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Shandar update broUPDATE - 16
Kaal baha per hi khada tha or apne gusse ko kabu karne ki kosis kar raha tha. Or soch raha tha ki jisne bhi ye kiya hai. Vo yaha tak pahucha kaise. Tabhi uske kaano me ek aawaj padti hai.
Kaal- achha hua tum yaha aagye veer. Aaj tumhe bhi tumhare bhai surya ke pass pahucha dunga. Lekin usse pehle bas itna bata do ki vo pathar kaha hai. Or agar nahi batana chahte to mat batao. Kyuki us pathar ke liye main tumhare pure khandan ko itna tadpaunga ki vo khud mujhe vo de denge. Or uske baad main sabhi ko maar dunga. Ab faisla tumhe karna hai.
Uski ye baat sunkar mujhe gussa aana chahiye lekin main ek dum shant tha. Or us per has raha tha.
Main- kya baat hai. Aaj tujhe is haalat me dekhkar kitna maja aaraha hai main bata nahi sakta. Or rahi baat mujhe surya ke pass pahuchane ki to tere liye ek surprise hai.
Ye kehke maine apna mask hata diya. Or uske saamne aaya mera real face jise dekhte hi vo char kadam peechhe hat gya.
Kaal- ye impossible hai. Tu jinda kaise ho sakta hai. Jarur ye bhi tune mask pehna hai surya ka.
Main- tere is sawaal ka mere pass ek hi jawab hai.
"JAAKO RAAKHE SAIYYAN
MAAR SAKE NA KOI"
main- ummid hai tu iska matlab samajh hua hoga.
Kaal- achha hai. Baise bhi maine tujhe apne hatho se maarna chahta tha. Na ki baise jaise maine tujhe us black hole me pahuchaya tha. Ab meri vo ikchha bhi puri hogi.
Main- to fir der kis baat ki aaja.
Ye kehke maine doud laga ke uske chehre per ek punch mara. Punch kuch jyada hi power wala tha. Jisse udta hua vo laga ek ped se. Or vo ped beech me se toot gya.or isse pehle ki vo uthta main uske pass gya or use apne hatho se hawa me utha liya. Or us tute hue ped jo ki kisi nukile bhale ki tarah ho gya tha. Usper patak diya. Or uske sarir me vo ped aar paar nikal gya. Ek tarah se vo usi me fas gya tha.
Or use ab ho raha tha bhayankar dard jiski bajah se vo bahut hi bhayank chilla raha tha.or uthne ki kosis kar raha tha. Lekin vo uth nahi pa raha tha kyuki uska sarir aadhe ped me ghusa hua tha. Or use uthne ke liye koi saport nahi mil pa raha tha.
Main- uth saale ab dikha apna gussa. Sale mujhe black hole me bhejega. Maine kaha tha na ki main tujhe aisi mout marunga ki tu bas sochta hi reh jayega ki ye hua kaise. Tabhi maine apni sword se uske dono kandhe kaat diye. Or uska garden or kandhe wala hissa neeche ja gira lekin vo abhi bhi ped me ho fasa hua tha. Isse pehle ki vo fir se judta maine uske andar hath dala or uska dil nikaal liya. Or vo dil nikalne me hi bahut takat lagani pad rahi thi. Kyuki uski body use apne pass kheech rahi thi. Uski puri body me bhayankar kampann hone laga tha.
Maine apni talwar ko uske dil me fasa diya jisse uski body bhayankar jhatke lene lagi. Uske baad maine lighter se bahi sukhi ghaas per aag lagai or uske dil ko kabab ki tarah usme daal diya.
Meri talwar mere hath se chhutne ki kosis kar rahi thi uske dil ki bajah se lekin meri pakad kaafi majbut thi. Or dil nikaal lene ki bajah se uska sir jo neeche pada hua tha vo bhi nahi jud pa raha tha.
Or aise hi karib 30 min. Ki bhunai ke baad uska dil puri tarah se rakh me badal gya. Or uske dil ke khatm hote hi uska sarir bhi kisi pathar ki tarah toot kar bikhar gya.or fir apne aap hi punchtatva me vileen ho gya.
Or yaha per kaal ka ant ho gya puri tarah se. Bina koi bhi jokhim uthaye.
Saale ne bahut paresaan kiya tha. Lekin akhir kaar ye apne anjaam tak pahuch gya.
Maine apni talwar aag se bahar nikali or aag me dekha to uske dil ka bhi namo nishan nahi bacha tha.
Main puri tarah sure hona chah raha tha ki ye mar gya hai. Kahi aisa na ho ki ye sala fir se kaise bhi jinda ho jaye. Or mera time barbaad kare.
Jab main puri tarah se sure ho gya. To baha se chala gya seedha airport. Jaha harry ne mera plane bapis bhej diya tha. Darashal main isi plan se yaha aaya tha plan bhai ko le ke chala gaya or main yahi jungle me aake iski raah dekhne laga. Or Harry ne us per kadak najar rakho ki kahi ye fir se apne kisi clone ko yaha na bhej de. Lekin aisa nahi hua.
Sayad use mere yaha hone ki ummid bilkul bhi nahi thi. Or yahi iski sabse badi bhool thi. Or dusri baat. Mere black hole me jaane ke baad usne overconfident main time travel nahi kiya Verna pakka ye is samay meri band baja deta. Lekin kehte hai na. Ki geedad ki jab mout aati hai to vo sehar ki taraf jata hai. Or jab is kaal ki mout aai to ye jungle ki taraf aaya.
Lekin aaplog thode confuse jarur honge ki bhai ne jab uske kuch sathiyo ko maar diya tha to ye khabar kaal tak kyu nahi pahuch paai. Kyuki agar ye khabar use pata chal jaati fir to hungama pakka tha. Or us gufa me alarm bhi baje the. Iski jaankari bhi kaal ko nahi di gyi. Akhir kyu?
To iska jawab ye hai ki. Sabse pehla kaam to Harry ne kiya. Us area ke saare signals ko jam karke. Jis bajah se vo log kaal ko inform nahi kar pa rahe the ki yaha per kya hua hai. Or dusri baat unhe bhi nahi pata tha ki yaha per ye sab jo hua hai ye kisne kiya hai. Or agar unki security me itni badi galti vo khud hi kaal ko batate to sabse pehle to kaal unhi ko maar deta. Kyuki vo apne kaam me itni laparwahi bardast nahi karta hai. Or isi liye jab signal janm hone ki bajah se kaal ka contact nahi hua to unlogo ne socha ki jab hame vo pathar mil jayega tab ham kaal ko ye sab batayenge. Kyuki us samay uska mood achha hoga or usi kushi me sayad vo in sabko na maare. Bahi in 3 dino me kaal bhi us gufa ki taraf Bapis nahi gya tha. Kyuki vo nahi chahta tha ki kisi ki najar us per pade ki ye achanak se kaha chala jata hai. Isliye jab tak kuch khaas kaam nahi hota hai tab tak vo baha nahi jata hai. Or dusri baat ye ki veer har samay uske sath hi rehta tha. Din me use ek min. Ke liye bhi akela nahi chhodta tha. Kisi na kisi kaam se uske aas pass hi rehta tha. Jis bajah se vo apna kaam nahi kar pa raha tha. Vo raat me baha ja sakta tha. Lekin vo khud hi baha nahi jata tha.
Bahi sabse imp baat. Ki kaal to time travel karke dekh sakta tha ki uske sath kya hone wala hai or kya nahi.
To usne surya ko black hole me pahuchane ke baad time travel kiya tha. Or usne pure 1 saal aage tak ka future dekh liya tha. Jisme use surya kahi nahi dikha. Or uske bhai bhi ek dum hatash or nirash hi dikhate the. Jis bajah se vo sure ho gya tha ki ab surya kabhi Bapis nahi aane wala hai. Isiliye usne apna sara dhyan keval paras pathar per hi focus karna suru kar diya. Or usne past me time travel karna start kiya. Or paras pathar ko trace karne laga. Halaki pehle bhi usne trace kiya tha. Lekin uski exact jagah use abhi tak pata nahi chali thi. Isliye usne firse past me travel kiya or use is baar jagah ka pata chal gya. Or usne fir Kohima ke jungalo me paras pathar se nikalne wali reading ko pakadna start kar diya. Jisme use 3-4 mahine lag gye. Us pathar ki jagah dhudne me. Use exact location per 0.01% reading mil gyi. Jo ki kaafi thi baha per khudai karne ke liye. Or bas usne fir bahi ke ACP ka roop liya or apna kaam karne laga. Bahi beech beech me vo 1-2 mahine ka time travel bhi karta rehta tha taaki aage agar kahi kuch gadbad ho to vo uska pata laga sake. Bahi use pura confident tha ki uska pata surya ke bhai kabhi nahi laga payenge. Kyuki usne 1 saal aage tak ka future dekha tha surya ke parivar ka or use pata chal gya tha ki inse na ho payega. Or isi overconfident ne aaj uska kaam tamam kar diya. Halaki surya ki planning kuch khaas nahi thi. Lekin yaha per kaal khud apni galti se mara gya.
Khair ghar aake maine sabko kush khabri di. Jise sunke sabhi bahut kush ho gye.
Ab rahi baat us paras pathar ki to iska kya karna hai mujhe nahi pata tha. Filhaal isko safe rakhna tha. Taaki ye kisi or ke hath na lage. Or jaha tak baat rahi blackheart ki to meri sixth sense mujhse keh rahi thi ki usko jinda karne ke liye aage bahut log aane wale hai. Isliye saabdhan to rehna hi padega.
Agle din se ham sabhi ki normal life shuru ho gyi. Bache bapis clg jaane lage or sunny rishi Aarav or aadil apne apne city bapis chale gye. Bahi bhai main or Rony apne business me lag gye.
(Yaha per surya ki kahani ka ek chapter close ho chuka hai. Or ab agla chapter shuru hota hai. Jisme kai supernatural shaktiyo se surya or uske pariwar ka saamna hoga. Jinme ek eham role yuva peedi bhi nibhayegi. Or next update se kahani ka focus hoga bacho ki clg life per. Or jaise jaise story ki aage badhegi baise baise naye dushman aate jayenge. Bas apna sath banaye rakhe.)
To be continue………………….
Bahad umda update mitrUPDATE - 16
Kaal baha per hi khada tha or apne gusse ko kabu karne ki kosis kar raha tha. Or soch raha tha ki jisne bhi ye kiya hai. Vo yaha tak pahucha kaise. Tabhi uske kaano me ek aawaj padti hai.
Kaal- achha hua tum yaha aagye veer. Aaj tumhe bhi tumhare bhai surya ke pass pahucha dunga. Lekin usse pehle bas itna bata do ki vo pathar kaha hai. Or agar nahi batana chahte to mat batao. Kyuki us pathar ke liye main tumhare pure khandan ko itna tadpaunga ki vo khud mujhe vo de denge. Or uske baad main sabhi ko maar dunga. Ab faisla tumhe karna hai.
Uski ye baat sunkar mujhe gussa aana chahiye lekin main ek dum shant tha. Or us per has raha tha.
Main- kya baat hai. Aaj tujhe is haalat me dekhkar kitna maja aaraha hai main bata nahi sakta. Or rahi baat mujhe surya ke pass pahuchane ki to tere liye ek surprise hai.
Ye kehke maine apna mask hata diya. Or uske saamne aaya mera real face jise dekhte hi vo char kadam peechhe hat gya.
Kaal- ye impossible hai. Tu jinda kaise ho sakta hai. Jarur ye bhi tune mask pehna hai surya ka.
Main- tere is sawaal ka mere pass ek hi jawab hai.
"JAAKO RAAKHE SAIYYAN
MAAR SAKE NA KOI"
main- ummid hai tu iska matlab samajh hua hoga.
Kaal- achha hai. Baise bhi maine tujhe apne hatho se maarna chahta tha. Na ki baise jaise maine tujhe us black hole me pahuchaya tha. Ab meri vo ikchha bhi puri hogi.
Main- to fir der kis baat ki aaja.
Ye kehke maine doud laga ke uske chehre per ek punch mara. Punch kuch jyada hi power wala tha. Jisse udta hua vo laga ek ped se. Or vo ped beech me se toot gya.or isse pehle ki vo uthta main uske pass gya or use apne hatho se hawa me utha liya. Or us tute hue ped jo ki kisi nukile bhale ki tarah ho gya tha. Usper patak diya. Or uske sarir me vo ped aar paar nikal gya. Ek tarah se vo usi me fas gya tha.
Or use ab ho raha tha bhayankar dard jiski bajah se vo bahut hi bhayank chilla raha tha.or uthne ki kosis kar raha tha. Lekin vo uth nahi pa raha tha kyuki uska sarir aadhe ped me ghusa hua tha. Or use uthne ke liye koi saport nahi mil pa raha tha.
Main- uth saale ab dikha apna gussa. Sale mujhe black hole me bhejega. Maine kaha tha na ki main tujhe aisi mout marunga ki tu bas sochta hi reh jayega ki ye hua kaise. Tabhi maine apni sword se uske dono kandhe kaat diye. Or uska garden or kandhe wala hissa neeche ja gira lekin vo abhi bhi ped me ho fasa hua tha. Isse pehle ki vo fir se judta maine uske andar hath dala or uska dil nikaal liya. Or vo dil nikalne me hi bahut takat lagani pad rahi thi. Kyuki uski body use apne pass kheech rahi thi. Uski puri body me bhayankar kampann hone laga tha.
Maine apni talwar ko uske dil me fasa diya jisse uski body bhayankar jhatke lene lagi. Uske baad maine lighter se bahi sukhi ghaas per aag lagai or uske dil ko kabab ki tarah usme daal diya.
Meri talwar mere hath se chhutne ki kosis kar rahi thi uske dil ki bajah se lekin meri pakad kaafi majbut thi. Or dil nikaal lene ki bajah se uska sir jo neeche pada hua tha vo bhi nahi jud pa raha tha.
Or aise hi karib 30 min. Ki bhunai ke baad uska dil puri tarah se rakh me badal gya. Or uske dil ke khatm hote hi uska sarir bhi kisi pathar ki tarah toot kar bikhar gya.or fir apne aap hi punchtatva me vileen ho gya.
Or yaha per kaal ka ant ho gya puri tarah se. Bina koi bhi jokhim uthaye.
Saale ne bahut paresaan kiya tha. Lekin akhir kaar ye apne anjaam tak pahuch gya.
Maine apni talwar aag se bahar nikali or aag me dekha to uske dil ka bhi namo nishan nahi bacha tha.
Main puri tarah sure hona chah raha tha ki ye mar gya hai. Kahi aisa na ho ki ye sala fir se kaise bhi jinda ho jaye. Or mera time barbaad kare.
Jab main puri tarah se sure ho gya. To baha se chala gya seedha airport. Jaha harry ne mera plane bapis bhej diya tha. Darashal main isi plan se yaha aaya tha plan bhai ko le ke chala gaya or main yahi jungle me aake iski raah dekhne laga. Or Harry ne us per kadak najar rakho ki kahi ye fir se apne kisi clone ko yaha na bhej de. Lekin aisa nahi hua.
Sayad use mere yaha hone ki ummid bilkul bhi nahi thi. Or yahi iski sabse badi bhool thi. Or dusri baat. Mere black hole me jaane ke baad usne overconfident main time travel nahi kiya Verna pakka ye is samay meri band baja deta. Lekin kehte hai na. Ki geedad ki jab mout aati hai to vo sehar ki taraf jata hai. Or jab is kaal ki mout aai to ye jungle ki taraf aaya.
Lekin aaplog thode confuse jarur honge ki bhai ne jab uske kuch sathiyo ko maar diya tha to ye khabar kaal tak kyu nahi pahuch paai. Kyuki agar ye khabar use pata chal jaati fir to hungama pakka tha. Or us gufa me alarm bhi baje the. Iski jaankari bhi kaal ko nahi di gyi. Akhir kyu?
To iska jawab ye hai ki. Sabse pehla kaam to Harry ne kiya. Us area ke saare signals ko jam karke. Jis bajah se vo log kaal ko inform nahi kar pa rahe the ki yaha per kya hua hai. Or dusri baat unhe bhi nahi pata tha ki yaha per ye sab jo hua hai ye kisne kiya hai. Or agar unki security me itni badi galti vo khud hi kaal ko batate to sabse pehle to kaal unhi ko maar deta. Kyuki vo apne kaam me itni laparwahi bardast nahi karta hai. Or isi liye jab signal janm hone ki bajah se kaal ka contact nahi hua to unlogo ne socha ki jab hame vo pathar mil jayega tab ham kaal ko ye sab batayenge. Kyuki us samay uska mood achha hoga or usi kushi me sayad vo in sabko na maare. Bahi in 3 dino me kaal bhi us gufa ki taraf Bapis nahi gya tha. Kyuki vo nahi chahta tha ki kisi ki najar us per pade ki ye achanak se kaha chala jata hai. Isliye jab tak kuch khaas kaam nahi hota hai tab tak vo baha nahi jata hai. Or dusri baat ye ki veer har samay uske sath hi rehta tha. Din me use ek min. Ke liye bhi akela nahi chhodta tha. Kisi na kisi kaam se uske aas pass hi rehta tha. Jis bajah se vo apna kaam nahi kar pa raha tha. Vo raat me baha ja sakta tha. Lekin vo khud hi baha nahi jata tha.
Bahi sabse imp baat. Ki kaal to time travel karke dekh sakta tha ki uske sath kya hone wala hai or kya nahi.
To usne surya ko black hole me pahuchane ke baad time travel kiya tha. Or usne pure 1 saal aage tak ka future dekh liya tha. Jisme use surya kahi nahi dikha. Or uske bhai bhi ek dum hatash or nirash hi dikhate the. Jis bajah se vo sure ho gya tha ki ab surya kabhi Bapis nahi aane wala hai. Isiliye usne apna sara dhyan keval paras pathar per hi focus karna suru kar diya. Or usne past me time travel karna start kiya. Or paras pathar ko trace karne laga. Halaki pehle bhi usne trace kiya tha. Lekin uski exact jagah use abhi tak pata nahi chali thi. Isliye usne firse past me travel kiya or use is baar jagah ka pata chal gya. Or usne fir Kohima ke jungalo me paras pathar se nikalne wali reading ko pakadna start kar diya. Jisme use 3-4 mahine lag gye. Us pathar ki jagah dhudne me. Use exact location per 0.01% reading mil gyi. Jo ki kaafi thi baha per khudai karne ke liye. Or bas usne fir bahi ke ACP ka roop liya or apna kaam karne laga. Bahi beech beech me vo 1-2 mahine ka time travel bhi karta rehta tha taaki aage agar kahi kuch gadbad ho to vo uska pata laga sake. Bahi use pura confident tha ki uska pata surya ke bhai kabhi nahi laga payenge. Kyuki usne 1 saal aage tak ka future dekha tha surya ke parivar ka or use pata chal gya tha ki inse na ho payega. Or isi overconfident ne aaj uska kaam tamam kar diya. Halaki surya ki planning kuch khaas nahi thi. Lekin yaha per kaal khud apni galti se mara gya.
Khair ghar aake maine sabko kush khabri di. Jise sunke sabhi bahut kush ho gye.
Ab rahi baat us paras pathar ki to iska kya karna hai mujhe nahi pata tha. Filhaal isko safe rakhna tha. Taaki ye kisi or ke hath na lage. Or jaha tak baat rahi blackheart ki to meri sixth sense mujhse keh rahi thi ki usko jinda karne ke liye aage bahut log aane wale hai. Isliye saabdhan to rehna hi padega.
Agle din se ham sabhi ki normal life shuru ho gyi. Bache bapis clg jaane lage or sunny rishi Aarav or aadil apne apne city bapis chale gye. Bahi bhai main or Rony apne business me lag gye.
(Yaha per surya ki kahani ka ek chapter close ho chuka hai. Or ab agla chapter shuru hota hai. Jisme kai supernatural shaktiyo se surya or uske pariwar ka saamna hoga. Jinme ek eham role yuva peedi bhi nibhayegi. Or next update se kahani ka focus hoga bacho ki clg life per. Or jaise jaise story ki aage badhegi baise baise naye dushman aate jayenge. Bas apna sath banaye rakhe.)
To be continue………………….
Nice supper fantastic updatesUPDATE - 16
Kaal baha per hi khada tha or apne gusse ko kabu karne ki kosis kar raha tha. Or soch raha tha ki jisne bhi ye kiya hai. Vo yaha tak pahucha kaise. Tabhi uske kaano me ek aawaj padti hai.
Kaal- achha hua tum yaha aagye veer. Aaj tumhe bhi tumhare bhai surya ke pass pahucha dunga. Lekin usse pehle bas itna bata do ki vo pathar kaha hai. Or agar nahi batana chahte to mat batao. Kyuki us pathar ke liye main tumhare pure khandan ko itna tadpaunga ki vo khud mujhe vo de denge. Or uske baad main sabhi ko maar dunga. Ab faisla tumhe karna hai.
Uski ye baat sunkar mujhe gussa aana chahiye lekin main ek dum shant tha. Or us per has raha tha.
Main- kya baat hai. Aaj tujhe is haalat me dekhkar kitna maja aaraha hai main bata nahi sakta. Or rahi baat mujhe surya ke pass pahuchane ki to tere liye ek surprise hai.
Ye kehke maine apna mask hata diya. Or uske saamne aaya mera real face jise dekhte hi vo char kadam peechhe hat gya.
Kaal- ye impossible hai. Tu jinda kaise ho sakta hai. Jarur ye bhi tune mask pehna hai surya ka.
Main- tere is sawaal ka mere pass ek hi jawab hai.
"JAAKO RAAKHE SAIYYAN
MAAR SAKE NA KOI"
main- ummid hai tu iska matlab samajh hua hoga.
Kaal- achha hai. Baise bhi maine tujhe apne hatho se maarna chahta tha. Na ki baise jaise maine tujhe us black hole me pahuchaya tha. Ab meri vo ikchha bhi puri hogi.
Main- to fir der kis baat ki aaja.
Ye kehke maine doud laga ke uske chehre per ek punch mara. Punch kuch jyada hi power wala tha. Jisse udta hua vo laga ek ped se. Or vo ped beech me se toot gya.or isse pehle ki vo uthta main uske pass gya or use apne hatho se hawa me utha liya. Or us tute hue ped jo ki kisi nukile bhale ki tarah ho gya tha. Usper patak diya. Or uske sarir me vo ped aar paar nikal gya. Ek tarah se vo usi me fas gya tha.
Or use ab ho raha tha bhayankar dard jiski bajah se vo bahut hi bhayank chilla raha tha.or uthne ki kosis kar raha tha. Lekin vo uth nahi pa raha tha kyuki uska sarir aadhe ped me ghusa hua tha. Or use uthne ke liye koi saport nahi mil pa raha tha.
Main- uth saale ab dikha apna gussa. Sale mujhe black hole me bhejega. Maine kaha tha na ki main tujhe aisi mout marunga ki tu bas sochta hi reh jayega ki ye hua kaise. Tabhi maine apni sword se uske dono kandhe kaat diye. Or uska garden or kandhe wala hissa neeche ja gira lekin vo abhi bhi ped me ho fasa hua tha. Isse pehle ki vo fir se judta maine uske andar hath dala or uska dil nikaal liya. Or vo dil nikalne me hi bahut takat lagani pad rahi thi. Kyuki uski body use apne pass kheech rahi thi. Uski puri body me bhayankar kampann hone laga tha.
Maine apni talwar ko uske dil me fasa diya jisse uski body bhayankar jhatke lene lagi. Uske baad maine lighter se bahi sukhi ghaas per aag lagai or uske dil ko kabab ki tarah usme daal diya.
Meri talwar mere hath se chhutne ki kosis kar rahi thi uske dil ki bajah se lekin meri pakad kaafi majbut thi. Or dil nikaal lene ki bajah se uska sir jo neeche pada hua tha vo bhi nahi jud pa raha tha.
Or aise hi karib 30 min. Ki bhunai ke baad uska dil puri tarah se rakh me badal gya. Or uske dil ke khatm hote hi uska sarir bhi kisi pathar ki tarah toot kar bikhar gya.or fir apne aap hi punchtatva me vileen ho gya.
Or yaha per kaal ka ant ho gya puri tarah se. Bina koi bhi jokhim uthaye.
Saale ne bahut paresaan kiya tha. Lekin akhir kaar ye apne anjaam tak pahuch gya.
Maine apni talwar aag se bahar nikali or aag me dekha to uske dil ka bhi namo nishan nahi bacha tha.
Main puri tarah sure hona chah raha tha ki ye mar gya hai. Kahi aisa na ho ki ye sala fir se kaise bhi jinda ho jaye. Or mera time barbaad kare.
Jab main puri tarah se sure ho gya. To baha se chala gya seedha airport. Jaha harry ne mera plane bapis bhej diya tha. Darashal main isi plan se yaha aaya tha plan bhai ko le ke chala gaya or main yahi jungle me aake iski raah dekhne laga. Or Harry ne us per kadak najar rakho ki kahi ye fir se apne kisi clone ko yaha na bhej de. Lekin aisa nahi hua.
Sayad use mere yaha hone ki ummid bilkul bhi nahi thi. Or yahi iski sabse badi bhool thi. Or dusri baat. Mere black hole me jaane ke baad usne overconfident main time travel nahi kiya Verna pakka ye is samay meri band baja deta. Lekin kehte hai na. Ki geedad ki jab mout aati hai to vo sehar ki taraf jata hai. Or jab is kaal ki mout aai to ye jungle ki taraf aaya.
Lekin aaplog thode confuse jarur honge ki bhai ne jab uske kuch sathiyo ko maar diya tha to ye khabar kaal tak kyu nahi pahuch paai. Kyuki agar ye khabar use pata chal jaati fir to hungama pakka tha. Or us gufa me alarm bhi baje the. Iski jaankari bhi kaal ko nahi di gyi. Akhir kyu?
To iska jawab ye hai ki. Sabse pehla kaam to Harry ne kiya. Us area ke saare signals ko jam karke. Jis bajah se vo log kaal ko inform nahi kar pa rahe the ki yaha per kya hua hai. Or dusri baat unhe bhi nahi pata tha ki yaha per ye sab jo hua hai ye kisne kiya hai. Or agar unki security me itni badi galti vo khud hi kaal ko batate to sabse pehle to kaal unhi ko maar deta. Kyuki vo apne kaam me itni laparwahi bardast nahi karta hai. Or isi liye jab signal janm hone ki bajah se kaal ka contact nahi hua to unlogo ne socha ki jab hame vo pathar mil jayega tab ham kaal ko ye sab batayenge. Kyuki us samay uska mood achha hoga or usi kushi me sayad vo in sabko na maare. Bahi in 3 dino me kaal bhi us gufa ki taraf Bapis nahi gya tha. Kyuki vo nahi chahta tha ki kisi ki najar us per pade ki ye achanak se kaha chala jata hai. Isliye jab tak kuch khaas kaam nahi hota hai tab tak vo baha nahi jata hai. Or dusri baat ye ki veer har samay uske sath hi rehta tha. Din me use ek min. Ke liye bhi akela nahi chhodta tha. Kisi na kisi kaam se uske aas pass hi rehta tha. Jis bajah se vo apna kaam nahi kar pa raha tha. Vo raat me baha ja sakta tha. Lekin vo khud hi baha nahi jata tha.
Bahi sabse imp baat. Ki kaal to time travel karke dekh sakta tha ki uske sath kya hone wala hai or kya nahi.
To usne surya ko black hole me pahuchane ke baad time travel kiya tha. Or usne pure 1 saal aage tak ka future dekh liya tha. Jisme use surya kahi nahi dikha. Or uske bhai bhi ek dum hatash or nirash hi dikhate the. Jis bajah se vo sure ho gya tha ki ab surya kabhi Bapis nahi aane wala hai. Isiliye usne apna sara dhyan keval paras pathar per hi focus karna suru kar diya. Or usne past me time travel karna start kiya. Or paras pathar ko trace karne laga. Halaki pehle bhi usne trace kiya tha. Lekin uski exact jagah use abhi tak pata nahi chali thi. Isliye usne firse past me travel kiya or use is baar jagah ka pata chal gya. Or usne fir Kohima ke jungalo me paras pathar se nikalne wali reading ko pakadna start kar diya. Jisme use 3-4 mahine lag gye. Us pathar ki jagah dhudne me. Use exact location per 0.01% reading mil gyi. Jo ki kaafi thi baha per khudai karne ke liye. Or bas usne fir bahi ke ACP ka roop liya or apna kaam karne laga. Bahi beech beech me vo 1-2 mahine ka time travel bhi karta rehta tha taaki aage agar kahi kuch gadbad ho to vo uska pata laga sake. Bahi use pura confident tha ki uska pata surya ke bhai kabhi nahi laga payenge. Kyuki usne 1 saal aage tak ka future dekha tha surya ke parivar ka or use pata chal gya tha ki inse na ho payega. Or isi overconfident ne aaj uska kaam tamam kar diya. Halaki surya ki planning kuch khaas nahi thi. Lekin yaha per kaal khud apni galti se mara gya.
Khair ghar aake maine sabko kush khabri di. Jise sunke sabhi bahut kush ho gye.
Ab rahi baat us paras pathar ki to iska kya karna hai mujhe nahi pata tha. Filhaal isko safe rakhna tha. Taaki ye kisi or ke hath na lage. Or jaha tak baat rahi blackheart ki to meri sixth sense mujhse keh rahi thi ki usko jinda karne ke liye aage bahut log aane wale hai. Isliye saabdhan to rehna hi padega.
Agle din se ham sabhi ki normal life shuru ho gyi. Bache bapis clg jaane lage or sunny rishi Aarav or aadil apne apne city bapis chale gye. Bahi bhai main or Rony apne business me lag gye.
(Yaha per surya ki kahani ka ek chapter close ho chuka hai. Or ab agla chapter shuru hota hai. Jisme kai supernatural shaktiyo se surya or uske pariwar ka saamna hoga. Jinme ek eham role yuva peedi bhi nibhayegi. Or next update se kahani ka focus hoga bacho ki clg life per. Or jaise jaise story ki aage badhegi baise baise naye dushman aate jayenge. Bas apna sath banaye rakhe.)
To be continue………………….
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Kaal baha per hi khada tha or apne gusse ko kabu karne ki kosis kar raha tha. Or soch raha tha ki jisne bhi ye kiya hai. Vo yaha tak pahucha kaise. Tabhi uske kaano me ek aawaj padti hai.
Kaal- achha hua tum yaha aagye veer. Aaj tumhe bhi tumhare bhai surya ke pass pahucha dunga. Lekin usse pehle bas itna bata do ki vo pathar kaha hai. Or agar nahi batana chahte to mat batao. Kyuki us pathar ke liye main tumhare pure khandan ko itna tadpaunga ki vo khud mujhe vo de denge. Or uske baad main sabhi ko maar dunga. Ab faisla tumhe karna hai.
Uski ye baat sunkar mujhe gussa aana chahiye lekin main ek dum shant tha. Or us per has raha tha.
Main- kya baat hai. Aaj tujhe is haalat me dekhkar kitna maja aaraha hai main bata nahi sakta. Or rahi baat mujhe surya ke pass pahuchane ki to tere liye ek surprise hai.
Ye kehke maine apna mask hata diya. Or uske saamne aaya mera real face jise dekhte hi vo char kadam peechhe hat gya.
Kaal- ye impossible hai. Tu jinda kaise ho sakta hai. Jarur ye bhi tune mask pehna hai surya ka.
Main- tere is sawaal ka mere pass ek hi jawab hai.
"JAAKO RAAKHE SAIYYAN
MAAR SAKE NA KOI"
main- ummid hai tu iska matlab samajh hua hoga.
Kaal- achha hai. Baise bhi maine tujhe apne hatho se maarna chahta tha. Na ki baise jaise maine tujhe us black hole me pahuchaya tha. Ab meri vo ikchha bhi puri hogi.
Main- to fir der kis baat ki aaja.
Ye kehke maine doud laga ke uske chehre per ek punch mara. Punch kuch jyada hi power wala tha. Jisse udta hua vo laga ek ped se. Or vo ped beech me se toot gya.or isse pehle ki vo uthta main uske pass gya or use apne hatho se hawa me utha liya. Or us tute hue ped jo ki kisi nukile bhale ki tarah ho gya tha. Usper patak diya. Or uske sarir me vo ped aar paar nikal gya. Ek tarah se vo usi me fas gya tha.
Or use ab ho raha tha bhayankar dard jiski bajah se vo bahut hi bhayank chilla raha tha.or uthne ki kosis kar raha tha. Lekin vo uth nahi pa raha tha kyuki uska sarir aadhe ped me ghusa hua tha. Or use uthne ke liye koi saport nahi mil pa raha tha.
Main- uth saale ab dikha apna gussa. Sale mujhe black hole me bhejega. Maine kaha tha na ki main tujhe aisi mout marunga ki tu bas sochta hi reh jayega ki ye hua kaise. Tabhi maine apni sword se uske dono kandhe kaat diye. Or uska garden or kandhe wala hissa neeche ja gira lekin vo abhi bhi ped me ho fasa hua tha. Isse pehle ki vo fir se judta maine uske andar hath dala or uska dil nikaal liya. Or vo dil nikalne me hi bahut takat lagani pad rahi thi. Kyuki uski body use apne pass kheech rahi thi. Uski puri body me bhayankar kampann hone laga tha.
Maine apni talwar ko uske dil me fasa diya jisse uski body bhayankar jhatke lene lagi. Uske baad maine lighter se bahi sukhi ghaas per aag lagai or uske dil ko kabab ki tarah usme daal diya.
Meri talwar mere hath se chhutne ki kosis kar rahi thi uske dil ki bajah se lekin meri pakad kaafi majbut thi. Or dil nikaal lene ki bajah se uska sir jo neeche pada hua tha vo bhi nahi jud pa raha tha.
Or aise hi karib 30 min. Ki bhunai ke baad uska dil puri tarah se rakh me badal gya. Or uske dil ke khatm hote hi uska sarir bhi kisi pathar ki tarah toot kar bikhar gya.or fir apne aap hi punchtatva me vileen ho gya.
Or yaha per kaal ka ant ho gya puri tarah se. Bina koi bhi jokhim uthaye.
Saale ne bahut paresaan kiya tha. Lekin akhir kaar ye apne anjaam tak pahuch gya.
Maine apni talwar aag se bahar nikali or aag me dekha to uske dil ka bhi namo nishan nahi bacha tha.
Main puri tarah sure hona chah raha tha ki ye mar gya hai. Kahi aisa na ho ki ye sala fir se kaise bhi jinda ho jaye. Or mera time barbaad kare.
Jab main puri tarah se sure ho gya. To baha se chala gya seedha airport. Jaha harry ne mera plane bapis bhej diya tha. Darashal main isi plan se yaha aaya tha plan bhai ko le ke chala gaya or main yahi jungle me aake iski raah dekhne laga. Or Harry ne us per kadak najar rakho ki kahi ye fir se apne kisi clone ko yaha na bhej de. Lekin aisa nahi hua.
Sayad use mere yaha hone ki ummid bilkul bhi nahi thi. Or yahi iski sabse badi bhool thi. Or dusri baat. Mere black hole me jaane ke baad usne overconfident main time travel nahi kiya Verna pakka ye is samay meri band baja deta. Lekin kehte hai na. Ki geedad ki jab mout aati hai to vo sehar ki taraf jata hai. Or jab is kaal ki mout aai to ye jungle ki taraf aaya.
Lekin aaplog thode confuse jarur honge ki bhai ne jab uske kuch sathiyo ko maar diya tha to ye khabar kaal tak kyu nahi pahuch paai. Kyuki agar ye khabar use pata chal jaati fir to hungama pakka tha. Or us gufa me alarm bhi baje the. Iski jaankari bhi kaal ko nahi di gyi. Akhir kyu?
To iska jawab ye hai ki. Sabse pehla kaam to Harry ne kiya. Us area ke saare signals ko jam karke. Jis bajah se vo log kaal ko inform nahi kar pa rahe the ki yaha per kya hua hai. Or dusri baat unhe bhi nahi pata tha ki yaha per ye sab jo hua hai ye kisne kiya hai. Or agar unki security me itni badi galti vo khud hi kaal ko batate to sabse pehle to kaal unhi ko maar deta. Kyuki vo apne kaam me itni laparwahi bardast nahi karta hai. Or isi liye jab signal janm hone ki bajah se kaal ka contact nahi hua to unlogo ne socha ki jab hame vo pathar mil jayega tab ham kaal ko ye sab batayenge. Kyuki us samay uska mood achha hoga or usi kushi me sayad vo in sabko na maare. Bahi in 3 dino me kaal bhi us gufa ki taraf Bapis nahi gya tha. Kyuki vo nahi chahta tha ki kisi ki najar us per pade ki ye achanak se kaha chala jata hai. Isliye jab tak kuch khaas kaam nahi hota hai tab tak vo baha nahi jata hai. Or dusri baat ye ki veer har samay uske sath hi rehta tha. Din me use ek min. Ke liye bhi akela nahi chhodta tha. Kisi na kisi kaam se uske aas pass hi rehta tha. Jis bajah se vo apna kaam nahi kar pa raha tha. Vo raat me baha ja sakta tha. Lekin vo khud hi baha nahi jata tha.
Bahi sabse imp baat. Ki kaal to time travel karke dekh sakta tha ki uske sath kya hone wala hai or kya nahi.
To usne surya ko black hole me pahuchane ke baad time travel kiya tha. Or usne pure 1 saal aage tak ka future dekh liya tha. Jisme use surya kahi nahi dikha. Or uske bhai bhi ek dum hatash or nirash hi dikhate the. Jis bajah se vo sure ho gya tha ki ab surya kabhi Bapis nahi aane wala hai. Isiliye usne apna sara dhyan keval paras pathar per hi focus karna suru kar diya. Or usne past me time travel karna start kiya. Or paras pathar ko trace karne laga. Halaki pehle bhi usne trace kiya tha. Lekin uski exact jagah use abhi tak pata nahi chali thi. Isliye usne firse past me travel kiya or use is baar jagah ka pata chal gya. Or usne fir Kohima ke jungalo me paras pathar se nikalne wali reading ko pakadna start kar diya. Jisme use 3-4 mahine lag gye. Us pathar ki jagah dhudne me. Use exact location per 0.01% reading mil gyi. Jo ki kaafi thi baha per khudai karne ke liye. Or bas usne fir bahi ke ACP ka roop liya or apna kaam karne laga. Bahi beech beech me vo 1-2 mahine ka time travel bhi karta rehta tha taaki aage agar kahi kuch gadbad ho to vo uska pata laga sake. Bahi use pura confident tha ki uska pata surya ke bhai kabhi nahi laga payenge. Kyuki usne 1 saal aage tak ka future dekha tha surya ke parivar ka or use pata chal gya tha ki inse na ho payega. Or isi overconfident ne aaj uska kaam tamam kar diya. Halaki surya ki planning kuch khaas nahi thi. Lekin yaha per kaal khud apni galti se mara gya.
Khair ghar aake maine sabko kush khabri di. Jise sunke sabhi bahut kush ho gye.
Ab rahi baat us paras pathar ki to iska kya karna hai mujhe nahi pata tha. Filhaal isko safe rakhna tha. Taaki ye kisi or ke hath na lage. Or jaha tak baat rahi blackheart ki to meri sixth sense mujhse keh rahi thi ki usko jinda karne ke liye aage bahut log aane wale hai. Isliye saabdhan to rehna hi padega.
Agle din se ham sabhi ki normal life shuru ho gyi. Bache bapis clg jaane lage or sunny rishi Aarav or aadil apne apne city bapis chale gye. Bahi bhai main or Rony apne business me lag gye.
(Yaha per surya ki kahani ka ek chapter close ho chuka hai. Or ab agla chapter shuru hota hai. Jisme kai supernatural shaktiyo se surya or uske pariwar ka saamna hoga. Jinme ek eham role yuva peedi bhi nibhayegi. Or next update se kahani ka focus hoga bacho ki clg life per. Or jaise jaise story ki aage badhegi baise baise naye dushman aate jayenge. Bas apna sath banaye rakhe.)
To be continue………………….