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Yug Purush

सादा जीवन, तुच्छ विचार
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I don’t know how many of you are still active here, but I’m going to complete this story.
The hardest part of restarting and finishing any story is revision...at least for me. But now I’ve done that. So there’s a 90% chance I’ll actually complete it.
I’m not giving false hope. It’s just hope… because I always come back 😎 even if it takes 4–5 years and I finish what I started.
Let’s see what happens this time.
 
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Riya aaj bhi same to same kal ki tarah dikh rahi thi, matlab waise hee baal, wahi chamakte hue gaal aur kal ki hee tarah mere pure antarman ko madhosh kar deni waali uski khaal. bas antar sirf itna tha ki... aaj uske sar par wo gol topi nahi thi… maine apna gardan dheere-dheere ek oor jhukaya aur saamne se aati ladkiyo ko muskurate hue dekhta raha aur bas dekhta raha… jis par wo sab bhi muskurayi aur aapas me ek-dusare ko tali dekar, dhakka dekar , aapas me khusur-fusur karte hue hasne lagi…. Wo sab jab mere paas pahuchi, jab mere paas se gujri toh siway Riya ke un sabne mera naam lekar mujhse yaha aise baithne ka karan puchha… par maine sab ko ignore kiya matlab lagna chahiye ki ladke me attitude hai aur ektak sirf Riya ki taraf dekhta raha…. Riya ko dekhne me main itna magan ho gaya tha ki Riya ke jaane ke baad bhi main usi taraf deewar ko bahut der tak dekhta raha, jis oor se wo kuch der pahli aayi thi. yahi maankar ki Riya ab bhi wahi khadi hai … aur jab lunch khatm hone ki bell baji , tab mujhe hosh aaya...

“arey...MC”Main waha se utha aur jaldbaji me jaha RO laga tha , us oor bhaga…

Hamara school bahut lamba tha... matlab main gate ke baad ek playground , fir do manjila imarat, jiski upari manjil me 11th & 12th waalo ki class lagti thi... ye sab, yaani wo graund aur ye do manjila imarat thoda high elevation me tha , baki structure ke muqabale .... jin seedhiyo se abhi utarkar main yaha baitha tha , waha se kuch doori tak flat surface hone ke baad fir neeche jaane ke liye seedhiya bani hui thi... jo is do manjila imarat ke peechhe bane ek aur ground se jodne ka kaam karta tha aur ground ke charo oor waha bhi classes lagti thi aur un classes ke beecho-beech R.O. laga hua tha... ab jaha R.O. tha, waha se fir neeche jaane ke liye seedhiya thi aur fir bada sa ground aur uske baad fir uske chaaro taraf classes. 3500 launde-laundiya aise hee thodi padhte the. itna bada aur bhayankar school hone ke bawjood school do shift me chalta tha... taaki pure students sama jaaye. Seedhiyo se neeche utarkar main dusare waale ground me aaya aur dusare waale ground se thodi door me maujood R.O ke paas pahucha... waise ek R.O. upar bhi laga tha, par wo sirf teachers ke use ke liye tha ya fir jab ye waala kharab ho jaaye tab humare liye.... aur ek sabse neeche. Par waha tak jaane me aur fir paani peekar itni seedhiya chadhne me band baj jaati thi. Isliye ye Ground-2 ke paas wala R.O. humare liye better option tha + sabse jyada ladkiya bhi isi me aati thi toh ise best bhi kah sakte hai.

R.O. ke paas is waqt kafi bheed jama thi… jiska ek kaaran lunch time ka khatm hona bhi tha aur sab apni-apni tanki full karke, bottles me paani bharkar class me baithna chahte the… main wahi thodi door me rakhi ek bench me baith gaya, jaha humare school ka ek peon bhi aksar free hone par baitha karta tha… ya fir ye kahu ki students paani ke liye aapas me naa lad le… isliye bhi wo baitha karta tha. sahi suna... paani ke liye lad naa le. Jo haal bhavishya me paani ko lekar puri manav prajati ka hone wala hai, uski ek chhoti si jhalak aksar do-teen din me hume wahi dekhne ko mil jaati thi.


“aur bhaiya, kya haal chal….”mere wahi bench me baithne par wo peon mujhse puchha

“bas badhiya bhaiya… apun rapchik… ”

“ye... sar pe chot kaise lagi…”

“gir gaya tha, kal raaaaaaat meeee…”bolte hue aakhiri ke do shabdo ko maine thoda lamba kheencha aur fir ekdum se ruk gaya… kyunki jo jhund mujhe kuch der pahle seedhiyo ke paas mila tha , wo bhi yahi tha…. Yani Riya Rose bhi yahi thi aur is bheed me paani ke liye sangharsh kar rahi thi…

“ye lunch time khatm hote hee sabko pyaas kyun lagti hai… ye bhi ek mystery hai… ab mujhe hee dekh lo…”peon ki taraf aankh maarkar maine ek ishara kiya… waise bhi ab jo main karne waala tha wo main ek-do baar already kar chuka tha….

Maine jaise hee aankh maari, peon thoda ghabra saa gaya... main bhi ghabrata yadi uski jagah hota toh... par, hakikat me main, main tha aur wo..wo... naa toh wo meri jagah tha aur naa hee main uski... isliye...


“ bhaiya, principal sir ne toh mana kiya tha na aapko ki… kisi ko RO ka paani nahi peene dena hai….”waha jami bheed ki taraf chillakar main bola

“mujhe toh kisi ne kuch nahi kaha…”

“arey kya baat kar rahe ho... jis tank ka paani is R.O. me aata hai, usme saanp mara hua mila tha subah….wo bhi sada hua... yuckkk... pata nahi ye janne ke baad bhi ye log kaise paani pee le rahe”abki baar main thoda aur tez aawaz me bola “ Isliye Principal sir ne sabke class me information pahuchwayi thi ki sabhi students upar staff ke liye jo RO laga hai, waha se tank ki safai hone tak paani piye”

“kya bola… saaaaanppp…”saanp ka naam sunte hee waha ikattha hui bheed me se ek ne mujhse puchha... uski haalat aisi thi, jaise saanp ne sach me use das liya ho.

“haan.. saanp.... wo bhi kariya wala….”

Saanp ka naam sunte hee waha mauzood do-teen ladkiya turant ochhar di aur ladke khanste hue paani apne andar se bahar karne lage… kuchh toh turant apne muh me ungali daalkar ulti karne ka prayaas bhi karne lage…. Is dauran RO ekdum khali ho gaya tha, studentes side ho chuke the aur main turant apni jagah se uthakar Riya ke hath se bottle chheena aur RO se paani bharne laga…

“par ye paani kharab hai…”Riya aise mayoos hokar boli, jaise use bahut joro ki bhookh lagi ho aur ration ki line me ghanto lagne ke bawjood bhi ration na milne par ek aam insaan ki hoti hai… matlab wo sach me bahut pyasi thi....

“sab sahi hai, Riya… wo toh bheed ko kam karna tha… isliye…”bottle bharte hue main dheere se bola aur fir jab bottle bhar gayi toh aaa karke :D matlab upar-upar se Riya ke bottle se paani peene laga

“areyyy… I always drink from that bottle…”mayoos aur aashcharya ke sath Riya mujhse boli...

“so what….no problem”main ek pal ke liye ruka aur fir se paani peene laga.

Meri pyaas bujh chuki thi par fir bhi main paani piye jaa raha tha taaki kuch pal aur aise waha khada rah saku... use dekh saku aur wo mujhe dekh sake...

“ with my lips touching that bottle…”

“WhAaAaAAAaaaaaAAAAAaaaaAaAaAAaaaaaaaAt….????????????”

“you shouldn’t have used that bottle, it’s used one…”fir se mayoos hote hue Riya boli
matlab pyaar ke liye kuch bhi karega atharva.. lekin itna kuch karne ka kya faida jab ant mein is tarah ki reaction ya jawab mile.. atharva ne socha pyar hai, pyar mein jhutha bhi kha lete hai aur ye to mahaz pine ki baat hai par riya ne ummid se pare aisi reaction di hai ki udhar se nikal lena hi atharva ke liye behtar hai..
iske baad maine kuch nahi kaha aur chup-chap RO se full bottle bharkar Riya ko pakdaya… uski saheliyo ko toh jaise bhari maza aa raha tha in sabme… wo sab khilkhila ke hanse padi thi aur main… apna muh lekar waha se chup-chap khisak liya…

Kaha facebook id magne gaya tha aur kaha abbbbb……… ye sab mere sath hee kyun hota hai….



Main chup-chap class me aaya aur physics ke pure class me chup-chap hee raha…. Aaj toh Sunayana mam ko dekhkar bhi main excited nahi hua aur Sanjana ka jo mobile foda tha, use bhi main lagbhag bhool chuka tha… mere dimag me is waqt sirf aur sirf Riya ke shabd gunj rahe the… ye thi toh chhoti si baat , par ye kand mere sath hua tha aur mujhe pura school jaanta tha, isliye ye kand bhi kal tak pura school jaan jayega… aur fir meri hooting hogi.…. Nursery se ek hee school me padhne ka yahi nuksaan hai.

Inhi sab me main itna kho gaya ki Sunayana kab chali gayi aur next class me Bhagwan Das Gupta ji kab langdate-langdate chemistry ki class lene aa gaye hume pata hee nahi chala…. Yani.... mujhe pata nahi chala….

Bhagwan das ji, apni tarah ke eklaute teacher the… matlab antique piece. wo the toh param gyani, par dimag thoda khiska hua tha… kabhi bhi kuch bhi puchh lete the aur apne class ki alag se attendance register banaya hua tha. pure desh me shayad hee us samay aisa koyi school raha hoga jaha 5th class me students attendance dete rahe honge.. par humne diya hai. wo bhi har roj. hum bhale hee 12th me pahuch gaye the, par yadi unka dimag satakta toh wo pel bhi dete the… fir chahe wo ladka ho ya ladki….



“tu khade ho, bhains jaise sharir wale…”ek ladke ko ungali dikha kar unhone kaha

jaise hee ye aawaz mere kaano me gunji , main apne khayalo se wapas aaya…. Ye confirm karne ke liye ki kahi mujhe toh khada hone ke liye nahi bola hai, Gupta ji ne...? kya pata kisi ne shikayat kar di ho ki Saanp waale kaand ki. Par wo ladka main tha.. Gupta ji ne mujhe bhains nahi kaha tha...

“present sir…”khade hote hue wo ladka bola

“attendance nahi le raha main… chal ek sawal ka jawab de…”

“chuda, beta aaj ye… ” daant dikhate hue Ved fusfusaya…
matlab is mote ka band bajne wala hai...
riya wali incident ke baad hero kuch apne apme khoya khoya sa hai.. par yeh to move on karne walo mein se hai.. to befikar rahe.. aage jo hone wala hai wo to hoke hi rahega na..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills gyani sahab :applause: :applause:
 

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EK number bhai.... Maza aa gaya update padh kar... Ranjan ki aap biti apne jo kahi vo actually mein sachai. Mujhe update aur kahani aisi jami hui lag rahi hai jaise ek perfect akar diya ho. Kahin se kahin tak koi gap nahi laga. Maza aa gaya padh kar, aur end mein ate ate jo apne sanjana ko lakar daloge chepa hai uspar hasne mein majbur ho gaya main :lol: Maza aa gaya, kahani bahut hi rochak jaa rahi hai... :D
 

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“kal tu bus stand ki gomti me cigarette pee raha tha na.…? bahut chhalle uda raha tha dhue ke ladkiyo ko dekh-dekh kar... chal bata cigarette lighter me kaun si gas use hoti hai…”saamne chair par sawar hote hue Gupta ji bole

“propane…. Shayad..”

“aa idhar….”ungaliyo se ishara karke Gupta ji ne use saamne aane ka nyota diya

“methane…”

“aa ja beta, mere paas aa…”

“Ethane….”ek baar fir apna luck ajmate hue wo bola….

“aa ja… aa ja … aa ja ab ...aur der mat kar….. jitna galat uttar dega utna jyada laat khayega. minus marking ka jamana hai”

Wo ladka dheere-dheere sahme hue Gupta ji ke paas pahucha aur jaise hee Gupta ji ke paas pahucha… Gupta ji ne turant uske sar ke baal jor se pakad kar us ladke ko wahi gol-gol ghumane lage…..

“saleeee…. Tum log….. apneeee…. Baaaap ka paisa barbaad kar rahe ho….. Butane gas hoti hai cigarette lighter me… kaun si gas hoti hai….”itna bolkar Gupta ji ne use chhoda

“Bueeee….tane…..”

“achchhe se bol….kaun si gas hoti hai…?”fir se uske sar ke baal ko kheench kar gol-gol ghumate hue Gupta ji bole….

“aaaaaa…… Butane….”

“basta pakad apna aur ghar jaa… kal apne baap se sign karwa ke lana….”

“sorry sir…”

“sorry nahi… basta pakad aur ghar nikal…”ek baar fir uska baal pakad kar ghumaate hue Gupta ji bole… “cigarette piyega, school ke paas… haayeee.. gunda banega tu… wo bhi Bhagwan Das ke rahte hue... tujhe aise hee chhod diya toh tu kal wahi baithkar chilam bhi sulgayega...? saale ganjedi..”

“galti ho gayi, sir…. Aaj ke baad nahi piyunga…”


Gupta ji ne us ladke ke baal ko chhoda aur baal chhodte hee ek jhapad gaal par khisiyate hue mara aur jab is-se unka mann nahi bhara toh mutthi baandh ke us ladke ko fir jhukaya aur diya daba ke ek mukka uski peeth par...

“aaayiiiiiii….”peeth par mukka khaate hee wo ladka tedha ho gaya

“jaa baith, nalayak kahi ka… school ke vatavaran ko dushit karte ho”



Gupta ji khud ko bahut bada gunda samajhte the aur ek gunde ke saamne kuch bhi karo par gundayi mat jhado… unse bachne ka yahi ek tarika tha. Baki unhe kisi aur chiz se koyi matlab nahi tha… chahe tum pass ho ya fail… bas unke saamne apna muh sil ke chup-chap baithe raho… par log ye baat samajh nahi paate aur Gupta ji ki baato par aksar hans dete hai ya josh-josh me koyi comment paas kar dete hai. Aur fir pela jaate hai… jaise ki abhi hone wala tha.. Gupta ji ne jab cigarette peene wale ko sari class ke saamne mara toh uske bagal me baithne wala ladka maje le-lekar hasne laga….
waise aise dhith aur bigde students ko sidha karne ke liye aise teachers hone chahiye..
waise is scene ko jis tarike se create kiya gaya hai wo apne apme bemisaal hai..
“kyun re dhor, bahut hasi aa rahi hai tujhe….”apni jagah se khade hokar uski taraf jaate hue Gupta ji bole….

“chal tu ye bata ki, copper sulphate ke solution se copper recover karne ke liye kaun sa metal use kiya jata hai…”

“IRON…” wo ladka jhatt se bola aur muskura utha… jisse Gupta ji ki aur sulag gayi…

“primary compound of natural gas bata….”

“methane….” Wo fir tapak se bola aur abki baar aur muskurane laga …. Abki baar toh Gupta ji ki jhant bilkul hee sulag gayi aur unhone apna brahmastra nikala…

“page number bata… kis page name number me likha hai…”

“page number... page number...? sir… wo toh nahiii...”

“page no. nahi pata… aye….”baal pakad kar Gupta ji ne us ladke ko jhukaya aur apni kohni dum lagakar uske peeth me mari…. Jiske baad wo ladka wahi chhatpata utha…

“book ka ek-ek shabd yaad hona chahiye… page number tak… sala, mere saamne gundayi karta hai… ruk tu…”ek kohni aur pelte hue Gupta ji bole….

Aur fir pure period hum sabko kuch padhane ki bajay dhikaarte rahe ki kaise hum log apne maa-baap ka paisa barbaad kar rahe hai aur hum logo ko chut bhar.. I mean... chullu bhar paani me doob kar mar jaana chahiye….
sidhi si baat hai.. gupta ji ko kuch bhi karke us ladke ko chatni banana hai par ladka hai bada hoshiyar.. par wo bhool gaya ki guru to guru hi howe hai.. akhir kar gupta ji ke jaal mein fansh hi gaya bichara...

“na be Atharva… jo iske yaha tution padhne jaata hoga, uska kya haal karta hoga ye….”chhutti hone ke baad class se nikalte hue Ved bola… “tune wo wali movie dekh li kya…”

“kaun wali…”

“yeeeeeeeee waliiii….”apne lund ki taraf ishara karke Ved cheekha “2 point…”

“kya hai… be… shant rah…”

“arey tension mat le…. Sanjana kuch din gussa rahegi… fir normal ho jayegi, tera shautan hai na Jafar…. wo de dega use naya mobile kharid kar…”

“arey main wo nahi soch raha….”

“achaa toh Riya wale incident ke bare me soch raha hai… waise thik hee toh hua hai aur sale thode attitude me raha kar… aise fati me rahega toh gand maar lenge log teri, ek ladka tha humare school me, ab passout ho gaya.. chal tujhe kuch dikhata hoon…”

“ab main tujhse puchhunga… ki… kya… kya dikhayega. toh tu fir se ~ yeeee… ~ bolke lawda dikhayega aur 3 point chadha dega….”

“wo toh hai… par main sach me tujhe kuch dikhane wala hu, chal mere sath….”



Ved mujhe pakad kar Principal office ki taraf le jaane laga , yaani long route se.. aaj wo railings se fisal kar direct neeche nahi gaya aur jab hum dono waha pahuch gaye toh usne Principal Office ke bahar lage 2 board ki taraf ishara kiya… ek board tha, jisme pure school me per year highest percentage wale ka naam aur uske us year kitne percentage the.. ye likha hua tha aur dusara board tha , har saal best student ka award jeetne wale ka aur har saal ye dono award alag alag student ko hee diye jaate the.. siwaay...



“mujhe kyun dikha raha hai….ye…. ”maine Ved se puchha...

“ye dekh… ye jo percentage wala section hai na… yaha naam aana aasan hai, sirf pel ke padhayi karni hai aur top karna hai, 3500 logo me. lekin jo ye dusara wala hai … isme naam aane ke liye sab chahiye… ye award usi ko milta hai, jo study me bhi faad de, sports me bhi chod de, other competitions me dusaro ki pond maar de aur teachers ki gaand bhi chaate…. Isliye aksar ye dono award aajtak kisi ek student ne nahi jeeta…….. kyunki 3500 students me top maarne waala ye sab baaki chije nahi kar paata aur jo baaki chije karta hai wo 3500 students me top nahi maar pata..... siway ek baar ke… siwaay ek ke...”dono board ke beech me khada hokar Ved bola “ye dekh….”

“Arman Suryavanshi, 98.76 % & student of the year, 2009……. And guess what…ye dono award usne 10th class me jeete the, jabki best student ka award 25 saal se sirf 12th ke student ko hee diya ja raha hai… siway us saal ke… aur maje ki baat toh ye hai ki teachers se uski banti bhi nahi thi.. infact usne ek teacher ko school me mara bhi tha…. fir bhi Principal ko ye dono award use dene pade.. kyunki baaki sab uske saamne moot barabar the. ”

“toh….?”

“toh ye ki mere bhai…. Thoda akad ke raho. nothing is permanent in this world, not even your failures… aaj fail hue, kal pass hoge.. aaj beizzati hui, toh kal izzat bhi mil jayegi... aaj ek gayi toh kal dusari milegi... tu bas apna apna concept clear rakh, meri tarah aur main jis ladki ko bolu usko pata... tere layak abhi ladki hai nahi school me... jab aayegi toh main khud setting karaunga teri... tu kya hai, tu thoda chutiya hai, toh... jo tujhe samajh jaaye aisi ladki chahiye tujhe. ye Riya , Sanjana ke bas ki baat nahi... ”

"chal lawde......"
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Main ghar pahuchne ke baad Ved ka intezaar kiya ki wo aaye aur hum dono FIFA 10 khele par wo nahi aaya aur main bore bhi ho raha tha. isliye main seedhe waha gaya… jaha, badhiya timepass hone ki guarantee thi plus mera mobile bhi usi ke paas tha… yaani Sanjana ke paas. Waise bhi Udta hua teer lene ki aadat hai thodi-thodi mujhe.. kyunki us teer ko pakad kar main teer ko saamne wale ke pichhwade me ghusane ki practice karta hoon. Toh bas isi uddeshya se pahuch gaya main... Sanjana ke ghar.... Maine Sanjana ke ghar ka darwaja aise khola , maano wo mera sasural ho... full role me, full josh me, full raub ke sath aur darwaja khulte hee mujhe Sunayana mam saamne dikhayi di...



“arey yar... lagta hai yahi gir jayega... itna kyun hot hai ye...”Sunayana mam ko dekh mere mann me khayal aaya

“Atharva , tummm....”

“Good Evening , mam….”

“Sanjana ka mobile tumne toda…”

“mam, aap kisi ki bhi kasam khila lo… main khane ke liye taiyar hoon…. Kasam se, maine Sanjana ka mobile nahi toda… infact yadi logically dekha jaye toh shuruat me Mobile Sanjana ne feka tha, meri taraf… maine nahi. Toh Sanjana ne khud apna mobile toda… ”

“Sanjana , upar apne room me hai…”

“kya kar rahi hai, mujhe maaregi toh nahi…?”

“that’s exactly what I’m seeking to know… in my opinion, beating you.. could be one of many possibilities…”
waise agar koshish aur kadi mehnat kare to best student ban sakta hai atharva...
So phir se sanjana ke ghar ki aurr rukh kiya hero ne...baat mobile ki nahi hai.. baat yeh hai ki is baar kya tutega futega.. waise nuksan kisika bhi ho sar futega hero ka..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
 

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“one of many possibilities… se yaad aaya… mam, aap physics ki teacher hai… ek question puch sakta hu…”

“of course .….”

“does the multiverse really exist…?”

“why..?”

“I’ve to bring someone from other universe….…”

Sunayana mam ke chehre ke ke expression dekh main samajh gaya ki wo abhi is topic me virgin hai, isliye main waha se seedhiyo ke raaste seedhe upar Sanjana ke room ki taraf badha aur uske room ke bahar pahuchkar deewar ki aaad lete hue chhipkar paahle andar jhanka…. Sanjana is waqt ek Canvas me brush pe brush pele jaa rahi thi aur isme wo is samay full too magan thi. Maine kamre me charo taraf nazaar daudayi toh Sanjana ke thik peechhe thode baaye rakhe table par mujhe mera mobile rakha hua dikh gaya. main dheere-dheere daabe paanv andar aaya aur Sanjana ke peechhe waale table par rakhe apne mobile ko uthane ke liya apna haath us taraf badhaya. udhar Sanjana apni painting me magan aur idhar main mobile chori karne me magan .… waise bhi mobile khud mera tha, isliye ise chori nahi kah sakte…

“yesss. … yesss… mobile heist…”khud ko shabashi dete hue thoda table ki oor jhuk kar maine mobile table se uthakar apni jeb me dala aur fir ahiste-aahiste seedha khada hua...

“tu yaha kyun aaya hai….”

“ dhattt...teriiiiii...”

main apna mobile lene me itna magan ho gaya ki mujhe pata hee nahi chala ki Sanjana kab se peechhe palat kar sirf mujhe ghoore jaa rahi thi…. Now, it’s high time to use one of my deception technique



“ammm…. Hiii… hey... Silky Sanjana…”

“mobile rakh aur jaa yaha se…”bolkar Sanjana ne colour me brush duboya aur fir canvas potne lagi….

“main toh sirf itna bolne aaya tha ki ….nothing is permanent, not even your failures….”mobile jeb me dalkar Sanjana ke bagal me khade hokar maine kaha…

“wo mera failure nahi tera failure tha toh tu khud se bol wo aur by the way iska mera mobile se kya lena-dena…”

“maine socha tujhe achcha lagega , sunkar… jaise mujhe laga tha… par shayad teri English kamjor hai… main fir se repeat karta hu…. Nothingggg…..”

“Atharva, tu please ja yar yaha se… dimag mat chaat…”brush ko dusare colour ke rang me dubote hue Sanjana ek pal ke liye meri taraf mudi aur fir canvas par brush se prahar karne lagi...

Par main waha se jaane ki bajay, wahi uske bagal me khada ho gaya, kyunki ab wo kuch bhi fek kar nahi maarne wali thi kyunki wo toh is samaya busy thi apne manpasandida kaam me, isliye main wahi khada ho kar Sanjana ko painting banate hue dekhte raha…

“indra-dhanush bana rahi hai kya…?”

ispar Sanjana kuch nahi boli…

“ Lol… isse achchha indra-dhanush toh main bana lu…”

ispar bhi Sanjana kuch nahi boli…

“you know that, I love you…right…?”jis table par canvas rakha tha, us table ko ungaliyo se dabate hue maine Sanjana ki chuppi todne ki ek aur koshish ki....

Lekin, Sanjana abki baar bhi chup rahi… jiske baad maine bhi ek brush uthaya aur jo color neeche rakhe hue the, unme se ek me brush dubokar… jis canvas me Sanjana painting bana rahi thi… usi me main bhi brush chalane laga…..

“abbeyyy… pagal … ye kya kiya…”mujhe jor se dhakka dekar Sanjana boli… actually boli nahi... balki... cheekhi “ dimag ki jagah gobar bhara hai kya, pahle mera mobile tod diya aur ab… nihayat hee bewkoof aadmi hai tu… kitne din se main is painting me lagi hui thi… sali puri mehnat barbaad… tu chup-chap niakl jaa , yaha se… aur aaj ke baad mujhse baat mat karna… pata nahi wo kaun sa moment tha, jab main tujhse pahli baar mili thi… na tujhse milti, naa ye sab hota…. Jafar bolta tha ki kis chutiye se dosti bana rakhi hai maine…. lekin maine hee uski baat nahi maani….”



So, is tarah thodi der pahle main jis teer ko pakadne ki baat kar raha tha, wo filhal mere hee pichhwade me ghus chuka tha... maine brush gusse me wahi se feka... jo seedhe canvas se jaa takraya , actually maine nishana lagakar canvas me maara tha.. taaki Sanjana ki painting brush me lage colour se thodi aur kharab ho jaaye... mujhe us waqt nahi pata tha ki , maine aisa kyun kiya. brush fekte waqt maine uski painting kharab karne ke bare me kyun socha.... sach me mujhe nahi pata... Sanjana ki baat sunkar mujhe bas achanak se gussa aaya aur maine wo kar diya... jiske baad Sanjana mujhpar aur chillayi aur main waha se nikalne ke liye aage badha..... main jaldbaji me, gusse me Sanjana ke kamre se baahar nikla, gusse me hee seedhiyo se utra aur gusse me hee uske ghar ke darwaje ko jor se laat maarkar nikal jaata... par ab toh gussa tha hee nahi... matlab seedhiyo se neeche utarte waqt hee mera sara gussa achanak sse aise gayab ho gaya , jaise swimming pool me humara moot... :D main wapas Sanjana ke kamre ki taraf badha... wo kya hai ki last line meri honi chahiye...

mere dwara tahas-nahas kar di gayi apni painting ko Sanjana apna sar pakde dekh rahi thi.... main uske kamre ke darwaje ke thik saamne khada hua aur bola...

“kuch toh ab bhi hai humare darmiyan,

mohabbat na sahi, nafrat hee sahi..... LOL”



mera itna kahna tha aur uska bas itna sunna tha ki... Sanjana ke hath me waha table me mauzood jo kuch bhi aaya, use wo mere taraf fekne lagi… pahle jitney brush the, un sabko wo feki aur fir sab brush khatm ho gaye toh brush wala dibba… jinhe catch kar-kar ke main wapas usi ki taraf fekte jaa raha tha… aisa bahut der tak chalta raha aur ye fekne-pakadne ka programme aise hee kafi der tak chalta raha… wo mujhe gariyate hue saaman mere upar feke ja rahi thi aur main catch kar-kar ke usko return kiye jaa raha tha…. Jiske baad ek pal aisa aaya jab wo thak gayi aur shant wahi ek chair par baith gayi aur main waha se khisak liya….. apna mobile lekar. Jise maine pahle hee jeb me bhar liya tha.



Sanjana ke ghar se nikalte hee Ved mujhe , mere hee ghar ke bahar khade hokar apna mobile kochakte hue dikhayi diya….

“Atharva…”muhe dekh usne kaha

“Ved…”use dekh maine kaha

“Ranjan ka phone tha…”jab main uske paas pahucha toh wo mere kaan me fusfusaya... use dar tha ki kahi wo aise khulle me bolega toh meri mommy na sun le

“Ranjan ka…..?? chal andar…. game khelte hue bata dena ki kya bol raha tha…”

“game khelte hue nahi….”mujhe waha se ghaseet kar door le jaate hue Ved bola “Ranjan ka ghar Police line me hee hai… matlab thoda pahle hai, police line se…”

“toh….?”aankh malte hue maine puchha

“toh Riya ka ghar bhi udhar hee hai…”

“toh…”aankh malna chhod abki excited hoka maine puchha…

“toh Ranjan abhi Police line wale park se call kiya tha…”

“Toh…?” abki toh khushi se uchhalte hue maine puchhha

“toh… Riya wahi park me hai… yahi batane ke liye Ranjan call kiya tha..”

“par mujhe call toh nahi kiya, fir tujhe kaise pata chala….”

“aiseeeee….. 3 point…”lund ki taraf ungali karke Ved bola “mujhe call kiya tha aur bola hai ki yadi Riya se milna hai toh us park me pahuch jao…”

“abey toh starting me hee ye nahi bata sakta tha kya….. chutiya.. 11 lines kha gaya...”

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Hum dono Ved ki bike me sawar hue...

“bike main chalaunga... meri bike hai”jab main driving seat par baitha toh Ved mujhe kheechte hue bola

“chup be... lead role me main hoon, bike main chalaunga...”

Aur iske baad hum dono Police Line ke South Rewa Park ki taraf chal diye…. Park pahuchkar jaise hee maine bike kinare khadi ki, Ranjan hume wahi gate ke paas hee mil gaya….

“aur Ranjan….”Ved se hath milate hue Ranjan bola… I mean… Ranjan se hath milate hue Ved bola…

“arey chal na lawda andar… ye sab baad me bhi kar sakte ho…”Ved aur Ranjan ko park ke gate se andar dhakelte hue maine kaha…
lo ho gaya nuksan :doh:
par iske baad jo hua matlab jis tarah se sanjana ne jahar se bhi kadvi baatein boli... :snake: iske baad to agar thodi bhi sharam bachi hai atharva mein to kabhi milne jaaye usse..
Khair.. sanjana na sahi riya hi sahi..
Let's see what happens next
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“wo dekh…”gate se andar aate hee meri nazar park me ek oor turant atak gayi…“wo dekh… apni class ki Mira….”

“Mira…? Kaha… kaha bhai….”

“yahaaaaaaa…. 1 point…”Ved par apna pahla point chadha kar maine kaha… “udhar kaha dekh raha hai, idhar dekh….N-E me… wo rahi… dikhi…?”

Park me hum aaye toh Riya ke liye the, par andar ghuste hee Mira hume dikh gayi… wahi jisne mujhe 1000 rupaye diye the..remember her..? Mira humare class ki sabse maaldar item thi aur koyi bhi ladka ho, kaisa bhi ladka ho…. Sabko barabar bhaav deti thi… jiske karan School me ladko ke beech afwah fail gayi thi ki ….. jin-jin ladko ke sath wo ghoomti hai… un sabke sath baad me fir wo gang-bang bhi karti hai… is samay bhi Mira 4 laundo ke sath park me akeli thi… ek ladka thoda aage khade hokar unki photo le raha tha aur Mira baki bache 3 ladko ke beech mast chipak kar pose pe pose diye jaa rahi thi…. Mera najariya galat ho sakta hai, Mira ko dekhne ka yaa fir Main khud bhi galat ho sakta hoon... par us samay waha jaisi sthiti thi, us sthiti me mujhe Mira galat lagi. Kyunki main Mira ko bhale hee thik se nahi jaanta tha us samay par main uske saath khade ladko ko jaanta tha.

“ park me bhi crossed leg khadi hai… ye kya hai”Maine kaha

“chut fatne ka dar rahta hai, samajh tu…. Safety le rahi hai… aur bsdk wo kalua kaise chipak raha hai, Mira se… mahtarichod... uski toh girlfriend hai na koyi…”

“kaun hai yee….”Ranjan bhi humari conversation me shamil hote hue bola aur main chup ho gaya... kyunki mujhe maloom ho chala tha ki ab kis tarah ki conversation hone wali hai.... isliye aage ke kuch pal maine shant hee rahne ka nirnay liya.

“ladki hai ye…”Ved ne Ranjan ke ~kaun hai ye... ka jawab diya

“abey... wo toh mujhe bhi dikh raha hai ki ye ek ladki hai... par hai kaun… dekhi-dekhi maloom padti hai…”

“kaun si duniya me rahta hai…? humare class ki hai… Jafar ki ex. Tujhe kaise nahi pata, school me toh nursery walo ko bhi pata hai ye baat...”

“ kisi ne kabhi kuch bataya hee nahi.... waise jo sath me 4 launde hai iske sath, main sure hoon Inme se pakka koyi chod tak nahi paya hoga isko…”Ranjan haste hue bola…

“ye chut tak nahi chaat paye honge, chodna toh door ki baat hai…”

“sahi bol raha hai… choot ka baal tak dekhne ko nahi mila hoga inhe…”

“baki.... charo ready hai chodne ke liye… dekh toh kaise jibh laplapaye, wala expression de rahe hai… mera khada ho gaya”wahi park me Ved bejhijhak pant ke upar se lund masalne laga…

“Virgin hai kya ladki…?”Ranjan ne puchha…

“Ranjan , tu toh use dekh kar pura laar hee tapka de raha hai aur kya bol raha hai bhai... aajkal virgin ladkiya nahi milti… bachpan se hee chudai shuru ho jati hai…”

“ apna desh bhi pura America ho gaya hai lawda…”rookhe mann se Ranjan bola “ chal chhod ho gaya... ab Riya ke paas chalte hai…”

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Riya, Park ke beecho-beech ghaas ke upar baithi hui thi…. Wo kya kar rahi thi, ispar main sure nahi tha kyunki uska agwada dusari taraf tha… par itna sure tha ki wo kuch jaroor kar rahi thi aur use karne me full magan thi… hum teeno waha se thodi door uske peechhe hee khade the…

“ab kyat era naam announce karu, tab jayega.... ? jaa na be… baat kar…”Ved mujhe dhakka dekar bola…

“gand fat-ti hai school ke bahar... kya baat karunga…”wapas peechhe hote hue maine kaha

“kuch bhi kar lena… bio ka notes maang lena..”

“bhosdike ….”

“arey bol dena kuch bhi, darta kyun hai … main hoon na, mere rahte hue koyi gunda gaand nahi hilayega”

“toh jaun…..”

“arey jaa na… nahi toh main jaunga fir…”



Main aage badha… School me kisi bhi ladki se baat karna mujhe bahut aasan lagta tha, lekin bahar aise akele me khud approach karne me ab meri fat rahi thi… dono hatherli bandh kar maine khud ke andar josh fuka aur fir Riya ki taraf ahiste-ahiste badha… Riya ke paas pahuchkar main kuch der yun hee aise khada raha aur dekhne laga ki wo kar kya rahi hai… red t-shirt aur jeans pahne wo ghas me baithi koyi sketch bana rahi thi aur jis style se bana rahi thi aur jaise brush hath me lekar wo apni kalayi idhar-udhar mod-mod kar sata-sat rang bhar rahi thi…. Us-se main samajh gaya ki wo bhi Sanjana ke maafiq pro hai… kyunki Sanjana bhi aise hee brush hath me lene ke baad , bhaka-bhak brush chalati hai.

“ab ladki patane ke liye sketch sikhna padega , lagta hai… sala show off karne wala koyi talent hee nahi hai , mere andar… chalta hu, mujhe yaha aana hee nahi chahiye tha… aur bhosdika… ye pipe ka bandal kaun rakha hai idhar…”

Khud ko khud se reject karke waha se jaane ke liye main peechhe muda aur khunnas me pipe ke bandal me ek laat mara , jisse mera pair usme fas gaya , jise nikalne ke liye khunnas me hee maine dusara pair bhi pipe ke bandal me de mara aur fir jab wo bhi fas gaya toh , puri taqat lagakar apna pair pipe se nikalne ke liye kheencha…. Aur is koshish me mera pair toh nahi nikla ulta pipe me aur fasa aur main wahi ulta zameen par gir pada, peeth ke bal aur badi tej aawaz hui….

“Atharvaaaaaaa….. tummmm…. Yahaaaaaa….”

Mujhe waha achanak dekh Riya bhauchakki rah gayi ... maine turant apna baya hath moda aur apne sar ke neeche rakhkar Muskurate hue waha aise leta jaise ye dharti sheshnaag ho aur uske upar vishram karta main swayam Narayan....

“hiiiiii…”dard ko dabakar muskurate hue main bola

“hiiii… par tum yaha kaise…”mujhe yaha dekh uski abhi bhi fati padi thi... aankh

“kya painting banati ho… tumhari painting dekh kar hee main gir gaya… meri bhi painting banao na, aise .. isi pose me… par uske pahle”apne pair me fase pipe ki taraf maine ishara kiya...

Riya aur maine milkar pipe ke bandal me fase hue mere pair ko nikala….

“tum yaha kya kar rahe ho…”wo ab bhi isi sawal par atki hui thi

“bas aise hee park me ghumne aaya tha…”

“maine puchha… tum yaha , mere peechhe kya kar rahe the… tum mujhe stalk kar rahe ho…?”

“Ofcourse ……... not. kyun mujhe karna chahiye kya…? main toh tumse yaha bio ke notes lene aaya tha…”jab mujhe kuch nahi sujha toh maine Ved ka rata-rataya answer bol diya

“bio ke notes…. Yaha garden me… aur wo bhi tab jab tum mathematics ke student ho aur tumhe pata kaise chala ki main yaha hu…”

“aissseeeee…. 1 point” main sirf bola… sirf bola… lund ki taraf ishara wagerah kuch nahi kiya… “ main park me ghoom raha tha.. I lovvvvve nature and its calmness, its depth of silence and the beauty of it….”

Ye Bolkar maine apni aankhe band kar li aur ek lambi saans lekar dikhawa karne laga… par actually main soch raha tha ki... Riya ne jo sawal puchha hai... mathematics ka hokar bhi mujhe bio ke notes kyun chahiye.... uska jawab kya du…



“par tum yaha mere paas kyun aaye…”prakriti ke prati mere pyaar me dakhal daalte hue Riya boli…

“main yaha park me ghoom raha tha, toh tumhe dekha… aur tumhe dekhte hee mere dil me khayal aaya ki tumse bio ke notes maang lu… additional bio hai naa mera, isiliye… aur... waise ek aur reason tha mera yaha aane ka…”

“kya…”

“tumhe hepatitis toh nahi hai na…”

“nahiii.. kyun…”

“wo tumhare bottle se pani piya tha, isliye puchha… ki kahi mujhe bhi na ho jaye… direct school me puchhta toh thik nahi rahta , isliye jab park me tumhe dekha toh... bas idhar hee chala aaya”

“nahi hai…”apne baalo ko ungaliyo se modte hue wo boli aur muskura di…. Shayad wo samajh gayi thi aur shayad main bhi samajh gaya tha ki wo samajh gayi hai...

“main samajh gaya tum aise kyun kar rahi ho…”wapas pahle ki tarah waha ghas me vishram ki mudra me aate hue maine kaha…

“kya kar rahi hu main…”

“aise , apne right side ke baalo ko baar-baar kaan ke peechhe kyun kar rahi ho…”

“really…? Toh batao fir kyun kar rahi hu main aisa…”

“tum mujhe apni earring dikha rahi ho…”

“kuch bhi…”

“sach me, left side ke baal ko peechhe karo toh…”

“kyunnn..”apni aankh chhoti karke wo puchhi…

“bas aise hee.... ”

“ok…ok”

“dekha…. Sahi bol raha tha main… tumne left ear me sirf ek earring pahna hai, lekin right side me do. Ek main earring aur ek chhota sa main earring ke upar...… supporting earring. yaani tum mujhe apna earring show-off kar rahi thi… isiliye tum baar-baar apne baal ko peechhe kar rahi thi…”.

“tumhe kuch aur kahna hai mere bare me... ya main ghar jaun…?”

“bas ho gaya…”

“farewell , then…”

“say hello to your family…”

“why….? They don’t even know you…”khade hote hue Riya boli

Riya khadi ho gayi par main aise hee leta raha... kyunki kuch der pahle dhadam se girne ke kaaran mera pond pira raha tha aur mujhe shak tha ki main ache se khada nahi ho paunga isliye main usi position me leta raha....

“don’t even know you… se mujhe yaad aaya, tum facebook use nahi karti kya…?”

“fb kaun use nahi karta…”

“bahut dhoondha tumhe fb par, mili nahi….”

“privacy hai… I’ll send you the request…. bye”

“until next time ! ”

Riya ne apna painting ka samaan uthaya aur waha se jaane lagi… uske jaane ke kuch der baad Ved aur Ranjan kudte hue mere paas aaye…

“kya boli be wo… pat gayi kya…? Sex-vex ka baat hua kuch… ki kaise karna hai, kaha karna hai… Ranjan bol raha tha ki, room-voom ka tension koyi nahi.. wo jugaad kar dega….”Veda aate hee direct yahi sab puchha

“oye… door raho be mere se tum single log… love is in the air and I’m breathing it… tum dono polluted mat karo...”
:roflol:
Actually atharva ved ko apna guru bana lena chahiye.... Yehi sahi aur sathik rasta dikhayega atharva ko.... chahe us raste mein jaan jane ki khatra bhi kyun na ho..
waise bhi usne kaha to hai hi yeh riya aur sanjana, atharva ke liye bas ki baat hai hi nahi.. ulta woh khud dhundga apne dost ke liye koi perfect ladki.. :D
Khair let's see what happens next
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“naa be, Ranjan ko bula liya apne ghar… ghar wale kya bolenge…”return me Ved ne ye sawal daga...

“ghar walo ko nahi batayenge ki uska naam Ranjan hai… ya fir uska baap kaun hai… simple… sabke gharwalo ko sirf naam pata hai, dekha thodi hai kisi ne”

“wow… good…”

“hold tight”accelerator ghumate hue maine kaha…

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Ghar pahuchkar, main hath-muh dhoya aur deo-veo maarkar fb check kiya. Riya ki friend request aa chuki thi. Par ab apun thoda bhaav khaane ke mood me tha. Riya ki request toh maine Ranjan ke dhabe me hee dekh liya tha, par accept nahi kiya... matab lagna chahiye ki ladka laar tapkaye uske request ka intezaar nahi kar raha... matlab lagna chahiye ki apun bahut busy aadmi hai aur fir Sanjana ko show off karne ka bhi khayal aaya... taaki uski nazar me apna rola badh jaaye... isliye hath-muh dhokar .. mast kanghi-vanghi maar ke , naya wala t-shirt apne body me taang ke main ek baar fir Sanjana ke ghar ke liye nikal pada…. Mann me aaya ki Sanjana ke ghar naa jaun, gali-vali de sakti hai... par fir bhi... jaisa ki maine pahle hee bataya... udta hua teer lene ki aadat thi mujhe us waqt... so , main gaya... pure josh me gaya...

“hey silky….”Sanjana ne jaise gate khola main darwaja pakad kar upar chhat ki taraf dekhte hue style se bola…. “aaj apun party diya , Hotel Empire me… tu yadi mere se ladayi nahi karti toh tujhe bhi deta…”

“aukaat hai teri, dhabe me baith ke free ki roti tod raha tha aur yaha badi-badi jhad raha hai…”

“tujhe.... kisne...... bata...... diya...…”

“Ved ne pic upload ki hai…”

“haan toh humlog baad me gaye the waha… pahle hotel Empire gaye the…”

“tu kyun aaya hai… yaha…”

“sorry bolne… maine bahut socha, raat bhar socha… kal bhi socha, aaj bhi socha… jaagte hue socha… sote hue socha… school me socha, school ke baad bhi socha…. tab mujhe realize hua ki galti….”

“I’m listening…”

“tab mujhe realize hua kiiiii……… galti teri thi….”

Mera itna bolna tha ki Sanjana ne gate jor se mere muh me band kar diya….

“achchha sun toh….”darwaja thokte hue main bola “aaj main ek ladki se mila…”

“tu aur ladki se… tujhse kaun baat karegi…”taana maarte hue Sanjana andar se hee boli…

“areyyy… kya kami hai mujhme… most eligible single hoon main“darwaja lagatar thokte hue maine kaha, taaki Sanjana mere is tarah darwaja thokne se irritate ho jaaye...

“aisa bol ki… kaun si kami nahi hai tujhme….”

“achchha sun toh… usne mujhe friend request bheji hai, wo bhi khud se… lagta hai mere pe flat ho gayi. accept karu kya…?”mera darwaja peetna ab bhi jaari tha... aur aise peet-te hue mujhe ek dhun yaad aa gayi aur usi dhun me main ab darwaja peet raha tha.

“sach me…?”darwaja kholte hue Sanjana boli…

“ye dekh…”mobile me Riya ki request dikhate hue maine kaha…

“Riya Rose… ye toh wo nayiii ladki hai… biology ki…?”

“kaisi hai… mast hai na…”fir se upar chhat ki taraf dekh badayi maarte hue main bola “main aur wo… Atharva & Riya… school ke hottest couple honge… farewell me couple dance bhi karenge aur jab raat ho jayegi toh main use uske ghar chhodne jaunga aur fir raaste bhar main romantic baate karke use excite karunga aur fir uske ghar ke saamne pahuchkar main, use kiss karunga... ”

“tujhe sach me lagta hai ki… aisa kuch hoga…”haste hue mera Mazak udate hue wo boli

“janeman.. tu mujhe jaanti nahi… par ladkiya flat ho jaati hai mujhpe. Ab khud ko hee dekh le, kaise chaar saal se mere peechhe padi hai tu, lekin main hu ki tujhe bhaav hee nahi de raha…”

“how lucky I am…. Waise, Tera sar kaisa hai... sorry us din gusse me maine cup fek-kar maar diya tha tujhe…. By the way , I love it when you are in pain”mere sar ko jaha usne cup fek ke maara tha, waha touch karke boli… “chal tujhe apni paintings dikhati hu…”

“arey yarrrrr….”

“chal naa…”mera hath pakad kar mujhe jabran andar kheechte hue wo boli….

“arey nahi dekhna mujhe indra-dhanush… aasman me jo dikhta hai usi se mera pet bhar jata hai… painting-vainting dekhna unjheleble hai”

Par Sanjana nahi maani aur mera hath pakad mujhe kheechte rahi... pahle ghar ke andar kheencha aur fir seedhiyo se upar... aur fir finally canvas ke saamne lakar mujhe khada kar diya…. Mujhe laga tha ki Sanjana mujhe Indra-dhanush dikhayegi par jab Canvas ke saamne pahucha toh.... waha toh dusari hee painting thi...

“ye kya haiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…… arery, ye toh main aur tu hai…. Aur Ved bhi hai… kya kamaal ki kalakari ki hai, Silky…”canvas ko chhute hue maine kaha…

Painting humare purane moments ki thi... jisme main aur Sanjana hans rahe the aur Ved pichhe wali bench par gaal fulaye baitha hua gusse se hume ghoor raha tha. ye shayad 10th class ki baat hai.... Ved humari kisi baat se naraz tha aur main, Sanjana ke sath milkar uska Mazak uda raha tha...

“kab se yahi toh dikhana chah rahi thi….”

“toh dikhaya kyun nahi …”

“complete nahi tha aur fir tere upar mera gussa…. Main toh ise faad kar fekne bhi wali thi…”

“pagla gayi ho kaa…”canvas se painting utar kar maine kaha “ ye main rakhunga…. Bhool ja tu ise…”

“waise ye Riya Rose wahi ladki hai na, jiska jhootha paani tune piya tha…”

“tujhe kaise pata….”

“people talk… waise hua kya tha…”

Jiske baad maine Sanjana ko Riya se hui meri har mulaqat ke bare me bataya , jise sunkar wo mujhpe hasne lagi aur jis tarah se wo mujh par has rahi thi, Riya ko lekar mera confidence level fir se down hone laga….. aur maine mayoos hote hue puchha

“maine kuch galat kiya kya….?”

“kuch galat kiya…? Tune sahi kya kiya… sach bata tu sahi me park me gir gaya tha…. Gire hue insaan…”

“main jaa raha hu, yar… ab”

“achchha sun toh….”

“bol…”

“tu us-se sach me bio ke notes magne gaya tha..…?”itna bolkar wo fir se mujhpar hasne lagi….

“chal na… apna kaam kar… itna bhi funny nahi hai ye… aur tere se badhiya painting banati hai wo, indara-dhanush bana ke painting ke naam par dikhawa nahi karti…”

“toh usko bol ki wo bhi yahi painting banaye , jo maine banaya hai… pata chal jayega ki better kaun hai… waise tune kabhi mujhe kyun line nahi maari…?”

“kisne kaha nahi maari…”main badbadaya

“kuch… bola…. Kya…?”

“nahi... humare science me do term hai… Conductor and Insulator… tu insulator hai, line pass hee nahi hone deti khud se… par Riya conductor hai, barabar pass karti hai… even magnitude bhi badha deti hai... Sunayana mam kaha hai….”

“wo Sanjay Gandhi hospital me hai…”

“hospital….. kyunnn…”

kahi Sunayana mam pregnant toh nahi ho gayi...? Ved ko sunaunga ye khabar.. uska chehra dekhne laayak hoga. sala bahut Sunayana mam ki sexy klahani banata hai... ab bana ke dikhaye... ye khabar sunne ke baad. aur ye Sunayana mam ka husband bhi hawasi hai sala... humare 12th khatm hone tak nahi ruk sakta tha kya...? isiliye Sanjana itna khush hai...

"hospital.... kyunnn..." Sanjana mere pahle ~hospital kyunnn ka jawab deti uske pahle hee maine dusari baar puchh liya... bola tha naa, mann ki gati yadi tej ho toh, samay ruk jaata hai... jaise Lift me Niv ke sath hua tha... remember that..? bas same concept. :cool:
 
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“party de raha hai na….”Park se nikal kar jab hum ghar ke liye taiyar hue toh Ved bola…

“party...? party kisliye…”

“maal pata liya… party nahi dega…”

“pati kaha hai abhi, abhi toh sirf baat hui hai…”

“toh pat jayegi….. kya bolta hai, Ranjan…?... Ranjan… Ranjan… kis-se laga hua hai be phone me…”

“wo aaj dhabe ka samaan khatm ho gaya toh usi ki list dekh riya tha , kaun-kaun sa samaan lana hai…”

“fb me…?”

“wo toh aise hee Sanjana ko friend request bhej raha tha…. khair chhod, Kya bol raha tha tu…”mobile apne jeb me daalte hue Ranjan bola… “ party… haan party toh dena chahiye….”

“paisa nahi hai abhi aur Sanjana se bhi baat-chit band hai, warna teen-char sau toh wahi se jugad ho jata”

“sale bhikhari….”

“mere dhabe chalo… paise baad me de dena, jab bhi mann ho…”Ranjan bola “aur botal ka bhi jugad ho jayega, yadi chahoge toh…”

“botal matlab…”maine puchha…

“botal matlab daru be… itna lodu kaise ho sakta hai tu…”Ved ne jawab diya

“daru nahi peena , kadwa lagta hai…”

“thik hai fir…. Sirf khayenge…” driving seat me koodkar baith-te hue Ved bola… “come on, fellas… load ho jao…”

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Hum teeno Ranjan ke dhabe pahuche, jaha Ranjan ke papa daru peekar tunn the par hume dekhte hee humara aadar-satkar kiya… humne jab unhe hath jodkar Namaste kiya toh wo bhi hath jodkar Namaste karne lage… jispar main aur Ved flat ho gaye…. matlab kya sanskari baap tha Ranjan ka… khud chalkar humare liye andar do takhat lagwaya aur 4-5 item ka order de mara…. Log faltu me badnaam karke rakhe hai, Ranjan ke baap ko.

“wo ladka kaun hai be… jaana pahchana lag raha hai…”ek chair kheechte hue maine ek ladke ki taraf ishara kiya… main aur Ved wahi baithe aur Ranjan waha se bahar chala gaya....

“abey wo wahi government school wala ladka hai na… Joshi, jise last year Jafar ne pela tha... jab isne Mira ko chhed diya tha toh… bhool gaya kya…? Itna bada kaand hua tha… wo toh compromise karwaya gaya, iske aur Jafar ke beech warna Government school ke ladke Sanskar Valley ke har launde ko pelne ke liye taiyar the….”

“ toh bhatti, future me kya karne ka socha hai….”Ranjan hum dono ki plate me roti rakhte hue puchha

“Engineering… ab math liya hai toh karna hee padega…”Maine kaha..

“mera bhi same answer…”roti , shahi paneer me dubote hue Ved bola… “tera kya plan hai… bio, liya hai… doctor banega kya, lawda”

“doctor banna , apne bas ka nahi hai… apan toh simple pharmacy karunga aur fir medical dukan kholunga… mast aaram ki zindagi… idhar dhabe ka bhi kaam dekh lunga, udhar medical store ka bhi…”

“haan … ye sahi hai… fir jab bhi hume josh wali goli chahiye hogi toh isi ke dukan se lenge… kyun Atharva…?”

“aur condoms bhi… par mera ek sawal hai”

“hat lawda…”

“tu chup bsdk… tere se kaun puchh raha hai, main toh Ranjan se baat kar raha hu…. toh Ranjan, tune ye sab kyun kiya… matlab main aur Ved tere, utne achchhe dost bhi nahi hai par fir bhi tune Riya ke bare me hume bataya ki wo park me hai aur fir yaha itni door dhabe me free ka khana khilane bhi le aaya… kyun…?”

“aur kisi ko main School me jaanta bhi nahi shayad, isliye… ya tum dono ke aalawa… koyi aur kabhi mujhse dost ki tarah baat bhi nahi kiya... shayad isliye. ye hasi majak jo tum dono karte ho… mujhe ye pata hai… kyunki main shuru se tum logo ke sath padha hu… pure school me sirf hum teeno hee hai, jo shuru se padh rahe hai… tu, main , Ved…. We’re bonded with each other, with this land... hum study ya fir job ke liye chahe kahi bhi chale jaye , kuch bhi kar le, is jagah se hamesha jude rahenge…. Ek din hume lautkar wapas yaha aana hee padega… apni khushi se ya fir majboori me aur fir se life naye sire se shuru karni hogi…. I know it, I’ve felt it…. This is the land of white tigers aur White tigers sirf yahi khush rah sakte hai…. Isliye future me kahi bhi raho, jab bhi kabhi dil dukhi ho toh bejhijhak yaha aana… fir main bhi yahi milunga... ”

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Ek wo din tha aur ek aaj ka din hai… usi din se main aur Ved khud ko White Tigers manne lage the, fark sirf itna tha ki hum dono zindagi ke safar me is baat ko kahi bahut peechhe chhod aaye the… us shahar ko bhi aur un yaadon ko bhi. hum dono us din Ranjan ki baat ko haste-khelte majak me le gaye the par aaj jab andheri raat me bike chalate hue main apne school ke bare me soch raha tha, tab mujhe ye yaad aaya aur mujhe realize hua ki…. Mujhe yaha bahut pahle hee aa jana chahiye tha. Ranjan ki us din kahi hui har ek baat aaj sach saabit ho rahi thi…. Khair us din dhabe me bhar-pet khana khane ke baad jab main glass me paani bharkar bahar hath dhone ek kinare pahucha toh… Ranjan ke papa waha pahuch gaye…

“Beta, khana kaisa laga…”

“arey uncle hum log Ranjan ke dost hai, yadi kharab bhi rahega toh kharab nahi bolenge… aap toh humse aise bartaav kar rahe hai, jaise hum ladke wale ho aur aap ladki wale… aur khana, mind blowing tha, itna kha liya hai ki do din tak ghar me khana hee nahi khaunga…”

“arey wo baat nahi hai beta, wo Ranjan zindagi me pahli baar kisi ko apne sath yaha laya hai… mujhe maloom hai ki Ranjan aur meri kya image hai school me… aur use koyi kyun apne ghar kisi party ya function me nahi bulata… isliye… yadi us-se dosti na bhi ho toh bas dikhawa kar lena… iske baad wo college chala jayega toh , shayad waha uske dost ban jaye… jinhe usse baat karne me beizzati mahsoos naa ho”

“bas itni si baat….”main peeche palat kar jor se chillaya “Ved chal na yar, ab kya aadhi raat ko jayega….”

“bas-bas aaya …”khane ki speed tej karte hue Ved ghuti hui aawaz me bola

“aur tu Ranjan… kal school ke baad mere ghar aa jana , Modern Warfare 2 khelenge… full action.. maja aayega…”

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“bsdk, bola tha subah chalte hai… ab toh badhiya kisi laundiya ki tarah mujhse chipak kar baitha hai aur idhar thandi me meri aisi ki taisi ho rahi hai…”Jab humne Bhopal se bypass road pakda toh main bola…

“sunayi nahi diya, kuch bol raha kya…”

“kuch nahi… bas puch raha tha ki apne whatsapp group se do logo ko tune remove kyun kiya tha 2 din pahle…”

“jisko rahna hai rahe, par group ki garima, pratishtha aur anushasan me koyi aanch nahi aani chahiye…”

“Garima aur Pratishtha maal hai kya…?”

“Atharva, kitna chodra ho gaya hai tu aajkal, pahle bahut sharif tha…. BC ab dekho….”

“hold tight…”accelerator badhate hue maine kaha….

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Us din Ranjan ke dhabe me usko next day ka invite dekar main aur Ved ghar ke liye nikle…

“naa be, Ranjan ko bula liya apne ghar… ghar wale kya bolenge…”return me Ved ne ye sawal daga...

“ghar walo ko nahi batayenge ki uska naam Ranjan hai… ya fir uska baap kaun hai… simple… sabke gharwalo ko sirf naam pata hai, dekha thodi hai kisi ne”

“wow… good…”

“hold tight”accelerator badhate hue maine kaha…
asal mein yeh writer sahab ke lekhni ka hi jadu hai ki hume lage hi nahi, hum atharva ke flashback ko padh rahe the... lage ki jaise yehi present hai.. woh to achha hai ki bis bis kahani mein writer sahab present Lake yaad dila dete hai ki nahi wo sach mein flashback mein ghati kuch purani yaadein hai atharva k...
unhone apne kalam se likhe har ek shabd, har ek panktiyon ke dwara na sirf pramukh kirdaar atharva ko uske school days ke yaadon mein le gaya balki iske jariye apne readers ko bhi apne bhooli bichhde khatti mithi school days ke yaadon mein khone ke liye majboor kiya..
ek baat to tay hai... chaahe present mein kuch bhi ho lekin sabse badhiya aur maje dear aur dilchasp is kahani ka flashback hai :approve:
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills gyani sir :applause: :applause:
 

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Ghar pahuchkar, main hath-muh dhoya aur deo-veo maarkar fb check kiya. Riya ki friend request aa chuki thi. Par ab apun thoda bhaav khaane ke mood me tha. Riya ki request toh maine Ranjan ke dhabe me hee dekh liya tha, par accept nahi kiya... matab lagna chahiye ki ladka laar tapkaye uske request ka intezaar nahi kar raha... matlab lagna chahiye ki apun bahut busy aadmi hai aur fir Sanjana ko show off karne ka bhi khayal aaya... taaki uski nazar me apna rola badh jaaye... isliye hath-muh dhokar .. mast kanghi-vanghi maar ke , naya wala t-shirt apne body me taang ke main ek baar fir Sanjana ke ghar ke liye nikal pada…. Mann me aaya ki Sanjana ke ghar naa jaun, gali-vali de sakti hai... par fir bhi... jaisa ki maine pahle hee bataya... udta hua teer lene ki aadat thi mujhe us waqt... so , main gaya... pure josh me gaya...
Itna kuch hone ke baad bhi jaa raha hai uske paas.. ladka bahadur aur sahasi nikla :D

“hey silky….”Sanjana ne jaise gate khola main darwaja pakad kar upar chhat ki taraf dekhte hue style se bola…. “aaj apun party diya , Hotel Empire me… tu yadi mere se ladayi nahi karti toh tujhe bhi deta…”

“aukaat hai teri, dhabe me baith ke free ki roti tod raha tha aur yaha badi-badi jhad raha hai…”

“tujhe.... kisne...... bata...... diya...…”

“Ved ne pic upload ki hai…”

“haan toh humlog baad me gaye the waha… pahle hotel Empire gaye the…”

“tu kyun aaya hai… yaha…”

“sorry bolne… maine bahut socha, raat bhar socha… kal bhi socha, aaj bhi socha… jaagte hue socha… sote hue socha… school me socha, school ke baad bhi socha…. tab mujhe realize hua ki galti….”

“I’m listening…”

“tab mujhe realize hua kiiiii……… galti teri thi….”

Mera itna bolna tha ki Sanjana ne gate jor se mere muh me band kar diya….

“achchha sun toh….”darwaja thokte hue main bola “aaj main ek ladki se mila…”

“tu aur ladki se… tujhse kaun baat karegi…”taana maarte hue Sanjana andar se hee boli…

“areyyy… kya kami hai mujhme… most eligible single hoon main“darwaja lagatar thokte hue maine kaha, taaki Sanjana mere is tarah darwaja thokne se irritate ho jaaye...

“aisa bol ki… kaun si kami nahi hai tujhme….”

“achchha sun toh… usne mujhe friend request bheji hai, wo bhi khud se… lagta hai mere pe flat ho gayi. accept karu kya…?”mera darwaja peetna ab bhi jaari tha... aur aise peet-te hue mujhe ek dhun yaad aa gayi aur usi dhun me main ab darwaja peet raha tha.

“sach me…?”darwaja kholte hue Sanjana boli…

“ye dekh…”mobile me Riya ki request dikhate hue maine kaha…

“Riya Rose… ye toh wo nayiii ladki hai… biology ki…?”

“kaisi hai… mast hai na…”fir se upar chhat ki taraf dekh badayi maarte hue main bola “main aur wo… Atharva & Riya… school ke hottest couple honge… farewell me couple dance bhi karenge aur jab raat ho jayegi toh main use uske ghar chhodne jaunga aur fir raaste bhar main romantic baate karke use excite karunga aur fir uske ghar ke saamne pahuchkar main, use kiss karunga... ”

“tujhe sach me lagta hai ki… aisa kuch hoga…”haste hue mera Mazak udate hue wo boli

“janeman.. tu mujhe jaanti nahi… par ladkiya flat ho jaati hai mujhpe. Ab khud ko hee dekh le, kaise chaar saal se mere peechhe padi hai tu, lekin main hu ki tujhe bhaav hee nahi de raha…”

“how lucky I am…. Waise, Tera sar kaisa hai... sorry us din gusse me maine cup fek-kar maar diya tha tujhe…. By the way , I love it when you are in pain”mere sar ko jaha usne cup fek ke maara tha, waha touch karke boli… “chal tujhe apni paintings dikhati hu…”

“arey yarrrrr….”

“chal naa…”mera hath pakad kar mujhe jabran andar kheechte hue wo boli….

“arey nahi dekhna mujhe indra-dhanush… aasman me jo dikhta hai usi se mera pet bhar jata hai… painting-vainting dekhna unjheleble hai”

Par Sanjana nahi maani aur mera hath pakad mujhe kheechte rahi... pahle ghar ke andar kheencha aur fir seedhiyo se upar... aur fir finally canvas ke saamne lakar mujhe khada kar diya…. Mujhe laga tha ki Sanjana mujhe Indra-dhanush dikhayegi par jab Canvas ke saamne pahucha toh.... waha toh dusari hee painting thi...

“ye kya haiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…… arery, ye toh main aur tu hai…. Aur Ved bhi hai… kya kamaal ki kalakari ki hai, Silky…”canvas ko chhute hue maine kaha…

Painting humare purane moments ki thi... jisme main aur Sanjana hans rahe the aur Ved pichhe wali bench par gaal fulaye baitha hua gusse se hume ghoor raha tha. ye shayad 10th class ki baat hai.... Ved humari kisi baat se naraz tha aur main, Sanjana ke sath milkar uska Mazak uda raha tha...

“kab se yahi toh dikhana chah rahi thi….”

“toh dikhaya kyun nahi …”

“complete nahi tha aur fir tere upar mera gussa…. Main toh ise faad kar fekne bhi wali thi…”

“pagla gayi ho kaa…”canvas se painting utar kar maine kaha “ ye main rakhunga…. Bhool ja tu ise…”

“waise ye Riya Rose wahi ladki hai na, jiska jhootha paani tune piya tha…”

“tujhe kaise pata….”

“people talk… waise hua kya tha…”

Jiske baad maine Sanjana ko Riya se hui meri har mulaqat ke bare me bataya , jise sunkar wo mujhpe hasne lagi aur jis tarah se wo mujh par has rahi thi, Riya ko lekar mera confidence level fir se down hone laga….. aur maine mayoos hote hue puchha

“maine kuch galat kiya kya….?”

“kuch galat kiya…? Tune sahi kya kiya… sach bata tu sahi me park me gir gaya tha…. Gire hue insaan…”

“main jaa raha hu, yar… ab”

“achchha sun toh….”

“bol…”

“tu us-se sach me bio ke notes magne gaya tha..…?”itna bolkar wo fir se mujhpar hasne lagi….

“chal na… apna kaam kar… itna bhi funny nahi hai ye… aur tere se badhiya painting banati hai wo, indara-dhanush bana ke painting ke naam par dikhawa nahi karti…”

“toh usko bol ki wo bhi yahi painting banaye , jo maine banaya hai… pata chal jayega ki better kaun hai… waise tune kabhi mujhe kyun line nahi maari…?”

“kisne kaha nahi maari…”main badbadaya

“kuch… bola…. Kya…?”

“nahi... humare science me do term hai… Conductor and Insulator… tu insulator hai, line pass hee nahi hone deti khud se… par Riya conductor hai, barabar pass karti hai… even magnitude bhi badha deti hai... Sunayana mam kaha hai….”
pyar nahi karte to kya hua.. dono ache dost bhi ban sakte hai...
Veda ke baad ek sanjana hi to hai jo iske liye fikar jatati hai aur atharva bhi to baatein share karta hai usse..
ek tarah ek achhi dost sanjana aur dusri aurr ek tharki par chaalak dost veda.. great...
“wo Sanjay Gandhi hospital me hai…”

“hospital….. kyunnn…”

kahi Sunayana mam pregnant toh nahi ho gayi...? Ved ko sunaunga ye khabar.. uska chehra dekhne laayak hoga. sala bahut Sunayana mam ki sexy klahani banata hai... ab bana ke dikhaye... ye khabar sunne ke baad. aur ye Sunayana mam ka husband bhi hawasi hai sala... humare 12th khatm hone tak nahi ruk sakta tha kya...? isiliye Sanjana itna khush hai...
:lol: :roflol:
are bichara veda... mana ki wo tharki hai par kam se kam uska dil is tarah mat todo.. :D
"hospital.... kyunnn..." Sanjana mere pahle ~hospital kyunnn ka jawab deti uske pahle hee maine dusari baar puchh liya... bola tha naa, mann ki gati yadi tej ho toh, samay ruk jaata hai... jaise Lift me Niv ke sath hua tha... remember that..? bas same concept. :cool:
Haan pata hai.. aur yeh bhi ek sach hai ki isike chalte gaariya suni aur promotion cancel so alag :D
Khair....
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nice update ..sanjana ke saamne apna status badhane ke liye riya ki fb request dikha raha tha 😁..
waise sanjana bhi dil ki buri nahi hai ,, itna mehanga phone todne par bhi jyada naraj nahi lag rahi hai ,,,aur teeno ki painting bhi banayi 😍😍..
par ye kyu puchha ki atharva ne usko line nahi maari 🤔🤔..

ab sunayana mam ko kya ho gaya ki wo hospital me gayi hai 🤔🤔..

waise hero sapne achche bunta hai 🤣🤣..riya ko kiss karega ...
aur ab ved ko batayega ki mam pregnet hai 🤣🤣..
 
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