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Thriller Haivannnn........
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Sahi he Bhai...
Ab pura plot Mai taiyar kar chuka hu...
Uspe hi kahani likhunga...
Bs aap support karte rahiye...
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Abhi to Aur mar khani he usko...
Aage dekho kya hota he..
Bs aap support karte rahiye...
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Bhai heroine aa gayi he...
Main character me se ek he...
Vese aapne aage ke update dhyan se padhe hoge to aapko pata chal Jaye ga...
Aane vale update me vese bhi pata chal jayega
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Update 7
Pp aapne office me betha hua tha..Aur bhot tnsn me tha.
Ki ab kya hoga??? Pata nahi ab muje kya karna hoga???
Tabhi phone ki ring bajti he..
Pp....hello kaun????
Samne se....HM bol raha hu...
Pp....ji sir boliye..
HM....ye me kya sun raha hu.. Ki ek ladke ne mere beto KO Mara....tum usko niklane ki jagah mafi mang rahe the...abhi ke abhi suspend Karo...
Pp... Sorry sir me nahi kar sakta..
HM...tum jante ho...isse tumhare sath kya hoga????
Pp....mere sath Jo hoga vo hoga....lekin aapne uske sath kus kiya to aapke sath kya hoga vo aap soch nahi sakte...
HM....kaun he vo??? Jo mera bura kar sakta he???
Pp....Rudra Rajput... Rajput empire ka malik...
HM....what????
Hm turant phone rakh deta he...
Pp...(man me) he bhagvan bacha Lena muje...
HM ke ghar..
Rishi...kya hua dad???? Aap tnsn me q he???
HM....gadhe ki aulad...tuje pata he kaun he vo????kya jarurat thi usse ulzne ki????
Rishi....baat kya dad...???
HM....rajput empire ka malik he vo...Aur kal Jake mafi mang Lena usse...
Rishi...me nahi mafi mangunga..
HM....tu nahi tera baap bhi mafi mangega..
Rishi...ha to aap mafi mangiye..
HM....tuje majak lagta he...agar mafi n mangi to tu soch bhi nahi sakta kya hoga humara...
Isliye kal Jake chupchap mafi mang Lena...varna kalse tera ghar aana band...
Aur ye kahke vo chala jata he..
Aur rishi bhi sochta rahta he kya karu.???
Idhar Mai Aur Nirali ek class pura hote hi nikal jate he ghar ki Aur...
Mai thoda tnsn me tha...
Jise Nirali jan jati he...
Nirali...kya hua Bhai??? Aap tnsn me ho???
Mai..sorry choti...mene us ladke ko Mara tuje bina puse??? Kus bhi ho muje teri raay jaani chahiye thi...
Nirali...Kya Bhai is baat pe tnsn ho..aap na marte usko to muje bura lagta..
Mai...mtlb
Nirali...vo kabse mere pise pada he...kahta he ki pyar karta he mujse..
Mai...tum
Nirali...aapko lagta he aese ladke se pyar karungi.. Is maar padi he to vo bhi mera Pisa sod dega...
Mai...(gusse me) kaun he vo dusra?? Jo tuje paresan karta he???
Nirali...cool Bhai...kya hamesa gusse me rahte ho...ab to vo meri Aur dekhega bhi nahi..
Mai...hmmm
Ab vapas college canteen
Yaha prem Aur priya aapne dosto ke paas Bethe the Aur baat kar rahe the...
Inke dost he...
Rubi...priya ki dost he
Mayank...Rubi ka bf
Varun....Rubi ka Bhai...
Inke roll kahani me kam he isliye jyada intro nahi diya...(sirf ek character ko sod...uska full intro baad me dunga)
Varun...vese aaj maza aa gaya...
Prem...Aur vo kese???
Varun...tuje nahi pata..lekin rishi sabko bhot paresan karta tha...ab kabhi kisiko paresan nahi karega...
Rubi...ha bande me dam to tha...kya mara he unko..
Mayank...kahi pasand nahi aa gaya???? Hehehehe
Rubi...what rubbish... Sirf uski tarif kar rahi hu...
Varun...Aur powerful bhi lagta he...dekha nahi kese pp mafi mang raha tha...
Rubi...jiske liye Mara vo ladki kaun thi???
Mayank....uski gf hogi??
Prem(turant)....nahi aesa nahi he...
Sab usko dekhne lagte he...
Jo ab tak chup thi..
Priya...MATLAB
Prem...bs muje aesa lagta he isliye bola...
Varun...vese tune sahi kaha prem...vo uski bahan he...
Priya...vo tuje kese pata???
Varun...mene suna tha...vo usko choti kah raha tha...bhot ladke aapne se choti bahan ko choti kahta he...
Bs aese hi inki baat chal rahi thi...
Canteen me hi ek Aur table PS
L1...yar pawan kya soch rahe ho????
Jiha dosto pawan bhi isi college me he...
Pawan...kus nahi yaar...
L2...kya kus nahi...aaj ki subah bare me soch rahe ho???
Pawan...ha yaar...
L3...ha ye nirali se ab dur rahna hi padega....
Pawan...kabhi nahi...ji ek baar muje pasand aa Jaye ...USko har hal me pana hi meri jid hoti he...
L4....dimag se soch..hm ka beta tha samne..
Fir bhi pp us ladke se mafi mang raha tha..mtlb vo HM se bhi powerful he...
L1...powerful he mtlb kabhi kus kiya to ye baat Teri dadi tak pahunch gayi to kya hoga tera???
Pawan...baat to Teri sahi he... Vese vo ladke Aur Nirali me riata kya he?¿?
L1....koi bhi ho ab kya fark padta he..??
Pawan...tum pata to Karo....
L2...sochle...fir pastana padega..
Pawan...me kisi KO itni aasani se nahi sodta.. Tum sab pata Karo..bina kisi ki najar me aaye...
L1...chalo pata chal jayega..fir kya karoge.??
Pawan...uske aadhar pe plan banunga..
Yaha ab kus nahi inko baat karne do..hum chalte he hospital..
In hospital
Un ladko ka ilaj chal raha tha...Aur bahar unke parents khade the...
Mai vaha Jake Dr office me jata hu...
Mai...ab kesi tabiyat he unki...
Dr....(upar dekh ke) sir aap yaha??
Mai...mene pusa un ladko ki tabiyat kesi he???
Dr....thik he...lekin ek ka hath fracture he Aur dusre ka pair..
Mai....hmmm ..thik ho sakte he...
Dr....ha kus waqt lagega lekin thik ho jayegi...
Mai...OK Dr. Aap jayiye unke ristedaro ko anndar bhejiye... Muje unse baat karni he...
Dr....thik he...
Dr bahar Jake unke parents se..
Dr...aap un ladko ke ristedar he...
L1 ka baap...ha ji...
Dr....aap sab aandar aayiye..
Sab aandar aate he...
Mai..(Dr ki Aur dekhkar)... Inse koi pese mat lena ilaj ke...
Sab muje acharaj se dekhte he...
L1 ki maa....sukriya beta...humare bacho ka ilaj karvane ke liye...
Mai....unki ye halat mene ki he...
Sab sunke San ho jate he..
L2 ka baap ....mtlb
Mai....mene hi in dono ko Mara he...
L1 ka baap...(gusse me) Aur ab ilaj karvake kya sabit Karna chahte ho??
Mai....dekhiye Mai kus sabit nahi Karna chahta..
L2 ka baap...to humare bacho ko Mara q???? Abhi police ko bulata hu..
Mai...dekhihye Mari baat suniye..
Mari baat katkar
L1 ka baap...ab Jo bhi kahna police ko kahna...
Ab muje bhi gussa aane laga tha...
Mai...(gusse me) kya bola sale police ko bulayega....kute bula police ko muje pakdna to dur vo muje 6u bhi nahi sakte.. Teri hesiyat kya he sale mere samne bhikhari hu tu...pyar se baat kar raha hu to bole hi ja raha he sala...mujse koi unchi awaz me baat nahi karta Aur kute tu mujse unchi aavaz me baat kar raha he...ab smja tumhare ladke kese bigde jinke baap hi aese ho unme kaha se sanskar hoga...
Muje gusse me meri unchi aavaz se sab dar Gaye the..
Thodi der baad khudko relax karke unki Mao ki Aur dekhkar.
Mai...sorry aunty ji...kus jyada bol gaya...lekin koi muje unchi avaz me baat kare muje pasand nahi...
L1 ki maa...humare bacho KO q Mara??? Yahi batado...
Mai...(ek ladki side me thi) ye aapki beti he???
L2 KO maa...tum q pus rahe ho??? Ye meri beti he?.?
Mai....aunty ghabharayi mat...pus isliye raha hu ki....aapki beti ko koi sede to aapke bete ko kya Karna chahiye..
L2 ki maa....usko smjana chahiye n smje to fir ek Bhai ko aapni bahan ki hifajat karni chahiye aese logo she..
Mai....Mai bhi vahi kar raha tha..
L1 ki maa...mtlb..
Mai....Jo ladka meri bahan ko sedta tha uska support kar rahe the aapke bache...
L2 ki maa...nahi humare bache aesa nahi kar sakte...
Mai...to muje koi saukh nahi tha in logo ko Marne ka...nahi meri koi dusmani he inse.. Ye us HM ke bete ke sath milkar dusre ladke ko paresan Karna ladkiyo ko sedna yahi harkate karte he..yakin nahi to college me jakar check karlo...tab aapko pata chalega aapne ladko ke bare me...koi acha nahi kahega...
Ye sunke unki un ladko ki maa Rone lagti he...
Mai...dekhiye aunty ji mera aapko rulane ka koi irada nahi tha...lekin koi meri bahan ko kus kahe me bardast nahi kar sakta...Mai bada hu fir bhi jab bimar hota hu to ek maa ki tarah mera khyal rakhti he..uski buri najar se dekhe to me bardast nahi kar sakta to ye to harroj use sedte the...
L2 ki maa...nahi beta usme tumhari koi galti nahi...me bhi ek ladki ki maa hu smj sakti hu...
Mai....Mai bhi yahi chahta hu aap smj Jaye Aur aapne bacho KO bhi smjayiye... Aese logo ka sath sod de...varna kal aapke ghar aapke aapki beti ko bhi sodege nahi...aese kamine log kisi ke sage nahi hote...
L1 ki maa...sukriya beta... Tumhari jagah koi Aur hota to ulta hum sabko paresan karta...lekin tumne Hume smjaya...
Mai....koi baat nahi aunty...Mai sirf itna kahta hu ki aapne bacho pe najar rakho...galat raste pe ja rahe ho to smjao n smje to maar se smjao...
Jo ab tak sant thi..
Ladki...thank you bhaiya...
Mai muskurake
Mai...Aur vo kis liye gudiya...
Ladki....mere Bhai ka ilaj karvane ke liye..varna itna pesa hum kabhi n de sakte...aapne unki galti hone par bhi unka ilaj karva rahe ho??? Mere papa ne aapko galat bola fir bhi aapne Hume smjaya...
Mai....aapke liye kus bhi gudiya...kabhi bhi aapko.prblm ho to muje yaad Karna aapka ye Bhai hazar ho jayega..
Ladki...thank u once again... And didi se kahna ki mere bhaio KO maaf karde...
Mai...jarur gudiya..
Mai vaha se nikal jata hu..
L1 ka baap...(Dr se).vese ye he kaun???
Dr....rajput empire ka malik rudra rajput...ache ke liye ache buro ke liye bure...ye hospital bhi unka hi he...
L2 ka baap...(darte huye) kya ye rudra rajput he???
Dr...ha yahi he...kismat vale he aapke bache...
Varna unki bahan ko sedne vala bachta nahi... Isi hospital ke ek dr ne 3 saal pahle unki bahan ko seda tha...aaj bhi vo Dr coma me he...
Yaha to aese baat chalti rahegi...
Aagle din college me...
Mai Aur Nirali jese hi car se utre to aaj sab humko hi dekh rahe the...
Aese classes hot rahe..Aur break time me hum dono canteen me Bethe the.. Canteen me bhi sab dekh rahe the...sab ladkiya muje hi dekh rahi thi.Aur mere bare me baat kar rahe thi..
Jo yaha likhna fijul he..
Aese hi 20 din ho gaya tha...
Aur ye ek mahina santi thi..
Aaj kus bura hone vala tha..
Ab vo kya vo agle update me pata chalega..
Pp aapne office me betha hua tha..Aur bhot tnsn me tha.
Ki ab kya hoga??? Pata nahi ab muje kya karna hoga???
Tabhi phone ki ring bajti he..
Pp....hello kaun????
Samne se....HM bol raha hu...
Pp....ji sir boliye..
HM....ye me kya sun raha hu.. Ki ek ladke ne mere beto KO Mara....tum usko niklane ki jagah mafi mang rahe the...abhi ke abhi suspend Karo...
Pp... Sorry sir me nahi kar sakta..
HM...tum jante ho...isse tumhare sath kya hoga????
Pp....mere sath Jo hoga vo hoga....lekin aapne uske sath kus kiya to aapke sath kya hoga vo aap soch nahi sakte...
HM....kaun he vo??? Jo mera bura kar sakta he???
Pp....Rudra Rajput... Rajput empire ka malik...
HM....what????
Hm turant phone rakh deta he...
Pp...(man me) he bhagvan bacha Lena muje...
HM ke ghar..
Rishi...kya hua dad???? Aap tnsn me q he???
HM....gadhe ki aulad...tuje pata he kaun he vo????kya jarurat thi usse ulzne ki????
Rishi....baat kya dad...???
HM....rajput empire ka malik he vo...Aur kal Jake mafi mang Lena usse...
Rishi...me nahi mafi mangunga..
HM....tu nahi tera baap bhi mafi mangega..
Rishi...ha to aap mafi mangiye..
HM....tuje majak lagta he...agar mafi n mangi to tu soch bhi nahi sakta kya hoga humara...
Isliye kal Jake chupchap mafi mang Lena...varna kalse tera ghar aana band...
Aur ye kahke vo chala jata he..
Aur rishi bhi sochta rahta he kya karu.???
Idhar Mai Aur Nirali ek class pura hote hi nikal jate he ghar ki Aur...
Mai thoda tnsn me tha...
Jise Nirali jan jati he...
Nirali...kya hua Bhai??? Aap tnsn me ho???
Mai..sorry choti...mene us ladke ko Mara tuje bina puse??? Kus bhi ho muje teri raay jaani chahiye thi...
Nirali...Kya Bhai is baat pe tnsn ho..aap na marte usko to muje bura lagta..
Mai...mtlb
Nirali...vo kabse mere pise pada he...kahta he ki pyar karta he mujse..
Mai...tum
Nirali...aapko lagta he aese ladke se pyar karungi.. Is maar padi he to vo bhi mera Pisa sod dega...
Mai...(gusse me) kaun he vo dusra?? Jo tuje paresan karta he???
Nirali...cool Bhai...kya hamesa gusse me rahte ho...ab to vo meri Aur dekhega bhi nahi..
Mai...hmmm
Ab vapas college canteen
Yaha prem Aur priya aapne dosto ke paas Bethe the Aur baat kar rahe the...
Inke dost he...
Rubi...priya ki dost he
Mayank...Rubi ka bf
Varun....Rubi ka Bhai...
Inke roll kahani me kam he isliye jyada intro nahi diya...(sirf ek character ko sod...uska full intro baad me dunga)
Varun...vese aaj maza aa gaya...
Prem...Aur vo kese???
Varun...tuje nahi pata..lekin rishi sabko bhot paresan karta tha...ab kabhi kisiko paresan nahi karega...
Rubi...ha bande me dam to tha...kya mara he unko..
Mayank...kahi pasand nahi aa gaya???? Hehehehe
Rubi...what rubbish... Sirf uski tarif kar rahi hu...
Varun...Aur powerful bhi lagta he...dekha nahi kese pp mafi mang raha tha...
Rubi...jiske liye Mara vo ladki kaun thi???
Mayank....uski gf hogi??
Prem(turant)....nahi aesa nahi he...
Sab usko dekhne lagte he...
Jo ab tak chup thi..
Priya...MATLAB
Prem...bs muje aesa lagta he isliye bola...
Varun...vese tune sahi kaha prem...vo uski bahan he...
Priya...vo tuje kese pata???
Varun...mene suna tha...vo usko choti kah raha tha...bhot ladke aapne se choti bahan ko choti kahta he...
Bs aese hi inki baat chal rahi thi...
Canteen me hi ek Aur table PS
L1...yar pawan kya soch rahe ho????
Jiha dosto pawan bhi isi college me he...
Pawan...kus nahi yaar...
L2...kya kus nahi...aaj ki subah bare me soch rahe ho???
Pawan...ha yaar...
L3...ha ye nirali se ab dur rahna hi padega....
Pawan...kabhi nahi...ji ek baar muje pasand aa Jaye ...USko har hal me pana hi meri jid hoti he...
L4....dimag se soch..hm ka beta tha samne..
Fir bhi pp us ladke se mafi mang raha tha..mtlb vo HM se bhi powerful he...
L1...powerful he mtlb kabhi kus kiya to ye baat Teri dadi tak pahunch gayi to kya hoga tera???
Pawan...baat to Teri sahi he... Vese vo ladke Aur Nirali me riata kya he?¿?
L1....koi bhi ho ab kya fark padta he..??
Pawan...tum pata to Karo....
L2...sochle...fir pastana padega..
Pawan...me kisi KO itni aasani se nahi sodta.. Tum sab pata Karo..bina kisi ki najar me aaye...
L1...chalo pata chal jayega..fir kya karoge.??
Pawan...uske aadhar pe plan banunga..
Yaha ab kus nahi inko baat karne do..hum chalte he hospital..
In hospital
Un ladko ka ilaj chal raha tha...Aur bahar unke parents khade the...
Mai vaha Jake Dr office me jata hu...
Mai...ab kesi tabiyat he unki...
Dr....(upar dekh ke) sir aap yaha??
Mai...mene pusa un ladko ki tabiyat kesi he???
Dr....thik he...lekin ek ka hath fracture he Aur dusre ka pair..
Mai....hmmm ..thik ho sakte he...
Dr....ha kus waqt lagega lekin thik ho jayegi...
Mai...OK Dr. Aap jayiye unke ristedaro ko anndar bhejiye... Muje unse baat karni he...
Dr....thik he...
Dr bahar Jake unke parents se..
Dr...aap un ladko ke ristedar he...
L1 ka baap...ha ji...
Dr....aap sab aandar aayiye..
Sab aandar aate he...
Mai..(Dr ki Aur dekhkar)... Inse koi pese mat lena ilaj ke...
Sab muje acharaj se dekhte he...
L1 ki maa....sukriya beta...humare bacho ka ilaj karvane ke liye...
Mai....unki ye halat mene ki he...
Sab sunke San ho jate he..
L2 ka baap ....mtlb
Mai....mene hi in dono ko Mara he...
L1 ka baap...(gusse me) Aur ab ilaj karvake kya sabit Karna chahte ho??
Mai....dekhiye Mai kus sabit nahi Karna chahta..
L2 ka baap...to humare bacho ko Mara q???? Abhi police ko bulata hu..
Mai...dekhihye Mari baat suniye..
Mari baat katkar
L1 ka baap...ab Jo bhi kahna police ko kahna...
Ab muje bhi gussa aane laga tha...
Mai...(gusse me) kya bola sale police ko bulayega....kute bula police ko muje pakdna to dur vo muje 6u bhi nahi sakte.. Teri hesiyat kya he sale mere samne bhikhari hu tu...pyar se baat kar raha hu to bole hi ja raha he sala...mujse koi unchi awaz me baat nahi karta Aur kute tu mujse unchi aavaz me baat kar raha he...ab smja tumhare ladke kese bigde jinke baap hi aese ho unme kaha se sanskar hoga...
Muje gusse me meri unchi aavaz se sab dar Gaye the..
Thodi der baad khudko relax karke unki Mao ki Aur dekhkar.
Mai...sorry aunty ji...kus jyada bol gaya...lekin koi muje unchi avaz me baat kare muje pasand nahi...
L1 ki maa...humare bacho KO q Mara??? Yahi batado...
Mai...(ek ladki side me thi) ye aapki beti he???
L2 KO maa...tum q pus rahe ho??? Ye meri beti he?.?
Mai....aunty ghabharayi mat...pus isliye raha hu ki....aapki beti ko koi sede to aapke bete ko kya Karna chahiye..
L2 ki maa....usko smjana chahiye n smje to fir ek Bhai ko aapni bahan ki hifajat karni chahiye aese logo she..
Mai....Mai bhi vahi kar raha tha..
L1 ki maa...mtlb..
Mai....Jo ladka meri bahan ko sedta tha uska support kar rahe the aapke bache...
L2 ki maa...nahi humare bache aesa nahi kar sakte...
Mai...to muje koi saukh nahi tha in logo ko Marne ka...nahi meri koi dusmani he inse.. Ye us HM ke bete ke sath milkar dusre ladke ko paresan Karna ladkiyo ko sedna yahi harkate karte he..yakin nahi to college me jakar check karlo...tab aapko pata chalega aapne ladko ke bare me...koi acha nahi kahega...
Ye sunke unki un ladko ki maa Rone lagti he...
Mai...dekhiye aunty ji mera aapko rulane ka koi irada nahi tha...lekin koi meri bahan ko kus kahe me bardast nahi kar sakta...Mai bada hu fir bhi jab bimar hota hu to ek maa ki tarah mera khyal rakhti he..uski buri najar se dekhe to me bardast nahi kar sakta to ye to harroj use sedte the...
L2 ki maa...nahi beta usme tumhari koi galti nahi...me bhi ek ladki ki maa hu smj sakti hu...
Mai....Mai bhi yahi chahta hu aap smj Jaye Aur aapne bacho KO bhi smjayiye... Aese logo ka sath sod de...varna kal aapke ghar aapke aapki beti ko bhi sodege nahi...aese kamine log kisi ke sage nahi hote...
L1 ki maa...sukriya beta... Tumhari jagah koi Aur hota to ulta hum sabko paresan karta...lekin tumne Hume smjaya...
Mai....koi baat nahi aunty...Mai sirf itna kahta hu ki aapne bacho pe najar rakho...galat raste pe ja rahe ho to smjao n smje to maar se smjao...
Jo ab tak sant thi..
Ladki...thank you bhaiya...
Mai muskurake
Mai...Aur vo kis liye gudiya...
Ladki....mere Bhai ka ilaj karvane ke liye..varna itna pesa hum kabhi n de sakte...aapne unki galti hone par bhi unka ilaj karva rahe ho??? Mere papa ne aapko galat bola fir bhi aapne Hume smjaya...
Mai....aapke liye kus bhi gudiya...kabhi bhi aapko.prblm ho to muje yaad Karna aapka ye Bhai hazar ho jayega..
Ladki...thank u once again... And didi se kahna ki mere bhaio KO maaf karde...
Mai...jarur gudiya..
Mai vaha se nikal jata hu..
L1 ka baap...(Dr se).vese ye he kaun???
Dr....rajput empire ka malik rudra rajput...ache ke liye ache buro ke liye bure...ye hospital bhi unka hi he...
L2 ka baap...(darte huye) kya ye rudra rajput he???
Dr...ha yahi he...kismat vale he aapke bache...
Varna unki bahan ko sedne vala bachta nahi... Isi hospital ke ek dr ne 3 saal pahle unki bahan ko seda tha...aaj bhi vo Dr coma me he...
Yaha to aese baat chalti rahegi...
Aagle din college me...
Mai Aur Nirali jese hi car se utre to aaj sab humko hi dekh rahe the...
Aese classes hot rahe..Aur break time me hum dono canteen me Bethe the.. Canteen me bhi sab dekh rahe the...sab ladkiya muje hi dekh rahi thi.Aur mere bare me baat kar rahe thi..
Jo yaha likhna fijul he..
Aese hi 20 din ho gaya tha...
Aur ye ek mahina santi thi..
Aaj kus bura hone vala tha..
Ab vo kya vo agle update me pata chalega..
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