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UPDATE NO 58
SABSE PEHLE TOH SABSE MAFI CHAHUGA KE ITNE DIN TAK LAPATA RAHA PAR ZINDGI KE PANNE KAYI BAAR ULJH JATE HAI JISE AAP TEEK KARNA CHAHTE HO MAIN BHI WAHI KAR RAHA THA AAJ FREE HUA TOH SOCH APP SAB KI DIL KI BAAT SUNN LO DOSTO UPDATE SURU KAR RAHA HU BAS AAP SAB PYAR DE DUBRA PADH KAR HOPE SO PEHLE JAISA HI LIKH PAO GAA
Raj:*yar main toh pehle se baitha tha toh sab mujhe kuch maat kaho sanjana hi aayi hai
Rashmi:*aayi hai yaa bulya hai bhaiya
Raj:*meri maa aayi hai
Naina:*ab chlo ghar bhi jana hai ke nhi
Raj:*jana hai Chlo ab
Uske baad sabhi ghar ki tarf chl dete hai geeta sochti hai ke raj uske sath waqt gujare par woh keh nhi paati aur ghar ki tarf chl deti hai
AB Aage.............
rashmi apne room me baithi thi ke uske room ka door open hota hai aur ander niharika aa jati hai sath me coffee lekar
woh dono ki coffee lekar aayi thi woh table par coffee rakh kar pehle door band kar deti hai sath me rashmi ke samne baith jati hai
raj ne toh pehle hi rashmi ko bata diya tha ke niharika ko pata lag gya hai aur woh baat kare gyi jada dare nhi aur dil se faisla kare
niharika ko dekh rashmi ko pasina aa raha tha dono khamoshi se baithe the niharika ke door band karne se thodi preshan jarur hoyi thi par rashmi bhi apne aap ko majboot kar rhi li thi
rashmi:*didi apne door kyo band kar diya
niharika:*bas aise hi coffee le naa
rashmi bhi kuch na show karte huye apne aap ko normal rakh coffee utha leti hai
dono ab khamoshi se coffee peete hai
niharika:*rashmi life ke bare me kya socha hai i mean shadi ke bare me
rashmi:*kya didi aap bhi abhi toh college start kiya hai abhi kya karo gyi shadi kar ke aap ne kya socha hai main toh bas enjoy karo gyi filhal
niharika:*achi baat hai maine bhi jada nhi socha hai vaise rashmi kya tera koi bf hai
rashmi:*haa hai didi aur woh sabse best hai (niraash ho) par uss se meri shadi nhi ho sakti toh bas, masti kar rhi ho
niharika toh pehle hi Shock me thi me iska bf hai par ab jada thi ke uss se bhi shadi nhi karne wali ab usse samjh nhi aa raha tha
niharika:*aisa kya hai jo shadi nhi kar sakti tu aur kon hai woh ladka main janti ho
rashmi:*achi tarh se
niharika:*tu kiski baat kar rhi hai jise main bhi janti hu
rashmi:*didi app kya bhaiya ko nhi janti ho wahi toh mere bf hai best friend
rashmi itna bol ke hasne lagti hai jis karn niharika ko bhi baat samjh aa jati hai
niharika:*pagal ladki main kya poch rhi thi tu kya baata rahi hai aur main janti ho tere best friend ka matlb raj ke sath
rashmi:*kya hua didi app achanak kyo aise bol rahi hai
niharika:*toh kya bolo tu baata tum dono ek aise rishte se judde ho jise samaj galat manta hai
rashmi:*mante hai didi iss me koi sakk nhi par main nhi manti aur naa bhaiya mante hai main janti ho apko sab pata hai aur bhaiya ne jo kaha woh main bhi kehti ho didi yeh mera faisla hai mere liye bhaiya se acha koi aur option nhi hai jis ladke ko sab pane chahte hai usse main naa sif apna bana sakti ho balki jo marji mang sakti ho dono ristho se
niharika:*par pagal ladki kabhi socha hai ke bahar ke logo ko pata lage ga toh kya hoga bahar ka toh chhod agar ghar par pata laga toh kya hoga tum dono sab sab thuke gye
rashmi:*haa didi yeh baat sahi hai par main nhi darti kisi se aur main bhai ko chahti ho aur jis galti se aap ko pata laga ab kabhi nhi hone duga vada hai
niharika:*matlb Tum raj ko nhi chhodo gyi par mera kaam toh hai samjhna maine dono ko samjha diya ab aap dono ka faisla hai jo marji karo
niharika waha se nikl jati hai uske jate hai rashmi rahat ki saas li uske mann me bahut se dar chl rahe the jise uss ne raj ke khayal matar se apne dil se nikl diye aur chehre par muskurahat aa gya
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raj apne ghar se saam ko nikl jata hai kaam bata aur sidha chla jata hai geeta ke ghar jaise hi raj uske ghar ke pass aata hai woh call kar deta hai
raj:*kya kar rhi ho
geeta:*kuch nhi room thi mummy aayi nhi hai naa
raj:*teek hai main niche hu darwaja kholo
geeta:*(khushi se) sachi me
raj:*haa bilkul ab darwaja kholo gyi
geeta:*teek hai aa rahi hai thodi der
geeta fatafat apne kapde teek kar niche aati hai aur jaise hi darwaja khol raj ghar ke ander aata hai geeta uske baho se chipak jati hai
raj:*(baalo ko sehla) pagli darwaja khula hai
geeta:*mummy ko apke bare me sab pata hai mere liye itna kafi hai duniya se kya lena
raj:*toh sadak par chle waha gale laga lena
geeta:*waha bhi laga lugi par aaj nhi
geeta door ho door close karti hai aur raj ka khud hi hath pakad kar apne room le aati hai
raj:*ghar aaya hu toh chai paani pocho gyi ke sidha room le aao gyi
geeta:*aap koi ajnabi thodi ho jo apke liye yeh sab karo aap (seene par hath rakh) iss dil ke raja hai jo marji le lijiye
raj:*(hath hata mathe ko chum kar)Janta hu aur waqt aane par le bhi luga par abhi nhi aja bas apni iss emotional jaan se baate karne aaya ho
geeta raj ke pyar aur itni ijat se khush ho jati hai aur raj ko bed par bitha khud hi uske sar ko apni godh me le leti hai aur pyar se ungliya ghumane lagti hai
geeta:*kash yeh waqt ya lamha jo bhi hai yahi tham jaye jaan
raj:*agar yeh tham hi jaye gyi toh ham iss lamhe ko jiye gye kaise lamhe kam ya jada ho iss se fark nhi padta geeta bas pyar hona chahiye har lamhe me toh har ek lamha jaanmo janmo ka lagta hai
geeta:*kuch nadan hu plss aap samjha dijiye ga naa mujhe har waqt bas....
raj:*(halka hotho ko chum) nhi chhodo ga tumhe agar aisa hota toh raj ekle har me hote huye bhi yu sharafat se toh na leta hota
geeta:*jis din aap ne saitani bhi ki toh main nhi roku gyi sab apka hai aur apke siwa iska kya kaam
raj:*pagal ladki kuch bhi bolti hai i love you
geeta:*i love you to raj i love you to
geeta ke aakho se halki aasu ki dhara beh jati hai
raj:*kya inn aasuo ki wajh main hu geeta
geeta:*(niche ho hotho par hoth rakh diya bina kuch kiya fir uper utha) nhi bilkul nhi kabhi nhi aap inn aasu ki wajh hoge mere chehre par khushi ho aap yeh toh bas...
raj uth kar baith jata hai aur geeta ko baaho me bhar leta hai
raj:*abhi bhi dar lagta hai sanjana se
geeta:*kya karo main uske samne kuch bhi nhi
raj:*meri aakho me dekho geeta meri nazaro me toh ho naa kya itna kafi nhi
geeta:*kafi hai
raj:*geeta main tumse bhi itna pyar karta hu jitna sanjana se karta hu yeh film nhi hai jis me kahe ki ek se pyar hi ho sakta hai pyar ek maa apne sabhi bacho se pyar nhi karti
geeta:*bas mujhe kabhi kabhi dar lagta hai
raj geeta ko apne agosh me jakad leta hai
raj;*mujh par vishwas rakhna samjhi main sab teek kar duga
geeta:*mujhe hai app par vishwas
raj:*mathe ko chum) ab muskura do
geeta raj ki aakho me dekh halki bighi aakho se aisi dilkash muskan deti hai jo raj ke dil me utar jati hai
raj khud ko rok nhi pata aur geeta ke hotho ko apne hotho me kaid kar ke kiss karne lagta hai jis se geeta bhi khush ho jati hai aur raj ka sath deti hai dono ko kiss suru kiye ek mint bhi nhi hua hoga ke bahar ki door bell bajne lagti hai
raj bhi kiss todd deti hai jo geeta bilkul nhi chahti thi
raj:*muskura kar) yeh fir kbhi kar lenge main toh tera hi ho abhi sayad Aunty hogi toh door khol duga tum kapde teek kar lena main bhi jata hu
geeta:*itna jaldi
raj:*haa aaj radha ke paas jana hai toh aaj itna hi jaldi hi mile gye ekle ab toh milna hai vaise bhi aunty ko toh pata hai
raj itna bol has deta hai jis par geeta bhi has deti hai
Raj bahar jakar gate open karta hai toh aunty hi thi Raj namaskar karta hai
aunty:*toh beta tum yaha the vaise ab jaa rahe ho main abhi toh aayi ho
Raj:*nhi aunty thoda kaam tha iss liye geeta se milne aaya tha
aunty:*haa woh toh dikh raha hai kaam ho gya chlo lipstick saaf karo hotho se aur meri beti ka khayal rakhna mere bache woh tujhe bahut pyar karti hai
Raj:*main janta hu aunty aap chinta naa kare
aunty:*tum ho toh kya chinta
Raj:*teek hai aunty fir milta ho bye
Raj bye bol kar nikl jata hai waha se radha ke ghar kyoki uska bada dil tha radha se milne ka aur bate karne ke liye
dosto aaj ke liye thoda kaam hai dhire dhire limt ko badho gaa comment kar ke sath de
Jabardast update bhaiUPDATE NO 58
SABSE PEHLE TOH SABSE MAFI CHAHUGA KE ITNE DIN TAK LAPATA RAHA PAR ZINDGI KE PANNE KAYI BAAR ULJH JATE HAI JISE AAP TEEK KARNA CHAHTE HO MAIN BHI WAHI KAR RAHA THA AAJ FREE HUA TOH SOCH APP SAB KI DIL KI BAAT SUNN LO DOSTO UPDATE SURU KAR RAHA HU BAS AAP SAB PYAR DE DUBRA PADH KAR HOPE SO PEHLE JAISA HI LIKH PAO GAA
Raj:*yar main toh pehle se baitha tha toh sab mujhe kuch maat kaho sanjana hi aayi hai
Rashmi:*aayi hai yaa bulya hai bhaiya
Raj:*meri maa aayi hai
Naina:*ab chlo ghar bhi jana hai ke nhi
Raj:*jana hai Chlo ab
Uske baad sabhi ghar ki tarf chl dete hai geeta sochti hai ke raj uske sath waqt gujare par woh keh nhi paati aur ghar ki tarf chl deti hai
AB Aage.............
rashmi apne room me baithi thi ke uske room ka door open hota hai aur ander niharika aa jati hai sath me coffee lekar
woh dono ki coffee lekar aayi thi woh table par coffee rakh kar pehle door band kar deti hai sath me rashmi ke samne baith jati hai
raj ne toh pehle hi rashmi ko bata diya tha ke niharika ko pata lag gya hai aur woh baat kare gyi jada dare nhi aur dil se faisla kare
niharika ko dekh rashmi ko pasina aa raha tha dono khamoshi se baithe the niharika ke door band karne se thodi preshan jarur hoyi thi par rashmi bhi apne aap ko majboot kar rhi li thi
rashmi:*didi apne door kyo band kar diya
niharika:*bas aise hi coffee le naa
rashmi bhi kuch na show karte huye apne aap ko normal rakh coffee utha leti hai
dono ab khamoshi se coffee peete hai
niharika:*rashmi life ke bare me kya socha hai i mean shadi ke bare me
rashmi:*kya didi aap bhi abhi toh college start kiya hai abhi kya karo gyi shadi kar ke aap ne kya socha hai main toh bas enjoy karo gyi filhal
niharika:*achi baat hai maine bhi jada nhi socha hai vaise rashmi kya tera koi bf hai
rashmi:*haa hai didi aur woh sabse best hai (niraash ho) par uss se meri shadi nhi ho sakti toh bas, masti kar rhi ho
niharika toh pehle hi Shock me thi me iska bf hai par ab jada thi ke uss se bhi shadi nhi karne wali ab usse samjh nhi aa raha tha
niharika:*aisa kya hai jo shadi nhi kar sakti tu aur kon hai woh ladka main janti ho
rashmi:*achi tarh se
niharika:*tu kiski baat kar rhi hai jise main bhi janti hu
rashmi:*didi app kya bhaiya ko nhi janti ho wahi toh mere bf hai best friend
rashmi itna bol ke hasne lagti hai jis karn niharika ko bhi baat samjh aa jati hai
niharika:*pagal ladki main kya poch rhi thi tu kya baata rahi hai aur main janti ho tere best friend ka matlb raj ke sath
rashmi:*kya hua didi app achanak kyo aise bol rahi hai
niharika:*toh kya bolo tu baata tum dono ek aise rishte se judde ho jise samaj galat manta hai
rashmi:*mante hai didi iss me koi sakk nhi par main nhi manti aur naa bhaiya mante hai main janti ho apko sab pata hai aur bhaiya ne jo kaha woh main bhi kehti ho didi yeh mera faisla hai mere liye bhaiya se acha koi aur option nhi hai jis ladke ko sab pane chahte hai usse main naa sif apna bana sakti ho balki jo marji mang sakti ho dono ristho se
niharika:*par pagal ladki kabhi socha hai ke bahar ke logo ko pata lage ga toh kya hoga bahar ka toh chhod agar ghar par pata laga toh kya hoga tum dono sab sab thuke gye
rashmi:*haa didi yeh baat sahi hai par main nhi darti kisi se aur main bhai ko chahti ho aur jis galti se aap ko pata laga ab kabhi nhi hone duga vada hai
niharika:*matlb Tum raj ko nhi chhodo gyi par mera kaam toh hai samjhna maine dono ko samjha diya ab aap dono ka faisla hai jo marji karo
niharika waha se nikl jati hai uske jate hai rashmi rahat ki saas li uske mann me bahut se dar chl rahe the jise uss ne raj ke khayal matar se apne dil se nikl diye aur chehre par muskurahat aa gya
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raj apne ghar se saam ko nikl jata hai kaam bata aur sidha chla jata hai geeta ke ghar jaise hi raj uske ghar ke pass aata hai woh call kar deta hai
raj:*kya kar rhi ho
geeta:*kuch nhi room thi mummy aayi nhi hai naa
raj:*teek hai main niche hu darwaja kholo
geeta:*(khushi se) sachi me
raj:*haa bilkul ab darwaja kholo gyi
geeta:*teek hai aa rahi hai thodi der
geeta fatafat apne kapde teek kar niche aati hai aur jaise hi darwaja khol raj ghar ke ander aata hai geeta uske baho se chipak jati hai
raj:*(baalo ko sehla) pagli darwaja khula hai
geeta:*mummy ko apke bare me sab pata hai mere liye itna kafi hai duniya se kya lena
raj:*toh sadak par chle waha gale laga lena
geeta:*waha bhi laga lugi par aaj nhi
geeta door ho door close karti hai aur raj ka khud hi hath pakad kar apne room le aati hai
raj:*ghar aaya hu toh chai paani pocho gyi ke sidha room le aao gyi
geeta:*aap koi ajnabi thodi ho jo apke liye yeh sab karo aap (seene par hath rakh) iss dil ke raja hai jo marji le lijiye
raj:*(hath hata mathe ko chum kar)Janta hu aur waqt aane par le bhi luga par abhi nhi aja bas apni iss emotional jaan se baate karne aaya ho
geeta raj ke pyar aur itni ijat se khush ho jati hai aur raj ko bed par bitha khud hi uske sar ko apni godh me le leti hai aur pyar se ungliya ghumane lagti hai
geeta:*kash yeh waqt ya lamha jo bhi hai yahi tham jaye jaan
raj:*agar yeh tham hi jaye gyi toh ham iss lamhe ko jiye gye kaise lamhe kam ya jada ho iss se fark nhi padta geeta bas pyar hona chahiye har lamhe me toh har ek lamha jaanmo janmo ka lagta hai
geeta:*kuch nadan hu plss aap samjha dijiye ga naa mujhe har waqt bas....
raj:*(halka hotho ko chum) nhi chhodo ga tumhe agar aisa hota toh raj ekle har me hote huye bhi yu sharafat se toh na leta hota
geeta:*jis din aap ne saitani bhi ki toh main nhi roku gyi sab apka hai aur apke siwa iska kya kaam
raj:*pagal ladki kuch bhi bolti hai i love you
geeta:*i love you to raj i love you to
geeta ke aakho se halki aasu ki dhara beh jati hai
raj:*kya inn aasuo ki wajh main hu geeta
geeta:*(niche ho hotho par hoth rakh diya bina kuch kiya fir uper utha) nhi bilkul nhi kabhi nhi aap inn aasu ki wajh hoge mere chehre par khushi ho aap yeh toh bas...
raj uth kar baith jata hai aur geeta ko baaho me bhar leta hai
raj:*abhi bhi dar lagta hai sanjana se
geeta:*kya karo main uske samne kuch bhi nhi
raj:*meri aakho me dekho geeta meri nazaro me toh ho naa kya itna kafi nhi
geeta:*kafi hai
raj:*geeta main tumse bhi itna pyar karta hu jitna sanjana se karta hu yeh film nhi hai jis me kahe ki ek se pyar hi ho sakta hai pyar ek maa apne sabhi bacho se pyar nhi karti
geeta:*bas mujhe kabhi kabhi dar lagta hai
raj geeta ko apne agosh me jakad leta hai
raj;*mujh par vishwas rakhna samjhi main sab teek kar duga
geeta:*mujhe hai app par vishwas
raj:*mathe ko chum) ab muskura do
geeta raj ki aakho me dekh halki bighi aakho se aisi dilkash muskan deti hai jo raj ke dil me utar jati hai
raj khud ko rok nhi pata aur geeta ke hotho ko apne hotho me kaid kar ke kiss karne lagta hai jis se geeta bhi khush ho jati hai aur raj ka sath deti hai dono ko kiss suru kiye ek mint bhi nhi hua hoga ke bahar ki door bell bajne lagti hai
raj bhi kiss todd deti hai jo geeta bilkul nhi chahti thi
raj:*muskura kar) yeh fir kbhi kar lenge main toh tera hi ho abhi sayad Aunty hogi toh door khol duga tum kapde teek kar lena main bhi jata hu
geeta:*itna jaldi
raj:*haa aaj radha ke paas jana hai toh aaj itna hi jaldi hi mile gye ekle ab toh milna hai vaise bhi aunty ko toh pata hai
raj itna bol has deta hai jis par geeta bhi has deti hai
Raj bahar jakar gate open karta hai toh aunty hi thi Raj namaskar karta hai
aunty:*toh beta tum yaha the vaise ab jaa rahe ho main abhi toh aayi ho
Raj:*nhi aunty thoda kaam tha iss liye geeta se milne aaya tha
aunty:*haa woh toh dikh raha hai kaam ho gya chlo lipstick saaf karo hotho se aur meri beti ka khayal rakhna mere bache woh tujhe bahut pyar karti hai
Raj:*main janta hu aunty aap chinta naa kare
aunty:*tum ho toh kya chinta
Raj:*teek hai aunty fir milta ho bye
Raj bye bol kar nikl jata hai waha se radha ke ghar kyoki uska bada dil tha radha se milne ka aur bate karne ke liye
dosto aaj ke liye thoda kaam hai dhire dhire limt ko badho gaa comment kar ke sath de