Incest The saviour

[san09]

Yeh Mera pehla story hain. Or pehla post bhi.

 

[johnsamuri]

Ok

 

[san09]

Disclaimer​

Yeh ek kalpanik kahani hain. Agar bastabik duniya se koi mel hai to wo sirf ek saiyong matra.​

Advice​

Yeh story sirf entertainment ke lia hain. Incet dengerous hota apna next generation ke lia. To ase samand banane ki kousish bhi mat kijia.​

Or or yeh mera pehla story hain to koi galti ho Jaye to maf karna..

 

[san09]

Update - 1​

Ek white car pahar(hil) pe uth/chad Raha tha (us car main ek lady, uska mom dad and us lady ka chota baccha tha) achanak ek black car us white car ko pichhe se takkar marta hain or wo white car pahar se niche gir jata hain.
Phir us black car se do admi utra or wo log ek admi ko phon kar ke bole
- boss choudhry parivar ka chirag katam ho gaya.

..Kuch monk pahar ke pass se jangal main gujar Raha tha tabhi unhe ek bacche ki rone ka awaz sunai Diya.
Wo log Jake dekhte hain to unhe ek baccha or usse thoda dur ek gari jalta hua dikai Diya.
Wo monk bacche ko utha k apna ashram me le gaye.
Wo ek Shaolin monk ka ashram tha. Waha Shaolin martial art, body or mind ko strong karne ki siksha Diya jata hain.
Wo monk us bacche ko apne leader ko Diya or wo baccha kase Mila bataya to leader bola - yeh bacche ab yehi rahe ga..

Yeh pehla update hai story long hoga. Jase jase story age bade ga story intresting hota Jaye ga.
Or like comment karke motivate karna mat vulna.

 

[Shahrukh]

Nice and fantastic and welcome to Xforum

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update - 1​

Ek white car pahar(hil) pe uth/chad Raha tha (us car main ek lady, uska mom dad and us lady ka chota baccha tha) achanak ek black car us white car ko pichhe se takkar marta hain or wo white car pahar se niche gir jata hain.
Phir us black car se do admi utra or wo log ek admi ko phon kar ke bole
- boss choudhry parivar ka chirag katam ho gaya.

..Kuch monk pahar ke pass se jangal main gujar Raha tha tabhi unhe ek bacche ki rone ka awaz sunai Diya.
Wo log Jake dekhte hain to unhe ek baccha or usse thoda dur ek gari jalta hua dikai Diya.
Wo monk bacche ko utha k apna ashram me le gaye.
Wo ek Shaolin monk ka ashram tha. Waha Shaolin martial art, body or mind ko strong karne ki siksha Diya jata hain.
Wo monk us bacche ko apne leader ko Diya or wo baccha kase Mila bataya to leader bola - yeh bacche ab yehi rahe ga..

Yeh pehla update hai story long hoga. Jase jase story age bade ga story intresting hota Jaye ga.
Or like comment karke motivate karna mat vulna.

Congratulations Bhai new story

 

[san09]

Update 2​

Us leader ka naam hain soang one.
One ne shadi Nehi Kia tha is bajase uska koi aulad bhi Nehi tha.
One ne us bacche ko adopt kar lia or us bacche ka naam rakha soang yen. Us bakth bacche ka age tha 9 month.
One bcche ki parwarish achi tarah se karne laga tha. Or kuch dino mai use yen se alag hi lagab ho gaya tha. Lekin wo kisi ko dikhata Nehi tha.
...3 mahine baad...
One - dasung yen kaha hain?
Dasung ( us monks main se ek jinhone yen ko bachaya tha)- ji master wo mandir ke garden ma panchi o ke sath khel Raha hain. app kaho to le au.
One- Nehi use khelne do.
Dasung- master yen ap ko kuch alag nehi lagta matlab baki baccho se.
One - keu tumhe asa kue laga. ( dasung ke or Santi se dekhte hue).
Dasung (ghabra te hue) - nehi master wese baat nehi. Mera khena ke matlab Yen ka itna bada accident hua or bho ase hi Bach Gaya. Use to Jaya chot bhi Nehi laga tha chota mota kharoch ke alaba.
One - haa wo to hai. Muje usme Jo enargy mehsus hua wo AJ Tak kisi Mai nehi hua. Abhi use is dunia se bacha ke rakh na pare ga nehi to ye duniya use jinda nehi chore ga.
Dasung - rakhenge master. Ab to wo upko papa bhi keh ne laga hain.
One (toda emotional hoye hue)- ha dasung ...is duniya me bap banne se jyada sayad hi koi shukh hoga.


--Isi bakth choudhury parivar mai--
Ek Bangle ke andar chair pe ek middle age admi baitha tha naam suriyabardhan choudhury.

Suriyabardhan choudhury (parivar ka mukhya )
Uske bagal main uska patni kadi thi or uske samne uska teen bete or unke patni kade the.
Suriyabardhan - dhirendra uska kuch pata chala.
Dhirendra ( suriyabardhan ka dusra beta) - nehi papa. Hame yeh bhi Nehi pata wo jinda hai ki maar gaya. Ab uska yad chor Dena me hi bhalai hai.
Tabhi dhirendra ki patni renuka ko rote hue dekh k suriyabardhan bola
Suriyabardhan - is rendi ko chup karau. Saali maar diya hamara chirag ko. Devendra..
Dhirendra - ji papa..
Suriyabardhan - is saali ko le ja or din raat chood. Muje sirf mera waris chahiye. Jo tu hi de sakte Hain baki to sab namard hain..


To be continued...

 

[Shahrukh]

Nice

 

[Dharmendra Kumar Patel]

Superb start

 

[san09]

Update-3

Ek admi apna boss ke pass ja bolta hain -
Malik wo suriyabardhan Bahu Bach Gaya.
Boss - thik koi baat nehi samay Ane do wo bhi mera rendi Bane gaya.


....us ghatna (accident) ke 2 saal baad ....
Shaolin tample me...

One - dasung yen ko le aou ajj se uske training suru hoga.
Dasung - thik hain master
Dasung yen ko laya
Yen - ap ne bulaya papa.
One - ha ajj hi se tumhare training suru hoga. Yaha aou is mandir main 500 siriya hain. Jao ise chado or niche aou.
Yen pura Kia. Wo thoda thak Gaya tha.

Phir use do lakhi di ke upar khada kar k uske kandhe pa ek bada lakdi ka tukra rakh Diya jata.

Phir use khade kar k uska do haat or sar pe bowl rakh k usme Pani bhar diya jata. Agar Pani ek bund bhi gira to usse bohot maar padta tha.

Or ase hi training din din or bhi tough hota ja Raha tha.