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Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

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Update 77

Finding past – begins...

Thunderbolt ...rises





Next day jab shweta school chali gayi tab maine baki ladkiyo ke sath breakfast kiya...

Main--- agar apki izzat bachane wale ke liye kuch h apke man mai toh ap kabhi meri sakal ka jikra marte dum tak nahi karengi ...apko jinhone kidnap kiya tha wo ab duniya mai nahi h isliye koyi nahi janta ki ap kidnap karke kaise layi gayi thi aur kisne kaha se kidnap kiya tha .....ha jisne order diya tha ab wo marega uska kata sir pure uttrakhan wale dekhenge. Ye sare raj bus àpke dil mai he rahne chahiye h..

Ladkiya—hum wada karti h ki apke bare mai kisi ko nahi batayengi par jane se pahle hum apse kuch chahti h...

Main--- kya ...

Ladkiya—break fast ke baad

Aur breakfast karne ke baad ek aur chali gayi uski train thi isliye phir baki 3 mere pass ayi main kuch samaj pata usai pahle he muje kiss karne lagi ..

Main--- sharmakar iski jarurat nahi h ..

Ladki--- ye sab hamari khusi se h aur hum raat ko he decied kar chuke the ki subhe ek pyar bhara ahsaas apse leke jayenge is liye hume rokiye mat ...

Main kuch bolna chahta tha par mere sabd mere mu mai rah gaye aur wo sab tut padi muje par ek kiss kar rahi thi baki ne mere kapde utarne suru kar diye kuch dair toh main bi normal raha par phir main bi unka sath dene laga unka unhone apne kapde utar diye sangmarmari sa badan mere samne tha un sabka aur mere andar ki aag bi jal uthi main bi unke sath dene laga kisi ke boobs ko chus raha tha toh dusri ke boobs ko daba raha tha aur ek meri tango ke bich mai niche baithkar


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mere lund ko chusne lagi charo taraf se garam sanso ke ahsas se he mera pura tan bandan bhadak utha tha main bed ke pass khada ho gaya

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ek ulti letke bed pe meri lund ko toh ek niche ghutno ke bal baithke meri goliyo ko chusne lagi kuch dair aise he chusane ke baad main bed pe n late gaya

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ek muje kiss karti rahi aur main usai aur baki 2 mere lund ko loli pop ki trah chus rahi thi ...phir 3sri bi kiss chod mere lund ko chusne lagi mere mote lund teeno ko ras pilane laga aur phir ek uth ke apni chut ko mere hoto ki taraf chut chatwane ke liye kardi toh ek apni chut ki garmahat bardast nahi kar payi aur apni gili chut ko mere lund pe baithne lagi maine uski kamar ko pakad ke niche se jatka mara toh chut ki dararo ko fadta huva lund adha ghus gaya wo uthana chah rahi thi par uth nahi payi piche wali ladki ne pakad liya usai main chut ka pani chusne se aur utejit ho gaya aur pagal saand ki trah jhatke maar ke uski chut ke andar lund ghused diya....wo cheek rahi thi aur main chodta gaya usai . chut chuswane wali uske boobs ko chusne lagi

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toh wo bi dard bhul masti mai chudne lagi main niche se toh kabhi wo upar se kudh ne lagi...phir main khada hokar ek ko ghodi ki position mai laya

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aur lund ek he jhatke mai daal diya wo bilbilane lagi par main kamar pakad chodta raha kuch he dair mai lund ki gharsan se uski siskariya ane lagi phir baki 2no

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uske boobs chusne lagi teen tariko se sex ka ahsas paake uski chut pani chodne lagi

Phir teeno ko ghodi banake

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ke bich wali ki chut mai lund ko saaf kar jhatke mar kar gusa diya aur chodne laga ..aur baki dono ki chut mai ungiliya ghusi di pure kamre mai ham charo ki siskariya ghunj rahi thi ...mai. Lagataar usai chodta raha mere lund ki motayi jabardast chudayi se uski chut ka band tutne laga aur phir jor ke jhatke se wo pani chodti huvi ulti he bed pe gir gayi uske thandi hote he main niche late gaya ab ek mere lund pe baith gayi aur upar niche hone lagi aur uski chut ka pani bi leak hone laga tha pahle meri ungliya aur ab lund se wo sex mai puri madhhosh ho gayi thi ab teeno he jhadne wali thi maine 2 ko alag kiya aur ek ko apne niche liya


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aur uske upar chad kar chodne laga thap...thap...thap...ki awaj ane lagi uski chut mere lund ki garshan se buri trah fadfadati huvi pani chod rahi thi aur chudayi ki awaj se baki do ki bi siskariya lene lagi.....phir teeno milke mere lund ko chusne lagi aur kuch dair mai main bi charam sukh pe pahuch gaya un teeno ne apne mu khol liye

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aur mere lund ne bharpur pani teeno ko pilaya ..teeno he santust thi phir hum teeno he sath dubara nahane gaye phir teeno ne ek baar bathroom mai jabardast chudayi karwayi teeno ki chut mere lund se ache se khul gayi thi aur unki ankho mai chudayi se huvi khumari ab saaf dikh rahi thi .....nahane ke baad wo chali gayiii aur main wapas bath tab mai late gaya 2 hour ki nind puri ki....3 ke sath 2 baar sex karne pe kafi thakawat ho gayi thi ...




Toh udhar

Sultan-- ye drugs is rate mai bechne h samje bhai ka order h is baar koyi bole toh bol dena maal short h ...samje

Sab ji bhai

Sabke jane ke baad pure din wo apne area ke andar drugs sari jagah bhejta raha .....aur evening mai collection dekh khus ho gaya..

Sultan—aj ka collection bhadiya h bhai bhi khus ho jayenge ....bhai jab pura uttrakhan akele sambhalenge toh main unka right hand hounga meri power bi badh jayegi.... Bus ab 3 ko kidnap karna baki rah gaya h.... us rajeev ki loundiya ko uthana h aur 2 ameer gharo ki aulado ko bus phir bhai vithal bhai ke paise chuka denge ha ha ha ha .....




Idhar mera din bilkul normal raha maine apna din normal bitaya...mere dimag mai bus sultan ka naam rah rah ke muje gusa dila raha tha night ko khana kha ke hum so gaye shweta ne bi disturb nahi kiya jayda kyoki usai bi pata tha ki main kuch soch raha hu .....aur main yahi soch raha tha ki kanha milega ye sultan maine apne admiyo ko laga diya tha is naam ke bande ko pata karne .....par kahte h kismat mai jo likha hota h wahi milega ...aur hona bi wahi tha......

Toh dusri gang mai

Anthony--- agar teri khabar paki h john toh hame bi taiyari karni hogi taki rajeev ki loundiya uske hath na lage aur hum Raka ko barbad karde .....

John – bhai bus apka hukum chahiye h ..waise bi vithal bhai paise aur rani ko paake khus h... Ab agar ek jhatka Raka ko de de toh kaam ho jayega... Aur phir sirf ap hovoge ....

Agla din Sunday

Shweta--- mai mam ke ghar ja rahi hu ok wo akeli h dadaji bahar gaye h ...

Main--- ok jake ajao main bi thoda bahar kaam se jake ata hu..

Shweta--- madhu mam spko yad kar rahi thi

Main--- chal phir unhi se milta huva nikal jaunga ...




30 minut baad

Madhu—kya baat h kuch jayda busy nahi ho ..

Main--- ap bi na dekha na main kanha busy hu breakfast karne agaya ...

Madhu—hmm ao na allu ke paranthe bane h..

Main--- mam mota ho jaunga...

Madhu—thoda fat hona chahiye h aur phir raj ke pass aakar jhuk kar khao na raj bahut ache h

Main--- main main khata hu na aur 2 paranthe khakar main nikal gaya ....

Bich mai he mera phone vibarte hone laga....

Main--- hello

Rinky—hello hoty kanha ghum rahe ho aj Sunday h yaar main aur manisha dono bore ho rahe h ...

Main--- toh muje dance nahi ata h yaar jo ap dono ke entertainment ke liye dance karu ap dono ghum ao kanhi yaar

Rinky—no way hume tum ghumayega aj movie chalenge ..aur muje kuch nahi sunna h main ghar hu tum ajao ....

Main--- ok ata hu manisha ko call karde hostel ke bahar ajaye main usai leke ata hu...

Rinky—ok main karti hu...

Main--- car chalani ati h ..h

Rinky—ha ati h na Kyu

Main--- bike be teeno toh nahi ja sakte h na main car mangwata hu....aur call kat kar ke maine call lagayi aur car ko ek address pe bhejne ki kaha ...Aur main pahuch gaya hostel ke bahar aur wait karne laga...


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Wo samne se ayi toh ek baar toh main bi dekhta rah gaya


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kya karu lag he itni shandaar rahi thi ....main usai dekhta raha aur wo gate ke pass ake bahar dekhne lagi par main nahi dikha usai laga tha school mai cycle se ane wala koyi sasti bike le ayega...par maine bike start ki aur uske agai le ja ke rok dii wo dekhti h toh main samne helmt pahne usai he 10 meter ki duri se dekh raha tha aur wo muje usne gardan ghuma li dusri taraf main samaj gaya ki usne nahi pahchana h muje phir maine helmet utara aur jab uski nazar muj par gayi toh uska muu khula he rah gaya ...wo mere pass meri ankho mai dhayan se dekhti arahi thi....

Main--- mang ke laya hu....
phir maine piche seat laga di

Manisha—kuch nahi boli bus helmet liya aur piche baith gayi h..

Main--- dekho muje lagta h apko muje kaske pakad lena chahiye h main nahi chahta papa ki pari ko chot lag jaye aur phir muj par papa ki pari barse bin barish ke...

Manisha-😡😡😡😡

Maine bike ko bhaga di aur wo chipak gayi mujse aur dus 20 mai he main finaly rinky ke ghar pahuch gaya janha muje pahuchna chahiye tha matlb mere plan ke according rinky ke ghar muje uske papa se milke rajiv ka pata karna tha....ki rajeev kanha posted h....Ghar ka darwaza open karke

Rinky—oye hoye dono ban than ke aye ho ...ao ao pahli baar aye ho ..phir piche mudke maa oh maa...

Aur rinky ki maa ayi toh manisha ne nameste kiya aur maine paanv chuve toh rinky ki maa ka dil khus ho gaya.....aur hum sab ne tea pi phir rinky hame apne room mai le gayi...

Main--- tumne sab bataya par papa tumhare dikh nahi rahe h..

Rinky—are yaar abi papa ko dikat chal rahi h bus main bi 12 th yanha se karte he gaanv chali jaungi...papa retiered ho rahe h

Main--- yaar tumahre papa ki age 40 ke pass lag rahi unhe toh abi aur job karni chahiye khair koyi baat nahi kabhi help chahiye ho toh bolna main jo ho sakega wo karunga...

Rinky—tum kuch nahi kar sakte ho khair chodo ye sab ao snacks lo...

Hum sab snacks etc lene lage aur muje jo chahiye tha wo muje mil gaya tha jiski khusi mere chahre pe alag he thi ..upar wale ke ghar mai ujala he ujala h...muje rajiv ki photo rinky ke room mai dikh gayi thi ...phir hum sab jo car maine mangwayi thi usmai movie dekhne aur ghumne gaye ....

Shamko tv pe news flesh ho rahi thi NIRWANA ab uttrakhand mai

Anchor – dekhiye jis nirwana ka kafi time se kuch pata nahi tha usne isbaar 5 ladkiyo ko bachaya h aur ye video hame bheje h ....aj phir wahi sawal uth raha h ki kya police so rahi h jo ek insaan NIRWANA banke inko bacha raha h kanha h uttrakhand ki police aur ye 5 ladkiya koun h....

Dusra ancher—aj ki sabse badi sansani khej khabar koun h ye nirwana police abi tak pata laga payi h aur breaking news ye h ki NIRWANA ka agla sikar h sultan ...koun h ye sultan jo NIRWANA iske piche pad gaya h....




Toh wahi delhi

Chief--- lo ek aur kaand kar diya h Raj ne

Sonali---sir sabse jayda wo isi baat se gusa hota ki rape balatkar kyo...kya stree koyi khilona h ..actualy sir uski maa nahi h na toh uske dil females ke liye respect h ab agar ass pass aisa ho toh wo aisa he karta h jaan se marta nahi h aur unhi phone se ambulence bulake bachacta bi h taki jindgi bhar tadapte rahe...

Chief--- ye bahut khatarnaak tarika h ...

Sonali--- ab bus ap dekhte jaiye wo pura uttrakhand se jurm saaf kar dega...Janha tak muje pata h wanha 2 gang h unke ulte din suru ho gaye h aur ap bi yaiyar rahiye jald apki jarurat padegi usai wo dusro se bi kaam karwa sakta h but muje pata h wo apko call karege

Chief--- kyo muje he kyo tumhe kyo nahi

Sonali—kyoki meri care karta h muje kuch nahi batayega aur mera ap par trust h toh wo definitely apki help lega par jab call aye toh samaj lena bahut kuch hoga....

Chief soch mai padh gaya...

Toh Raka news sunke soch mai padh gaya tha par usai tension sultan ki nahi un ladkiyo ki thi jo bach ke nikal gayi thi par wo shant baitha huva tha kyoki usai pata tha sultan sambhal lega usai...

Toh dehradhun se haridwar aya huva sultan ye news sunke gusai se foot padhta h

Sultan—mc ab ye koun h jisne aisi taisi karayi h ...aur gusai se apne admiyo se kahke pata karo aur 4 din baad hum rajiv ki loundiya ko uthayenge taki raka bhai ko khus kar sake unke maal ka pata karke rajiv se....ab time nahi h hamare pass jayda.....

Sab ji bhai hum taiyari karte h...aur jankari ikathi karte h




Par inki gang mai jo anthony ka khabri tha usne ye baat anthony tak pahuchwa di thi....

Anthony--- ha ha ha ha ab ayega maza tu bus time aur bata dena usai kuch dair pahle he main us ladki ko utha lunga.... Aur phir raka ki halat dekh maza ayega phir pakatkar john tere admiyo ko taiyar kar le char din baad bahut bada kaam karna h....

John – ji bhai ab halat dekhne layak hogi raka ki ha ha ha....




Aur main in sab se bekhabar khana kar aram se raat ko aram se bahar wolk kar raha tha jabki kal school mai kal nirwana ki news ka he jikra hona tha ..



Andhero mai

Thunderbolt rises.. ho chuki thi jiski gadgadahat aur chamak jald he mere daman tak bi pahuchne wali thi........




Kanhi .......

Ha bolo—Thunderbolts uth chuki

Samne se ... Wo shaks roof pe khada tha aur piche bijliya kadak rahi thi


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main araha hu ....

aur main asman ki taraf dekh raha tha


good-night
Ye toh ana he tha ..



Aj ke liye itna he..........



Update 77

Finding past – begins...

Thunderbolt ...rises





Next day jab shweta school chali gayi tab maine baki ladkiyo ke sath breakfast kiya...

Main--- agar apki izzat bachane wale ke liye kuch h apke man mai toh ap kabhi meri sakal ka jikra marte dum tak nahi karengi ...apko jinhone kidnap kiya tha wo ab duniya mai nahi h isliye koyi nahi janta ki ap kidnap karke kaise layi gayi thi aur kisne kaha se kidnap kiya tha .....ha jisne order diya tha ab wo marega uska kata sir pure uttrakhan wale dekhenge. Ye sare raj bus àpke dil mai he rahne chahiye h..

Ladkiya—hum wada karti h ki apke bare mai kisi ko nahi batayengi par jane se pahle hum apse kuch chahti h...

Main--- kya ...

Ladkiya—break fast ke baad

Aur breakfast karne ke baad ek aur chali gayi uski train thi isliye phir baki 3 mere pass ayi main kuch samaj pata usai pahle he muje kiss karne lagi ..

Main--- sharmakar iski jarurat nahi h ..

Ladki--- ye sab hamari khusi se h aur hum raat ko he decied kar chuke the ki subhe ek pyar bhara ahsaas apse leke jayenge is liye hume rokiye mat ...

Main kuch bolna chahta tha par mere sabd mere mu mai rah gaye aur wo sab tut padi muje par ek kiss kar rahi thi baki ne mere kapde utarne suru kar diye kuch dair toh main bi normal raha par phir main bi unka sath dene laga unka unhone apne kapde utar diye sangmarmari sa badan mere samne tha un sabka aur mere andar ki aag bi jal uthi main bi unke sath dene laga kisi ke boobs ko chus raha tha toh dusri ke boobs ko daba raha tha aur ek meri tango ke bich mai niche baithkar


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mere lund ko chusne lagi charo taraf se garam sanso ke ahsas se he mera pura tan bandan bhadak utha tha main bed ke pass khada ho gaya

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ek ulti letke bed pe meri lund ko toh ek niche ghutno ke bal baithke meri goliyo ko chusne lagi kuch dair aise he chusane ke baad main bed pe n late gaya

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ek muje kiss karti rahi aur main usai aur baki 2 mere lund ko loli pop ki trah chus rahi thi ...phir 3sri bi kiss chod mere lund ko chusne lagi mere mote lund teeno ko ras pilane laga aur phir ek uth ke apni chut ko mere hoto ki taraf chut chatwane ke liye kardi toh ek apni chut ki garmahat bardast nahi kar payi aur apni gili chut ko mere lund pe baithne lagi maine uski kamar ko pakad ke niche se jatka mara toh chut ki dararo ko fadta huva lund adha ghus gaya wo uthana chah rahi thi par uth nahi payi piche wali ladki ne pakad liya usai main chut ka pani chusne se aur utejit ho gaya aur pagal saand ki trah jhatke maar ke uski chut ke andar lund ghused diya....wo cheek rahi thi aur main chodta gaya usai . chut chuswane wali uske boobs ko chusne lagi

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toh wo bi dard bhul masti mai chudne lagi main niche se toh kabhi wo upar se kudh ne lagi...phir main khada hokar ek ko ghodi ki position mai laya

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aur lund ek he jhatke mai daal diya wo bilbilane lagi par main kamar pakad chodta raha kuch he dair mai lund ki gharsan se uski siskariya ane lagi phir baki 2no

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uske boobs chusne lagi teen tariko se sex ka ahsas paake uski chut pani chodne lagi

Phir teeno ko ghodi banake

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ke bich wali ki chut mai lund ko saaf kar jhatke mar kar gusa diya aur chodne laga ..aur baki dono ki chut mai ungiliya ghusi di pure kamre mai ham charo ki siskariya ghunj rahi thi ...mai. Lagataar usai chodta raha mere lund ki motayi jabardast chudayi se uski chut ka band tutne laga aur phir jor ke jhatke se wo pani chodti huvi ulti he bed pe gir gayi uske thandi hote he main niche late gaya ab ek mere lund pe baith gayi aur upar niche hone lagi aur uski chut ka pani bi leak hone laga tha pahle meri ungliya aur ab lund se wo sex mai puri madhhosh ho gayi thi ab teeno he jhadne wali thi maine 2 ko alag kiya aur ek ko apne niche liya


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aur uske upar chad kar chodne laga thap...thap...thap...ki awaj ane lagi uski chut mere lund ki garshan se buri trah fadfadati huvi pani chod rahi thi aur chudayi ki awaj se baki do ki bi siskariya lene lagi.....phir teeno milke mere lund ko chusne lagi aur kuch dair mai main bi charam sukh pe pahuch gaya un teeno ne apne mu khol liye

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aur mere lund ne bharpur pani teeno ko pilaya ..teeno he santust thi phir hum teeno he sath dubara nahane gaye phir teeno ne ek baar bathroom mai jabardast chudayi karwayi teeno ki chut mere lund se ache se khul gayi thi aur unki ankho mai chudayi se huvi khumari ab saaf dikh rahi thi .....nahane ke baad wo chali gayiii aur main wapas bath tab mai late gaya 2 hour ki nind puri ki....3 ke sath 2 baar sex karne pe kafi thakawat ho gayi thi ...




Toh udhar

Sultan-- ye drugs is rate mai bechne h samje bhai ka order h is baar koyi bole toh bol dena maal short h ...samje

Sab ji bhai

Sabke jane ke baad pure din wo apne area ke andar drugs sari jagah bhejta raha .....aur evening mai collection dekh khus ho gaya..

Sultan—aj ka collection bhadiya h bhai bhi khus ho jayenge ....bhai jab pura uttrakhan akele sambhalenge toh main unka right hand hounga meri power bi badh jayegi.... Bus ab 3 ko kidnap karna baki rah gaya h.... us rajeev ki loundiya ko uthana h aur 2 ameer gharo ki aulado ko bus phir bhai vithal bhai ke paise chuka denge ha ha ha ha .....




Idhar mera din bilkul normal raha maine apna din normal bitaya...mere dimag mai bus sultan ka naam rah rah ke muje gusa dila raha tha night ko khana kha ke hum so gaye shweta ne bi disturb nahi kiya jayda kyoki usai bi pata tha ki main kuch soch raha hu .....aur main yahi soch raha tha ki kanha milega ye sultan maine apne admiyo ko laga diya tha is naam ke bande ko pata karne .....par kahte h kismat mai jo likha hota h wahi milega ...aur hona bi wahi tha......

Toh dusri gang mai

Anthony--- agar teri khabar paki h john toh hame bi taiyari karni hogi taki rajeev ki loundiya uske hath na lage aur hum Raka ko barbad karde .....

John – bhai bus apka hukum chahiye h ..waise bi vithal bhai paise aur rani ko paake khus h... Ab agar ek jhatka Raka ko de de toh kaam ho jayega... Aur phir sirf ap hovoge ....

Agla din Sunday

Shweta--- mai mam ke ghar ja rahi hu ok wo akeli h dadaji bahar gaye h ...

Main--- ok jake ajao main bi thoda bahar kaam se jake ata hu..

Shweta--- madhu mam spko yad kar rahi thi

Main--- chal phir unhi se milta huva nikal jaunga ...




30 minut baad

Madhu—kya baat h kuch jayda busy nahi ho ..

Main--- ap bi na dekha na main kanha busy hu breakfast karne agaya ...

Madhu—hmm ao na allu ke paranthe bane h..

Main--- mam mota ho jaunga...

Madhu—thoda fat hona chahiye h aur phir raj ke pass aakar jhuk kar khao na raj bahut ache h

Main--- main main khata hu na aur 2 paranthe khakar main nikal gaya ....

Bich mai he mera phone vibarte hone laga....

Main--- hello

Rinky—hello hoty kanha ghum rahe ho aj Sunday h yaar main aur manisha dono bore ho rahe h ...

Main--- toh muje dance nahi ata h yaar jo ap dono ke entertainment ke liye dance karu ap dono ghum ao kanhi yaar

Rinky—no way hume tum ghumayega aj movie chalenge ..aur muje kuch nahi sunna h main ghar hu tum ajao ....

Main--- ok ata hu manisha ko call karde hostel ke bahar ajaye main usai leke ata hu...

Rinky—ok main karti hu...

Main--- car chalani ati h ..h

Rinky—ha ati h na Kyu

Main--- bike be teeno toh nahi ja sakte h na main car mangwata hu....aur call kat kar ke maine call lagayi aur car ko ek address pe bhejne ki kaha ...Aur main pahuch gaya hostel ke bahar aur wait karne laga...


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Wo samne se ayi toh ek baar toh main bi dekhta rah gaya


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kya karu lag he itni shandaar rahi thi ....main usai dekhta raha aur wo gate ke pass ake bahar dekhne lagi par main nahi dikha usai laga tha school mai cycle se ane wala koyi sasti bike le ayega...par maine bike start ki aur uske agai le ja ke rok dii wo dekhti h toh main samne helmt pahne usai he 10 meter ki duri se dekh raha tha aur wo muje usne gardan ghuma li dusri taraf main samaj gaya ki usne nahi pahchana h muje phir maine helmet utara aur jab uski nazar muj par gayi toh uska muu khula he rah gaya ...wo mere pass meri ankho mai dhayan se dekhti arahi thi....

Main--- mang ke laya hu....
phir maine piche seat laga di

Manisha—kuch nahi boli bus helmet liya aur piche baith gayi h..

Main--- dekho muje lagta h apko muje kaske pakad lena chahiye h main nahi chahta papa ki pari ko chot lag jaye aur phir muj par papa ki pari barse bin barish ke...

Manisha-😡😡😡😡

Maine bike ko bhaga di aur wo chipak gayi mujse aur dus 20 mai he main finaly rinky ke ghar pahuch gaya janha muje pahuchna chahiye tha matlb mere plan ke according rinky ke ghar muje uske papa se milke rajiv ka pata karna tha....ki rajeev kanha posted h....Ghar ka darwaza open karke

Rinky—oye hoye dono ban than ke aye ho ...ao ao pahli baar aye ho ..phir piche mudke maa oh maa...

Aur rinky ki maa ayi toh manisha ne nameste kiya aur maine paanv chuve toh rinky ki maa ka dil khus ho gaya.....aur hum sab ne tea pi phir rinky hame apne room mai le gayi...

Main--- tumne sab bataya par papa tumhare dikh nahi rahe h..

Rinky—are yaar abi papa ko dikat chal rahi h bus main bi 12 th yanha se karte he gaanv chali jaungi...papa retiered ho rahe h

Main--- yaar tumahre papa ki age 40 ke pass lag rahi unhe toh abi aur job karni chahiye khair koyi baat nahi kabhi help chahiye ho toh bolna main jo ho sakega wo karunga...

Rinky—tum kuch nahi kar sakte ho khair chodo ye sab ao snacks lo...

Hum sab snacks etc lene lage aur muje jo chahiye tha wo muje mil gaya tha jiski khusi mere chahre pe alag he thi ..upar wale ke ghar mai ujala he ujala h...muje rajiv ki photo rinky ke room mai dikh gayi thi ...phir hum sab jo car maine mangwayi thi usmai movie dekhne aur ghumne gaye ....

Shamko tv pe news flesh ho rahi thi NIRWANA ab uttrakhand mai

Anchor – dekhiye jis nirwana ka kafi time se kuch pata nahi tha usne isbaar 5 ladkiyo ko bachaya h aur ye video hame bheje h ....aj phir wahi sawal uth raha h ki kya police so rahi h jo ek insaan NIRWANA banke inko bacha raha h kanha h uttrakhand ki police aur ye 5 ladkiya koun h....

Dusra ancher—aj ki sabse badi sansani khej khabar koun h ye nirwana police abi tak pata laga payi h aur breaking news ye h ki NIRWANA ka agla sikar h sultan ...koun h ye sultan jo NIRWANA iske piche pad gaya h....




Toh wahi delhi

Chief--- lo ek aur kaand kar diya h Raj ne

Sonali---sir sabse jayda wo isi baat se gusa hota ki rape balatkar kyo...kya stree koyi khilona h ..actualy sir uski maa nahi h na toh uske dil females ke liye respect h ab agar ass pass aisa ho toh wo aisa he karta h jaan se marta nahi h aur unhi phone se ambulence bulake bachacta bi h taki jindgi bhar tadapte rahe...

Chief--- ye bahut khatarnaak tarika h ...

Sonali--- ab bus ap dekhte jaiye wo pura uttrakhand se jurm saaf kar dega...Janha tak muje pata h wanha 2 gang h unke ulte din suru ho gaye h aur ap bi yaiyar rahiye jald apki jarurat padegi usai wo dusro se bi kaam karwa sakta h but muje pata h wo apko call karege

Chief--- kyo muje he kyo tumhe kyo nahi

Sonali—kyoki meri care karta h muje kuch nahi batayega aur mera ap par trust h toh wo definitely apki help lega par jab call aye toh samaj lena bahut kuch hoga....

Chief soch mai padh gaya...

Toh Raka news sunke soch mai padh gaya tha par usai tension sultan ki nahi un ladkiyo ki thi jo bach ke nikal gayi thi par wo shant baitha huva tha kyoki usai pata tha sultan sambhal lega usai...

Toh dehradhun se haridwar aya huva sultan ye news sunke gusai se foot padhta h

Sultan—mc ab ye koun h jisne aisi taisi karayi h ...aur gusai se apne admiyo se kahke pata karo aur 4 din baad hum rajiv ki loundiya ko uthayenge taki raka bhai ko khus kar sake unke maal ka pata karke rajiv se....ab time nahi h hamare pass jayda.....

Sab ji bhai hum taiyari karte h...aur jankari ikathi karte h




Par inki gang mai jo anthony ka khabri tha usne ye baat anthony tak pahuchwa di thi....

Anthony--- ha ha ha ha ab ayega maza tu bus time aur bata dena usai kuch dair pahle he main us ladki ko utha lunga.... Aur phir raka ki halat dekh maza ayega phir pakatkar john tere admiyo ko taiyar kar le char din baad bahut bada kaam karna h....

John – ji bhai ab halat dekhne layak hogi raka ki ha ha ha....




Aur main in sab se bekhabar khana kar aram se raat ko aram se bahar wolk kar raha tha jabki kal school mai kal nirwana ki news ka he jikra hona tha ..



Andhero mai

Thunderbolt rises.. ho chuki thi jiski gadgadahat aur chamak jald he mere daman tak bi pahuchne wali thi........




Kanhi .......

Ha bolo—Thunderbolts uth chuki

Samne se ... Wo shaks roof pe khada tha aur piche bijliya kadak rahi thi


bitcoin-thunderbolt-bitcoin
main araha hu ....

aur main asman ki taraf dekh raha tha


good-night
Ye toh ana he tha ..



Aj ke liye itna he..........



Wahhh gajab ladkiyon ne toh chandi kr di woh bhi ek nahi 3-3 ldkiyon ka alg -2 flavor ek sath.. Ldkiyan khuddar nikli izzat bachane wale ko pura pyar dekr rukhsat hui. Humare Raj ko toh mauka milna chahiye 2no hathon se lapak Leta hai koi kasar nahi chhodta.. Madhu bhi khilane ko Ready hai Raj kab khata hai ye dekhna hai ya fir rinki pehle khilayegi usko jyada khujli ho rhi hai arey rinki ko kon smjhaye rinki ki laal pari or sonpari ko khane wale sultan or Anthony ke bande fielding lgaye baithe hai. Nirwana to news me chhaa gya sultan or raka to paglaa gya hai. News sunke idhar Anthony bhi khush hai qki usko khabar dene wala sultan ke gang me uske khabri maujud hai. Sonali or chief bhi smjh gye ye nirwana wala kaam Raj ka hi hai. Sonali smjhti hai Raj uski Care krta hai uski help nhi lega isliye chief ko alert kr diya hai Raj ka phone aye toh Ready rhe.. Baki agey dekhte hai kya hota hai
 

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Finding past---- begins

Peace before ---Thunderbolts




Main apni udhed bhun mai he itna kho gaya tha ki shweta wapas bi agayi thi ....par usne muje kuch bola nahi....bus meri taraf dekhti rahi aur main bus soch raha tha ki last time xabhi sir sunil Aag sir sonali thi toh main lad paya tha par main har baar toh sabko apne pass nahi rakh sakta hu na ......isliye is baar muje akele he bhidna hoga.......par main sabke samne agaya toh phir khatra jayda ho jayega hmm yahi sahi rahega ki shweta aur mera reletion open nahi ho..school mai... Wo anjaan he bane rahe .....par abhi kuch clear bi toh nahi ho raha h ki kab karenge wo harkat..par agar aye toh marenge jald he sultan ki khabar mil jaye sabse pahle usai he kaatna h....

Phir ek awaj ne muje meri soch se bahar nikala ....

Rinky—hum ja rahe h ok bye

Manisha—bye school milte h...

Main--- request h mere aur shweta ke reletion ke bare mai bhulkar bi mat bataana kisi ko bi...

Dono—confuse hoke dekhne lagi phir ok nahi batayenge.....

Dono ke jane ke baad main khada hota hu toh shweta muje dekh rahi thi aur main usai dekh muskara deta hu ...

Main--- naha le main bi naha leta hu phir nashta taiyar karwata hu...

Shweta--- andar jake ek call karti h aur kafi dair baat karti h...aur call rakh kar khudse he bolti h bhai ap sabki fikar karte ho aur muje apki bahut fikar h main apko kisi bi haal mai tension mai nahi dekh sakti hu love u bhai.......




In school....



Main--- aditiya ek baat bata bhai

Aditiya-- puch na tuje kabse permission ki jarurat aa padi bhai .....

Main--- tuje car drive karni ati h kya ache se...

Aditiya – ha bhai ati h aur ache se ati h hariyana se hu tracter bi chala leta hu toh car kya h aur musibat aye toh ek 2 se bhid bi sakta hu kisaan ka beta hu.....

Main--- good aur tuje hacking bi ati hogi phir jab tu itna bada computer jenious h toh....

Aditiya—dekh Raj tu kya chahta h muje pata nahi h but main itna samaj sakta hu tu ek acha insan h bol kya karwana chahta h...Saaf saaf bola kar....

Main--- school ke bahar ke sare camero ka live video pe nazar chahta hu .....

Aditiya—simple h bhai bus half hour de main kar deta hu par kyo chahta h khair chod main kar dunga

Main--- tikh h is phone mai install kar dena software taki main live dekh saku... Aur thanks bro.....




Toh udhar sultan Nanital se dehradun ke liye nikal gaya tha 300 km ana tha usai toh raat ho jani thi pahunchte pahunchte....

Sultan—sittu ek kaam kar apne bando ko sabko raat ko milne ko bol de...taki raat ko puri baat sabko clear ho jaye

Sittu --- ji bhai bol diya tha par dubara bol deta hu...

Sultan—aur apne bande rajeev pe nazar rakhe h na ....taki koyi chuk na ho pata laga beti ko bheje he nahi betichod ne....

Sittu—bhai usai bi maar kyo nahi dete ho ...usne bahut pareshan kiya h Raka bhai ko ...samne se toh dosti ka hath aur piche se hamesa nuksaan karta aya h ...

Sultan—uski beti ko uthake jab Raka bhai ke pass bhejenge aur jab uski beti uske samne chudegi tab ..pata chalega usai jab wo tadpega jaise hum tadap rahe h....aur sab bhokne ke baad maar denge... bus kal kal din aur h .. tu ek baar aur Sp aur area ke inspecter se baat kar liyo....mc bakchodi na kare...

Sittu—ji bhai main abhi sab se baat kar leta hu....

Sultan – bus phir raka bhai ke liye loundiya uthani baki rah jayengi.. la pudiya de bc tension se nasha utar gaya pura




Dehradun ke ek hotel ki roof se jo school se thodi duri pe thi wanha se ...ek admi durbin se kisi ko dekh raha hota h

Hmmm toh ye h wo jisai marna h Sali duniya bi badi kamini h paiso ke lalach mai apno ko he marwa deti h bechara abi toh jawani ayi h iske ....aur jawani puri ane se pahle he mar jayega isai school mai padhne wale ke liye ek cr ki supari ha ha ha aur ye iske sath toh mast jawaniya ghum rahi h inhi mai se ek utha lu kya .... aur phone laga kar kahta h target mil gaya h jald he kaam nipta ke phone karta hu....aur call cut karke dehradun mai toh beauti he bahut h kyo na chakh li jaye pahle kaam se 2 din enjoy karta hu phir maarunga isai....aur nikal jata h pub ki taraf....




Raju--- or champuuu bada ghum raha h dono ke sath phir coller pakadke sale lagta h dena he padega tuje laat ghusai aise toh na manne wala h tu....

Raman--- chod wo dekh dono arahi h dekh liya toh bc sakal tak na dekhengi apni isai kal dekhenge chutti ke baad beta tu pitega kal teri gaand todunga ache se....

Phir rinky aur manisha pass ake ye tumhe phir tang kar rahe the..

Main--- ab school ki 2 top beauty unhe chod mere sath baat karengi toh jalegi na upar se science wali ladkiya shweta ki vajah se piche lagi rahti h wo alag he toh tum dono batao ye hoga nahi toh kya hoga...

Manisha—ha ha ha very funny tum toh prince charm thare na ladkiyo ke jo tumhre piche padi h jayada sapne mat lo chalo....

Rinky—lol ....waise thoda style mai rahe toh prince he lagega...




“Akhir tum phone kyo nahi uthate ho problem kya h tumahari .... nahi dekha mera call kyo nahi dekha kya kaha busy the ok honge busy tum maan liya phir wapas kyo nahi kiya bahut pankh nikal aye h tumhare wanha jake kabse pyar jatati arahi hu wo tumse dekha nahi jata h aur wanha tume nayi chudailo ke sath udna h sare pankh kaat dungii main.jo dubara muje call nahi kiya ya mera phone nahi uthaya toh”

Havaldar—maidam sathiya gayi h kya jo akele he baat kar rahi h....

Dusra havaldaar --- maidam kal se he utpatang harkat kar rahi par aj charam par h tea mangati h aur pina bhul jati h phir dant ti h ki thandi kyo laye goli maar dungi...aj puri paagla ho gayi h aj toh bhagwan he bachaye....

Havaldar—aj subhe se sabki le rakhi h khaskar wi bechare jo torture room mai h ek ke toh pichwade mai danda he ghusaid diya h agar aisa raha toh ye sherni aj kisi ko nahi bakhsegi.......dekh dekh wo abi bi apne ap se he baat kar rahi h kisak le uske khisakne se pahle...dekh liya toh pata nahi kanha ki baat kanha le jayegi....




“ tum wanha padhne gaye the apne past ke raj janne gaye the na ki raas lila karne 2 chudailo ke sath padhayi raat bhar aisi kya emergency agayi thi un chudailo ke sath akele padhne ki tum dekhte jao jaan se maar dungi unko toh main koyi saboot nahi milega...”



Sonali subhe se he akele yahi sab badbada rahi thi ki Raj ko aise dantegi waise dantegi.sach he kahte h sab pyar hota he aisa h . kal shweta se baat karne ke baad se he wo aisa behave kar rahi thi...aur uske isi behaviour se kayiyo ki lag gayi thi.....wo Raj ko dantne ki taiyari karti par phone hath mai leke call nahi kar pati ........

Chief --- room mai aake every thing is fine sonali

Sonali—hadbadakar khadi hoke ya ya absolutely fine sir absolutely fine koyi bi toh dikat nahi h.sab tikh..koyi dikat nahi h.kuch kaam tha..

Chief---sonali ko dhayan se dekh kar nahi koyi kaam nahi tha wo iskiye pucha tum kal se yanhi ho...sayad tumhe ek achi nind leni chahiye

Sonali--- acha main toh bhul he gayi thi ..ok main ghar jati hu aur nind leti hu phir man mai woh sone de na tab na ab ye nayi kutiya pata nahi koun aagayi h aur kadam bhada deti h jane ke liye

Chief--- tumne jis heesab se raj ke bare mai bataya tha ab tak toh aisa nahi huva h...

Sonali--- ke expression turant change ho jate h bina piche mude tufaan jab ata h na sir tab kuch pal ke liye sab kuch shant ho jata h wo bi aisa he chote mote kaam usai raas nahi ate h jab wo karega toh usai jagda nahi kaand kahenge jisai ache acho ki gaan.....sorry sir ....fat jayegiii usai tab koyi nahi sambhal sakta sivaye uske jo uska khass ho warna wo sab cheerfaad kar deta h uske andar jo daba h bus wo bahar nahi ana chahiye h apne nahi maine dekha h ye shanti jo dikh rahi h maut ki shanti h... ....




Idhar School se jab main ghar pahucha toh samne madhu mam aur shweta khana set kar rahe the

Madhu—are late ho gaye ho ajao hum wait karte h....

Main fresh hoke aya toh news chal rahi....

Ancher—mousam vibhag ne chetawani jari kari h ki bangal ki khadi se jo tufaan utha tha wo shaniwar ko Up ko paar karte huve ab uttarakhand mai takrayega isiliye sabi surakhsit rahe kisi dur jagah pe na jaye ....aj mousam ki jaankari mai itna he.... Surakhsit rahe.

Madhu—kal school se jaldi ghar ajayenge babuji akele honge aur tufaan bi asakta h...

Main--- ha sahi rahega shweta tu bi mam ke sath unke ghar he rook jana jab tak main na au ok...

Shweta--- he he he main bachi nahi hu 18 ki ho gayi hu ye toh papa ke transfer ke chakkaro ne muje late kar rakha h warna college mai hoti mai abhi aye bade muje samjhane huuuuunnhhh.....

Madhu muskara kar rah gayi...aur lunch khatm karne ke baad chali gayi ...aur main bi sofe pe baitha school ki outside ki videos dekhne laga muje kuch nahi mila aur main nikal gaya library old news nikalne ke liye.....main abhi news padh he raha tha ki ek ladki mere samne books leke baith gayi maine usai notice nahi kiya but usne kiya aur uske chahre ka rang badalne laga wo dono hath hilane lagi par bol nahi pa rahi thi excitement ke karan

Main--- muje kuch ajeeb sa mahsus huva aur samne dekha toh wo he ladki thi jisai maine bachaya

Wo--- hihihi hi hi hi

Main--- dheere se baat karo library h ....

Wo—oh my god oh my god main kya karu i m so excited... Oh my god my saviour my god.....yes yes

Main--- cool down take a deep breath 5 times pahle toh nahi dekha tumhe kabhi ...

Wo—lambi sanse lekar main afternun mai college se direct yanha ati hu padhne job ki try kar rahi hu taki agai bhadh saku...

Main--- kya kar rahi ho education mai i mean subject course etc




Wo—Bba kar rahi hu muje di ne he pala h sara kharcha unhone he uthaya h abhi bi wo he bharti h unke 2 bache h unki fees toh main bi unki help karna chahti hu wo batati nahi h but main sab samajti hu...

Main---ok ok good tum bahut achi ladki ho main tumhari help karunga job dundhne mai tumhe ek kaam karna h mera ...

Wo – bolo na main jarur karungi apke liye kuch bi

Maine phir usai sari detail batayi aur in years ke news pepars mai se chantane ko bol diya....by the way your name

Wo—suman....




Main--- thank you miss suman isai judi koyi bi news pepar tum muje isi waqt dhund ke de dena main 100 percent tumhari job ka arrangement kar dunga ok main yanha isi time ata rahta hu jald mulakat hogi

Suman- dheere se thank you nirwana sir

Main--- sss sabko batana jaruri h .....ap news pepar se info.nikalo aur apni study mat chodna ok tc bye...main sab arrange kar dunga dont worry....




Sultan—sittu sab agaye na

Sittu—ji bhai

Sultan—kuch dair baad kaan kholke chahe gaand kholke jisai sune wo sab ched khol lo uthana sirf is loundiya ko h ye uski photo h dhayan se dekh lo .... aur wanha security wale honge unhe tum 10 jane sambhal lena aur baki bache huve nighrani rakhna ek nirwaana naam ka mere piche pada h wo bi asakta h...toh usai tum log nipta lena ....koyi gun leke nahi jayega warna bawal ho jayega koyi firing wiring nahi aasan kaam h sirf uthana h samje. bus jao uthao car mai dalk aur ajao ....koyi faltu back chodi nahi 2 baje chuutti hogi hum 2.05 baje pahuch jayenge samje .

Jiii bhaiii

Sultan—jao bhosdiko kam pina taki kal hosh mai raho warna tumahri ma chodunga...

Sittu—bhai kal ke baad apka naam pure uttrakhan ke chokre log mai famous ho jayega....aur raka bhai bi khus ho jayenge

Sultan ke chehre pe lambi muskarahat agayi.....jaise usne koyi sapna sach hote dekh liya ho ....




Hutiye tu tikh h na sale kuttai mu mai kya le rakha jo phone nahi hota tujse

Main--- are main tikh hu tu phirlugayi banne ki kosis karne laga h

Sunil--- koyi dikat toh nahi h na aur ladke bheju kya safety ke liye

Main--- ud mat chutiya business kya sambhalne laga bada ban gaya h ....par teri yaad ati h yaar bahut.

Sunil--- abhi ajau tu toh ane se raha....

Main--- nahi tu business sikh dadaji ne aur uncle ne soch ke he kuch kiya hoga main yanha sambhal lunga

Sunil--- tikh h dhayan rakhna khud ka bi aur us chudail ka bi.....

Main--- ha bhai tu bi dhayan rakhna jald milte h

Sunil--- ha. Bahut jald...






SATURDAY..........

Morning main jab school pahucha tab aj strength thidi kam lagi sayad tufan etc ki wajah se ya thunderstorm ke ane ki pahle ki shanti thi aj asman mai badal gahre chaye huve the aur panchi bi kam he ud rahe the.....Jo ye samjhane ke liye kafi tha ki ye tufaan ke pahle ki shanti h.....Pura din u he bita mera 12 baj gaye the ....

Tabi kuch gadiya dehradun mai entere hoke alag rasto pe chali gayi aur school ki taraf ane ka rasta block karne lagi .....

Time 1.pm....

Ha bhai sare raste block kar diye h bhai ap ajao aur 4 bikes aur 2 black scorpio full rafter se school ki taraf ane lagi ....aur asman mai bijliyo ki flashes dikhne lagi...

Aditya – bhai wo tuje rajni maidam ne Bulaya........

Main--- ok bhai




Aj ke liye itna he..
Kya Raj in namunoo ko sabak seekhayega yaa aise hi inki bakwaas sunta rahega? Ye roof top se girl hostal par koun nazar rakh Raha tha aur wo ladki Manisha to nahi jiski supari iss aadmi ne li hai iska matlab Manisha ka bhi kuch past hai jo aage open hone waala hai? Dono gangs ne fielding to poori laga li hai magar dekhna hoga ki plan kiska poora hota hai yaa do gangs ki mulakat Nirwana se hoti hai? Usha Raj ke chacha ne bhi killer bheja hai to pata nahi wo is kaam ko kitna complecat karta hai? Nice update.

Ab aate hai Sandeep singh nirwan bhai ki shikayat bhari gujaraish par, to bhai peechle kuch updates ek common format par aa rahe the ki ek bada sa sex scene thodi school ki nokjhonk aur update khatam. Mujhe nahi pata wo sex scene aage story mein koi contribution denge yaa nahi magar un updates mein un sex scene ka mujhe koi logic nahi laga jaise Jin ladkiyon ko Raj ne bachaya unke saath sex haalaki suruaat un ladkiyon ne hi ki thi magar Raj ka participation se aisa laga ki Raj ne un par jo ahsaan kiya uski kimat bhi le li. Ab kahani, lekhak ki brain child hai to main us par koi negative comments karna pasand nahi karta sirf updates padhta hoon aur agar same pattern chalta rahta hai to kahani padhana chod deta hoon, afterall who am I guide aur dictat writer when I cannot write story. Isiliye maine peechale kuch updates par comments nahi diye the magar mujhe ye jaankar bhi kushi hui ki mere jaise ek anjaan se paathak ke comments bhi Sandeep singh nirwan bhai ke liye mahatv rakhte hai to comments de diye waise bhi aaj ka update fir se poorani speed aur logical pattern par tha to comments to dene hi waala tha. Magar ye jaankar bhi Khushi Hui ki lekhak apne har paathak ko lekar jaagruk hai to uske liye dhanywaad.
 
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Kya Raj in namunoo ko sabak seekhayega yaa aise hi inki bakwaas sunta rahega? Ye roof top se girl hostal par koun nazar rakh Raha tha aur wo ladki Manisha to nahi jiski supari iss aadmi ne li hai iska matlab Manisha ka bhi kuch past hai jo aage open hone waala hai? Dono gangs ne fielding to poori laga li hai magar dekhna hoga ki plan kiska poora hota hai yaa do gangs ki mulakat Nirwana se hoti hai? Usha Raj ke chacha ne bhi killer bheja hai to pata nahi wo is kaam ko kitna complecat karta hai? Nice update.

Ab aate hai Sandeep singh nirwan bhai ki shikayat bhari gujaraish par, to bhai peechle kuch updates ek common format par aa rahe the ki ek bada sa sex scene thodi school ki nokjhonk aur update khatam. Mujhe nahi pata wo sex scene aage story mein koi contribution denge yaa nahi magar un updates mein un sex scene ka mujhe koi logic nahi laga jaise Jin ladkiyon ko Raj ne bachaya unke saath sex haalaki suruaat un ladkiyon ne hi ki thi magar Raj ka participation se aisa laga ki Raj ne un par jo ahsaan kiya uski kimat bhi le li. Ab kahani lekhak ka brain child hai to main us par koi negative comments karna pasand nahi karta sirf updates padhta hoon aur agar same pattern chalta rahta hai to kahani padhana chod deta hoon, afterall who am I guide aur dictat writer when I cannot write story. Isiliye maine peechale kuch updates par comments nahi diye the magar mujhe ye jaankar bhi kushi hui ki mere jaise ek anjaan se paathak ke comments bhi Sandeep singh nirwan bhai ke liye mahatv rakhte hai to comments de diye waise bhi aaj ka update fir se poorani speed aur logical pattern par tha to comments to dene hi waala tha. Magar ye jaankar bhi Khushi Hui ki lekhak apne har paathak ko lekar jaagruk hai to uske liye dhanywaad.
Ok ap rahne he do apne comments apka review dhek ke toh aisa laga jaise bahut bada ahsan kiya ho apne muj par aur kya kaha brain child h mera so mind your words before say about me look at your own self ok ...you are the first person to say find logic in sex ....na bhai na mujse toh nahi hoga sex logic dundhna mera toh Brain child h na ap ko he mubharakh ho child brain logic in sex...
Aur dusri baat bilkul har reader mere liye jaruri h ....but kisi ko ye huk nahi h ki wo muje ulta sidha kahe .............
Sayad meri he galti thi jo maine apse pucha ki kyo apke reviews ni arahe h muje mera har reader yaad rahta h bhai becouse we are all are part of story.. par muje nahi pata tha ki mere puchne se ap muje he bura kahoge ..... sach kahu to i m sorry to u muje really apke reviews apki wording sunke katayi nahi chahiye ab jayda nahi kahunga socha tha reviews padhke reply karunga but aj pahli baar kisi ka review padhke itna bura feel aur gussa aya h........
 
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Ok ap rahne he do apne comments apka review dhek ke toh aisa laga jaise bahut bada ahsan kiya ho apne muj par aur kya kaha brain child h mera so mind your words before say about me look at your own self ok ...you are the first person to say find logic in sex ....na bhai na mujse toh nahi hoga sex logic dundhna mera toh Brain child h na ap ko he mubharakh ho child brain logic in sex...
Aur dusri baat bilkul har reader mere liye jaruri h ....but kisi ko ye huk nahi h ki wo muje ulta sidha kahe .............
Sayad meri he galti thi jo maine apse pucha ki kyo apke reviews ni arahe h muje mera har reader yaad rahta h bhai becouse we are all are part of story.. par muje nahi pata tha ki mere puchne se ap muje he bura kahoge ..... sach kahu to i m sorry to u muje really apke reviews apki wording sunke katayi nahi chahiye ab jayda nahi kahunga socha tha reviews padhke reply karunga but aj pahli baar kisi ka review padhke itna bura feel aur gussa aya h........
Unhone aapke brain ko child nahi bola bhai. Poori line padho unki, “Ab kahani lekhak ka brain child hai”.. Is line ka matlab hua ki Kahani/story ka janm lekhak ke brain se hota hai, so story is a child of the writer.
 

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Finding past---- begins

Peace before ---Thunderbolts




Main apni udhed bhun mai he itna kho gaya tha ki shweta wapas bi agayi thi ....par usne muje kuch bola nahi....bus meri taraf dekhti rahi aur main bus soch raha tha ki last time xabhi sir sunil Aag sir sonali thi toh main lad paya tha par main har baar toh sabko apne pass nahi rakh sakta hu na ......isliye is baar muje akele he bhidna hoga.......par main sabke samne agaya toh phir khatra jayda ho jayega hmm yahi sahi rahega ki shweta aur mera reletion open nahi ho..school mai... Wo anjaan he bane rahe .....par abhi kuch clear bi toh nahi ho raha h ki kab karenge wo harkat..par agar aye toh marenge jald he sultan ki khabar mil jaye sabse pahle usai he kaatna h....

Phir ek awaj ne muje meri soch se bahar nikala ....

Rinky—hum ja rahe h ok bye

Manisha—bye school milte h...

Main--- request h mere aur shweta ke reletion ke bare mai bhulkar bi mat bataana kisi ko bi...

Dono—confuse hoke dekhne lagi phir ok nahi batayenge.....

Dono ke jane ke baad main khada hota hu toh shweta muje dekh rahi thi aur main usai dekh muskara deta hu ...

Main--- naha le main bi naha leta hu phir nashta taiyar karwata hu...

Shweta--- andar jake ek call karti h aur kafi dair baat karti h...aur call rakh kar khudse he bolti h bhai ap sabki fikar karte ho aur muje apki bahut fikar h main apko kisi bi haal mai tension mai nahi dekh sakti hu love u bhai.......




In school....



Main--- aditiya ek baat bata bhai

Aditiya-- puch na tuje kabse permission ki jarurat aa padi bhai .....

Main--- tuje car drive karni ati h kya ache se...

Aditiya – ha bhai ati h aur ache se ati h hariyana se hu tracter bi chala leta hu toh car kya h aur musibat aye toh ek 2 se bhid bi sakta hu kisaan ka beta hu.....

Main--- good aur tuje hacking bi ati hogi phir jab tu itna bada computer jenious h toh....

Aditiya—dekh Raj tu kya chahta h muje pata nahi h but main itna samaj sakta hu tu ek acha insan h bol kya karwana chahta h...Saaf saaf bola kar....

Main--- school ke bahar ke sare camero ka live video pe nazar chahta hu .....

Aditiya—simple h bhai bus half hour de main kar deta hu par kyo chahta h khair chod main kar dunga

Main--- tikh h is phone mai install kar dena software taki main live dekh saku... Aur thanks bro.....




Toh udhar sultan Nanital se dehradun ke liye nikal gaya tha 300 km ana tha usai toh raat ho jani thi pahunchte pahunchte....

Sultan—sittu ek kaam kar apne bando ko sabko raat ko milne ko bol de...taki raat ko puri baat sabko clear ho jaye

Sittu --- ji bhai bol diya tha par dubara bol deta hu...

Sultan—aur apne bande rajeev pe nazar rakhe h na ....taki koyi chuk na ho pata laga beti ko bheje he nahi betichod ne....

Sittu—bhai usai bi maar kyo nahi dete ho ...usne bahut pareshan kiya h Raka bhai ko ...samne se toh dosti ka hath aur piche se hamesa nuksaan karta aya h ...

Sultan—uski beti ko uthake jab Raka bhai ke pass bhejenge aur jab uski beti uske samne chudegi tab ..pata chalega usai jab wo tadpega jaise hum tadap rahe h....aur sab bhokne ke baad maar denge... bus kal kal din aur h .. tu ek baar aur Sp aur area ke inspecter se baat kar liyo....mc bakchodi na kare...

Sittu—ji bhai main abhi sab se baat kar leta hu....

Sultan – bus phir raka bhai ke liye loundiya uthani baki rah jayengi.. la pudiya de bc tension se nasha utar gaya pura




Dehradun ke ek hotel ki roof se jo school se thodi duri pe thi wanha se ...ek admi durbin se kisi ko dekh raha hota h

Hmmm toh ye h wo jisai marna h Sali duniya bi badi kamini h paiso ke lalach mai apno ko he marwa deti h bechara abi toh jawani ayi h iske ....aur jawani puri ane se pahle he mar jayega isai school mai padhne wale ke liye ek cr ki supari ha ha ha aur ye iske sath toh mast jawaniya ghum rahi h inhi mai se ek utha lu kya .... aur phone laga kar kahta h target mil gaya h jald he kaam nipta ke phone karta hu....aur call cut karke dehradun mai toh beauti he bahut h kyo na chakh li jaye pahle kaam se 2 din enjoy karta hu phir maarunga isai....aur nikal jata h pub ki taraf....




Raju--- or champuuu bada ghum raha h dono ke sath phir coller pakadke sale lagta h dena he padega tuje laat ghusai aise toh na manne wala h tu....

Raman--- chod wo dekh dono arahi h dekh liya toh bc sakal tak na dekhengi apni isai kal dekhenge chutti ke baad beta tu pitega kal teri gaand todunga ache se....

Phir rinky aur manisha pass ake ye tumhe phir tang kar rahe the..

Main--- ab school ki 2 top beauty unhe chod mere sath baat karengi toh jalegi na upar se science wali ladkiya shweta ki vajah se piche lagi rahti h wo alag he toh tum dono batao ye hoga nahi toh kya hoga...

Manisha—ha ha ha very funny tum toh prince charm thare na ladkiyo ke jo tumhre piche padi h jayada sapne mat lo chalo....

Rinky—lol ....waise thoda style mai rahe toh prince he lagega...




“Akhir tum phone kyo nahi uthate ho problem kya h tumahari .... nahi dekha mera call kyo nahi dekha kya kaha busy the ok honge busy tum maan liya phir wapas kyo nahi kiya bahut pankh nikal aye h tumhare wanha jake kabse pyar jatati arahi hu wo tumse dekha nahi jata h aur wanha tume nayi chudailo ke sath udna h sare pankh kaat dungii main.jo dubara muje call nahi kiya ya mera phone nahi uthaya toh”

Havaldar—maidam sathiya gayi h kya jo akele he baat kar rahi h....

Dusra havaldaar --- maidam kal se he utpatang harkat kar rahi par aj charam par h tea mangati h aur pina bhul jati h phir dant ti h ki thandi kyo laye goli maar dungi...aj puri paagla ho gayi h aj toh bhagwan he bachaye....

Havaldar—aj subhe se sabki le rakhi h khaskar wi bechare jo torture room mai h ek ke toh pichwade mai danda he ghusaid diya h agar aisa raha toh ye sherni aj kisi ko nahi bakhsegi.......dekh dekh wo abi bi apne ap se he baat kar rahi h kisak le uske khisakne se pahle...dekh liya toh pata nahi kanha ki baat kanha le jayegi....




“ tum wanha padhne gaye the apne past ke raj janne gaye the na ki raas lila karne 2 chudailo ke sath padhayi raat bhar aisi kya emergency agayi thi un chudailo ke sath akele padhne ki tum dekhte jao jaan se maar dungi unko toh main koyi saboot nahi milega...”



Sonali subhe se he akele yahi sab badbada rahi thi ki Raj ko aise dantegi waise dantegi.sach he kahte h sab pyar hota he aisa h . kal shweta se baat karne ke baad se he wo aisa behave kar rahi thi...aur uske isi behaviour se kayiyo ki lag gayi thi.....wo Raj ko dantne ki taiyari karti par phone hath mai leke call nahi kar pati ........

Chief --- room mai aake every thing is fine sonali

Sonali—hadbadakar khadi hoke ya ya absolutely fine sir absolutely fine koyi bi toh dikat nahi h.sab tikh..koyi dikat nahi h.kuch kaam tha..

Chief---sonali ko dhayan se dekh kar nahi koyi kaam nahi tha wo iskiye pucha tum kal se yanhi ho...sayad tumhe ek achi nind leni chahiye

Sonali--- acha main toh bhul he gayi thi ..ok main ghar jati hu aur nind leti hu phir man mai woh sone de na tab na ab ye nayi kutiya pata nahi koun aagayi h aur kadam bhada deti h jane ke liye

Chief--- tumne jis heesab se raj ke bare mai bataya tha ab tak toh aisa nahi huva h...

Sonali--- ke expression turant change ho jate h bina piche mude tufaan jab ata h na sir tab kuch pal ke liye sab kuch shant ho jata h wo bi aisa he chote mote kaam usai raas nahi ate h jab wo karega toh usai jagda nahi kaand kahenge jisai ache acho ki gaan.....sorry sir ....fat jayegiii usai tab koyi nahi sambhal sakta sivaye uske jo uska khass ho warna wo sab cheerfaad kar deta h uske andar jo daba h bus wo bahar nahi ana chahiye h apne nahi maine dekha h ye shanti jo dikh rahi h maut ki shanti h... ....




Idhar School se jab main ghar pahucha toh samne madhu mam aur shweta khana set kar rahe the

Madhu—are late ho gaye ho ajao hum wait karte h....

Main fresh hoke aya toh news chal rahi....

Ancher—mousam vibhag ne chetawani jari kari h ki bangal ki khadi se jo tufaan utha tha wo shaniwar ko Up ko paar karte huve ab uttarakhand mai takrayega isiliye sabi surakhsit rahe kisi dur jagah pe na jaye ....aj mousam ki jaankari mai itna he.... Surakhsit rahe.

Madhu—kal school se jaldi ghar ajayenge babuji akele honge aur tufaan bi asakta h...

Main--- ha sahi rahega shweta tu bi mam ke sath unke ghar he rook jana jab tak main na au ok...

Shweta--- he he he main bachi nahi hu 18 ki ho gayi hu ye toh papa ke transfer ke chakkaro ne muje late kar rakha h warna college mai hoti mai abhi aye bade muje samjhane huuuuunnhhh.....

Madhu muskara kar rah gayi...aur lunch khatm karne ke baad chali gayi ...aur main bi sofe pe baitha school ki outside ki videos dekhne laga muje kuch nahi mila aur main nikal gaya library old news nikalne ke liye.....main abhi news padh he raha tha ki ek ladki mere samne books leke baith gayi maine usai notice nahi kiya but usne kiya aur uske chahre ka rang badalne laga wo dono hath hilane lagi par bol nahi pa rahi thi excitement ke karan

Main--- muje kuch ajeeb sa mahsus huva aur samne dekha toh wo he ladki thi jisai maine bachaya

Wo--- hihihi hi hi hi

Main--- dheere se baat karo library h ....

Wo—oh my god oh my god main kya karu i m so excited... Oh my god my saviour my god.....yes yes

Main--- cool down take a deep breath 5 times pahle toh nahi dekha tumhe kabhi ...

Wo—lambi sanse lekar main afternun mai college se direct yanha ati hu padhne job ki try kar rahi hu taki agai bhadh saku...

Main--- kya kar rahi ho education mai i mean subject course etc




Wo—Bba kar rahi hu muje di ne he pala h sara kharcha unhone he uthaya h abhi bi wo he bharti h unke 2 bache h unki fees toh main bi unki help karna chahti hu wo batati nahi h but main sab samajti hu...

Main---ok ok good tum bahut achi ladki ho main tumhari help karunga job dundhne mai tumhe ek kaam karna h mera ...

Wo – bolo na main jarur karungi apke liye kuch bi

Maine phir usai sari detail batayi aur in years ke news pepars mai se chantane ko bol diya....by the way your name

Wo—suman....




Main--- thank you miss suman isai judi koyi bi news pepar tum muje isi waqt dhund ke de dena main 100 percent tumhari job ka arrangement kar dunga ok main yanha isi time ata rahta hu jald mulakat hogi

Suman- dheere se thank you nirwana sir

Main--- sss sabko batana jaruri h .....ap news pepar se info.nikalo aur apni study mat chodna ok tc bye...main sab arrange kar dunga dont worry....




Sultan—sittu sab agaye na

Sittu—ji bhai

Sultan—kuch dair baad kaan kholke chahe gaand kholke jisai sune wo sab ched khol lo uthana sirf is loundiya ko h ye uski photo h dhayan se dekh lo .... aur wanha security wale honge unhe tum 10 jane sambhal lena aur baki bache huve nighrani rakhna ek nirwaana naam ka mere piche pada h wo bi asakta h...toh usai tum log nipta lena ....koyi gun leke nahi jayega warna bawal ho jayega koyi firing wiring nahi aasan kaam h sirf uthana h samje. bus jao uthao car mai dalk aur ajao ....koyi faltu back chodi nahi 2 baje chuutti hogi hum 2.05 baje pahuch jayenge samje .

Jiii bhaiii

Sultan—jao bhosdiko kam pina taki kal hosh mai raho warna tumahri ma chodunga...

Sittu—bhai kal ke baad apka naam pure uttrakhan ke chokre log mai famous ho jayega....aur raka bhai bi khus ho jayenge

Sultan ke chehre pe lambi muskarahat agayi.....jaise usne koyi sapna sach hote dekh liya ho ....




Hutiye tu tikh h na sale kuttai mu mai kya le rakha jo phone nahi hota tujse

Main--- are main tikh hu tu phirlugayi banne ki kosis karne laga h

Sunil--- koyi dikat toh nahi h na aur ladke bheju kya safety ke liye

Main--- ud mat chutiya business kya sambhalne laga bada ban gaya h ....par teri yaad ati h yaar bahut.

Sunil--- abhi ajau tu toh ane se raha....

Main--- nahi tu business sikh dadaji ne aur uncle ne soch ke he kuch kiya hoga main yanha sambhal lunga

Sunil--- tikh h dhayan rakhna khud ka bi aur us chudail ka bi.....

Main--- ha bhai tu bi dhayan rakhna jald milte h

Sunil--- ha. Bahut jald...






SATURDAY..........

Morning main jab school pahucha tab aj strength thidi kam lagi sayad tufan etc ki wajah se ya thunderstorm ke ane ki pahle ki shanti thi aj asman mai badal gahre chaye huve the aur panchi bi kam he ud rahe the.....Jo ye samjhane ke liye kafi tha ki ye tufaan ke pahle ki shanti h.....Pura din u he bita mera 12 baj gaye the ....

Tabi kuch gadiya dehradun mai entere hoke alag rasto pe chali gayi aur school ki taraf ane ka rasta block karne lagi .....

Time 1.pm....

Ha bhai sare raste block kar diye h bhai ap ajao aur 4 bikes aur 2 black scorpio full rafter se school ki taraf ane lagi ....aur asman mai bijliyo ki flashes dikhne lagi...

Aditya – bhai wo tuje rajni maidam ne Bulaya........

Main--- ok bhai




Aj ke liye itna he..
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Unhone aapke brain ko child nahi bola bhai. Poori line padho unki, “Ab kahani lekhak ka brain child hai”.. Is line ka matlab hua ki Kahani/story ka janm lekhak ke brain se hota hai, so story is a child of the writer.
Kahani lekhak ki brain child h likha hota toh main bi lib am ko sahi kahta par yanha

Kahani lekhak ka likha h jisai se toh kuch aur pratit ho raha h.... Baki isai jayda main kuch nahi kahunga
 
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