Thriller BADLA 2 (Completed)

[Kala Nag]

"oye ye sab kya hai??" police constable ne roka sid ko to wo jhuk kar aage badh gaya

"Arey roko use" doosra constable bola

"kya ho raha hai??" palak ne apna bag samet kar bola

"madam koi sarfira aaya hua hai" pehla constable bola

Palak apne cabin se bahar aayi to usne dekha purvi ne sambhala hua tha sid ko jo kuch dhoond raha tha

"kya hai siddharth?? Tumhe chot lagi hai" palak daud kar sid ko sambhalte hue boli

"wo important nahi hai madam ye..... Jo.... Laxmi narayan hai wo khooni nahi hai" sid Saans lete hue bola

"kya bakwas hai? " palak hairan hokar boli, yani uska sochna sahi tha

"mujhe laxmi narayan ke paas Jaana Hai" sid bola to palak ne kuch sochkar sid ko laxmi narayan ke paas le gayi jo so raha tha apne cell ke Ander

"laxmi narayan??" sid chillaya

Laxmi narayan uth gaya aur uth kar sid ko dekha to muskurane laga

"I know ki tum khooni nahi ho laxmi narayan" sid bola

"to pata chal hi gaya tumhe, par koi fayda nahi. Abhi tak to Baaki log tapak gaye honge" laxmi narayan bola

"you bastard, kaisa kiya ye sab" sid ne laxmi narayan ka collar pakad liya

"us din agar un sab ka collar pakadte to ye naubat nahi aati sidhhart Mittal" laxmi narayan sid ki aankh me aankh rakh kar bola

"khooni koun hai sid" palak ka sabr toot raha tha

"khooni ko pakadna hai to pakad lo sid kyunki ab uska kaam khatam hone wala hai" laxmi narayan muskurate hue bola

"sharm nahi aati ek khooni ka Saath dete hue??" purvi ne awaz uthai is baar

"gucchi ka short, zara ka half sleeve top aur shoes Calvin clein ke, beta is paise ke ghamand ka chakkar hai poora ka poora, ameer logo ko sawal karne ka haq hai lekin gareeb ki koi nahi sunta??" laxmi narayan bola, purvi ne sar neeche kar liya

"aisa nahi hai police hai gareeb ki awaz sunne ke liye" palak boli

"to Kulkarni ne kaise case close kar diya siddesh ko maar kar??" laxmi narayan bole

"Waqt nahi hai madam, hame jald se jald pohuchna hai" sid bola aur palak uske Saath jeep me baith kar jeep ko full speed me le liya
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TRING TRING

"kya ghatiya ring tone hai rakhi ka" Akhil haste hue bola

"sahi kaha yaar, waise hai kahan dushyant?? Abhi tak nahi aaya??" David ne ghadi dekh kar bola

"pata nahi, zara rakhi ko dekh kar a" Akhil bola aur rakhi ke phone ko dekhne laga

"locked hai??" David ne poocha jaate hue

"mai aur rakhi dono same hi hai David, rakhi kabhi bhi mujhse kuch nahi chupayegi" Akhil bola

David haste hue chala gaya

Akhil rakhi ka phone dekhne laga aur jitna wo dekhne laga usse uska chehra pehle shock me badla fir gusse me

David party se bahar aakar dushyant ko dhoondne laga

"kisi ko dhoond rahe ho?" ek jaani pehchani awaz ne David ko peeche mudne par majboor kar diya

KHACHHHHHHH

David ki aankhen badi ho gayi

"terrace me aakar acha kiya tune David. Ab tujhe maarne bohut easy hoga bol David ka collar pakad kar terrace ke kone tak le aaya wo shaks aur ek lambi Saans liya usne aur

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA





BHADASSSSSSSS

Ek car ke oopar gir kar David ne apni aakhiri Saans li

"party kaisi hai rakhi??" Akhil ne poocha

"achi hai kyun??" rakhi ne poocha

"nahi washroom me zyada Waqt laga liya??" Akhil ne muskurate hue bola

"Arey wo...." rakhi muskurane lagi

"aisa kyun kiya rakhi??" Akhil ne poocha

"kya matlab?? Oh sorry dress tha nahi isliye tumne jo dress khareeda tha wahi..."

CHATAAKKKKKKKKKKKK

Ek zordar thappad se rakhi door chitak gayi aur hont fat kar khoon bahar nikle uske

"kya nahi kiya tere liye" bol Akhil ne apni belt utar li aur use apne haath se kasme laga

"lekin meri baat to suno" rakhi boli

Akhil ne belt barsane shuru kar diye rakhi par

"sabne mujhe roka tha, toka tha lekin mai nahi maana" bol Akhil ne rakhi ko uthaya aur

DHADDDD

pet par ek ghoosa pada aur rakhi pet pakad kar baith gayi

"kyun???" rakhi muskurate hue boli

FLASHBACK
5 saal pehle
"dekh liya??" Akhil ne siddesh aur minal ke beech ka sach dikhaya rakhi ko

"siddesh kaise...." bol rakhi ne phone lagaya siddesh ko aur wahan se chali gayi

"siddesh how can you do this??" bol rakhi rone lagi

Siddesh ne rakhi ko samjhaya tha sab kuch thak haar kar rakhi khush ho gayi thi

"sorry Akhil Jaana chahungi" rakhi se sapat jawab diya tha us Waqt

"g great ab sab misunderstanding khatam ho gayi, isi ke chalte why don't we party" Akhil bola

"nahi Akhil sorry" bol rakhi jaane lagi

"Arey yaar rakhi prerna didi bhi aane wali hai" sheetal boli is baar

"ohkkk lekin zyada der tak rahungi nahi" rakhi boli

"chali Jaana bas soft drink aur samosa kachori ki party" Akhil haste hue bola

ओ तेरी
यह तो बहुत बड़ा ट्विस्ट है
राखी इन सबके पीछे है
लक्ष्मी नारायण और राखी और वह खुनी
डेडली कंबीनेशन
ह्म्म्म्म अगले अपडेट में बहुत कुछ सामने आयेगा

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

स्वराज भाई ! मै शुरू से श्योर था कि अखिल एंड गैंग के खिलाफ जो हो रहा है वो कोई लड़की ही कर रही है।
प्रेरणा की तो मर्डर दिखा दिया लेकिन उसकी डेड बाॅडी बरामद नही हुई । उसके अलावा दूसरी कोई लड़की हो सकती थी तो वो सिर्फ राखी हो सकती थी।

सच मे स्वराज भाई , आप की थ्रिलर कहानी का कोई जबाव नही। मैने आप के लिए कहा था आप की कहानी का प्रत्येक अपडेट ' बिहारी ' के सतसई दोहे की तरह है...गागर मे सागर भरने वाली।
हभेशा ऐसे ही अपने हुनर से हमे अभिभूत करते रहिए।
लक्ष्मी नारायण जी भले ही कातिल नही है लेकिन कातिल को भली भांति जानते है और सपोर्ट करते है।

एक और अद्भुत अपडेट। और जगमग जगमग भी।

 

[Swaraj]

"prerna didi??" khush ho gayi thi rakhi, ek Jaana pehchaana chehra Saamne aaya tha

"Haan rakhi, mujhe bola gaya tha tu yahan hai isliye mai aayi" prerna muskurate hue boli

"Arey aise kaise??lekin mujhe kuch theek nahi lag raha hai didi, chalo jaldi se nikalte hai" rakhi boli

"minal ka ro ro kar bura haal hai prerna didi, aap log bas kuch der ruk jao, use thodi tasalli mil jayegi fir chali Jaana" sheetal boli

"OK sheetal lekin bas ek ghanta" prerna boli

"OK done pehle ye to lo" bol do glass soft drink ke dono ko thama diya Akhil ne

"guys cheers for prerna didi and rakhi" sabhi ek saath bole

Prerna aur rakhi ne drink peena shuru kiya jabki sabne glass pakad rakha tha, kisi ne nahi piya drink

Rakhi ne aankhen band karne se pehle dekha tha Akhil ne glass fenk diya Baaki logo ne bhi

Aankhen jab khuli to rakhi ne dekha usne kuch bhi nahi pehna hua hai aur Akhil uske oopar sawar hai

Ek chillana chahti thi, sabko kehna chahti thi ye rape hai
Koi to bacha lo, koi to bacha lo...

Tabhi nazar gayi prerna didi par jise kai logo ne gher rakha hai


"AKHIL..." siddesh ki awaz tabhi aayi aur rakhi ne siddesh ko ek nazar dekha dono ki aankhen mili aur siddesh chala gaya, wo aakhiri mulakat thi

Uska sab kuch cheen gaya sab kuch chala gaya

"hamara ho gaya Akhil, iska prasad tumhare hisse me aayega. Hum personally tere papa se teri sifarish karenge" bol sab log prerna ko marne ke liye chodd chale gaye

Prerna ne rote hue ek nazar dekha rakhi ko
Aur daudte hue bahar chali gayi
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"love you rakhi, mai nahi jaanta kis hisab se rakhta tha tumhe siddesh lekin tumhe zyada pyaar sirf mai hi karta hoon" Akhil bola

Rakhi chup thi, uska sab kuch lut chuka tha

Inspector Kulkarni ne muskurate hue gale lagaya Akhil ko, ye sab ke sab log aaj kitna khush hai prerna ki mout par, Akhil ki to body bhi nahi mili

"Akhil kya tum mujhe siddesh se zyada pyaar karoge?? Dhoka to nahi doge na??" rakhi ne ro kar masoomiyat se poocha

"marte dum tak pyaar karunga" Akhil bola

Rakhi ne apna sar Akhil ke sar par rakha, nahi chodegi wo
Kisi ko nahi, bas mauka milna chahiye

Aur 5 saal baad mauka mila use siddharth ko dekh kar, goa me. Pehle rakhi bhi dhoka kha gayi thi, ek baar to use laga ki daud kar lipat jaaye usse lekin laxmi narayan ke phone ne use ek aur shock diya, uski Ummed mar gayi jab laxmi narayan ne use bataya ki siddesh aur sidhhart alag hai

Lekin acha hua ki uski shakl milti hai, ek naqabposh ka chehra pehen sabse pehle usne Mr gomes ko goa me khatam kiya

Lekin iske baad sid action me a gaya aur usne nupur Srivastava ko lagbhag khatam karwaya tha aen Waqt par rakhi ne kaam tamam kiya

Ek ek kar Kulkarni aur pankaj samet jo jo prerna aur siddesh ke mout ke zimmedar the sabko khatam karti chali gayi

"hello madam??" Akhil ne baal pakad kar rakhi ko uthaya

"aaj tujhe Akhil ka asli roop dikhata hoon" Akhil bola aur usne taali bajayi

Kuch hi der me kai log ghus aaye us kamre me

"meri ex - girlfriend hai ye, jo karna hai kar lo, mai sab sambhal loonga" Akhil bola

DHADAMMMMM

Sid a chuka tha aur palak Saath thi

"hands up" bol palak apna service revolver dhoondne ke liye haath neeche kiya.
Lekin wo bhool gayi thi ki wo uniform me nahi thi aise hi nikal chuki thi

"dekh kya rahe ho khatam karo saalon ko" Akhil bola aur ek yudh cheed gayi sid aur palak sab par bhaari pad rahe the

THADDDD

Akhil ne palak ke sar par rod maara aur wo behosh ho gayi

"game's over Akhil rakhi ko chodd do" sid apna pet pakad kar bola

"abhi chodd deta hoon" bol Akhil ne rakhi ke baal pakad kar use uthaya aur khidki ke paas le gaya

"chodne se pehle use dekh to le" bol Akhil ne Saamne pade ek chaku ko uthaya aur

KHACHHHHH

pet me bhar diya rakhi ke

"ab chodd raha hoon saale" bol Akhil hasne laga
Tabhi rakhi ne ek ishara kiya sid ko, sid hairan ho gaya dekh kar

Rakhi ne fir ishara kiya

Aur is baar sid tezi se aaya aur hairan rahe Akhil ke dono pair ko uthaya

Rakhi ne apne dono haath se Akhil ko jakad liya aur dono 3 manzila kamre se gir pade

DHADAMMMMM

Sid apna pet pakad kar neeche gaya

"thanks sid" rakhi ne muskurate hue bola

"mai aapko abhi hospital lekar chalta hoon... Mai.." sid ko rok liya rakhi ne

"mera kaam ho gaya sid, ab mai chain se mar sakti hoon. Bas ek aakhiri ichha hai" rakhi boli
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"yahi hai siddesh ki jagah" sid bola
Usne rakhi ko wahan la diya jahan usne siddesh ki laash ko gaada tha

"finally" rakhi ne aankhen band ki

"sorry rakhi didi, maine aapko galat samjha. Maine koi kasar nahi chodi thi aapko satane me, mujhe laga.." sid ro raha tha, aisa bohut kam Waqt hota hai jahan sid ki aankhon se aansu aaye ho

"pagla kahin ka" rakhi ne muskurate hue sid ke baalon par haath fera

"koi saga bhi apnon ke liye wo nahi karta jo tune kiya hai Paagal, tune siddesh ki laash ko thikane lagaya, fir uske badle ki aag me khud kood gaya, shayad me. Nahi hoti to tu in sabko khatam karta" rakhi boli

Sid bas roye ja raha tha

"mujhe bas yahi gaad dena, mere siddesh ke saath" bol rakhi ne ek lambi Saans li aur siddesh ki jagah jaakar wahan baith kar haath ferne lagi

Bijli ke saath baarish barasne lagi tezi se
Waqt perfect tha, rakhi muskurai aur wahan let gayi

 

[Anky@123]

Mind-blowing shandaar update Bhai
Ek aur update rehega shayed sab kuch settle down kerne ke liye, bahut behtareen likhawat thi

 

[Swaraj]

EPILOGUE
10 saal baad
"DCP ke liye badhai ho palak didi" sid apna chashma theek karte hue phone me baat karte hue bola

"badhai tab kabool karungi jab tu aur purvi apne dono dolls ko lekar yahan aayega" palak haste hue boli

"acha rakhta hoon didi" bol sid ne phone rakh diya.

Palak DCP ban chuki thi, aur wo iske kaabil bhi thi

Kartick aur kavya ki shaadi ho chuki thi dono India me Mittal group ke jhande gaad rahe the
Dono ka ek beta hai

Laxmi narayan ko sid apne power aur paise ke balboote par chudwa liya

Laxmi narayan ab aurobindo ashram me rehte hai jo pondicherry me hai
Jahan aaj sid ka family aaya hua hai

"sid let's go warna ye dono mujhe Paagal kar denge" purvi shikayat karte hue boli
Apna western outfit badal kar purvi saree zyada pasand karne lagi thi

"wapas aana zaroor sidhhart" laxmi narayan bole.

"lekin ye kya uncle aapne apni Saari wasiyat in dono ke naam kar di??" sid ne poocha

"kya ye dono mere naati naatin nahi hai" dono bachchon ko god me rakhte hye laxmi narayan haste hue bole

"please mummy kuch der rukte hai na" ladka bola

"plzzzz maa" is baar ladki boli

"no, abhi hame nanaji ke paas bhi Jaana Hai aur wapas flight hai parso, dadi ji tum logo ko ek hafte se zyada choddti hai kya" purvi boli

Aur bachhe beman se chale gaye purvi aur sid ke saath laxmi narayan ko bye bol kar
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"beta ab ise tum sambhalo" nischal raichand bole purvi ko

"lekin papa mai....." purvi ne sid ki aur dekha to sid ne ishare se Haan karne ko bola

"mai ab boodha ho gaya hoon beta, is group ko khatam na hone dena" nischal raichand apne bed me lete hue bole

"mai raichand group ko aap se bhi zyada oonchaiyon ke paar pohunchaungi papa" bol purvi ne nischal raichand se aashirwad liya

Sid uth kar Saath waale kamre me gaya

"pata hai, mai usi din tujhe khatam kar deta jis din rakhi didi chal basi, lekin isse tujhe aasan mout milti, tere liye bhagwan ne saza tay kiya hua hai" sid bola aur duble patle se bade bade daadi aur baal badhe hue Akhil ke sar par haath fera


"hggnnn hgnnn" Akhil badi badi aankhen karta hua bola

"poora body paralysis hai Akhil, susu karne se lekar hagne tak bed me karta hai tu, Saari zindagi apne maa Baap aur uske baad apni behen ke tukdo par palega tu. Aur Saari zindagi mujhe maarne ke sapne bunega, aur to aur tere Bhatija aur bhatiji ka Naam bhi maine un dono ke Naam par rakha hai, bye fir milenge "bol sid chala gaya aur Akhil badi badi aankhon se dekhta gaya

"sid can we go??" hawayein tez ho rahi thi, baarish kabhi bhi a sakti thi purvi pareshan thi apne dono bachchon se

sid dono samadhi ke Saamne aaya aur un par phool chadane

"koun hai papa Ye??" ladki boli

"Haan papa aap bohut der se khade ho yahan" ladka bola

Baarish girne lagi thi aur tez hone lagi thi

"siddesh, prerna to the car right now, sid please baarish badh rahi hai" purvi aayi thi wahan

"aao aaj tumhe ek bhai behen ke pyaar ki kahani sunata hoon" sid bola aur nanhi si prerna ko god me utha liya

"ek thi ladki jiska Naam prerna tha" sid bola to God me prerna khush ho gayi aur chote se siddesh ko muh bana kar chidane lagi

"mummy dekho na" siddesh naraz hone laga

"prerna please behave" bol purvi aur Baaki sab car ki aur jaane lage

Sid ne ek baar mudkar dekha dono samadhi ko aur apne god me prerna ko jaane ke liye Keh diya, aur wo daud kar car me baith gayi

"sid come fast" purvi car se boli chillate hue

Sid wapas gaya aur apne coat ke Ander se wo diary nikali aur dono ke beech rakh kar chala gaya

Car apni speed pakad kar ojhal ho gayi

Baarish aur tez hone lagi Saath me bijli kadakne lagi

Diary ke panne idhar udhar hote gaye aur baarish ke boondon se uski syahi mitti se milne lagi

Diary ghulne milne lagi rakhi aur siddesh ke samadhi par

Jaise wo Keh rahi ho ki aakhir kar mil hi gaye dono
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[Swaraj]

Is story se judne ke liye, padhne ke liye aur Saath dene ke liye sabhi readers ko thanks a lot

 

[Anky@123]

Love u swaraj bhai itni sunder kahani Dene ke liye..... Aage kuch kehna munasib na hoga thoda emotional ho gaya...
Kher agli kahani ki pratiksha hai
Agent ki agli kist doge ya ajnabee ya fir koi aur plan hai

 

[Swaraj]

Love u swaraj bhai itni sunder kahani Dene ke liye..... Aage kuch kehna munasib na hoga thoda emotional ho gaya...
Kher agli kahani ki pratiksha hai
Agent ki agli kist doge ya ajnabee ya fir koi aur plan hai

Thanks dost,
Mujhe isse achi ending nahi lagi, aapko story ne emotional kar diya, ek writer ke liye isse acha feedback kya ho sakta hai,
Heart transplant naya story shuru kiya hai maine
Please use bhi apna pyaar dijiye
Story ke saath last tak bane Rehne ke liye thanks

 

[Sauravb]

Super story... suspense akhir tak raha..

 

[Kala Nag]

Mind-blowing shandaar update Bhai
Ek aur update rehega shayed sab kuch settle down kerne ke liye, bahut behtareen likhawat thi

EPILOGUE
10 saal baad
"DCP ke liye badhai ho palak didi" sid apna chashma theek karte hue phone me baat karte hue bola

"badhai tab kabool karungi jab tu aur purvi apne dono dolls ko lekar yahan aayega" palak haste hue boli

"acha rakhta hoon didi" bol sid ne phone rakh diya.

Palak DCP ban chuki thi, aur wo iske kaabil bhi thi

Kartick aur kavya ki shaadi ho chuki thi dono India me Mittal group ke jhande gaad rahe the
Dono ka ek beta hai

Laxmi narayan ko sid apne power aur paise ke balboote par chudwa liya

Laxmi narayan ab aurobindo ashram me rehte hai jo pondicherry me hai
Jahan aaj sid ka family aaya hua hai

"sid let's go warna ye dono mujhe Paagal kar denge" purvi shikayat karte hue boli
Apna western outfit badal kar purvi saree zyada pasand karne lagi thi

"wapas aana zaroor sidhhart" laxmi narayan bole.

"lekin ye kya uncle aapne apni Saari wasiyat in dono ke naam kar di??" sid ne poocha

"kya ye dono mere naati naatin nahi hai" dono bachchon ko god me rakhte hye laxmi narayan haste hue bole

"please mummy kuch der rukte hai na" ladka bola

"plzzzz maa" is baar ladki boli

"no, abhi hame nanaji ke paas bhi Jaana Hai aur wapas flight hai parso, dadi ji tum logo ko ek hafte se zyada choddti hai kya" purvi boli

Aur bachhe beman se chale gaye purvi aur sid ke saath laxmi narayan ko bye bol kar
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"beta ab ise tum sambhalo" nischal raichand bole purvi ko

"lekin papa mai....." purvi ne sid ki aur dekha to sid ne ishare se Haan karne ko bola

"mai ab boodha ho gaya hoon beta, is group ko khatam na hone dena" nischal raichand apne bed me lete hue bole

"mai raichand group ko aap se bhi zyada oonchaiyon ke paar pohunchaungi papa" bol purvi ne nischal raichand se aashirwad liya

Sid uth kar Saath waale kamre me gaya

"pata hai, mai usi din tujhe khatam kar deta jis din rakhi didi chal basi, lekin isse tujhe aasan mout milti, tere liye bhagwan ne saza tay kiya hua hai" sid bola aur double patle se bade bade daadi aur baal badhe hue Akhil ke sar par haath fera


"hggnnn hgnnn" Akhil badi badi aankhen karta hua bola

"poora body paralysis hai Akhil, susu karne se lekar hagne tak bed me karta hai tu, Saari zindagi apne maa Baap aur uske baad apni behen ke tukdo par palega tu. Aur Saari zindagi mujhe maarne ke sapne bunega, aur to aur tere Bhatija aur bhatiji ka Naam bhi maine un dono ke Naam par rakha hai, bye fir milenge "bol sid chala gaya aur Akhil badi badi aankhon se dekhta gays

"sid can we go??" hawayein tez ho rahi thi, baarish kabhi bhi a sakti thi purvi pareshan thi apne dono bachchon se

sid dono samadhi ke Saamne aaya aur un par phool chadane

"koun hai papa Ye??" ladki boli

"Haan papa aap bohut der se khade ho yahan" ladka bola

Baarish girne lagi thi aur tez hone lagi thi

"siddesh, prerna to the car right now, sid please baarish badh rahi hai" purvi aayi thi wahan

"aao aaj tumhe ek bhai behen ke pyaar ki kahani sunata hoon" sid bola aur nanhi si prerna ko god me utha liya

"ek thi ladki jiska Naam prerna tha" sid bola to God me prerna khush ho gayi aur chote se siddesh ko muh bana kar chidane lagi

"mummy dekho na" siddesh naraz hone laga

"prerna please behave" bol purvi aur Baaki sab car ki aur jaane lage

Sid ne ek baar mudkar dekha dono samadhi ko aur apne god me prerna ko jaane ke liye Keh diya, aur wo daud kar car me baith gayi

"sid come fast" purvi car se boli chillate hue

Sid wapas gaya aur apne coat ke Ander se wo diary nikali aur dono ke beech rakh kar chala gaya

Car apni speed pakad kar ojhal ho gayi

Baarish aur tez hone lagi Saath me bijli kadakne lagi

Diary ke panne idhar udhar hote gaye aur baarish ke boondon se uski syahi mitti se milne lagi

Diary ghulne milne lagi rakhi aur siddesh ke samadhi par

Jaise wo Keh rahi ho ki aakhir kar mil hi gaye dono
---------------------------THE END - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

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