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Yes! Kese sweekaar kar sakti hai woh ye!?nidhi ko dhruv mil hi gaya
aur nidhi ab bhi is baat se inkaar karna chahti hai ki vo Veer ko pasand karne lagi hai
Dhanyavaad bhai! Yup! 1st mission is completed now. Rewards next update me dikhaaye jaenge.Juhi ka reaction bhi dekhne ko milega bhai. Next update me. Iss update me keval ye dikhaaya gaya ki kya hua. Ye nahi dikhaaya gaya ki kese hua. Wo next update me dikhaaya jaega. Usme Juhi samet Shreya ke reactions bhi dekhne ko milenge.Bahut hi sandar update bhai.
Aakhir kaat veer ka 1st mission complete ho gaya h. Ab dekhna h q ki ye 1st aur sbse bada mission tha to usase veer ko kya kayya milta h. Aur ab dhire dhire nidhi ko veer apna to bana hi lega aur bhai aapne Juhi ka reaction nahi dikhaya jb wo apne bhai se milti wo bhut hi important part tha mere hisab se uska wo baccho ki voice me bol kr apne bhai ko pyar krna kya scene hota.
Ye next update me pata lagega.Lagata hai Niddhi mam ki problem solve ho gayi....
Rajat (husband) tayar kaise ho gaya bache ko dene k liye?
Thanks bro!Jabardastt Updatee
Toh aakhir Dhruv wapas Nidhi ko mil gaya. Par sawaal yeh hai ke woh kamina Rajat itni aasani se maan kaise gaya usne koi hungama kaise nhi kiyaa
Thanks man! Card toh wahi mila hai na. Intimidating Presence.lovely update ..to nidhi ke najriye se saari baate pata chali ki kaise wo veer se mili ,kaise veer ke saath samay bita uska .
veer ne balhar ke jariye apna flat bechke dhruv ko nidhi ko de diya..
to ab pata chala ki veer aisa kya kehta tha juhi se ki wo sab baate maan leti thi veer ki .
waise abhi ye pata nahi chal paya ki veer ko kaunsa card mila hai.
veer ne nidhi mam ki pareshani ko khatm kar diya to usko kitne points mile ye bhi dekhna hoga ..
waise achcha laga pehli baar nidhi ke najriye se update padhna ..
Thanks man!Super se bhi Super update bro.
ek dam emotional wala.
Abhi tak ka sabse acha update lga bhai mja agya bht bht bht jada.
Ek request h apse if possible nidhi aur veer ki ek cute si love story dikhana plz if possible i knw ye apki story h bs as a reader m apna suggestion diya h sir.
Eagerly waiting for some cute and Romantic update between nidhi and veer
plzz do cont asap.. Takecare
Thanks a lot man!भावनात्मक रूप से बहुत शानदार और गजब अपडेट था । बस एक बात का अफसोस है । अपडेट जल्दी खत्म हो गया । पर अब अगले भाग के लिए इंतजार शुरू
Bilkul sahi kaha aapne. Boht boht dhanyavaad apni sameeksha rakhne ke liye. Aise hi bane rahiyega saath me.प्रणाम भाई सहाब
इस कहानी की एक मुख्य नायिका निधि जिस के बिना वीर अधूरा हैं
आप ने बहुत ही अच्छा न्याय किया निधि के साथ बहुत ही सुंदर और भावनात्मक दृश्य बनाया आप ने लेखन में.
निधि की सालों की तपस्या जो कि उस के बेटे ध्रुव के लिए थी वो पूरी हुई जो कि हमारे नायक वीर के कारण
ये अनुच्छेद दर्शाता हैं कि कोई एक भी इंसान जब आप अकेले होते है या बुरे हालात में होते हैं आप के साथ खडा़ होता हैं जब आप का समय सही होता है तो आप उस इंसान के पैरों में सारे जहां की खुशियां लाकर रख देते हैं
एक बार फिर से मेरी शुभ कामनाएँ अगले अनुच्छेद के लिए![]()
Indeed!!!What a burst of emotions... How Nidhi struggled with her life, sabki gandi nazro se apne ko bachate huye. Lekin abhi to adha kaam hua hai, divorce bacha hai.
Haha~ Nidhi se thappad khaane me Veer ko kabhi dukh nahi hota. Because he knows, she loves him a lot. Aur maarti bhi hai toh Veer se zyaada kasht Nidhi ko khud hota hai usse maar kar.bro, ye aakhri hona chahiye, dil me dard hota hai.
Yup!This is good. Nidhi ko pata lagna chahiye ki wo ab veer ki family ka hissa hai.
Slow surrendering of Nidhi.
She will try hard though.Destiny of Nidhi has been told to Nidhi. She knows, she can not resist now.
MIssed this in previous update. Lagta hai ki Suman ko kaam mil gaya. She will replace Niharika and may help in getting Nidhi's divorce.
Thanks a lot man!!Suppperbbbbbbbbbbbb Fantasticcccccccc Mind blowingggggggggg and full of Emotions , it was very necessary to explain Nidhi.s point of view, now it requires some kind of soft romance between Nidhi and Veer. it also needs to explain how that bastered husband of Nidhi agreed and if he was punished properly by Veer for his misdeeds?
Story lambi hai. Toh hoega sab kuch. Bas patience rakhna hoga uss waqt ke liye. Bhavna aur Tejal ke scenes side by sides aate rahenge. Jese Veer jab Egypt gaya tha toh waha ke scenes aur yaha Pranjal ke hotel hadapne ke scenes simultaneously chale the. Similarly yaha bhi hoega.ab ek update nidhi aur veer pe fir na jane kitne update apni maa aur behn se milne ke beech mein kuch itihaas bhi khulega aakhir kaise veer apni maa se bichda, ragini bhi aur kareeb aane ki koshish karegi rahi baat sauteli maa aur behan ki vo bhi shayad ab veer ki banhon mein jana chahengi
dekhte hain hamara wolfi kon sa rukh apnanata hai
Update 90 me pata lagega.Bhai Niddhi ki problem ko solve kar ne k bad ...Veer ko SYSTEM ki taraf se kya rewad mile???
Yup! Thanks a lot man!!!Waah bhai maza aa gaya kya update tha...
Bas ab nidhi ki problem solved....
Now she can leave all her worries about her pas life aside and focus on her own happiness and future....
Keep posting...
Waiting for next update...
Sahi kaha bhai Hamne to nhi socha tha Kabhi, Bhaya abhi 3 ghante lgatar baccho ki class li hai or uske Pahle bhi leni padti hai Kabhi Kabhi To raat me 8-9 bhi baj jata hai, data limited hota hai or Samay bhi sath me khubsurat or pyar karne vali Bibi bhi hai to jb jitna samay milta hai unse vo yha chla aata hu... Jisne mehnat ki hai use Yadi like or comment na karu to yah nainsafi hogi bhaya...Jis tarah Veer aur Shreya pehli baar mile the, kya kisi ne socha tha ki unke beech aise pal bhi aaenge!?But look at it now. Kitna parivaarik mahaul hai. Thanks a lot bhaaya! Ju aate kabhi kabhi ho par ek baar me dhadalle se saare revos dete ho.
Keeo supporting yaara!![]()
Ju payment bhejo mein time pe update dunga.
Ab mein kuch baatein bataata hu. Some brutal truths. Sabse pehli baat bro. Commitment jesa kuch nahi hota. Hum sab apna apna ek estimate dete hai. Ki hum iss kaam ko itni derr me kar denge. Par maan lo, koi kaam beech me aa jaaye aur hum uss kaam ke chakkar me apne estimate se bhatak jaaye toh??? Yadi wahi kaam diye gaye estimate me poora ho jaata hai toh fir hum usse commitment ka roop de dete hai. Anyways, commitment wo word hai jab hamaara estimate sahi jaata hai.
Readers aur writers ek doosre ke saath hi coexist karte hai. But there are some differences. A writer can always understand reader's thoughts. Kyuki, writer hone se pehle wo bhi ek reader hi tha. But same cannot be said for the readers. Ek Reader tabhi writer ke struggles ko samajhta hai jab wo khud writer banta hai. Iss platform par abhi recent me kitne hi naye writers aaye hai. Jinhe ab samajh aa raha hoga ki writer aur reader ke beech kitna farq hota hai.
Mene jab estimate diya tha ki update iss time ko aaega, tab mene update likhna start bhi nahi kiya tha.Keval ek estimate diya tha. Par zaroori nahi ki mein utne hi estimate me update de pau. Plus, poora ka poora sequence mene delete kar diya tha. Toh ek naye sire se likhne ke liye samay lagta hi hai.
Rahi baate raat me jaagne ki toh... Mein kabhi readers ko nahi kehta ki raat bhar jaago mere update ke liye. I always tell them ki neend poori karo, aur fir subah padhna. Choosing to stay awake in night is a personal choice. Uss baat ke liye writer ko dosh nahi de sakte.Not to mention ki jab ju raat me jaag ke wait kar rahe the. Tab mein raat me jaag ke update likh raha tha. Mein baar baar online aake ye nahi bataunga ki update 5 min me aa raha hai, 2 min me aa raha hai, etc.
Lastly the brutal truth. Check the forum. Hindi section me last ke pages me jao. Aur aage aate jao. You'll see all the abandoned stories. Ab sawaal. Why the writers left? I'll tell you. 20% writers wo hote hai, jo keval entertainment ke liye stories shuru kar dete hai. And then they leave. Unko matter nahi karta kuch. Then comes the other 10% jo kisi personal matter ke chalte stories ko chorr ke chale jaate hai.
20% fir wo hote hai jo shuru toh kar dete hai kahani, but updates jab unka mann karta hai tab hi aate hai. Then comes the 30% writers jo genuinely kahani likhna shuru karte hai but they leave it in the middle because of the sheer pressure. Yes! Jab likhne ke waqt unhe uss update dene ke pressure ko jhelna padta hai. Samay aisa aa jaata hai ki they leave kyuki wo uss pressure ko handle nahi kar paate. Ya fir unke mann me plot khatam ho jaata hai.
Fir aate hai 10% me wo writers jo pehle hi stories yaha likh ke complete kar chuke hai. Aur unki nayi stories bhi running me hai. They are the ones jin par readers bharosa karte hai. The remaining 10%... Ye wo rehte hai jo kabhi reader se writer bann'ne ke liye race me aaye the par fir waapas se reader hi rehne ka tay kar liya.
Ab itna sab kyu likha mene!? Samjhaane ke liye. Ki ye story meri last story ki tarah nahi hai, jidhar bas gharelu baato par mujhe focus karna hota tha. It's completely different. Isme samay lagta hai boht zyaada. Toh patience is a must. Kabhi behind the scenes ka varnan karunga isko lekar toh samajh aa jaega.
Haha~ Dhanyavaad bhai!Rulaao ge kya bhai tum mujhe....!
Mene jish waqt ka intzaar kar raha tha woh 25% pura huaa hein abhi toh pura hona baki hein like nidhi accepted & veer or uski sis ,veer or uski maa or etc....!
Still waiting....
KEEP WRITING....!
Update 90 me pata chalega.Legendary Card ka kya huaa uske bare me to bataoo
Thanks man!Super se bhi upar update…keep posting plz…![]()
Thanks yaara!!!Ding jabardast update tha werewolf bhai sach ankh bhar aayi nidhi ki situation dekh kar kahani mein bohut twists aane wale hai keep posting.
Dhanyavaad Naik bhai!Badhiya h nidhi mam ki problem solve ho gayi
Ab dekhte h aage kon si problem veer ki life m aati h
behtareen shaandaar lajawab update bhai
You mean Sonia!? Sonia Kaera ke saath hi picture me aaegi. Aur wo ek mainstream character hai. Uske aur Kaera ke bina Story adhuri hai. Uska plot jab aaega toh woh bhi saamne aaegi.Bhai sach kahu to story ki ek behtareen kadi Saniya bahut pichhe chhut gayi h uske liye bhi kuch special karo bhai usne bhi apne hero ki bahut help ki h....
Agle update me sab clear ho jaega bhai.Bhai ye kia tha es update ka na sar na paon Kuch khas Maza nai Aya please next update main Sab calier karin
Yup! Next update me!!!Bhai wo sab bhi dikhoge kya ke veer ne yhe sb kese kiya nidhi ke pati ka kya resction rhe .... Me to dekhna chata hu wo ab bhi