor laga kar aage ki taraf dhakela to wo ajeeb si awaaz ke sath aage ki taraf khul gaye. Shayad andar se band nahi the wo. Mere liye to ye khushi ki hi baat thi warna yahi latke rahna tha mujhe. Maine khidki ki bich wali lakdi ki chaukhat par rassi ko usi tarah fasaya jaise upar wali me fasaya tha aur fir se wahi prakriya shuru kar di. Aise hi main araam karte huye neeche zameen par aa gaya aur maine us rassi ko nikaal liya tha. Niche aane par maine check kiya to paya ki wo chaar manjila imaarat thi. Khair kaafi der tak main wahi zameen me baitha us building ko dekhta raha. Charo taraf nazar ghuma ke dekha to har taraf virana sa nazar aaya. Aisa laga jaise varsho se yaha koi nahi aaya tha. Building ke aas paas badi badi jhaadiya aur teen taraf se jangal nazar aa raha tha. Main aashcharya chakit tha ki mujhe aisi jagah par kaun laya hoga. Jis kamre me main tha wo kamra bilkul saaf suthra tha aur kahi se bhi mujhe ye yakeen nahi ho sakta tha ki us kamre ke alawa yaha ka baaki sab kuch sannate me duba hua hoga aur is building ke charo taraf badi badi jhaadiya aur jangal hoga."

"Main jis jagah par zameen me baitha hua tha." Ek lambi saans lene ke baad avinash ne fir se kahna shuru kiya______"Wo jagah us building ka pichhla bhaag tha. Kyo ki uske pichhe har taraf badi badi jhaadiya aur fir kuch doori se jangal laga hua tha. Is liye us taraf jane ka koi matlab hi nahi tha. Jab main araam kar chuka to utha aur us rassi ko le kar building ke aage wale hisse ki taraf jane ka socha magar mujhe dar bhi tha ki aage wale hisse par koi insaani jeev na mil jaye mujhe. Jis tarah se yaha main kaid tha usse yahi lagta tha ki kisi ne mujhe yaha jaan bujh kar is tarah kaid kiya tha. Is liye main dabe paanv building ke aage wale hisse ki taraf aaya. Building ke aage wala hissa pichhle hisse se behtar dikha aur uske samne se ek chaudi sadak lagi thi. Sadak ko dekhne se aisa lag raha tha jaise is sadak par barsho se aawa gaman band hai. Kuch der tak main diwaar se chipka chaaro taraf ka jaayja leta raha uske baad main sadak ki taraf na ja kar kinaare ki taraf badh chala. Main nahi chaahta tha ki yaha par koi mujhe dekh le kyo ki mujhe lagta tha ki waha par koi chhupa bhi ho sakta tha aur mujh par nazar rakhne ke liye yaha maujood ho sakta hai. Kafi der tak main jhaadiyo me chhupta chhupata chalta raha. Jab main bina kisi baadha ke us building se kafi door aa gaya to mere andar ka dar kuch kam hua. Mere jism me abhi bhi hospital wale kapde the. Is liye maine upar ki kameej ko utaar kar wahi jhaadiyo ke andar chhupa diya. Ab main upar se nanga tha aur niche ek pajama tha. Mujhe us haalat me sharm aur jhijhak to mahsoos huyi magar ab main us jagah se bahut door chale jana chaahta tha. Is liye sadak ke kinare kinare main paidal hi chalta raha. Nange paav chalne me taklif to ho rahi thi magar kya kar sakta tha. Pet me aag sulag rahi thi...lag raha tha ki kahi ann ka ek dana hi mil jaye jisse pet ki aag kuch shaant ho ya fir kahi peene ke liye paani mil jaye. Main us haalat me bhi zabardasti khud ko kast de kar chalta ja raha tha. Aage sadak par mujhe ek pool dikhayi diya. Jab main us pool ke paas pahucha to dekha ki pool ke niche se koi jharna bah raha tha. Us jharne ko dekh kar meri jaan me jaan aayi. Main andar ki taraf se hote huye us bahte jharne ke kinare pahucha. Meri aankho ke saamne saaf paani kal kal ki awaaz karta bah raha tha. Jharna bada nahi tha aur na hi gahra tha. Mushkil se ghutne tak gahra paani tha usme. Jharne ki satah par patthar dikh rahe the aur unme jhilmilaati chhoti aur usse thoda badi machhaliya. Bhookh pyaas se to waise hi mera bura haal tha is liye pahle maine bhar pet us jharne ka thanda thanda paani piya uske baad peeche hat kar kuch der araam kiya. Paani pine se pet me kuch raahat to mahsoos huyi magar khaali pet paani ke sath sath kuch khaane ka bhi talabgaar tha. Is liye maine socha is wakt jharne me maujood wo machhaliya hi meri bhookh mita sakti hain. Ye soch kar main utha aur jharne me utar gaya. Maine machhaliyo par nazre jama di aur unhe pakadne ki koshish karne laga magar wo mere hath nahi aa rahi thi. Badi mushkil se ek machhali hath aayi aur maine jaldi se use paani se nikaal kar kinare ki taraf zameen me fenk diya. Wo buri tarah jhatpataati huyi idhar se udhar uchhalne lagi thi. Kuch der use dekhne ke baad maine fir se paani me machhaliyo par nazre jama di. Aakhir badi masakkat ke baad chaar machhaliya mere hath lagi. Do machhaliya size me kuch badi thi jabki do unse kuch chhoti thi. Jharne se baahar aa kar maine chaaro machhaliyo ko ikattha kiya aur fir aas paas padi chhoti chhoti lakadiyo ko ikattha kar ke laya. Ab samasya ye thi ki aag kaise jalaayi jaye. Mere paas maachis ke hone ka sawaal hi nahi tha. Main us jharne ke paas gaya aur kinare side pade pattharo ko gaur se dekhne laga. Maine un pattharo se chun kar do patthar uthaye aur waapas aa gaya. Pattharo ko lakadiyo ke paas rakhne ke baad main koi aisi cheez khojne laga jisme jaldi se aag pakad le. Kuch hi der me mujhe ek pakshi ka ghonsla mil gaya. Usme pakshi ke ande wagaira nahi the. Main use le kar aaya aur ek saaf jagah par use rakh kar un pattharo ko aapas me takrane laga. Main nahi jaanta tha ki ye sab maine apni pichhli zindagi me kiya tha ya nahi magar ye sab apne aap hi kar raha tha main. Pattharo se chingaari to nikal rahi thi magar wo chingaari pakshi ke ghonsle tak nahi pahuch rahi thi. Kafi der tak main yahi karta raha magar aag na lagi. Mere hath dukhne lage the aur main pareshan bhi ho gaya. Kuch der sustaane ke baad maine fir se koshish ki. Is baar un pattharo ko main pakshi ke us ghonsle ke ekdam paas me kar ke takra raha tha. Kuch hi der me mujhe kaamyaabi mil gayi. Jaise hi ghosle me aag lagi main khushi se maano fula nahi samaya tha. Maine jaldi jaldi us jalte ghosle ke chaaro taraf lakadiyo ko rakha. Dhire dhire aag un lakadiyo me bhi lag gayi aur dekhte hi dekhte wo aag achhe se lakadiyo par jalne lagi. Maine kuch lakadiya aur usme daali aur fir un lakadyo ko uthaya jo thoda moti thi. Maine jalti aag ke dono taraf do do lakdi zameen me gaadi aur fir un dono me upar se lakdi daaal di. Niche aag jal rahi thi. Maine machhaliyo ko le ja kar achhe se saaf kiya aur fir unke andar lakdi daal kar aar paar kiya. Ye sab karne ke baad main aaya aur aag ke upar unhe un dono lakadiyo me fasa diya. Do chhoti machhaliyo ko maine dusri lakdi ke upar fasa diya aur fir unke bhun jane ka intzaar karne laga."

"Ab bas bhi karo pyare." Dushyant jhunjhlaate huye ekdam se bol pada tha_____"Apni ye veergatha hame na sunaao balki wo sunaao jise janna zaruri hai. Tum to yaar machhaliyo ko maar kar khane ki kahani me hi ulajh gaye."
"Maafi chaahta hu sahab ji." Avinash ne dhime se kaha.

"Hamne ye to sun liya pyare ki tum us jagah par kaid ho gaye the ya fir ye kahe ki kaid kar diye gaye the." Dushyant ne avinash ki taraf dekhte huye kaha______"Aur ye bhi sun liya ki tum waha se kaise nikal aaye. Is liye ab sirf wo bataao jo zyada zaruri baat hai. Jaise ki jab tum waha se nikal aaye to uske baad kya koi tumhe khojne aaya.? Aur sabse badi baat ye ki wo shakhs kya tumhe dubara mila jisne first time tumhe dekh kar tumhe avinash kaha tha.?"
 

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kya janha bhi jate ho apni story sunane lagte ho , is umra me khaada hua , is umra se sex shuru kiya ,is umra ki is is aourat ke sath kiya :doh:
bolo to gov. se bat karke history ke syllabus me hi ek chepter dalwa dete hai .. kamdevv ki kaamkatha :lol1:
firefox420 bhaiya dekh lo judge sahab ki kartut yanha bhi shuru ho gaye yye
Ab is umar me apne kiye huye karmo ka bakhaan hi kar sakte hain na dr sahab. Baaki to aap sab jaante hain. Maine apni life me inke jaisa fenkne wala insaan nahi dekha,,,,:lol1:
 
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