Incest Raju – Sab kaa Rakhwala aur Khushiyaan dene waala (completed)

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Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

Thanks Bhai for waiting...been quite busy of late with work. Will try to post during the weekend. Thanks.

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[Naughtyrishabh]

Update 6:

2-3 ghante kaa safar tay karne ke baad Raju guruji ke ashram pahunch jaata hain.

Guruji thodi der baad raju se milne aate hain.

Guruji: aao beta…main tumhaara hi intezaar kar raha tha.

Raju yeh baat sun kar surprise ho jaata hain.

Raju: ji..main samjha nahi.

Guruji: yehi ki main jaanta hoon (tha) ki tum mujhse zaroor milne aaoge.

Raju: aapko kaise pata tha?

Guruji: khair, woh chhodo aur kaho, kaise ho?? kya samasya hain?

Raju: ji….mere dadaji ab is duniya mein nahi rahe..aur unhone mujhe bataaya tha ki main aapse milne aaon.

Guruji: sun kar bahut dukh hua…

Raju: pichle 1-2 mahinon se ghar mein sab bahut dukhi hain aur ghar mein sab par mayoosi chaayi hui hain. Pitaji aur bhai bhi ab is duniya mein nahi rahe hain. Samajh mein nahi aa raha hain ki main kya karoon.

Guruji: dekho beta…mujhe pata hain ki tum samasya se joojh rahe ho…aur us samasya kaa samadhaan bhi hain.

Raju: kya hai woh samadhaan?

Guruji: samadhaan thoda mushkil ho sakta hain lekin tum kar sakte ho.

Raju: kya?

Guruji: do option hain...pehla yeh ki tum apna ghar, zameen bech kar apne parivar ke saath koi doosre gaanv chale jaao...
Raju: kuch soctha hua...aur doosra samadhaan?
Guruji: doosra samadhaan yeh hain ki tum yahin raho..apni samasyaaon kaa muqabla karo aur unse ubhar kar aao...
Guruji: tumko sab kaa dhyaan rakhna hain, unko dushmano se bachaana hain aur unko “kushiyaan” bhi dena hain.

Raju: dhyaan aur raksha to main karoonga hi…aur samajhta bhi hoon..aakhir woh sab mere parivar ke log hain..lekin kushiyaan kaise de sakta hoon?

Guruji: dekho beta…tum ghar ke sab logon se sambhog karo..unhe khoob saara pyaar do..unko apne bacche ka maa banaao…kushiyaan apne aap aa jaayega….yaad rakho…aurat ko sab se zyaada kushi tab hoti hain jab woh maa ban jaaye.

Raju: yeh kaise sambhav hain? Woh sab mere ghar ke log hain aur main hi unse sambhog karoon? Yeh to samaaj ke khilaaf hain aur aisa hota bhi nahi hain.

Guruji: haan beta..tumne sahi socha hain…..lekin tum (aur ghar waale) jis samay se abhi guzar rahe ho..raasta apne aap nikal aayega...

Raju: phir bhi..

Guruji: unko man ki shaanti tab hogi jab unke zindagi mein accha badlaav aayega..doosre gaanv jaa kar...wahan bas kar din to guzar jaayenge..lekin unhe hamesha chinta bhi sataate rahegi...lekin badlaav kuch nahi hoga..
Guruji: Unke zindagi mein badlaav tab hoga jab woh maa banegi..chehre pe raunak aayegi..main jaanta hoon…thoda mushkil ho sakta hain..lekin tumhe bhi aabhas hoga jab tum kushiyaan unke chehre par dekhoge…ki tumne unhe khushiyon se aabaad kar diya hain.

Guruji: aur doosri baat…yeh bhi yaad rakho ki jab bhi tumko pareshaani hogi yaa phir tum koi musibat se guzar rahe honge..to tumhaare ghar waale hi tumhe sahara denge. Duniya mein aise bahut hi kam khush naseeb hote hai jinko “samaaj” sahayta karta hain unke bure din mein.

Guruji: jab ghar mein khushiyon aur shanti kaa mahol rahega to tumhe bhi man ki shaanti milegi aur tum acche se soch samajh kar apna aage ke kadam le sakte ho.

Raju: “aage ke kadam” se kya matlab hain?

Guruji: maine kaha tha naa…ki tumhe apne ghar waalon ki raksha karna hain…isi liye tumhe woh kadam bhi soch samajh kar lena hain.

Raju: main samjha nahi..thoda khul ke vistaar se bata sakoge kya guruji?

Guruji: vistaar se to nahi keh sakta..but itna zaroor kahoonga ki tumhe apne parivaar ko Thakur ke changul se bachaana hain…tumhe us se khatra ho sakta hain..wahi tumhaare kushiyon mein baadha daalne waala hain aur ghar ke logon ko nuksaan pahunha sakta hain.

Raju: ji Guruji…main poori koshish karoonga ki apne pariwaar walon ki har samay raksha karoon.

Guruji: aur koi samasya ho to mujhe bataana…tumhaari madad karne ki koshish karoonga. Mujhe abhi bahar jaana hain koi kaam se.

Raju: ji Guruji..aagya dijiye..aur unke pair choo kar aashirwaad leta hain

Guruji: sada sukhi raho..aur hamesha logon ki bhalai karo.

Raju: ji Guruji

Aur yeh keh kar Raju wahan se nikal jaata hain..

Raju: sochta hua..main is gaanv se to door aur bahar jaa nahi sakta...ghar waale bhi raazi nahi hone...hamari is gaanv mein bahut yaadein basi hui hain...

Wahan se nikal kar use (Raju) apne samasyaaon kaa samadhaan to mil gaya..lekin samasya jitna kathin samadhaan bhi utna hi kathin tha…

Uska sar chakra jaata hain…apne aap ko sambhaalte hue woh apne ghar ki or nikal jaata hain.

Author’s opinion: As per my experience, when (married) couple become parents especially for the first time, they consider it to be “one of their” happiest moments and days in life and truly blessed to become parents (in normal circumstances). I have used that as a reference point for my story.

However, would like to know your opinions and thoughts on this. Even critical comments are fine. Thanks.

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

Mass bhai kb de rhe ho update aap

 

[Mass]

Mass bhai kb de rhe ho update aap

jaldi hi bhai...1-2 din mein update de doonga...likh raha hoon. Thanks for waiting..

DEVIL MAXIMUM

 

[Mass]

Mass bhai kb de rhe ho update aap

Hope tumne notice kiya hoga....maine story kaa title thoda change kiya hai..."Ghar" ke badle "Sab" change kiya hai...
Raju ab "sab" ko khush karega...

DEVIL MAXIMUM

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

Hope tumne notice kiya hoga....maine story kaa title thoda change kiya hai..."Ghar" ke badle "Sab" change kiya hai...
Raju ab "sab" ko khush karega...

DEVIL MAXIMUM

Ha bilkul shi hai ye wala title bhai
Kher acha hai
Baki aane wale update ke lye best of luck bhai

 

[urc4me]

Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

क्या बात है , आप भी फौजी भाई की तरह प्रत्येक अपडेट के अंत मे सस्पेंस छोड़ने लगे ! यह कलाकारी रीडर्स को हमेशा पसंद आता है ।

आपने इधर के कुछ अपडेट मे इस चीज का भी ख्याल रखा कि किरदारों के बीच आनन फानन सेक्स न होने लगे । थोड़ा-बहुत उनके अंदर केमिस्ट्री डेवलप हो , थोड़ा-बहुत रोमांस हो , थोड़ा-बहुत सेक्सुअल सिडक्सन हो , थोड़ा-बहुत इरोटिक कन्वर्सेशन हो तब जाकर प्रेमी युगल के बगिया मे फूल खिले ।

थ्रिलर , खून - खराबे , नेगेटिव किरदार के लिए ठाकुर साहब और एक नए किरदार - अजय का इस्तेमाल भी आपने अच्छी तरह से किया है ।

बढ़िया लिख रहे है आप । ऐसे ही लिखते रहिए और प्यार बांटते रहिए ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट भाई ।

 

[Mass]

क्या बात है , आप भी फौजी भाई की तरह प्रत्येक अपडेट के अंत मे सस्पेंस छोड़ने लगे ! यह कलाकारी रीडर्स को हमेशा पसंद आता है ।

आपने इधर के कुछ अपडेट मे इस चीज का भी ख्याल रखा कि किरदारों के बीच आनन फानन सेक्स न होने लगे । थोड़ा-बहुत उनके अंदर केमिस्ट्री डेवलप हो , थोड़ा-बहुत रोमांस हो , थोड़ा-बहुत सेक्सुअल सिडक्सन हो , थोड़ा-बहुत इरोटिक कन्वर्सेशन हो तब जाकर प्रेमी युगल के बगिया मे फूल खिले ।

थ्रिलर , खून - खराबे , नेगेटिव किरदार के लिए ठाकुर साहब और एक नए किरदार - अजय का इस्तेमाल भी आपने अच्छी तरह से किया है ।

बढ़िया लिख रहे है आप । ऐसे ही लिखते रहिए और प्यार बांटते रहिए ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट भाई ।

Thank you Sanju bhai..for the wonderful comment and review. Socha..story sirf sex pe based raha to maja nahi aayega..aise is forum mein bahut saare stories hai...wanted to add a little bit of thrill element as well...along with some seduction and romance/sex as well. Glad to read your comment and much Thanks for your support.

SANJU ( V. R. )

 

[Neerav]

Waiting bhai