Incest SAAJAN

[king of darkness0411]

Bahut hi khubsurat aur shandar update Anand bhai maja aa gya wow to wo tantrik kile se mukat hone ke liye us talwar aur saajan ka intjar kar raha tha taki raj aur minakshi ki bali de kar aur dono mani ko haasil karke duniya par raj kar sake
Magar jise marne ke liye kali ma ke dut ko bulaye wo kudh mar gaya
Minakshi bhi ki dard bhari zindagi khatm ho gai ab pari ko do ansh mil chuke hai tisra abhi baki hai.
To ab 5th janam ki story start hogi

Osm update bhai

 

[FRIDAY]

Shandar update.....

Shuruwat me ye update mujhe utna acha nahi laga magar kapal malini ke entry ke bad sab kuch kaamal ka tha.

Raj ko to Sadhu baba kuch nahi kor paya.kapal malini ko bulake khud aapne mout ki dawat diya.
Sadhu ki mout ki scene bahut daradnak tha.Ye scene bahut mazader tha.

Sadhu baba ke daradnak mout ke bad Raj ne Minakshi ko mukt kor diya.Usse bhi Divya ke sath swikar kor liya.Aur uske bad wo deh tyag kia.
Ye scene full of emotional tha.

Uske bad shuru hota hai itihas yani ki 5th janam ki story.Jitu ki raj abhishek se story shuru hota hai.Isse acha shuruwat ho hi nahi saatha.Us rajya ki mohal aapne shandari se describe kiya.Aur qila ki bath kia kahu wo bhi ek dum zaakas tha.

Aur present mai Veer ki mritu ki ashanka deke aapne jo twist diya wo lajawab tha.Yumraj ne vidiya ko chor diya kiu ki wo na marne ke bad bhi mara hua hai.

Awesome update....
Great going....
Aab milte hai next update me....
Bye bye...
Ta! Ta!

 

[Prince Charles]

arre wah tera kya kehna...

 

[kavya verma]

awesome update sir

 

[Naina]

chehre pe gussa,, man me gali....batuk ne Raj ke upor saktiya bhi chala li... phir bhi dono hath khali... burai, sachhai se bhidega to khatam burai ka hi hoga na.. batuk ka bhi wahi hasra hua...
aain.. Anand ji... ye kya.. jab bhi raj purane janam ki premikao se milte hai.. Boh mar jati hai... bahot buri baat.. na na aisa nahi hona chahiye ... update ko aapne kuch jyada hi emotional kar diya...

Oh to panchva janam ka flashback suru... rajkumar Jitendra kumar singh... in short.. . Jitu kumar... Jitu kumar....
.... Anyway to ye next yuvraaj ban ne wale hai vrihadpur ke... to yehi se flashback ki kahani start hoti hai..
omg ye kya.... veer sahit ushki car udd gayi kya.. . boh chinkh mrinal ki hogi... I'm sure, my favorite mrinal, veer ko kuch hone nahi degi....
Khair.. Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update Anand ji... Great going

 

[Jitu kumar]

SAAJAN
UPDATE- 201​

Main jaise hi uss karagar ko kholne ke liye hath lagaya to kisi adrishya shakti ne mujhe piche dhakel diya..maine teen char baar prayas kiya lekin har baar asafal hi raha.

Raj (jor se)—koun hai …samne aao….?

"Hahahaha.....swagat hai saajannnn....akhirrr tummm aa hi gayeeee....mujheee ish din ki kab se pratiksha thiii..hahaha" aur phir vahi bhayanak sadhu hamare samne aa gaya jisko payal didi ne dekha tha.

Payal (bhag kar mujhse chipak ke)—rajjjj...ye....ye....ye...to vahiii sadhuuu haiii...jisko..maine uss bachche ki hatya karte huye dekha thaa.

"Haaaaa...vo main hi thaaaa....abbbb mainnn tummm sabkiiii baliii dungaaaa....hahahahaha....aaj meraaa intazarrr khatam huaaa"

Ab aage....

Raj—tum apni koshish kar ke dekh lo....

“Tum mujhe….maha tantrik batuk nath ko chunouti de rahe ho….bachche…hahahaha….mere samne tum abhi bachche ho..saajannn,….hahahahaha” usne ghamand me haste huye apna naam bataya.

Raj—mujhe maarne se pahle ye to bata ki tum mera intazar kyo kar rahe the….?

Batuk—tumhe aur iss ladki ko maar kar main vo mani hasil karunga…aur phir poori duniya par meri huqumat chalegi hahahahaha

Raj—ye ladki to tumhari hi qaid me thi…phir ab tak kyo nahi mara isko…..?

Batuk—kyon ki vo mani mujhe tabhi mil sakti hai jab main tum dono ki bali ussi talwar se dunga….main iss vrihadpur qile se bahar nahi ja sakta…tilism me qaid ho kar rah gaya hu…..aur mujhe malum tha ki tum vo talwar le kar isko bachane yaha jarur aaoge….isliye tumhara intazar tha mujhe….sath me ye divya aur vo talwar bhi meri hogi..hahahaha

Raj—jab mujhe yahi maar doge to meri bali kaise doge phir…..?

Batuk—mujhe pagal samjha hai…..main abhi tumhe apni shaktiyo se kewal apne vash me karunga.

Raj—jab tum yaha se bahar nikal hi nahi sakte to qaid kaise kiya iss ladki ko….?

Batuk—ye kaam maine apni shaktiyo ke dum par kiya hai…..bas ab bahut hua…ab marne ke liye taiyar ho ja…

Raj—mere baare me jaan lete to tumhare liye achcha hota…khair koi baat nahi ab tumne ye mouka kho diya hai

Batuk nath (jor se)—mujhse takrayega….ye dekh….

Aur phir usne bhi vahi prahar karne shuru kar diye…jo vo ladki kar rahi thi…aur yaha bhi unka vahi anzam hua….ye dekh kar batuk nath soch me pad gaya…ab uska ghamand me hasta hua chehra gambhir ho chuka tha.

Raj—kyaaa huaa…jhandu baam….tera tarkash khali ho gaya kya…..?

Batuk (gusse me)—meri beijjati karta hai…..mere naam ka uphaas udata hai….? Tujhe kya lagta hai ki tune kuch tantra mantra sikh liye to batuk nath ka bhi muqabla kar lega….? Ab dekh tu meri asli shaktiya…

Vo ankhe band kar ke mantra jaap karne laga…..main vaise hi khada raha chup chap…maine sab ke charo oor pahle hi suraksha kawach bana diya tha jisse unko koi nuksan na ho sake.

Mantra jaap uska poora hote hi usne meri taraf phoonk diya aur mere sharir me achanak aag lag gayi, jise dekh kar vo jor jor se hasne laga, par agle hi pal vo aag gayab ho gayi..mujhe sahi salamat dekh vo chounk gaya.

Agli baar usne apne mantra se hamari taraf hazaro ki sankha me saanp paida kar diye lekin jaise hi vo hamare kawach ke karib aaye vaise hi vo aag me jhulasane lage aur rakh ka dher ban gaye.

Raj—koi badi shakti ho to prahar kar ye kya bachcho ki tarah khel raha hai….?

Batuk—ab tujhe koi nahi bacha sakta…..hahaha

Usne phir se ek vishesh mudra me baith kar mantra jaap karne laga…main samajh gaya ki ab ye kisi maha shakti ka aahvahan kar raha hai…aur phir vaha joro ki hawa chalne lagi…kankad patthar yaha waha udne lage…akhir batuk nath ne kisi vikral shakti ka aahvahan kar hi liya tha.

Uska mantra jaap samapt hone ke kuch hi kshan me vaha jor ka attahas goonjne laga….aur agle hi pal vaha ek maha bhayanak dikhne wali shakti prakat ho gayi…uska bhayanak aur vikral roop dekh kar sabhi darr ke maare mujhse chipak gayi aur ankhe band kar li.

Uska poor sharir ekdam kala tha….badi badi lal ankhe….bade nakhun…lal badi si ghutne tak jhulti jeebh..aisi ki agar sapne me bhi koi dekh le to phir dubara uski ankh na khule, sidhe swarg sidhar jaye.

main samajh gaya ki ye Kapaal Malini hai….maha shakti maa maha kali ki ganika hai kapaal malini…. karodo me koi virla hi inko siddh kar pata hai..inki sadhna karne me 99% mrityu nishchit hoti hai…sadhna me jara si bhi chook matlab mout pakki…jisne kapaal malini ko siddh kar liya vo vastav me maha tantrik kahlane ke yogya hai.

Kapaal malini (gusse me)—meraaaa aahvahannnnn kisssss liye kiyaaaa haiiii murkhhhhhh….? Jaldiiiii bataaaa warnaaa tujheeeee kachchaaaaaa chabaaaaaa jaungiiiiiiii.

Batuk (hath jod kar darr se kaampte huye)—main vivash tha mahadevi…mujhe kshama kare….ab aap hi meri sahayta kar sakti hain.

Kapaal Malini (gusse me)—bataaaa kiskiiii mouttttt ke liyeeeee mujheeeee bulayaaaaa haiiiiiii……?

Batuk (meri taraf ishara karte huye)—uskiiiii maha shakti……uskiiiii mouttttt keeee liyeeeeee

Ishara milte hi vo maha shakti badi tezi se meri taraf lapki….unhe apni taraf aate dekh maine dono hath jod kar unhe pranam kiya……vo mere karib aa kar mujhe dekha aur phir ussi tezi se vapis lout gayi.

Kapal malini (kroadh me)—murkhhhh..tuneeee mujheee kiseee maarneeee kee liyeee bulayaaathaaa, uskoooo jiskoo kiii naa koiii devtaaa, naa danavvv, naa manavvvv…naaa hiii koiii aurrr maarrrr saktaaa haiiii…vo apniiii moutttt khuddd haii tune mujheee bula karrr meraaa samayyy barbadddd kiyaaa haiiii…..abbb mainnn tujheee marungiiiii.

Batuk (darr aur khauf se)—nahiiiiiiiii....mujhe mat maro

Batuk kapal malini ki baat sunte hi darr ke maare thar thar kaampne laga….aur apni jaan bachane ke liye idhar udhar bhagne laga....lekin tabhi kapal malini ne uski taang pakad ke apni taraf khich liya aur ek pair uske pairo ke upar rakh diya....vo hath jod kar kshama ki bheekh maangne laga.

Agle hi pal kapaal malini ne uske baal pakad ke apna bade bade nakhuno wala hath batuk nath ke muh me ghusa diya aur hath ko andar le ja kar uske pet ko phad diya....pet ko phad ke uska garam garam khoon pine lagi...phir uski gardan ukhad kar football ki tarah door phenk di aur uska dusra pair pakad ke beech se uske sharir ko cheer diya aur uske sharir ka poora maans khane ke jab kewal haddiya bachi to vahi phenk kar vo gayab ho gayi aur phir sab kuch shant ho gaya.

Kapaal malini ke vaha se jate hi maine chain ki saans li....aur phir sab ko ankhe kholne ko kaha..sab darte huye dhire dhire apni ankhe kholi..jab vaha koi nahi dikha tab kahi unki jaan me jaan aayi jo ki halak me atki huyi thi.

Payal—baap re...koun thi ye...itni maha bhayanak.... ?

Raj—aisa nahi bolte...vo ek devi thi....vo kewal dushto ka sanghar karti hain.

Maine uske baad karagar ke gate ko ukhad ke alag kar diya kyon ki batuk ke ant ke sath hi uska tantrik mayajal jo yaha phaila hua tha vo ab toot gaya tha.

Maine minakshi ki zanjeero ko tod ke alag kiya to vo meri baaho me jhul gayi....badi mushkil se uske muh se shabd nikal rahe the.

Raj—minakshii ankhe kholo..dekho main aa gaya huu..ankhe kholooooo

Minakshi (dhire se)—tummm……… aa gaye saajannnn......ab ...mainnnnn.....tumhariiiiii bahoooooo meinnnn chainnnn se marrrr sakungiiiiii…..dekho inn logo…ne..mujhe…kitnaaa…maraaa..haiii

Minakshi ke poore jism me chot ke nishan the….jagah jagah se khoon bah raha tha….uski ye halat dekh kar meri ankhe bhar aayi aur bakiyo ki bhi.

Raj—kisne kiya hai ye…aur tumhe yaha koun laya….?

Minakshi (rote huye)—ddd….devillllll…..usne …mujhe…bahutttt…maraaa…..chabukkkk se

Raj—chinta mat karo minakshi…jisne bhi tumhare upar hath uthane ki dhristata ki hai…usko saza jarur milegi

Divya—tumhe kuch nahi hoga minakshi…sab theek ho jayega

Minakshi (rote huye)—nahiiiii…divyaaaa……ab mujheee janaaa hogaaa….mainnn to beeta huaaa…kalll hu…aaj to samnee haiiiii…..saajannn mujhe bhi vahi par le chalo.

Raj—rajlaxmi…vo jagah kaha par hai…?

Rajlaxmi—chaliye main batati hu.

Phir rajlaxmi ke sath chalte huye hum uss kamre tak aa gaye jisko maine dekha tha…uss kund me ghusne se pahle maine divya ko meri jeb se vo locket nikalne ko kaha to usne jaise hi uss locket ko nikal kar dekha to vo buri tarah se chounk gayi aur meri oor dekhne lagi.

Raj—darwaja kholo divya.

Divya ki ankho me anshu the aur mere bhi...shayad hum dono hi ye samajh gaye the ki andar kya hai.... ? usne darwaje me bane saanche par uss locket ko fit kar diya aur phir dhire se darwaja khol diya.

Kamre ke andar full roshni phaili huyi thi.....kamre ke beecho beech ek chabutara (samadhi type ka) bana hua tha aur uss chabutare ke upar ek bahut badi mom batti lagi huyi jal rahi thi....chabutare ke nichle hisse me bade bade shabdo me likha hua tha....

“Upar Ambar Niche Dharti, Beech Mein Hain Dil Ke Afsaane..
Afsaano Mein Dard Hai Kitna, Pyar Ke Dushman Ye Kya Jaane..”

(Saajan – Divya)
Kaliyug, Year 340

Rajlaxmi—ye mombatti tabhi se jal rahi hai bina bujhe…iss kamre me andhera kabhi nahi hota

Minakshi—saajannn…mujhe bhi…aaj….apne….iss pyar …me…shamil…kar lo….divya ke sath….bas ..yahi ek..vinti hai…mere mahboob…..aaaaa..divya..main tumhare aage hath..jodti hu.

Divya—saajan ne tumhe swikar kar liya hai minakshi iss janam me bhi…aur jaldi hi tumhe tumhara haq bhi mil jayega.

Minakshi—aaa…tummm sach me…dhanya ho..divyaa….jabki uss haq ke..ke…liye…tum..khud hi sadiyo..se.intazar…kar..rahi ho lekin apna haq tumne..dusro ko diya hai

Divya—mera prem itna kamjor nahi hai minakshi ki ye mrityu mere pyar ko mere hriday se mita sake…. main hamesha se saajan ki thi..saajan ki hu..aur har janam me saajan ki hi rahungi….chahe mujhe kitni hi baar kyo na janam lena pade…..kabhi to uss bhagwan ko mere prem par taras ayega aur hum ek honge.

Raj—divya theek kahti hai…maine tumhe shamil to kar liya hai minakshi…iss janam me bhi maine tumhe swikar kar liya hai aur uska haq bhi jaldi hi dunga.

Minakshi—ab mujhe..koi gum nahi….aaaa…saajannnnn

Aur phir thodi der baad hi usne meri baaho me apna dum tod diya……uske marte hi minakshi ke jism se do jyoti nikli unme se ek to paridhi me sama gayi jabki dusri ja kar pari me vileen ho gayi.

Maine qile ke andar se hi lakdiya ekatthi karne ke baad ussi jagah par minakshi ka antim sanskar kiya….uske jalte hi uski chita ki bhasm chamakne lagi aur vo ekatthi ho kar ek mani me badal gayi…uski roshni lagatar tez hoti chali gayi sabko apni ankhe band karni pad gayi aur phir vo roshni mere andar sama gayi.

Uss roshni ke mere andar samate hi meri aur divya ki ankho ke samne ek drishya dikhayi dene laga….

5th Janam Ki Love Story

"Upar Ambar Niche Dharti, Beech Mein Hain Dil Ke Afsaane
Afsaano Mein Dard Hai Kitna, Pyar Ke Dushman Ye Kya Jaane"
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Ranga rang jashn ki raat ka mahaul tha.

Mouka hi kuch aisa tha….Vrihadpur rajya ke rajkumar Jitendra Kumar Singh jinhe ki sab pyar se Jitu kahte the, ko yuvraj banaye jane ka din nazdik aaya tha.

Pichhle hafte bhar se rajya me jagah jagah tarah tarah ke ranga ranga karyakramo ki dhoom machi thi…kahi bedaniyo (tawayaf) ke naach ho rahe the. To kahi talwar bazi ke kartab dikhaye ja rahe the.

Kahi masti bhari mahfile saji thi, to kahi malla yuddh ke muqable ho rahe the….kahi saanp newle ki ladayi chal rahi thi, to kahi murgo ki muthbhed ho rahi thi.

Mandiro par nayi patakaye aur naye parcham fahra rahe the......raj kumar Jitu ko sabhi aas mani ashirwad hasil ho, iske liye rajya ka koi mandir aisa nahi tha, jisme aartiya na ho rahi ho aur bhog na lag raha ho.

Chhawni me shama hi alag tha….madmast hathiyo ko jaise jung ke liye sajaya gaya tha…ghodo ki jeene aur lagame mom ki polish se chamkayi gayi thi….unki kalangi ke liye rangeen pankho ke guldaste banaye gaye the.

Vrihadpur me jalte chirag deeye aur mashale ussi tarah gini nahi ja sakti thi jaise aas maan ke taare nahi gine ja sakte hain…..darbar ke mantriyo aur sabhi darbariyo ki haweliyo me sugandhit drivya ke chhidkav ke liye shaam se hi mashkachi utar pade the.

Raj Mahal ki sidhiyo par to khaas taur se gulab jal aur kewde ka chhidkav kiya gaya tha…aas paas ke chote bade rajyo ke raja aur prati nidhi log ek din pahle hi rajya ki rajdhani me pahuch chuke the.

Akhir raj kumar Jitu kumar ko kal yuvraj ki padwi ur rajya ke senapati ka ohada milne wala hai….to phir raat rangeen kyo na ho…? Vishesh mehmano ke liye vrihadpur ke qile ke rang mahal me shandar intazam kiya gaya tha.

Vaha ka shama to dekhte hi banta tha shabab aur surur ki mahfil ka apna rang tha…..Jaydev ka sitar, ustad munna ki sarangi, bhola pandit ka tabla aur raj nartaki keshar ke ghungharuo ki jhankar se rang mahal goonj raha tha.

Raj mahal ke naukar daud bhag rahe the aur jaam chhalak rahe the….tarah tarah ke misthann aur gola kabab ki mahak se rang mahal gamak raha tha.

Mor pankhi pankho se heena ki fuhare baras rahi thi aur tamam rajya ki hardil aziz kamsin nrityangna keshar bade hi purjosh andaz me nritya kar rahi thi….aur nachne ke sath uske gaane aur dilkash adaaon ka daur jari tha.. vo jhoom jhoom ke ga rahi thi……

Mori Gagri ko Neer Raja Chhalak na jaye...
Sari bheegi, Chunri bheegi, Choli bheegi jaye..
Main Mari Jaoon Sharam ke Maare, Mora Joban bheego jaye...
Mori Gagri ko Neer Raja, Chhalak na Jaye

Rang Mahal me waah..waaho aur dil ki kachot se nikli aago ne to mahfil ka rang hi badal diya…. ghungharuon ki jhankar ke sath hi sone ke sikko aur abhusano ki bauchhar hone lagi….to keshar ne apni ankho ke teer chalate huye sabhi mehmano ko ghayal karte huye apne ghungharuon, ko madhyam gati par la kar geet ki dusri kadi ko pesh kiya.

Joban Ko Hi Bojh Bahut Hai……

Munna ustad ki sarangi ne taaro ko sambhal keshar ki baat ki waah waahi ki aur bhola pandit ke table ne gamak ke sath phir keshar ko pukara…..to thirakti, chamakti keshar ne phir waar kiya…

Joban Ko Hi Bojh Bahut Hai…..

Tabhi kisi diljale mehman rajkumar ki awaz aayi thi—Jalim…! Yeh to jahir hai….hum ye bojh utha lenge.

To keshar ne usko jhuk kar baar baar salaam karte huye raj kumar Jitu Singh ko dekha tha jo apne gale ki dasvi mala ko utar rahe the…keshar ki adaaon me ijafa hua aur vah ek thumka lekar gaane lagi….

Joban Ko Hi Bojh Bahut Hai, Pani Bharne Kaise Jaoon..
Mori Gagri Uthye Na Mo Pe..
Pag Pag Thokar Khauun..
Mori Patli Kamar Raja Lachak Na Jaye....

Iss baar kartik ki harmonium ne mouke ko pakda....harmonium par kartik ki ungliya thirak uthi aur uske parde saanse khich khich haafne lage....ustad munna ki sarangi, bhola pandit ka tabla, kartik ka harmonium, jaydev ka sitar vadan aur keshar ke ghungharuon ne vah shama baandh diya tha ki mehman tadap tadap uthe.

Aisa jashn to aas paas ke pachaso rajyo me kabhi nahi manaya gaya...sab log surur me the aur keshar ki adaaon par nichhaawar huye ja rahe the....sarangi, table, harmonium aur ghungharoon ka madmata sangeet sari mahfil par haavi ho chuka tha.

Heena ki fuhar karte pankhe madhoshi ko badhawa de rahe the aur mithaiya apna alag hi rang dikha rahi thi.

Nritya sangeet aur shabab ke sath madira ne poore mahaul me unmaad bhar diya tha....log apne apko bhool gaye the dil ki har dhadkan keshar ke madak geet ka bol ban gayi thi.

Rajkumar Jitu Singh ne sura, sundari aur sangeet ke unmaad me jhumte mehmano par ek nazar daali aur phir samne thaal me rakhe heere jewarat keshar ke thirakte pairo ki taraf uchhal diya aur uth khade huye...geet ke bol aur sangeet ke sur dhire dhire dhime hote chale gaye.

Raat aadhi se adhik beet chuki thi....nagar ki attalikao, haweliyo aur rajprasado parjag magati battiya bujh chuki thi aur tab tak akash ke seema heen vistar ko roundti umadti ghumadti kali kajrari ghataon ne amavas ki raat ki kaalima ko aur bhi gahra tatha bhayanak bana diya tha....iss chhor se uss chhor tak aas maan par ek nanha sa tara bhi dikhayi nahi de raha tha.

Vrihadpur rajya ke niwasi din bhar ke raag-rang, nritya-sangeet aur aamod-pramod se thak kar apne gharo me gahri need so chuke the....vrihadpur ke vishal durg me bhi gahri khamoshi aur khumari chha gayi thi, jise kabhi kabhi pahredaro ke kadmo ki aahte rah rah kar bhang kar deti thi.

Aaj se theek ek din baad vrihadpur ke maharaja shailendra singh apne ekloute putra rajkumar Jitendra Singh ko yuvraj ke pad aasin karne wale the....isliye pichhle ek saptah se vrihadpur ke raj mahal aur rajdhani hi nahi balki poora rajya tarah tarah ke utsavo aur samaroho me sarobar tha.

INTERVAL
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Udhar dusri taraf dharti lok me vidhya ke behosh hote hi yamraj uske charo taraf chakkar kaatne laga, iss pratiksha me ki kab usko hosh aaye aur vo apna shikar kare.

Yamraj—Ye to behoshhhh ho gayiiiii.....mareee…huyeee ko..kyaaa maarnaaa……aise me mera khauf logo ke dil se kam ho jayega.....mujhe logo ki ankho me mout ka darr dekhne me bahut maza aata hai.....hoshhh me aane ke baaddd phirr aunga.. tab takkk koiii dusraa shikar dekhta huu.

Yamraj vaha se gayab ho gaya....vahi veer lagatar apni dhun me gadi chalaye ja raha tha....tab tak uss sher ki parchhayi ne uss jagah ko apni giraft me le liya.

Veer ki gaadi jaise hi narmada nadi ke ek lambe pul ke upar pahuchi...tabhi uss sher ki parchhayi ne apna vishal muh khola aur ussi samay samne se tezi se aa rahe tuck ke driver ko usne side se hi khich liya aur vo uske muh me hath pair maarte chillate huye samata chala gaya....uss parchhayi ne usko nigal liya.

Ye dekh kar veer ke hath pair phool gaye....veer kuch samajh pata ki tabhi vo bina driver ka truck badi tezi se veer ki car se takra gaya……takrane ke baad car kafi upar tak uchhali aur phir BOOOOMMMM kar ke hawa me hi blast ho gayi….vo truck nadi me ja gira….tabhi….

"Veerrrrrrrrrrrrrrr"

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Note : Sorry Friends, Raat 11 baje se likhna shuru kiya to subah 8 baje update complete ho paya mushkil se....abhi office me khali samay mila to post kar raha hu.

From Update 201 to 250 will be reserved for 5th Janam ki Love Story.
Present ki story chalu rahegi kintu update 251 se...present ki kahani disturb na ho isliye din me present ki kahani chalegi aur raat me 5th janam ki love story.

Matlab ek update present ka hoga to dusra 5th janam ki story ka...Index updated hai aur aage bhi rahega, isse series barkarar rahegi.

Awesome update bhai,
Behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
vah bhai kya update diya hai,
uss sadhu ne to sakshat maa mahakali ki ganika kapal malini ko ahwahan karke bulaya tha, lekin unhone ulta use hi parlok pahuncha diya,
Minakshi ki aisi durdasha dekh kar sab ko bahot dukh hua,
lekin aakhir kar minakshi ne apna sharir tyag kar mani saajan ko saunp diya hai,
Minakshi ke marte hi raj aur divya 5th janm ki yaadon mein chale gaye hain,
vrihadpur ke saundarya ka varnan bahot hi shandaar tha,
rang mahal aur utshav ka varnan aapne bahot hi khubsurat shabdon mein kiya hai,
vah bhai aapne to mujhe rajkumar bana diya,
ye vidya ko to yamraj bhi chhod kar chala gaya,
udhar veer ki gadi ka takkar trak se ho gaya hai, aur uski gadi hawa mein uchhal gayi hai,
ab dekhte hain ki mrinal use kaise bachati hai,
Waiting for next update,

 

[Jitu kumar]

chehre pe gussa,, man me gali....batuk ne Raj ke upor saktiya bhi chala li... phir bhi dono hath khali... burai, sachhai se bhidega to khatam burai ka hi hoga na.. batuk ka bhi wahi hasra hua...
aain.. Anand ji... ye kya.. jab bhi raj purane janam ki premikao se milte hai.. Boh mar jati hai... bahot buri baat.. na na aisa nahi hona chahiye ... update ko aapne kuch jyada hi emotional kar diya...

Oh to panchva janam ka flashback suru... rajkumar Jitendra kumar singh... in short.. . Jitu kumar... Jitu kumar....
.... Anyway to ye next yuvraaj ban ne wale hai vrihadpur ke... to yehi se flashback ki kahani start hoti hai..
omg ye kya.... veer sahit ushki car udd gayi kya.. . boh chinkh mrinal ki hogi... I'm sure, my favorite mrinal, veer ko kuch hone nahi degi....
Khair.. Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update Anand ji... Great going

Are naina ji agar pichhale janm me marega nhi to agla janm hoga kaise,
BTW excellent review

 

[Naina]

Are naina ji agar pichhale janm me marega nhi to agla janm hoga kaise,
BTW excellent review

Par next janam me hi to mil rahi hai na..
Btw aap to kahani me aa gaye... kya baat hai.. Vrihadpur ke next Yuvraaj .

 

[Sp bala]

Bhai ap ne toh pura emotional kar diya , minakshi raaj ke baho mai dam tor degi yeh nahi socha tha ....

Next part se 5th janam ke love story suru hone wala hai .... apne qile ke andar chal rahe jalsha ko bahut bariki se likha , although bahut saare word samajh mai nahi aya , jokes apart bhai bura mat maan na .... apko thanks bhai 5th janam ke love story and dharti pe raaj and uska present life ko alternate update mai dikhane ke liye ....

Sahi socha tha behos hone se vidhya mousi ki jaan bach gayi .... lekin yeh kya veer ke caar ka toh accident ho gaya and hawa mai blast bhi ho gaya , hope veer bach jaye .... agar veer ko kuch ho gaya toh mrinal and veer ki kahani adhuri reh jayega ....

fantastic update bhai as usual and ap ko thanks jo ap ne saloni ke raaj ko bataya and hum readers ka soch ke ap ne office time mai update diya ....

 

[Kalyansurya]

Awesome update anand bhai aapki story ko mai mai continue 2 bar pad chuka hu fir be jitne baar pado utna he maza aata hai aapki style sabse alag hai aapka har ek update mega size aata hai jis karan story padne me maza duguna ho jata hai thankx bhai apne story continue rakhna pleses
Good luck bhai