Thriller Haivannnn........

[DiNu DraCula]

Nice updatr bhai pr ye kya tha bhai aate hi principal ke maar li bo bhi bina kisi baat ke aisa lgta hai jaise koi purani dusmani nikal rha ho or priya ko dekh ke aansu kyu aagye
Lgta hai past me kuch connection tha dono ka

Ha sahi guess kiya Bhai....
Hero ne q aesa kiya pp ke sath vo aage pat chal jayega..
Aur priya ke sath Kay rista he..
Vo flashback me para chal Jaye ga
Tnx Bhai..
Aese hi support karte rahiye..
Update 9:00 pm

 

[DiNu DraCula]

Superb update..... Story ka plot acha hai... Principal se kohi purani dushmani lag rah hai hero se..... Aap ko kis me acha lage vahi likh dena... Insect ya heroine..... Mera personal to heroine wali me story acha lagega.... Har kahani ek hero aur heroine hoti hai...

Sahi kaha..
Aur vote ke aadhar pe tay karunga...
Kahani incest hogi tab bhi heroine ek hi hogi..
Aur kisi ke sath hero ka chakkar nahi hoga..
Tnx bhai.
Keep support..
Update 9:00 pm

 

[Yuvi333]

Sahi kaha..
Aur vote ke aadhar pe tay karunga...
Kahani incest hogi tab bhi heroine ek hi hogi..
Aur kisi ke sath hero ka chakkar nahi hoga..
Tnx bhai.
Keep support..
Update 9:00 pm

Bhai ek suggestion hai aap vote ke aadhar par story mat likhna kud ke soch par likho.... Story ekdam super hogi.... Vote se story bigad jayegi

 

[Last benchers]

Wahhh Bhai mjaaa aagya apki story Sach Mai bahut hi kabiletarif hai..Mai 2 din SE soch RHA tha apko story padhunnga but time nhi Mila aaj Mila to Sach Mai apki story Dil ko touch KR gai....

 

[DiNu DraCula]

waiting new update bhai

Update posting....

 

[DiNu DraCula]

Wahhh Bhai mjaaa aagya apki story Sach Mai bahut hi kabiletarif hai..Mai 2 din SE soch RHA tha apko story padhunnga but time nhi Mila aaj Mila to Sach Mai apki story Dil ko touch KR gai....

Tnx Bhai...
Aese support karte rahiye...
Kahani jess-jese aage badhegi Aur interesting hogi...
Update posting

 

[DiNu DraCula]

Bhai ek suggestion hai aap vote ke aadhar par story mat likhna kud ke soch par likho.... Story ekdam super hogi.... Vote se story bigad jayegi

Thik he Bhai...
Update posting

 

[DiNu DraCula]

Aaj ka update chota he...
Qki humare yaha election he to.
Aaj ganv me prachar karne neta aaye he...
Lekin kal update bada dunga....

 

[DiNu DraCula]

Update 5

Mai car chala raha tha...
Aur Nirali kus soch rahi thi..

Mai....kya baat he choti tu aaj chup q he???

Nirali....to kya me bol-bol karti hu...??

Mai...mene aesa to nahi kaha.??? Lekin aaj jab se collage Gaye tabse chup he... Isliye pusa???

Nirali...sorry Bhai..

Mai...sorry kis liye???

Nirali....vo ... Vo...

Mai....chal koi baat nahi mujpe gussa hona tera haq banta he....acha ab pus kya pusna he.????

Nirali ...aapko q aesa lagta he?????

Mai..... Q ki Mai tera Bhai hu...ab bol

Nirali...jaha tak me aapko janti hu aap aapne choti si baat pe pp maafi nahi mangvayi...baat kus Aur he???

Mai....sahi kaha ...ye to sirf trailer tha... Movie aage aayegi...

Nirali...usne aesa kya kiya tha.????

Mai...mera past me muje dard Dene valo me ye bhi he... Aur vese tume sab pata he...

(vo sab purani bate yaad aane lagti he...jisse meri aankho me aanshu aa jate he..)

Nirali...(mere aanshu puste huye ) sorry Bhai..mene aapko rulaya...purani bato ko yaad karke...

Mai...tu q sorry bol rahi he...us dard se muje bahar tumne nikala he...tuje dekta hu to ____ ki yaad aati he...n vo muje dard me dekh sakti thi...n tu de sakti he...

Nirali...q ki aap worlds best brother ho....

Aese bate karte huye ghar pahunch jate he...

Aese hhi pura din nikal jata he...

Saam ko thakur bunglo me...

Sab dinner kar rahe the...

Baldev...varsha ab kesi ho???

Varsha...achi hu papa... Vese presentation kesa raha mom??? Ye contract Hume milega ki nahi???

Sima....acha raha...vese rahul explain bhut acha kiya...ab dekhte he kya hota he...rajput sir KO bhi pasand aaya..

Varsha...dekhna mom Hume hi milega...

Sima... Lekin ab business ki jimmedari ab unke pote rudra rajput ke hatho me he... Select Aur choice uski hogi...

Ye naam sunke priya Aur prem KO khansi aa jati he...

Baldev...Kay kar rahe ho bache sambhalkar khao???

Prem...fine dad....vese kya naam liya...???

Baldev....vese naam to mene bhi bhot suna he...choti umar me pura business khud chala raha he...prem tum q pus rahe ho...

Prem...vo mom college me..(fir vo sari baat batata he..) Mom muje to vo bhot ghamandi laga...

Sima...hoga sayad....chalo sodo hume kya???

Varsha....tu kya soch rahi he priya.???

Jab ye sab baat kar rahe the...priya tabse rudra ke bare me soch rahi thi..

Priya....(man me)...vo muje aese q dekh raha tha...jese janta ho...sayad??? Lekin uski aankho me mere liye besumaar pyar tha...lekin ye pyar alag tha..jese ladka aapni gf se karta he vesa nahi...uski aankho me mere liye fiqar thi..muje dekhke uski aankho me aanshu tak aa Gaye...lekin jatejate prem KO q gusse se ghur raha tha... Aakhir kaun ho tum??? Kya rista he mera tumse???
Vo Aur kus sochti ki varsha ki aavaz se hosh me aati he....

Priya....kya kaha didi???

Varsha....mene kaha dhyan kaha he tumhara...

Priya....kahi nahi didi... Bs college ke bare me soch rahi hu...

Fir sab dinner karke sab aapne-aapne room me chale jate he...

Aaj ke liye itna hi..

Baki aagle update me

 

[Rahul]

wonderfull update bhaiya ji