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Aap kya chahte ho khatri kahani aage lejau ya fir yahi speed pe chalau???
Horror Saya. Dobara chudel ki prem kahani (Completed)
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Mere cahne se kya hoga ...wrighter mahodaya aap hai ...jaisa cahe waise story ghuma sakti hai ...kafi aage bhi le ja sakti hai ya....thoda saspance bhi la sakti hai...
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Aakhir kalam aapke hato me hai..kuch bhi ho sakta hai....
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Are esa nahi he. Me nahi chahti ki redars bor ho. Is lie puchha. Kya chahte ho story isi rafatar se aage badhau ya fir bhagau story???
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Agar story aage nhi badhe ga to bor ho jauga .....phir dhime story chalta hai to lagta hai eak hi baar me .......aage. Bhage bhaga ke do do line padke story 30 mint ki 5 mint me hi khatm kar di jae ...uske baad story padne ka mood hi nhi hota ............,.......................................
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Fir mere hishab se hi chalne do
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Ha ab aapke hi bharose hai...dhekte hai kya nya mod leti hai aap ki ye story ...
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Waise eak update or aap deti to kuch saspens nhi bachta story ka .ki veer se susmi kyo milne jane wali hai.......
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Reeta jeet ko bahar nikalne ke lie samza rahi thi. Par vo bahot jyada dar raha tha.
Reeta ; yaar jeet yaha koi dar nahi he. Vo kuchh nahi karegi.
Jeet ; (chilla kar ghabrahat) kya vo chudel he???
Reeta ne smaile karte ha me sar hilaya.
Jeet ; (ghabrahat rona chahera) fir tum kese kahe shakti ho ki vo kuchh nahi karegi. Vo mar degi ham sab ko please muje yaha se le chalo.
Reeta : dekh ham arso bad mile he. Me yaha se nahi jaungi. Or shameer bhi to yaha pe he.
Jeet ; (ghabrahat rona chahera) us bhenchod ko to chut mil rahi he. Use kya. Meri to jaan pe he.
Reeta ; (gussa) dekh use gali mat de. Tu janta he mene tere lie uspar hath uttha diya tha. Use gali di to me tuje jyada marungi.
Reeta ke niche vo khud so chuka tha. Vo kya use chodta. Roj reeta hi use chodti thi. Jeet ki gand fati. Kyo ki reeta uski kalai bhi pakad leti to vo apna hath bhi nahi chhuda pata tha. Vo chup hi ho gaya. Reeta ko bhi ehsas huaa usne jeet ko dara diya.
Reeta ; (smaile) usko chut mil rahi he to tere sath me bhi hu. Chal ghus bathroom me. Chal naha or mere sath chal.
Reeta ne uske jabardasti kapde utarne me uski tshirt fad hi di. Or pant khich rahi thi.
Jeet ; (chilate hue) nai nai bai.
Reeta ; (smaile) sale utar nahi to us din jese teri gand me ungli pelungi.
Tabhi bahar halla sa macha. Jese bheed ikhatha ho gai ho.
Reeta bahar aai or uske pas shameer pahocha.
Reeta ; yaar ye aavaj.. Kya huaa.
Shameer ; pata nahi yaar. Sayad koi aaya he.
Shameer or reeta bhag kar aane vale main raste ki taraf aae. Teen utt jamin par bethe. Leela bas vaha khadi. Or jagga urf rajashab ek rassi khich raha tha. Jiske dusre sireh par veer bandha huaa tha. Rajashab use bandhi bana kar laya tha. Veer dhakke se aage badhte hue idhar udhar dekh raha tha. Par bande ka ruab, chalne ka stail agal bagal dekhne ki adah bilkul dhima jesi. Reeta ne ek smaile ki orq face pe smaile aa gai. Ankhir usme use apne pati ki zalak jo dikhi.
Reeta ; (smaile) ye he shandar mard. Sale ne fida kar diya reeta ko.
Shameer bhi gardan ghuma kar use dekha. Reeta ki najar veer se hat hi nahi rahi thi.
Shameer ; (smaile) abe sudharja. Vo dekh kedi he.
Reeta ; (smaile) chal aa use karib se dekhte he.
Reeta shameer ka hath pakad kar karib jane lagi. Jab ki karib koi nahi aa raha tha. Kyo ki vo shusumi ka bandi tha. Par vaha har ladki ki najar veer par jarur thi. Dill me afsos bhi har ladki ko ho raha tha. Kyo ki shusumi shikar ke sath badi batsalukhi karti he. Lekin reeta to aage hi badh gai. Or raste ke bich aakar apna hath badha diya. Veer ruk gaya. Rajashab reeta ko paheli bar dekh raha tha.
Lekin leela to janti thi ki reeta ki hesiyat kya he. Rajashab gusse me leela ki taraf dekhta he. Leela ne bas use shant rahene ko hishara kiya.
Reeta ; (smaile) esa to kya kiya tune jo tuje yaha is tarah laya gaya??
Veer zatke se reeta ek ekdam karib aa gaya. Lips se lips ekdam nazdik. Veer ki shanse reeta ke face par. Or vo madhosh hone lagi.
Veer ; (smaile shararat) aji ham to dill churate he. Ab dekh lo ishk karne ki saza kya mili.
Reeta uske stail ko dekh kar andar ki gaheraiyo se khil khila utthi.
Reeta ; (smaile) wah. Lekin ye ishk nahi ashan... Aag ka dariya he. Or dub ke jana he.
Veer ko jawab dene ka moka nahi mila. Or Raja shab ne un maa bete ki mulakat ka ant kar diya.
Rajashab ; ye rani shaheba ki amanat he. Ise un tak lejana he. Hame der ho rahi he.
Veer hasne laga.
Veer ; (smaile) muje to laga ye budhiya hi yaha ki rani he.
Rajashab veer ko khinch kar le gaya. Jate jate veer bandhe hatho se pichhe mud kar reeta ko smaile karte hue by karta he. Reeta ka muh khula sock...
Reeta ; sala bhenchod muje budhiya bol gaya.
Shameer haste hue reeta ke karib aaya. Pichhe se use baho me bhar ke uske gal chumta he.
Shameer ; (smaile) vo to tuje aaina dikha gaya. Budhiya (hasna).
Reeta ne apna kandha zatka. Or muh banaya.
Reeta ; chal hat sale. (Smaile) lekin sala sahi me dill le gaya re. Ssss ise to baho me bharna hi padega.
Shameer ; to jeet ka kya hoga.
Reeta ; yaar vo boyfriend he. Lover nahi.
shameer jor se hasa
Shameer ; vese bhi vo tere layak nahi. Chal tere lie isko patate he.
Shameer ne hath badhaya. Or reeta ne bhi use smaile karte hue tali di.
Veer ko mahel ki ek surang me lejaya gaya. Sirf rajashab or us ke pichhe chalta huaa veer jiske dono hath bandhe hue the. Veer ko kisi ko kuchh sikhana nahi pada. Apni maa reeta ki tarah usme achha budhi ka vikas tha. Jise vo bina sikhae istmal bhi kar raha tha.
Kaid hone ke bavjud bhi usne apni maa reeta or leela se raste me flart bhi kiya. Vo niyat ka bura nahi tha. Bas mushkan ke pichhe apne jasbat chhupa raha tha. Akhir vo bhi do khatrnak chudelo ka ek lota pati tha. Usne karishma ke pyar ke sath tanya ki chalaki bhi dekhi thi.
Tanya ne use bachpan se hi chudeli takat ka istmal kar ke bahot pareshan bhi kiya tha. Use bar bar jadu se jaraya. Uski soch pahele se jankar. Uske timetable kam har kisi me badha dali. Tabhi use chudelo ki adat ka andaza tha. Surang se hote mahel ke niche bane ek tahkhane me lejaya gaya. Ankhe band kiye shusumi ek red ajib se dress me atam karti dikhi.
Kadmo ki ahat bas sunte hue shusumi bhi bekarar thi. Akhir esa kya he. Jise kayra itne kade bandobast or bade kafile ke sath leja rahi thi.
Rajashab ; rajkumari ji. Aap ki amanat.
Jagga ki aavaj sunte hi shusumi ne ankhe kholi.
Shusumi vese hi sar rakhe bahot shurili aavaj me boli
Shusumi ; Jagga jagga jagga. Me tumhara shukriyada kese adah karu.
Rajashab ; meri rani. Meri shanse to aap ki gulam he. Aap ka mujpar etbar hi kafi he. Yahi mere lie shukriya he.
Veer ; (fuddupan)(smaile) dekha dekha dekha. Me janta tha. Teri to shakak hi bhikhariyo jesi he. Tu raja ho hi nahi sakta.
Shusumi ; (surili aavaj) tumhe mene bolne ki ijajat nahi di. Apna muh band rakho.
Veer ; ohhh sorry.
Veer ne apne hatho se jeep band ka lips par hisara diya. Veer ne chalaki ka vo namuna diya. Jise veer ko pahechan ne me shusumi bhi sar khapa de. Jab inshan ke samne koi bahot chalak vidhvan bato me bhidna ho to hame bevkuf fuddu ban jana chahiye. Taki hamari sochne ki xamta use pata na chale. Or vo apni buddhi ka pura upyog na kare.
Ye veer ki soch thi. Or usi soch pe sochte hue veer fuddu jesi harkate karne laga. Jese vo mand budhi ho. Tabhi ek billi ki aavaj aai. Myau..... Veer ki najar shusumi ke samne pade us bade se table pe ek White billi par gai. Ajib bat yah thi ki us billi ke gale me bhi jewelry thi.
Veer ne apna fuddu pan jari rakha. Billi ko pukarne laga. Bandhe hue dono hatho ko us taraf kiye.
Veer ; mini mini mini leh leh leh... (Siti bajana)
Vo billi veer ko dekhte hue apni puchh hilati he. Or fir mudkar shusumi ke pas chali gai.
Veer ; ohhh to ye aap ki billi he. Wow.
Shusumi real me use samazne ki kosis karne lagi.
Shusumi ; (shant dhiraj shurili aavaj) tumhe mene chup rahene ko kaha tha.
Shusumi bhi yahi soch rahi thi ki itna smart handsome boy itna fudu kese he. Kahi ye mere sath to nahi khel raha. Khelne do. Kitna khelega. Par sach me fuddu he ya fuddu ban ne ka natak kar raha he. Ye shusumi ko nahi pata chala. Koi bhi chalak gyani ke samne jab aap fuddupan dikhaoge to vo bhi hame time dega. Hamari harkto ko not karega.
Khud hamare sath thoda sa fuddupan bhi kar sakta he. Par isme bhi usi ka time barbad hoga. Tum pakde jarur jaoge. Par wakt lagega.
Veer ; kya medam. Kab se to chup hu. Koi bolne to .....
Shusumi ne uski bat kati.
Shusumi ; rajkumari...
Veer ; kya???
Shusumi ; rajkumari kaho muje. Yaha sab yahi bulate he muje.
Veer ne billi ki taraf dekha. Or mushkuraya
Veer ; (quite smaile) aap ki bili badi pyari he rajkumari Ji.
Rajkumari ko veer ki quite smaile pasand aai.
Shusumi ; tumhe billi bahot pasand he??? Vese muje jyada kutte palne ka sokh he.
Rajkumari ka hishara apne gulamo ki taraf tha. Veer ne apni comedi chalu kardi.
Veer ; areeeee rajkumari Ji. Kutte to muje bilkul pasand nahi. Ek bar hena. Me khel raha tha. To bol padosi ke ghar me chali gai. To me hena bol lene ke lie padosi ke compound me kuda. Or jese hi kuda eeee bada sa black dog. Me dar ke bhaga. Par sale ne meri bum pe hi kat liya.
Veer ghum kar bolte hue apna pichhvada dikhate apni hips ki taraf hishara karta he. Jese bata raha ho. Dekho yaha kata. Shusumi ko uski bate sun ne me maza aa raha tha. Vo bhi veer ki comedi pe has rahi thi.
Veer ; abhi batao rajkumari ji. Jiska pichhvada kutto ne ghayal kar diya vo kese kutte palega.
Shusumi ; (haste hue) tum dilchasp inshan ho betho.
Reeta jeet ko bahar nikalne ke lie samza rahi thi. Par vo bahot jyada dar raha tha.
Reeta ; yaar jeet yaha koi dar nahi he. Vo kuchh nahi karegi.
Jeet ; (chilla kar ghabrahat) kya vo chudel he???
Reeta ne smaile karte ha me sar hilaya.
Jeet ; (ghabrahat rona chahera) fir tum kese kahe shakti ho ki vo kuchh nahi karegi. Vo mar degi ham sab ko please muje yaha se le chalo.
Reeta : dekh ham arso bad mile he. Me yaha se nahi jaungi. Or shameer bhi to yaha pe he.
Jeet ; (ghabrahat rona chahera) us bhenchod ko to chut mil rahi he. Use kya. Meri to jaan pe he.
Reeta ; (gussa) dekh use gali mat de. Tu janta he mene tere lie uspar hath uttha diya tha. Use gali di to me tuje jyada marungi.
Reeta ke niche vo khud so chuka tha. Vo kya use chodta. Roj reeta hi use chodti thi. Jeet ki gand fati. Kyo ki reeta uski kalai bhi pakad leti to vo apna hath bhi nahi chhuda pata tha. Vo chup hi ho gaya. Reeta ko bhi ehsas huaa usne jeet ko dara diya.
Reeta ; (smaile) usko chut mil rahi he to tere sath me bhi hu. Chal ghus bathroom me. Chal naha or mere sath chal.
Reeta ne uske jabardasti kapde utarne me uski tshirt fad hi di. Or pant khich rahi thi.
Jeet ; (chilate hue) nai nai bai.
Reeta ; (smaile) sale utar nahi to us din jese teri gand me ungli pelungi.
Tabhi bahar halla sa macha. Jese bheed ikhatha ho gai ho.
Reeta bahar aai or uske pas shameer pahocha.
Reeta ; yaar ye aavaj.. Kya huaa.
Shameer ; pata nahi yaar. Sayad koi aaya he.
Shameer or reeta bhag kar aane vale main raste ki taraf aae. Teen utt jamin par bethe. Leela bas vaha khadi. Or jagga urf rajashab ek rassi khich raha tha. Jiske dusre sireh par veer bandha huaa tha. Rajashab use bandhi bana kar laya tha. Veer dhakke se aage badhte hue idhar udhar dekh raha tha. Par bande ka ruab, chalne ka stail agal bagal dekhne ki adah bilkul dhima jesi. Reeta ne ek smaile ki orq face pe smaile aa gai. Ankhir usme use apne pati ki zalak jo dikhi.
Reeta ; (smaile) ye he shandar mard. Sale ne fida kar diya reeta ko.
Shameer bhi gardan ghuma kar use dekha. Reeta ki najar veer se hat hi nahi rahi thi.
Shameer ; (smaile) abe sudharja. Vo dekh kedi he.
Reeta ; (smaile) chal aa use karib se dekhte he.
Reeta shameer ka hath pakad kar karib jane lagi. Jab ki karib koi nahi aa raha tha. Kyo ki vo shusumi ka bandi tha. Par vaha har ladki ki najar veer par jarur thi. Dill me afsos bhi har ladki ko ho raha tha. Kyo ki shusumi shikar ke sath badi batsalukhi karti he. Lekin reeta to aage hi badh gai. Or raste ke bich aakar apna hath badha diya. Veer ruk gaya. Rajashab reeta ko paheli bar dekh raha tha.
Lekin leela to janti thi ki reeta ki hesiyat kya he. Rajashab gusse me leela ki taraf dekhta he. Leela ne bas use shant rahene ko hishara kiya.
Reeta ; (smaile) esa to kya kiya tune jo tuje yaha is tarah laya gaya??
Veer zatke se reeta ek ekdam karib aa gaya. Lips se lips ekdam nazdik. Veer ki shanse reeta ke face par. Or vo madhosh hone lagi.
Veer ; (smaile shararat) aji ham to dill churate he. Ab dekh lo ishk karne ki saza kya mili.
Reeta uske stail ko dekh kar andar ki gaheraiyo se khil khila utthi.
Reeta ; (smaile) wah. Lekin ye ishk nahi ashan... Aag ka dariya he. Or dub ke jana he.
Veer ko jawab dene ka moka nahi mila. Or Raja shab ne un maa bete ki mulakat ka ant kar diya.
Rajashab ; ye rani shaheba ki amanat he. Ise un tak lejana he. Hame der ho rahi he.
Veer hasne laga.
Veer ; (smaile) muje to laga ye budhiya hi yaha ki rani he.
Rajashab veer ko khinch kar le gaya. Jate jate veer bandhe hatho se pichhe mud kar reeta ko smaile karte hue by karta he. Reeta ka muh khula sock...
Reeta ; sala bhenchod muje budhiya bol gaya.
Shameer haste hue reeta ke karib aaya. Pichhe se use baho me bhar ke uske gal chumta he.
Shameer ; (smaile) vo to tuje aaina dikha gaya. Budhiya (hasna).
Reeta ne apna kandha zatka. Or muh banaya.
Reeta ; chal hat sale. (Smaile) lekin sala sahi me dill le gaya re. Ssss ise to baho me bharna hi padega.
Shameer ; to jeet ka kya hoga.
Reeta ; yaar vo boyfriend he. Lover nahi.
shameer jor se hasa
Shameer ; vese bhi vo tere layak nahi. Chal tere lie isko patate he.
Shameer ne hath badhaya. Or reeta ne bhi use smaile karte hue tali di.
Veer ko mahel ki ek surang me lejaya gaya. Sirf rajashab or us ke pichhe chalta huaa veer jiske dono hath bandhe hue the. Veer ko kisi ko kuchh sikhana nahi pada. Apni maa reeta ki tarah usme achha budhi ka vikas tha. Jise vo bina sikhae istmal bhi kar raha tha.
Kaid hone ke bavjud bhi usne apni maa reeta or leela se raste me flart bhi kiya. Vo niyat ka bura nahi tha. Bas mushkan ke pichhe apne jasbat chhupa raha tha. Akhir vo bhi do khatrnak chudelo ka ek lota pati tha. Usne karishma ke pyar ke sath tanya ki chalaki bhi dekhi thi.
Tanya ne use bachpan se hi chudeli takat ka istmal kar ke bahot pareshan bhi kiya tha. Use bar bar jadu se jaraya. Uski soch pahele se jankar. Uske timetable kam har kisi me badha dali. Tabhi use chudelo ki adat ka andaza tha. Surang se hote mahel ke niche bane ek tahkhane me lejaya gaya. Ankhe band kiye shusumi ek red ajib se dress me atam karti dikhi.
Kadmo ki ahat bas sunte hue shusumi bhi bekarar thi. Akhir esa kya he. Jise kayra itne kade bandobast or bade kafile ke sath leja rahi thi.
Rajashab ; rajkumari ji. Aap ki amanat.
Jagga ki aavaj sunte hi shusumi ne ankhe kholi.
Shusumi vese hi sar rakhe bahot shurili aavaj me boli
Shusumi ; Jagga jagga jagga. Me tumhara shukriyada kese adah karu.
Rajashab ; meri rani. Meri shanse to aap ki gulam he. Aap ka mujpar etbar hi kafi he. Yahi mere lie shukriya he.
Veer ; (fuddupan)(smaile) dekha dekha dekha. Me janta tha. Teri to shakak hi bhikhariyo jesi he. Tu raja ho hi nahi sakta.
Shusumi ; (surili aavaj) tumhe mene bolne ki ijajat nahi di. Apna muh band rakho.
Veer ; ohhh sorry.
Veer ne apne hatho se jeep band ka lips par hisara diya. Veer ne chalaki ka vo namuna diya. Jise veer ko pahechan ne me shusumi bhi sar khapa de. Jab inshan ke samne koi bahot chalak vidhvan bato me bhidna ho to hame bevkuf fuddu ban jana chahiye. Taki hamari sochne ki xamta use pata na chale. Or vo apni buddhi ka pura upyog na kare.
Ye veer ki soch thi. Or usi soch pe sochte hue veer fuddu jesi harkate karne laga. Jese vo mand budhi ho. Tabhi ek billi ki aavaj aai. Myau..... Veer ki najar shusumi ke samne pade us bade se table pe ek White billi par gai. Ajib bat yah thi ki us billi ke gale me bhi jewelry thi.
Veer ne apna fuddu pan jari rakha. Billi ko pukarne laga. Bandhe hue dono hatho ko us taraf kiye.
Veer ; mini mini mini leh leh leh... (Siti bajana)
Vo billi veer ko dekhte hue apni puchh hilati he. Or fir mudkar shusumi ke pas chali gai.
Veer ; ohhh to ye aap ki billi he. Wow.
Shusumi real me use samazne ki kosis karne lagi.
Shusumi ; (shant dhiraj shurili aavaj) tumhe mene chup rahene ko kaha tha.
Shusumi bhi yahi soch rahi thi ki itna smart handsome boy itna fudu kese he. Kahi ye mere sath to nahi khel raha. Khelne do. Kitna khelega. Par sach me fuddu he ya fuddu ban ne ka natak kar raha he. Ye shusumi ko nahi pata chala. Koi bhi chalak gyani ke samne jab aap fuddupan dikhaoge to vo bhi hame time dega. Hamari harkto ko not karega.
Khud hamare sath thoda sa fuddupan bhi kar sakta he. Par isme bhi usi ka time barbad hoga. Tum pakde jarur jaoge. Par wakt lagega.
Veer ; kya medam. Kab se to chup hu. Koi bolne to .....
Shusumi ne uski bat kati.
Shusumi ; rajkumari...
Veer ; kya???
Shusumi ; rajkumari kaho muje. Yaha sab yahi bulate he muje.
Veer ne billi ki taraf dekha. Or mushkuraya
Veer ; (quite smaile) aap ki bili badi pyari he rajkumari Ji.
Rajkumari ko veer ki quite smaile pasand aai.
Shusumi ; tumhe billi bahot pasand he??? Vese muje jyada kutte palne ka sokh he.
Rajkumari ka hishara apne gulamo ki taraf tha. Veer ne apni comedi chalu kardi.
Veer ; areeeee rajkumari Ji. Kutte to muje bilkul pasand nahi. Ek bar hena. Me khel raha tha. To bol padosi ke ghar me chali gai. To me hena bol lene ke lie padosi ke compound me kuda. Or jese hi kuda eeee bada sa black dog. Me dar ke bhaga. Par sale ne meri bum pe hi kat liya.
Veer ghum kar bolte hue apna pichhvada dikhate apni hips ki taraf hishara karta he. Jese bata raha ho. Dekho yaha kata. Shusumi ko uski bate sun ne me maza aa raha tha. Vo bhi veer ki comedi pe has rahi thi.
Veer ; abhi batao rajkumari ji. Jiska pichhvada kutto ne ghayal kar diya vo kese kutte palega.
Shusumi ; (haste hue) tum dilchasp inshan ho betho.
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