Incest Deewanapan...

[lover of darkness]

sach me daru pike so gaye they kya

Jo update naa diya

bhai boss ke sath tha... ik muder mystery par kam kar rehe hain... police job hai.. yeh sab karna padhta hai...

agar ajj free hua toh rat ko bata dunga.. or update dene ki kossih bhi karuga...

 

[Love 1994]

bhai boss ke sath tha... ik muder mystery par kam kar rehe hain... police job hai.. yeh sab karna padhta hai...

agar ajj free hua toh rat ko bata dunga.. or update dene ki kossih bhi karuga...

Bhai maine to aise hi majak kiya tha
Mujhe nahi pata tha aap kya kar rahe ho

Aur rahi update ki baat to mere khayal se aap ka kaam pehle pura hona chahiye kyu ki real life hero aap log hi hote ho jo aise gunehgaro ko saja dete hai

 

[Jay raj]

bhai boss ke sath tha... ik muder mystery par kam kar rehe hain... police job hai.. yeh sab karna padhta hai...

agar ajj free hua toh rat ko bata dunga.. or update dene ki kossih bhi karuga...

Koi bat nahi bhai jab ap free ho jao tab update dena ham intejar karege

 

[lover of darkness]

Boht Zabardast update

thanks bhai.. aise hi sath bane rehna bhai..

 

[lover of darkness]

Muje to ravi ki maa par sak jaa raha he bhai vo bhi ho sakti he sab se badi villain kyu ki vo bahot raz chupa ke bethi he aur sayad ravi ke pita kal ne uski yadas mita ke use normal logo ke sath rahene ke liye bhej diya ho par ab uski yadas vapis aa jaye aur vo villain ban ke ravi aur komal ke pyar me badha dale unka millan na hone de...

thanks bhai... ravi ki maa , abhi uska story me koi role nai aya hai , shyad voh bhi ho sakti hai , eska pata jalad chelga bhai..

aise hi sath bane rehna bhai

 

[lover of darkness]

Hello, Ladies & Gentleman,
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.



On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Story Collector

ok bhai... kossih rehegi.. story post karne ki.. shukriya

 

[lover of darkness]

Nice update bhai ye serious update tha dar aur pyar vala but bina comedy ke bhi read kar ke acha laga

Ab to ravi ke pas locket ki takat aa agi he to vo hospital ke sath sath syad vo formula bhi bacha le dekhte he kya hota he

Aur ye hamari pyari rema kaha chali gai , jaldi bachalo use bahot pyari air bholi he , dekhte usko takat milne ke bad uskaa attitude change hota he ke nahi.

Mere khyal se komal ko bacha ne ke ravi apne gaon jana padega vahi se use koi rata milega komal ke pas jane ke liye .

Aur vo kabile valo kya hua, kya hun he dayana aur krunal ne mar diya ???

Bahot sare sawal he apki stoty me jo age jake mil jayege yahi umid karta hu , yese hi likhte raho bhai maja aa raha he apki stoty read kar ke

thanks bhai.. bhai jab takat milti hai.. tab kuch khona bhi padhta hai..
hmm bhai.. jalad hi story gaon ki traf rukh karegi..

or bhai kabile ka kya hua.. yeh bhi es joker wale kisse ke bad pata chal jayega...

bhai sath bane rehe.. apko sabhi swalo ke jawab milege..

aise hi sath bane rehna bhai..

 

[lover of darkness]

Bahut hi darawana aur romanchit karne wala update diya he bhai. Suru me to reema wala scene padhkar bahut dar laga. Fir ravi ki halat dekh kar dukh hua. Lekin ab locket ki sari takat ravi me sama gayi he. Ab to usne komal se baat bhi kar li he. Lekin pehle use reema ko bachana chahiye. Usake baad joker ki band bajani he. Wo formula Growth kya he aur kya use ravi use kar payega.
Waiting 4 next update

thanks amtul bhai.... bhai seema ki takat behad jayda hai... tabhi ravi ko rema ke bare me kuch bhi mehsus nai ho reha.. varna voh pehle rema ko hi bachane jata ..

bhai formula kya hai.. esse kya hoga.. yeh apko jalad hi pata chal jayega..

aise hi sath bane rehna bhai..

 

[lover of darkness]

Nice update toh ravi ne locket ki shakti ko apne andar sama liya hai aur devil roop dikhane wala hai well bahut maza aane wala hai ab lekin komal ne ravi ko rema ko bachane ke liye kaha tha toh ravi aravti nagar kyun jaa raha hai dusri taraf biman ne 3th killer girl bula li hai lekin kya yeh apna kaam lar payegi ya bakki 2no killer girls ki tarah kisi ke pyar me pad jayegi Lagta hai rema ko khud ko hi bachana padega waise ravi ko kab yaad aaya ki uska pita kon hai aur agar ek locket ravi ko komal jaisa bana sakta tha toh komal ne ravi ke liye bhi waisa locket banane ke liye nahi socha tha kya

thanks bhai... ayush bhai.. jab komal ne ravi ko rema ke bare me bataya .. tab ravi ki halat thik nai thi.. use kuch mehsus nai ho reha tha..

or seema ki takat behad jayda hai.. toh rema kaha hai.. yeh ravi nai dekh sakta...

killer girls

bhai locket ki takat ravi ko milte hi.. ravi ko sab yad anne laga hai.. jo ring ne uske bhula diya tha..

or komal ne jo locket ravi ko diya.. abhi nai bata sakta.. es locket ka bhi ik raz hai... jo agge pata chalega..

aise hi sath bane rehna bhai..

 

[lover of darkness]

Seema aur rema wala part bahut hi darawna tha
Shayad ab rema ki shakti active ho jaye

Wahi dusri taraf locket ki power ravi me sama chuki hai shayad mere khayal se ye komal ne kiya ho?
Shayad usne apni shakti Locket me dali thi aur ab wo ravi me transfer kardi ho
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

ye last ki bat ek dam perfect hai ab shayad ravi story ki kaman sambhalega

thanks love bhai... rema ki powers etni jaldi active nai hogi... kuch aisi situation banegi.. tabhi maza ayega.. vaise rema wala har part likhna behad mushkil hota hai... behad dimag lagana padh reha hai..

or last me apne sahi bola hai..

aise hi sath bane rehna bhai..