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UPDATE 1
Introduction:
1. RAJESH MISHRA (AGE-52)
peshe se sarkari bank me manager h. Aur hero k father h.
2. NISHA MISHRA (AGE-48)
Ye housewife h aur hero ki mother h.
3. RAHUL MISHRA (AGE-21)
Hamara hero, yeh engineering kr rha h computer science se aur last year me h.
4. NEHA MISHRA (AGE-18)
Hero ki choti behan, ye Rahul k hi college se engineering kr rhi h same branch se, abhi 1st year me h.
Baaki characters samay aane par introduce kara diye jaenge.
Ab thodi information inki family aur house construction k baare me bhi de deta hu.
Rajesh Mishra- ek sarkari employee h. Matlab sarkari bank me manager h. Acchi khaasi income ho jati h aur logo se contacts bhi zyada h.
Akhir bank me kiska khata nhi hota? Bade se bade raees logo ka khata bank me rehta h. Inki pohuch bhi h aur pehchaan bhi h.
Nature se khush mijaaz vyakti h, apne dono pyaare baccho ko khoob chaahte h. Rahul ko toh dost jesa maante h. Shareer se utne fit toh nhi h, halka fat aa gya h belly me. Ab itni umr me toh ye laazmi hi h.
Nisha mishra- ek housewife h. Inhone arts se graduation kiya tha ye creative h boht aur ghar chalana inhe boht acche se aata h. Sundar bhi h aur inke haath ka khana inki poori family me famous h. Bachpan se singing krti aa rhi h. Awaaz boht madhur h. Apne dono baccho se khoob pyaar karti h aur apne pati se bhi. Hindustani naari h, saari maryadao ka dhyaan rkhti h aur samaj me apne parivar ki image me chaar chand laga deti h.
Rahul mishra- MITS se engineering kar rha h aur akhiri year me h. Branch computer science h. School k waqt 9th aur 11th me bhi computer science hi liya tha.
{Dosto, Rahul ICSE school se pdha h waha 9th se hi subject choose krna pdta h aur fir 11th me bhi}
Padhne me boht hoshiyaar h. Ek genius keh skte h isse. Ye jis cheez me jaata h usme hi best ban jaata h. Chaahe wo padhai ho, chaahe sports, chaahe drawing ya handwriting kuch bhi. Isse har cheez thodi boht aati hi h. Aur adhiktar me ye maahir h ekdum.
Jab 3rd year me tha toh poore saal gym gya aur acchi body bhi bna li h. Itni body nhi ki ek dum fool gya ho, bss itni ki koi bhi kapde pehne toh saare jachte h ispe. Aur dikhne me toh h hi smart.
Apne pairo pe khade hona chahta h aur jald se jald paisa kamaana chaahta h taaki ghar walo ka paisa ab ispe kharch na ho aur ye ghar k liye kuch kar ske. Ye logo ko ek jhalak dekh k hi parakh leta h ki wo vyakti kis type ka h. Dimag boht sharp h iska. Khush mijaaz nature iska bhi h apne papa se mila h, singing me bhi boht accha h, maa se aaya h singing talent.
Neha mishra- rahul k hi college me same branch se engineering kr rhi h. Abhi 12th paas out hoke college me admission liya h aur college jaate hue abhi 1 mahina hi hua h. College ki doori ghar se 7-8km h toh apni friend Nikita k sath uski scooty me hi jaati h. Kbhi kbhi uski scooty me petrol bhi bharwa deti h. Dono acche dost h. Rahul ko ye bilkul bhi nahi chaahti h. Usko dekh k hi isko gussa aane lgta h. Boht hi sundar h, maa se mili h sundarta. Attitude bhi h, par logo se lehze me bhi baat krti h siwae rahul se. Dance krna isse boht pasand h, aur lambi vacation trips pe jana isse aur bhi pasand h.
Nikita dubey- Neha ki school time se friend h aur saath me college le jaati h usse apni scooty pe.
Dono k beech boht achhi bonding h.
Uska bhi ek reason h. Jo rahul se hi juda hua h. Nikita me rahul k prati thodi boht feelings h kyuki usse hamdardi hoti h neha k aise bartaav k kaaran. Usse saari sachhai pata h but fir bhi uska mann yahi kehta h ki rahul ko itni hate nhi milni chahie jitni neha usse deti h. Nikita chulbuli h aur sath hi sath emotional bhi h.
Ye tha family ka kuch basic introduction.
Ab thoda house structure bta deta hu.
Ghar me neeche ek bada hall h.
Hall k end me wall k side se ek dining table h. Fir right side me kitchen h aur kitchen k right side me ek washroom h aur uske bagal me ek store room. Kitchen k left side jao toh bedroom h jaha Rahul k mom aur dad sote h aur unke room k aur left me ek khali guest room h.
Guest room k entrance k bagal hi stairs h jo upar jaati h.
Upar right side me rahul ka room h aur left side me neha ka. Upar do hi room h. Dono acche room h. Dono me washroom attached h. Corridor k end me ek badi balcony h kpde sukhane k liye aur ek jhoola bhi lga hua h.
Side se stairs h jo terrace pe jaati h.
Toh ye thi saari information.
Dhanyavad dosto, ab kl raat ko agla update aaega. Bne rahiyega lonewolf k sath![]()
UPDATE 2
*chirp chirp chirp*
chidiyo ki cheh chahahat se aur khidki se aa rhi suraj ki halki roshni k kaaran uski aankhein khul jaati h. Aur pyaar bhara sapna bhi toot jata h. Akhir kya tha uss sapne me? Ye keval usse hi pta tha. Subah k 9 baj chuke the aur hlka hlka shorgul ghar me aur society me hone lga tha jo roz k dincharya ka ek aam hissa tha. Toh uski neend tutna lazmi tha. Ye aur koi nahi hmara hero Rahul hi h. Rahul raat ko der tak pdhai jo kiya tha. College me akhiri saal jo h uska, kuch hi dino k baad companies aana start ho jaengi aur rahul uski hi preparation krne me laga hua tha.
Rahul computer science ki branch ko belong krta h toh aane wali companies ko acchi programming skills aur communication skills chahie. Issi kaaran rahul raat ko der se sota aur subah uthne me akhir thodi boht der ho hi jaati.
Maa (Nisha) ko bhi pta rehta ki rahul raat raat bhar pdhta h islie wo usse subah jaldi nahi uthati. akhiri year h islie college koi nhi jaata, sabhi preparation krne me lage hue the. Subah ko thoda late uthna, naashta krna, mails check krna, nahana dhona, khana peena, aur der raat tak pdhna.. Bss issi me rahul ka pura samay nikal jaata tha. Jabse rahul last year me aaya tab se yahi routine ban gya tha uska.
Khud k pairo pe khade jo hona tha. Akhir kab tak uske papa(Rajesh) unka kharcha uthate rhenge aur fir uski behan Neha ki shadi bhi toh krni h aage chal k.
{Dosto rahul ki family Gwalior city ko belong krti h aur wahi pe rehte h ye sab}
Inhi sab khayalo me doobe hue rahul bistar se uthta h, aankhein ragadta h aur washroom me ghus jaata h fresh up hone. Fresh hone k baad wo neeche jaane k liye room ka door kholta h .. par ye kya? Uske chehre pe pani?? Ye kaha se aaya? Abhi toh dhoya tha usne apna face aur pocha bhi tha.. fir ye? Saamne dekhta h toh uski behan neha thi jisne glass se pani fek diya tha uske chehre pe aur 'hmph' karke apne room k andar chali gyi.
Wo college dress pehne hue thi, aur room me kuch samaan lene aayi thi jo bhool gyi thi. Neeche naashta kr rhi thi aur pani peete peete hi upar ki or chal di aur jab rahul nikalta hua dikha toh pani sidha rahul k chehre pe udel diya.
Akhir kyu? Rahul ko iska jawab pata tha aur ab dekha jae toh woh janta tha koi fayda nhi h kuch kehne ka.
Rahul bina kuch bole waha se wapas apne room me aata h towel se face pochhta h aur neeche ki or nikal jaata h.
Neeche aate hi dekhta hi ki uski pyaari maa kitchen me kaam kar rhi h..
Rahul : good morning! Mummy.
Nisha(mom) : good morning betu! Aaj bhi raat me der tak pdha?
{ Guys mein rahul ko 'R' likhunga aur neha ko 'N' likhunga}
R: hn mummy! Companies aane waali h toh mehnat toh krni pdegi.
Nisha: mera baccha!! Apni sehat ka bhi dhyan rkha kr. Chal naashta kr le, neha ka tiffin laga du fir deti hu tujhe thik?
R: jii
Itna keh k rahul dining table pe baith jaata h jaha uske dad baithe the chai pee rhe the aur bank jaane hi waale the.
Rajesh: Uth gye beta? Zyada der bhi mat pdha karo. Kahi sehat bigad gyi toh dikkat ho jaegi.
R: nhi papa. Thik hu mein. Tension ki koi baat nhi h.
Rajesh: hmm.... (Tezz swar me) nisha, mein nikl rha hu. Thoda ek client k ghar uss se milne bhi jana h. Mitr h purana. Loan se sambandhit kaam h...
Nisha (tezz swar me) : accha thik h..
Jldi aana.
Fir rajesh apni swift car me baith k nikl jaata h....
Aaj k liye itna hi guys! Story start ho chuki h, dheere dheere saare reasons saamne aaenge ki aakhir neha ka bartaav apne bhai k liye aisa kyu h. Kyu rahul ne neha ko kuch nhi kaha. Jaan ne k liye bane rahiye lonewolf k saath.![]()
UPDATE-3
Ab tak...
Rajesh: Uth gye beta? Zyada der bhi mat pdha karo. Kahi sehat bigad gyi toh dikkat ho jaegi.
R: nhi papa. Thik hu mein. Tension ki koi baat nhi h.
Rajesh: hmm.... (Tezz swar me) nisha, mein nikl rha hu. Thoda ek client k ghar uss se milne bhi jana h. Mitr h purana. Loan se sambandhit kaam h...
Nisha (tezz swar me) : accha thik h..
Jldi aana.
Fir rajesh apni swift car me baith k nikl jaata h....
Ab aage...
Uske jaane k baad nisha neha ka tiffin uske bag me rkhti h aur fir rahul ko bhi nashta serve krti h.
Itne me neha bhi neeche aa chuki thi. Aur wo khaali glass ko wapas kitchen me sink me rkhti h aur hall me aa kr apne socks pehnne lgti h.
Rahul sirf uski harkato ko observe krr rha tha. Keh kuch nhi rha tha.
Neha bhi side eye krke ek do baar rahul ko dekhi but koi baat nahi kari.
Fir wo sandal pehnnti h aur itne me uski friend nikita aa jati h.
Dono ka roll no. aage peeche h islie ye dono boht acche friends bhi h aur nikita ka ghar bhi neha k ghar se nazdeek h islie woh neha ko sath me le jaati h. Ghar me neha k paas scooty nhi h.
Ghar me ek swift car aur honda shine h jo rajesh use krta h aur rahul k liye college ki starting me usko gixxer dilai thi.
Rahul last year me hone k kaaran college jaata hi nhi jiske kaaran neha nikita k sath jaati h. Wese yadi rahul jaata bhi toh bhi shyd neha uske sath nhi jaati.
Akhir kyu? Iska jawab toh ye hi log jaante h.
Neha nisha ko bye bolti h aur nikal jaati h.
Raaste me...
Nikita: aaj bhi ladi kya tu?
N: kya matlab?
Nikita: arre apne bhai se, aaj bhi kuch harkat kari kya tune?
{Dosto ye dono college k pehle se hi friends h, school me bhi sath hi thi aur college me bhi sath me h, islie nikita sab janti h aur ghar jesi hi h wo neha k}
N: hmm. zyada kuch nhi, bss pani daala
Nikita: hein?? Kyu?? Yrr kya bigada h tere bhai ne. Itna sweet h aur tu h ki...
N: excuse me?? Kya bigada h usne?? Aur kya kaha tumne? Sweet h? Sweet my foot... Don't you know?? Forget it! Can we please change the topic??
Nikita: okk fine. But yrr mujhe bura lgta h uske liye..
N: I said change the damn topic nikita...
Nikita: urghh! Fine!!!
Fir dono kuch college se related baate krte h raaste bhar aur itne me college aa jata h.
Idhar ghar par rahul nashta kar chuka tha aur tv pe news dekh rha tha, tabhi uski mom aati h..
Nisha: toh aaj bhi kuch kiya kya neha ne?
R: (maa ki taraf dekhte hue smile krta h aur wapas tv dekhne lgta h)
Nisha: kya karu iss ladki ka. Pata ni kya gaanth baandh li h iss bewakoof ne. Arre koi apne sage bhai se aise pesh aata h kya? Mein toh roz bhagwaan se prarthna karti hu ki iske bheje me thodi akal aae aur isse sahi raah dikhe. Pta ni bhagwan kab sunenge meri. Aur dekha jae toh galti sirf hm dono ki h jo...
R: koi baat nhi maa, mein uska bura nhi maanta. Aur aap logo ki koi galti nhi h.
Nisha: tu toh bol hi mat kuch. Kuch bolta tak nhi h usse. Mein teri jagah hoti toh ek jhapad laga k sahi kar deti aur sab bta deti. Abhi bhi pitai kar du uski par tune jo rok k rkha h mujhe. Kesi behn h jo apne bhai k liye hmesha bura hi sochti h. Hey! Bhagwaan kese bacche bheje tune mere yaha. Kuch kar inka. Kaash ye log bachpan ki tarah firse ghul milkar rhe...
R: usse pta hota toh woh nhi krti maa aisa.
Nisha: toh bta dena betu, mein seh lungi aage jo bhi hoga.
R: nhi maa, ye kya keh rhi ho aap, wo nadaan h, abhi umr hi kya h uski, itna sab nhi jhel paegi.
Nisha: mein duniya ki sabse majboor aurat hu... Kaash uss din wo sab na hua hota, toh aaj ye din dekhna nhi pdta.
R: arre meri pyaari mummy wo sab chhodiye aur ye btaiye ki gulab jamun bne ki nhi? Aaj bnaane waali thi na aap?
Nisha: hnn betu! Jaa hi rhi hu bss..
Aur nisha udaas mann se uth k gulab jamun bnaane ki taiyaari me lag jaati h.
Rahul bhi apne room me chala jaata h pdhne aur subah wali neha ki harkat k baare me soch rha tha.
Soch rha tha ki ye harkat toh kitni choti h yadi baakiyo ki harkat se compare ki jae toh.
Udhar college me ek mahina hi hua tha neha ko join kiye toh usne class me sabhi se acchi khaasi friendship kar li thi, siwae faaltu ladko k group se. Neha ek extrovert ladki thi par wo kbhi bhi kisi bhi ladke se baat nhi krti thi. Uske standards bhi high rehte the. Class me launde log toh flirt krna pehle din se hi start kar dete h. Tharki jo thehre. Ladki kya dikhi unke mann me pehle hi uss ladki k sath porn video bann jati h. Ye bhi apne aap me talent h tharki ladko ka. Neha ko ye sab pta tha ki ye sab jhamele me nhi pdna h. Neha permanent love and boyfriend pe believe krne wali ldkiyo me se ek thi. Usse time paas karna bilkul pasand nhi tha, yahi kaaran h ki usne bf nhi bnaya tha.
Bolte toh kayi log the neha ko 'I love you' par neha ignore hi maarti thi. Kyuki usse wo baat kisi ladke me nhi mili thi jo usse chahiye thi apne pyaar me.
Khair abhi toh starting thi college ki toh zyada kuch hua nahi. Bss lectures hue aur neha shaam ko 5 bje tk ghar aa jati h Nikita k saath.
Aaj k liye itna hi guys!!
Thanks for reading.
Pdhte rahiye, ye janne k liye ki kese dheere dheere sab hota h. Akhir kyu majboor h nisha? Jaan ne k liye, bne rahiyega lonewolf k sath.![]()
UPDATE-4
Ab tak...
Bolte toh kayi log the neha ko 'I love you' par neha ignore hi maarti thi. Kyuki usse wo baat kisi ladke me nhi mili thi jo usse chahiye thi apne pyaar me.
Khair abhi toh starting thi college ki toh zyada kuch hua nahi. Bss lectures hue aur neha shaam ko 5 bje tk ghar aa jati h Nikita k saath.
Ab aage...
Scooty ki awaaz sunn k nisha gate k bahr aati h..
Nisha: nikita beta! Aao na baitho, aaj gulaab jamun bnae h, khaa k jana.
N: hnn chal, aaja andar..
Nikita: gulaab jamun? Woooow aunty! Zaroor. Boht dino baad aapke hath k gulab jamun khaungi.
N: arre mein khud, maa ne boht din baad jo bnae h, chl ab.
Sabhi log andar aa jaate h.
Nikita aur neha sofe pe baith jaati h aur rahul toh apne room me tha pdhai me vyast.
Nisha (tezz swar me): Rahuuuuuull... Betu neeche aaja, gulaab jamun ban gye h, khaa lo aake.
R (tezz swar me) : aayaaaaaa...
Nisha katori me gulab jamun dono ladkiyo ko serve krti h.
Neha thoda gusse se maa ko dekh rhi thi. Shayad usse maa ka rahul ko bulana pasand nhi aaya tha. Yahi baat wo maa ko gusse se dekh k batana chaah rhi thi.
Nisha bhi samajh chuki thi ki kis baat pe ye chiddh rhi h par saath me nikita bhi thi islie usne neha ko response na dena hi better smjha. Halaki nisha jaanti thi ki nikita ko pta h neha rahul se nafrat krti h, par fir bhi nisha zyada se zyada gharelu baate ghar me hi rkhna chaahti thi. Nikita ka pura focus toh gulab jamun pe tha. Foodie jo thehri.
Itne me rahul bhi aa jata h, aur dono ladkiyo ko ekdum se dekh rukk jata h. Neha aur Nikita bhi rahul ko dekh liye the aur teeno log bas ek doosre ko dekh rhe the.
Itne me nikita silence todti h..
Nikita: Hi! Rahul bhaiya, kese ho aap? Aaiye na gulaab jamun khaiye hmare sath.
Neha palat k nikita ko dekhne lagti h wahi gusse wala muh bna k.
Rahul ko pta lag gya tha islie wo baat bnate hue kehta h..
R: hi! Nishita. Mein bdhiya hu, tmlog khao, mein upar apne room me hi khaunga. Maa mere liye please upar le aana.
Nisha: hmmm...
Rahul upar chala jaata h.
Aur nisha aur Nikita dono k chehre pe thodi udaasi aa jati h.
Neha ko toh ghanta faraq pdna tha islie wo gulab jamun pe focus krti h aur khaane lgti h.
Mann hi mann nikita rahul k baare me jitna sochti utna hi usse rahul k upar taras aata. Ek handsome, smart, genius ladka jo sbhi se acche se pesh aata h. Akhir kyu usse ye sab sehan krna pad rha h?
Wo nikita ki btai baat ko bhi sach nhi maan paa rhi thi. Ye baat konsi thi? Ye wahi secret baat thi jo neha ne nikita ko btai thi ki akhir kyu wo apne bhai ko itna hate krti h.
Par naa chaahte hue bhi Nikita uss baat pe complete trust nhi kar paai thi.
Nikita: by the way aunty mom aapko puch rhi thi, unhone aapko bulaya h.
Nisha: hmm? Aarti?? Hnn usse mile bhi mahina se zyada ho gya. Kehna ki mere paas aae milne.
Nikita: nhi aunty mom ne kaha h ki wo pichli baar aai thi islie iss baar aap hmaare ghar aaengi.
Nisha: teri maa bhi na... Chal thik h. Kisi din time nikal k aati hu.
Nikita: jii aunty. Aur gulab jamun boht tasty bne h aunty. Thank you! Accha, ab chalti hu. Bye neha. Kl aati hu subah 9:30 tak. Take care.
Neha: hmm thik .. bye.
Nikita Apne ghar nikal jaati h. Raaste me bhi wo rahul k baare me soch rhi thi.
Nikita's family Introduction:
Vinod dubey (Age-52)- nikita k father. Ye Railways me tc h. Inki bhi acchi khaasi income h. Rajesh ko acche se jaante h aur dono boht acche mitr h.
Aarti dubey (Age-49)- nikita ki maa. Ek Sundar, susheel aurat. Sudol shareer ki malkin h. Ye apne pariwar se behad pyaar karti h aur rahul ko ye boht maanti h.
Richa dubey (Age-21)- Vinod aur Aarti ki badi beti, nikita ki badi behan. Ye poori ek hot samaan h. Ye hoshiyaar bhi h aur isse duniya daari ka bhi knowledge boht h. Kis situation ko kese handle krna h isse acche se aata h. Iska abhi tak koi bf nhi h. Ye bhi engineering kar rhi h MITS me computer science se. Par pehle ye aisi nhi thi. Attitude queen thi, aur ego boht zyada tha, yaha tak ki duniya daari k baare me bhi zyada nhi pta tha, iske dost bhi nhi the, fir ye change kese hui??? Ye bhi aap sabhi ko pta chal jaega.
Nikita dubey (Age-18)- Vinod aur Aarti ki choti beti, richa ki choti behan. Dikhne me khubsoorat h. Emotional h, khaana isse boht pasand h par saath hi saath apna shareer bhi maintain kr k rkhti h. Apni family ko boht pyaar krti h aur neha ki best friend h. Iska bhi koi bf ni h, kyuki ghar wale arranged marriage hi krwaenge aur time paas relationship isse bhi pasand nhi h.
Vedant dubey (Age-xx)- Vinod aur aarti ka eklauta beta. Dono behne isse pyaar krti h. Abhi 8th class me h. Iska kahani me role ni h. Aur ye abhi chota bhi h.
Ye tha nikita ki family ka introduction.
Aaj k liye itna hi guys. Next update me aapko kuch janne ko milega.![]()
UPDATE-5
Nikita ghar aa jaati h...
Aarti: aa gyi beta, kesa tha din?
Nikita: bdhiya tha mummy, aur haa neha k ghar se aa rhi hu, aunty ne mast gulab jamun khilae hehe.
Aarti: maza aaya tujhe toh boht h na? Meri baat keh di thi na tune?
Nikita: hnn maa. Aunty boli h kisi din time nikal k aaengi.
Aarti: chalo thik h, jaa kpde badal le room me jaake aur fresh hoke aaja, khaana kha le, bhook lagi hogi.
Nishita: okay...
Nishita apne room hi jaa rhi thi ki richa kitchen se nikalti h hath me coffee mug liye...
Richa: aa gyi heroine?? Coffee piyegi?
Nikita: hehe nhi dii, abhi khana khana h, aur pta... Neha k ghar se gulab jamun kha k aa rhi hu.
Richa: hnn?? Sach me? Kis kis se mili?
Nikita: aunty se aur neha se, uncle toh duty pe the. Aur hn!... Rahul bhaiya se bhi bss thodi der k liye mulaqaat hui.
*Udaas hote hue*
Dii aunty ne rahul bhaiya ko hmaare sath khaane bulaya tha par neha ka bartaav dekh k unhe apne room me khana pda.
Richa : ohhh!! Accha thik jaa tu kpde badal le.
Fir nikita chali jaati h.
Raat ko sabhi log dinner krte h. Vinod kayi baar raat me ghar nhi aata tha. TC ki naukri jo thi unki.
Raat me sab sone chale jaate h. Richa apne room me aati h aur bed pe lait k apne phone me gallery ka hidden folder kholti h jisme ek picture thi.
Richa (mann me): aaj mein jo bhi kuch hu, sirf tmhaari wajah se hu. Kaha mein khud ko attitude queen smjhti thi, kitni akeli thi, ek baar toh mein bilkul toot si gyi thi, par tmne mujhe smbhala, halaki tmhara tareeqa thoda kathor tha par uss din k baad hi mujh me ek alag confidence aa gya tha. Tmne mujhe himmat di. Uss din k baad se mere kitne friends bne, sab logo me meri ek image bn gyi, aur tmne apni image poori gira lii thi. Kyu? Sirf mere liye? Mujhe jaan na h akhir tmne itna sab kyu kiya mere liye? Mein toh uss waqt anjaan thi tmhaare liye. Uss din k baad se hi mne tmhe ek alag nazro se dekhna start kiya. Mujhe pta chala ki tum kitne alag ho dusro se, kitne acche ho, kaash... Kaash mene uss din wo keh diya hota. Par chance toh mere paas ab bhi h, par darti hu..
(Richa haatho me phone liye aur uss tasveer ko dekhne k baad aankh bnd karke apne ateet ko yaad krne lag jaati h)
FLASHBACK:
Baat 3 saal puraani h. Jab richa ne MITS college me admission liya tha aur 2 mahine ho gye the usko college jaate hue.
College me kl se tech fest start hona tha toh aaj sab discussion hona tha, richa taiyaar hoke ghar se nikal gyi apni scooty pe jo uske parents ne uske liye dilai thi college jaane k liye.
College pohuchne k baad, sabhi log juniors aur seniors ek hall me ikhatte hote h.
Senior leader (mic pe bolta h): guys! Aap ko pta h kal se tech fest chaalu hone wala h. Rules k according freshers allowed nhi h koi bhi event ko organise krne k liye. Kyuki yadi sabhi log events organise krenge toh events me participate kon krega? Hum seniors? Nhii na.. islie hmne thode changes kiye h.
Harr class se 2 freshers hm log pick krenge. Ye kaam teachers kr denge hmaare liye. Aur fir wo log hmaare sath event organise kara skte h, unko experience bhi gain hoega ki kese ek event ko college level pe organise kiya jata h. Lekin baad me aapko ye experience apne classmates k sath share krna hoga kyuki aap 2 log hi choose kiye jaoge toh badle me aapko saara experience class me presentation k through dena hoga.
Freshers k liye yahi bss notice h. Ab aap log jaa skte h. If anyone has any queries. You can just come to room no. 215 we'll be there for you. Baaki seniors yahi pe rukenge, freshers aap log jaiye.
Sabhi freshers apni class me chale jaate h. Richa bhi apni class me aa jaati h. Aadhe baccho ki toh yahi sunn k gaand fatt gyi thi ki class me presentation deni pdegi sabke saamne. Toh wo log toh participation k baare me soch rhe the. Idhar richa last bench pe akele baithe soch me pdi thi.
Tabhi inki class teacher roshni ma'am class me enter krti h.
"Good morning ma'am"
Sabhi students ma'am ko greet krte h.
Roshni ma'am: good morning! Students! Sit down! So, aap sab ko toh pata chal hi gya hoga ki kal se tech fest start hona h aur seniors ne 2 students har class se lena h iske baare me bhi bata diya hoga.
Sabhi log : "Yes ma'am"
Roshni ma'am: good. Toh mein hi hmaari class se 2 students select karungi. Tm sab k baare me mein jaan hi chuki hu. 2 mahine se tmlogo ko pdha rhi hu. Jaha tak mein acche se jaanti hu, rahul tum boys me sabse best choice ho.
Ma'am k itna bolte hi sabhi students rahul ki taraf dekhne lgte h. Richa ko toh aaj mallum pda tha ki rahul naam ka bhi koi ladka h uski class me, kyuki rahul college aaya hi nhi tha, usse aae sirf ek hafta hi hua tha. Par uske bawajood usne apni aisi dhaakad image bnai thi ki ma'am ne socha bhi ni dubara aur uska naam best choice me bol diya. Idhar Richa toh wse hi khud ko queen smjhti thi toh wo bhala kese dhyaan deti rahul par.
Richa (mann me) : ye kon h? Saala pehle toh kbhi ni dekha. College aata bhi tha ya nhi? Isko select kiya h ladko me, ladkiyo me toh mein hi houngi, mujhse better koi h kya iss class me? Hmph!! 12th me mere 92% the, dekhti hu kese ni select hoti.
Roshni ma'am : aur girls me best choice rahegi.....
Aaj k liye itna hi dosto!
Sochiye kon hoega girls me select...
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Richa (mann me) : ye kon h? Saala pehle toh kbhi ni dekha. College aata bhi tha ya nhi? Isko select kiya h ladko me, ladkiyo me toh mein hi houngi, mujhse better koi h kya iss class me? Hmph!! 12th me mere 92% the, dekhti hu kese ni select hoti.
Roshni ma'am : aur girls me best choice rahegi.....
Ab aage...
Richa (mann me) : bol de, bol na mein hu, mein hi hu, come on yrr...
Roshni ma'am: wo h shrishti...
Richa(mann me): whaaaaaatt?? Ye kese? Ni ni ni.. mujhe hona chahiye tha, mein isse aise ni bnne dungi, shit...
Richa khadi hoti h aur bolti h...
Richa: excuse me ma'am!!
Ma'am: hn richa kya baat h?
Richa: ma'am shrishti kese bn skti h?? I.. I mean I scored 92% ma'am in my 12th standard and I'm much more suitable than shrishti for this event.
Ma'am: Miss Richa, for your kind information I must tell you that shrishti scored 95% in her 12th, also she's very talented and she has great communication skills so, she'll be a perfect girl candidate for the event. Toh ab yadi baat smjh aa gyi ho toh aage bdhe? Aur hn, baat sirf percentage ki nhi h, aapko presentation bhi dena h class me, islie I think shrishti is the best choice.
Richa(mann me): shiiitttt!! Wtf?? Ye.. ye kese akhir? Mein best thi, iske itne percentage kese? Mujhe laga mein hi select houngi, but akhir kyu?? Ye shrishti kese... Ohh god!!
Richa mann hi mann ro rhi thi ki usko ek mauqa mila tha, saabit krne ka but usne gawa diya, uska koi bhi dost nhi tha college me uske ego aur attitude k kaaran, hi Hello toh sabhi krte the par peeth peeche sab uski burai aur galat afwaae felaate the jo kayi baar toh richa ne apne kaano se suni thi. Kuch log toh randi bhi kehte the usse, Richa sab sunti thi aur bhadak bhi jaati thi, jis se log aur vishwaas krne lge the unn afwaaho par, uska roz mann krta tha ki kahi bhaag jae, koi fayda nhi h aisi zindagi ka, jaha harr jagah taane milte the, wo apni maa ko bhi bataati thi ki kese harr roz uske saath kya kya hota h. Uski maa bhi boht pareshan rehti thi iss baat ko lekar. Wo richa ko yahi bolti thi ki apne nature me antar lao aur sab tmhaare dost bnenge fir. Richa raat me kayi baar khoob roti thi akele, aur akela hi mehsoos krti thi. Par kya richa ne kbhi koshish nhi ki sudharne ki??
Apne attitude ko badalne ki?? Ki thi, bilkul ki thi, par usko jab dhoka mila toh woh smjh gyi ki kami usme nhi h saari janta me h, sab log fake h koi usko puchta nhi h.
Richa sirf attention chaahti thi. Ki log usko puche, uspe dependent rahe aur wo poore College me iss baat k liye jaani jae par ab tak usse sirf nakaamyabi hi mili.
Rahul, side wali row se richa ko dekh rha tha, uski harqate observe kr rha tha. Kese richa sar jhukae, khadi h, aur desk pe haatho se dabaav bna rhi h, jese boht frustrated ho. Rahul sab gaur kr rha tha. Yahi nahi, jab se rahul ne college aana start kiya, tbhi se uski nazar harr ek uske classmate pe rehti thi ki kon kesa h. Usse pta tha ki richa k sath kya ho rha h aur richa kya chaahti h, par abhi rahul 100% sure nhi tha.
R(mann me): bechaari.. lagta h mujhe hi kuch krna pdega. Nahi toh ye ladki bikhar jaegi poori tarah, bilkul meri tarah... Par abhi mein sure nhi hu, ki iske mann me wahi h ya nahi, but azmaana toh pdega hi mujhe, aage jo hoga dekha jayega.
R: excuse me ma'am. Please can you come over here?
Ma'am: yes rahul? Kya hua?
Ma'am rahul ki bench k paas jaati h..
R(dabi awaaz me): ma'am mere khyaal se aapko ye chance richa ko dena chahie.
Ma'am: wo kyu rahul?
R: ma'am shrishti toh h hi brilliant student wo toh kar hi legi acche se, par richa abhi shrishti se compare ki jae toh abhi usko struggle karna h, taaki wo apna potential sab ko dikha sake, aur ek teacher toh yahi chaahega na ki uske harr students aage bdhe, kamyaab ho, dekhiye na uska bhi kitna mann h krne ka, aapke aisa bolne se uska morale down ho gya hoga.
Ma'am rahul ki baato se surprised ho jaati h, ki rahul kitna deep sochta h, wo tha sirf 18 saal ka par soch uski ek 21-22 saal k ladke ki thi. Ma'am bhi richa ko dekhti h ki kese wo sar neeche jhukae soch me pdi h aur halki halki aasu ki boonde bhi uski palko me aa gyi thi. Ma'am ko boht bura lgta h ki usse aisa nhi kehna chahie tha.
Ma'am: rahul. Thanks a lot dear! Mein shyd bhul gyi thi ki mujhe sab pe dhyaan dena h. Thanks, tum sahi ho, mein richa ko chance zaroor dungi, par mene shrishti ka naam le liya h ab wapas usse disappoint nhi kar skti.
R: matlab aap??
Ma'am: hnn tumne sahi socha.
Rahul bss smile kr deta h aur ma'am uske shoulder pe hath rkh k smile karke class k saamne firse aa jati h.
Ma'am: Richa!!!
Richa upar ma'am ki taraf dekhti h..
Ma'am: mujhe lgta h tmhe ek chance milna chahie...
Thik h toh tum bhi girl candidate rahogi...
Idhar shrishti rahul k ek bench aage hi baithi thi usne sab sunn liya tha, par usse bilkul bhi bura nhi laga tha, usne palat k rahul ko dekha aur rahul ne bhi uski taraf dekha. Dono ki nazre aapas me mili, aur badle me shrishti ne smile kar diya. Aur wapas aage dekhne lagi.
Richa: huh?? Par ma'am.. abhi.. abhi toh aapne kaha tha ki shrishti best candidate h?
Ma'am: haan, shyd tmne meri baat dhyaan se sunni nahi.
Mene kaha ki tum BHI girl candidate rahogi.
Richa ko toh jese vishwaash hi nhi ho rha tha. Wo khush ho jaati h boht zyada aur thank you thank you bolne lagti h ma'am ko.
Richa abhi itni khush thi ki yadi usko koi galat bhi bolta toh woh usse ignore kar deti aur kuch nahi bolti.
Idhar saari class jali hui nazro se dekh rhe the Richa ko. Jo Khush the toh Keval ma'am, shrishti aur rahul.
Baaki bacche: but ma'am keval 2 hi candidate allowed h na rules k hisaab se toh..
Ma'am: rules k hisaab se ek bhi allowed nhi h ye toh tmhare seniors ne change kiya h thoda, jab wo kar skte h toh kya teacher ek extra candidate nhi bhej skta? Mere paas toh tmhaare seniors se bhi zyada authority h.
Bss fir kya tha, sab shaant ho gye...
Fir normal college k lectures lagte h aur sabhi Apne apne ghar nikal jaate h. Kal ek bada din hone wala tha. Kya changes laega ye din richa ki zindagi me? Kya hoega rahul ki life ko? Kya richa apna talent dikha paegi? Kya log richa se jalna bnd kar paenge? Pdhte rahiye ye jaan ne k liye.
Aane waala update boht kuch badal dega, bne rahiye lonewolf k saath.
Waah kya shayari hsabhi updates badhiya hai
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unki maa neha ko koi sach batane se darti hai
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waahh yaar yeh to shayri ho gayi.........
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