Are pagle teri dono betiyan uske niche aa chuki hain aur ENIGMA Prabhu ne chaha to dono ko pet se bhi Arjun he karega.
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Are pagle teri dono betiyan uske niche aa chuki hain aur ENIGMA Prabhu ne chaha to dono ko pet se bhi Arjun he karega.
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Bhai ye meri pehli kavita thi saal 1999 ki. Baad me isko 2007 me poora kiya tha kalpanao ke shehar shirshak se. Total 62 poems hai unpublished
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Bhai peit chhodo mangalsutra pe aao. Filhal sirf Shankar ki fati hui. Inder ka haal kya hoga
Rekha ne bola bhi tha ke krishna ke sath wo kanyadan karengi
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aalu
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yeh line gender based nahin thee... jab humne socha wo jannat ne likha toh laga jaise ussi ke bol ho.. ek larki kisi saathi ke talash mein... yeh difficult hota hain dono gender kee soch ko itni bariiki se darshana...
aise aur bahumulya rachna ka intezar rahega...
aalu
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inder jee tab arjun se puchhenge beta bata de bas ritu hee na ya aur koi hain...Bhai peit chhodo mangalsutra pe aao. Filhal sirf Shankar ki fati hui. Inder ka haal kya hoga
Rekha ne bola bhi tha ke krishna ke sath wo kanyadan karengi
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Aalu bhai main jab likhta hu toh ye nahi sochta ki kiski taraf se likh raha hu. Intjaar kavita bhi aurat ke paksh se likhi thi jaha marnassan mahila apne premi ka intjaar karti hai jabki uske bache vasiyat ka. Bol kuch aise the:
Khamoshi nahi, ye intjaar hai kisi ka..
Tooti saanson me basa, upkaar hai kisi ka..
Wo khush hai sabhi kuch milne ki aas me..
Ye saans thaame hai bas uski aahat pe.
Baarish me murjhaya gulab hai, na sartaaj kisi ka ..
Lab khule the kabhi, hain intjaar jubaan ka.
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Haan bhai 38 lines hai usme with two sketches
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Shankar Madhulata ke liya bacha kar rakha hai full version
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waise toh aapki rachna kee kuchh jhalkiya hame idhar kahani mein bhi mil jaati hain... lekin jinhe shamil na kiya jaa sake unhe alag se post kar dete kabhi mahaul dekh ke....
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