Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

[Rudrathakur]

Odi baba kaal ke to L lg gyepr wo aisa bnda h jo dusre ke seconds me L lga de...pr filhal to uski band baj chuki h ...pr usne ye bhi khoj liya ki ye sab kiya kisne hoga surya ya uske bhaiyo ne ab surya to black hole me bhej diya tha usne to bche uske bhai to uska focus filhal wahi pr hoga..wahi paras patthar ab surya and team ke paas h...dekhte h wo iska kya krte h kya wo isko kaal se bcha payenge kyuki agr kaal ne time travel kiya aur time me pichhe jakr patthar hasil kr liya maano patthar nikalne ke time pr hi pahuch kr patthar hasil kr le to ...surya and team ke hath kya lgega ghanta...khair dekhte h ab aage kya hoga aur surya's dad ne wo formula bna liya ya nhi aur uski testing bhi ho paayi h ya hogi ye bhi waqt pr pta chal jaayega bcz kaal is on the way...
Waiting for next update brother...waise surya ko time travel krke kaal ki next move check maarne ka risk lena chahiye tbhi to wo emergency me time travel kr payega aarm se

 

[Nevil singh]

UPDATE - 15















Bhai ne saari situation Harry ko bata di thi. Bahi Harry ne turant hi mujhe bhi saari situation samjha di thi. Or ab main bhi soch raha tha ki kya kiya jaye. Mujhe kisi bhi haalat me paras pathar kaal ke hath nahi lagne dena tha. Or uske liye jo karna padega vo main karunga. Agar is waqt bhai baha mara mari karte hai to ho sakta hai kaal or bhi jyada chokanna ho jaye or fir hamara baha tak pahuchna bhi impossible ho jaye. Isliye mujhe ek idea aaya jo maine Harry ko bataya or Harry ne turant hi bhai ko bata diya.



Bhai ko bhi vo idea theek laga. Or unhone ek high frequency wale automatic camera ko bahi mitti me kuch is tarah se set kiya ki kisi ki bhi najar us per agar pad bhi jaaye to bhi use pata na chale ki baha per kya hai. Or us camere se Harry baha ki live recording karta rahega. Or jaise hi baha per paras pathar nikalega. Ham baha pahuch kar use kaal se pehle uda lenge. Or kaal tak uski jaankari na pahucha laaye baha ke log iska bhi intjaam Harry ne kar diya tha. Jise usi samay activate karte. Yaani ki signal jammer.



Bas hamara kaam ho gya tha. Uske baad bhai bapis darwaje ki taraf aagye lekin ab problem ye thi ki baha per log khade hue the. Or unse bach kar baha se bahar jana impossible tha. Bahi bahar jo log baaki logo ko dhundne gye the unki laashe bhi abhi tak unhe nahi mili thi. Kyuki bhai ne unhe bahi moujud ek ghani jhadiyon me chhipa diya tha. Lekin kab tak vo laashe chhipi rahengi ye to koi nahi jaanta tha. Halaki bahar andhera lag gya tha isliye bhi unhe vo laashe nahi mil rahi thi. Sayad kal din me vo unhe mil hi jayengi.



Ab bhai ko kuch bhi karke in logo ko andar bhejna tha taki vo bahar nikal sake.


Lekin bhai kuch karte usse pehle hi andar se kuch logo ke chillane ki aawaj aane lagi. Bhai bhi hairan ho gye ki kahi vo pathar mil to nahi gya. Lekin Harry ne unhe bata diya ki mitti mese kuch zehriile scorpiyo bahar nikal aaye hai or unhi ne kuch logo ko kaat liya hai.




Jise sunke bhai nischint ho gye. Or guard vo shor sunkar andar ki taraf bhage or usi mouke ka fayeda utha kar bhai jaldi hi us gate se bahar nikal gye. Harry ne unhe direction batai or vo us disha ki ore chale gye.jo ki un baaki guards se opposite direction thi.


Thodi hi der ki doud ke baad bhai road per pahuch gye.




Or city ki taraf nikal pade. Jaha khaali sadak milti baha per doud laga dete. Or jaha kuch gadiya milti baha ruk jaate. Isi tarah karte karte vo pahuch gye apne hotel tak. Baha jaake badiya se fresh hue or fir apne laptop per baha ki footage dekhne lage. Jaha per abhi bhi kaam chal raha tha.



Use dekhne ke baad bhai room me so gye. Kyuki subah unhe police station me report bhi karna tha.







Bahi din bhar ki mehnat ke Baad dad ko akhir kaal se nikalne wali tarango ke baare me pata chal gya tha. Unhone pehchan liya tha ki ye konsi tarange hai.



Harry- sir konsi tarange nikal rahi hai kaal se.





Dad- ye bahut hi rare Gama tarange hai. Same aisi hi tarange kuch bahut hi rare chhipkali se bhi nikalti hai. Jinki prajati ab lipt ho chuki hai. Ye tarange jaldi hi pakad me nahi aati hai.





Harry- sir to fir inko trace kaise karenge ham.





Dad- uski fikr tum mat karo. Avi hai na.




Harry- lekin sir avi agar aisi koi device banayega bhi to uska test karne ke liye kuch to aisa hona chahiye jisse same bahi tarange nikalti ho. Ham kaal ke pass to nahi ja sakte na uska test karne ke liye.





Dad- tumhara kehna sahi hai Harry. Lekin main ek aisa formula bana sakta hu. Jisse isi prakar ki tarange nikalti ho. Bas mujhe thoda time chahiye hoga. Itne me avi use trace karne ke liye koi na koi device bana hi lega. Or agar nahi bhi bana paya. Tab bhi tum apni taraf se is energy ko save karke rakho. Or use samajhne ki kosis karo. Or uske ware me jyada se jyada jaankari ikatha karne ki kosis karo. Taaki hame kuch madad mil sake.





Harry- sir surya sir ke andar kaal jaisi hi shaktiya hai. To kya unke andar se bhi yahi tarange nikalti hongi. Kya aisa possible hai.





Dad- your right. Tum ek baar un tarango ko catch karo or mujhe dikhao.




Uske baad Harry ne turant hi surya ke body se nikalne wali tarango ko scan kiya or dad unhe dhyan se dekhne lage. Or jo result saamne aaya usse vo puri tarah hairan the.





Harry- kya hua sir.




Dad- yaar Harry surya se to kuch alag hi tarange nikal rahi hai. Ye vo nahi hai jo kaal se nikal rahi hai. Inka combination bilkul hi alag hai.





Harry- lekin ye kaise sambhav ho sakta hai.





Dad- maybe. Sayad surya ke andar mera formula jyada maatra me uplabdh hai na ki kaal ki shaktiya. Sayad is liye uski tarange bhi alag hai.




Harry- ho sakta hai.



Dad- khair chhodo tum avi se contact karo or use iski jaankari do. Or tum apne kaam me lag jao. Baaki me apna kaam dekhta hu.




Uske baad Harry ne avi ko uski jaankari di. Jise sunke avi ne thoda socha or use ek tarika mil gya. Or usne 2 din ka waqt manga. Bahi dad lag gye the. Kaal se nikalne wali tarango ka structure unhone ready kar kiya tha. Ab uska practical karne ka time tha. Vo apni lab me jaake usme lag gye.






Bahi mera dimaag me filhaal koi bhi faadu idea nahi aaraha tha. Keval ek hi idea chal raha tha ki me time travel karu or aage jaake dekhu ki kaal kaise or kya karne wala hai or uski usi kaam main band baja du. Jo mujhe thoda riski lag raha tha. Kyuki mujhe time travel ka experience na ke hi barabar tha. Or main ye option tab hi istemaal karna chahta tha jab mere pass koi or rasta na bacha ho.



Or ek or tarika mere dimaag me aaraha tha ki abhi jaake kaal per surprise aatack kar du. Or uska kaam hi tamaam kar du. Taaki baad ki koi tension hi na rahe. Lekin main aisa bhi nahi kar sakta tha. Kam se kam paras pathar ke milne tak to nahi. Or dusra ye bhi tha ki kahi fir se ye kaal ka koi clone na ho.



Or sabse imp baat jo mujhe pata lagani thi vo ye ki kaal time travel kab or kaise karta hai. Kyuki ab mujhe usko time travel nahi karne dena tha. Kyuki agar use jara si bhi bhanak lagi to time me aage ya peechhe jaake mere kiye karaye per paani fer sakta tha.




Yahi sochte sochte kab raat nikal gyi pata hi nahi chala.


Bahi next day se bhai bahi ke police station me ACP ke karib reh kar duty karne lage. Vo har samay ACP ke sath hi rehte or baaki jagaho per Harry us per najar rakhta.


Lekin kuch bhi harkat kaal ne nahi ki.


Bahi 3 din ke baad raat ko karib 2 baje. Harry ne mujhe neend se uthaya




Main- kya hua Harry.




Harry- sir lagta hai Paras pathar unko mil gya hai maine abhi baha ki footage me dekha hai. Baha per moujud kaal ke sabhi log bahut kush hai. Maine baha ka jammer on kar diya hai.



Ye sab sunte hi meri neend ek dum se gayab ho gyi.



Main- bhai ko inform karo or us jagah bhej do. Or unse kaho ki ek bhi aadmi jinda na bache. Sivaay baha per kaam karne walo ke. Ya fir aisa karo. Ki kisi tarah baha moujud sabhi logo ko behsoh kar do. Taaki bhai apna kaam aasani se kar sake.





Harry- sir baha per behosh karna filhaal possible nahi hai. Veer sir hi baha jaake kuch kar sakte hai.



Main- unhe jaldi baha jaane ko kaho.or mujhe live dikhao.




Uske baad Harry ne bhai ko turant hi inform kiya or bhai bhi ye sunke kush ho gye. Uske baad vo turant hi baha ke liye nikal gye.


Or karib 20 min. Me jungle ki seema tak pahuch gye.ek car se. Uske baad unhone jungle ke andar doud laga di. Or jaldi hi vo un jhadiyo tak bhi pahuch gye. Or unki kismat achhi thi ki kuch log phone ya radio leke bahar hi khade the. Sayad signal na milne ki bajah se. Or darwaja bhi khula hua tha. Uske baad bhai ne der na karte hue bahar moujud sabhi ko maar diya or ek ki lash ko darwaje ke beecho beech chhod diya or andar chale gye. Uske baad andar jo bhi unke raste me aata use vo maar dete.



Fir vo neeche gye jaha 2-3 log us pathar ka parikshan kar rahe the.


Vo laal rang ka behad hi chamkeela pathar tha. Usse ek bahut hi tez roshni nikal rahi thi jo puri khadan ko hi roshan kar rahi thi. Ye najar bahut hi adbhut tha. Sabhi Gour se use hi dekh rahe the.


Tabhi bhai ne jaldi se us pathar ko apne hatho me le liya. Or achanak se pathar ki roshni band ho gyi. Kyuki bhai ne use chhipa liya tha. Sabhi hairan ho gye ki pathar kaha gya.or yaha baha dekhne lage. Lekin tab tak bhai us pathar ko leke bapis uper aachuke the. Or us darwaje se bahar nikal chuke the. Or bina ek bhi sec gabaye vo apni car tak gye or baha se seedhe pahuche apne ghar pahuche jo ki sarkaar ne unhe alott kiya tha. Baha se jaldi hi vo apna beg leke nikal gye seedhe airport or baha per Harry ne already plane bhej diya tha. Jisme baith kar vo seedhe pahuche ghar.




Bahi neeche jo log jinda bach gaye the. Unhe yaha jo bhi hua vo turant hi kaal ko batana tha isliye vo signal dhundte hue road tak aate jaha unhe thoda signal mil gya. Or unhone kaal ko saari jaankari de di. Jise sunke uska matha hi ghum gya ki ye kaise hua. Kisne use itni badi chot pahucha di. Or use is ware me kuch pata kyu nahi chala.



Use shak ho raha tha surya ke bhaiyo ke uper. Lekin use viswas nahi ho raha tha ki use un logo ne shuda kaise. Or unhe ye kaise pata chala ki yaha per khudai chal rahi hai. Isliye vo turant hi gufa ke pass pahuch gya. Or baha ke haalaat dekh kar use confirm ho gya ki ye kaam unhi logo ka hai. Kyuki jis tatah un sabko kaata gya tha baisa keval surya ya uske bhai hi kaatte hai.



Apni itni badi haar se use bahut gussa aaraha tha. Or usne apna gussa nikala baha moujud har ek insaan ki life energy ko sokh kar. Usne baha per kaam kar rahe har ek insaan ko pura nichod liya. Or us jagah per ek bomb laga diya jis dhamake me vo puri khadan deh gyi or saari lashe usi me dafn ho gyi.




(Note - aap sabhi ko thodi confusion jarur hogi ki itna sab ho gya lekin kaal ko iski bhanak tak kyu nahi lagi. Jabki uske log jab gayab hue tab use batane ki try to jarur ki hogi sabhi ne. To iska jawab janne ke liye next update ka wait kare. Thanks.)







To be continue………………..

Laajwaab update mitr

 

[Rahul0087@]

Odi baba kaal ke to L lg gyepr wo aisa bnda h jo dusre ke seconds me L lga de...pr filhal to uski band baj chuki h ...pr usne ye bhi khoj liya ki ye sab kiya kisne hoga surya ya uske bhaiyo ne ab surya to black hole me bhej diya tha usne to bche uske bhai to uska focus filhal wahi pr hoga..wahi paras patthar ab surya and team ke paas h...dekhte h wo iska kya krte h kya wo isko kaal se bcha payenge kyuki agr kaal ne time travel kiya aur time me pichhe jakr patthar hasil kr liya maano patthar nikalne ke time pr hi pahuch kr patthar hasil kr le to ...surya and team ke hath kya lgega ghanta...khair dekhte h ab aage kya hoga aur surya's dad ne wo formula bna liya ya nhi aur uski testing bhi ho paayi h ya hogi ye bhi waqt pr pta chal jaayega bcz kaal is on the way...
Waiting for next update brother...waise surya ko time travel krke kaal ki next move check maarne ka risk lena chahiye tbhi to wo emergency me time travel kr payega aarm se

Aapka kehna sahi hai bhai. Kaal ke pass power hai vo kai mouke bana kar vo pathar Bapis se hasil kar sakta hai. Or surya is mamle me sayad hi kuch kar paye. Baaki ye baat surya bhi achhe se jaanta hai ki aisa bhi ho sakta hai. Isliye vo kuch solid karne wala hai. Baaki dekhiye is update me ki vo kya karta hai..



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[Rahul0087@]

Laajwaab update mitr

Thanks bhai.

Aaj ka update post kar raha hu ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko.. isme dekhiye ab kaal kya karega us pathar ko vapis lene ke liye...





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[Rahul0087@]

Nice update

Jabardast update janab

Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai

Bahot behtareen shaandaar lajawab update bhai

Bahot behtareen shaandaar lajawab update bhai

Zaberdast bahot shaandaar mazedaar lajawab update bhai

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

Bahot behtareen shaandaar lajawab update bhai

Bahot behtareen shaandaar lajawab update bhai

Woooow sooooo cooool update dear
But dil mange more ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Thanks bhai log apna sath u hi banaye rakhe...



Aaj ka update post kar raha hun. Ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko... Aaj dekhiye kaal kya karega kaise is haar ka badla lega. Or surya kaise kaal ko rokega. Janne ke liye sath bane rahe...






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[Rahul0087@]

Mast Update

Awesome update bro

Akhir paras patthar veer ke hath lag hi gya. Ab dekhte hai kaal kya karta hai.
Nice update bhai. Waiting for next

Awesome update bro

Bhai ko wait karna chahiye, aur paras patthar le kar wapas aana chahiye.
Nice update..

Nice updates bro

Very nice update

Thanks bhai log... Apna pyar u hi barsate rahe.. story per.


Aaj ka update post kar raha hun. Ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko.. aaj dekhiye kaal kaise istni badi haar ko digest karta hai. Kar pata hai bhi ya nahi.





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[Rahul0087@]

UPDATE - 16
















Kaal baha per hi khada tha or apne gusse ko kabu karne ki kosis kar raha tha. Or soch raha tha ki jisne bhi ye kiya hai. Vo yaha tak pahucha kaise. Tabhi uske kaano me ek aawaj padti hai.





Kaal- achha hua tum yaha aagye veer. Aaj tumhe bhi tumhare bhai surya ke pass pahucha dunga. Lekin usse pehle bas itna bata do ki vo pathar kaha hai. Or agar nahi batana chahte to mat batao. Kyuki us pathar ke liye main tumhare pure khandan ko itna tadpaunga ki vo khud mujhe vo de denge. Or uske baad main sabhi ko maar dunga. Ab faisla tumhe karna hai.




Uski ye baat sunkar mujhe gussa aana chahiye lekin main ek dum shant tha. Or us per has raha tha.





Main- kya baat hai. Aaj tujhe is haalat me dekhkar kitna maja aaraha hai main bata nahi sakta. Or rahi baat mujhe surya ke pass pahuchane ki to tere liye ek surprise hai.



Ye kehke maine apna mask hata diya. Or uske saamne aaya mera real face jise dekhte hi vo char kadam peechhe hat gya.




Kaal- ye impossible hai. Tu jinda kaise ho sakta hai. Jarur ye bhi tune mask pehna hai surya ka.





Main- tere is sawaal ka mere pass ek hi jawab hai.




"JAAKO RAAKHE SAIYYAN

MAAR SAKE NA KOI"






main- ummid hai tu iska matlab samajh hua hoga.





Kaal- achha hai. Baise bhi maine tujhe apne hatho se maarna chahta tha. Na ki baise jaise maine tujhe us black hole me pahuchaya tha. Ab meri vo ikchha bhi puri hogi.





Main- to fir der kis baat ki aaja.




Ye kehke maine doud laga ke uske chehre per ek punch mara. Punch kuch jyada hi power wala tha. Jisse udta hua vo laga ek ped se. Or vo ped beech me se toot gya.or isse pehle ki vo uthta main uske pass gya or use apne hatho se hawa me utha liya. Or us tute hue ped jo ki kisi nukile bhale ki tarah ho gya tha. Usper patak diya. Or uske sarir me vo ped aar paar nikal gya. Ek tarah se vo usi me fas gya tha.




Or use ab ho raha tha bhayankar dard jiski bajah se vo bahut hi bhayank chilla raha tha.or uthne ki kosis kar raha tha. Lekin vo uth nahi pa raha tha kyuki uska sarir aadhe ped me ghusa hua tha. Or use uthne ke liye koi saport nahi mil pa raha tha.




Main- uth saale ab dikha apna gussa. Sale mujhe black hole me bhejega. Maine kaha tha na ki main tujhe aisi mout marunga ki tu bas sochta hi reh jayega ki ye hua kaise. Tabhi maine apni sword se uske dono kandhe kaat diye. Or uska garden or kandhe wala hissa neeche ja gira lekin vo abhi bhi ped me ho fasa hua tha. Isse pehle ki vo fir se judta maine uske andar hath dala or uska dil nikaal liya. Or vo dil nikalne me hi bahut takat lagani pad rahi thi. Kyuki uski body use apne pass kheech rahi thi. Uski puri body me bhayankar kampann hone laga tha.


Maine apni talwar ko uske dil me fasa diya jisse uski body bhayankar jhatke lene lagi. Uske baad maine lighter se bahi sukhi ghaas per aag lagai or uske dil ko kabab ki tarah usme daal diya.


Meri talwar mere hath se chhutne ki kosis kar rahi thi uske dil ki bajah se lekin meri pakad kaafi majbut thi. Or dil nikaal lene ki bajah se uska sir jo neeche pada hua tha vo bhi nahi jud pa raha tha.




Or aise hi karib 30 min. Ki bhunai ke baad uska dil puri tarah se rakh me badal gya. Or uske dil ke khatm hote hi uska sarir bhi kisi pathar ki tarah toot kar bikhar gya.or fir apne aap hi punchtatva me vileen ho gya.




Or yaha per kaal ka ant ho gya puri tarah se. Bina koi bhi jokhim uthaye.



Saale ne bahut paresaan kiya tha. Lekin akhir kaar ye apne anjaam tak pahuch gya.




Maine apni talwar aag se bahar nikali or aag me dekha to uske dil ka bhi namo nishan nahi bacha tha.


Main puri tarah sure hona chah raha tha ki ye mar gya hai. Kahi aisa na ho ki ye sala fir se kaise bhi jinda ho jaye. Or mera time barbaad kare.




Jab main puri tarah se sure ho gya. To baha se chala gya seedha airport. Jaha harry ne mera plane bapis bhej diya tha. Darashal main isi plan se yaha aaya tha plan bhai ko le ke chala gaya or main yahi jungle me aake iski raah dekhne laga. Or Harry ne us per kadak najar rakho ki kahi ye fir se apne kisi clone ko yaha na bhej de. Lekin aisa nahi hua.




Sayad use mere yaha hone ki ummid bilkul bhi nahi thi. Or yahi iski sabse badi bhool thi. Or dusri baat. Mere black hole me jaane ke baad usne overconfident main time travel nahi kiya Verna pakka ye is samay meri band baja deta. Lekin kehte hai na. Ki geedad ki jab mout aati hai to vo sehar ki taraf jata hai. Or jab is kaal ki mout aai to ye jungle ki taraf aaya.



Lekin aaplog thode confuse jarur honge ki bhai ne jab uske kuch sathiyo ko maar diya tha to ye khabar kaal tak kyu nahi pahuch paai. Kyuki agar ye khabar use pata chal jaati fir to hungama pakka tha. Or us gufa me alarm bhi baje the. Iski jaankari bhi kaal ko nahi di gyi. Akhir kyu?


To iska jawab ye hai ki. Sabse pehla kaam to Harry ne kiya. Us area ke saare signals ko jam karke. Jis bajah se vo log kaal ko inform nahi kar pa rahe the ki yaha per kya hua hai. Or dusri baat unhe bhi nahi pata tha ki yaha per ye sab jo hua hai ye kisne kiya hai. Or agar unki security me itni badi galti vo khud hi kaal ko batate to sabse pehle to kaal unhi ko maar deta. Kyuki vo apne kaam me itni laparwahi bardast nahi karta hai. Or isi liye jab signal janm hone ki bajah se kaal ka contact nahi hua to unlogo ne socha ki jab hame vo pathar mil jayega tab ham kaal ko ye sab batayenge. Kyuki us samay uska mood achha hoga or usi kushi me sayad vo in sabko na maare. Bahi in 3 dino me kaal bhi us gufa ki taraf Bapis nahi gya tha. Kyuki vo nahi chahta tha ki kisi ki najar us per pade ki ye achanak se kaha chala jata hai. Isliye jab tak kuch khaas kaam nahi hota hai tab tak vo baha nahi jata hai. Or dusri baat ye ki veer har samay uske sath hi rehta tha. Din me use ek min. Ke liye bhi akela nahi chhodta tha. Kisi na kisi kaam se uske aas pass hi rehta tha. Jis bajah se vo apna kaam nahi kar pa raha tha. Vo raat me baha ja sakta tha. Lekin vo khud hi baha nahi jata tha.


Bahi sabse imp baat. Ki kaal to time travel karke dekh sakta tha ki uske sath kya hone wala hai or kya nahi.

To usne surya ko black hole me pahuchane ke baad time travel kiya tha. Or usne pure 1 saal aage tak ka future dekh liya tha. Jisme use surya kahi nahi dikha. Or uske bhai bhi ek dum hatash or nirash hi dikhate the. Jis bajah se vo sure ho gya tha ki ab surya kabhi Bapis nahi aane wala hai. Isiliye usne apna sara dhyan keval paras pathar per hi focus karna suru kar diya. Or usne past me time travel karna start kiya. Or paras pathar ko trace karne laga. Halaki pehle bhi usne trace kiya tha. Lekin uski exact jagah use abhi tak pata nahi chali thi. Isliye usne firse past me travel kiya or use is baar jagah ka pata chal gya. Or usne fir Kohima ke jungalo me paras pathar se nikalne wali reading ko pakadna start kar diya. Jisme use 3-4 mahine lag gye. Us pathar ki jagah dhudne me. Use exact location per 0.01% reading mil gyi. Jo ki kaafi thi baha per khudai karne ke liye. Or bas usne fir bahi ke ACP ka roop liya or apna kaam karne laga. Bahi beech beech me vo 1-2 mahine ka time travel bhi karta rehta tha taaki aage agar kahi kuch gadbad ho to vo uska pata laga sake. Bahi use pura confident tha ki uska pata surya ke bhai kabhi nahi laga payenge. Kyuki usne 1 saal aage tak ka future dekha tha surya ke parivar ka or use pata chal gya tha ki inse na ho payega. Or isi overconfident ne aaj uska kaam tamam kar diya. Halaki surya ki planning kuch khaas nahi thi. Lekin yaha per kaal khud apni galti se mara gya.



Khair ghar aake maine sabko kush khabri di. Jise sunke sabhi bahut kush ho gye.


Ab rahi baat us paras pathar ki to iska kya karna hai mujhe nahi pata tha. Filhaal isko safe rakhna tha. Taaki ye kisi or ke hath na lage. Or jaha tak baat rahi blackheart ki to meri sixth sense mujhse keh rahi thi ki usko jinda karne ke liye aage bahut log aane wale hai. Isliye saabdhan to rehna hi padega.




Agle din se ham sabhi ki normal life shuru ho gyi. Bache bapis clg jaane lage or sunny rishi Aarav or aadil apne apne city bapis chale gye. Bahi bhai main or Rony apne business me lag gye.






(Yaha per surya ki kahani ka ek chapter close ho chuka hai. Or ab agla chapter shuru hota hai. Jisme kai supernatural shaktiyo se surya or uske pariwar ka saamna hoga. Jinme ek eham role yuva peedi bhi nibhayegi. Or next update se kahani ka focus hoga bacho ki clg life per. Or jaise jaise story ki aage badhegi baise baise naye dushman aate jayenge. Bas apna sath banaye rakhe.)









To be continue………………….

 

[Jaguaar]

UPDATE - 16
















Kaal baha per hi khada tha or apne gusse ko kabu karne ki kosis kar raha tha. Or soch raha tha ki jisne bhi ye kiya hai. Vo yaha tak pahucha kaise. Tabhi uske kaano me ek aawaj padti hai.





Kaal- achha hua tum yaha aagye veer. Aaj tumhe bhi tumhare bhai surya ke pass pahucha dunga. Lekin usse pehle bas itna bata do ki vo pathar kaha hai. Or agar nahi batana chahte to mat batao. Kyuki us pathar ke liye main tumhare pure khandan ko itna tadpaunga ki vo khud mujhe vo de denge. Or uske baad main sabhi ko maar dunga. Ab faisla tumhe karna hai.




Uski ye baat sunkar mujhe gussa aana chahiye lekin main ek dum shant tha. Or us per has raha tha.





Main- kya baat hai. Aaj tujhe is haalat me dekhkar kitna maja aaraha hai main bata nahi sakta. Or rahi baat mujhe surya ke pass pahuchane ki to tere liye ek surprise hai.



Ye kehke maine apna mask hata diya. Or uske saamne aaya mera real face jise dekhte hi vo char kadam peechhe hat gya.




Kaal- ye impossible hai. Tu jinda kaise ho sakta hai. Jarur ye bhi tune mask pehna hai surya ka.





Main- tere is sawaal ka mere pass ek hi jawab hai.




"JAAKO RAAKHE SAIYYAN

MAAR SAKE NA KOI"






main- ummid hai tu iska matlab samajh hua hoga.





Kaal- achha hai. Baise bhi maine tujhe apne hatho se maarna chahta tha. Na ki baise jaise maine tujhe us black hole me pahuchaya tha. Ab meri vo ikchha bhi puri hogi.





Main- to fir der kis baat ki aaja.




Ye kehke maine doud laga ke uske chehre per ek punch mara. Punch kuch jyada hi power wala tha. Jisse udta hua vo laga ek ped se. Or vo ped beech me se toot gya.or isse pehle ki vo uthta main uske pass gya or use apne hatho se hawa me utha liya. Or us tute hue ped jo ki kisi nukile bhale ki tarah ho gya tha. Usper patak diya. Or uske sarir me vo ped aar paar nikal gya. Ek tarah se vo usi me fas gya tha.




Or use ab ho raha tha bhayankar dard jiski bajah se vo bahut hi bhayank chilla raha tha.or uthne ki kosis kar raha tha. Lekin vo uth nahi pa raha tha kyuki uska sarir aadhe ped me ghusa hua tha. Or use uthne ke liye koi saport nahi mil pa raha tha.




Main- uth saale ab dikha apna gussa. Sale mujhe black hole me bhejega. Maine kaha tha na ki main tujhe aisi mout marunga ki tu bas sochta hi reh jayega ki ye hua kaise. Tabhi maine apni sword se uske dono kandhe kaat diye. Or uska garden or kandhe wala hissa neeche ja gira lekin vo abhi bhi ped me ho fasa hua tha. Isse pehle ki vo fir se judta maine uske andar hath dala or uska dil nikaal liya. Or vo dil nikalne me hi bahut takat lagani pad rahi thi. Kyuki uski body use apne pass kheech rahi thi. Uski puri body me bhayankar kampann hone laga tha.


Maine apni talwar ko uske dil me fasa diya jisse uski body bhayankar jhatke lene lagi. Uske baad maine lighter se bahi sukhi ghaas per aag lagai or uske dil ko kabab ki tarah usme daal diya.


Meri talwar mere hath se chhutne ki kosis kar rahi thi uske dil ki bajah se lekin meri pakad kaafi majbut thi. Or dil nikaal lene ki bajah se uska sir jo neeche pada hua tha vo bhi nahi jud pa raha tha.




Or aise hi karib 30 min. Ki bhunai ke baad uska dil puri tarah se rakh me badal gya. Or uske dil ke khatm hote hi uska sarir bhi kisi pathar ki tarah toot kar bikhar gya.or fir apne aap hi punchtatva me vileen ho gya.




Or yaha per kaal ka ant ho gya puri tarah se. Bina koi bhi jokhim uthaye.



Saale ne bahut paresaan kiya tha. Lekin akhir kaar ye apne anjaam tak pahuch gya.




Maine apni talwar aag se bahar nikali or aag me dekha to uske dil ka bhi namo nishan nahi bacha tha.


Main puri tarah sure hona chah raha tha ki ye mar gya hai. Kahi aisa na ho ki ye sala fir se kaise bhi jinda ho jaye. Or mera time barbaad kare.




Jab main puri tarah se sure ho gya. To baha se chala gya seedha airport. Jaha harry ne mera plane bapis bhej diya tha. Darashal main isi plan se yaha aaya tha plan bhai ko le ke chala gaya or main yahi jungle me aake iski raah dekhne laga. Or Harry ne us per kadak najar rakho ki kahi ye fir se apne kisi clone ko yaha na bhej de. Lekin aisa nahi hua.




Sayad use mere yaha hone ki ummid bilkul bhi nahi thi. Or yahi iski sabse badi bhool thi. Or dusri baat. Mere black hole me jaane ke baad usne overconfident main time travel nahi kiya Verna pakka ye is samay meri band baja deta. Lekin kehte hai na. Ki geedad ki jab mout aati hai to vo sehar ki taraf jata hai. Or jab is kaal ki mout aai to ye jungle ki taraf aaya.



Lekin aaplog thode confuse jarur honge ki bhai ne jab uske kuch sathiyo ko maar diya tha to ye khabar kaal tak kyu nahi pahuch paai. Kyuki agar ye khabar use pata chal jaati fir to hungama pakka tha. Or us gufa me alarm bhi baje the. Iski jaankari bhi kaal ko nahi di gyi. Akhir kyu?


To iska jawab ye hai ki. Sabse pehla kaam to Harry ne kiya. Us area ke saare signals ko jam karke. Jis bajah se vo log kaal ko inform nahi kar pa rahe the ki yaha per kya hua hai. Or dusri baat unhe bhi nahi pata tha ki yaha per ye sab jo hua hai ye kisne kiya hai. Or agar unki security me itni badi galti vo khud hi kaal ko batate to sabse pehle to kaal unhi ko maar deta. Kyuki vo apne kaam me itni laparwahi bardast nahi karta hai. Or isi liye jab signal janm hone ki bajah se kaal ka contact nahi hua to unlogo ne socha ki jab hame vo pathar mil jayega tab ham kaal ko ye sab batayenge. Kyuki us samay uska mood achha hoga or usi kushi me sayad vo in sabko na maare. Bahi in 3 dino me kaal bhi us gufa ki taraf Bapis nahi gya tha. Kyuki vo nahi chahta tha ki kisi ki najar us per pade ki ye achanak se kaha chala jata hai. Isliye jab tak kuch khaas kaam nahi hota hai tab tak vo baha nahi jata hai. Or dusri baat ye ki veer har samay uske sath hi rehta tha. Din me use ek min. Ke liye bhi akela nahi chhodta tha. Kisi na kisi kaam se uske aas pass hi rehta tha. Jis bajah se vo apna kaam nahi kar pa raha tha. Vo raat me baha ja sakta tha. Lekin vo khud hi baha nahi jata tha.


Bahi sabse imp baat. Ki kaal to time travel karke dekh sakta tha ki uske sath kya hone wala hai or kya nahi.

To usne surya ko black hole me pahuchane ke baad time travel kiya tha. Or usne pure 1 saal aage tak ka future dekh liya tha. Jisme use surya kahi nahi dikha. Or uske bhai bhi ek dum hatash or nirash hi dikhate the. Jis bajah se vo sure ho gya tha ki ab surya kabhi Bapis nahi aane wala hai. Isiliye usne apna sara dhyan keval paras pathar per hi focus karna suru kar diya. Or usne past me time travel karna start kiya. Or paras pathar ko trace karne laga. Halaki pehle bhi usne trace kiya tha. Lekin uski exact jagah use abhi tak pata nahi chali thi. Isliye usne firse past me travel kiya or use is baar jagah ka pata chal gya. Or usne fir Kohima ke jungalo me paras pathar se nikalne wali reading ko pakadna start kar diya. Jisme use 3-4 mahine lag gye. Us pathar ki jagah dhudne me. Use exact location per 0.01% reading mil gyi. Jo ki kaafi thi baha per khudai karne ke liye. Or bas usne fir bahi ke ACP ka roop liya or apna kaam karne laga. Bahi beech beech me vo 1-2 mahine ka time travel bhi karta rehta tha taaki aage agar kahi kuch gadbad ho to vo uska pata laga sake. Bahi use pura confident tha ki uska pata surya ke bhai kabhi nahi laga payenge. Kyuki usne 1 saal aage tak ka future dekha tha surya ke parivar ka or use pata chal gya tha ki inse na ho payega. Or isi overconfident ne aaj uska kaam tamam kar diya. Halaki surya ki planning kuch khaas nahi thi. Lekin yaha per kaal khud apni galti se mara gya.



Khair ghar aake maine sabko kush khabri di. Jise sunke sabhi bahut kush ho gye.


Ab rahi baat us paras pathar ki to iska kya karna hai mujhe nahi pata tha. Filhaal isko safe rakhna tha. Taaki ye kisi or ke hath na lage. Or jaha tak baat rahi blackheart ki to meri sixth sense mujhse keh rahi thi ki usko jinda karne ke liye aage bahut log aane wale hai. Isliye saabdhan to rehna hi padega.




Agle din se ham sabhi ki normal life shuru ho gyi. Bache bapis clg jaane lage or sunny rishi Aarav or aadil apne apne city bapis chale gye. Bahi bhai main or Rony apne business me lag gye.






(Yaha per surya ki kahani ka ek chapter close ho chuka hai. Or ab agla chapter shuru hota hai. Jisme kai supernatural shaktiyo se surya or uske pariwar ka saamna hoga. Jinme ek eham role yuva peedi bhi nibhayegi. Or next update se kahani ka focus hoga bacho ki clg life per. Or jaise jaise story ki aage badhegi baise baise naye dushman aate jayenge. Bas apna sath banaye rakhe.)









To be continue………………….

Nice update

 

[Htcw456]

UPDATE - 16
















Kaal baha per hi khada tha or apne gusse ko kabu karne ki kosis kar raha tha. Or soch raha tha ki jisne bhi ye kiya hai. Vo yaha tak pahucha kaise. Tabhi uske kaano me ek aawaj padti hai.





Kaal- achha hua tum yaha aagye veer. Aaj tumhe bhi tumhare bhai surya ke pass pahucha dunga. Lekin usse pehle bas itna bata do ki vo pathar kaha hai. Or agar nahi batana chahte to mat batao. Kyuki us pathar ke liye main tumhare pure khandan ko itna tadpaunga ki vo khud mujhe vo de denge. Or uske baad main sabhi ko maar dunga. Ab faisla tumhe karna hai.




Uski ye baat sunkar mujhe gussa aana chahiye lekin main ek dum shant tha. Or us per has raha tha.





Main- kya baat hai. Aaj tujhe is haalat me dekhkar kitna maja aaraha hai main bata nahi sakta. Or rahi baat mujhe surya ke pass pahuchane ki to tere liye ek surprise hai.



Ye kehke maine apna mask hata diya. Or uske saamne aaya mera real face jise dekhte hi vo char kadam peechhe hat gya.




Kaal- ye impossible hai. Tu jinda kaise ho sakta hai. Jarur ye bhi tune mask pehna hai surya ka.





Main- tere is sawaal ka mere pass ek hi jawab hai.




"JAAKO RAAKHE SAIYYAN

MAAR SAKE NA KOI"






main- ummid hai tu iska matlab samajh hua hoga.





Kaal- achha hai. Baise bhi maine tujhe apne hatho se maarna chahta tha. Na ki baise jaise maine tujhe us black hole me pahuchaya tha. Ab meri vo ikchha bhi puri hogi.





Main- to fir der kis baat ki aaja.




Ye kehke maine doud laga ke uske chehre per ek punch mara. Punch kuch jyada hi power wala tha. Jisse udta hua vo laga ek ped se. Or vo ped beech me se toot gya.or isse pehle ki vo uthta main uske pass gya or use apne hatho se hawa me utha liya. Or us tute hue ped jo ki kisi nukile bhale ki tarah ho gya tha. Usper patak diya. Or uske sarir me vo ped aar paar nikal gya. Ek tarah se vo usi me fas gya tha.




Or use ab ho raha tha bhayankar dard jiski bajah se vo bahut hi bhayank chilla raha tha.or uthne ki kosis kar raha tha. Lekin vo uth nahi pa raha tha kyuki uska sarir aadhe ped me ghusa hua tha. Or use uthne ke liye koi saport nahi mil pa raha tha.




Main- uth saale ab dikha apna gussa. Sale mujhe black hole me bhejega. Maine kaha tha na ki main tujhe aisi mout marunga ki tu bas sochta hi reh jayega ki ye hua kaise. Tabhi maine apni sword se uske dono kandhe kaat diye. Or uska garden or kandhe wala hissa neeche ja gira lekin vo abhi bhi ped me ho fasa hua tha. Isse pehle ki vo fir se judta maine uske andar hath dala or uska dil nikaal liya. Or vo dil nikalne me hi bahut takat lagani pad rahi thi. Kyuki uski body use apne pass kheech rahi thi. Uski puri body me bhayankar kampann hone laga tha.


Maine apni talwar ko uske dil me fasa diya jisse uski body bhayankar jhatke lene lagi. Uske baad maine lighter se bahi sukhi ghaas per aag lagai or uske dil ko kabab ki tarah usme daal diya.


Meri talwar mere hath se chhutne ki kosis kar rahi thi uske dil ki bajah se lekin meri pakad kaafi majbut thi. Or dil nikaal lene ki bajah se uska sir jo neeche pada hua tha vo bhi nahi jud pa raha tha.




Or aise hi karib 30 min. Ki bhunai ke baad uska dil puri tarah se rakh me badal gya. Or uske dil ke khatm hote hi uska sarir bhi kisi pathar ki tarah toot kar bikhar gya.or fir apne aap hi punchtatva me vileen ho gya.




Or yaha per kaal ka ant ho gya puri tarah se. Bina koi bhi jokhim uthaye.



Saale ne bahut paresaan kiya tha. Lekin akhir kaar ye apne anjaam tak pahuch gya.




Maine apni talwar aag se bahar nikali or aag me dekha to uske dil ka bhi namo nishan nahi bacha tha.


Main puri tarah sure hona chah raha tha ki ye mar gya hai. Kahi aisa na ho ki ye sala fir se kaise bhi jinda ho jaye. Or mera time barbaad kare.




Jab main puri tarah se sure ho gya. To baha se chala gya seedha airport. Jaha harry ne mera plane bapis bhej diya tha. Darashal main isi plan se yaha aaya tha plan bhai ko le ke chala gaya or main yahi jungle me aake iski raah dekhne laga. Or Harry ne us per kadak najar rakho ki kahi ye fir se apne kisi clone ko yaha na bhej de. Lekin aisa nahi hua.




Sayad use mere yaha hone ki ummid bilkul bhi nahi thi. Or yahi iski sabse badi bhool thi. Or dusri baat. Mere black hole me jaane ke baad usne overconfident main time travel nahi kiya Verna pakka ye is samay meri band baja deta. Lekin kehte hai na. Ki geedad ki jab mout aati hai to vo sehar ki taraf jata hai. Or jab is kaal ki mout aai to ye jungle ki taraf aaya.



Lekin aaplog thode confuse jarur honge ki bhai ne jab uske kuch sathiyo ko maar diya tha to ye khabar kaal tak kyu nahi pahuch paai. Kyuki agar ye khabar use pata chal jaati fir to hungama pakka tha. Or us gufa me alarm bhi baje the. Iski jaankari bhi kaal ko nahi di gyi. Akhir kyu?


To iska jawab ye hai ki. Sabse pehla kaam to Harry ne kiya. Us area ke saare signals ko jam karke. Jis bajah se vo log kaal ko inform nahi kar pa rahe the ki yaha per kya hua hai. Or dusri baat unhe bhi nahi pata tha ki yaha per ye sab jo hua hai ye kisne kiya hai. Or agar unki security me itni badi galti vo khud hi kaal ko batate to sabse pehle to kaal unhi ko maar deta. Kyuki vo apne kaam me itni laparwahi bardast nahi karta hai. Or isi liye jab signal janm hone ki bajah se kaal ka contact nahi hua to unlogo ne socha ki jab hame vo pathar mil jayega tab ham kaal ko ye sab batayenge. Kyuki us samay uska mood achha hoga or usi kushi me sayad vo in sabko na maare. Bahi in 3 dino me kaal bhi us gufa ki taraf Bapis nahi gya tha. Kyuki vo nahi chahta tha ki kisi ki najar us per pade ki ye achanak se kaha chala jata hai. Isliye jab tak kuch khaas kaam nahi hota hai tab tak vo baha nahi jata hai. Or dusri baat ye ki veer har samay uske sath hi rehta tha. Din me use ek min. Ke liye bhi akela nahi chhodta tha. Kisi na kisi kaam se uske aas pass hi rehta tha. Jis bajah se vo apna kaam nahi kar pa raha tha. Vo raat me baha ja sakta tha. Lekin vo khud hi baha nahi jata tha.


Bahi sabse imp baat. Ki kaal to time travel karke dekh sakta tha ki uske sath kya hone wala hai or kya nahi.

To usne surya ko black hole me pahuchane ke baad time travel kiya tha. Or usne pure 1 saal aage tak ka future dekh liya tha. Jisme use surya kahi nahi dikha. Or uske bhai bhi ek dum hatash or nirash hi dikhate the. Jis bajah se vo sure ho gya tha ki ab surya kabhi Bapis nahi aane wala hai. Isiliye usne apna sara dhyan keval paras pathar per hi focus karna suru kar diya. Or usne past me time travel karna start kiya. Or paras pathar ko trace karne laga. Halaki pehle bhi usne trace kiya tha. Lekin uski exact jagah use abhi tak pata nahi chali thi. Isliye usne firse past me travel kiya or use is baar jagah ka pata chal gya. Or usne fir Kohima ke jungalo me paras pathar se nikalne wali reading ko pakadna start kar diya. Jisme use 3-4 mahine lag gye. Us pathar ki jagah dhudne me. Use exact location per 0.01% reading mil gyi. Jo ki kaafi thi baha per khudai karne ke liye. Or bas usne fir bahi ke ACP ka roop liya or apna kaam karne laga. Bahi beech beech me vo 1-2 mahine ka time travel bhi karta rehta tha taaki aage agar kahi kuch gadbad ho to vo uska pata laga sake. Bahi use pura confident tha ki uska pata surya ke bhai kabhi nahi laga payenge. Kyuki usne 1 saal aage tak ka future dekha tha surya ke parivar ka or use pata chal gya tha ki inse na ho payega. Or isi overconfident ne aaj uska kaam tamam kar diya. Halaki surya ki planning kuch khaas nahi thi. Lekin yaha per kaal khud apni galti se mara gya.



Khair ghar aake maine sabko kush khabri di. Jise sunke sabhi bahut kush ho gye.


Ab rahi baat us paras pathar ki to iska kya karna hai mujhe nahi pata tha. Filhaal isko safe rakhna tha. Taaki ye kisi or ke hath na lage. Or jaha tak baat rahi blackheart ki to meri sixth sense mujhse keh rahi thi ki usko jinda karne ke liye aage bahut log aane wale hai. Isliye saabdhan to rehna hi padega.




Agle din se ham sabhi ki normal life shuru ho gyi. Bache bapis clg jaane lage or sunny rishi Aarav or aadil apne apne city bapis chale gye. Bahi bhai main or Rony apne business me lag gye.






(Yaha per surya ki kahani ka ek chapter close ho chuka hai. Or ab agla chapter shuru hota hai. Jisme kai supernatural shaktiyo se surya or uske pariwar ka saamna hoga. Jinme ek eham role yuva peedi bhi nibhayegi. Or next update se kahani ka focus hoga bacho ki clg life per. Or jaise jaise story ki aage badhegi baise baise naye dushman aate jayenge. Bas apna sath banaye rakhe.)









To be continue………………….

Marvelous update hai dear maza machoo
Congratulations for Surya to finished Kaal........
great job dear

 

[Ayush2017]

Awesome update bro