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Wow, awaiting with bated breath the end of phase one which I am damn sure will definitely be a masterblasterUpcoming.. Megha..Update 217
DEND END END OF PHASE ONE......
Thank youAwesome update
Bhai mara h na toh uska bhugtaan toh raj ki team ko dena he padega ...raj ko tapana h toh iski family maro ye death halo jaan gaya hBhaisahab kuch kuch feel ho Raha hai ki jaisay Raj utna bhi agyani bana hua nahi betha hai jaisa ki usko kuch last 10 to 15 updates se dikhaya ja raha hai. Shayad kuch na kuch counter usne bhi tayyar kar ke rakha hoga aur jab jung hoti hai to kuch qurbani Deni hi padti hai ab bus dekhna hai ki Raj ka kitna nuqsan hone wala hai lekin chodega woh bhi nahi aur rahi baat death Halo ke usoolo ki to woh khud kameenapan hi kar raha hai.
Kah sakte h par death halo ki nazar mai uske bhai ki itni badi galti bhi nahi thi ki jaan se maar de...Agar thaa dum to samne se aata aur ek liye puri fauj le aaya bhale hi uske bhai ko mara hai magar akela reh kar apni taqat se mara thaa usne.
Ye raaz abhi nahi bataungaShayad Apporav is baar NIRWANA ko jaga dega coz woh ladies ko marega apni mardangi dekhane ke liye aur wohi uski aakhri ghalti hogi.
Last raj aur death halo ki fight seen ke liye dimag lag raha hu idea milte he agai badh jayega scene kyoki scene bhi toh shandar hona chahiye..Baqi aapke dimagh me kia hai usper zada soch ker apni hawa tight karne se accha hai ki Mai aapki likhi story ke maze loon aur woh bhi jee bhar ke.
Bilkul ye bhul dono taraf se ho sakti h ....Ranjan mandawa me pohach to gaya hai magar woh bheema sherdil aur khud thakur ko bohat kam aank ker betha hai
Bilkul ab ek fight likh chuka hu aur ek fight aur likh raha hu ....action he action h ab dekhte h ki kaise aur kya hota .....bahut bade update ane wale h dono ye toh tay haur yah ghalti uski aakhri ghalti na ban jaaye coz thakur Jagmal hi woh Bala hai jisne masoom se Raj ko ek bhayankar hatiyar me tabdeel kar diya aur woh bhi duniya se chupa kar means uska network power planning and logo ko parakhne me bohat taqat hai.
Na bilkul nahi bro ap sab ke review se he toh vission clear hote hWaah Bhai waah, kitna mazedaar review diya hai Aapnejisko padkar mujhe bhi aise hi review dene Ka Dil aagaya. Am
sure ki Sandeep Bhai bhi Prasanna ho jaayenge ise padkar
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Thank you
But death halo ne bhi to badla le hi liya tha jab ajju abhay aur Shruti per attack hua tha sath me Sunil per bhi , kyu na es baar sabhi apna badla le le , abhay ne bhi to bola tha ki wo death halo se apna badla lega ,Bhai mara h na toh uska bhugtaan toh raj ki team ko dena he padega ...raj ko tapana h toh iski family maro ye death halo jaan gaya h
Intezaar rahega Sandeep bhaiUpcoming.. Megha..Update 217
DEND END END OF PHASE ONE......
Wo death halo h maut ka badla maut aur master ki maut ka badla bhi toh lena h usai...But death halo ne bhi to badla le hi liya tha jab ajju abhay aur Shruti per attack hua tha sath me Sunil per bhi , kyu na es baar sabhi apna badla le le , abhay ne bhi to bola tha ki wo death halo se apna badla lega ,
Ye nahi ho payega jatin bhai time lagega...Bhai ramnavmi ke iss pawan awsar pr death halo ki Vijayadashami wala update de he do ab
Approx 3k likh liye h baaki likh raha hu ...Intezaar rahega Sandeep bhai![]()