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Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]
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Abhi padha nhi hai time nikaal k padhta hun phir deta hun reviewPaisa ek Gift aur Curse dono hai, Paise ki takat insaan ko king aur slave dono bana deta hai.
She is a Leader!
Ap isse After Effect keh sakte ho treatment ka, Jo insaan insaniyat se itna waqt dur ho to uss ke liye insaan insaan nahi rehte!
You never know!
aage je update per bhi ap ke review ka intezar hai!
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Kuch mehman aa gye the Subha subha Update 1 Ghanta late ho ga!!!
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UPDATE 18 ~
(LET'S DO IT)
(LET'S DO IT)
Vanshika ke saath shoot hone ke baad Aarav ke kuch aur Solo Shoot huwe aur akhir kuch ghanto ke andar ye silsila bhi khatam ho gya.
Vanshika jaane ke liye tayar thi, Aarav bhi nikalne wala tha jab Lydia ne usse side per ane ka kaha, Vanshika baahir Car ke paas khari Sammy se baat ker rahi thi jahan Veronica bhi paas khari huwi thi.
Aarav ek taraf Lydia ke saath chala gaya, Lydia yahan Aarav ko le to ayi thi lekin uss ki nervousness dur se nazar aa sakti thi, Aarav ne bhi zor nahi dia aur Lydia ko uss ka waqt lene dia.
Andaza to tha Aarav ko ke kon sa topic hai jis ke liye Lydia Aarav ko yahan layi hai, Lydia ne apne ek haath ke upar dusra haath rakh halka sa bow karte huwe apna sar jhukaya to Aarav heraan ho gya.
Lydia: I'm sorry! Main ne tumhe pehchana nahi, Main bohat waqt se Maafi maangna chahti thi, Uss raat main nashe me thi aur mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa rahi thi main kia aur kis ke saath ker rahi hu.
Lydia ke manners se Aarav ko andaza ho raha tha ke Lydia bhi kisi choote ghar se nahi hai, Uss raat jo bhi huwa Lydia uss ki maafi maang rahi thi warna koi aur hoti to shayad wo iss baare me sochti bhi na.
Aarav: Arrey! App ko aise jhukne ki zaroorat nahi hai, Mujhe pata chal gaya tha uss raat ap nashe me thi, Main awkward nahi karna chahta tha iss liye ap se kaha nahi lekin Uss raat jo bhi huwa main samajhta hu uss me kisi ki galti nahi hai.
Aarav ka Response sun ker Lydia seedhi khari ho gayi, Uss ke chehre per meethi muskurahat thi, Wo dar rahi thi ke Aarav uss raat ko le ker Lydia ko pareshaan kare ga lekin Aarav ki baat sun uss ko khushi ho rahi thi.
Lydia: Thank You! Mujhe laga tha tum gussa ho jao gye, Lekin tum Photo shoot ke waqt jaise lag rahe the uss se bilkul Alag ho, Waise aj sach me tum ne hume bacha lia hai, Agar main kuch bhi madad aa saku tumhare to hichkichana mat aur keh dena.
Aarav: Zaroor!
Aarav aur Lydia aage baat ker sakte ke uss se pehle he wahan Sammy aa gaya jis ke saath Jenny bhi haath me kuch shopping bag pakre khari ho gayi.
Sammy: Aj to kamal ker dia tum ne! Koi keh he nahi sakta ke ye tumhara first time hai, Abhi bhi kuch polishing ki zaroorat hai lekin uss ki itni problem nahi hai, Well done.
Aarav: Thank You!
Sammy ne Jenny ko ishara kia to Jenny ne apne haath me pakre Shopping bags Aarav ko pakra diye.
Sammy: Professional Model na hone ki wajha se main tumhe Pay to nahi ker sakta! Lekin ye kapre aur kuch paise hamari taraf se hai, Kisi model ko jitne milte uss se to bohat kam hai lekin main umeed karta hu agli baar hume dobara kaam karne ka moka mile ga aur tab tum ek professional model ban ker hamare saath kaam karo gye.
Sammy ne ek Envelope Aarav ko pakra dia, Aarav ne socha bhi nahi tha ke usse kuch mile ga, Lekin wo ye bhi nahi jhutla sakta tha ke usse jo mila uss ki usse bohat zada Khushi ho rahi hai.
Envelope me 1000$ Dollar the, Itne paiso ke liye Aarav ko pure Maheene mehnat karni parti thi, Jo kapre usse mile the wo uss ne Photoshoot ke waqt pehne the, Aur wo bare brand's ke kapre the jo Celebrities pehnte the.
Sammy: Tum log baate karo! Mujhe kuch kaam hai to jaldi nikalna ho ga.
Sammy aur Jenny wahan se chale gye, Lydia wanha khari Aarav ke chehre per ayi khushi ko daikh muskura rahi thi, Aarav kisi bache ki tarha lag raha tha jise pehli baar uss ka pasandeeda khilona mil gaya ho.
Jahan dono apne moments me magan the wanhi 2 ankhe unhe ghoor rahi thi, Wo ankhe kisi aur ki nahi Vanshika ki thi jo itne samay se dono ko gutar-gu karte daikh rahi thi, Uss ki ankho se lag raha tha ke wo abhi jaye gi aur Aarav ko kheench laye gi.
Veronica (Teasing): Oh! is my darling feeling jealous?
Veronica ki awaz sun Vanshika hosh me ayi aur usse ehsaas huwa ke wo kia ker rahi hai, Usse khud heraani ho rahi thi ke wo aise kiu daikh rahi thi dono ko.
Vanshika: Aisa kuch nahi hai! Mujhe bus jaane ki jaldi hai, Main sirf wait ker rahi hu kab un ki baate khatam ho aur hum chale.
Veronica: Vanshu! Main tumhe bachpan se jaanti hu, Yaad hai Tumhe school me kia kehte the, “ice princess” kiu ke tum kisi ki bhi parwah nahi karti sirf apni duniya me doobi rehti, Lekin jab se main ne tumhe iss larke ke saath daikha hai tum badal gayi ho, You're started to look like a normal girl.
Veronica ki baate Vanshika ko aur bhi heraan ker rahi thi, Kia sach me badal gayi thi wo? Lekin kiu? Kia khaas hai uss larke me?
Veronica apni kalayi ko daikhne lagi jis ko pakar ker Aarav usse Neel ke paas se bacha ker bhaaga tha, Shayad Aarav Pehla larka tha jis ko Vanshika ne khud ko chune dia tha, Lekin kiu? Kiu ek larke jis ko wo jaanti bhi nahi thi uss ke liye wo aisa feel ker rahi thi?
“Chale?”
Vanshika apne khayalo ki duniya me gum thi jab Aarav ki awaz uss ke kaano me gayi, Aarav Lydia se baate puri ker ke aa chuka tha, Veronica paas khari sirf muskura rahi thi Vanshika ki halat daikh ker uss ne aur tang karna sahi nahi samjha aur dono ko jaane dia.
Vanshika aur Aarav Car me baithe aur ghar ke liye nikal gye, Car me khamooshi thi dono chup apne khayalo me doobe huwe the, Jahan Vanshika abhi Veronica se huwi baato ke baare me soch rahi thi wanhi Aarav aj ke experience ko yaad ker khush ho raha tha.
Aise he dono ghar pohanch gye, Vanshika ne abhi ke liye sab kuch apne dimagh se nikala aur Kal apne concert ke liye jaane ke baare me sochne lagi, Aarav bhi Car se baahir nikla to usse baahir Tsubame khari dikh gayi.
Vanshika to bina kuch kahe wahan se chali gayi, Aarav ne zada dhayan na dete huwe Tsubame ke paas chala gaya, Lekin wo jaise he Tsubame ke kareeb pohancha to Tsubame ke chehre per zakhmo ke nishaan daikh heraan ho gya.
Aarav: Ye kia huwa?
Tsubame: Abhi Ye zaroori nahi hai! Mere kamre me chalo main aa rahi hu.
Aarav puchna to bohat kuch chahta tha, Lekin Tsubame ki baat maan ker wo uss ke kamre me chala gaya, Kuch pal ke baad he Tsubame bhi andar aa gayi.
Dono ek dusre ke saamne neeche baith gye, Tsubame ke zakhm itne gehre nahi the lekin wo Sadharan bhi nahi the, Akhir kon Tsubame jaisi mazboot larki ko zakhmi ker sakta hai? Aise he sawal Aarav ke mann me aa rahe the.
Tsubame: Mujhe lag he raha tha ke aisi Technique ek baahir ke insaan ko sikhaane ke permission milni Easy nahi ho gi! Pareshaan mat ho ye zakhm mujhe khud ko sabit karte huwe mile hai.
Aarav: Kiu?
Tsubame: Mujhe apni kabiliyat dikhani per gayi book lene ke liye! Lekin ant me main safal ho gayi.
Tsubame ki baat sun Aarav ko glaani hone lagi, Uss me he Tsubame se wo technique seekhne ka kaha tha, Uss ki wajha se uss ke master ko itna kuch jhelna per gaya tha.
Tsubame: Book mil to gayi! Lekin abhi hume uss ka koi faida nahi hai, Ye technique seekhne ke liye tumhe kam se kam Master Level hona chahiye, Agar uss se pehle tum ne Flash Steps ko Master level se pehle Use karni chahi to tumhari jaan ko bhi khatra ho sakta hai.
Aarav ke liye ye ek bara shock tha, 10 din ke baad abhi tak wo Initiate Level ko bhi puri tarha control nahi ker saka tha, Master level to abhi bohat dur tha.
Tsubame: Initiate Level ko puri tarha Conquer karne ke liye tumhe Inner ki apni body ke ek hisse me Focus karna zaroori hota hai! Lekin Flash Step ko Use karte waqt tumhe Inner ki ko apni puri body me control karna hota hai, Agar tum control ke bina Inner Ki ko apni body me travel karne do gye to tumhari body isse jhel nahi sake gi aur phat jaye gi, Iss liye hum abhi ke liye Flash Steps ko nahi seekh sakte.
Tsubame ki baat sun Aarav ko nirasha ho rahi thi, Lekin wo samajh sakta tha ke Tsubame uss ke liye he ye sab kuch keh rahi hai, Abhi ke liye Aarav ne Body ko train karte huwe Initiate Level per focus karne ki sochi aur Flash Steps ko aage ke liye choor dia.
Aarav: Main samajh gaya! Abhi ke liye hum baki sab point oer focus karte hai.
Tsubame: Aj ke liye Araam karo! Kal subha se hum dobara tumhari Combat training per focus kare gye.
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Secret Underground Medical Facility
Japan ~ 3:14 PM ~ 10 Days Later
*Agggghhhhhh*
Aj sab ka tower wapis jaane ka din tha, Lekin kal se Isabelle ki halat aur bhi zada kharab hone lagi thi, Sab log puri koshis ker rahe the lekin Isabelle Dard se chilaye ja rahi thi.
Uss ki ye Halat daikh Daisuke ko bhi ab fikar hone lagi thi, 1 Ghante me wo wapis ja rahe the lekin kia Isabelle ek aur Journey ko bardasht ker sakti thi kia? Agar Aarav ko Isabelle ki halat ka pata chale ga to kia reaction ho ga uss ka?
Bohat se sawal Daisuke ko pareshaan ker rahe the, Daisuke ne ek gehra saans bhara aur Isabelle ke paas kamre me chala gaya.
Daisuke: Isabelle!
Isabelle (Crying): Please, Daisuke! Mujhe iss Dard se azaad ker do, Main aur nahi seh sakti iss dard ko, Please!
Daisuke: Isabelle, Tumhe bardasht karna ho ga! Sirf 1 ghanta aur reh gaya hai hume jaane ke liye, Sab ke baare me socho tumhare bina hamare Surviving Chances kitne kam ho jaye gye, Aarav ke baare me socho wo pehle he kitni pareshani me hai agar tumhe kuch huwa to wo kaise lar sake ga wahan.
Isabelle chah ker bhi dard bardasht nahi ker paa rahi thi, Lekin Daisuke ki baat sun ker uss ne marne ke khayal ko apne dimagh se nikal dia.
Daisuke ne Yoo-Jung se bhi Contact ker lia tha, Aarav ka naam laye bina uss ne kuch tip usse de di thi, Aarav ko bhi safety Tips de di thi, Unhe nahi pata tha ke unhe iss baar kis ka saamna karna pare ga.
Daisuke wanhi Isabelle ke paas baith gaya, Wahan sab log un ke liye zaroori cheeze laa rahe the jis ki unhe zaroorat per sakti thi, Kento Daisuke ke paas aa gaya.
Daisuke: Ap ko kia lagta hai? Wahan ja ker Isabelle ki halat me sudhar aye ga kia?
Kento: Kuch bhi nahi kaha ja sakta! Yahan hum ne sab kuch ker lia, Agar yahan kuch nahi ho sakta to hum sirf ye umeed laga sakte hai ke wahan ja ker kuch sudhar aa jaye.
Daisuke: Huh! Sab kuch tayar ho gya hai kia?
Kento: Haan! Jin sab ki wahan zaroorat per sakti hai wo sab yahan le aya gya hai, Circle me tumhare saath sirf None Living things he ja sakti hai, Lekin Electronic koi bhi cheez beech me he tabah ho sakti hai, Baki hum tumhare uss secret member se he umeed laga sakte hai ke wo apne uss Bag me kuch le ja sake.
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Training Ground
New York ~ 3:03 AM
Jahan Japan me din ka waqt tha wanhi New York me raat ke 3 baje Aarav aur Vansh jaane ke liye tayar khare the, Ye wo he jagha thi jahan Aarav roz training karta tha.
[12 Minutes Remaining]
Sirf 12 Minute reh gye the, Adarsh aur Archana apne bete ke paas khare the jahan Adarsh usse mazboot rehne ke liye keh raha tha wanhi Archana ki ankho me ansoo the, Archana ne ek dhaga Vansh ki kalayi per baandh dia jo uss ne kisi gayani Baba se raksha ke liye liya tha.
Aarav khara un ke pyaar ko dur se daikhta raha, Usse jalan nahi ho rahi thi ye kehna galat ho ga, Andar he andar wo chah raha tha ke uss ke Maa Aur Papa bhi yahan hote lekin ye sirf ek khawaish thi jo kabhi sach nahi ho sakti thi.
Urvi ko abhi nahi pata tha ke Aarav ja raha hai, Aur shayad Aarav usse abhi batana chahta bhi nahi tha, Urvi ka treatment shuru ho chuka tha aur Aarav usse pareshaan nahi karna chahta tha.
“Haath idhar karo apna!”
Archana ki awaz ne Aarav ko uss ke khayalo se kheench ke baahir le aya, Aarav ne nazre utha ker daikha to Archana uss ke saamne khari huwi thi haath me dhaga liye huwe, Aarav ka haath pakar Archana ne aage kia aur dhaga bandhne lagi.
Archana: Mujhe pata hai mere Husband ne tumhe Vansh ki raksha karne ke liye kaha hai! Lekin tumhe sirf uss ki nahi khud ki bhi rakhsa karni hai, Mujhe mere dono bete sahi salamat waapis chahiye.
Archana ne Aarav ke haath me dhaga baandh dia, Aarav apni kalayi me bandha wo dhaga daikhne laga, Ye dhaga Aarav ki raksha karta ya na karta ye zaroori nahi tha, Lekin jis pyaar se Archana ne ye dhaga bandha tha wo Aarav ko andar se hila raha tha.
Aarav ka pura shareer kaanp raha tha aur kab uss ki ankho me ansoo aa gye usse khud na pata chala, Apni Kalayi per bandhe dhaage ko apne paas ker Aarav ne chum lia.
Uss ki ye harkat daikh Archana ne aage barh uss ka maatha chum lia, Archana ki ankhe bhi bheegi huwi thi Aarav ke baalo ko sehla wo nazar bhar ker usse daikhne lagi.
Lekin wo aur bardasht na ker saki aur peeche chali gayi aur apne ansoo chupane ki koshis karne lagi, Aarav itne waqt ke baad dobara ek Maa ke pyaar ko mehsoos ker raha tha.
Akash: Sab kuch tayar hai na?
Akash apne saath Barbie ko liye Aarav ke paas aa gaya, Aarti ko iss baare me kuch bhi nahi pata tha to wo ghar per thi aur Vanshika apne Concert ke liye pehle he ja chuki thi, Tsubame bhi Aarav ke paas aa gayi.
Aarav: Lagta to hai sab kuch rakh lia hai! Ye bag bohat kaam aa raha hai.
Tsubame: Bag ke baare me hume sirf kuch baate pata chali hai! Ye ek infinite Storage bag hai lekin zada bhaari aur bari cheeze nahi rakh sakte iss me, Mostly iss me se sab weapon pehle he baant chuke ho, Tumhari Sword abhi bhi wanhi hai to tumhe pehle usse dhoondna ho ga.
Aarav: Hmm! Weapon ke sivaye iss me 3 Health Potion hai aur kuch khali Bottle aur Jar wagaira aur kuch Black Smithing ke liye cheeze hai, Hum ne kuch aur cheeze rakh di hai iss me jaise khane ke liye samaan aur kuch Survival Kit aur kuch cheeze jo wahan kaam aa sake.
Akash: Good! Yaad rakhna tumhe zinda waapis ana hai, Agar tum wahan se zinda wapis na aye narak se waapis kheench ke lao ga aur dobara maar du ga tumhe.
Akash ne Aarav ka mood acha karne ke liye kaha, Aarav bhi samajh gaya aur muskura dia pichle 10 din me uss ne training ke sivaye kisi aur cheez per dhayan nahi dia tha.
[1 Minute Remaining]
Vansh aur Aarav ek dusre ke paas aa gye, Dono ne ek dusre ke haath pakar liye, Sab log kuch Distance per khare ho gye aur intezaar karne lage, Sab andar se dar rahe the.
Aur akhir wo shuru ho gya, Ek circle dono ke gird ban gaya aur Aag ki lapte unhe lapaitne lagi lekin iss baar dono he nahi ghabraye aur seedhe khare rahe.
Tes havaye chalne lagi aur Zameen kaanpne lagi, Lapte aur bhayankar ho gayi aur dono ko apne andar samait gayab ho gayi, Wanha dono me se koi nahi tha.
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Andhere ne ek baar dobara Aarav ko gher lia, Wo abhi bhi apne haatho me Vansh ke haath mehsoos ker paa raha tha lekin kuch bhi nazar nahi aa raha tha, Uss ke saamne Window khul gayi.
[Welcome, Player]
[You must survive in this tower while trying to go back to your world]
Un ki Quest unhe mil chuki thi, Dobara Circle ne unhe lapaita aur aag ki lapte unhe apne andar samaitne lagi.
[You are now entering the Tutorial Tower]
[Good luck]
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The Darkvale Forest ~
Tutorial Tower
Aarav ne apni ankhe kholi to uss ke saamne Vansh khara huwa tha, Aarav ne V Vansh ka haath choora aur chaaro taraf dhayan se daikhne laga, Wo ek jungle me the lekin ye Jungle bohat alag tha.
Ped kisi pahar jitne bare jo baahir ki roshni andar nahi ane de rahe the, Wanhi Tree Roots Zameen ko saaf dikhne bhi nahi de rahi thi
Aarav aur Vansh ke sivaye wahan koi nahi tha, Aarav ne Sense karne ki koshis ki lekin koi bhi unhe kareeb mehsoos nahi ho raha tha, Sabhi alag alag jagha per Teleport huwe the.
Aarav: Koi bhi hamare kareeb nahi hai! Sabhi alag alag Jagha bheje gye hai, Hum dono ek saath hai matlab Daisuke aur Isabelle bhi saath ho gi, Lekin Yoo-Jung Akeli hai.
Vansh: Ab hum kia kare?
Aarav: Main khud heraan hu! Lekin Yoo-Jung ne ye hone ka andaza laga lia tha, Iss liye hum seedhe Yoo-Jung ki taraf rukh ker ke khare the, Agar hamara Guess sahi huwa to hum seedhe chale to hum Yoo-Jung tak pohanch jaye gye.
Vansh: Lekin tum itne yaqeen se kaise keh sakte ho?
Aarav: Hum kisi cheez ka bharosa nahi ker sakte yahan! Lekin bina soche samjhe bhatakne se acha hai hum iss taraf chale, Quest ke hisaab se hum Forest se baahir nahi jaa sakte aur main Demon Wolves ko bhi sense nahi ker paa raha hu, To hamare liye sab se acha iss taraf jaana he ho ga.
Aarav ki baat sahi thi, Agar wo bina soche samjhe chalte to wo kanhi bhi nahi pohanchne wale the, Lekin agar wo Yoo-Jung ki baat maante to ek umeed thi ke wo dobara mil sakte hai.
Aarav ne wanha ek ped ke upar nishaan laga dia, Kuch Tips jo Daisuke se uss ko mili thi wo kaam ane wali thi, Konse raaz chupe huwe the iss forest me wo sab khulna baki tha.
*Ssshhhh*
Ek halki awaz Aarav ke kaano me gayi jis me uss ke rongte khare ker diye, Aarav tezi se ek taraf kuda jahan wo pehle khara tha wahan ek ek ajeeb se liquid aa ker gira, Aarav ne dusri taraf daikha to uss ke saamne ek Green Slime tarha ki cheez thi.
*Ssssshhhhh*
Aarav ne jahan wo liquid gira uss taraf daikha to wo pura Ped jaise pighal raha tha, Aarav ne Vansh ki taraf daikh jis ne haan me sar hilate huwe Slime ki taraf daikhne laga.
[Ability (Material Detection) Activated]
*Ding*
[Material: Acid Slime]
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[Aj ke liye itna he, 3.7K words ka hai ye update, iss Update ke saath he hamari journey dobara shuru hoti hai, Agar iss update per 30 like huwe to Next Update Friday night ko aye ga, Umeed larta hu ap ko update pasand aye ga, Milte hai agle update per tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!]
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Very nice update Bhai
Shaandar update
Very much underrated story bro....
Waiting for update today is Monday night..
Update 18 has been posted Guys!!! 