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Yug Purush

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I don’t know how many of you are still active here, but I’m going to complete this story.
The hardest part of restarting and finishing any story is revision...at least for me. But now I’ve done that. So there’s a 90% chance I’ll actually complete it.
I’m not giving false hope. It’s just hope… because I always come back 😎 even if it takes 4–5 years and I finish what I started.
Let’s see what happens this time.
 
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Wse lgta hai sanjana atharva ko sacha pyaar krti hai 😂 lekin atharva chutiya hai jo pyaar nhi smjhata. Riya rosie bhi chod ke chali jaegi uska baap ka transfer hojaega lgta hai 😂😂😂.
Wse lgta hai quiz competition me baval krke manoge Yug Purush bhaiya
 

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“apna hath hata…” mera hath turant jhatak kar Sanjana boli “tu na meri life me jyada dakhal-andazi mat kar aur saamne se hat…”

“hat jaunga, par bata ye nishan kaise aaya… ”

“kyun…?”

“Karan Naik ne kiya ye… uski main maaaa..”

“jiju…. Never… wo main gir gayi thi…”


“jab tak sach nahi bolegi main tujhe yaha se jaane nahi de raha… aur thodi der me pure school ki nazar hum dono par hogi….”

“hat ja, Atharva… please….”

“hat jaunga par pahle bata… ye kisne kiya…”

"Tujhe kya karna hai... Tu jaa us Rosie ke paas..."
"Wo toh shaam ko milegi South Rewa Park me... Tu Topic mat badal... Aur Deception King ki aankho me dhool jhokne ki koshish mat kar..."


“Jafar se behas hui thi kuch din pahle… gusse me usne dhakka de diya, ab humara breakup bhi ho chuka hai. so koyi badi baat nahi…”


“Jafar…. Ne kiya ye…”saamne se hat-te hue main badbadaya aur fir Sanjana seek shabd kuch nahi bola... Mere saamne se hat-te hee Sanjana waha se chali gayi….


Sanjana ke waha se jaane ke kuch der baad tak main wahi khada raha aur khud ko samjhate raha ki ye mera matter nahi hai, Sanjana meri jimmedari nahi hai…. mujhe is jhamele me bhoolkar bhi nahi panda chahiye kyunki waise bhi Jafar mujhe pelne ke vichar me hai…. Ab meri life me Riya Rose hai... mujhe apne quiz competition me dhyan dena chahiye aur sath hee ye vichar karna chahiye ki Riya Rose ko kaise I Love You kahu…. Kyunki Isi me meri bhalayi hai… par….

“us Madarchod ki himmat kaise hui…. Bhosdiwale ki…”


Main wahi gate ke paas akele khada apne gusse ko control karta raha… waise mujhe gussa aata nahi par jab aa jata hai toh jata nahi hai… main wahi school ke main gate ke paas khada khud ko control karta raha aur jab mera gussa control nahi hua toh main bio class ki taraf bhaga… jaha Jafar mujhe mil sakta tha…. Dayi-mayi, chachi-kaki, uski 4-4 behane sabko chodunga aaj main.
“maar kha lunga toh kha lunga par starting me aisa kaske marunga behenchod ko… ki… maiyya chud jayegi uski…. Khopdi me maaru kya..?? Riya Rose ne bataya tha ki brain me koshika vibhajan nahi hota jiske kaaran brain me lagi chot aksar thik nahi hoti... Tu Hatt be...madarchod…"ek launde ko seedhiyo par dhakka dekar aage badhte hue maine kaha


Main gate se maine U-turn mara tha aur Sanjana ko school se jaata dekhkar jidhar se aaya tha, wapas udhar hee jaane laga. Us gadchatue~ गड़चटुये Jafar ki himmat kaise ho gayi… Sanjana par hath uthane ki… betichod ko aaj tak chhod raha tha toh khud ko bahut bada top samajhne laga tha.. yadi chahta toh kabka pelwa diya hota. Par school ka hai, rahis baap ki bigdi aaulad hai… sochkar baksh raha tha par ab nahi…… bhosdika... Incest Lover.

“Jafar kaha hai be….”bio class ke saamne jab mujhe Jafar ka ek dost mila toh seedhe uska collar pakad kar maine puchha…

“lawde, collar kaise pakda tu…”thoda dabi aawaz me daant peeskar wo bola

“main na teri maa chod dunga, yahi khade khade, teri maa ko jhuka kar... Isliye, Seedhe –seedhe bata Jafar kaha hai… bahut bada gunda samajhta hai khud ko bahinchod…”

“ruk beta, Jafar ko batane de… ye baat…”
“Jafar ko kya, tu uske baap ko bata de…. Address: bustand , Time: school ke baad… main bus-stand me hee rahunga… , wahi aakar mile ya fir jaha mujhe milna hai… wo jagah bata de…”use peechhe dhakka dete hue main bola “aur tu bhi aana Jafar ke sath… Mira randi hai… 4-5 lund ek sath le leti hai, sabse pahle tune hee ye baat school me failayi thi na…? tu bhi aa, bus stand me… bahinchod… laundi nahi pata paye toh laundi randi ho gayi…?? Maa ka doodh piya hai toh aana, warna yahi maanunga ka doodh nahi balki chut piya hai tu apni maa ka... Mahtarichod, hath kaise uthaya wo... ”

“Atharrrrvaaaaaaaaaa…..”

“ab tu kaun….. Be.... kauuunn… Riiiiiii..iyyaa… haaaaiiiiii…. Hi… hello… main Atharva nahi hoon.. Main dikhta uski tarah hoon, lekin main Atharva nahi hoon.. Main actually me uska judwa bhai hoon.. Aaj wo bimar tha toh uski jagah maine school attend kar liya... Surprise... ”

“YE SAB KYA HAI... Itne gande shabd.. "


“arey, kuch nahi… wo rehersal kar rahe the hum dono ki yadi do ladko ke beech yadi ladayi ho toh kaisi hogi… kyun be, sahi bola na…”Jafar ki dost ki taraf dekhte hue main gurraya…


“chal sale…. Ek pal ke liye toh main darr hee gaya tha, par ab Riya ke saamne aate hee teri sari hekdi nikal gayi.. ek ladki se dar gaya aur humara muqabala karega tu garib gang ke thulle… bus stand me mil tu aaj…”

“sure… I’ll be waiting there.... Riyaa.. Hiii... Toh tum sach me yahaho...?? Waise dekha tumne...?? mast scene tha na… ekdum natural acting ki hum dono ne…?”Jafar ke dost ke waha se jaane ke baad main Riya ki taraf khiska.. Par Riya mujhe door khisak gayi


“Atharva... Riya aur main.. yaha tab se khade the jab se tum neeche seedhiyo se upar aakar uska collar pakda tha aur kaise-kaise words bol raha the tum… pura impression kharab kar diya tumne kuch hee minutes me… tumhe aur tumhare grades ko dekhkar toh koyi soch bhi nahi sakta ki aisi soch bhi ho sakti hai tumhari” ye vakya Riya ke peechhe se Madhu boli…

"achchha hua jo maine saalo pahle tumne jab mujhe propose kiya tha toh accept nahi kiya tha..."

“ye maths wale hote hee aise hai… main toh pahle hee bol rahi thi tujhe Riya… par teri hee aankho me patti bandhi hui thi. Tune kya socha ki ye padhne me hoshiyar hai toh kya humari tarah decent hoga…? Bio wali mam aise hee nahi in sabse nafrat karti hai…”Madhu ke peechhe se Mini boli

“I’m sorry… Madhu , Mini. Wo gusse me fat padta hu main… par tum dono toh ye baat pahle se jaanti ho.. Fir aisa reaction..?? Tum dono toh jaanti ho ki mera gusse me main ulool-julool harkate kar jaata hoon.. Fir bhi tum dono Riya ko samjhane ki bajay, mujh par bhadak rahi ho.. Ye meri samajh ke pare hai... Kahi ye sab Jafar ki sazish..”


“bahut sahi samay me fat pade… tum…"mujhe beech me hee rok Riya mujhoar cheekhi " bahut sahi samay par fat pade tum... andaza ho gaya mujhe ki tum kis type ke ladke ho…”


“kis type ka ladka hu…? Kuch bhi mat bol.. Ab tu… aur tu Madhu.. Tujhe toh mere gali ka kutta tak reject kar de aur bol rahi hai ki Swayam Atharva Dev ne tujhe propose kiya tha..?? Exam hall me sirf scale manga tha tujhse 10th me... Abey apni shakal dekh aur meri dekh... Aukaat hai teri..? Sali chotti, botal chor... "


“wow.. Amazing Atharva, actually galti meri thi… jo main yaha aa gayi aur tumhe wo sab kahte hue sun liya… please , side do… main garden me ja rahi hu..”


Riya gusse me akele waha se school ke andar bane garden ki taraf chal di aur main chutiyo ki tarah waha khada rahkar kabhi Madhu ko dekhta toh kabhi Mini ko… mann toh kar raha tha ki dono ka baal pakad kar Gupta ji ki tarah pahle un dono ko pakad ke pelu aur fir ant me yaha se unki choti ke sahare un dono ko neeche latka du… par ye sab haqiqat me karne ki bajay,main un dono ko sirf ghoore jar aha tha….


“Bhatti tu ja, Riya ke peechhe… in dono ka kaam hee hai aag lagana…”Riya ke waha se jaane ke baad Ranjan bola...

Ranjan waha kab se khada tha.. Mujhe nahi pata.. Gusse me Maine dhyan hee nahi diya ki waha humare aalawa aur kitne log milkar ye tamasha dekh rahe the.. Par jab Ranjan ne ye kaha toh meri nazar us taraf hui.. Aur tab pata chala ki oure bio ki ladkiya aur do char ladke waha khade-khade meri is harqat ka maza le rahe the.. Maano unhe sadiyo se intejaar tha, meri aur Riya ki is bhidat kaa...


“Ranjan tu quiz team me select ho gaya.. iska matlab ye nahi ki tu bio ki topper ke character par sawal uthayega… waise bhi mere percentage tujhse jyada hai.. Bhool mat last year mere bio me 75 me se 73 number the aur tujh jaise ladko ko toh main friend request dekhkar hee block kar deti hu…”Ranjan jab mere paksh me bola toh use jhadte hue Madhu ek baar fir boli


“aur aaj tak tum dono ye nahi jaan payi ki kyun kisi ladke ne tum dono ko bhav kyun nahi diya…? Mana ki shakl se badsurat ho, wo toh aur bhi log hai… lekin tum dono andar se bhi badsurat ho…”Ranjan ne Mini aur Madhu ko ek sath lapete me liya “ aur jo ye din bhar Jafar-Jafar ka jaap karte rahti ho na tum dono… tum dono ke sath sath school ki baaki ladkiyo ko kaisi-kaisi galiya deta hai wo... Yadi ye bata dunga naa... toh sunkar marogi toh nahi par suicide jaroor kar logi…”

“Chitranjan… hum teri complain mam se karenge ki tune hume gali di hai…”Madhu fir cheekhi.. Shayad usne socha ki ek ladki ke cheekhne waha mauzood public ko sympathy hogi aur wo Madhu ka sath dene ke liye Ranjan ko pakad ke peet denge..

Par Ranjan ke khauff ke kaaran koyi bhi Madhu ka sath dene aage nahi aaya.. Yaha tak ki kisi ne ek shabd tak Ranjan ke khilaf apne muh se nahi nikala...


“awww… Madhu ko bura laga… Mini , tujhe bhi bura laga…? bio wali mam se complain karogi meri…? … toh kar de na… kya kar legi teri bio wali mam. jyada se jyada practical me 2 number kaat legi… 25 out of 25 ki jagah 23 degi … aur kya …? Mujhe kaun sa merit me aana hai, jo 1-1 number ke liye us bakloliya ki chaatu main... tum dono ki tarah… apna life goal set hai… ek Interceptor, khud ka medical store aur Sanjana jaisi ladki… is-se jyada mujhe kuch nahi chahiye aur mere ye arman teri mam ke practical me 2 number kaatne se adhure nahi rahenge… wo bhi yadi humlog quiz jeet gaye, tab toh bio wali mam 2 number kya.. 0.2 number bhi nahi kaat payegi… ab chal, foot yaha se…. warna dimag kharab hua toh pakad ke maar-mur dunga yahi pe… badsurat ladki… ab jaa naa... Ya Sexy Saahityakar ke dohe sunau.. Tab jayegi.. "


Madhu aur Mini ko Ranjan ke hawale karke main Riya ke peechhe bhaga, par khule aam bhag bhi nahi sakta tha… warna sabka dhyan hum dono ki taraf aakarshit ho jata… isliye main thodi der Riya ke peechhe bhagta aur jaise hee saamne se koyi aata dikhayi deta toh wahi khade hokar idhar-udhar… upar-neeche dekhne lagta aur kuch sochne ki acting karne lagta… jiske baad main is niskarsh par pahucha ki …. Lawda, daudne se achchha toh paidal hee chal leta.


“Riya… sun toh… wo bhavnao me bah jaata hu main, baaki main launda bilkul sharif hoon…”

“gusse me…? Kal ko yadi mujhpar gussa hue toh mujhe bhi abuse karoge aur fir bologe ki gusse me nikal gaya…?”

“kya bol rahi ho… ladkiyo ke sath main aise kabhi baat nahi karta…”


“Atharva… mujhe dogle ladke bilkul nahi pasand.. jo andar se kuch aur ho aur bahar se kuch aur dikhaye…”

“dogla…? Kya bol rahi ho yar… aise me toh duniya ka har ladka dogla ho jayega tumhare liye…”

“tum mera dimag mat khao, Atharva… dogle type ladke mujhe pasand nahi, jo kisi ki maa-bahan ko apshabd kahe… koyi tumhari maa-behan ko aisa kahta toh..?”
 

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“apna hath hata…” mera hath turant jhatak kar Sanjana boli “tu na meri life me jyada dakhal-andazi mat kar aur saamne se hat…”

“hat jaunga, par bata ye nishan kaise aaya… ”

“kyun…?”

“Karan Naik ne kiya ye… uski main maaaa..”

“jiju…. Never… wo main gir gayi thi…”


“jab tak sach nahi bolegi main tujhe yaha se jaane nahi de raha… aur thodi der me pure school ki nazar hum dono par hogi….”

“hat ja, Atharva… please….”

“hat jaunga par pahle bata… ye kisne kiya…”

"Tujhe kya karna hai... Tu jaa us Rosie ke paas..."
"Wo toh shaam ko milegi South Rewa Park me... Tu Topic mat badal... Aur Deception King ki aankho me dhool jhokne ki koshish mat kar..."


“Jafar se behas hui thi kuch din pahle… gusse me usne dhakka de diya, ab humara breakup bhi ho chuka hai. so koyi badi baat nahi…”


“Jafar…. Ne kiya ye…”saamne se hat-te hue main badbadaya aur fir Sanjana seek shabd kuch nahi bola... Mere saamne se hat-te hee Sanjana waha se chali gayi….


Sanjana ke waha se jaane ke kuch der baad tak main wahi khada raha aur khud ko samjhate raha ki ye mera matter nahi hai, Sanjana meri jimmedari nahi hai…. mujhe is jhamele me bhoolkar bhi nahi panda chahiye kyunki waise bhi Jafar mujhe pelne ke vichar me hai…. Ab meri life me Riya Rose hai... mujhe apne quiz competition me dhyan dena chahiye aur sath hee ye vichar karna chahiye ki Riya Rose ko kaise I Love You kahu…. Kyunki Isi me meri bhalayi hai… par….

“us Madarchod ki himmat kaise hui…. Bhosdiwale ki…”


Main wahi gate ke paas akele khada apne gusse ko control karta raha… waise mujhe gussa aata nahi par jab aa jata hai toh jata nahi hai… main wahi school ke main gate ke paas khada khud ko control karta raha aur jab mera gussa control nahi hua toh main bio class ki taraf bhaga… jaha Jafar mujhe mil sakta tha…. Dayi-mayi, chachi-kaki, uski 4-4 behane sabko chodunga aaj main.
“maar kha lunga toh kha lunga par starting me aisa kaske marunga behenchod ko… ki… maiyya chud jayegi uski…. Khopdi me maaru kya..?? Riya Rose ne bataya tha ki brain me koshika vibhajan nahi hota jiske kaaran brain me lagi chot aksar thik nahi hoti... Tu Hatt be...madarchod…"ek launde ko seedhiyo par dhakka dekar aage badhte hue maine kaha


Main gate se maine U-turn mara tha aur Sanjana ko school se jaata dekhkar jidhar se aaya tha, wapas udhar hee jaane laga. Us gadchatue~ गड़चटुये Jafar ki himmat kaise ho gayi… Sanjana par hath uthane ki… betichod ko aaj tak chhod raha tha toh khud ko bahut bada top samajhne laga tha.. yadi chahta toh kabka pelwa diya hota. Par school ka hai, rahis baap ki bigdi aaulad hai… sochkar baksh raha tha par ab nahi…… bhosdika... Incest Lover.

“Jafar kaha hai be….”bio class ke saamne jab mujhe Jafar ka ek dost mila toh seedhe uska collar pakad kar maine puchha…

“lawde, collar kaise pakda tu…”thoda dabi aawaz me daant peeskar wo bola

“main na teri maa chod dunga, yahi khade khade, teri maa ko jhuka kar... Isliye, Seedhe –seedhe bata Jafar kaha hai… bahut bada gunda samajhta hai khud ko bahinchod…”

“ruk beta, Jafar ko batane de… ye baat…”
“Jafar ko kya, tu uske baap ko bata de…. Address: bustand , Time: school ke baad… main bus-stand me hee rahunga… , wahi aakar mile ya fir jaha mujhe milna hai… wo jagah bata de…”use peechhe dhakka dete hue main bola “aur tu bhi aana Jafar ke sath… Mira randi hai… 4-5 lund ek sath le leti hai, sabse pahle tune hee ye baat school me failayi thi na…? tu bhi aa, bus stand me… bahinchod… laundi nahi pata paye toh laundi randi ho gayi…?? Maa ka doodh piya hai toh aana, warna yahi maanunga ka doodh nahi balki chut piya hai tu apni maa ka... Mahtarichod, hath kaise uthaya wo... ”

“Atharrrrvaaaaaaaaaa…..”

“ab tu kaun….. Be.... kauuunn… Riiiiiii..iyyaa… haaaaiiiiii…. Hi… hello… main Atharva nahi hoon.. Main dikhta uski tarah hoon, lekin main Atharva nahi hoon.. Main actually me uska judwa bhai hoon.. Aaj wo bimar tha toh uski jagah maine school attend kar liya... Surprise... ”

“YE SAB KYA HAI... Itne gande shabd.. "


“arey, kuch nahi… wo rehersal kar rahe the hum dono ki yadi do ladko ke beech yadi ladayi ho toh kaisi hogi… kyun be, sahi bola na…”Jafar ki dost ki taraf dekhte hue main gurraya…


“chal sale…. Ek pal ke liye toh main darr hee gaya tha, par ab Riya ke saamne aate hee teri sari hekdi nikal gayi.. ek ladki se dar gaya aur humara muqabala karega tu garib gang ke thulle… bus stand me mil tu aaj…”

“sure… I’ll be waiting there.... Riyaa.. Hiii... Toh tum sach me yahaho...?? Waise dekha tumne...?? mast scene tha na… ekdum natural acting ki hum dono ne…?”Jafar ke dost ke waha se jaane ke baad main Riya ki taraf khiska.. Par Riya mujhe door khisak gayi


“Atharva... Riya aur main.. yaha tab se khade the jab se tum neeche seedhiyo se upar aakar uska collar pakda tha aur kaise-kaise words bol raha the tum… pura impression kharab kar diya tumne kuch hee minutes me… tumhe aur tumhare grades ko dekhkar toh koyi soch bhi nahi sakta ki aisi soch bhi ho sakti hai tumhari” ye vakya Riya ke peechhe se Madhu boli…

"achchha hua jo maine saalo pahle tumne jab mujhe propose kiya tha toh accept nahi kiya tha..."

“ye maths wale hote hee aise hai… main toh pahle hee bol rahi thi tujhe Riya… par teri hee aankho me patti bandhi hui thi. Tune kya socha ki ye padhne me hoshiyar hai toh kya humari tarah decent hoga…? Bio wali mam aise hee nahi in sabse nafrat karti hai…”Madhu ke peechhe se Mini boli

“I’m sorry… Madhu , Mini. Wo gusse me fat padta hu main… par tum dono toh ye baat pahle se jaanti ho.. Fir aisa reaction..?? Tum dono toh jaanti ho ki mera gusse me main ulool-julool harkate kar jaata hoon.. Fir bhi tum dono Riya ko samjhane ki bajay, mujh par bhadak rahi ho.. Ye meri samajh ke pare hai... Kahi ye sab Jafar ki sazish..”


“bahut sahi samay me fat pade… tum…"mujhe beech me hee rok Riya mujhoar cheekhi " bahut sahi samay par fat pade tum... andaza ho gaya mujhe ki tum kis type ke ladke ho…”


“kis type ka ladka hu…? Kuch bhi mat bol.. Ab tu… aur tu Madhu.. Tujhe toh mere gali ka kutta tak reject kar de aur bol rahi hai ki Swayam Atharva Dev ne tujhe propose kiya tha..?? Exam hall me sirf scale manga tha tujhse 10th me... Abey apni shakal dekh aur meri dekh... Aukaat hai teri..? Sali chotti, botal chor... "


“wow.. Amazing Atharva, actually galti meri thi… jo main yaha aa gayi aur tumhe wo sab kahte hue sun liya… please , side do… main garden me ja rahi hu..”


Riya gusse me akele waha se school ke andar bane garden ki taraf chal di aur main chutiyo ki tarah waha khada rahkar kabhi Madhu ko dekhta toh kabhi Mini ko… mann toh kar raha tha ki dono ka baal pakad kar Gupta ji ki tarah pahle un dono ko pakad ke pelu aur fir ant me yaha se unki choti ke sahare un dono ko neeche latka du… par ye sab haqiqat me karne ki bajay,main un dono ko sirf ghoore jar aha tha….


“Bhatti tu ja, Riya ke peechhe… in dono ka kaam hee hai aag lagana…”Riya ke waha se jaane ke baad Ranjan bola...

Ranjan waha kab se khada tha.. Mujhe nahi pata.. Gusse me Maine dhyan hee nahi diya ki waha humare aalawa aur kitne log milkar ye tamasha dekh rahe the.. Par jab Ranjan ne ye kaha toh meri nazar us taraf hui.. Aur tab pata chala ki oure bio ki ladkiya aur do char ladke waha khade-khade meri is harqat ka maza le rahe the.. Maano unhe sadiyo se intejaar tha, meri aur Riya ki is bhidat kaa...


“Ranjan tu quiz team me select ho gaya.. iska matlab ye nahi ki tu bio ki topper ke character par sawal uthayega… waise bhi mere percentage tujhse jyada hai.. Bhool mat last year mere bio me 75 me se 73 number the aur tujh jaise ladko ko toh main friend request dekhkar hee block kar deti hu…”Ranjan jab mere paksh me bola toh use jhadte hue Madhu ek baar fir boli


“aur aaj tak tum dono ye nahi jaan payi ki kyun kisi ladke ne tum dono ko bhav kyun nahi diya…? Mana ki shakl se badsurat ho, wo toh aur bhi log hai… lekin tum dono andar se bhi badsurat ho…”Ranjan ne Mini aur Madhu ko ek sath lapete me liya “ aur jo ye din bhar Jafar-Jafar ka jaap karte rahti ho na tum dono… tum dono ke sath sath school ki baaki ladkiyo ko kaisi-kaisi galiya deta hai wo... Yadi ye bata dunga naa... toh sunkar marogi toh nahi par suicide jaroor kar logi…”

“Chitranjan… hum teri complain mam se karenge ki tune hume gali di hai…”Madhu fir cheekhi.. Shayad usne socha ki ek ladki ke cheekhne waha mauzood public ko sympathy hogi aur wo Madhu ka sath dene ke liye Ranjan ko pakad ke peet denge..

Par Ranjan ke khauff ke kaaran koyi bhi Madhu ka sath dene aage nahi aaya.. Yaha tak ki kisi ne ek shabd tak Ranjan ke khilaf apne muh se nahi nikala...


“awww… Madhu ko bura laga… Mini , tujhe bhi bura laga…? bio wali mam se complain karogi meri…? … toh kar de na… kya kar legi teri bio wali mam. jyada se jyada practical me 2 number kaat legi… 25 out of 25 ki jagah 23 degi … aur kya …? Mujhe kaun sa merit me aana hai, jo 1-1 number ke liye us bakloliya ki chaatu main... tum dono ki tarah… apna life goal set hai… ek Interceptor, khud ka medical store aur Sanjana jaisi ladki… is-se jyada mujhe kuch nahi chahiye aur mere ye arman teri mam ke practical me 2 number kaatne se adhure nahi rahenge… wo bhi yadi humlog quiz jeet gaye, tab toh bio wali mam 2 number kya.. 0.2 number bhi nahi kaat payegi… ab chal, foot yaha se…. warna dimag kharab hua toh pakad ke maar-mur dunga yahi pe… badsurat ladki… ab jaa naa... Ya Sexy Saahityakar ke dohe sunau.. Tab jayegi.. "


Madhu aur Mini ko Ranjan ke hawale karke main Riya ke peechhe bhaga, par khule aam bhag bhi nahi sakta tha… warna sabka dhyan hum dono ki taraf aakarshit ho jata… isliye main thodi der Riya ke peechhe bhagta aur jaise hee saamne se koyi aata dikhayi deta toh wahi khade hokar idhar-udhar… upar-neeche dekhne lagta aur kuch sochne ki acting karne lagta… jiske baad main is niskarsh par pahucha ki …. Lawda, daudne se achchha toh paidal hee chal leta.


“Riya… sun toh… wo bhavnao me bah jaata hu main, baaki main launda bilkul sharif hoon…”

“gusse me…? Kal ko yadi mujhpar gussa hue toh mujhe bhi abuse karoge aur fir bologe ki gusse me nikal gaya…?”

“kya bol rahi ho… ladkiyo ke sath main aise kabhi baat nahi karta…”


“Atharva… mujhe dogle ladke bilkul nahi pasand.. jo andar se kuch aur ho aur bahar se kuch aur dikhaye…”

“dogla…? Kya bol rahi ho yar… aise me toh duniya ka har ladka dogla ho jayega tumhare liye…”

“tum mera dimag mat khao, Atharva… dogle type ladke mujhe pasand nahi, jo kisi ki maa-bahan ko apshabd kahe… koyi tumhari maa-behan ko aisa kahta toh..?”
Deception king fail hogya aaj lgta hai 😂😂😂
Lgta hai sanjana bhi jafar naam ki shi goli de gye
Lekin wo mini aur madhu ke saath gupta sir wala seen krdeta atharva toh epic tha 😂😂😂
Wse lgta hai ranjan sanjana ko kafi hadd takk impress kr chuka hai jo khuleaam bola ki sanjana jaise ldki chaiye
 

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“apna hath hata…” mera hath turant jhatak kar Sanjana boli “tu na meri life me jyada dakhal-andazi mat kar aur saamne se hat…”

“hat jaunga, par bata ye nishan kaise aaya… ”

“kyun…?”

“Karan Naik ne kiya ye… uski main maaaa..”

“jiju…. Never… wo main gir gayi thi…”


“jab tak sach nahi bolegi main tujhe yaha se jaane nahi de raha… aur thodi der me pure school ki nazar hum dono par hogi….”

“hat ja, Atharva… please….”

“hat jaunga par pahle bata… ye kisne kiya…”

"Tujhe kya karna hai... Tu jaa us Rosie ke paas..."
"Wo toh shaam ko milegi South Rewa Park me... Tu Topic mat badal... Aur Deception King ki aankho me dhool jhokne ki koshish mat kar..."


“Jafar se behas hui thi kuch din pahle… gusse me usne dhakka de diya, ab humara breakup bhi ho chuka hai. so koyi badi baat nahi…”


“Jafar…. Ne kiya ye…”saamne se hat-te hue main badbadaya aur fir Sanjana seek shabd kuch nahi bola... Mere saamne se hat-te hee Sanjana waha se chali gayi….


Sanjana ke waha se jaane ke kuch der baad tak main wahi khada raha aur khud ko samjhate raha ki ye mera matter nahi hai, Sanjana meri jimmedari nahi hai…. mujhe is jhamele me bhoolkar bhi nahi panda chahiye kyunki waise bhi Jafar mujhe pelne ke vichar me hai…. Ab meri life me Riya Rose hai... mujhe apne quiz competition me dhyan dena chahiye aur sath hee ye vichar karna chahiye ki Riya Rose ko kaise I Love You kahu…. Kyunki Isi me meri bhalayi hai… par….

“us Madarchod ki himmat kaise hui…. Bhosdiwale ki…”


Main wahi gate ke paas akele khada apne gusse ko control karta raha… waise mujhe gussa aata nahi par jab aa jata hai toh jata nahi hai… main wahi school ke main gate ke paas khada khud ko control karta raha aur jab mera gussa control nahi hua toh main bio class ki taraf bhaga… jaha Jafar mujhe mil sakta tha…. Dayi-mayi, chachi-kaki, uski 4-4 behane sabko chodunga aaj main.
“maar kha lunga toh kha lunga par starting me aisa kaske marunga behenchod ko… ki… maiyya chud jayegi uski…. Khopdi me maaru kya..?? Riya Rose ne bataya tha ki brain me koshika vibhajan nahi hota jiske kaaran brain me lagi chot aksar thik nahi hoti... Tu Hatt be...madarchod…"ek launde ko seedhiyo par dhakka dekar aage badhte hue maine kaha


Main gate se maine U-turn mara tha aur Sanjana ko school se jaata dekhkar jidhar se aaya tha, wapas udhar hee jaane laga. Us gadchatue~ गड़चटुये Jafar ki himmat kaise ho gayi… Sanjana par hath uthane ki… betichod ko aaj tak chhod raha tha toh khud ko bahut bada top samajhne laga tha.. yadi chahta toh kabka pelwa diya hota. Par school ka hai, rahis baap ki bigdi aaulad hai… sochkar baksh raha tha par ab nahi…… bhosdika... Incest Lover.

“Jafar kaha hai be….”bio class ke saamne jab mujhe Jafar ka ek dost mila toh seedhe uska collar pakad kar maine puchha…

“lawde, collar kaise pakda tu…”thoda dabi aawaz me daant peeskar wo bola

“main na teri maa chod dunga, yahi khade khade, teri maa ko jhuka kar... Isliye, Seedhe –seedhe bata Jafar kaha hai… bahut bada gunda samajhta hai khud ko bahinchod…”

“ruk beta, Jafar ko batane de… ye baat…”
“Jafar ko kya, tu uske baap ko bata de…. Address: bustand , Time: school ke baad… main bus-stand me hee rahunga… , wahi aakar mile ya fir jaha mujhe milna hai… wo jagah bata de…”use peechhe dhakka dete hue main bola “aur tu bhi aana Jafar ke sath… Mira randi hai… 4-5 lund ek sath le leti hai, sabse pahle tune hee ye baat school me failayi thi na…? tu bhi aa, bus stand me… bahinchod… laundi nahi pata paye toh laundi randi ho gayi…?? Maa ka doodh piya hai toh aana, warna yahi maanunga ka doodh nahi balki chut piya hai tu apni maa ka... Mahtarichod, hath kaise uthaya wo... ”

“Atharrrrvaaaaaaaaaa…..”

“ab tu kaun….. Be.... kauuunn… Riiiiiii..iyyaa… haaaaiiiiii…. Hi… hello… main Atharva nahi hoon.. Main dikhta uski tarah hoon, lekin main Atharva nahi hoon.. Main actually me uska judwa bhai hoon.. Aaj wo bimar tha toh uski jagah maine school attend kar liya... Surprise... ”

“YE SAB KYA HAI... Itne gande shabd.. "


“arey, kuch nahi… wo rehersal kar rahe the hum dono ki yadi do ladko ke beech yadi ladayi ho toh kaisi hogi… kyun be, sahi bola na…”Jafar ki dost ki taraf dekhte hue main gurraya…


“chal sale…. Ek pal ke liye toh main darr hee gaya tha, par ab Riya ke saamne aate hee teri sari hekdi nikal gayi.. ek ladki se dar gaya aur humara muqabala karega tu garib gang ke thulle… bus stand me mil tu aaj…”

“sure… I’ll be waiting there.... Riyaa.. Hiii... Toh tum sach me yahaho...?? Waise dekha tumne...?? mast scene tha na… ekdum natural acting ki hum dono ne…?”Jafar ke dost ke waha se jaane ke baad main Riya ki taraf khiska.. Par Riya mujhe door khisak gayi


“Atharva... Riya aur main.. yaha tab se khade the jab se tum neeche seedhiyo se upar aakar uska collar pakda tha aur kaise-kaise words bol raha the tum… pura impression kharab kar diya tumne kuch hee minutes me… tumhe aur tumhare grades ko dekhkar toh koyi soch bhi nahi sakta ki aisi soch bhi ho sakti hai tumhari” ye vakya Riya ke peechhe se Madhu boli…

"achchha hua jo maine saalo pahle tumne jab mujhe propose kiya tha toh accept nahi kiya tha..."

“ye maths wale hote hee aise hai… main toh pahle hee bol rahi thi tujhe Riya… par teri hee aankho me patti bandhi hui thi. Tune kya socha ki ye padhne me hoshiyar hai toh kya humari tarah decent hoga…? Bio wali mam aise hee nahi in sabse nafrat karti hai…”Madhu ke peechhe se Mini boli

“I’m sorry… Madhu , Mini. Wo gusse me fat padta hu main… par tum dono toh ye baat pahle se jaanti ho.. Fir aisa reaction..?? Tum dono toh jaanti ho ki mera gusse me main ulool-julool harkate kar jaata hoon.. Fir bhi tum dono Riya ko samjhane ki bajay, mujh par bhadak rahi ho.. Ye meri samajh ke pare hai... Kahi ye sab Jafar ki sazish..”


“bahut sahi samay me fat pade… tum…"mujhe beech me hee rok Riya mujhoar cheekhi " bahut sahi samay par fat pade tum... andaza ho gaya mujhe ki tum kis type ke ladke ho…”


“kis type ka ladka hu…? Kuch bhi mat bol.. Ab tu… aur tu Madhu.. Tujhe toh mere gali ka kutta tak reject kar de aur bol rahi hai ki Swayam Atharva Dev ne tujhe propose kiya tha..?? Exam hall me sirf scale manga tha tujhse 10th me... Abey apni shakal dekh aur meri dekh... Aukaat hai teri..? Sali chotti, botal chor... "


“wow.. Amazing Atharva, actually galti meri thi… jo main yaha aa gayi aur tumhe wo sab kahte hue sun liya… please , side do… main garden me ja rahi hu..”


Riya gusse me akele waha se school ke andar bane garden ki taraf chal di aur main chutiyo ki tarah waha khada rahkar kabhi Madhu ko dekhta toh kabhi Mini ko… mann toh kar raha tha ki dono ka baal pakad kar Gupta ji ki tarah pahle un dono ko pakad ke pelu aur fir ant me yaha se unki choti ke sahare un dono ko neeche latka du… par ye sab haqiqat me karne ki bajay,main un dono ko sirf ghoore jar aha tha….


“Bhatti tu ja, Riya ke peechhe… in dono ka kaam hee hai aag lagana…”Riya ke waha se jaane ke baad Ranjan bola...

Ranjan waha kab se khada tha.. Mujhe nahi pata.. Gusse me Maine dhyan hee nahi diya ki waha humare aalawa aur kitne log milkar ye tamasha dekh rahe the.. Par jab Ranjan ne ye kaha toh meri nazar us taraf hui.. Aur tab pata chala ki oure bio ki ladkiya aur do char ladke waha khade-khade meri is harqat ka maza le rahe the.. Maano unhe sadiyo se intejaar tha, meri aur Riya ki is bhidat kaa...


“Ranjan tu quiz team me select ho gaya.. iska matlab ye nahi ki tu bio ki topper ke character par sawal uthayega… waise bhi mere percentage tujhse jyada hai.. Bhool mat last year mere bio me 75 me se 73 number the aur tujh jaise ladko ko toh main friend request dekhkar hee block kar deti hu…”Ranjan jab mere paksh me bola toh use jhadte hue Madhu ek baar fir boli


“aur aaj tak tum dono ye nahi jaan payi ki kyun kisi ladke ne tum dono ko bhav kyun nahi diya…? Mana ki shakl se badsurat ho, wo toh aur bhi log hai… lekin tum dono andar se bhi badsurat ho…”Ranjan ne Mini aur Madhu ko ek sath lapete me liya “ aur jo ye din bhar Jafar-Jafar ka jaap karte rahti ho na tum dono… tum dono ke sath sath school ki baaki ladkiyo ko kaisi-kaisi galiya deta hai wo... Yadi ye bata dunga naa... toh sunkar marogi toh nahi par suicide jaroor kar logi…”

“Chitranjan… hum teri complain mam se karenge ki tune hume gali di hai…”Madhu fir cheekhi.. Shayad usne socha ki ek ladki ke cheekhne waha mauzood public ko sympathy hogi aur wo Madhu ka sath dene ke liye Ranjan ko pakad ke peet denge..

Par Ranjan ke khauff ke kaaran koyi bhi Madhu ka sath dene aage nahi aaya.. Yaha tak ki kisi ne ek shabd tak Ranjan ke khilaf apne muh se nahi nikala...


“awww… Madhu ko bura laga… Mini , tujhe bhi bura laga…? bio wali mam se complain karogi meri…? … toh kar de na… kya kar legi teri bio wali mam. jyada se jyada practical me 2 number kaat legi… 25 out of 25 ki jagah 23 degi … aur kya …? Mujhe kaun sa merit me aana hai, jo 1-1 number ke liye us bakloliya ki chaatu main... tum dono ki tarah… apna life goal set hai… ek Interceptor, khud ka medical store aur Sanjana jaisi ladki… is-se jyada mujhe kuch nahi chahiye aur mere ye arman teri mam ke practical me 2 number kaatne se adhure nahi rahenge… wo bhi yadi humlog quiz jeet gaye, tab toh bio wali mam 2 number kya.. 0.2 number bhi nahi kaat payegi… ab chal, foot yaha se…. warna dimag kharab hua toh pakad ke maar-mur dunga yahi pe… badsurat ladki… ab jaa naa... Ya Sexy Saahityakar ke dohe sunau.. Tab jayegi.. "


Madhu aur Mini ko Ranjan ke hawale karke main Riya ke peechhe bhaga, par khule aam bhag bhi nahi sakta tha… warna sabka dhyan hum dono ki taraf aakarshit ho jata… isliye main thodi der Riya ke peechhe bhagta aur jaise hee saamne se koyi aata dikhayi deta toh wahi khade hokar idhar-udhar… upar-neeche dekhne lagta aur kuch sochne ki acting karne lagta… jiske baad main is niskarsh par pahucha ki …. Lawda, daudne se achchha toh paidal hee chal leta.


“Riya… sun toh… wo bhavnao me bah jaata hu main, baaki main launda bilkul sharif hoon…”

“gusse me…? Kal ko yadi mujhpar gussa hue toh mujhe bhi abuse karoge aur fir bologe ki gusse me nikal gaya…?”

“kya bol rahi ho… ladkiyo ke sath main aise kabhi baat nahi karta…”


“Atharva… mujhe dogle ladke bilkul nahi pasand.. jo andar se kuch aur ho aur bahar se kuch aur dikhaye…”

“dogla…? Kya bol rahi ho yar… aise me toh duniya ka har ladka dogla ho jayega tumhare liye…”

“tum mera dimag mat khao, Atharva… dogle type ladke mujhe pasand nahi, jo kisi ki maa-bahan ko apshabd kahe… koyi tumhari maa-behan ko aisa kahta toh..?”

Kati zabar update bhai...
Bole to idhar apne ko lag raha h Sanjana ko bhi Atharva se...turu luvvbb hogya h ...
Khaire ye madhu aur mini ne kafi bhadka diya h riya ko...
Apna bass chale to gali ke kutte chodd du done ke piche khair...
Ranjan is like vo vala dost jo ...kabhi kamm aye ya naa aye but jab situation against ho jaye.. sab dhire-2 target karne lage to vo sath deta h aur bacha le jata h...
Apne ko aisa lag raha h ki ... Atharva manaa lega apni riya ko ...but akashar aisa hota ki jo log kann ke kache hote h vo achhe rishtey kho dete h...
Ekk no. update bro...
And waiting for your next super update....
Intezar rahegaa..
 

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Kuch toh aaj bhi hai atharva aur sanjana ke darmiyan ...
nafrat to hargiz nahi...
shayad dil mein chupa pyar hi sahi..

1) damn it damn it damn it..... :doh: :banghead:
culprit to wo nibba Jafar nikla jisne hath uthaya sanjana pe..
yaar agar culprit karan naik hota to kitna achha hota...hai na..
atharva abhi ke abhi jake us karan naik ki band baja deta... :whipper::crazykill: 2) usse bhi buri khabar hero khud ki hi ijjat sare aam nilam kar diya....kya ushe is baat ki itni bhi samajh nahi ki gussa sehat ke liye hanikarak hain.. aur apne aas pas walo ke liye bhi... is gusse ke chalte na uthane wale kadam bhi uth jaate hai.. muh se kabhi na nikalne wali bure shabd nikal jaate hai.. aur iske chalte baad kya hota ye to sabhi ko pata hai.... phir bhi itni gandi gaariya de raha tha wo... are kam se kam ye to dekh leta ki udhar riya rose bhi ho sakti hai bio class mein...
3) isse bhi buri khabar ye ki Bichare masoom se gupta ji wo sab nahi dekh paye jo atharva udhar kiya.. matlab wo kand :D
Are Yug Purush saheb kam se kam gupta ji ko dikha dete aap.... aur dekh bhi lete gupta ji to aisi Kounsi afat aa jaati... are thodi bahot entertainment ke liye sahi... unka mood fresh ho jata :D
4) sabse khushi ki baat ye ki ab riya aur atharva alag ho jayenge.... aur sanjana aur atharva Karib aayenge :D
abhi na sahi, in future sahi.... matlab ab jab present time mein atharva apne ghar jaa raha hai to sanjana uske liye raah dekh rahi hogi,... ek intezaar ki kab atharva aaye aur kab atharva aur sanjana ki prem kahani suru ho jaye :yesss:
5) dost ho to ranjan jaisa.....
waise usne tit for tat jawab diya hai us madhu aur mini ko.....

Madhu kya sachme mein botal chor hai :D
aur akhir mein jo hota hai achhe ke liye hi hota hai :D
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills gyani sir :yourock: :yourock:
 

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When I read the story... What I do exactly explained by this ..

Teri mitti mein mill jawaan
Gul banke main khill jawaan
Itni si hai dil ki aarzoo
Teri nadiyon mein beh jawaan
Teri kheton mein lehrawaan
Itni si hai dil ki aarzoo

Apne padhne ka swag alag level ka hota hai... Aur fir apni feeling likhne ka bhi... But dusre threads par people take it otherwise...

Isliye abhi se comment ke liye ... Gustakhi maaf :smarty:
 

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Aaj ke din ke baare me sochkar, kal puri raat mujhe neend nahi aayi thi…. main raat bhar bistar par sirf karwate badlta raha… main puri raat subah hone ka besabri se intezaar karta raha, par ab jab subah ho chuki thi toh sochne laga ki subah honi hee nahi chahiye thi. Kyunki aaj jo mai karne wala tha uska asar baad me bahut bhayanak hoga , iska mujhe is waqt koyi andaja tak nahi tha. Khair, subah bhi hui aur main bistar se utha bhi aur maine wo kiya bhi, jiska nateeza bahut bhayanak hone wala tha.

Launda propose karne ki hi soch raha hoga... Wo bhi love feeling wali... Warna "lund na kisi se darte hai hum"... Best slogan by land of white tigers laudas :D

Apne flat se office tak ki lagbhag aadhi doori tay karne ke baad maine jab jeb me hath firaya to mujhe dhyan aaya ki mai mobile tak bhool chuka hoon... Isliye mujhe aadhi doori se wapas lautna pada + deo bhi nahi maara tha... Isliye... Wapas to lautna hee tha

Gyani bhai ek sawal kaundh raha hai... Ye mobile pane pakit me rakhe hota aur kewal deo na lagaya hota to kya tab bhi ghar jata ya specially deo ke liye rukta... Bajar se kharid kar deo maarta :D

Pahle toh Ved jaldi-jaldi chal raha tha , par jab usne dekh liya ki maine lift rok di hai toh ab wo dheere-dheere chalne laga… kaan me earphone fasaye, gaana sunte hue, music ki dhun me magan apne kandhe uchkate hue wo ekdum… ekdum dheere-dheere meri taraf aa raha tha… kabhi-kabhi toh wo music ki dhun me do kadam peechhe ho jata aur fir koodkar aage aata aur mujhe hath dikhakar jor se chillata… YOOO…….

Ek hi feeling aati hai.. sala mc jaldi kar

acha.. wo ballu.. Nagdi gang ka leader… arey kuch nahi…white tiger se panga lega toh yahi hoga na….

:ecs: well said mohna :D

wo jaise hee mere saamne aati hai, ya main jaise hee uske saamne aata hu… wo bematlab muskurane lagti hai… wo bhi meri taraf dekh kar… 8 ghante ki shift me wo sirf mujhe hee mujhe dekhte rahti hai, jaise use mere bina ek pal bhi chain naa milta ho… main usko pyar se aajkal kuch bhi bolu… wo naa toh

Aay haaayyy ye ishq se pahle ishq ke ishare... Kyon na dil dagamagaye :D

aye mere bakchod aashiq, tu toh pelayega hee , sath me mujhe bhi lekar dubega… waise bhi 3 baar attempt karne ke baad Ericsson walo ne naukri par rakha hai….

Ye sale sath wale fauttu pahle demoralise karne se na chukenge... Maar ek ghuma kar pahle fir baat karna sale se... ek to pahle se nurvous upar se aur nurvousa raha hai...

aur waise kis hint ki baat kar raha hai tu… ? yahi hint lekar tu ab tak kitni baar kitni ladkiyo ko approach kar chuka hai…? Aur jo hint tune bataye hai… waise toh main bhi tujhe dekhkar bematlab apna daant dikha deta hu, 8 ghante me se 8 ghante tere sath rahta hu… toh kya tu ab mujhe bhi propose karega…?”

Gyey found :dwarf:

aur uske kuch dino baad 2-2 lund bhi ho jayenge tere paas … ek se ladki ko chodega, toh ek se khud ko… wo dusari jeb me wahi hai na , jo main soch raha hai…”

Aise adbhut imagination... Engineering wala launda hai kya :?:

“sale teri izzat nahi hai, lekin meri toh hai… kya sochegi Nivedita Rani mere bare me… jab tu use chocolate dega toh… hum dono land of white tigers se belong karte hai…”

Mohana... Sohana :ecs: ... Martand singh ji aatama udhar hi kahin aas pas hoyegi... 😂😂😂
 
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