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व....वाह जी वाह....
तुसी ता छा गए गुरु
तुसी ता छा गए गुरु
Romance काला इश्क़! (Completed)
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Sir ji agar dusre view se dekha jaye toh ritu ko manu se badla lena ke liye neha ki use krne ki zarurat hi nhi woh chahe toh dusre tarike se bhi badla le skti hai jis tarah se woh apne pyar se alag hui thik usi tarah anu ko manu se alag krne mein uska dhyan hona chaiye na ki neha ko istemal krne mein or jaha tk mujhe lgta hai ritu ko is baat ka andaza toh bht phle se ho chuka hoga ki anu or manu ke beach kuch hai(ghar wlo ke samane anu ka mail padhna wle scene yaad hoga hi aap ko) toh woh is chiz ko aise hi ignore nhi kregi
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मानु भाई..........ये ही नहीं आपकी और भी अपडेट काफी बड़ी होती हैं........ xossip पर जो आपकी पहली कहानी थी उसके अपडेट भी बहुत जबर्दस्त थे..... उन्हें देखकर ही मेंने आपकी और संगीता वाली दोनों id पर आपके अपडेट के बराबर बड़ा pm भेजा था...... लेकिन कभी रिप्लाइ ही नहीं आयाPlease let me know अगर आज तक किसी ने इतनी बड़ी अपडेट लिख कर दी हो!
यहाँ भी स्टोरी शुरू होते ही मेंने पहचान लिया कि ये उसी कहानी के पात्र हैं..........
बहुत जबर्दस्त सुहागरात..............और सबसे बढ़िया लगा रितिका के सामने सुहागरात का वर्णन.......... उसे न सिर्फ जलन हुई बल्कि गीली भी हो गयी..... अपने कारनामों को याद करके
चलो...... अनु का कुँवारा होना........और भी बड़ी शिकस्त हो गया रितिका के लिए.......... वरना वो कुछ न कुछ ताना जरूर मारती.....अपनी भड़ास निकालने को
Please let me know अगर आज तक किसी ने इतनी बड़ी अपडेट लिख कर दी हो!
i don't want to hurt your feelings .. but Enigma bhai ki 'Pyaar - 100 baar' mein almost sabhi updates 72000 words ki limit tak ke aate the ...
but iss wale update mein ta aapne bhi gazab kar diya hai .. fulltush epilogue hi likh dala .. padhte - padhte pata hi nahi laga kab update khatam hua .. sab kuch hi bahut hi kubsoorti ke saath dikhaya hai .. magar abhi bhi muzhe Anu ki virgin wali baat gale se niche nahi utar rahi .. I know that shaadi mein rehne ke baad bhi koi - koi unique shakshiyat ye kaam kayi dino tak nahi karte but Anuradha to Kumar se kayi saalo tak married rahi .. fir bhi .. saal - 6 mahine to samajh mein aata hai .. ki aapka affair kisi aur ke saath ho .. aur aapki jiske saath shaadi hui ho .. aap uss married partner ke saath physical nahi hote .. but aisa bhi nahi hota ki 4 - 5 saal aap married raho aur aapki virginity intact rahe .. but then again .. ye ek story hai .. so what the hell .. let's just enjoy this .. as it is .. any way sab kuch hi bahut accha tha .. every thing is very well narrated and concocted so elegantly .. your writing skill shines Maanu bhai .. keep it up and keep this saga going ...
isi khushi ke mooke par meri taraf se Maanu ki bahu ki mooh-dikhayi ke liye meri taraf se 1001 good wishes ... lovely update .. aur aapki mehnat iss update mein bakhobi nazar aayi ...
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waah bhai bahut hi pyara shandaar update diya aapne anu ko pyar se pyar mil gawa 
sab badhiya chal raha hai wonderfull update bhaiya ji
sab badhiya chal raha hai wonderfull update bhaiya ji 
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Awesome update bhai
Anu to bhai virgin nikli
Par bhai ek doubt hai jesa aapne bataya anu ki pahli shaadi ho chuki hai fir bhi uska virgin hona sahi nahi lag raha I known bhai ki anu ke pahle pati ka koi affair tha fir bhi bhai kya vo anu ke sath physical relation nahi banaye hoge kya
Again bhai
Awesome update bhai
Anu to bhai virgin nikli
Par bhai ek doubt hai jesa aapne bataya anu ki pahli shaadi ho chuki hai fir bhi uska virgin hona sahi nahi lag raha I known bhai ki anu ke pahle pati ka koi affair tha fir bhi bhai kya vo anu ke sath physical relation nahi banaye hoge kya
Again bhai
Awesome update bhai
My wish is fulfilled although its your story but smtimes i think i have some sort if relation to it.
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You showed the scene of the first night after marriage very well. Manu has done all this with Ritu before, but has a new experience with Anu and the first night is a different fun. The mind is trapped in a strange confusion, restless and confused.
It is very important to know whether the person in front is ready or not, because for the first time sometimes a person is not ready and it is wrong to act against his will.
Heart got happy after reading today's update. I was very excited to see every activity of Manu and Anu. I enjoyed the whole update very much. There was a slow and sensual and heart touching update.
Ritu must have been jealous after listening to Manu and Anu. Today's update was better than expected. Now everything is going fine, so try to get Ritu's life on the right path too. Maybe I can be a little happier with it.
Thank You...
It is very important to know whether the person in front is ready or not, because for the first time sometimes a person is not ready and it is wrong to act against his will.
Heart got happy after reading today's update. I was very excited to see every activity of Manu and Anu. I enjoyed the whole update very much. There was a slow and sensual and heart touching update.
Ritu must have been jealous after listening to Manu and Anu. Today's update was better than expected. Now everything is going fine, so try to get Ritu's life on the right path too. Maybe I can be a little happier with it.
Thank You...
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i don't want to hurt your feelings .. but Enigma bhai ki 'Pyaar - 100 baar' mein almost sabhi updates 72000 words ki limit tak ke aate the ...
but iss wale update mein ta aapne bhi gazab kar diya hai .. fulltush epilogue hi likh dala .. padhte - padhte pata hi nahi laga kab update khatam hua .. sab kuch hi bahut hi kubsoorti ke saath dikhaya hai .. magar abhi bhi muzhe Anu ki virgin wali baat gale se niche nahi utar rahi .. I know that shaadi mein rehne ke baad bhi koi - koi unique shakshiyat ye kaam kayi dino tak nahi karte but Anuradha to Kumar se kayi saalo tak married rahi .. fir bhi .. saal - 6 mahine to samajh mein aata hai .. ki aapka affair kisi aur ke saath ho .. aur aapki jiske saath shaadi hui ho .. aap uss married partner ke saath physical nahi hote .. but aisa bhi nahi hota ki 4 - 5 saal aap married raho aur aapki virginity intact rahe .. but then again .. ye ek story hai .. so what the hell .. let's just enjoy this .. as it is .. any way sab kuch hi bahut accha tha .. every thing is very well narrated and concocted so elegantly .. your writing skill shines Maanu bhai .. keep it up and keep this saga going ...
isi khushi ke mooke par meri taraf se Maanu ki bahu ki mooh-dikhayi ke liye meri taraf se 1001 good wishes ... lovely update .. aur aapki mehnat iss update mein bakhobi nazar aayi ...
और आपकी wishes के लिए भी बहुत-बहुत धन्यवाद!भाई मेरे हिसाब से मेरी अपडेट का word count 82000 था....शायद.... आप चेक कर के बताएँगे की टोटल कितना word count है? हो सके तो वो स्क्रीनशॉट या लिंक शेयर कर दीजिये!
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अब आप पूछ रहे थे की इतने साल शादी के रिश्ते में बंधे होते हुए भी अनु और कुमार ने सेक्स क्यों नहीं किया?
तो मित्रों आप ही बताइये ऐसी कौन सी पत्नी होगी जिसे सुहागरात पर पता चले की उसका पति उससे नहीं बल्कि किसी और लड़की से प्यार करता है, और वो सेक्स करने के लिए तैयार हो जाए?! इसके अलावा पूरी कहानी में आपने देखा होगा की अनु ने सेक्स के प्रति कहीं भी कोई रूचि नहीं दिखाई, बल्कि वो तो इससे इतना डरती थी की मानु को भी शादी तक इंतजार करना पड़ा|आशा करता हूँ की आपकी जिज्ञासा शांत हुई होगी|
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ek update ki maximum words ki limit hi 72000 letters ki hai .. agar us-se jyaada paste karo to .. pop-up message show ho jata hai .. aur content post nahi hota .. aap chahe to try kar sakte hai ...
aur jaisa ki aapne bataya .. ki aapne 82000 letters likhe hai .. so uske liye main yahi kahunga ki .. devnagri fonts mein anek prakar ki maatra hoti hai .. jo ki shayad letter counts mein na aa pati ho ...
again I don't doubt your caliber aur your writing skill .. i am still gonna praise .. that you have written such a wonderful story .. and have shared with us ..