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Edit kar diya he..bachcho ka nam priya और prem होना chahiye
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Edit kar diya he..bachcho ka nam priya और prem होना chahiye
Auto correct typing mai ye sab ho gya hai.Kya hairaan hairaan laga rakha hy
Bro baat yehi se start hoti hai varsha ko lagta hai ki vishwas ne woh pyaar ussey chheen liya hai jo kabhi use milta tha.... Is shikwe ne uske mann mein abhi vishwas ke liye ek ghussa bhar diya hai..... Ek aisa ghussa jispar agar dhyan na diya gaya toh woh nafrat mein bhi tabdeel ho jaayega....Ab Haivvaann k banane ki kahani aa rahi hai.
Kaise vishvas Haivaan bana ye dikhaya jaiga.
Fabulous update.
Varsha bhi galat nahi hai. Wo abhi khud bhi bachi hai or koi use dhayan na de kr ab uske chote bhai ko jyada pyar mil raha hai to use dhuk hona lajmi hai.
Lekin baat yahi tak nahi hai.
Agar itna hi hota to vishvas Haivaan nahi banta.
Vishwas aur uske dada daadi aur naani ka gaon walon ke prati vyavhaar kaafi saraahniy raha hai abhi takUpdate 31
Aaj 10 saal pure ho Gaye the..
Idar ganv me aaj viswas 10 saal ka ho gaya tha Aur sabka ladla ban gaya tha..
Sirf kevad hi us KO pyar nahi karta tha.. Aesa bhi nahi tha ki vo viswas ko nafrat karta he.. Lekin uski biwi Maya aapne bete pawan se jyada viswas ka khyal rakhti thi..
Ab viswas ke sarir ka bhi vikas hone laga tha ..
Lekin dimagi taur se thoda kamzor tha..
Chote bache ki tarah zaban bhi thodi totli thi..
Fir bhi sabko sanman deta tha.. Dimag se kamzor hone ke bavjud vo sab smjta bhi tha...
Aur aapne Dada aur nani(rajeshwari ji)ko dekhte huye bada hua tha...
To us me har ek sanman ki najar dekhta tha..
Aur sabki madad karne me bhi aage rahta tha..
Pura Gorakhpur ganv viswas KO veer Singh ka dusra rup kahte the..
Qki chota hone ke bavjud vo har ek ki madad karta tha..
Ek baar to ek bhikhari darvaze pe aaya..
To viswas ne us bhikhari ka hath pakadkar haweli aandar lejakar dinning table pe bithakar aapne hatho se khilaya..
Aur sab ye dekh kar khush the.. Sabse jyada dadaji Aur dadiji khush the..
Fir aapne dadaji se..
Viswas.. Dadadi humale ganv me lod abhi bhi bhute rahte he( dadaji humare ganv me log abhi bhi bhuke rahte he???)
Dadaji...beta ye bhot bada ganv he..ab har jagah ka pata kese hoga..
Viswas...hum in sabdo thila takte he??( hum in sabko khila skate he)
Dadaji...ha q nahi khila sakte jarur khila sakte he..
Viswas...to dadadi me tab thaunga dab pule danv ne thana tha liya hoda!!(to dadaji me tab khunga jab pure ganv ne khana kha liya hoga..)
Dadaji...lekin beta ganv bhot bada he.. Kese pata chalega.. Kisne khaya kisne nahi??
Viswas...dete mele danamdin pal hota he..(jese mere janamdin par hota he)
Dadiji...me smj gayi mera bacha kya kahna chahta he..
Aaj hi sare ganv me elan karva dijiye aap ki jis ghar me jis din khana n bane unke liye haweli pe banega...
Ek tarah se hum bhandara suru karva dengue..
Dusre din hi ganv me bhandara suru karva diya dadaji ne ..
Vaha Jo bhi bhukhe log aate unko bharpet khilya jata..
Isme Naniji ne bhi sath diya Aur dhire dhire ganv ke bhot se logo ne sath diya...
Aur viswas khud jakar pahle unko khilata fir khud khata tha...
To aesa tha viswas..
Uthar city me bhi ab sab khush the..
Aur sabse jyada khush Varsha thi.. Qki ab usko aapne maa-baap ka pyar Milne laga tha..
Aur vo aapne chote Bhai-bahan ke sath khush thi.
Aur sima aur baldev to aapne bete viswas KO bhul hi Gaye the..
Ki unka ek Aur beta bhi he..
Prem Aur priya ko to pata bhi nahi tha ki koi unka bada Bhai bhi he..
Sirf Varsha ko hi yaad tha ki uska ek Bhai bhi he..lekin vo kabhi manti nahi thi. Us KO to sirf viswas ek dusman hi lagta tha... Jisne usse uske Dada Aur dadi ka pyar sin liya tha...
Aaj Prem Aur priya 9 saal ke ho Gaye the Aur Varsha 15 saal ki ho gayi thi..
Ye log kabhi ganv nahi Gaye the itne salo me..
Ha pura parivar yaha aake sabse Milne aate rahte the sivay viswas ke..
Aaj ye parivar ganv ja raha tha..
Qki is baar dadaji viswas ka janamdin mana rahe the..
Vese to har saal manate the.. Lekin ye log kabhi nahi jate the..baldev harbar alag alag bahane banakar taal deta tha..
Aesa nahi tha ki vo aapne maa-baap se milna nahi chahte the.. Lekin in kus salo me baldev ko nafrat ho gayi thi viswas se..
Ab ye q to aayiye jante he..
Qki dadaji sari jaydad aapne pote viswas ke naam kardi thi..
Aur jab is baat ka pata chala to baldev ka is baat pe zagda ho gaya dadaji se..
Papa.....bapuji mene Jo suna vo sach he...
Dadaji...aesa kya suna tumne???
Papa....yahi ki aapne sari jaydat viswas ke naam kardi..
Dadaji...ha.. Aur vese bhi kya farak padta he. Tere baad sab uska hi to he..
Papa....lekin vo kese sab sambhal payega??
Dadaji...mtlb
Papa...vo pagal Jo he..
Dadiji..ye tum kya bol rahe ho baldev..vo tumhara beta he..
Papa...maa mera kahne ka mtlb he dimag se kamjor he... To vo kese ye sab sambhal payega...
Dadaji...chal tuje dikhta hu... Vo pagal he ki nahi??
Aur dadaji us KO jaha bhandara tha vaha le jate he jaha sab kha rahe the..
Aur ek choti bachi Jo hatho se apang thi usko aapne hatho se khila raha tha..
Dadaji...pata he ye bhandara viswas ne suru karvaya he.Aur tu kahta he pagal he.. Kya pagal aesa soch sakte he.. Aaj viswas ke is kaam me pura ganv iske sath he..koi kabhi kisi pagal ka sath deta he.. Aur tu bolta he pagal he.. Muje to Garv he ki mera pota aesa he.. Aaj Sara ganv mujse jyada mere pote ka sanman karte he..Aur is baat ki sabse jyada khushi muje hoti he..
Ye sab dekhkar baldev KO gussa aa jata he..Aur vo aesa bol gaya Jo us KO nahi bolna chahiye tha..
Baldev..(gusse me) ye kya kar diya is pagal ne.. Isse to ek din humare paas kus nahi bachega pitaji.. Aur mene sahi kaha tha ye pagal hi he..Aur aapne is pagal ka sath diya..
Kya pagal ho Gaye ho aap.. Isse to puri jaydad chali jayegi.. Kus nahi bachega humare pass...is pagal ke sath rahke aap bhi pagal ho Gaye he...
Aur tabhi ek thappad baldev ke gaal par padta he..
Lekin ye thappad dadaji ne nahi balki dadiji ne Mara tha..
Dadiji...kya bola tune Zara fir se bol..tuje ye bhi pata he tu kisse bol raha he Aur kya bol raha he???
Papa...to kya sari jaydat in bhukhe-nange loko me baat de..
Dadiji...tum bhul rahe ho ki ye humare aapne log he... Ye humara ganv he... Smje.
Papa vaha se gussa hoke chale Gaye..
Aur in sab ka zimmedar vo viswas ko smjne laga...
Viswas se gusse Aur nafrat ki vajah se vo us ke baad kabhi ganv nahi aaya..
Lekin is baar dadaji ne aurdar diya tha..
So majburan pura parivar ganv ke liye nikal chuke the..
Car me..
Baldev...priya Aur Prem vaha aap viswas se dur rahenge...
Priya...q papa vo humare bhayiya he n???
(Priya ko isliye pata tha ki dadaji jab bhi aate to hamesha viswas ke bare me batate the..)
Baldev...ha vo tumhara Bhai he...lekin vo pagal he...pagal kus bhi kar sakte he..
Prem...kya vo pagal he???
Baldev...ha beta vo pura pagal he.. Kahi aapko chot pahuchandi to...isliye aap usse dur rahna..
Prem...me to bhot dur rahunga...
Aur idhar ganv me viswas bhot khush tha ki aaj vo aapne mummy-papa Aur Bhai-bahno se milega..
Aur sabko ye kahta fir raha tha..
Aakhir sab pahunch Gaye...
Viswas daudta hua Jake pahle aapne papa Aur maa ke pair suye.
(Is tarah viswas daudkar aate huye dekh Prem aapne papa ke pise sup gaya)
Fir vo gale lagne ki kosis me jese hi aage aaya turant usko side karke baldev Aur sima aandar chale Gaye...
Sabke is tarah chale Jane se viswas ko bhot bura laga ..
Fir bhi vo unke pise2 Jane lagta he...
Pura parivaar ekdusre se milte he..
Sabko aapne aapne room me fresh hone ko kahte he..
Lekin priya baar2 pise mudkar viswas ko hi dekh rahi thi...
Thodi der baad priya vapas aati he Aur vo viswas KO hi dekh rahi thi..
To viswas usko isare se aapne pass bulata he..
To vo jese hi aage badhti he ki aapne papa ki baat yaad aate ruk jati he..
Uske ruk Jane se vuswas fir se usko bulata he to priya darte huye vo viswas ke paas Jane lagti he..
Jese hi vo paas aati he viswas uska hath pakdkar bahar le jata he Aur vo usko jaha bhandara chal raha tha vaha le jata he..
Vaha Jo khana kha rahe the unke paas jakar..
Viswas harroj jese khilata tha sabko usi tarah vo aaj khilana suru karta he..
Jese hi vo niwala leke pahle insan ko khilata he..
Aur jess hi vo aadmi rudra ke sar pe aarshivad Dene ke liye hath rakhne vala hota he ki...
Viswas...baba aad mude nahi meli bahan ko aalsibad dijiye..dite vo hameta tush rahe...(baba aaj muje nahi meri bahan KO aarshivad dijiye jisse vo hamesha khush rahe...)
(Note:- dosto ab me ye totli bhasha me nahi likhunga... Sudh bhasha me likunga.. Aap smj Jana)
Aadmi...ji chote thakur..(priya ke sir pe hath rakhke) hamesha khush raho beta..
Aese hi sab priya aarshivaad dete he..
Aur ek budhi aurat bethi huyi thi Jo khana nahi kha rahi thi...
Viswas...maaji aap kha q nahi rahi he??? Kya khana acha nahi he???
Maaji...nahi beta aesi baat nahi he..lekin aaj muje chot lagi he..
Viswas...isme kya he... Me aapko khila deta hu...
Fir vo maaji KO aapne hatho se khilane lagta he..
Aur priya ye sab dekh rahi thi...
Priya(man me).... Bhayiya to bhot ache he...fir papa q aesa bol rahe the ki pagal he...
Viswas ke hilane se priya hosh me aati he...
Usko paas bulakar..
Viswas...maaji ye meri bahan he...isko bhot safe aarshivaad dijiye..
Maaji...(do no ke sir pe hath rakhkar) bhagvan humesha tum dono ki raksha kare..
Fir dono bahar aate he...
Us KO aapne sath leke khelne lagta he...Aur priya KO bhi aapne bade Bhai ka sath acha lagne laga tha...
Fir us KO aapne room me le jata he Aur gift deta he...
Viswas...ye tumhare liye he..Aur ye Prem ke liye Aur ye didi ke liye..
Priya...aap hi de dete to??
Viswas...tumne niche nahi dekha kya??
Priya...acha thik he me de dungi...vese ek baat pusu??
Viswas...tumhe pusne ki jarurat nahi he...tum sidhe muje hukum kar Dena... Jo bhi chahiya ya Jo bhi pusna he...
Priya... Ohhhh tnx bhaiya... Vese bhayiya aap harroj aese khilate ho sabko..
Mai...ha . vese piyu tum kabhi ganv q nahi aati thi???
Priya...mummy-papa aane hi nahi dete the...
Aese hi inki bate chalti rahti he...
Aur janamdin bhi dhum dham se manaya...
Aur kus din rahne vale the...
Lekin in Dino me priya Aur viswas pyar badhta gaya..(sirf Bhai-bahan vala)
Aur jab Jane ki Bari aayi to sabse jyada dukhi priya Aur viswas hi the..
Qki unko ab alag hona padega...
Lekin jate huye priya ne vada kiya ki vo harroj call karegi...
Aese hi 2 saal bit Gaye...
Aur in 2 salo me jab bhi chutti hoti koi ganv aaye ke n aaye vo har chutti me ganv jati..
Aur dono Bhai bahan bhot masti karte...
Lekin aaj ka din sayad n aata to acha hota..
Fir bhi kismat ke aage kiski chali he..
(Ab kya hua vo dekhenge aagle update me.. )
(Flashback ka aakhri update kal aayega dosto.. Sorry aaj nahi de paunga...lekin tnsn mat lijiye kal raat ko de dunga..)