Thriller BEGUNAAH ( Completed )

[VIKRANT]

Hello dosto, kaise hain aap sab,,,,

Ummid karta hu ki aap sab kushal mangal se hi honge. Khair, aap sab soch rahe honge ki main apni kahani ko bich me hi latka kar itne dino se kaha gayab hu.? Ye sawaal yakeenan apni jagah waajib hai. Darasal main apni tabiyat ke chalte hi gayab raha hu aur aage bhi ho sakta hai ki aana jana bahut hi kam ho. Do teen saalo se yaha aap sabke bich raha hu to zaahir hai ki aap sabse aur is forum se lagaav bhi ho hi jana tha. Aap samajh sakte hain ki aise me aap sabse is tarah door hona mere liye kitna dushkar hoga.

Ham sochte kuch hain aur ho kuch aur hi jata hai. Ham chaahte kuch hain kintu mil kuch aur hi jata hai. Yahi jiwan hai aur yahi maanav ki fitrat hai. Bade bujurg laakh samjhaye ki insaan ko apni ichhaao par kaabu rakhna chahiye magar chaah kar bhi aisa ho nahi pata aur yahi insaan ke liye dukh ka sabab ban jata hai.

Kahte hain ki man me dridh ichha shakti ho aur lagan ho to bahut kuch ho sakta hai par yadi is sabke liye insaan ka swaasthy hi thik na ho to.???? Kya us surat me kuch ho sakega.??? Khair, baat karte hain BEGUNAAH ki to ise zarur complete karuga. Doctor aur ghar walo ki hidaayat ke baavjud thoda thoda likhuga aur ise complete karuga. Asal me ek bimaari ye bhi hai ki zahen me 24hr kuch na kuch chalta hi rahta hai aur andar baitha koi shaitaan mujhe pressure deta rahta hai ki kuch likhu. Ab agar nahi likhta hu to bechaini si hone lagti hai. Achha hota agar ishwar mere andar ke is shaitaan ko nikaal deta to kadachit mujhe sukoon mil jata,,,,,

Dosto, is kahani ka naya update le kar hi aauga ab. Tab tak ke liye alvida,,,,,

Take care of you bro.

 

[Naik]

Hello dosto, kaise hain aap sab,,,,

Ummid karta hu ki aap sab kushal mangal se hi honge. Khair, aap sab soch rahe honge ki main apni kahani ko bich me hi latka kar itne dino se kaha gayab hu.? Ye sawaal yakeenan apni jagah waajib hai. Darasal main apni tabiyat ke chalte hi gayab raha hu aur aage bhi ho sakta hai ki aana jana bahut hi kam ho. Do teen saalo se yaha aap sabke bich raha hu to zaahir hai ki aap sabse aur is forum se lagaav bhi ho hi jana tha. Aap samajh sakte hain ki aise me aap sabse is tarah door hona mere liye kitna dushkar hoga.

Ham sochte kuch hain aur ho kuch aur hi jata hai. Ham chaahte kuch hain kintu mil kuch aur hi jata hai. Yahi jiwan hai aur yahi maanav ki fitrat hai. Bade bujurg laakh samjhaye ki insaan ko apni ichhaao par kaabu rakhna chahiye magar chaah kar bhi aisa ho nahi pata aur yahi insaan ke liye dukh ka sabab ban jata hai.

Kahte hain ki man me dridh ichha shakti ho aur lagan ho to bahut kuch ho sakta hai par yadi is sabke liye insaan ka swaasthy hi thik na ho to.???? Kya us surat me kuch ho sakega.??? Khair, baat karte hain BEGUNAAH ki to ise zarur complete karuga. Doctor aur ghar walo ki hidaayat ke baavjud thoda thoda likhuga aur ise complete karuga. Asal me ek bimaari ye bhi hai ki zahen me 24hr kuch na kuch chalta hi rahta hai aur andar baitha koi shaitaan mujhe pressure deta rahta hai ki kuch likhu. Ab agar nahi likhta hu to bechaini si hone lagti hai. Achha hota agar ishwar mere andar ke is shaitaan ko nikaal deta to kadachit mujhe sukoon mil jata,,,,,

Dosto, is kahani ka naya update le kar hi aauga ab. Tab tak ke liye alvida,,,,,

Ok bhai
Take care of you &
God bless you

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Hello dosto, kaise hain aap sab,,,,

Ummid karta hu ki aap sab kushal mangal se hi honge. Khair, aap sab soch rahe honge ki main apni kahani ko bich me hi latka kar itne dino se kaha gayab hu.? Ye sawaal yakeenan apni jagah waajib hai. Darasal main apni tabiyat ke chalte hi gayab raha hu aur aage bhi ho sakta hai ki aana jana bahut hi kam ho. Do teen saalo se yaha aap sabke bich raha hu to zaahir hai ki aap sabse aur is forum se lagaav bhi ho hi jana tha. Aap samajh sakte hain ki aise me aap sabse is tarah door hona mere liye kitna dushkar hoga.

Ham sochte kuch hain aur ho kuch aur hi jata hai. Ham chaahte kuch hain kintu mil kuch aur hi jata hai. Yahi jiwan hai aur yahi maanav ki fitrat hai. Bade bujurg laakh samjhaye ki insaan ko apni ichhaao par kaabu rakhna chahiye magar chaah kar bhi aisa ho nahi pata aur yahi insaan ke liye dukh ka sabab ban jata hai.

Kahte hain ki man me dridh ichha shakti ho aur lagan ho to bahut kuch ho sakta hai par yadi is sabke liye insaan ka swaasthy hi thik na ho to.???? Kya us surat me kuch ho sakega.??? Khair, baat karte hain BEGUNAAH ki to ise zarur complete karuga. Doctor aur ghar walo ki hidaayat ke baavjud thoda thoda likhuga aur ise complete karuga. Asal me ek bimaari ye bhi hai ki zahen me 24hr kuch na kuch chalta hi rahta hai aur andar baitha koi shaitaan mujhe pressure deta rahta hai ki kuch likhu. Ab agar nahi likhta hu to bechaini si hone lagti hai. Achha hota agar ishwar mere andar ke is shaitaan ko nikaal deta to kadachit mujhe sukoon mil jata,,,,,

Dosto, is kahani ka naya update le kar hi aauga ab. Tab tak ke liye alvida,,,,,

आप की कमी तो हमें बहुत ही खल रही है पर अगर स्वास्थ्य सम्बन्धित प्रोब्लम हो तो इसे बिल्कुल ही नजर अंदाज न करें ।

पहले आप भली भांति स्वस्थ हों फिर लिखने की कोशिश करना । हम सभी आप के अच्छे स्वास्थ्य के लिए प्रार्थना करते हैं ।

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Behad hi shandar update tha shubham bhai_______
Is update me ye clear ho gaya ki Avinash ka naam Avinash nahi balki vijay hai aur wo nakab wale ka yaani jai ka chhota bhai hai. Is update me jai apne original aadmiyo se mila. Jai aur uske aadmiyo ki baato se kafi kuch pata chala. Matlab ki vijay shayad koi aisa person tha jo gunda gardi karta tha ya kisi apradhi sangathan ka mukhiya tha. Apni bhabhi saundarya ki sundarta aur uske husn par uski buri najar thi. Wahi jai ek simple sa insan tha. Ye jo kuch bhi huwa uski vajah vijay ke gande bartaav ki vajah se huwa hoga. Usne apni bhabhi ki ijjat par hath dala hoga. Jai ko isse gussa aaya hoga aur wo vijay se bhid gaya hoga lekin sawaal hai ki kaise bhid gaya hoga. Jai agar simple insaan tha to wo vijay jaise apraadhik pravatti wale insaan se kaise bhida hoga aur yaha tak ki use is haal me pahuchaya hoga. Kya sirf yahi vajah thi ya iski koi dusri vajah bhi thi. Jai aur uske aadmi kinki baat kar rahe the ki vijay ne unhe chhupa rakha hai. Mujhe lagta hai vijay ke is haal me pahuchne ki vajah saundarya ki ijjat par hath daalne ke alawa ek ye bhi hai. Ab sawaal ye hai ki wo kaun hain jise vijay chhupa diya tha aur jai unhe kyo khoj raha hai. Shayad aage is baat ka pata chale_______

Fantastic story hai shubham bhai. Story me abhi suspense bana hua hai ki ye sab huwa kaise tha aur kis reason se huwa tha. Intjaar rahega bhai aage ka_______

Bahut bahut shukriya Mr. Perfect bhai aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,,

Story me abhi kayi sawaal hain bhai jinka jawaab abhi dena uchit nahi hai, ye aap bhi samajh sakte hain. Khair story aadhe se zyada aage badh chuki hai aur end ki taraf ja rahi hai is liye jald hi saari baato ka khulasa hoga,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Kya shubham bhai jaise hi garma garam wala scene aaya to aapne update khatam kar diya. Is puri story me kahi koi sex scene nahi hai. Jai aur saundarya ke bich sex hota hai to aap use khul ke dikhaate bhi nahi. Ye bathroom wala scene khul ke dikhao bhai taaki maja aa jaye______

Bhai sex scene khul kar likhne me mujhe ladkiyo ki tarah sharam aati hai,,,,,
Yahi vajah hai meri masumiyat ki bhi to bhai itne se hi kaam chalaao na,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Shubham bhai .....ek dum fabulous update ....to wo admi jo Dushyant ke saath rehta h uska naam vijay hai...or wo kafi shaatir insaan hai...pr ab tak jaise kahani chalti aayi h us hisab se vijay ek innocent or apne kaam se kaam rakhne wala insaan hai....or jai ek shaatir insaan hai jo vijay se apna badla le rha h...pr is update se bahut si chize clear hui hai....pr ab ek sawal hai viajy ne kisko chupa rakha hai ..jise jai dhund rha hai ...jis wajah wo vijay ko maar nhi paa rha ...any way....story jabardast hai apki brother...dekhte hai aage kya hota hai...

Bahut bahut shukriya Punnu bhai aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,,
Babut jald sab kuch pata chalega punnu bhai. Bas sath bane rahiye,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Jabardast update

Bahut bahut shukriya ABHISHEK TRIPATHI bhai aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Greattt shubham bro. Such a mind blowing update and your writing skills.

To Avinash ka naam vijay hai and wo nakab posh ka chhota bhai hai. Is update me kuch baate clear hui but Avinash ka ab tak ka jo character tha usse wo innocent hi najar aaya tha jabki jai and uske gurgo ki baato se ye saaf ho gaya ki wo innocent nahi tha balki dangerous tha. Jo apne hi bro ki wife par buri najar daalta tha and galat dhandha karta tha. Uske sath uski gang ke aadmi the it means wo koi galat kaam karta tha jo kanun ki najar me galat tha.

Story ka title begunaah hai to wo kis character ke base par hai bro. Nakab posh par ya Avinash par. Anyways abhi is baat ka suspense hai ki jai and party kise dhudh rahe hain and Avinash ne kise chhupa ke rakha hai. Yaha ek sawaal ye bhi hai ki agar Avinash urf vijay itna hi dangerous aadmi tha and uska network itna hi bada tha to uske gang ka koi person use khojne kyo nahi aaya. Kya jai ka ye kahna sahi hai ki vijay ke gang walo ne vijay ke jate hi gang par kabja kar liya hoga. I think kuch to baat hai jo abhi adhere me hai.

Overall fabulous update bro. Jai and saundarya ka live telecast dikha do maja aa jaye. Anyways let's see what happens next.

Bahut bahut shukriya VIKRANT bhai aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,

Jai aur saundarya ka live telecast mat dekho bhai. Thoda emotions ko control me rakho apne,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

जैसा कि सारे रीडर्स अनुमान लगा रहे थे वैसा ही हुआ । अविनाश उर्फ विजय.....जय का भाई निकला ।
और जय के सपने हकीकत का रास्ता दिखा रहे थे ।

विजय......जय का छोटा भाई.... एक जरायमपेशा से कनेक्टेड....उसकी नजर अपने भाभी पर थी । उसने हर संभव प्रयास किया लेकिन अंततः फेल ही रहा । वो एक ताकतवर शख्स था जिसके पास सैकड़ों के तादाद में लोग थे ।

जय..... एक आम इंसान.... हकीकत समझ आया तो उसने हिम्मत दिखाई और अपने दुष्ट भाई से अपनी पत्नी की रक्षा की और अपने भाई के खिलाफ कोई सख्त कदम उठाने से पहले विजय ने उन पति-पत्नी के दुखती रग को किडनैप कर के नजरबंद कर दिया ।

कौन है वो दुखती रग ?......जय का कोई रिस्तेदार या...... उसके पत्नी का रिस्तेदार !.... शायद उसकी बीवी का छोटा भाई ?

अविनाश उर्फ विजय का यदि याददाश्त गया है तो फिर उन लोगों को रूपए कौन भेजता है जिन्होंने करीब दो साल से उस शख्स को नजरबंद कर के रखा है ? ऐसे लोग बिना रोकड़े के काम थोड़ी न करते हैं ।
और यदि उसका याददाश्त सही सलामत है तो इसका मतलब अपने कर्मचारियों का ख्याल वो अच्छी तरह से कर रहा है ।

बेहतरीन अपडेट शुभम भाई ।

Bahut bahut shukriya SANJU ( V. R. ) bhaiya ji aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,,

Story me jab aapke jaise khubsurat review dekhne ko milte hain to khushi milti hai aur sath hi likhne ke liye josh aur utsaah bhi praapt hota hai,,,,

Story ke prati aapka anumaan abhi ke hisaab se ekdam dusrust hai. Aapke sawaal bhi jaayaz hain kintu unke jawaab to aage hi milege. Thodi tabiyat se lachaar ho gaya warna story ab tak end ke kafi kareeb pahuch chuki hoti. Khair koi baat nahi der se hi sahi End to hoga hi,,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

majedar update ..vijay ke baare me bahut si jaankari pata chal gayi is update me ..

shayad isliye sirf rape aur chori ke case me fasata ho nakabposh avinash ko kyunki usne saundarya ke saath bura karna chaha tha ....

aisa kaun hai jisko vijay ne kahi pe najarband karke rakha hai ,shayad maa ,baap ,aur behen jai ki ..

vijay kamina aur hawsi insan tha aur galat kaam bhi karta tha aur jai ki baato se lagta hai wo kisi gaaw ka amir aadmi hoga kyunki akhbar kuch gaawo me nahi pahuchne diya jai ke aadmiyo ne ..aur kuch logo ko police ke paas jaate huye pakda ..

Bahut bahut shukriya KEKIUS MAXIMUS bhai aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,,

Apka anumaan sach ho sakta hai. Aakhir bhaiyo ke bich fasaad hota hi kis vajah se hai,,,,,