Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

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[Romi]

Update 51​

Neha jab washroom mein aati hai aur apni maa ko rote hue dekhti hai toh woh tension mein aajati hai. ​

Neha: Kya hua maa aap ro kyo rahe ho. Kisine kuch bola kya. Please chup ho jaiye bataiye mujhe kya hua. ​

Rashmi: Uske gale lag ke rote hue. Aryan isi college mein hai. Meri hi class mein main mili usse. ​

Neha: Khushi se. Sach mein maa. Kaha hai woh kaisa hai woh. Usne baat ki aapse. ​

Rashmi: Maine usse uski family ke baare mein pucha. Toh usne bataya woh anath hai uski family mar chuki hai. Meera aur Ritika ki family hi uski family hai. ​

Neha jab yeh sunti hai toh uske aansu nikalne lagte hai. Usne Aryan ke saath jo jo kiya tha woh sab usse wapas yaad aane laga. ​

Neha: Main milungi usse. Main baat karungi. Mera bhai mujhse jyaada naraz nhi reh sakta abhi kaha hai woh. ​

Rashmi: Abhi toh class mein hogaa. Tum recess mein milna. Main ghar call karke bolti hu. ​

Phir woh dono waha se chale jaate hai. ​

Idher class mein Aryan ko bahot gussa aarah thaa. But woh kuch kar nhi sakta thaa. Usne khud ko bahot control kiya hua thaa. Phir ek ek karke saare teachers aate hai aur intro leke chale jaate hai. ​

Recess mein yeh log Canteen mein jaate hai. Waha jaake ek table mein baith te hai. Tabhi waha Neha aake Aryan ke gale lag jaati hai. ​

Aryan ko yeh sehan nhi hotaa woh Neha ko apne se durr karta hai ek jhatke mein aur ek thappad laga deta hai. ​

Aryan: Tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhse gale lagne ki. ​

Neha ko iski umeed nhi thi ke uska bhai usko maar bhi sakta hai. But phir bhi woh maar ko sehan kar leti hai. ​

Neha: Bhai please mujhe maaf karde. Humse bahot badi galti hogyi hai. Please mujhe maaf karde. ​

Aryan: Apni jubaan ko lagam do. Main koi tumhara bhai nhi hu. Mujhe nafrat se iss sabd se iss rishte se. Aur mujhe koi shock nhi hai kisi ka bhai banne ka. Kyoki main ek hawas ka pujari hu kahi maine tere izaat pe haath daal diya toh. ​

Neha chillake aur rote bolti hai. Bhaiiiiii. Please mujhe maaf karde. Mujhse bahot badi galti hogyi hai. Maine tujhe kitna rulaya kitni takleef di. Maine tujhpe bharosa naa kar uss ghatiya ladki pe kiya. Meera Ritika tum bolo naa isse mujhe maaf karde. ​

Meera: Naa main aapko janti hu aur naa janna chahti hu. Mere liye mere pati hi sab hai. Woh jinse rishta rakhte hai mere liye wohi rishtedaar. Aur woh jinse nafrat karte hai unse main bhi nafrat karti hu. ​

Ritika: Aur aapke liye achha yehi hoga humse durr rahe. Kyoki mere pati jinse nafrat karte hai hum unki shaksiyat se bhi nafrat karte hai. ​

Neha: Aise mat bolo Meera Ritika. Itne saal main tadpi hu isse milne ke liye. Main maanti hu mujhse bahot badi galti hogyi. Par please mujhe maaf kardo. ​

Tabhi waha Sheetal aajati hai. ​

Sheetal: Please Aryan meri galti ki saza tum inhe mat do. Please inhe maaf kardo. ​

Jab Meera Ritika Sheetal ko dekhti hai toh uska para high hojaata hai. Toh woh dono sidha Sheetal ko thappad laga dete hai. ​

Meera: Teri himmat kaise hui meri pati ke mamle mein bolne ki. Man toh kar raha hai tujhe jaan se mardu. ​

Ritika: Par mere pati ne mujhe rokaa hua hai. Isse pahle ke main kuch galat kardu nikal jaa humari nazro se durr. ​

Aryan: Choro Meera Ritika. Inn jaise logo se baat nhi karni chahiye. Yeh shareef log hai. Aur mujh jaisa hawas ka pujari agar inke saamne raha toh inki izaat pe khatra hai aur kya pata thodi der baat tumdono ke upar bhi koi ilzaam laga de. ​

Neha jaise hi yeh sunti hai woh Aryan ko marne ke liye apna haath uthati hai. Tabhi Meera aur Ritika uska haath pakad leti hai aur ek ek thappad laga deti hai. ​

Meera: Khabardaar agar mere pati pe haath uthane ki sochi toh. ​

Ritika: Agar agli baar yeh khayal bhi man mein laaya toh yeh haath tumhare jism mein nhi dikhega. Yeh bol woh Neha ka haath jhatak deti hai. ​

Phir Aryan Meera Ritika aur Rishi waha se nikal ke dusri jagah baith jaate hai. ​

Neha abhi bhi waha khade hoke ro rahi thi. Woh bhi gusse mein Sheetal ko thappad maar deti hai. ​

Neha: Dekha sirf teri wajah se woh aaj mujhse kaise baat kar ke gaya. Jiss bhai ne kabhi mujhe nazre utha kar nhi dekhi usne aaj mujhe thappad bhi maara. Aaj woh mujhse sirf nafrat karta hai. Sirf teri wajah se. Nikal jaa meri nazro se durr isse pahle main tujhe jaan se maar du.​

Sheetal bhi waha se rote hue chali jaati hai. Usse ab waha ruka nhi jaata isiliye woh apne ghar chali gayi. ​

Neha bhi rote hue Rashmi ki taraf chali jaati hai. ​

Aryan ko itna gussa aaraha thaa ke agar koi abhi usse panga leta toh woh usko jaan se maar deta. ​

Tabhi College mein Minister apne bete ko maarne wale ko maarne aata hai. Aur saath mein gunde bhi laata hai. Woh aake Aryan ko khojta hai. ​

Woh ladki jisne Aryan se baat ki thi woh yeh dekh leti hai isiliye woh canteen mein jaati hai. ​

Ladki: Meera ji Ritika ji woh Vicky ke papa aaye hai Aryan ji ko maarne ke liye. Aur saath mein gunde bhi laaye hai. ​

Meera: Thik hai Thank You inform karne ke liye.​

Phir woh ladki waha se chali jaati hai. Aur Meera Aryan se bolti hai. Chalo tumhare gussa shant karne ka samaan aagaya.​

Rishi: Matlab. ​

Ritika: Chalo khud samaj jaoge. ​

Phir woh charo bhi waha aate hi jaha wohlog the. ​

Vicky bhi wahi khada tha. Woh Aryan ko dekh kar. ​

Vicky: Dad woh dekhiye yehi hai woh jisne mujhe maara thaa. Aur woh ladkiyan yeh mujhe chahiye. ​

Minister: Tu chinta mat kar beta. Aaj yeh ladka abhi marega. Aur yeh ladkiyan sirf teri hogi. ​

Aryan Meera ko apna mobile deta hai aur PM ke secretary ko call lagake iss Minister ka suspension order pe sign karne ko bolte hai. Aur jab dusri baar missed call jaaye tab isko woh suspension order ki news mil jaani chahiye. ​

Meera PM ke secretary ko call karke sab kuch karne ko kehti hai. ​

Minister ko dekh kar Rashmi aur Neha bhi darr jaate hai kyoki unko bhi khabar mil chuki thi Aryan ke subah ke kaand ko leke. Isiliye woh Vikram ko call karke sab batate hai aur college mein bulate hai. ​

Minister: Toh tu hai woh jisne mere bete ko maara aur mere baare mein bhi galat bola. ​

Aryan: Haa main hi hu woh. Mujhe laga tu apne bete ki galti ko sudharega usse saza dega. But woh toh tere hi nakshe kadam pe chal raha hai. ​

Minister: Ladke tune bahot badi galti ki hai mere bete ko maar ke. Aaj tu yaha se zinda nhi jaayega. Ayee jao re usko maar ke uss ladki ko utha lao. ​

Aryan: Minister main tujhe chorr deta tere gundon ko maarne ke baad. Par tune inn ladkiyon pe apni nazar deke achha nhi kiyaa. ​

Phir sabhi gunde Aryan ko marne aate hai. Aryan toh pahle se hi gusse mein thaa. Isiliye usne full power ke saath sabse saamne wale gunde ko laat maarta hai jisse woh durr jaake girta hai. Yeh dekh baaki gunde wahi rukh jaate hai. ​

Woh gunda wahi padha rehta hai. Ek jan jaake usse dekhta hai toh woh chillake bolta hai yeh ab zinda nhi hai. ​

Aryan: Tumlogo ke paas aakhri mauka hai. Jo jo zinda rehna chahte ho chale jao. Iss mantri ki baat sunke tum apni jaan gawa baithoge. Tumhare marne ke baad tumhare parivaar walo ko naa yeh mantri dekhega aur naahi uska yeh ganda khoon Vicky.​

Kuch gunde jinhe apne parivaar ki chinta thi woh wahi se durr hojaate hai. Par jo log reh gaye the unhe naa toh apne parivaar ki chinta thi aur naahi apni. ​

Jo log abhi bhi khade thee ab unke paas Aryan jaata hai aur unsab ko baari baari maarta hai. Kisi ke pet mein kisi ke seene mein toh kisi ke sirr mein. Yeh sab dekh waha khade sabhi log darr se Aryan ko dekhne lagte hai. Rashmi aur Neha ko aise dekh rahi thi jaise woh kisi ajoobe ko dekh rahi thi. Yeh sach tha ab Aryan unke liye kisi ajoobe se kam nhi tha. ​

Rashmi aur Neha jaldi se Meera aur Ritika ke paas jaake unhe Aryan ko rokhne ko kehte hai. ​

Neha: Meera Ritika usse roko warna woh undono ko bhi maar dega. ​

Rashmi: Haa beta roko use. ​

Meera: Mrs. Rashmi Malhotra and Ms Neha Malhotra apne kaam se kaam rakhiye humare beech naa aaye aur humse rishta jorne ki koshish bhi naa kare. ​

Ritika: Yaha humara rishta usi se hai jisse humare pati ka rishta hai. Aur apna yeh drama kahi aur jaake kare. Yeh bol Meera aur Ritika waha se jaake kahi aur khadi hojati hai. Rashmi aur Neha ka sir wahi jhukk jaata hai. ​

Aryan Minister aur Raghav ke paas jaake khada hota hai. ​

Aryan: Tujhe lagta hai subah ki maar se kuch samaj nhi aaya thaa isiliye tune wapas mere se panga liya aur woh bhi galat time pe jab mera gussa apni seema todd chuka thaa kuch ghatiya logo ki wajah se. ​

Yeh baat Aryan thoda zorr se bolta hai jisse Rashmi aur Neha sunn leti hai. Jo ke unke liye hi tha.​

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[Naik]

Update 51​

Neha jab washroom mein aati hai aur apni maa ko rote hue dekhti hai toh woh tension mein aajati hai. ​

Neha: Kya hua maa aap ro kyo rahe ho. Kisine kuch bola kya. Please chup ho jaiye bataiye mujhe kya hua. ​

Rashmi: Uske gale lag ke rote hue. Aryan isi college mein hai. Meri hi class mein main mili usse. ​

Neha: Khushi se. Sach mein maa. Kaha hai woh kaisa hai woh. Usne baat ki aapse. ​

Rashmi: Maine usse uski family ke baare mein pucha. Toh usne bataya woh anath hai uski family mar chuki hai. Meera aur Ritika ki family hi uski family hai. ​

Neha jab yeh sunti hai toh uske aansu nikalne lagte hai. Usne Aryan ke saath jo jo kiya tha woh sab usse wapas yaad aane laga. ​

Neha: Main milungi usse. Main baat karungi. Mera bhai mujhse jyaada naraz nhi reh sakta abhi kaha hai woh. ​

Rashmi: Abhi toh class mein hogaa. Tum recess mein milna. Main ghar call karke bolti hu. ​

Phir woh dono waha se chale jaate hai. ​

Idher class mein Aryan ko bahot gussa aarah thaa. But woh kuch kar nhi sakta thaa. Usne khud ko bahot control kiya hua thaa. Phir ek ek karke saare teachers aate hai aur intro leke chale jaate hai. ​

Recess mein yeh log Canteen mein jaate hai. Waha jaake ek table mein baith te hai. Tabhi waha Neha aake Aryan ke gale lag jaati hai. ​

Aryan ko yeh sehan nhi hotaa woh Neha ko apne se durr karta hai ek jhatke mein aur ek thappad laga deta hai. ​

Aryan: Tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhse gale lagne ki. ​

Neha ko iski umeed nhi thi ke uska bhai usko maar bhi sakta hai. But phir bhi woh maar ko sehan kar leti hai. ​

Neha: Bhai please mujhe maaf karde. Humse bahot badi galti hogyi hai. Please mujhe maaf karde. ​

Aryan: Apni jubaan ko lagam do. Main koi tumhara bhai nhi hu. Mujhe nafrat se iss sabd se iss rishte se. Aur mujhe koi shock nhi hai kisi ka bhai banne ka. Kyoki main ek hawas ka pujari hu kahi maine tere izaat pe haath daal diya toh. ​

Neha chillake aur rote bolti hai. Bhaiiiiii. Please mujhe maaf karde. Mujhse bahot badi galti hogyi hai. Maine tujhe kitna rulaya kitni takleef di. Maine tujhpe bharosa naa kar uss ghatiya ladki pe kiya. Meera Ritika tum bolo naa isse mujhe maaf karde. ​

Meera: Naa main aapko janti hu aur naa janna chahti hu. Mere liye mere pati hi sab hai. Woh jinse rishta rakhte hai mere liye wohi rishtedaar. Aur woh jinse nafrat karte hai unse main bhi nafrat karti hu. ​

Ritika: Aur aapke liye achha yehi hoga humse durr rahe. Kyoki mere pati jinse nafrat karte hai hum unki shaksiyat se bhi nafrat karte hai. ​

Neha: Aise mat bolo Meera Ritika. Itne saal main tadpi hu isse milne ke liye. Main maanti hu mujhse bahot badi galti hogyi. Par please mujhe maaf kardo. ​

Tabhi waha Sheetal aajati hai. ​

Sheetal: Please Aryan meri galti ki saza tum inhe mat do. Please inhe maaf kardo. ​

Jab Meera Ritika Sheetal ko dekhti hai toh uska para high hojaata hai. Toh woh dono sidha Sheetal ko thappad laga dete hai. ​

Meera: Teri himmat kaise hui meri pati ke mamle mein bolne ki. Man toh kar raha hai tujhe jaan se mardu. ​

Ritika: Par mere pati ne mujhe rokaa hua hai. Isse pahle ke main kuch galat kardu nikal jaa humari nazro se durr. ​

Aryan: Choro Meera Ritika. Inn jaise logo se baat nhi karni chahiye. Yeh shareef log hai. Aur mujh jaisa hawas ka pujari agar inke saamne raha toh inki izaat pe khatra hai aur kya pata thodi der baat tumdono ke upar bhi koi ilzaam laga de. ​

Neha jaise hi yeh sunti hai woh Aryan ko marne ke liye apna haath uthati hai. Tabhi Meera aur Ritika uska haath pakad leti hai aur ek ek thappad laga deti hai. ​

Meera: Khabardaar agar mere pati pe haath uthane ki sochi toh. ​

Ritika: Agar agli baar yeh khayal bhi man mein laaya toh yeh haath tumhare jism mein nhi dikhega. Yeh bol woh Neha ka haath jhatak deti hai. ​

Phir Aryan Meera Ritika aur Rishi waha se nikal ke dusri jagah baith jaate hai. ​

Neha abhi bhi waha khade hoke ro rahi thi. Woh bhi gusse mein Sheetal ko thappad maar deti hai. ​

Neha: Dekha sirf teri wajah se woh aaj mujhse kaise baat kar ke gaya. Jiss bhai ne kabhi mujhe nazre utha kar nhi dekhi usne aaj mujhe thappad bhi maara. Aaj woh mujhse sirf nafrat karta hai. Sirf teri wajah se. Nikal jaa meri nazro se durr isse pahle main tujhe jaan se maar du.​

Sheetal bhi waha se rote hue chali jaati hai. Usse ab waha ruka nhi jaata isiliye woh apne ghar chali gayi. ​

Neha bhi rote hue Rashmi ki taraf chali jaati hai. ​

Aryan ko itna gussa aaraha thaa ke agar koi abhi usse panga leta toh woh usko jaan se maar deta. ​

Tabhi College mein Minister apne bete ko maarne wale ko maarne aata hai. Aur saath mein gunde bhi laata hai. Woh aake Aryan ko khojta hai. ​

Woh ladki jisne Aryan se baat ki thi woh yeh dekh leti hai isiliye woh canteen mein jaati hai. ​

Ladki: Meera ji Ritika ji woh Vicky ke papa aaye hai Aryan ji ko maarne ke liye. Aur saath mein gunde bhi laaye hai. ​

Meera: Thik hai Thank You inform karne ke liye.​

Phir woh ladki waha se chali jaati hai. Aur Meera Aryan se bolti hai. Chalo tumhare gussa shant karne ka samaan aagaya.​

Rishi: Matlab. ​

Ritika: Chalo khud samaj jaoge. ​

Phir woh charo bhi waha aate hi jaha wohlog the. ​

Vicky bhi wahi khada tha. Woh Aryan ko dekh kar. ​

Vicky: Dad woh dekhiye yehi hai woh jisne mujhe maara thaa. Aur woh ladkiyan yeh mujhe chahiye. ​

Minister: Tu chinta mat kar beta. Aaj yeh ladka abhi marega. Aur yeh ladkiyan sirf teri hogi. ​

Aryan Meera ko apna mobile deta hai aur PM ke secretary ko call lagake iss Minister ka suspension order pe sign karne ko bolte hai. Aur jab dusri baar missed call jaaye tab isko woh suspension order ki news mil jaani chahiye. ​

Meera PM ke secretary ko call karke sab kuch karne ko kehti hai. ​

Minister ko dekh kar Rashmi aur Neha bhi darr jaate hai kyoki unko bhi khabar mil chuki thi Aryan ke subah ke kaand ko leke. Isiliye woh Vikram ko call karke sab batate hai aur college mein bulate hai. ​

Minister: Toh tu hai woh jisne mere bete ko maara aur mere baare mein bhi galat bola. ​

Aryan: Haa main hi hu woh. Mujhe laga tu apne bete ki galti ko sudharega usse saza dega. But woh toh tere hi nakshe kadam pe chal raha hai. ​

Minister: Ladke tune bahot badi galti ki hai mere bete ko maar ke. Aaj tu yaha se zinda nhi jaayega. Ayee jao re usko maar ke uss ladki ko utha lao. ​

Aryan: Minister main tujhe chorr deta tere gundon ko maarne ke baad. Par tune inn ladkiyon pe apni nazar deke achha nhi kiyaa. ​

Phir sabhi gunde Aryan ko marne aate hai. Aryan toh pahle se hi gusse mein thaa. Isiliye usne full power ke saath sabse saamne wale gunde ko laat maarta hai jisse woh durr jaake girta hai. Yeh dekh baaki gunde wahi rukh jaate hai. ​

Woh gunda wahi padha rehta hai. Ek jan jaake usse dekhta hai toh woh chillake bolta hai yeh ab zinda nhi hai. ​

Aryan: Tumlogo ke paas aakhri mauka hai. Jo jo zinda rehna chahte ho chale jao. Iss mantri ki baat sunke tum apni jaan gawa baithoge. Tumhare marne ke baad tumhare parivaar walo ko naa yeh mantri dekhega aur naahi uska yeh ganda khoon Vicky.​

Kuch gunde jinhe apne parivaar ki chinta thi woh wahi se durr hojaate hai. Par jo log reh gaye the unhe naa toh apne parivaar ki chinta thi aur naahi apni. ​

Jo log abhi bhi khade thee ab unke paas Aryan jaata hai aur unsab ko baari baari maarta hai. Kisi ke pet mein kisi ke seene mein toh kisi ke sirr mein. Yeh sab dekh waha khade sabhi log darr se Aryan ko dekhne lagte hai. Rashmi aur Neha ko aise dekh rahi thi jaise woh kisi ajoobe ko dekh rahi thi. Yeh sach tha ab Aryan unke liye kisi ajoobe se kam nhi tha. ​

Rashmi aur Neha jaldi se Meera aur Ritika ke paas jaake unhe Aryan ko rokhne ko kehte hai. ​

Neha: Meera Ritika usse roko warna woh undono ko bhi maar dega. ​

Rashmi: Haa beta roko use. ​

Meera: Mrs. Rashmi Malhotra and Ms Neha Malhotra apne kaam se kaam rakhiye humare beech naa aaye aur humse rishta jorne ki koshish bhi naa kare. ​

Ritika: Yaha humara rishta usi se hai jisse humare pati ka rishta hai. Aur apna yeh drama kahi aur jaake kare. Yeh bol Meera aur Ritika waha se jaake kahi aur khadi hojati hai. Rashmi aur Neha ka sir wahi jhukk jaata hai. ​

Aryan Minister aur Raghav ke paas jaake khada hota hai. ​

Aryan: Tujhe lagta hai subah ki maar se kuch samaj nhi aaya thaa isiliye tune wapas mere se panga liya aur woh bhi galat time pe jab mera gussa apni seema todd chuka thaa kuch ghatiya logo ki wajah se. ​

Yeh baat Aryan thoda zorr se bolta hai jisse Rashmi aur Neha sunn leti hai. Jo ke unke liye hi tha.​

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Update 2
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Phir Kulpandit unko batate hai kyo kundli banate waqat unke chehre ke bhaav badal rahe the. Kulpandit ke baat sunne ke baad Jeet Malhotra ke chehre ke bhaav bhi badalne lagte hai. Yeh dekh Kulpandit bolte hai chahe kuch bhi hojaaye aap apne pote ke saath hi rahenge usse galat nhi samjhenge aur naahi aap baakiyon ko yeh baat batayenge kyoki yehi unki niyati hai unko yeh sehna hi padega. Aur isse unko ek sikh bhi milegi. Uske baad Kulpandit chale jaate hai aur Jeet Malhotra tension mein reh jaate hai.​

Kuch din baad Jeet Malhotra apne lawyer ke paas jaake kuch baat karte hai aur unko ek kaam dete hai.​

After 18 Years​

Ek Ladka mumbai ke ek hospital mein zindagi aur maut se ladh raha tha. 3 ghante se OT mein uska operation chal raha tha. Bahar ek aadmi aur aurat aansu bahaye jaa rahe thee. Aurat baar baar bol rahi thi humhari wajah se kisi nirdosh ki aaj yeh halat hai. Kaash woh waha nhi aaya hotaa toh aaj uski aisi halat nhi hoti.​

Aadmi uss Aurat ko sambhalne ki koshish kar raha tha but andar se woh bhi bahot dukhi thaa.​

Kuch der baad doctor OT se bahar aate hai. Aur kehte hai:-​

Doctor: Aap uss ladke ke kya lagte hai​

Aadmi(Thoda soch kar): Woh mera beta hai. Kya ab woh thik hai.​

Doctor: Dekhiye main aapko jhooti tasalli nhi dunga but ab uska bachna naa ke barabar hai. Goli uske dil ke bahot kareeb lagi thi. Humne goli toh nikal di hai but ab uski body mein blood generate nhi horaha hai aur uska jo blood group hai woh bahot hi rare hai. Ab uske bachne ke chances 5% se bhi kam hai I am Sorry.​

Yeh sab sunne ke baad aadmi toh jaise taise khud ko sambhal leta hai but woh Aurat toh behosh hogyi thi.​

Doctor usko check karte hai aur aaram karne ko kehte hai.​

Thodi der baad jab aurat hosh mein aati hai toh phir se rona start kardeti hai. Aadmi usko bolta hai​

Aadmi: Sanjana ab chup hojao. Humlog ab kuch nhi kar sakte.​

Sanjana: Kaise chup hojau Sanjay aaj humari wajah se ek nirdosh ki yeh halat hai. Naa woh humhe bachane aata aur naa uski yeh halat hoti. Yeh bol phir se rona start kardeti hai.​

Phir achanak uske dimaag mein ek idea trigg karta hai toh woh bolti hai​

Sanjana: Sanjay kyo na jiske liye yeh sab horaha hai woh chiz hum isko dede shayad yeh bach jaaye.​

Sanjay: Bachho jaisi baate mat karo Sanjana. Humlog isko jaante tak nhi yeh kaisa ladka hai achha hai ya bura hai agar koi problem hogyi toh sab barbaad hojayegaa.​

Sanjana: Jo ladka bina kisi jaan pehchan ke kisi ajnabi ki madad kare uske liye apne seene mein 4 goliya khaaye uss hisab se isse achha ladka shayad hi koi hoga.​

Sanjay: Thik hai main yeh baat manta hu. But abhi tak humlogo ne woh properly test nhi kiya hai agar kuch garbar hogyi toh.​

Sanjana: Doctor ne toh bolhi diya hai iske bachne ke chances 5% se bhi kam hai. Agar uske baad isko kuch hota hai toh itna dukh nhi hoga. But agar sab thik raha toh yeh bach jayega aur humhara test bhi hojayegaa. Aur shayad humlogo ko humara beta bhi mil jaaye.​

Sanjay: Thik hai main doctor se baat karke isko ghar shift karwane ki koshish karta hu. Tum ghar jaake saari taiyaari dhayan se karo.​

Sanjay Singh- Yeh ek bahot bade scientist hai. Inhone bahot saare research aur experiments kiye hai jinme bahot saare successfull rahe hai. Ab yeh aur inki wife milke human body and brain ke upar ek research and experiment kar rahe hai. Agar yeh success hota hai toh ek human ke body and brain ko kisi bhi normal human ke body and brain se jyaada powerfull bana dega matlab ek tarah se usko super human mein convert kar dega.​

Sanjana Singh- (Wife of Sanjay Singh) yeh bhi ek scientist hai aur apne pati ke saath hi saare kaam karti hai.​

Inke iss research ke baare mein India ke sabse bade terrorist organization ko pata chal jaata hai aur woh iss research ko hatiyane ki koshish karte hai jinme inke ek laute bete ki jaan chali jaati hai. But yeh uss research ko unke haath nhi lagne dete. Phir bhi inke upar aaye din humle hote rehte hai. Aise hi ek humle mein inko ek ladke ne toh bacha liya par ab woh khud zindagi aur maut se ladh raha hai.​

Sanjay Singh Doctor ke baat karke uss ladke ko apne ghar lejaate hai. Ab Sanjay Singh ek jaane maane scientist hai unhe Mumbai mein sab hi jaante hain isiliye unko jyaada mehnat nhi karni padhi.​

Sanjay aur Sanjana uss ladke ko le apne ghar ke underground mein bane laboratory mein chale aate hai. Jaha bade bade machines lage hue the. Matlab Sanjana ne pahle hi sab taiyaariyan kar rakhi thi.​

Sanjay uss ladke ko waha ek bed pe leta deta hai. Aur sab kuch phir se ek baar check kar us ladke haath mein machines se kuch lagata hai aur uske sir mein kuch lagata hai aur aakhir mein uske chest ke paas dhyaan se lagata hai kyoki waha par pahle se hi ghaav the.​

Phir Sanjay computer mein kuch kaam kar uss ladke ke body mein woh research aur Experiment se bane formula ko insert karta hai. Jaise jaise woh formula uske andar jaaraha hota hai waise waise uski body vibrate honi start karti hai. Pure formula insert hone ke kuch der baad uss ladke ki body vibrate honi band kardeti hai aur dheere dheere uski heartbeat bhi band hone lagti hai yeh dekh woh Sanjay aur Sanjana dono ke aankho mein hi aansu aajate hai. Unko lagta hai ki ab yeh ladka nhi bachegaa yaani unki saari koshish aur mehnat barbaad hogyi.​

baat to sahi hai ab koi anjaan ladka thodi naa kisi ke liye 4 goli khaa le...aur agar wo aisa karta hai to do hi baatein hongi wo toota hua hoga bilkul aur soch raha hoga hum rahe yaa naa rahe sala ghanta kisi ko fark padega...inko baccha lete hai....aur dusri baat wo pagal hoga....
Dawa de dena...risky hai....lekin aur koi rasta nahi hai sayad inke pass....waise bhi agar formula kaam kar gaya to bachha bach hi jaayega.....aur nahi to exeriment failed...
dekhte hai kya hota hai

 

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Update 3​

Abhi kuch time hi bita tha ke heartbeat reading machine mein kuch awaaz hone lagti hai aur jab woh dekhte hai toh unki khushi ka koi thikana hi nhi thaa​

Kyoki unke formula ne kaam kardiya tha uss ladke ki heartbeat phir se chalne lagi thi yaani woh ladka bach gaya thaa. Sanjay phir computer mein dekhta hai toh pata hai unke formula ki wajah se uss ladke ke body mein wapas blood circulation start hogya thaa aur jitne bhi damage ya kamzor cells the woh repair horahe thee. Filhal repairing ki speed kam thi par ek khushi thi ke woh ladka bach gaya aur unka formula successfull raha.​

Formula insert kiye hue pure 2 din hogye thee but abhi bhi usko hosh nhi aaya tha yeh dekh kar Sanjana tension mein​

Sanjana: Sanjay isko hosh kyo nhi aaraha hai formula insert kiye hue toh 2 din hogye hai​

Sanjay: Shayad iski body ne formula ko thik se accept nhi kiya hai isiliye iski body aur brain abhi bhi kamzor hai aur isiliye yeh abhi tak behosh hai.​

Sanjana: Toh iski body kab tak formula ko puri tarah accept karegi.​

Sanjay: Yeh kehna mushkil hai 2 hafte bhi lag sakte hai 2 mahine bhi yaa uss jyaada bhi.​

Sanjana yeh sunn thodi tensed toh thi but usne kuch bola nhi.​

Aise hi 1.5 mahine guzar jaate hai but woh ladka abhi bhi behosh hi thaa but uski body se saare ghav bharr gaye thee aur uski body mein pahle ke mukable kaafi changes aaye thee. Ab uske 6 packs abs thee,uske muscles kuch jyaada hi ban gaye thee,uske face mein bhi thode changes hue the,Ab woh aur jyaada attractive hogya thaa. Matlab sidha bola jaaye toh ek complete package of hotness.​

Inn 1.5 mahino mein Sanjana roj usko dekhne aati uske body ko water sponge karti uska khayal rakhti. Aise hi ek din Sanjana uska daily work karne aayi toh dekhti hai uss ladke ko hosh aaraha hai toh usne fauran Sanjay ko bulaya. Sanjay aake usko dekhta hai toh woh hosh mein aaraha tha aur aate hi apne sir ko pakad ke chikne laga. Sanjay usko check karta hai aur usko ek injection de deta hai jisse woh wapas sojaata hai. Phir usko 2 ghante baad hosh aata hai toh ab woh normal thaa.​

Sanjay aur Sanjana usko dekh kar puchte hai ab tumhe kaise feel horaha hai.​

Ladka: Filhal achha feel horaha hai. But aaplog kaun hai aur main yaha pe kya kar raha hu.​

Sanjay: Tum filhal mere ghar mein ho aur yeh hai meri wife Sanjana aur main hu Sanjay. Humlog dono scientist hai. Tumhe shayad yaad hoga aajse 1.5 mahine pahle tumne 2 logo ki jaan bachayi thi aur tumhe goliya lagi thi.​

Ladka: Haa mujhe yaad hai.​

Sanjay: Haa toh hum dono wohi hai. Tumhe goli lagi thi toh hum tumhe hospital le gaye waha pe tumhara treatment hua aur tum pure 1.5 mahine baad aaj hosh mein aaye ho.​

Ladka: Ooo. Thank you meri jaan bachane ke liye.​

Sanjana: Thank You toh humhe tumhe bolna chahiye jaan toh tumne humhari bachayi thi. Waise tumne abhi tak apna naam nhi bataya.​

Ladka: Ji mera naam Aryan Malhotra hai.​

Sanjana: Bahot achha naam hai. Abhi tum aaram karo maim tumhare liye kuch khane ko bana ke laati hu aur uss side restroom hai jaake fresh hojaao aur yaha tumhare liye kuch kapre hai pehen ek bahar aajao.​

Aryan: Ji thik hai.​

Thodi der Aryan fresh hoke jab mirror ke saamne aata hai toh shock hojaata hai apne aap ko dekh kar kyoki uska pura naksha palat hogya tha. Uski body puri change hogyi thi. Muscles,6 packs abs, body ka har ek cut pura clear nazar aaraha thaa. Face bhi thoda change hogya thaa,aankhe thodi si blueish hogyi thi. Yeh sab dekh woh pura shock thaa.​

Jab kaafi der tak woh bahar nhi aaya toh Sanjana usko bulane aati hai toh dekhti hai woh mirror mein khud ko dekh raha hota hai.​

Sanjana: Aise kya dekh rahe ho Aryan yeh tum hi ho.​

Aryan: Ji par yeh sab kaise.​

Sanjana: Tension mat lo sab kuch pata chal jayega pahle chalo khaana khaa lo phir shanti se sab pata lag jaayega.​

Aryan ne bhi jyaada sawaal jawaab nhi kiye aur kapre pehen uske pichhe pichhe chal deta hai.​

Thodi der khana khatam kar sab wapas usi lab mein aajate hai.​

Aryan aane ke saath saath unse ek hi sawal karta hai aakhir yeh sab kya hai.​

haa to Hero hosh mein aa gaya hai apne ander changes dekh ke wo shocked hai....hona bhi chahiye....
formula ki baat abhi nahi batayi hai usko dekhte hai jab pata chalti hai tab kya hota hai

 

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Update 4​

Sanjay aur Sanjana pahle usko shanti se baithne ko bolte hai.Aryan shanti se ek jagah baith jaata hai. Phir Sanjay aur Sanjana usko sab kuch bata hai ke kaise usne unki jaan bachayi,kaise woh hospital gaya waha doctor ne kya bola,phir formula,unke bete ke baare mein sab kuch.​

Aryan yeh sab kuch sunn bilkul shock mein thaa usko samaj nhi aaraha tha ke woh kya react kare.​

Kuch der shanti bani rehti hai koi kuch nhi bolta. Phir woh dono bolte hai dekho humhare paas tumhari jaan bachane ke liye aur koi rasta nhi thaa isiliye humlogo ko yeh karna padha. Ab agar tum chaho toh tum apni family ke paas wapas jaa sakte ho hum tumhe nhi rokenge par humhe ek promise karo humlogo ne jo tumpar vishvaas karke yeh formula use kiya hai tum uska kabhi galat istemaal nhi karoge.​

Family ka naam sunn kar Aryan ki aankho mein gussa aur nafrat utar aati hai jisko Sanjay aur Sanjana ne saaf saaf dekh liya thaa.​

Sanjana: Kya family ka naam sunkar tumhari aankho mein itni nafrat aur gussa kyo hai. . Humhe bhi tumhare andar apna khoya hua beta nazar aata hai. Agar chaho toh humse share kar sakte ho.​

Aryan ki aankho mein aansu the toh Sanjana ne aage badh kar unko poch Aryan ko apns gale se laga leti hai. Aryan ko bhi isme maa ki mamta ke sparsh ka aihsaas hota hai toh woh Sanjana ko aur kaske pakad leta hai aur rone lagta hai.​

Thodi der baad woh chup hota hai aur bachpan se lekar unse milne tak ka sabse unko bata deta hai.​

Aryan ki kahani sunn Sanjay aur Sanjana ko bahot dukh hota hai. Woh sochte kaise koi apne bete ke saath aisa kar sakta hai.​

Phir Sanjay usko bolta hai dekho jo hua woh toh hum badal nhi sakte par agar tum chaho toh yaha humhare bete bankar reh sakte ho isse tumhe bhi saath mil jayegaa aur humhe lage ga humhe humara khoya hua beta mil gaya.​

Par main kaise aaplogo ke saath reh sakta hu. Aaplogo ko pareshani hogi.​

Sanjana: Humhe koi pareshani nhi hogi. Maine tumhe pahle dinse hi apna beta mana hai. Aur ab tum yehi rahoge humhara bete ban kar. Main kuch nhi jaanti.​

Aryan unko bahot manata hai par woh nhi maante. Phir aakhir mein Aryan waha unka beta ban ke rehne ke liye maan jaata hai.​

Aise hi aur 1 hafta nikal jaate hai. Ek din Sanjay Aryan ke room mein aata hai toh dekhta hai woh kisi ki photo dekh ke aansu baharaha hota hai. Sanjay usks paas jaake woh photo dekhta hai toh shock hojaata hai. Woh Aryan se puchte hai yeh photo kiski hai toh Aryan bolta hai mere dadaji Mr. Jeet Malhotra ki.​

Sanjay usko jhatt se gale laga leta aur bolta hai tum inke pote ho.​

Aryan: Ji. But kya aap unko jaante hai.​

Sanjay: Bahot achhi tarah se. Mere pitaji aur tumhare dadaji bahot achhe dost thee. Ekbaar mere pitaji ko meri padhai ke liye paiso ki kami hogyi woh mujhe aur padha nhi paate. Par uss waqat tumhare dadaji ne mere pitaji ki paiso se madad ki jiske chalte aaj mein scientist bana. Maine unko dhundne ki bahot koshish ki but woh mile hi nhi​

Phir humlog bhi yaha Mumbai shift hogye aur aaj dekho itne saalo baad unka pota mere saamne khada hai aaj main bahot khush hu.​

Yeh sab jo tum dekh rahe ho naa beta yeh sab tumhare dadaji ke wajah se hi hai​

Agar woh naa hote toh aaj na main scientist ban pata aur naa yeh sab kuch hota.​

Connection hai...pahle se connection hai daya dono ka connection hai....
khiar ye chodo...
Jaguaar sahab aapko nahi lagta thodi flat si gayi ye update....kahani ko suspence mein rakhna tha ye theek hai par....gusse ko aur acche se darsha sakte the aap....aur wo ekdum se dono ne isko apna beta maan liya aur isne bhi haa kar di...
Bura mat maaniyega par thoda dramatic dikhate to mazza do gunna badh jaata...par abhi bhi accha hai bas thoda flat sa laga...
Binna example diye kaise apan dusre update pe jaaye ab...
Ab Aryan ko Pariwar se nafrat hai...to jab sanjay usko apna beta banne ko bolta hai tab Aryan ke reactions thode ajeeb se dikhane the confused se...
wo sala sali baap hai usne nikal diya ghar se ab ye janab mille hai jinki maine jaan bachayi hai haa unki life bhi pareshaniyon se ghiri hui hai beta khoya hai inhone...kya inki baat maan sakta hu....kahi agar yaha bhi kuch gadbad ho aur fir se wwaise hi ghar se nikal diya jaaye mujhe to.....kya main aisa karu yaa nahi....
something like this....aur aisa dekh Sanjna usko gthoda sochne ke liye bolegi par ghar mein rah kar hi...aisa hota to thoda ras aur mil jaata....
khair aapki story hai...aapne kya socha hoga character ke baare mein aane wale palon ke baare mein ye main nahi janta to jyada nahi kahna chahiye padhne pe pata chalega hai naa..
jawab ka intezar

 

[Jaguaar]

Very nice update

Thank you