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Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

Opinion Of the Story...

  • Good

    Votes: 229 96.6%
  • Bad

    Votes: 8 3.4%

  • Total voters
    237
  • Poll closed .

Abhaych

Member
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“Tere chehre se latki lato ko, Chaand taro ka gajra laga du
Tere daaman me khushiyo ka main, Ek hasin sa pahra laga du
Prem ke rang ko tere gulbadan par, Haldi chandan sa gahra laga du
Bhaye ek nigah me jo tujhe, Aisa koi ab chehra laga du

Kajrari teri in ankhiyo me, Prem ka bahta main sailab lau
Matwale tere gulabi hotho ko, Ek mahakta sa gulab banau
Vishwa sundari ka tere sar aaj, Main khubsurat sa taaj laga du
Tujhe dekh meri dhadkane machle, Aise saundarya ki saaz laga du

Tu mujhme kahi aise mil jaye, Main tujhme kahi aise ghul jau
Tu bas ab meri hi rahe hokar, Main tujh par nayi gazal banau
Samundar si gahri pyas ko meri, Teri mohabbat ka sehra laga du
Banke Tera humsafar humrahi main, Sar par ban dulha sehra laga du

Teri parchhayi ko bhi apna main, Hardam humdum banana chahu
Har din har shaam ko main apni, Bas tere sath hi sajana chahu
Titliyo ke jaise ranginiya bhar, Khud ko kahi tere ird gird laga du
Tu bas har janam meri hi hokar rahe, Aisa main koi
prem ka dard laga du’’
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awesome kya kahein bhai
kahene ko bahot kuch hai par shabd hi nahi mil rahe hai
hats off to u bhai
sabhi tarah ki fillings ka sahi mixture
ek khubsurat aur behtreen update
 

Mahiirathore

Active Member
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jabardast awesome lajawab Update Bhaiii

Full to emotion ,drama ,pyaar ,gussaa shoking sab ek sath aa gye bhaii:10:

Shree se sath pyaar ka jo nazara dikhaya h kabile tarif h
Kya sayari thii lagta h itne Mudd se likhii h
Dil k har ek jajbaat ki numaish ho gyii h

Shree se na mil pane ki majburi kese durr hogi uska Injaar rahega

Sala adii ki kismat bhii kya h ab chudel piche padii h
Bechara Dogi sahid ho gya iss chakkar m
Sala ek taraf masum banti h par Vhii dusri or harkato se baj nhii aa rhii h

Or kamina munish harbar jakhmo par namak lagane aa jata h
Sale ko owl nhii rahne dete to aacha tha
Muje lagta h munish n apni iss power se paresan hokar jabardasti adii k gale m dal dii
Sala hero ko hero nhii kisi gali ka dhol samaj rakha jo chahta h aake bja jata h


Story ka comedy m mja aa jata h Bhaii
Comedy ko drop matt karna continue rakhna bhaii
Apke apke Update ka hamesha intjar rahta h

:yourock::yourock::yourock:
 

shahnaz123

Member
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Amazing update
Shree ke sath pyar ke pal ko bahut hi sanjidgi se dikhaya hai
Aur jo kavita likhi hai..marvelous
Uske andar dil ke har bhavna ko dikhaya hai
Great lines....maine to copy kar ke save bhi kar liya hai apne lappy me

Chitra ne tomy ko hi nipta diya...hihihihi
Uski bhi galti nahi hai
bechari kab se to adi ko bol rahi thi ki bhookh lagi hai
Majboori me jo mila use hi kha liya
Aur thoda sa bacha tukda adi ko de rahi thi...lo tum bhi kha lo...hahahaha
Superb comedy

Ab ant me munish aag me ghee dalne aa gaya
Adi to bechara kahi se bhi nikal nahi pa raha hai

Great update...with Love, Feelings, Emotions and comedy
 
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