Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

[Werewolf]

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[Werewolf]

1. Bhai etne jaldi mat kharidana ghar. Kyu ki ab jakar maja aara hai.jese ki tej our bhumika ki ladai . bhumika ab jaker veer ke liye react ho rahi hai. Jo pahle arohi jesi behave karti thi. Use khulne ke liye to veer ke pass hona chahiye.

Ragini wese hi abhi ghar lene nahi degi.

Maa our beti ab tak akeli thi . na baap ka pyar bas naam ke liye.
Aur ab shaweta ne jo moka bhumika ke liye banaya. Wah uske chupe dard ko bahar nikalega. Ek bahan ke adhikar veer per tej jesa woh bhi chahegi.
Use bhi mokka mile bhai se jed karne ka baate kaene ka ya masti karne ka . our wah ek naya. Ghar ane se asan nahi hoga. Thoda time to do.

Dekhte jaiye bas. Abhi toh Veer ne khayaal socha hai ghar ka. Lene se pehle zaahir hai woh ghar ke sadasyo se discuss karega. Tab unke jawaab milne ke baad hi woh nirnay lega.

2.bhawana bhi pakka detective hai wah veer kab tab chupa payega. Yeh dekhana hoga.

Detective?

3.bhai kaira ka mission ka kya stutes hai. Samay kam ho ra hai.

Bas around 1 week hi bacha hai.

 

[Werewolf]

Bahutt jabardstt update Werewolf bhai mjjaa aagyaa pdhh k crimson festival sbko ptaa h blood red ki trh hone wala h bhtt intense or thriller...
Great work brother

Yup. Thanks a lot bhai.
and keep supporting.

Further to my message above, ab veer ko pura dhyan Kaera ke uper lagana chahiye, uske emotions jo jagane hain. Uska yeh task pending hai, pura kerne per points milenge, shayad system bhi updrade ho jaye.

System itni jaldi upgrade ho hi nahi sakta. Abhi toh hua tha recent me. Abhi dherr saari XP bachi hui hai. Kuch missions karne honge Veer ko tab jaake upgrade hoyega.

ab veer itni sunder ladkityon, mahilaon se ghira hai ki main bhi apne kadam sambhal ker chalne laga hoon, kahin kisi ka dil na pairon ke neeche aa jaye. waise bhi mere liye to kaera ayr veer hi main character hain.

Kaera is indeed one of the main female lead so... Yeah.

सुंदर
उम्दा
उत्तम

वीर अब कुछ घर मोह में , ओर कुछ अपने लक्ष्य को जानेगा।

उद्देश्य ओर लशय

Dhanyavaad.

 

[Werewolf]

Bahut time baad yaha aana hua lekin maja aaya

Ye story kitni achi hai ye to batane ka matlab hi nahi hai fir bhi let's talk

Yaha se Mazza badhna hi hai kyuki naya world unlock hone jaa raha hai readers ke liye.

Start karte hai veer se
Suruvaat me veer ka emotional side bahut dikhaya gaya tha I still remember him crying for kaera and calling her idiot
Lekin ab he is more like a matured guy who knows everything still show nothing
Uske character development jo ki hai aapne is top notch I mean after all he the hero of the story but still you have done out standing job

Bahut zaroori tha ye. Ek saal ke upar humne Veer ko dekha hai halaato se guzarte. Usme changes toh aane hi the. Par wo real time interval me aaye hai. Abhi bhi wo perfect nahi hua hai. Lekin significant changes hume dekhne ko milte. I'm very happy about what I have achieved for his character.

Ragini on the other hand is totally opposite of what veer is right now
Uske emotions uske samarpan veer ke liye padhte waqt ek ajeeb dard de jata hai
Don't know why but this is what it is
Thoda personal lagta hai ragini ka dard mujhe
I wish usse uske hisse ki khushi mile

We have seen Ragini being an egoistic rich flaunty lady and then her transformation, the realisation she had after Veer saved her. We saw how she got completely changed. From an annoying bhabhi to almost being a caring wife. Humne sab dekha hai. Woh jaanti hai wo jo achieve karne ki koshish kar rahi hai wo kitna galat hai. Par ab kya kare. Uska dil iss par aa gaya hai. Ab bina apnaaye woh nahi maanega.

Naya arc Ragini ke jeevan ko ek nayi disha dega. Parivartan swabhaavik hai.

Suman is the only character in this story that I don't like it
I just don't like her at all
Reason kuch bhi ho lekin main uske mostly conversations ignore kar deta hu

You called her slave but she never behaves like one may be that's the reason or may be because vo veer ka stand har jagah veer se pehle le leti hai and I wanted veer to speak
I don't know but I don't like her
Sorry

Agar ju ne notice kiya hoga toh Suman me bhi changes aaye hai. Kya wo pehle aisa karti thi? Nahi! Toh fir ab kyu?

It's because of the absurd amount of favourability she has for Veer. 200 ke paar ki favourability. Prem ke upar ka prateek hai. Absolute servitude. Aur Veer ka usse na tokna ek reason hai jiske chalte wo apne aap apne maalik ke liye decisions le leti hai. Kyuki usse pata hai uske maalik uss se naraaz nahi honge.

But Veer will have to teach her a lesson. Jis din Veer usse ye batla dega toh Suman ko samajh aa jayegi ki as a slave wo kuch zyada hi freedom me ghum rahi hai. That part will come later. It's a nice touch to Veer's slave segment.

Kavya to best hai hi but now I want arohi and veer conversation
A beautiful long conversation
A conversation jo unke bhai behan aur lovers wale bridge ke beech se aaye
Unka koe bhi intimate scene se pehle agar unki ek badiya conversation nahi aaye to it will be little disappointed

Ye toh hona hi hai. Arohi ek intellectual hai. Unke beech jo bhi moments banenge uske pehle conversation honge hi. Aur Arohi waale conversations honge. Maybe padhaayi se related bhi ho. Because you know she's different than kavya. Uska dimaag alag chalta hai alag situations me. Jo bhi hoga badhiya hoga.

Tej behavior is much more like a younger sister jo apne bhai par sirf apna hi hak samjhti hai but yaha to ulta hai vo elder hai fir bhi act like a kid(just in front of her brother)

Ulta tha nahi, ulta ho gaya hai.
Wo ye soch ke nikli thi ki uske chote bhai ko uske protection ki zaroorat hogi. Par aisa kuch hua hi nahi. Ulta Veer uss se bhi zyada strong nikla. Jis kaaran se uski wish dhari ki dhari reh gayi. Balki Veer ne hi usse Pranjal se bachaaya.

Aur uska result ye hua ki subconsciously wo Veer ke saamne timid ho jaati hai. Dikhati nahi hai par andar se behad sharma jaati hai. Baahar se false behaviour dikhati hai andar se uski haalat patli rehti hai.

Sayad pehli baar bhai ke etni pass aaye hai to khone ka dar to rahega hi
Enki conversation alag hi hoti hai
Yaha tej sab janana chahti hai to veer sab batane ko raaji hai
Bhai behan ka pure bond dikhta hai vaha par
Tej veer se chhoti hoti to jada maja aata kyuki jidd chhote par jada suit karti hai aur yaha veer koe jidd karega nahi tej ke samne
But over too good for a character
Loved every bit of tej presence

Choti ke liye Kavya hai na. Arohi naam maatr ki badi hai. Veer ek baar uska naam directly pukaarta hai toh wo uske baraabar ki ho jaati hai. Didi nahi rehti fir woh. Bhumika hamesha se hi Veer se dur rahi hai.

Isliye ek asli sacchi nidar badi behan ki zaroorat thi Veer ko. Jo Tej ke roop me poori ho gayi.

Bhavna is just like what a mother is supposed to be

She's highly intelligent too

And who the hell is Saili?
Did I missed something?

Oh you forgot? So soon!!?
Saili is Mukta's daughter. Parijaat ghar me dark skinned lady thi na? Aur uski dark skinned 18 varsheeya ladki. Dono kaali twacha ke chalte Veer ke saamne sharminda thi. Hope ab kuch yaad aa gaya hoga.

And that ? Is that Eva aur someone else is coming?

? Indicates a person who hasn't entered Veer's life yet.

Thoda Sonia ko bhi dikhao bhai aapne kaira ke baad Sonia ko dikhaya tha fir suhana ke sath Vegas ghuma diya aur Sonia ko mumbai ki local bhi nahi dikhaye?
Bahut na insafi hai Sonia ke sath
Thoda update suhana ke health se related aur ek mulakat Sonia ke sath will be nice

Aane waale samay me Sonia ke upar kaafi limelight padne waali hai. Isliye usse ab tak chhipa ke rakha hua hai. Iss arc me bhi woh nazar aayegi kahi na kahi. Suhana bhi. Par zyada focus kisi aur par kiya jayega.

I feel like kaira ko emotions dikhana thoda jaldi aa gaya
Abhi to story developing phase me hai aur etni jaldi kaira me feelings nahi aani chahiye thi

Itni asaani se thodi aa jayegi feelings. Just watch.

Koe aur bach gaya kya?

That guy system wala
What was is name again?

His name has not been mentioned yet.

I feel like is arc me tej bahut kuch jaan jayegi veer ke bare me kyuki veer bahar hurt hoke aayega to tej ke sawalo se bach nahi payega vo
Eagerly waiting for those scenes

Sirf Tej hi nahi, Veer ke baare me aur bhi log jaanenge.

Bhumika bhi to bach gaye
Kuch past ka pata chale to batao
Vaise jaldi hi apni maa ki tarah ye bhi apne bhai ko apna dood pilane wali hai(just a felling)
Vaise bhi emotions dikhane ke liye kavya arohi tej hai hi to yaha erotica dikha diya jaye to acha hi hoga

Bhumika ka route alag hai. Readers ko hairaani hogi aage chalke haha.

Vo vegas wali ladki Divya naam tha sayad vo vapas aayegi kya?
Character tha vo bhi pura

Agar aas paas Suhana ya Ava hogi? Then you might see a glimpse of her.

Ek sawal hai jo baar baar dimag me aa raha hai
Who is going to betray veer?

A big question. But I cannot give the spoilers.

Pehle to Shweta lagti thi i mean abhi bhi lag rahi hai
But kya koe aur hai?
Ragini hue to dil etne tukdo me totega ki jode na judega
Fir bhavna arohi kavya tej kaera and suhana too is out of this list
So who?
Kon hai jiska etna bada raaj chhupa rakha hai aapne apne dimag ke ander?
Suman hogi to maja hi aa jayega vaise

Naah! See! Veer can see if they will betray him. Kyuki ultimately uske paas favourability panel hai. Woh dekh sakta hai kaun fake way me uss se pyaar kar raha hai. Aur abhi tak koi bhi nahi hai aisa. Kyuki sabki favourability kaafi high hai. So who?

Nidhi ma'am aur juhi kaha hai dikhaye nahi de rahe?
Ma'am ka sarmana, blush karna dekhna to hum bhi deserve karte hai sath me juhi ka bachpana to milega hi

Agla update sabko dikhayega.

Anyway a very good story
You're doing great work by writing such stuff
I know it takes time and require a hell lot of efforts
So hats of to you for that
Keep the good work flowing
Much love

Thanks a bunch man.
Not many writes a revo like this. Since you are a writer youself, you know how to put it into words. A good lengthy review always brings a smile on my face and I'm always keen on answering them. The question you asked contains spoilers so I can't give that. But I can tell you that one of the big reveals will be done in this arc only. That's sufficient for now. Thanks again for this lovely revo and keep supporting as usual mate.
Good luck to you too.

 

[BP high]

Bhai aap ki story me suruse padraha hu. Mujhe aap ki story ki system upgrade concept bohot pasand he. Xforum me account na hone ki bajase koi reply nehi kar paya. Aab her update pe mera reply aayga.

 

[rajpoot01]

130 completed

 

[Werewolf]

Really amazing n outstanding update

Thanks bro

Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro

Dhanyavaad

A good update to start crimson arc, sweta has made a rivalry with veer's mother ans sister which is a little funny and sme time childish. Miss kaera ka task jo system se mila tha uska bi time nikal raha hai i think.

She's not making a rivalry to be clear. She's just trying to not fall behind, If tej is taking action then she wants her daughter bhumika too to take actions. That's it.

Superb update bro...
Waiting for next

Thanks

Superbbb Updatee

Thanks bro!

What a beautiful way to start a new arc.
Bhavna and Veer ka conversation itna pyara tha ki main bta bhi nhi sakti....
Bhavna k questions mne real life me apne aap se kiye to main bhi mute reh gyi. What a strong lesson it was given by Bhavna.

Who am I? Answer k liye mere mann me bhi vahi aaya tha jo Veer k mann me aaya tha. Ki main apne parents ki beti hu... Ya fir iski dost, iski behan, etc. Par real answer kya ho sakta h? I really don't know. I am someone who enjoys life? Enjoying my time with my family and friends? But who am I? I'm speechless.

Sach me... Itna simple sa question h... Aur main answer bhi nhi kar paayi. Kitne logo ko sharm aayi hogi jo ye na bata paaye. Usme main bhi ek hu ....

Tej aur Bhumika ki cat fight pyaari thi. Mujhe Kaera ka intizar h... I want to see her. Waiting eagerly for the next update. Or next episode... Keep writing. Love your work.

You will get answer too. Thoda wait karna hoga but I hope veer ke saath saath ju ka bhi confusion clear ho jaaye. Kaera issi arc me nazar aayegi jald hi. Keep supporting. Ye arc bada hai.

Superb awesome update brother

Dhanyavaad

Bahut jabardast update Bhai....mai review kabhi nahi karta magar ye update ka ek hi question sochne par majbur kar diya, who am I??
At the age of 28 I m still searching the answer.

Veer bhi iss sawaal ka jawaab dhundega, hope jald hi ju ko bhi uske zariye ek answer mil jaaye. keep supporting man

Bhai ji aapki lekhni adhbhut or Jabardast update

Dhanyavaad!

SUPERB AWESOME FANTASTIC LOVELY MIND BLOWING MARVELOUS AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Thanks

Bhai aap ki story me suruse padraha hu. Mujhe aap ki story ki system upgrade concept bohot pasand he. Xforum me account na hone ki bajase koi reply nehi kar paya. Aab her update pe mera reply aayga.

Thread me aapka swaagat hai bhai. Keep supporting.

 

[aj008]

Waiting for next

 

[rAge K]

Awesome story

 

[Rohit1988]

Kab tak de rahe ho next update bro

 

[Sultan siddiqui]

Pehle se behtar hu. Fever nahi hai ab

Good get well soon bro