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Naina ji ... sorry main ye kehna chahata thaa ki main dil ki chot ki baat kar raha thaa veer khud ko golu ki maut ka jimmedaar maanta hai uske dil me golu ki maut ka dard hai pari sirf samjha sakti hai us dard ko dur nahi kar sakti .. dil ka dard wahi door kar sakta hai jo dil ke bahut Kareeb ho .... mere khyaal se ye kaam nidhi hi kar sakti hai ...... baaki kahani aage kyaa hoga ye lekhak se behtar kaun jaan sakta hai ............Lekin pari to veer ke body ke har ang se judi hai... even uske dil se bhi aur dimag se bhi.... in fact uski har harkat, har soch aur har bhaavna ko mehsoos kar sakti hai, samajh sakti hai .... to phir veer ko uske dimag ki dard bhari bhaavna se ubharne ke liye bhi madad kar sakti hai pari..
To phir nidhi ko kahe pareshaan kar rahi hai![]()
Btw I think veer ko ab do baaton par zyada de to behtar hoga...ek to family aur jo bhi log usse jude hai unko kahi door surakshit jagah bhej de ...taaki atish pahunch na paye un tak...Na na veer or suman ki karayenge![]()
Btw ab bhi agar aise raha veer to jald hi dusra jhatka bhi lagne wala hai usko.. kyunki atish bas golu ko maarke shaant nahi rehne wala... kya pata agli target nidhi ya phir shreya ya phir juhi hoNaina ji ... sorry main ye kehna chahata thaa ki main dil ki chot ki baat kar raha thaa veer khud ko golu ki maut ka jimmedaar maanta hai uske dil me golu ki maut ka dard hai pari sirf samjha sakti hai us dard ko dur nahi kar sakti .. dil ka dard wahi door kar sakta hai jo dil ke bahut Kareeb ho .... mere khyaal se ye kaam nidhi hi kar sakti hai ...... baaki kahani aage kyaa hoga ye lekhak se behtar kaun jaan sakta hai ............
Juhi bahut cute bachi naina ji agar juhi is kahani se jaati hain to me is story padhna chhod dungaBtw ab bhi agar aise raha veer to jald hi dusra jhatka bhi lagne wala hai usko.. kyunki atish bas golu ko maarke shaant nahi rehne wala... kya pata agli target nidhi ya phir shreya ya phir juhi ho![]()
Naina ji ..... Maine is forum pe abhi kuch samye se juda hoon main jis bhi kahani ko padhta hoon aapke comments jaroor milte hain .... is forum par ek kahani chal rahi hai ....priyaarush a love story... us kahani ke readers bahut hi kam hain main chahta hoon aap jaise reader sapot karein ... kahani bahut acchi hai ........................................................ agar maine kuch galat kaha hai to mai maafi chahunga...........dhannywaadBtw I think veer ko ab do baaton par zyada de to behtar hoga...ek to family aur jo bhi log usse jude hai unko kahi door surakshit jagah bhej de ...taaki atish pahunch na paye un tak...
aur dusri aurr....ushe bhaavna ko khojne nikal jana chahiye.... aur jab mile weh to unko bhi surakshit jagah pe bhej de jaha baaki ke log surakshit hai ..
Kyunki majburi ek shaktishali insaan ko bhi kamjor bana de...so agar koi majburi na rahegi to veer ke liye aasani hogi us atish ka saamna karna..
Gend na maar lenge sab uskiKahi nidhi aur vivek shaadi to nahi karne wale![]()
Kahi nidhi aur vivek shaadi to nahi karne wale![]()
Allah ke naam pe update de de re baba......... hi hi hi hi hi hi hi .... jock thaa
Ek dum satya vachanAap pasand ki baat karte ho hmari Naina ji ko yhi to sabse jyada mazedar or pasand aata haidekhiyega Ispr unka dhamakedar revo aayega
What the hell kaise kaise task diye atish bhau ne veer ko, ham logo ko ab golu ka soch kr glani ho rhi hai kitna galat socha tha uske bare me.
Dr. Kahte hain ek haddi ke tut kr judne pr Vo Pahle se behtar or jyada majbooti se judti hai, Vahi kriya yha veer pr lagu hoti hai, jb tk wakt or halat ke thapedo ko sah kr dobara nhi uth khda hota tbtk vo hero kahlane yogya nhi or veer fir uth Khada hoga ek baar, or apni galtiyo se sikhega atish bhau ko Iska Kai guna lautayega vo... Kavya ka nidhi ma'm ko phone karna yah darsata hai ki use kitni fikar hai Apne Bhai ki or Vo abhi ek Acchi bahan ke sare gun rakhti hai...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab