Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

[Golu]

Bas abhi louta hun brother...par tired hun isiliye likhna kal se shuru karunga...

waise ab first chapter se climax ke bas final teen mega updates baaki hain...

pehla monday tak dene ki koshish rahegi...but no promises...

Okk bhai intzar rhega wise bhi Monday Tak mai journey me hi busy rhunga to shyad Monday night tk aa hi jaye

 

[PkPasi]

vj4u bhai , agar Veronica Mam ke liye kahi se bhi gunjaish hai to please uski death na hone dijiyega.
Adult forum par adhiktar reader aise pak relationship par hi kahani jyada padhna chahte hai lekin aap ki kahani ne ek mishal kayam ki hai.
Veronica ki death mughe hajam hi nahi ho pa raha hai. Koi twist dal dijiye lekin unhe marne mat dijiye.
Kabhi bhi Wrier ko kaha nahi ki aap kahani ko aise nahi waise likhiye par sentiment etna adhik ho gaya hai ki Maa ko marte hue dekhna nahi chahte.

जब बच्चे पर मां या बाप की छाया रहती है वो एक तरह से मां बाप पर डिपेंड रहता है
इस भाव को खत्म करने के लिए ही वेरोनिका की मौत दिखाई जा रही है
और दूसरी बात अभी तक सनवीर के पास G.O.D. से टक्कर लेने का कोई खास मकसद नही था जिसकी लिए वो G.O.D को नुक्सान पहुंचाने की सोचें वेरोनिका की मौत ही वो वजह बन सकती है जिस वजह से सनवीर G.O.D को मारने की तैयारी शुरू करेगा

 

[Shani khan]

Bas abhi louta hun brother...par tired hun isiliye likhna kal se shuru karunga...

waise ab first chapter se climax ke bas final teen mega updates baaki hain...

pehla monday tak dene ki koshish rahegi...but no promises...

Ae zalim hn avy te na kr pakka update ho intzar boht muskil ho rha h

 

[vj4u]

vj4u bhai , agar Veronica Mam ke liye kahi se bhi gunjaish hai to please uski death na hone dijiyega.
Adult forum par adhiktar reader aise pak relationship par hi kahani jyada padhna chahte hai lekin aap ki kahani ne ek mishal kayam ki hai.
Veronica ki death mughe hajam hi nahi ho pa raha hai. Koi twist dal dijiye lekin unhe marne mat dijiye.
Kabhi bhi Wrier ko kaha nahi ki aap kahani ko aise nahi waise likhiye par sentiment etna adhik ho gaya hai ki Maa ko marte hue dekhna nahi chahte.

Aapki bhavnayen samajh raha hun brother...

VERONICA ki death maine prologue me hi dikha di thi...pata hai,tab us scene par koi khaas reaction nahi aaya tha par mai ye jaanta tha ki jaise jaise kahani past me jaakar phirse aage badhegi aur VERONICA ka character aap sabke saamne aayega,hero se zyada attachment usse hi hoga sabka...

aur yahi maksad bhi tha mera kyunki VERONICA jaisi personality ki maut se GALATH bhi kuch nahi ho sakta is kahani ko SAHI banane ke liye...

aur theek waise hi jaise mai ye jaanta tha ki VERONICA ka character special banega aap sabke beech,theek waise hi future me bhi kuch aur characters hain,jinpar mujhe yakin hai ki woh sab aapko bohot zyada impact karne waale hain...

Aur pata hai sabse zyada impactful kiska character hoga...G.O.D ka... trust me when i say this,pyar aur nafrat ek saath kaise ki jaati hai,G.O.D aapko ye har update me feel karwayega...

Aisa character aapne naa padha hoga kabhi,naa padhenge...

Mai shayad khud bhi naa likh paaun aisa kuch dobara...

Bas bharosa rakhiye meri lekhni par and go with the flow...ye kahani aur iska har mukhya kirdaar kaafi lambe samay tak yaad rehne waale hain aapko...

rahi VERONICA,marna toh hai hi usse par haan,marte marte bhi apni ek aakhri chhaap phir aap sabke man me chhod kar jaayegi woh...

Wait kijiye...100th update,she is gonna die par dhoom machake...


Saath bane rahiye...

 

[Alok]

Aapki bhavnayen samajh raha hun brother...

VERONICA ki death maine prologue me hi dikha di thi...pata hai,tab us scene par koi khaas reaction nahi aaya tha par mai ye jaanta tha ki jaise jaise kahani past me jaakar phirse aage badhegi aur VERONICA ka character aap sabke saamne aayega,hero se zyada attachment usse hi hoga sabka...

aur yahi maksad bhi tha mera kyunki VERONICA jaisi personality ki maut se GALATH bhi kuch nahi ho sakta is kahani ko SAHI banane ke liye...

aur theek waise hi jaise mai ye jaanta tha ki VERONICA ka character special banega aap sabke beech,theek waise hi future me bhi kuch aur characters hain,jinpar mujhe yakin hai ki woh sab aapko bohot zyada impact karne waale hain...

Aur pata hai sabse zyada impactful kiska character hoga...G.O.D ka... trust me when i say this,pyar aur nafrat ek saath kaise ki jaati hai,G.O.D aapko ye har update me feel karwayega...

Aisa character aapne naa padha hoga kabhi,naa padhenge...

Mai shayad khud bhi naa likh paaun aisa kuch dobara...

Bas bharosa rakhiye meri lekhni par and go with the flow...ye kahani aur iska har mukhya kirdaar kaafi lambe samay tak yaad rehne waale hain aapko...

rahi VERONICA,marna toh hai hi usse par haan,marte marte bhi apni ek aakhri chhaap phir aap sabke man me chhod kar jaayegi woh...

Wait kijiye...100th update,she is gonna die par dhoom machake...


Saath bane rahiye...

Eagerly waiting for next update vj4u bhai...

 

[A.B.KING]

Bas abhi louta hun brother...par tired hun isiliye likhna kal se shuru karunga...

waise ab first chapter se climax ke bas final teen mega updates baaki hain...

pehla monday tak dene ki koshish rahegi...but no promises...

Waiting

 

[Unknownn]

Pta nhi bhai pr kabhi kabhi toh lagta hai ki god hi sanv ka dad nikle ga end main

 

[Dragon master]

Aapki bhavnayen samajh raha hun brother...

VERONICA ki death maine prologue me hi dikha di thi...pata hai,tab us scene par koi khaas reaction nahi aaya tha par mai ye jaanta tha ki jaise jaise kahani past me jaakar phirse aage badhegi aur VERONICA ka character aap sabke saamne aayega,hero se zyada attachment usse hi hoga sabka...

aur yahi maksad bhi tha mera kyunki VERONICA jaisi personality ki maut se GALATH bhi kuch nahi ho sakta is kahani ko SAHI banane ke liye...

aur theek waise hi jaise mai ye jaanta tha ki VERONICA ka character special banega aap sabke beech,theek waise hi future me bhi kuch aur characters hain,jinpar mujhe yakin hai ki woh sab aapko bohot zyada impact karne waale hain...

Aur pata hai sabse zyada impactful kiska character hoga...G.O.D ka... trust me when i say this,pyar aur nafrat ek saath kaise ki jaati hai,G.O.D aapko ye har update me feel karwayega...

Aisa character aapne naa padha hoga kabhi,naa padhenge...

Mai shayad khud bhi naa likh paaun aisa kuch dobara...

Bas bharosa rakhiye meri lekhni par and go with the flow...ye kahani aur iska har mukhya kirdaar kaafi lambe samay tak yaad rehne waale hain aapko...

rahi VERONICA,marna toh hai hi usse par haan,marte marte bhi apni ek aakhri chhaap phir aap sabke man me chhod kar jaayegi woh...

Wait kijiye...100th update,she is gonna die par dhoom machake...


Saath bane rahiye...

Pa g date 1st April likhi us proloug ki to mujhy gr br lga tha

 

[mkgpkr]

Bhai waiting for next update

 

[Devilrudra]

Aapki bhavnayen samajh raha hun brother...

VERONICA ki death maine prologue me hi dikha di thi...pata hai,tab us scene par koi khaas reaction nahi aaya tha par mai ye jaanta tha ki jaise jaise kahani past me jaakar phirse aage badhegi aur VERONICA ka character aap sabke saamne aayega,hero se zyada attachment usse hi hoga sabka...

aur yahi maksad bhi tha mera kyunki VERONICA jaisi personality ki maut se GALATH bhi kuch nahi ho sakta is kahani ko SAHI banane ke liye...

aur theek waise hi jaise mai ye jaanta tha ki VERONICA ka character special banega aap sabke beech,theek waise hi future me bhi kuch aur characters hain,jinpar mujhe yakin hai ki woh sab aapko bohot zyada impact karne waale hain...

Aur pata hai sabse zyada impactful kiska character hoga...G.O.D ka... trust me when i say this,pyar aur nafrat ek saath kaise ki jaati hai,G.O.D aapko ye har update me feel karwayega...

Aisa character aapne naa padha hoga kabhi,naa padhenge...

Mai shayad khud bhi naa likh paaun aisa kuch dobara...

Bas bharosa rakhiye meri lekhni par and go with the flow...ye kahani aur iska har mukhya kirdaar kaafi lambe samay tak yaad rehne waale hain aapko...

rahi VERONICA,marna toh hai hi usse par haan,marte marte bhi apni ek aakhri chhaap phir aap sabke man me chhod kar jaayegi woh...

Wait kijiye...100th update,she is gonna die par dhoom machake...


Saath bane rahiye...

Bhai is baar kahaani k update bahot slow a rahe hai thoda speed badahiye....