Thank you Bhai....tumhare valuable comment ke liye...tumhare comments mujhe story ko aur achhe se likhne ke liye prerna degi....it will motivate me and support me.....again thanksBahut badiya update
Thanks bro.....I am looking forward to more support from you....keep liking and reading the story....isi tarah apna support dete raho ....next update coming soonNice update
Congratulations Bhai for your first thread bahut sare characters hai aur ache bhi hai bas mujhe aapka characters describe karna ach nahi laga mother of, father of sister of aise confusion hota hai pehle mammy ke side fir papa ke side ke bua ,mausi chacha aur parents ke niche unke bache simple aise jyada shai rehta hai aisi baat nahi ki mujhe English nahi aati but Hinglish me jyada acha lagta hai ok bura mat manna sirf suggestion haiPrimary Characters:
1.Drishti: mother of Arjun.
Age: more than 1000 years.
*Husband: Vishwaraj..Age: more than 1000 years.
*Son: Rajan.
Age: 18
*Param(Acharya): brother of Vishwaraj...Age: more than 1000 years.
2. Siddhi: twin sister of Drishti.....ye unmarried hai.
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3. Divya: mother of Arjun.
Age: 46
*Husband: Raj...Age: 46
*Son: Aditya.
Age: 23
4. Meena : daughter of Divya....Age: 22
5. Aditi: twin sister of Arjun.
Age: 18
* Arjun : Hero of the Story.
Age: 18.
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6. Kalyani: sister of Divya.
Age: 45.
* Husband: Pratap.
Age: 45.
* Pratap: brother of Raj.
7. Nandini: daughter of Kalyani....ye ek super intelligent girl hai.
Age: 18.
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8. Karuna : mother of Komal.
Age:45
* Husband: Prakash..Age: 45
* Son: Varun...Age: 23
9. Vani : wife of Varun.
Age: 23.
10 . Komal: Age: 18
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11. Kalpana: mother of Poonam ...Age: 18
* Husband: Vijay..Age: 44.
* Vijay: brother of Prakash.
12. Poonam: goddess of beauty.....Age: 18
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13. Akanksha: sister of Raj.
Age: 44
* Husband: Vikash...Age: 46
14. Sanjana: daughter of Akanksha....Age: 18
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15. Latika: mother of Sangya....Age: 43
* Husband: Rakesh...Age: 43
* Rakesh: brother of Divya.
16. Sangya: Age: 18
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Planet 1
17. Sunaina: queen.
* King: Raghvendra.
18. Kusumlata: princess ...Age: 18
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Zin lok
19. Riddhi: queen
* King: Jaisen.
20. Kriti: princess ....Age: 18
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Pari Lok
21. Ananya: queen
22. Kiran: princess...Age: 18
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Nag Lok
23. Savitri : queen
*King: Narendra
24. Kusum: princess : Age: 18
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25. Saumya: love of Aditya..
Parents dead ye jab 15 years ki thi...Age: 23
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26. Jasmine: mother of Ruhi.......ek vidhwa hai...jo khud kaam karke Ruhi ko achhi life di.
27. Ruhi: Age: 20
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28. Sumitra: Age: 26
29. Kanak: Age: 26.
30. Rashi : Age: 26
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31. Pushpa: Age 45
* Husband: Gajendra (CM of the state)...Age: 49
* Son: Ranjan ..Age 25
* Son: Rohan....Age 18
32. Gayatri: wife of Ranjan.
Age 24.
33. Radha: girlfriend of Rishi....Age 18.
34. Diksha: girlfriend of Rohan...Age 18.
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Bahut bich bich me past dikhate rehna har aap ek sath past dikhaoge toh readers bore ho sakte present jyada acha lagega jyadatar logo ko story padhkeSummary of the story: ye story two time phases ka hai ....past and present......past life of Arjun and present life of Arjun.
Koi baat nahi bro....sari family ko maine alag box par likha hai....ho sake to thoda adjust kar lo ...abhi characters ka introduction complete nahi hua hai.....aage isme add karta jaunga.Congratulations Bhai for your first thread bahut sare characters hai aur ache bhi hai bas mujhe aapka characters describe karna ach nahi laga mother of, father of sister of aise confusion hota hai pehle mammy ke side fir papa ke side ke bua ,mausi chacha aur parents ke niche unke bache simple aise jyada shai rehta hai aisi baat nahi ki mujhe English nahi aati but Hinglish me jyada acha lagta hai ok bura mat manna sirf suggestion hai
Ok BhaiKoi baat nahi bro....sari family ko maine alag box par likha hai....ho sake to thoda adjust kar lo ...abhi characters ka introduction complete nahi hua hai.....aage isme add karta jaunga.
Ok kuchh updates ke baad story ko present me le aaunga..ok ....aur past aur present ko ek sath dikhaya jayega...aise hi mujhe aapki valuable support ka intezar rahega...keep enjoying the Story.Bahut bich bich me past dikhate rehna har aap ek sath past dikhaoge toh readers bore ho sakte present jyada acha lagega jyadatar logo ko story padhke