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Bhai lagta hai kahani ab apni manjil ki taraf badh raha hai....or ravi to ring ko pehen liya tha to ring kaha geyi.....or or kaal ab kya karegi dekhte hai orupdate-126
[Story - Deewanapan , writen by -Yoginath ]
Abh agge...
Ravi behad preshan tha , apni hi sochu me ghum , voh bat karna chahta tha , par use samaz nai a reha tha , kaha se suru kare , uske gore safad chehre par kai bhav , partaksh roop me umad rehe the , uska dil bechain tha , or yeh bat koi choti bat nai thi , kuch din bad , use sonal ke sath sagai karni thi , or uski sabse badi duvida yeh thi ke sonal ik insan thi , ik aam si insan , or voh khud kya tha , ik shapit darinda , ravi man ke bhetar soch reha tha , kahi voh phir se kahi kaid ho gya , kahi voh phir se mar gya toh sonal , uff uska kya hoga , akeli sonal hi nai , use sabki chinta thi , khair uski sochu ka ant , ik hath ne kiya jo uske kande ke uper akar ruk gya ,
"sona , kya bat hai , hame batao na , hame dard ho reha dil me..." seema ne behad udasi me vichlit sa hote hue bola ,
"han bhyiaa , apki khamoshi hame sata rehi hai , hame bechain kar rehi hai..." komal ne apne bhai ki akhon me akhan dal behad udasi me bola , uski akh ke ik kone se , do katra asnu beh nikale ,
"uff nai janu , tum rona mat , me batata hu , kya bat hai .." ravi ne komal ke geele gaalo ko , apne hath se saf karte hue bola ,
phir ravi ne , voh sab bata diya , ke kaise usne sonal ki jaan bachai , jab voh dard me dubi khudkhusi karne wali thi , phir us M.L.A ke bete Rahul ko marna , phir sonal ka uske pyar me padhna , uska mana kar dena , phir 7 month bad , uska sonal ko dubara bachana , sultana ko marna , akhir me uska zuk jana , apni ik or behan ke agge , uski har behan jiddi thi , unko uske bina dunia me kuch dikhta hi nai tha , unke liye unki poori dunia bus voh tha , phir ravi ne yeh bhi bataya , kaise usne sonal ko doctor banne ka bola , usne bus yu hi bol diya tha , par us pagli ne ese hi apni jindgi ka akhri maksad man liya , phir uska doctor banna , 3 saal bad ravi ka sonal ke pas jana , chachi ji se hui baat , sonal ka jehar khana , ravi ne ik ik pal , ik ik lamha , uff usne sab kuch vistaar se bata diya , vaise bhi voh komal or seema se kuch nai chipata tha , dono hamsafar thi uski ,
jab ravi ne apni kahani , apni jubani suna , dono ki traf dekha , un dono ke chehre par , use koi bhav na dikhe , lekin ravi , unki icha janna chahta tha ,
"hmm , yeh bat thi..." ravi ne phir se udas hote hue , apni pith bed ke cabin se tika , samne balkoni se bahar , asman me chamakte sitaro ko dekhte hue bola ,
"ravii , me kya kahu , uff , mere man me es wakht hazaro batian chal rehi hain..." seema ne apne behte asnu saf karte hue behad dard me bola ,
"bhyiaa , sonal dedi insan hai , apne pehle hi , rimi , shurti or anu ko apne sath rakha hua hai , or , or , app sonal dedi se shadi karne ja rehe ho , bhyia yeh nai ho sakta..." komal behad rote hue , apne bhai ke kande par saar rakh let te hue boli ,
"ufff komal , voh jiddi hai , voh mar jayegi , mane use azma liya hai , us pagli ne jehar kha liya tha , voh mere pyar me pagal ho chuki hai..." ravi ne behad dard bhare shabado me bola ,
"par sona , pita ji , unka kya , voh apko yeh kabhi nai karne dege , app chah kar bhi , apni kisi bhi behan se shadi nai kar sakte , app jante ho unko..."
"han , janta hu , apne bedard baap ko , jo jalta hai , mere pyar se , kis kis ko rokega voh , kis kis ko marega , pichli bar ik ruhi thi , par es bar , Rema , Rimi , Shurti , Sonal , yeh sab hain , es bar , tum ho , baby hai , kat hai , anu hai , khushi hai , es bar , es bar , unko zukna hoga , nai toh , nai toh , ham sabko mar kar , ik pap karna hoga , voh aisa nai kar payege..." ravi ne beintha dard me dubte hue chila kar bola , uski akhon me asnu the ,
"shant bhai , apne sahi kaha , bhai app sonal dedi se shadi mat karo , jaise ham sabko pyar de rehe ho , unko bhi de do..." komal ne ik rasta dikha thoda muskra kar bola ,
"par , par , chacha ji , kaise , voh nai manege , apni beti ko bina shadi kiye , mere sath kaise behj denge , tume toh pata hai , unke vichar kitne purane hain..." ravi ne thoda muskra kar bola ,
"huu , sona , komal sahi bol rehi hai , tum sagai kar lo , shadi 1 saal bad kar lena , abh tum devil ho , apna dimag lagao ..." seema ne muskrate hue bola ,
"han dedi , dimag bahut hai enka , apko yad hai , jab pita ji ne enko pari log se nikal diya , yeh koi na koi rasta dund hi lete the , hamse milne ke liye , pita ji thak gye , unhonu apni poori takat laga di , par bhyia toh bhyia the , yeh aa hi jate the , kisi na kisi raste se..." komal un haseen yadion me khote hue behad haste hue boli , sach me , kudrat ka niyab krishma thi voh ,
"abh tumse vada kiya tha janu , or tumare liye me , kuch bhi kar sakta hu..." ravi ne komal ki neli neli dilkash akhon me dubte hue uske naram gulabi hontho ko chum kar bola ,
"yeh sab mere karan hua , kitni buri hu me.." seema bhi us wakht ko yad kar behad nam akhon se boli ,
"shhh , seema , tumari nai meri galti thi , mane kyu , kyu tumari akhon me , apne liye pyar na dekha , ufff kitna khudgaraz tha me , bus ruhi ke bina kisi ko dekha tak nai , bhul jao seema , abh tume pyar deker , us galti ko sudharna chahta hu..." ravi ne seema ko bahu me bhar uske gulabi hontho ko chumte hue bola , toh seema muskrane lagi , uski lal lal akhon me ik gehrayi thi ,
tino abhi batian hi kar rehe the , tabhi komal ko kuch yad aya , par es se uski chinta behad badh gai ,
"kya hua janu.." ravi ne komal ke chehre par chinta ke bhav dekhte hue bola ,
"bhyiaaa , hamara shap kaha gya , matlab , app hame chu nai sakte , apko bijli ka jatke lagte the , par abh , abh aisa kuch nai ho reha , me apki bahu me hu , apko chum rehi hu , par kuch nai ho reha ..." komal ne ika ik sab yad karte hue behad nam akhon se bola ,
"are han , muze nai pata , es bare me..." ravi ne thoda khamoshi se bola ,
"sona , ring kaha hai..." seema ne komal ki traf dekh , behad chinta me bola ,
"ring , muze yad nai , mane jab ring ko us nele pathar par rakha , uske bad se ring ka muze kuch nai pata , khushiii..." ravi bhi yeh bat yad kar , behad chinta me khushi ko yad kar bola ,
or tabhi khushi vaha a gai , uske hath me ik bada sa miti se bana ik surahidar ghada tha , jiski madira , voh apne hontho se lagaye , ghut ghut kar pete ja rehi thi , khushi ne dono hatho se use uper utha rakha tha , ravi , komal or seema use akhan fade dekh rehe the , phir un tino ne apna matha peet liya ,
"bhyiaa , khushu toh nashe me hogi..." komal ne khushi ki traf dekhte hue bola , jo unke samne khadi , apna ghada khatam kar rehi thi ,
"sona , subah bat kar lete ..." seema bhi muskrate hue boli ,
"hasshh , meri kismat hi kharab hai , kyu bula liya mane , abh , abh , yeh mera jeena haram kar degi..." ravi apna matha peet kar bola , toh komal or seema hasne lagi ,
"umm , ahhhh , maza a gya , mazedar , umm , ik or pee leti hu..." khushi us surahidar ghade se poori mandira , apne pet me dal , apne nasheli akhan matkate hue ravi ko dekh boli ,
"ruko , ruko , tamass , meri bat suno , tum bahut achi ho , ehder ayo , betho , han , abh no madira , ufff , meri maa , beth jaa , bar bar uth kyu jati ho..." ravi ne khushi ka hath pakad use bed par bitha te hue bola , par khushi nashe me tun bar bar uth kar khadi ho jati , akhri ravi ne use piche se bahu me bhar , uski kamar par apni bahu ko jakad liya , abh khushi , ravi ki god me bethi hui , thi , ravi ne uske pet ke bechu beech apne dono hatho ki unglyion ko fasa , use jakad sa rakha tha ,
"ahhh chod muze , ahh chod , bevkuff chodd..." khushi nashe me tun ravi ki god me bethi thoda kasmasate hue boli ,
"khushu shant , hame bat karni apse.." seema ne khushi ke gore mulam gaal ko pyar se sehla kar bola ,
"dedu thik hai , par esko bolo , pehle muze chode , chod muze..." khushi phir se uchal kud machate hue boli , akhir ravi ne use apni pakad se azad kar diya , khushi tezi se uth kar , un tino ki traf chehra kar beth gai ,
"hasshh , bhyiaa , kar lo bat..." komal ik lambi sans bhar haste hue boli ,
"han , sona karo bat.." seema bhi komal ki traf dekh haste hue boli ,
"bat , bat , kya bat , jaldi bolo , ahhhhhuu , muze sona hai phir..." khushi ik lambi angdai lete hue , apne baal khuja kar boli ,
"khushu , bat yeh hai , ring kaha hai..."
"konsi ring , acha , voh manhos ring , tume pata hoga , tumne hi uthaya tha usko..." khushi ne un palu ko yad karte hue bola ,
"mane , par kab..." ravi thoda chinta me bola , uske dono hatho me ring nai thi ,
"zuthe , makar , farebi , tumne voh ring us nele pathar par rakhi , ring ne us pathar ki sari urza apne ander sokh li , phir tumne us ring ko utha liya , or muze kaha , me voh bejan nela pathar le jau , abh yad aya..." khushi thoda gusse me boli ,
"naiii..." ravi phir se sochte hue bola ,
"ahhhhuu , dedu , esi ne ring uthyai thi , or ring etni gusse me thi , voh esko bijli ke tez tez jatke mar rehi thi , or phir , phir , yeh bevkuf us pahad se niche gir gya , haa haa haa , thik hai , abh chalti hu me...." khushi poori bat bata , akhir me ajeeb sa haste hue , bed se uth te hue boli ,
"naii , ruko , beth jaoo , meri pyari khushu , ahhh , mela bacha , mela golu molu..." ravi ne agge badh , khushi ko apne seene se laga , uske baalo ko sehlate hue bola , komal or seema yeh dekh hasne lagi ,
"ahhhh , door hattt , kya kam hai..." khushi , ravi ko dhaka deker piche karte hue , apne naram gulabi hontho par jebh phira unko geela karte hue boli ,
"khushu , toh ring kaha gai..." ravi phir se khushi ko dekhte hue bola ,
"ahhh , ring , ring , es ring ne mera jeena haram kar diya hai , dekho , jitna muze pata tha , mane bata diya , abh tum jano ya tumari voh ring , haa haa haa , abh me chalti hu..." khushi pehle gusse me , phir ajeeb sa haste hue , phir se jane ka boli ,
"khushu , ring ko dundna hoga , varna , ohh dekho , pita ji ne shap diya tha , devil roop me , me komal ko chu nai sakta , muze bijli ke jatke lagte the , par abh aisa kuch nai hota , yeh dekho..." ravi ne yeh bolte hue komal ko apni bahu me bharte hue bola ,
"ahh bakwas , etna toh tum pehle bhi karte the ..." khushi ne apni shakti se ik bada sa madira ka piyala apne hatho me liya , or madira ka chote chote sip lete hue , dono ki traf dekhte hue boli ,
"acha , yeh bhi hai , par yeh dekho..." ravi ne etna bol , apne honth , komal ke naram hontho par rakh diye , ufff komal ne skoon se akhan band kar li , ravi dhere dhere komal ke naram hontho ko behad shidat se mehsus karta hua chusne laga , uff komal ke naram lal honth uske hontho me piste chale ja rehe the , jaise koi naram royie ho ,
dhere dhere dono kho gye , dono ki akhan band ho gai , komal apne bhai ke baalo ko sehlati , uska poora sath dene lagi , ravi abh thoda kas kas kar komal ke hontho ko chusne laga , voh kabhi uper ka honth chusta toh kabhi niche ka , ravi or komal madhosh hue , ik dusre ke hontho ko chuste gye , phir ravi ne apni jebh komal ke naram hontho par phira di , komal ne thoda sa apna hontho ko khola toh ravi ki jebh uske moh me ghus gai ,
"ahhhh..." komal sisak padhi , uska bhai abh uske hontho ko kas kas kar chusta hua , uski jebh se apni jebh lada reha tha , akhir 5 mint bad dono alag hue , tez tez sanse bhar , ik dusre ko dekhne lage , komal ne sharma kar apni nazarian zuka li ,
"dekha khushii , khushiii..." ravi ne komal ke hontho ko chumna chod , jaise hi ghum kar , khushi ki traf dekha , par , par khushi vaha nai thi , voh ja chuki thi , ravi ko bevkuf bana or seema bhi , komal yeh dekh hasne lagi , phir voh apne bhai par japat padhi , ravi piche bed par gir gya or komal uske uper let , uski akhon me akhan dal , apne chusai se lal hue hontho ko jebh phira , geela karte hue , muskrane lagi , ravi samaz gya , voh kya chahti hai , ravi ik dam se palat gya , abh komal niche thi or voh komal ke uper , dono ik dusre ki akhon me khoye hue the , phir dono ke honth mil gye ...
Next day , subah ke 8 baje...
"ravi , ravi , utho , ahhhh , uthoo , hey bhagwan , eski adat , ahhh ..." seema jo kafi der se ravi ko jagane ki kossih kar rehi thi , akhir gusse me apne pair patak te hue boli ,
"maaa appp..."
abhi seema etna hi boli thi , ravi or komal ik dam se uth bethe , seema apni kamar par hath rakhe , dono ko gusse se dekhne lagi ,
"ahhhhhh auuuu , seema subah ho gaii..." ravi ne ik lambi angdai lete hue bola ,
"naii , abhi toh rat ke 2 baje hain , utho dono , me chaye lati hu , or komal tere honth etne suz kaise gye..." seema ne pehle ravi ko or phir komal ke suze hontho ko dekhte hue bola , toh komal sharmane lagi ,
ravi uth kar washroom me chala gya , seema muskrate hue komal ke pas beth gai , komal abhi bhi sharma rehi thi ,
"hmm , lagta hai rat ko sab ho gya..." seema ne komal ke haseen chehre ko niharte hue bola ,
"nai dedu , ham toh 2 ghante honth hi chumte rehe ik dusre ke..." komal sharmate hue boli ,
"kyaa , par , achaa , lekin abh toh ravi tume chu sakta hai , abh tu apni ass marva le , kyu tarsa rehi hai bechare ko..." seema , komal ka hath apne hath me lete hue boli ,
"kya dedu , app abhi tak voh bat nai bhuli , uff muze laga , app bhul gai hongi.." komal muskrate hue seema ki akhon me zakte hue boli ,
"acha jii , me nai bhulne wali , jab tak teri es haseen ass ki aisi ki taisi na karva du , me nai bhulne wali..." seema ne komal ko ankh marte hue bola , toh dono hasne lagi ,
"ouucchhh..." komal haste haste sisak uthi , yeh mitha mitha dard uske nichle honth me hua tha ,
"uff , lagta hai , tere naram hontho ki achi khatir dari hui hai..." seema haste hue boli ,
" deduuu , jao chaye lao mere liye..." komal behad sharma kar boli , toh seema uth kar bahar chali gai , tab tak ravi bhi washroom se bahar a gya ,
"kaisi hai meri janu..." ravi ne komal ke sath beth te hue bola ,
"thik hu janu , ouchh.." komal muskrate hue boli , toh use phir se apne honth me dard sa hua ,
"ohh ho , meri janu ke naram honth suz gye hain , lao me thik kar deta hu..." ravi ne muskrate hue bola toh komal ne apni neli neli akhan zuka li ,
ravi ne komal ke pas hoker , uske hontho ko phir se chum liya , behad dheme se , uff komal ko ik skoon sa mil gya , ravi dhere dhere komal ke hontho ko chumne laga , voh chum leta phir chod deta , phir chum leta , aisa 5 mint tak chalta reha ,
phir dono alag ho gye , uff ravi ne komal ke honth dekhe , naram lal honth , thode thode suze hue , ahhh ras se bhare gulabi hontho par ayi , yeh suzan etni dilkash , katilana lag rehi thi , uff komal ka haseen chehra , etna khubsurat , uski zuki zuki blue (neli) akhan , uske bhege bhege honth , etna khubsurat koi kaise ho sakta tha , bhagwan ne aisi rachna kaise kar di , kaise , komal , ufff etni khubsurat ahhhh , ravi apni komal ko dekhta kho sa gya ,
komal ne nazarian utha , apne bhai ko dekha , ufff komal ki neli neli akhan , voh es dunia me kisi ko bhi pagal kar deti , uski akhon me etni gehrayi thi , ke koi unme dekh kar hi duub jata , komal apne bhai ki akhon me dekhte hue , halka sa muskra di , ufff ravi ke dil ka akhri kona tak tripat ho gya , komal samaz gai , uska devil uske pyar me madhosh ho chuka hai , jab jab devil Ruhi (komal) ke pyar me es kadar madhosh hua , voh sab bhul gya , use bus har traf Ruhi hi dikhai di , voh ruhi ko dekhta rehta , uske chehre ko , uski akhon ko , hazaro saal gujar jate , devil ke saar se apni behan ruhi ke pyar ka nasha utarne me , tab tak use dunia me koi or na dikhai deta ,
"bhyiaaa , abh , abh kho mat jana mere ander , me apko , me apko , mehsus kar rehi hu , apne man me , app , app , mere ander sama chuke ho , ahhh , bhyiaa yeh ehsas bahut skoon de reha , mera dil apke pyar se bhar chuka hai , bhyiaa , dil karta hai , me apki akhon me dekhti rahuu , app , app , mere ander , mer man ki antim gehrayi tak chale gye ho , bhyiaa muze nasha ho reha hai , apke pyar ka , ahhh , bhyiaa , app mat jao etni gehrayi me , me akeli nai hu , apka jeevan kitno ke sath juda hai , voh sab tut jayegi apke bina , bhyiaaa lott ayoo , app sabko bhul jauge , voh sab ki sab , apki yad me mar jayegiii , apke jeevan me kai ladkyian or hain , bhyiaaa , matt dekhoo , bhiyaa appp khoo rehe ho , mere pyar me dub jauge app , mere pyar ka ant nai milega apko , bhyiaa hazao saal lag jayege , bhyiaaaaa mattt karoo aisaaa , apki betiiii mar jayegiiiiiii..." komal apni neli neli akhon me beintha asnu bharte hue apne man me boli , voh apne bhai ka etna pyar sehan nai kar pa rehi thi , voh ro rehi thi , uska man tripat ho gya tha , apne bhai ka etna pyar dekh ,
ikaa ik ravi ke seene me tez jalan hui , ravi hosh me a gya , jaise kisi ne use rok diya tha , komal ke pyar me dub jane se ,
"komall , shhhh , rona band karoo , jaan , komall , plsss , tume , tume , meri kasam , komal..." ravi beintha dard me duba , apni behan komal ke asnu bhege chehre ko , uske lal lal nram hontho ko , beintha chumta hua bola , komal khamosh ho gai , ravi uske hontho ko kas kas kar chusne laga , ahh komal ke hontho par ik muskan a gai , uska bhai sach me pagal tha , uske pyar me ,
"rukoo dono..."
dono ik dam se alag ho gye , jab seema ne dono ko roka , uske hath me chaye ki trey thi , usne trey bed ke cabin par rakh di , or ravi ka kan khich kar boli ,
"hmm , abh honth mil hi gye hain , toh kha jauge , heeiin , abh chup chap chaye piyo , or komal ke hontho ko chuna bhi mat , bechari komal , uske lal lal hontho ko poora suza diya hai ..." seema ne ravi ka kan pakade komal ki traf dekhte hue muskra kar bola toh komal sharmate hue muskrane lagi ,
"ouchhhh , nai chusta , ahhh , lekin..." ravi ne behad bholepan se bola toh seema ne uska kan chod diya , seema ne use chaye di ,
"lekin kya..."
"uff komal ke honth bahut mithe hain , ik dam shehad ki trah , ahhhh , man hi nai bharta , ik bar moh me bhar lu , bus , ahhh dil karta hai , bus chusta jau , chusta jau.." ravi akhan band kar komal ke naram hontho ko mehsus karte hue bolta gya , jab usne akhan kholi , "seemaaaa..." ravi chila utha , kyu ki , na vaha komal thi or na vaha seema ,
"tum..." ravi thoda chonk kar bola ,
"huuu , bevkuf..." yeh khushi thi jo kab se balkoni ki ik traf shuup kar khadi , tino ki batian sun rehi thi , par seema or komal ke jate hi voh ander a gai thi ,
"teri toh..." ravi ne tezi se bed se uth khushi ko pakadna chaha , par khushi vaha se gyab ho gai ,
"tamasss..." ravi gusse me pair patak washroom me chala gya , ravi ne naha kar black kapde pehan liye , usne ache se apne baalo ko sawara , thoda sent-vent laga , akhon par black chashma lagaye , voh ghar ke hall me pahunch gya ,
ravi ne dekha , seema , komal , rimi , shurti , rema , kat , baby , matlab sab ki sab vaha bethi hui break fast karte hue batian kar rehi thi , pehle un sab ne ravi ko dekha , par phir batian karne lagi ,
"ahuuu ahuuuu (khaste hue) , kaisa lag reha hu me..." ravi akhon se chasma utar behad style me bola ,
"bakwasss..." khushi ghar ke ander ate hue boli ,
"khushiii , ruk abh tu..." ravi ne apna chasma phir se pehante hue bola , sab hasne lagi ravi ko yu karta dekh , voh khushi ko pakadne bhaga , khushi samne bane ik room me ghus gai , ravi bhi tezi se us room me ghusa or khushi ko bahu me bhare bed par gir gya , uska chashma uski akhon se utar , bed par hi kahi gir gya ,
"ahhh , kamine chod muze , ahhh..." khushi bed par , ravi ke niche leti , kasmasate hue boli ,
"meri jungli billi (cat) , abh kaha jayegi ..." ravi ne khushi ke dono hatho ko kalai se pakade bed par dabate hue bola ,
"ahhh , chod muze , ahhh , door hat , ahhh..." khushi ne ravi ke niche lete , kasmasate hue bola ,
"shhh , i loveeee youuuu , pari log me tume pyar na de paya , uske liye muze maf kar dena , par es janam me , jab bhi tumara dil kare , meri jaan bhi mang lena , or khushu me tume , dunia ki har khushi dunga , jeevan bhar tume pyar karuga , muzse kabhi door mat jana.." ravi ne behad nam akhon se bola , toh khushi khamosh ho gai , voh khamoshi se bina palak zapkaye , ravi ki akhon me dekhne lagi ,
"khushu , jab se me devil bana hu , tum tamas bani ho , tab se tume har pal , har lamha , apne kareeb dekhna chahta hu , janti ho kyu , kyu ki jaan , tumare sath hell me sadyion tak sadta reha , tum mere pas rehi , har pal , har lamha , tum , tum khushi nai ho , tum , tum , meri jiddi , ladaku tamas ho , jo madira me dubi , muze satati rehti thi , jisne madira pee pee kar , mera jeena haram kar diya tha , par khushu , sach kehta hu , agar , agar , tum hell me , mere pas na hoti , toh shyad me mar jata , khushu..." ravi ne beintha dard me dube rote hue bole , uske behte asnu khushi ke masom , dudh se safad chehre par gir rehe the , voh rone lagi , voh rote hue etni khubsurat lag rehi thi , me byan nai kar sakta ,
"khushu , muze yu hi preshan karte rehna , muze , muze , yu hi satate rehna , me tume chahta hu , me bata nai sakta , me tume kitna chahta hu , khushu meri jaan , meri tamasss..." ravi ne khushi ke hontho ko chumte hue beintha rote hue bola , uske shabado me ik dard tha , phir voh alag ho gya , voh khushi ke sath let , uper room ki chat ko dekhne laga , uski akhon se abhi bhi asnu beh rehe the ,
khushi uske sath leti , rote ja rehi thi , rote ja rehi thi , usne apni akhan band kar li , lekin asnu kabhi rukte hain , asnu apna rasta dund lete hain , yahi hua , khushi ne akhan band kar li , par asnu uski akhon ko cheer , bus behte gye , behte gye , phir ika ik usne apni akhon khol li ,
"raviii , mere bevkuf devil , me , me , tumari hu , sirf tumari , me tumare liye hell toh kya , kahi bhi ja sakti hu , me sadyion tak hell ki tapti agg me jal sakti hu , me , me , sadyion tak tumara intzar kar sakti hu , chahe tum , chahe tum , pari log me mera pyar na samaz paye , par , par , voh mera pyar hi tha , jo tum mere bina ik pal nai reh pate the , voh mera pyar hi tha jo tum mere liye , un andhere junglo me chale gye , raviii , muze pyar do , muze pyar do , me tadap rehi hu , pls raviii , muzse pyar karo , me , me , bus tumara do pal ka pyar chahti hu , phir , phir chahe me mar hi kyu na jau , bevkuff , mera pyara bevkuf devil..." khushi , ravi ki bahu me lipat , beintha dard me dubte hue , dard ki akhri seemayion ko tod kar , beintha rote hue boli , uske ik ik shabad me , lakho jakhmo ka dard tha , lakho mout ka dard tha ,
"shhhh , meri tamas , meri tamasss..." ravi , ne khushi ko apni bahu me kas kar bharte hue rote hue bola ,
ravi ne khushi ki traf karvat badal , apne honth , khushi ke geele gulabi naram hontho par rakh diye , ravi pyar se rote hue khushi ke hontho ko chusne laga , dono ro rehe the , lekin yeh pyar ke asnu the , khushi rote hue kudrat ki banayi ik adbhut rachna partit ho rehi thi , voh beintha masom thi ,
ravi pehle dhere dhere khushi ke hontho ko chusta reha , par phir voh khushi ko sidha leta , uske chehre par zuk , kas kas kar uske hontho ko chusne laga , khushi ke naram lal honth piste chale gye ravi ke hontho me , ravi uske lal hontho se poora pyar nichod reha tha , ravi ne madhosh hote hue , khushi ke nichle honth ko danto se halka halka kat kas kas kar chusne suru kar diya , khushi ke badan me ik sirhaan si doad gai , use mitha mitha dard hone laga ,
"ummm ummm shh.." ravi sisakte hue khushi ke hontho se apne honth ragadte hue , unko moh me bhar bhar kar chusne laga , "surrpppp surrrppppp ummm.." ravi ne honth chuste chuste apni jebh khushi ke hontho par ghumani suru kar di , khushi ne madhoshi me hontho ko chusvate hue apna moh khol diya , bus usi pal ravi ki jebh khushi ke moh ka kona kona talashne lagi , khushi machal uthi , jab uski jebh ravi ki jebh se ladne lagi , tabhi ravi ne apna ik hath khushi ke mote kase hue mammo (boobs) par rakh diya , uff jaise hi ravi ne apne hath ki unglyion ko khushi ke gol gubare jaise mote mammo par dabaya , ahhh etna naram ke ravi ke hath ki unglyian dhasti chali gai ander , khushi maze me pagal ho gai , usne or bhi kas kar ravi ke hontho chusna suru kar diya , khushi ne apni ras se bhari laplapati jebh ravi ke moh me dal di , ufff ravi toh pagal ho utha ,
"ammm surrppp surrpppp amm.." ravi uski jebh ko apne hontho me daba , kas kas kar chusne laga , jaise uski jebh ka sara ras nichod dega , danto me daba halka halka katne laga , khushi vasna me machalne lagi , ravi ne khushi ki jebh ko poora moh me bhar liya or aise khich khich kar chusne laga , jaise koi bacha apni maa ka dudh chus reha ho , jaise ko bachda cow ka dudh chus reha ho , uff kya ehsas tha ,
"ahuuu ahuuuu..." tabhi kisi ke khasne ki awaz ayi , toh dono alag ho gye , ravi ne tez sanse bharte hue room ke darvaje ki traf dekha , uff sab ki sab khadi ro rehi thi , komal , seema , rema , rimi , shurti , baby , kat , lara , eliza , sab roye ja rehi thi , pata nai kabse , voh sab etni khamoshi se ro rehi thi ke kisi ke sisakne ki awaz bhi nai a rehi thi , phir khushi bhi uth kar beth gai , uske lal lal hontho par thodi suzan a gai thi , uske naram rasbhare hontho me jalan ho rehi thi , use mitha mitha dard ho reha tha , kyu , kyu ki , devil ne uske hontho ko chusa tha , chusa hi nai tha , poora ras nichod diya tha ,
ravi uth kar khada hua toh sab uske pas a gai , phir ik ik karke , ravi ke gale lag , apne or uske man ko shant karne lagi , khushi abhi bhi bed par bethi muskra rehi thi , voh bus mehsus kar rehi thi , apne hontho ke dard ko , lekin use ik alag hi skoon mil reha tha , voh ik demon thi , voh khud ko mardo se behtar manti thi , lekin ajj , ajj , ravi ne use ik ladki hone ka ehsas karvaya tha , ravi ne etna kas kar uske hontho ko chusa tha , voh bar bar un palo ko yad kar rehi thi , use sharam a rehi thi , uski mulam kuwari chut ras chodti geeli ho gai thi , voh kuch der bad uthi or sharmate , muskrate hue , room se bahar chali gai , apne room me jaker , usne darvaja ander se band kar liya , khushi bed par let , apne suze hue hontho ko apni ungli se chu kar dekhne lagi ,
"ouchhh ufff.." jaise hi usne nichle honth ko ungli se dabaya , voh sisak uthi , voh beintha sharmane lagi , use abh bhi , ravi ke honth apne hontho par mehsus ho rehe the , ajj TAMAS pehli bar khud ko , ik aam si ladki samaz rehi thi , voh mand mand muskrate hue , beintha masom or katilana lag rehi thi , voh ras se bhari lapalap sharab ki bottle lag rehi thi , ajj demon tamas ka garoor tuta tha , ajj use madira ki jarurat nai thi , ajj use pyar ka nasha tha...
vahi dusri traf..
"bhyiaa , app kitne ache ho..." rema ne rote hue apne bhai ka chehra chumte hue bola ,
"bus janu , acha , me shehar ja reha hu , baby , kat , tum dono 2 baje Anu ke office pahunch jana , or komal app or rema mere sath chalo , or rimi , shurti , me ajj sham ko tum dono ko ghumane leker jauga..." ravi ne ajj ka poora plan sabko sunate hue bola ,
"hasshh , dekho , me akela hu , me dhere dhere tum sabko wakht dunga , muzse naraz mat hona koi bhi , lara , eliza tum dono bhi kat or baby ke sath a jana , acha , me chalta hu..." ravi ne sabki traf dekh behad shanti se bola ,
"ufff , ravi , ham sab janti hain , tum ham sabko kitna chahte ho , or app es bat ki bilkul chinta mat karna , koi apse naraz nai hoga , sabka huk hai app par , jise jo chahyie hoga , voh mang legi apse , app shant raho , dukhi mat ho.." seema ne sabki traf dekh , behad nam akhon se bola ,
"Lord seema , sahi bol rehi hai ..." sabhi ik sath bol padhi , par rema ne lord mumma bola tha , or sab hasne lagi , ravi bhi ,
" kya tum sab bhi , or ik bat , app khana kha kar jao , plss.."seema ne ravi ke gaal ko chum kar bola , toh ravi ne muskra kar , han me saar hila diya ,
phir sabne khana khaya , voh haste , khil-khilate , batian karte , ik dusre se hassi mazak karte , beintha khushi me khana kha rehe the , kyu ki yeh ik pariwar tha , ravi ka khud ka pariwar , jise ik karne me , sabko pane me , usne beintha dard sahe , kali dard bhari ratian gujari , lekin ajj 12 saal bad , es pal , usne apni alag dunia bana li thi , yeh dunia , samaaz se door thi , uske banaye nizmo or kanuno se door thi , yeh dunia ravi ne banai thi , uski apni dunia , par es dunia me kisi ki kami thi , voh kami thi , uski badi behan rekha ki , uski akhan nam ho gai , tabhi use fari ki yad a gai , uska khoon , uski apni beti ,
"are meri beti kaha hai..." ravi apni beti ko yad karte hue bola ,
"babu , voh so rehi hai , me lati hu use.." baby muskra kar uthi or room me chali gai , kuch palu bad voh bahar ayi , uske sath fari thi , voh abhi abhi uthi thi ,
"fariii betaa.." ravi ne kursi se uth , ghutno ke bal jamen par beth , apni bahe phaila , dard me dube chila kar bola , use apni behan rekha ki behad yad a rehi thi , voh rone laga ,
"papaa..." fari bhag kar apne papa ke gale lag gai , voh beintha ro rehi thi , voh apne papa ko apni bahu me kasti ja rehi thi ,
"meri bachi , meri betii , mera apna khoon , mera bachaa , papa ko maf kar de beta , tuzse or teri mumma se door raha , maf karde bacha , jab tu choti thi , jab tu chalna sikh rehi thi , me , me , kyu nai tha vaha , kyuu , kyuu , meri betii , me tuze janam lete , apne hatho me kyu na utha paya , kyuu , ahhhhhhhh , rekha dediiii , maff kardooo , maff kardooo , ahhhhhhh , meri betiiii , muze maf karde , me a na sakaa , maf karde beta...." ravi beintha dard me chekhte hue , rote , bhilakhte hue , apni beti ko apni bahu me jakade , apni beti ko behad shidat se mehsus karta hua bola ,
sab ki sab chonk gai , baby or kat , ik dusre ka chehra dekhne lagi , sab ki sab , khana khate khate khana bhul gai , unki akhan khuli ki khuli reh gai , yeh bahut bada jatka tha , fari , ravi ki apni beti thi , uska apna khoon , uski behan rekha ki beti , rekha ki apne paviter pyar ki akhri nishani , yeh aisi bat thi , jisne sabke hosh udda diye the , voh khamoshi se ik dusre ka chehra dekh , akhon me asnu liye , ik baap ko uski beti se milte dekh rehi thi , chahe pehle hi , ravi ne fari ko apna liya tha , par apna khoon toh apna hi hota hai ,
"papaa , app mere papa ho , god ne meri sun li , papaa , mumma bahut roti thi , voh , voh , kehti thi app marr gye hoo , papaaaa , mumma ko laoo naa , papaa..." fari beintha rote hue apne papa ravi ke chehre ko betahasha chumte hue boli , har koi ro reha tha , are koi pathar dil hi hoga , jiski akhon me asnu na aye ,
"betaaa , maff kardee , teri mumma sachh kehti thii , me marr gya thaa , kasshhhh me sach me marrrr jataaaa , ahhhhhh , tu kitna roti rehiiiii , mere liyeee , betiiii , teriii mummaa se kyuuu doorr gyaa , kyuu , kyuuu , betaa , terii mummaa bahut khubsurat thiii , etnii ke me bataa naii saktaaa , betaa , abh me tereee pas rahugaa , tuze pyarr dungaaa , or betaa , god ne teri 1 mumma li , toh dekh kitni mumma tuze de di..." ravi apni beti ke pore chehre ko paglu ki trah chumte hue , beintha rote hue bola , ravi ke dil me jo dard tha , ese me likh nai sakta , bata nai sakta , bol nai sakta , bus mehsus kar sakta , me ro reha hu , yeh likhte likhte , sach me ,
"meri mummaa ko god kyuu le gyee , mane , mane , bus apko manga tha , papaaa , muze mummaa lakerrr doo , plsss papaaa , muzeee mummaa ke pas jaanaa haiii , plsss papaaa , plssss..." fari apni maa rekha ko yad , beintha rone lagi , uska dard me keh nai sakta , app mehsus karo , khud ko fari ke sathan rakh kar ,
"naiii betaa , mumma ko dukh hogaa , voh , voh , royegii , bahut royegiii , tum muze dekho , betaaa , meri akhonnn mee dekhooo , mee hiii terii maa huu abhh , me hii teraa pitaaa , betaaa , tuu muzeee apnii maa samazzz leee , ahhhhhhhh , rekhaaa dediiiiiii , kyaaa karuuu meee , kyaaaa..." ravi ne beintha rote hue , chekhte chilate hue bola , voh dard me pagal ho chuka tha , tabhi uske kande par kisi ne hath rakha , ufff yeh komal thii , voh beintha ro rehi thi , usne niche beth , apne bhaii ko bahu me bhar liya , ravi uske kande par saar rakh rone laga ,
"farriiiii..." baby us sadme se bahar ate hue chekh kar boli , jo use abhi abhi laga tha ,
baby ne bhag kar fari ko apni bahu me bhar liyaaa , voh uske poore chehre ko paglu ki trah chumne lagi , abh baby hi uski maa thi , abh baby hi rekha thi ,
"mummaaa , mummaaaa..." fari maa ka poora pyar baby me mehsus karte or bhi rone lagi , usne baby ke gale lag mehsus kiya jaise voh apni rekha ke gale lagi hai , ufff yeh kya ajeeb khel tha bhagwan ka , kya ajeeb khel tha , bhagwan ne yeh kyu kiyaaa , kyuuu , kyuuuu ,
"meri betiiii , mee , mee , teriii maa huu , tunee , kyuu bolaa , kyuu , ke papaa mummaa ko laoo , kyuuu , mee teriii maa huu , bettiii , me teriii maaa huuu , me marrr jaugiiii teree bainaaa , tuneee kyuu kahaaa , kyuuuu , me marrr jaugiiiiii , ahhhhaaahaa..." baby beintha chekhte rote hue boli , uski mamta es kadar badh gai ke voh farii ke bina ik sans bhi nai le sakti thi ,
"maaa maff kardooo , maaaa , maaaa..." fari thoda piche hoker rote hue boli , or phir baby ka chehra chumne lagii , phir baby ne use bahu me bhar liyaa , tab tak katt bhi unke pas a gai thi , phir baby ne fari ko god me utha liya , kat or baby , fari ko room me le gaii ,
dusri traf ravi , komal ke gale laga hua tha , komal use shant karne ki kossih kar rehi thi , use pata tha , uska bhai sadme me ja reha tha , voh janti thi , uska bhai agar sadme me gya , toh pata naii kitnee dinn baharr na ayee , or abh toh voh devil tha , kahi voh gehri nend na so jayee , sadyian beet jayegiii uske uthne takk , uska bhaii sadyion tak phir se usse door hoga , voh chekh uthi , voh jor jor chekhne lagi , pichli bar jab devil gehri nend soya tha , sadyian beet gai thi , voh sadyion tak jagti rehi , roti rehi , par devil tak uske masom dil ki ahaht pahunch na payii ,
ufff abh kya karegi komal , pichli bar ruhi ki bahu me devil so gya tha , kya ajj komal ki bahu me ravi so jayega , yeh kaisa imteehan tha mohhabat ka , yeh kaisi priksha thi mohhabat ki , ajj komal ko phir se apne paviter pyar ko sabit karna tha , ajj unke pyar ki sabse badi priksha thi , kya ajj komal rok payegi apne bhai ko sone se , kya devil so jayega , or yeh kahani yahi khatam ho jayegii , kyaa hogaa .... or kon kar reha tha yeh sab , kya Ring yeh sab kar rehi thi , Ya ravi ke Pita ...?
dusri traf.....
ik behad andhere bhara sathan , yaha charo traf andhkar tha , as-pas asman ko chute bade bade kale pedh the , vaha etna andhera tha ke kisi bhi pedh ka akhri shoor tak nai dikh reha tha , voh bade bade pedh bhi , us kale andhkar me , bus adhe hi dikh rehe the , voh gol akar me kareeb 5 kilometer tak phaile hue the , jaise voh kisi ki raksha kar rehe ho , or yeh bade bade kale pedh ik "Haweli" ki raksha kar rehe the , ik behad sunsan kali haweli , jiski bahri deeware bhi kale andhkar me dubi hui thi ,
lekin yeh haweli thi kiski , yeh haweli thi kaal ki , kaal jo ravi ke pita the , ik beintha shaktishali vampire , par kya voh bus ik vampire hi tha , ya us se bhi badkar tha , ravi pehle es haweli me a chuka tha , jab voh pehli bar kaal se milne aya tha ,
esi haweli se ravi ko ik naya janam mila tha , uska ik naya jeevan suru hua tha , lekin yeh haweli kitni purani thi , kisne banai thi , etne gehre jungle me , kisi ko , kya jarurat aan padhi , ke use haweli banani padh gai , uff bahut swal the , bahut rahasye the ,
"apka bete ne voh ring pehan li , abh kya hoga , kon utar payega us manhos ring ko , kya app yeh kar sakte ho , kya komal yeh kar sakti hai , kya ravi khud apni icha se ring utar dega , app batao na kuch ..." yeh maya thi , ik rahasmyi ladki , jo tab se thi , jab se kaal tha ,
ik band kamre me betha kaal , maya ki batian ko sun reha tha , ik kala libas , jisme kuch nai dikh reha tha , us libas ke ander , bus kala andhkar dikhta tha , or do chamakti lal akhan...
to be counited... [friends jo log abhi hain voh toh replys karo , jo nai hai , voh a jayege , jab unko ehsas hoga ke me unke pas hu or unse door nai jauga ,
muze ik last hope hai app sab mera sath doge , me daily updates dunga , par agar app replys nai doge toh muze kya pata chalega , me sahi likh reha hu ya nai , apne vichar rakho , koi kami hogi toh me door kar dunga.. shukriya...]
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